Official Story Discussion Circle & Readers Hangout

[tharki nigga]

Aap sabhi ne meri story " pariwar me chudai ke sukh se bada koi sukh nahi " padhi hogi.... Ye story maine 2013 me xp par likhi thi.... agar meri story padhi hai to aap meri pasand jaante honge....agar nahi padhi hai to please padhiye.... Ye ek incest based adultery thriller , suspense aur family drama par based story hai jisme romance bhi hai....Mujhe personally ek hero wali story zyada jamti nahi hai....halanki meri story me bhi ek hi hero hota hai lekin woh zyada superior nahi hota....lekin sex ke maamle me no. 1 hota hai as compared to other male characters in that story.... Lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki baaki ke male characters phuddu ho.... Mujhe story ko detailing me likhna pasand hai, har scene ko acche se explain karke likhta hoon.... Thodi bakchodi bhi likh deta hoon.....family incest stories me drama aur suspense likhna meri sabse badi khasiyat hai....aisa mai nahi keh raha , xp ke readers kahe the jab meri story complete hui thi.... Adultery me no. 1 trending karti thi meri story, sabse zyada views the....story ke suspense aur drama ki wajah se.....

 

[tharki nigga]

Hello Guyzz,
Mai Bhi aap sabhi ki tarah, Lweb ka ek member hu...aur aap sabhi ki tarah yaha stories read karta hu...aur mai yaha kaafi lambe time se hu.

Aur ess time mai maine jo observe kiya uss se ye samjhe mai aaya ki..writers or readers ki bich ek communication gap banne gaya hai.

Writers story likhna chahte hai...par vo samjhe nahi paate ki readers kya padhna chahte hai..vo apne point of view se story likhte hai aur post kar dete hai...humm readers ko kya chahiye ye unko pata hi nahi hai.

Es liye mai ye thread yaha open kar raha hu.Es thread par, maire sabhi fellow members, Writers ko batai ke unko kya chaiye.
Yaha aap apne story ke ideas de sakte hai...ki aapko kise story chahiye...aur writers bhi readers ka point of view samjhe sake.

Sabka taste alag alag hota hai bhai, readers bhi alag alag prakar ke hote hain....koi bhi writer kisi reader ko completely satisfied nahi kar sakta.... Reader ke hisaab se plot me changes nahi kiye ja sakte, isse story ke L lag jaate hai..... Writer ko apne hisaab se hi likhna chahiye , na ki kisi reader ke behkave me aakar story likhni chahiye......

 

[Pervert Dragon]

Mujhe , esi story pasand hai jaha hero cold hearted ho.
Usse fark na pade ki koe kya kahe usse
Apne Dimmag ke dum par jo chahe kare
Har chizz ko hassil kare

Agar koe esi story likhe to maza aa Jae

 

[Dhruva]

Haan bhai, agar koi reader proper story padhta hai to atleast chota sa review to deke jaana hi chahiye....

 

[Dhruva]

story ki sabki apni apni pasand hoti kisi ko kuch to kisi ko kuch pasand hai lekin reader har tipe ki story ke hain han agar story aisi ho jisme sab mil jaye to uske readers thode Jada ho sakte ab problem ek ye aati ki 99% log comment karte hi nai silent reader banke rahte lekin isme koi kya Kar sakta hai

Sahi kaha...aapne

 

[Dhruva]

Thanks to staff members jo unhone es thread ko yaha stick kar diya

 

[Yogibaba00007]

Mujhe , esi story pasand hai jaha hero cold hearted ho.
Usse fark na pade ki koe kya kahe usse
Apne Dimmag ke dum par jo chahe kare
Har chizz ko hassil kare

Agar koe esi story likhe to maza aa Jae

Mujhe bhi aisi hi story padhna pasand he ........narm dil ka ...... lekin andar se mazbood aur chalaki se kaam le samjhdari se gutthi suljay .......

 

[Yogibaba00007]

Hello Guyzz,
Mai Bhi aap sabhi ki tarah, Lweb ka ek member hu...aur aap sabhi ki tarah yaha stories read karta hu...aur mai yaha kaafi lambe time se hu.

Aur ess time mai maine jo observe kiya uss se ye samjhe mai aaya ki..writers or readers ki bich ek communication gap banne gaya hai.

Writers story likhna chahte hai...par vo samjhe nahi paate ki readers kya padhna chahte hai..vo apne point of view se story likhte hai aur post kar dete hai...humm readers ko kya chahiye ye unko pata hi nahi hai.

Es liye mai ye thread yaha open kar raha hu.Es thread par, maire sabhi fellow members, Writers ko batai ke unko kya chaiye.
Yaha aap apne story ke ideas de sakte hai...ki aapko kise story chahiye...aur writers bhi readers ka point of view samjhe sake.

Shukriya dost ।।।।।।।।।।।। Lekin log pata nehi kyu kis baat pe darte he .... request he readers bas do sabd bol jaye apni pasand ka .... thrilled romance jis bhi tarah ka pasand bas do line hi to likh ke jana he bhai o

 

[anandsngh12]

Hello Guyzz,
Mai Bhi aap sabhi ki tarah, Lweb ka ek member hu...aur aap sabhi ki tarah yaha stories read karta hu...aur mai yaha kaafi lambe time se hu.

Aur ess time mai maine jo observe kiya uss se ye samjhe mai aaya ki..writers or readers ki bich ek communication gap banne gaya hai.

Writers story likhna chahte hai...par vo samjhe nahi paate ki readers kya padhna chahte hai..vo apne point of view se story likhte hai aur post kar dete hai...humm readers ko kya chahiye ye unko pata hi nahi hai.

Es liye mai ye thread yaha open kar raha hu.Es thread par, maire sabhi fellow members, Writers ko batai ke unko kya chaiye.
Yaha aap apne story ke ideas de sakte hai...ki aapko kise story chahiye...aur writers bhi readers ka point of view samjhe sake.

Aapki baat apni jagah ekdam theek hai Yash bhai...Kintu ye sirf sikke ka ek hi pahlu hai jo khuli aankho se dikhayi deta hai..Iss sikke ka dusra pahlu bhi hai jo khuli aankho se dikhayi nahi padta dost..

Kahani padhne wale kayi reader's hote hain aur unn sabki uss kahani ko lekar bhaavnayen bhi alag alag hoti hain...Jaise ki paancho ungliya aapas me barabar nahi hoti, vaise hi sabhi ki kahani ko lekar pasand, na-pasand bhi ek jaisi nahi hoti...

Kisi bhi forum par jayenge to aapko kayi kism ke log milenge...kuch ko incest sex pasand hai, adultary nahi, to kuch ko adultary pasand hai par incest nahi, kuch ko dono pasand hain...to kuch aise bhi milenge jinhe sex se hi nafrat hoti hai..kisi ko hardcore sex achcha lagta hai to kisi ko pyar bhara romantic.. koi suspense, thriller chahta hai padhna...upar se writer ki apni bhi kuch pasand aur imagination hoti hain.

Inme se jis kisi ki bhi pasand ka scene na aaye vahi narazagi jatayega...ab itne logo ki demand writer kaise poori karega ?

For Example---

Ek Ghar me maan lo ki 10 logo ki family rahti hai..unme se har kisi ki khaane ki alag alag farmaaish hain..jo cheez ek ko pasand hai, vo dusre ko pasand nahi hai...ab sawal ye uthta hai ki akhir khana banane wala/ wali..kiski pasand ka khana banaye ? kyonki sabki pasand ka khana daily bana pana to uske liye possible nahi hoga...Ya phir vo apne dimag se vo banaye jo jyada member ko pasand ho ya koi khaas pareshani na ho aur vo kha sake ?

Theek yahi dikkat writer ke samne bhi hoti hai bhai...vo kahani me logo ki pasand ko dhyan me rakh kar kuch changes to kar sakta hai lekin plot ke sath chhedchhad nahi kar sakta kyonki aisa karne se kahani apne title se bhatak jayegi..jo ki kisi bhi sahitya ki Hriday Sthali kahi jati hai..

Kisi bhi story ka koi paatra important nahi hota, balki uss kahani ka TITLE sabse important hota kyonki poori kahani uss title ke hi charo taraf ghumti rahti hai..starting se last tak...aur agar kahani apne title se hi bhatak jayegi tab vo kahani, kahani na rah kar khichdi ban kar rah jayegi...

 

[Hell king]

Shukriya dost ।।।।।।।।।।।। Lekin log pata nehi kyu kis baat pe darte he .... request he readers bas do sabd bol jaye apni pasand ka .... thrilled romance jis bhi tarah ka pasand bas do line hi to likh ke jana he bhai o

Inna immosnol na ho dost