Official Story Discussion Circle & Readers Hangout

There can only be one king.
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Keya pata world war 1 or 2 kisne dekha yaha pai , ab kaman se to pani bhi nikalta hai
To teer bhi laga liya hoga kahi sai
Taunt to tu maze se kar rha hai mujhe, bas aik bar kisi se pooch lena Teer Kaman ka. Phr agar woh bole goli nikalti hai tab batana mujhe :D
 
Eaten Alive
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Ufff shaheer ki dastan bada hi dard nak hai. Ek durghatna hua aur maa ki maut ke saath shaheer ki jiwan ki sabhi khushiyo ne usse muh mod liya. Sauteli maa aur bahan ke aane se baap ki rahi sahi sneh aur dular piche kahi chhut gaya aur ek waqt me vo bhi khatm ho gaya lekin shaheer ke qismt me thoda sa badlab saira ke aane se aaya tha. Magar uske qismt ko ye manjarir nahi tha to gulati mar di aur ek aisa drishy dikhaya jise dekhne ke baad shaheer purn roop se tut gaya aur ek drinda ya kahu janwaar ban gaya ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

Adbhut atulniy lekhan kaushal
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Btw cat 🐱 wali dp kyun :what2:
 
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Bhai log ek story jisme ek ladka apni maa ko nokar se chudte dekhta hain woh kahani kha gayi kal tak toh pg 1 pe thii last msg subha ka toh page 1 ya 2 3 ope hoti pr hain nahi batyega koi
 
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Bhai log ek story jisme ek ladka apni maa ko nokar se chudte dekhta hain woh kahani kha gayi kal tak toh pg 1 pe thii last msg subha ka toh page 1 ya 2 3 ope hoti pr hain nahi batyega koi
usme kuch masla tha sayad ishiliye private kiye hongen writer se baat karke wapas kar dengen
 

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