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धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।Aik paathak ke roop mein kahaanee ke is bhaag ne maata-pita kee divy bhaavanaon se parichay karaaya...
Maata-pita jeevan-pravartak praaniyon kee jad banakar sadaiv apnee santaanon ke prati chintit rahate hain aur us vrksh ke samaan jo phalate-phoolate rahate hain, jab usakee shaakhaen, patte aur phool khilate aur badhate rahate hain aur svayan vrksh ke samaan ho jaate hain. Issee tarah maata-pita bhee apane poore jeevan ke dauraan is ichchha kee pratigya karate hain ki un ke bachche pooree kshamata tak vikasit hon aur apane svayan ke vikaas se pare vikasit hon. Issi liye manushy kee anokhee ichchha hotee hai ki un kee santaanen un se bhi aage nikal jaen aur yadi un ko is tarah ke mudde par koee asaphalata ya chook dikhati hain to un kee niraasha un ke jeevan mein se jindagi ko chheen letee hai. woh (maata-pita) jeevit to hote hain lekin jeevan kee khushee ke bina.
Kahaanee ke is bhaag mein lekhak ne jeevan ke itane sanvedanasheel aur maulik pahaloo ko bahut khoobasooratee se chhua hai. lekhak kee us visheshagyata ka varnan karane ke lie mere paas shabd nahin hain jisake saath woh maata-pita ke dukh kee bhaavana se bharee tasveer ko chitrit karane mein saphal rahee hai.
Abhishek apnaa jeevan barbaad kar raha hai aur yeh najar aaraha he ki kahaanee aik mahaan setting ke liye taiyaar ho rahee hai aur shaayad Abhishek kahaanee ke virodhee ka roop dharan kare ga.
Adbhut lekhan kaushal.... kahaanee ke pratyek bhaag ke saath paathakon ka paatron se pyaar badhh raha he.
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।।Samjha to diya lekin dekhte hain ki kya uski samjh me sari hai baat aur raghu ko to pyaar ho gawa nai to aaj goli lagti kahani khatam ho jati
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।Bhaee-bahan ka rishta bada ajeeb hote hue bhee daiveey hota hai.
Bahan ke liye aik bhaee suraksha ka prateek hai aur ek bhaee ke lie ek bahan garv ka prateek hai. Bahan bhaee ko bina kissi apeksha ya faayede ke pyaar aur sammaan detee hai, jabki ghar mein bahan kee upasthiti ghar ko rangon se sajaatee hai. Aik bahan samrddh rangon ka palette hai; rang jo jeevant hain, sukhadaayak hain.
Yeh durbhaagyapoorn hai jab ek bhaee apanee bahan ko aik kamajoree ke roop mein dekhata hai aur samajhata hai ki usakee shuddh aatma ko dusht aankhon se daag diya ja sakata hai. Yah durbhaagy kee baat hai ki jab ek bhaee sochata hai ki ek khilata hua gulaab, kaale dil vaale logon kee buree najar ya galat soch se pheeka pad sakata hai.
Isee tarah ka paap Abhishek ne kiya hai jisane pooree sthiti par galat pratikriya dee hai aur is tathy par vichaar kiye bina ghar chhod diya hai ki usakee anupasthiti mein usakee bahanen surakshit rahengee. Kya use apnee bahanon ko chhodane ke bajaay unakee raksha ke liye vahaan nahin hona chaahie un ke saath...
Aik aur mahaan bhaavanaon se bharaa bhaag ... mujhe nahin pata ki kaun se shabd lekhak ke kaushal ko uchit roop se saraahana kar payen ge... hats off...
धन्यवाद आपका मान्यवर।।mindblowing update waiting for next one
स्वागत है आपका महोदय।Mai wapas aa gaya idhar![]()
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