Official Story Discussion Circle & Readers Hangout

[DREAMBOY40]

Btw cat wali dp kyun

Kaha ho tussi aajkal .. man nahi lag rha hai ju ke bina

 

[Rahul]

Kaha ho tussi aajkal .. man nahi lag rha hai ju ke bina

Are aap bhi jinna ho

 

[DREAMBOY40]

Are aap bhi jinna ho

Mera dost kah raha tha mar jana chahiye mujhe Lekin wo khud mar gaya

 

[Rahul]

Mera dost kah raha tha mar jana chahiye mujhe Lekin wo khud mar gaya

Khatarnaak ho inna

 

[Hell king]

story ki sabki apni apni pasand hoti kisi ko kuch to kisi ko kuch pasand hai lekin reader har tipe ki story ke hain han agar story aisi ho jisme sab mil jaye to uske readers thode Jada ho sakte ab problem ek ye aati ki 99% log comment karte hi nai silent reader banke rahte lekin isme koi kya Kar sakta hai

 

[Niks96]

I have fantasy of few things
Exchange of Bhabhis bt two or three friendsd b

The idea has potential, but I believe there are several stories start with the same theme ( not bhabis but mothers (if I'm not wrong)) but I feel that somehow those stories never got finished, and since the idea is vague therefore the story lose momentum in the middle, something more focused need to be added to make such stories interesting.

Just my opinion don't take it in a negative way :)

 

[Niks96]

Aap sabhi ne meri story " pariwar me chudai ke sukh se bada koi sukh nahi " padhi hogi.... Ye story maine 2013 me xp par likhi thi.... agar meri story padhi hai to aap meri pasand jaante honge....agar nahi padhi hai to please padhiye.... Ye ek incest based adultery thriller , suspense aur family drama par based story hai jisme romance bhi hai....Mujhe personally ek hero wali story zyada jamti nahi hai....halanki meri story me bhi ek hi hero hota hai lekin woh zyada superior nahi hota....lekin sex ke maamle me no. 1 hota hai as compared to other male characters in that story.... Lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki baaki ke male characters phuddu ho.... Mujhe story ko detailing me likhna pasand hai, har scene ko acche se explain karke likhta hoon.... Thodi bakchodi bhi likh deta hoon.....family incest stories me drama aur suspense likhna meri sabse badi khasiyat hai....aisa mai nahi keh raha , xp ke readers kahe the jab meri story complete hui thi.... Adultery me no. 1 trending karti thi meri story, sabse zyada views the....story ke suspense aur drama ki wajah se.....

tharki nigga bro jazab kahani thi aapki wo, xp pe hamesha page 1 par rehti thi, agar aapko jindagi mohlat de to kuch aesa ek bar aur likh do, kyuki aajkal kuch writers ko chood ke sare forums par lagta he dudh pete balko ka kabza ho gaya, writing ka "W" bhi nahi aata par thread ek dum bina kuch soche samjhe chalu kar dete he .
Waise acha laga aapse idher mulakat hui.

 

[Kavita]

Mujhee seductive sex stories bhoute pasand hai...jesmai slowly slowly hero apni heroines ko Sex ke liye taiyaar karta hai...aur phire erotic tarike se unke saath sex karta hai

 

[Satya sharma]

I like incest based stories, story start me majboori ho aur Pyar me badal jaye magar,apni pariwarik maryadayon me reh kar sex hota rahe.

 

[jose mourinho the great]

Yash bahi ne achchha thread start kiya hai.

Ek pehlu se soche toh bahut badhiya hai kyuki writer ko bhi ek idea rahata hai ki readers kis type ke story pasand karte hai.

Wahin dusre pehlu se soche toh sab readers ki apni apni pasand hota hai, kahi khichdi na ho jaaye.

Lekin hum reality ki baat karen toh shaayd Movies ka asar hai ya hum log apni jindagi mein itne bhag doud karte hai ki jo enjoyment chahte hai ya jo ek imagination hota hai jisko apne life mein poora nahi kar paate toh story ka sahaaraa lete hai. Isi shilshile main sabko ( rather i'll se jyaadaatar logon ko) Ek Super power Hero chahiye hota hai (Supar power na bhi to to wo He-man type ka ho) Jo ladaai kar saktaa ho, bure ke saath bura kar sakta ho aur achchhe logo ke saath achchhai dikha sakta ho.
Lekin Tisra pehlu bhi hai writer ka. Kohi kohi writers log pehle se ek imagine karte hai ki meri story ka theme ye hai to isko main aisa likhunga. Inme se kohi kohi writer readers ke hisaab se compromize bhi shayad kare lekin kohi jab apna story ka ek base banaate hai toh unko usmen fer-badal achchha na lage ya karnaa na chaahen.

Jo bhi ho, jaise bhi kahani ho incest, romance, adultary mujhe Hero ek hi chahiye. Haa main bhi chahata hun ki wo taakatwar ho, do chaar ko aise hi utha kar phenk de (jaruri nahi super power ho lekin achchha body , mata aur lamba ..... hona chahiye kyuki hero ko sabko apne niche bhi to laana hoga :) )
Yaha mera aur Yash bhai ka thoda sa difference hai (Yash bahi ko hero ko bhi compete karwaana achchha lagtaa hai :) ) Mere khayal se Hero hai to uska sab kuchh achchha, mota aur lamba hi hoga saath mein taakatwar aur stamina itna ki laaambi.... race ka ghoda bhi maat kha jaye.