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Preesha- betu jaldi uth aaj tujhe tution ke liye Jana hai na.

Mai- haa didi uth raha hu. ( Nind me hi).

Preesha- Pani daal dungi jaldi uth samjh le fir subah subah gussa na kariyo. ( Jor se)

Mai-( hadbade ke) haaaa hhhhaa didi didi mai uth gya utha gya. Pani mat dalna.

Preesha ( muskura kar) - hmm acchi baat hai chal nikal. Jaldi fresh ho ke aa.

Mai- didiiiiii ( bacchon jaise karte hue).

Preesha- abb kya hua.

Mai- aap na sone nhi deti ho subah subah kaun aisa ghatiya majak karta hai.

Preesha- toh fir school bunk karke cinema hall aur ladkiyon ke piche kaun bolta hai bhagne.

Mai- maii... Maiiii kahi nhi jata aur kisi ladki ladki.. ke piche toh bilkul nhi.

Preesha- accha bacchu nhi jata. Fir bata Mala kaun aur Suman aur ek koi Rani thi joh ghar tak aa gyi thi.

Mai- maiii mujheee kya pata( agle bagle takte hue). Mujhe padhne Jana hai abb khud baato me laga rahi ho.

Preesha- accha mai laga rahi hu. Bhaag yaha se nhi toh maar khayega. Kapde nikal ke yahi rakh deti hu. Copy aur book leke niche aa jana. Nasta karke sidha tere teacher se Milne chalte hai.

Mai- thik hai didi. ( Mann me - Sala toh woh Rani thi ruk tu batata hu teri gaand na faad di toh mera naam v veer nhi).

Fresh ho ke niche aya aur breakfast karne laga.

Papa- barkhurdar school me abhi kaun si padhayi ho rahi joh basta utha ke chal diye.

Mai- ( chid gya magar aram se dadi ki traf dekhte hue) - tution jaa raha hu.
Dadi - chup chap khaa ashoki warna kaan pakad ke bahar kar dungi. Iss baat ka matalab samjhte hue papa chup rahe magar sab muskura pade. Kyunki jab dadi ashoki bolti hai matalab papa ki class lag sakti hai.

Siddhi- chal jaldi khaa hame der ho rahi hai. Hame v college jana hai.
Zaldi zaldi khaa ke mai didi ke sath dusre gaav chala gya.
Preesha- tu jiske pass jaa raha hai na woh thodi padhai ke mamle me strict rahti hai. Isiliye acche se padhna.
Mai- waise teacher rahti kaha hai.
Preesha- pass Wale gaav me. Kyu???
Mai- Itni dur kaun jayega roj subah subah uth ke. Aap sab hi padha do na.
Siddhi- preesha tere laad pyaar ne isse bigad rakha Hain. Abhi koi ladki pasand aa gyi toh iske piche mahasay sahar tak jaa sakte hai magar padhne ke liye bagal ke sahar v nhi Jaa sakte.
Preesha- accha mai akele hi isse bigad rahi hu. Aab ana tu Babu ke pass jhadu se maar ke bhagaungi.
Siddhi- aree aree aisa maine kab kaha. Mai toh kah rahi thi ki padhne ke naam pe kitne bahane aate hai.
Preesha- aab aage se kuch bolna toh soch samjh ke. Magar tune sahi kaha ladkiyan rahi toh abhi yeh mahasay ek minute me Krishna ban jate.
Mai-( masoom ban ke) mai aisa kab karta hu didi.
Siddhi- abb hamse v jhut bolne laga hai preesha dekh. Jada bola na toh chappal se marungi.
Mai- ( nakhre karte hue) didi dekho na kyaa bol rahi hai.
Preesha- ( muskura kar) accha thik hai chappal se nhi maregi dande se mar legi.
Mai- ( chid ke wahi pass me baith gya) mai nahi hi jaa raha aap logo ke sath.
Siddhi- pahle uth jaa. Fir gussa kar lena. Accha maaf kar de abb nhi bolungi. Jaisa tu kahega wahi hoga.
Mai-pakka.
Siddhi- pakka.
Preesha- jaldi chal jaldi late ho rha hai hame v college jana hai.
Fir ham teeno pahuch gaye dusre gaav. Aur ek chota sa maakan ke aage ruk gye. Ghar accha tha dikhne me. Didi ne Gate knock kiya. Samne se ek ladki ne aake gate khola uske dekh ke mai shock ho gya. Yeh toh wahi thi kal wali ladki komal.
Preesha- kaisi hai Komal tu.
Komal-mai ek dam badhiya aur tu bata. Aa andar. ( Komal mujhe dekh ke v shock hui magar baad me muskura ke dekhne lagi.)
Ham teeno andar gye. Bahar me baithne ke liye chair thi. Komal hame andar le gyi. Bich me ek haal tha 4 room dono side se 2-2. Aur haal ke sath hi kitchen tha. Aur side se piche ki traf jaane ke liye rasta kitchen se hi.

Preesha- yeh mera bhai aur Babu yeh hai komal joh tujhe padhayegi.
Siddhi- acche se padhna Babu abb ham chalte hai komal hame college ke liye late ho raha hai.
Komal- yaar tum dono pahli baar ghar aayi ho. Kam se kam chai toh pi ke jaa.
Siddhi- dekh ham subah subah khaa pi ke aaye hai. Yadi tu gond ke laddu khila sakti hai toh thik hai warna ham chalte hai.
Komal- haa lati hu tuje bass wahi pasand hai.
Komal andar chali gyi aur preesha didi v siddhi didi ke kaan me kuch kah ke kitchen me chali gyi. Aur thode der tak mehman nawazi aur saheliyon me gapsap hota raha. Aur fir dono didi acche se padhne ka bol kar nikal gyi.

Mai- ham fir mil hi Gaye.
Komal- haa veer. Kaiso ho un ladkon ko tumhare baare me malum toh nhi chala.

Mai- nhi yaar.


Komal- ( muskurate hue aankh nacha kar) ek hi mulakat me yaar hmmm. Yeh mat bhulo mai tumhari teacher v hu.
Mai- abb tumne abhi khud hi swikriti de di teacher v hu kah ke. Waise ham pahle se ek doosre ke dost the bhul gyi kyaa.
Komal- yaar tum toh bade fast ho.
Mai- yeh fast wast baad me pahle padh lete hai. Nhi toh mai pakka fail ho jaunga. Aur Mera baap laathi le ke poore ghar me daurayega.
Komal- yaar woh kitchen me chasma ha laa do tab tak mai tumhara book dekh leti hu.
Mai- thik hai. Mai andar gya toh dekha didi ka purse toh yahi reh gya fir college jaane ki fee kaisi dengi. Mai fir purse liya aur komal ka chasma aur bahar aa gya.
Mai- yaar mai didi ko purse de ke aata hu zaldi warna college jaane ke paise kaise dengi.
Komal- thik hai zaldi jaao bus aane me bass 5 minute hogi jaao zaldi.
Mai fir daurte hue jaane laga mai 2 minute me buss aane ki jagah pahuch gya. Aur samne ka Nazar dekh ke mera khunn khaul gya. Meri dono didiyon ko kuch ladke chuu rahe the aur ek ne toh hadd ho kar rakhi thi dupatta kich raha tha uske hath ko pakad ke aith diya ladka tilmila gya.
Mai- didi mera rudraksh nikalo.
Siddhi- ( darte hue) magar Babu kuch nhi hua hai. Chal ham Ghar chalte hai.
Mai- ( gusse me) maine kaha na rudraksha nikalo mere gale se.
Preesha didi ne aage badh ke mere gale se rudraksh nikal diya aur maine samne dekha aab tak 10-12 ladke jama ho gye the. Mai ek ladke ko dekh ke samjh gya yeh sab iski hi kartut hai.
Woh thi iss gaav ka karta mukhiya ka bete lakkhi Chand ka beta Suresh aur uske saathi.
Mai-( gusse me) madarchod tum me se aaj ek ko jaane Diya toh mera naam badal dena. Aur tu ( Suresh) bhosdike harami ke jaane tujhe poore gaav me nanga karke naa ghumaya toh mera naam v veer upadhyay nhi.
Suresh- aabe chutiye tu hai piddi bhar ka aur tu hamse ladega.
Mai- bhosdike apni maiyya se puchna piddi Kaun hai.
Suresh ( gusse me) - mukh kyaa deh rahe Maro saale ko.
Samne se eek ladka aaya aur mujhe maarne maine ek laat uske taate par pura dam laga ke maara aur woh itna jor se chikha ki sab agal bagal pahle se khade the magar aab aur bhid lag gyi. Aur maine ek mukka naak me mara aur apni do ungliyan uske dono aankhon me ghused di aur ek laat munh par maar ke Sula diya. Joh bacche aur mahilaye thi aisa karta dekh dil kaano utha. Aur ek pal samne wale v ladke v dar gye magar himmat karke abb 2-4 sath aa rahe the magar sabka wahi haal hua.
Sabse pahle joh 4-5 group me aaye. Aane ke sath hi jahapat pade maine tezi se aage walo ko dhakel ke piche walo ke upar gira diya aur sab niche gir gye aur joh najdik me the taate par ke Sula aur piche Wale Marne aaye unke sath pair Tod diye.
Mai- ayye idhar aa tu. Hariya wahi tha sayad koi kaam hoga.
Mai- hariya kaka in sabko baandho aur ek laauwa ke le ke aao.
Suresh- ( gusse me) yeh aise nhi hoga laathi se maaro.

Mai- beta tune galti kar di. Jaise hi lathi ke maarne aaye ek do ki lag gyi mujhe magar ek ka maine jahapat karke laathi chinn Li aur de Dana jaha Mila waha marna Suru kar diya kisi ke aankh kaan kisi ke sat phute aur suresh darta hua waha bahgne laga maine lathi phek ke Mari saale ko woh gir gya.
Mai- madarjat tere khandan ko kitne baar samjhaya magar nhi samjha magar tune galti kar di meri bahno ke sath kuch nhi karna tha.
Suresh- ( gidgida ke) maaf kar de bhai aa ke baad nhi karunga.
Mai (gusse) - tu uske layak rahega tab na aur ek laat uske aand par Mari aur itna jor se chilaya ki aadhe gaav ko suna Diya hoga. Madarchod kaan dard karne lage. Sale ke munh par ek laat Mari aur woh jor se chillaya.
Mai- ( gusse me) isi hath se inhe Chu raha tha na tu. Uski dono kalayi tod di.
Suresh- aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh bhaiiii bhaiiii maaf karde. Mai apni patni ko v na dekhunga. Maaf karde maaf karde.
Mai- madarjat uss layak aab tu rhega tab na. Aur 2-4 laat fir aando par maari aur woh bheosh ho gya.
Mai- ( gusse) OOOoooo.. hariya kaka kaha mar gye.
Hariya - (picche se aage aate hue). Yahi hu chote maalik.
Mai - ( gusse me) zaldi se sabke sarr muda aur chappal ki mala pahna ke nanga karke churahe par bandh ke likh de. Hum kukarmi hai hamne jitni ladkiyon ke sath batimzi ya absabd kahe hai. Sabke liye maafi. Aur yeh kaam tere maalik ke aane se pahle na hua toh Teri gaand mai sek dunga Aaj samjh liyo.
Mai- aur iss harami ke pahle kar.
Hariya- chote maalik yeh yaha ke mukhiya ka beta hai. Bade maalik ko aane do.
Mai- ( gusse me) bhosdike zaldi kar warna teri gaand maar lunga.
Hariya ( sakpaka ke ) haa haa maalik.
Maine ek baache ko bulaya aur bola.
Mai- tujhe chochlate dunga iske munh par mutt aur isse Utha.
Ladka- bhaiya yaha sab hai.
Mai- bhosdike nahar par to gol gol ghum ke line bana ke mutte ho tab na hua sharam. Aaj ke baad dekh liya na nahar ke aaspass tere aur tere sathiyon ke gaand lal kar dunga.
Ladka- bhaiya Aisa maat karna ham sabke munh par kar dete hai. Magar tum hame hamare ghar walo se bachaoge.
Mai- haa haa zaldi kar. Uss ladke ne apne sab sathiyon ke sath mil kar mutt ki tanki khaali kar di. Aur aass pass ke log khaas karke ladkiyan hass rahi thi. Aur bahuto ke dil ko sukun mila aur joh chote tabke ki thi ladkiyan jinme himmat na thi woh dil hi dil me duaa de rahi thi.
Mai- abbe bhosdike kitne din se naa mutt rahe the joh itni der laga rahe ho. Zaldi karo.
Mai- hariya kaka hua kya.
Hariya - haa ho gya chote Malik bass ek ka bacha hai.
Mai-( gusse me ) zaldi karo aur sabko nanga karo.
Yeh sunte hi khusur phusur hone lagi aur kuch ladkiyan hasne v lagi aur kuch sharama v rahi thi.
Unke kapde utarne lage.
Suresh- bhai aisa mat kar kahi munh dikhane layak nhi rahunga. Joh bolega karunga.
Mai- ( gusse me) madarchod tujhe mera baap pahle v warning de chuka hai . Aur bhosdike mere baap ke dosti ka tum sab milke galat fayda uthate ho. Sabak toh sikhoge aur bharoge v aur zindagi bar bharoge. Yaad rakhiyo.
Sabko Naga karke maarte hue belt se bargad se baandh diya aur wahi dusri traf dukaan par kursi laga ke baith gya.
Mai- ( hariya se) kaka tum didi ko ghar leke jaao.
Preesha- magar bhai.
Mai - didi aaj faisla karke aata hu. Aaj ke baad koi v kisi ladki ko nhi chedega. Aur 3-4 ghante baad badi haweli jaake dadi aama ko saath yahi leti aana.
Siddhi- magar kyu.
Mai- gadhiyon ke dimag me baat nhi ghusti jaao abb. Siddhi didi munh bichka ke aage nikal li aur preesha didi muskura ke piche piche nikalne lagi.
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Mai wahi aram se so Raha tha kisi ne aake ek thappad laga diya.

Mai- Teri maa kiii... Mere joh bol the woh andar hi rah gye kyunki samne hamari amma hi thi.
Mai- maa aap yaha....
Maa- tune yeh kyaa kiya chiii... Sharam nhi aati Gunda gardi karte hue. Isiliye tujhe yeh sab karne diya.
Mai- ( gusse me) Jab baat pata na ho toh bola mat karo. Aur tumhari v do betiyan hai Ghar me yadi unhe koi raha chalte yaha waha hath lagayega aur dupatta kichega toh kaisa lagega. Bhale tum mera maa magar tum galat ho indrani upadhyay.
Meri maa chup ho gyi aur aanshu bahate hue bagal me khadi ho gyi.
Kuch hi der me mere pariwar ke saath sath 12 ke 12 ladko ke pariwar walo ke ghar wale aur sath me Laakhi Chand v aa gya tha usse sab malum hi gya magar aanshu bahate hue apne bete ki halat dekhne laga aur sath me khun ka ghut pi gya.
Panch baithi aur sunwayi hone lagi aur bich ke kursi par mai baith gya.
Mai- dada ji Zara Mai hath munh dho ke aata hu. Aur Mai hath munh ek pass ke ghar me hi dhone laga kyunki poore aas pass ke ilake Wale mujhe jante the. Aur maine dekha mere kapde gande pass ke dukaan se dhoti kurta le liya aur iss chakkar me chaapal v Tut gyi thi. Ek chamde ki chappal leke fir usi ghar me ghus gya. Aur pahan ke bahar nikla.
Budhi aurat- aayee veera ruk.
Budhi aurat- ooo bahu Pooja ki thaali le ke aa aaj lagta hai bade mukhopadhyay ji ghar aaye ho. Ruk tu yahi.
Aur meri aarti karke aur tuka ek alag style se laga ke bahr bhej diya. Mai jab paancho ke pass aya toh sab khade ho kar namaste karne lage yaha tak dada v haath jodne lage the. Magar vartman isthiti ka jayja lete hue. Baith gye.
Dada ji- tumne inhe kyu mara.

Mai- Inka Roz ka kaam tha kisi na kisi ladki ko chedna aur unse aslil baate karna. Sathe me yeh ladkiyon ke aang ko v chute the. Aur inhone bahut si ladkiyon ke sath balatkar v kiya aur aapke suputra ne hi iss mamle ko daba diya yaad ho toh.
Mere aisa bolte hi paanchon me kuch baat chit hui aur kahne lage.
Paanch- ham paanchon ka faisla hai ki aap is mamle se Durr rahengey upadhyay hi aur yeh mamla abb badi aama hi dekhengi.
Yeh pahli baar hua tha ki paanchon ne dada ji ko nakar diya. Unke chahre par Sarmindgi ke bhaav the. Aur woh waha se haath jodte hue nikal gye.
1 ghante baad badi aama ke saath saath meri bahne aur dono dadi v wahi aa gyi. Badi Amma ka maine aashirwad liya aur unhone mera matha chumke mere sar par hath phera aur bich me kursi par baith gyi.
Badi Amma- kya hua Aaj panchon ne hame yaad kiya.
Fir badi aama ko sab bataya badi Amma bhadak gyi. Aur gusse ko shaant karte hue.
Badi aama- haa veere pura mamla batao.
Mai- Inka yeh Roz ka kaam hai yeh hamesha ladkiyon ko chedte hai. Aur naa jaane kaha kaha chute hai. Aur niche tabke ke ladkiyon ke saath inhone balatkar v kiya hua hai.
Bich me hi Laakhi Chand- yeh sab jhut hai.
Mai- badi aama aap yadi un sabse milna chahti hai toh mila sakta hu. Magar usme se kuch aise hai joh khushal hai. Aur acche se ghar sambhal Rahi hai yadi ekant me aap milna chahe toh mai mila sakta hu.
Badi aama- pannchon se meri dharkhast hai ki mai iss mamle ko akele dekhna chahti hu.
Panch badi aama ki baat kya poora ilaka badi aama ki baat nhi taal sakta hath jodte hue unhe izzazat di.
Badi aama - veere mere sath chalna mai sabse milungi.
Mai- ji. Badi aama ek baat kahna chahta hu.
Badi Amma- haa veere bol.
Mai- gaav me school hai hi yadi yahi sirf ladliyon ke liye college khul jaaye toh...
Badi aama - thik hai. ( Jor se kahte hue) Toh Raj pariwaar ki traf se aur veere iss college ka sansthapak . Hamari traf se ladkiyon ke liye choti si bhet. Ham yaha naya college khulwayenge sirf ladkiyon ke liye hoga.
Usi ke saath dher talliyan bajne lagi aur fir badi aama mujhe bula ke aapne saath hi haweli le jaane lagi car me aur piche dusri car me Saab ghar wale the.
Shandar Update majra kuch aisa dikhe jise dekhne ke baad koyi bhi khud ko nehi rook sakta. Par iske liye samy hi jimmedar tha agar preesha ka parsh na chuta hoota to shayad hi veer ye najara dekhne ko milta.

Suresh ko joo dhulai hua aise kamine ladko ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye jo ladkio ke marji ke bina unke ango ko chute hai. Ate jane fhafhtiya kaste hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
 
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Waise in story characters ke liye ye ek warning hai...
"Jab bhi Naina kahani read karne ke liye story thread pe aati hai to kahani ke kirdaaro ke paas sirf do hi raaste hote hain ... Sudhar jaaye ya roast ho jaaye ... jaisi un kirdaaro ki marzi.. :D "
Specially us veer ko ye baat yaad rakhni chahiye... :D
Laggta hai veer pe sade sati ka kuch asar suru hone wala hai. Maza aayega jab veer par sade sati chadega aur usse tandav karbayega
 
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Update 1
Bahot dilchasp tarike se shuruwat huyi kahani ki.....
kahani ki suruvaat hoti teen gande naali ke kide ki gatar jaise badbu maarne wali baatcheet ke saath...opps sorry matlab veer, shiva aur avi ki bich huyi baatcheet ke sath :D
Waise gaon ki ek bhi aurat, ladki ,adher kisiko bhi ma baks ne wala najayaz baap ki aulaad veer us mukhiya ki beti se duri banaye rehta hai just because kahi kuch nich ho gaya to definitely uski shaadi mukhiya ki beti ke sath kar denge uske ghar wale....
Matlab us kutte ko abhi shaadi nahi karni hai..
well..sukar hai ki harami ka pilla khudke baap se darta to hai, ishi bahane padhayi pe focus kar raha hai...
Waise padhayi karne ki jarurat kya hai :hmm2:
Der saber waise bhi wo apni sister logis ke sath sex karne wala hai to ushe ye exams dene ya studies karne ka mauka hi kab milega wala hai...
Mai preesha didi se lipat ke thank you kahne laga.
aur ye dekho suru bhi kar diya kamine ne :laugh1: are kam se kam kuch update to ho jaane dete...

Khair to exams ke chalte uski chinnar didi logis :D ...opps sorry ..matlab veer ki didiyan zyada help nahi kar payenge usko.. Isliye ek teacher ki prabandh ki hai taaki usko padha sake..
Ab jaane us teacher ke sath padhega ya hawas ki aag shaant karega ye to aage ki kahani mein hi pata chale...

sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Kya naukar aur kya hi malik... sabke ke sab to gatar ki paidayas hi hai... pata nahi in logo ke ma baap kaise kaise honge :akshay:
waise lamu kaka kahe kajri ki padosh wali bhabhi ka intezaam kar raha hai us hawasi ke liye ,, iss achha to lamu kaka khudki maa ko pesh kar de, isse wo haram ka jana veer bhi khush ho jaayega :roflol:
waise bhi lamu kaka ki biwi ki ijjat lutne wala hai kamina, sath mein uski maa ko bhi de de to sone pe suhaga :rolrun:
Udhar us komal naam ki ladki ijjat bachayi veer ne lekin komal ko naa malum ki ab to aur bhi zyada khatra hai uski ijjat ko.... :lol1:
ye veer ke gain wale to sab ke sab balatkaari hai... matlab kanoon naam ki kuch cheej hi nahi us gaon mein jaha ladki aurat dekhi nahi ijjat lutne lag jaao....
Ye kaisa nich gira hua gaon hai... chii aaatuu :puke:

aur update ke aakhiri mein ye jo kirdaar ne entry li hai, ye wohi veer ka maun mauji, tharki baap hai na ...
waise kuch bhi kaho , budha hai bada chalak ...

sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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:congrats: . For new story....
Matlab pura pariwar sanskari , bas ek kamine hawasi member chhod ke, :D
Lagta ye member family ko bhi khudki tarah bana dega... :D
Urri baba itne sare story characters :faint:
Ye to ghar na hoke pura zila ho gaya :laugh1:

Well inmein se mujhe teen hi kirdaar dilchasp lagi
Rachna, jaanki devi aur madhu ...
aur inki nature :devil:
Waise in story characters ke liye ye ek warning hai...
"Jab bhi Naina kahani read karne ke liye story thread pe aati hai to kahani ke kirdaaro ke paas sirf do hi raaste hote hain ... Sudhar jaaye ya roast ho jaaye ... jaisi un kirdaaro ki marzi.. :D "
Specially us veer ko ye baat yaad rakhni chahiye... :D
Apna review dene ke liye thanks Naina ji.
 
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Shandar Update majra kuch aisa dikhe jise dekhne ke baad koyi bhi khud ko nehi rook sakta. Par iske liye samy hi jimmedar tha agar preesha ka parsh na chuta hoota to shayad hi veer ye najara dekhne ko milta.

Suresh ko joo dhulai hua aise kamine ladko ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye jo ladkio ke marji ke bina unke ango ko chute hai. Ate jane fhafhtiya kaste hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
Thanks bhai.
 
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Laggta hai veer pe sade sati ka kuch asar suru hone wala hai. Maza aayega jab veer par sade sati chadega aur usse tandav karbayega
Update 1
Bahot dilchasp tarike se shuruwat huyi kahani ki.....
kahani ki suruvaat hoti teen gande naali ke kide ki gatar jaise badbu maarne wali baatcheet ke saath...opps sorry matlab veer, shiva aur avi ki bich huyi baatcheet ke sath :D
Waise gaon ki ek bhi aurat, ladki ,adher kisiko bhi ma baks ne wala najayaz baap ki aulaad veer us mukhiya ki beti se duri banaye rehta hai just because kahi kuch nich ho gaya to definitely uski shaadi mukhiya ki beti ke sath kar denge uske ghar wale....
Matlab us kutte ko abhi shaadi nahi karni hai..
well..sukar hai ki harami ka pilla khudke baap se darta to hai, ishi bahane padhayi pe focus kar raha hai...
Waise padhayi karne ki jarurat kya hai :hmm2:
Der saber waise bhi wo apni sister logis ke sath sex karne wala hai to ushe ye exams dene ya studies karne ka mauka hi kab milega wala hai...

aur ye dekho suru bhi kar diya kamine ne :laugh1: are kam se kam kuch update to ho jaane dete...

Khair to exams ke chalte uski chinnar didi logis :D ...opps sorry ..matlab veer ki didiyan zyada help nahi kar payenge usko.. Isliye ek teacher ki prabandh ki hai taaki usko padha sake..
Ab jaane us teacher ke sath padhega ya hawas ki aag shaant karega ye to aage ki kahani mein hi pata chale...

sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Kya naukar aur kya hi malik... sabke ke sab to gatar ki paidayas hi hai... pata nahi in logo ke ma baap kaise kaise honge :akshay:
waise lamu kaka kahe kajri ki padosh wali bhabhi ka intezaam kar raha hai us hawasi ke liye ,, iss achha to lamu kaka khudki maa ko pesh kar de, isse wo haram ka jana veer bhi khush ho jaayega :roflol:
waise bhi lamu kaka ki biwi ki ijjat lutne wala hai kamina, sath mein uski maa ko bhi de de to sone pe suhaga :rolrun:
Udhar us komal naam ki ladki ijjat bachayi veer ne lekin komal ko naa malum ki ab to aur bhi zyada khatra hai uski ijjat ko.... :lol1:
ye veer ke gain wale to sab ke sab balatkaari hai... matlab kanoon naam ki kuch cheej hi nahi us gaon mein jaha ladki aurat dekhi nahi ijjat lutne lag jaao....
Ye kaisa nich gira hua gaon hai... chii aaatuu :puke:

aur update ke aakhiri mein ye jo kirdaar ne entry li hai, ye wohi veer ka maun mauji, tharki baap hai na ...
waise kuch bhi kaho , budha hai bada chalak ...

sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Thanks Naina ji. Aise hi story padhte rahiye aur review dete rahiye jaha kuch galat ho jarur batayiega.
 
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Magar meri bahne thehri najuk kaliyan unse kya hoga magar mai fir hasta raha.
Kahani ki abhi suruvaat thik se huyi bhi nahi ki ye harami abhi se khudki hi bahno ko nazuk kaliyaan bolne laga hai ..
wah kya sanskar diya hai tharki rani indrani ne apne bete ko :akshay:
Good, bhery good sunakar :hint2:

waise chahe veer ki soch gatar jaisa hi kyun na ho lekin aise khaye waqt ashok ne jis tarah se baatein sunayi wo bilkul thik na tha...
Are kutte ko bhi khate waqt disturb karoge to kaatne aayega,
Khai chalo kam se kam veer kaatne nahi aaya :laugh1:
Well veer ki padhayi likhayi ko leke ghar walo mein do tarfa yukti hai... lekin indrani ki yukti aur tark sahi hai

Udhar wo London se jisne phone kiya tha wo shayad veer ke dono fufa me mein se koi ek hai aur wo phone ke dusri taraf wo ladki shayad komal hai... maybe dono milke veer aur uski family ke khilaaf koi chaal chal rahi ho...
Aadmi- hello bhai.
Ladka- haa bolo.
Aadmi- kisi ne aapke bhai par hamla kiya tha.
Ladka-kuch hua toh nhi na.
Aadmi- Nhi bhai bahut himmat hai. Aaj tak itna chalak nhi dekha hai.
Ladka- accha thik hai dhyaan rakhna kuch nhi hona chahiye.
Aadmi- thik hai bhai. Aap samne kyu nhi aa jaate hain.
Ladka- dimag se paidal ho kyaa??? Bas Nazar rakho kisi ko kuch nhi hona chahiye aur kaam ka kya hua.
Aadmi- sab ho gya bhai. Details subah bhej dunga.
Ladka- thik hai rakhta hu.
Ye admi shayad mukhiya ka bada beta hai... jo apne chhote bhai ke sath huye maarpeet ke matter ke bare mein baat kar raha hai..

Khair...lage ki Kahani mein twist aane wale hai kayi Sare..

sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Ooo to komal hi wo teacher hai...
Waise veer kitna gira hua nich soch ki hai jo teacher ko yaar bol raha hai..
Thu hai veer ki jindagi par .... aatuuu :D
aale aale dekho to kaise gaon walo ki saamne heo banne ki koshish kar raha hai kamina :buttkick:
Wo jo aate jaate ladkiyon ko galat nazar se dekhta hai, gandi comment karta hai tab kya uska jameer nahi jaga,
Aur tab jameer kyun nahi jaga uska jab dusro ki bahu betiyon ki adru lutta tha...
Suresh & party jitna gunehgaar hai utna hi bada gunehgaar tharki veer bhi hai...
Aur jab apni family ki ladies ke sath sex karega to sabse bada haramkhor kirdaar wohi banega is story mein :lol:
wah re kamina, khuski daadi ki jariye ladkiyon ke liye college kholkar khud liye hi mauj kar li hawaai veer ne to...
Waise ye gaon wale itne chutiye hai ki unlogo ko nazar hi nahi aa raha ki veer kitna bada dhongi aur hawasi hai :D
Waise in kirdaaro ke karnamo ke bare mein padhke mujhe tharkipo aka ProfessorPo ki kahani Chhodompur ki yaad aaye :D

Btw wo rudraaksh kholne wali baat aur phir fight karna South Indian movie dj ki Fight scene ki tarah hai :D
sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo aur sath hi action scenes ko ek sathik gati ke sath sameta huya tha update ...

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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