Seeking Advice Suggestion for my story

[Aakesh.]

Hi friends...mai ek story likh raha hu Aayansh naam se ...uske liye thode suggestion chahiye the
Ye maire first story hai...so thoda nervous hu
Kya aap mujhe koe suggestion doge...kyuki jab first time maine thread khola tha...usse time thoda nervous tha...but ab thoda darr bhi hai...ki kahi aapko story pasande nahi aae too
...
Maire khayale se aap samjhe rahe honge ...maire mindset ko
Agar thodi help kardo ...to accha hoga maire liye...please

 

[Rahul]

Hi friends...mai ek story likh raha hu Aayansh naam se ...uske liye thode suggestion chahiye the
Ye maire first story hai...so thoda nervous hu
Kya aap mujhe koe suggestion doge...kyuki jab first time maine thread khola tha...usse time thoda nervous tha...but ab thoda darr bhi hai...ki kahi aapko story pasande nahi aae too
...
Maire khayale se aap samjhe rahe honge ...maire mindset ko
Agar thodi help kardo ...to accha hoga maire liye...please

story aisi ho jisme pain ho fun ho dhoka ho aur maafi ho khusiyan ho aur apne man se likho sabko pasand aaye jaruri nai jise aayega wo padhega

 

[Lelouchyagami]

Hi friends...mai ek story likh raha hu Aayansh naam se ...uske liye thode suggestion chahiye the
Ye maire first story hai...so thoda nervous hu
Kya aap mujhe koe suggestion doge...kyuki jab first time maine thread khola tha...usse time thoda nervous tha...but ab thoda darr bhi hai...ki kahi aapko story pasande nahi aae too
...
Maire khayale se aap samjhe rahe honge ...maire mindset ko
Agar thodi help kardo ...to accha hoga maire liye...please

Buddy, main koi suggestion dene me achha to nhi hun. Lekin kuch baat hai jo point out kar raha hun. Dekh lena.

Buddy, tumhara interest jisme hai uspar likho. Na ki tradition par.

Ex- incest famous hai to incest likhna lazmi hai, kyunki uspar views comment aur like aate hai.


Lekin jaruri nhi hai tumhara interest usme ho. Tum waise story likho, jiska tum dream dekhte ho.


Ex- jaise tum chahte ho ki tumhare life me aisa hota to achha hota, aisa hota to achha hota. Tum jaisa apni life me chahte ho waisa story me likho.

Tum apni dream life par likho.

Main story name bhi suggest kar raha hun


" A dream life "


Aur sabse important agar tumhara abhi man nhi kar raha hai ya interest nhi aa raha hai story likhne me to CHOR DO.

Apne aap ko force mat karo. Har aadmi ka interest ek time baad kisi cheez me khatam ho jata hai. Reason bahut saare ho sakte hai.

Intezaar karo, kab Tumhara interest wapas aata hai. Kyunki time ke saath beeti huyi cheeze bhi yaad aati hai.

Tab tak forum enjoy karo. Agar likhne ka man nhi hai to. Mood fresh rakho apna.

Aur likhna hai to mere suggestion ko dekh lena ek baar.

Tumhari life ka dream. (May be incest, may be adultery, may be romance, may be thriller Or may be horror).

Dekh lena.

" A dream life "

 

[For You]

Story ko depth banao... Pain, plot, suspence, romance, scenes

 

[Rahul]

Mai bhi story likhunga aur sare writer ko bhaga dunga har taraf kewal Meri story dikhegi kyunki mai mahaan hun

 

[Lelouchyagami]

Mai bhi story likhunga aur sare writer ko bhaga dunga har taraf kewal Meri story dikhegi kyunki mai mahaan hun

#seniorfirst
Tusi itihaas likho aur uski bhi baja do

 

[Rahul]

#seniorfirst
Tusi itihaas likho aur uski bhi baja do

Mai best comedy story likh sakta hun lekin uske liye thoda time chahiye shant man chahiye aur mere pass dono nai hai ab