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Kesi ho madamUdhar contest me mene apni story dali he. Tu bhi kuchh dal.
Koi short story tu bhi likh
Kesi ho madamUdhar contest me mene apni story dali he. Tu bhi kuchh dal.
Koi short story tu bhi likh
Aela kaisi ho Raj-sexy jiAre likhungi, tumari prerna se me adultery mein story likhungi is baar,
apni Shetan sis ko khush karne ke liye.
Ab to khush ho tum,Shetan kahin ki.
Bhai ji, bilkul sahi kaha aapneYash bahi ne achchha thread start kiya hai.
Ek pehlu se soche toh bahut badhiya hai kyuki writer ko bhi ek idea rahata hai ki readers kis type ke story pasand karte hai.
Wahin dusre pehlu se soche toh sab readers ki apni apni pasand hota hai, kahi khichdi na ho jaaye.
Lekin hum reality ki baat karen toh shaayd Movies ka asar hai ya hum log apni jindagi mein itne bhag doud karte hai ki jo enjoyment chahte hai ya jo ek imagination hota hai jisko apne life mein poora nahi kar paate toh story ka sahaaraa lete hai. Isi shilshile main sabko ( rather i'll se jyaadaatar logon ko) Ek Super power Hero chahiye hota hai (Supar power na bhi to to wo He-man type ka ho) Jo ladaai kar saktaa ho, bure ke saath bura kar sakta ho aur achchhe logo ke saath achchhai dikha sakta ho.
Lekin Tisra pehlu bhi hai writer ka. Kohi kohi writers log pehle se ek imagine karte hai ki meri story ka theme ye hai to isko main aisa likhunga. Inme se kohi kohi writer readers ke hisaab se compromize bhi shayad kare lekin kohi jab apna story ka ek base banaate hai toh unko usmen fer-badal achchha na lage ya karnaa na chaahen.
Jo bhi ho, jaise bhi kahani ho incest, romance, adultary mujhe Hero ek hi chahiye. Haa main bhi chahata hun ki wo taakatwar ho, do chaar ko aise hi utha kar phenk de (jaruri nahi super power ho lekin achchha body , mata aur lamba ..... hona chahiye kyuki hero ko sabko apne niche bhi to laana hoga :) )
Yaha mera aur Yash bhai ka thoda sa difference hai (Yash bahi ko hero ko bhi compete karwaana achchha lagtaa hai :) ) Mere khayal se Hero hai to uska sab kuchh achchha, mota aur lamba hi hoga saath mein taakatwar aur stamina itna ki laaambi.... race ka ghoda bhi maat kha jaye.
Aapki , Maire soch kitni milte haiMujhe bhi aisi hi story padhna pasand he ........narm dil ka ...... lekin andar se mazbood aur chalaki se kaam le samjhdari se gutthi suljay .......
Matlab emotionally "no" aur physically "yes" hona hai Bhai...I hope aap Samaj gaye hongePariwarik maryada mai sex??
Pariwarik maryada mai sex??I like incest based stories, story start me majboori ho aur Pyar me badal jaye magar,apni pariwarik maryadayon me reh kar sex hota rahe.
Bhai aapke point se mai totally agreed hoon.... readers agar silent rahenge to writer ko likhne ke liye motivation kahan se milega , mai sabse bas itni si request karunga ki agar aap koi kahani padhte hain to us kahani par reviews jaroor dijiyestory ki sabki apni apni pasand hoti kisi ko kuch to kisi ko kuch pasand hai lekin reader har tipe ki story ke hain han agar story aisi ho jisme sab mil jaye to uske readers thode Jada ho sakte ab problem ek ye aati ki 99% log comment karte hi nai silent reader banke rahte lekin isme koi kya Kar sakta hai
Mujhe , esi story pasand hai jaha hero cold hearted ho.
Usse fark na pade ki koe kya kahe usse
Apne Dimmag ke dum par jo chahe kare
Har chizz ko hassil kare
Agar koe esi story likhe to maza aa Jae
doston kahani me jitni importance hero ki hoti hai utni hi baaki ke characters ki bhi.... aksar bahut si kahaniyon me aisa hota hai ki writers hero ko superior dikhane ke chakkar me story ki band baja dete hai....khaas kar incest stories ki....jisme ek hero hota hai aur baaki pariwar ke mard, namard hote hain....aisi stories mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi....Mujhe bhi aisi hi story padhna pasand he ........narm dil ka ...... lekin andar se mazbood aur chalaki se kaam le samjhdari se gutthi suljay .......
Haan bhai, agar koi reader proper story padhta hai to atleast chota sa review to deke jaana hi chahiye....Shukriya dost ।।।।।।।।।।।। Lekin log pata nehi kyu kis baat pe darte he .... request he readers bas do sabd bol jaye apni pasand ka .... thrilled romance jis bhi tarah ka pasand bas do line hi to likh ke jana he bhai o