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Update 1
Shivansh kuchh toh bolo! Tumhari ye chupi ab bardasht nahi hoti.... Muskaan irritate thi!
Shivansh:- Main kuchh nahi keh sakta muskaan ! Tumhe yo sahi lage tum kar sakti ho! Humesha ki tarah shivansh nishchint tha. Bas fir kya tha muskaan jaise aazad ho gayi. Ik shivansh hi toh tha jiske bhrose wo apni puri life bitane ka sochti thi. Pr shivansh ke inkaar ne usko ander tk todke rakh diya.
Muskaan ne varsha ki taraf dosti ka hath badha liya. Varsha ko basti mein koi jyada pasand nahi karta tha kyuki wo ek bar dancer thi. Shivansh ne muskaan ko varsha se dur rahne ko bola tha.
Muskaan, shivansh ki har baat manti aayi thi, pr ab shivansh ne hi muskaan se kinara kar liya tha,toh usne wo sb karna shuru kar diya tha jiske liye shivansh mana karta tha. Kuchh hi time mein muskaan ki gareebi jaati rahi. Usne apna ghar bhi badal liya.
Uski maa rekha ko chhodke baaki sb family muskaan se khush thi. Usne apni family ke liye har wo cheez khareed li thi jiske liye wo puri zindgi taraste the. City ke famous logon ke sath uska mel-jol ho gya tha. muskaan ki maa ko ye bilkul pasand nahi tha, isliye wo shivansh se jaker milti hai.
In shivansh's house-------
Muskaan ki maa:- Beta tumne muskaan ko kyu chhod diya? Wo galat raste pe chal padhi hai. Usko rok lo ! Kahin jyada der na ho jaye. Kbhi tumne usko pyar kiya tha!
Magar maa ji! Maine usko humesha galat raste pe jane se roka hai!!!! Shivansh bola.
Rekha :-Tum log shadi kyu nahi kar lete......??
Shivansh:- shadi hhuuhh! Yahan mera khuda gujara nahi ho raha, main muskaan ka kharcha kaise uthayuga.
Rekha:- wo sb main nahi janti. Aagr muskaan ko kuchh huya toh uske jimedar sirf tum honge!
Itna bolke rekha wahan se ja chuki thi. Shivansh ke dimag mein kayi vichar ghum rhe the. Muskaan ke baare mein usko logon se achha bura sunne ko milta rehta, par wo itni aage nikal jayegi uska andaza shivansh ko nahi tha.
Muskaan shivansh ki mulakaat.....
City ke ik five star hotel mein shivansh ko bulaya gaya. Wo muskaan hi thi uske samne, pehle ki muskaan or ab ki muskaan mein zameen aasman ka farak tha. Pehle ki muskaan bholi bhali masoon ladki thi or ab ki muskaan ko toh jaise shivansh janta hi nahi tha. Pehle pehel tohh muskaan ne shivansh se milne se mana kar diya.par jab shivansh ne jyada jor diya toh muskaan usse milne ko razi ho gayi.
Shivansh:- yeh sab chhod do muskaan, yeh sab achha nahi tumhare liye shivansh ne bade dukh or apnepan se kaha.
Tumhe kya lagta hai. main tumhare hath ki katputli hun! Yo tum bologe wahi karugi..... muskaan gusse mein boli.
Agar tum chahte ho ki main ye sb chhodke tumhare pass wapas aa jayu tohh pehle meri barabari karo. Fir aana mere passItna bolkar muskaan shivansh se muah fer ke chali gayi.
Shivansh ko muskaan ki baatein sunke bohat dukh huya. Usko ehsaas tha ki muskaan aaz jis halat mein hai wo uski waza se hai. Wo usko sahi raste pe laana chahta tha,ye uske liye sbse mushkil kaam tha. Wo apne dost abhay se mila, abhay basti ka gunda tha. Shivansh ne usse baat ki or pura mamla abhay ko btaya. Abhay aasamazhik jeevan se parichit tha. Abhay usko is daldal mein dhakelna nahi chahta tha,usne abhay ko boht samjhaya. pr mamla pyar ka tha jiske aage abhay ko har manni padhi. Usne shivansh ko mafia:mafia: don sheru se milaya. Sheru ne shivansh ko har galat kaam sikhaya. Drugs ki smuggling ke paise se shivansh bohat khush tha. Police ne giraftar bi kiya, pr jaldi hi jail se chhut gaya. Uska sharab ka karobaad thik thak chal raha tha,pr ab usko or paisa chahiye tha isliye ab usne zameen mein hera pheri shuru kr di, ik hi zameen kayi logon ko bechke usne bohat paise kamaye. Auraton ki smuggling mein uska naam famous tha. City hi nahi foreign mein bi usne apne naam ki property le li thi.
After 10 years:-
Muskaan ab tum mujhse shadi krogi? Pure 10 saal baad shivansh muskaan se mil raha tha. Par waqt ne firse karwat li muskaan ab bi is rishte ke liye haan nahi bol sakti thi, pehle uski ego ki wazase usne shivansh ko thukra diya tha ab mujburi ki wazase .......:sad2:
Muskaan ki mazburi aagle update mein .........to be continued
Angel for new story....Story concept is brilliant
... But mere ko lagta hai writing thodi sudhari jani chaiye.... Jo paragraphs ki heading hai like"After 10 years", "Muskaan Shivansh ki mulakaat" and "In shivansh house" etc. In ko alag size mein likh do and space deke likho jisse ye thode highlight ho sake... Pura update bold mein na likh ke sirf headings ko bold likh sakti ho and font size thoda chota hai laptop mein padhne mein thodi dikkat aati hai.....In kuch writing mistakes alava first update bhut badhiya tha... Use of emoji in story is a standout point :perfect2:
Waiting for next update
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