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ये उन दिनों की बात है।Kahe jhuth boling ju... Hum to yahi hai
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UPDATE- 59
Sarita aur Nishchal ke bich jo jhagda huwa tha abhi uske karan dono ka khana nahi ho paya tha, khane ko bich mein hi dono ke bich tu tu main main shuru ho gayi thi. Nishchal ke jane ke baad Sarita kuchh der wahi baithi rahi,
Jab uska gussa shant huwa to Usne realise kiya ki Usne Kuchh jyada hi over react kar diya hai. Isi karan Nishchal ne khana nahi khaya hai to usne Kitchen mein jakar dono ka khana garam kiya aur use lekar Nishchal ke kamre mein chali gayi.
Uhar Nishchal apne bister par baitha abhi jo kuchh bhi huwa tha use soch soch kar pareshan ho raha tha. Wo khud ko iska jimmedar man raha tha. Agar wo apna gussa control karta to shayad abhi Sarita se jhagda nahi hota.
apni galti ka ehsas hote hi wo Sarita se mafi mangne ke bare mein sochne laga. Yahi sochkar wo Niche jane ke liye utha tabhi uske darwaze par khatkhatahat hui. Usne jakar darwaza khola to Sarita do plate khana liye bahar khadi thi. Nishchal Samne se hat gaya.
Sarita andar aa gayi aur table par khana rakh diya. Nischal bhi akar apne bister par baith gaya. Sarita bhi waha rakhi kursi par baith gayi. dono ke bich khamoshi chhayi rahi. Thodi der khamosh rahne ke baad Nishchal ne kaha.
Nishchal- I Am Sorry. Maine us samay kuchh jyada hi react kar diya tha. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena.
Sarita- Its okk. Shayad mujhe bhi aapke matter mein nahi bolna chahiye the, lekin di ki baat thi isliye mujhse raha nahi gaya. I am Sorry. Ab khana kha lijiye nahi to fir thanda ho jayega. Main dobara nahi garam karne wali khana.
Nishchal ke chehre par muskan aa gayi ye sunkar. Usne chupchap bina kuchh bole khane ki plate utha li aur khane laga. Sarita ne bhi uske sath wahi baithkar khana khaya. Khana kha lene ke baad Nishchal ne Aabhar bhari najro se Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.
Nishchal- Thanks.
Sarita- You Wellcome.
Itna kahkar Sarita ne jhuthe plate uthaye aur Nishchal ke kamre se bahar nikal gayi. rasoighar mein juthe plate rakhne ke baad Sarita apne kamre mein chali gayi. Thodi der baad use neend aa gayi.
Subah uthkar wo Nashta banakar PS chali gayi aur apne cabin mein kaam karne lagi. Thodi der baad Janhavi Bhagti hui uske paas aayi.
Janhavi- Madam ek bahut hi khas information aayi hai mukhbir se.
Sarita- Kya bataya usne.
Janhavi- Madam, Aaj Raat mein Drugs ki bahut badi smuggling hone wali hai aisa Mukhbir ne bataya. Sath mein ye bhi bataya ki Ye sab Bachha Singh ke chhote bhaai Raghu ki nigrani mein ho raha hai.
Sarita- Kyaa. Aur kuchh bataya usne.
Janhavi- Haan madam, ...........Is jagah par Drugs rakha hai jo abhi kuchh hi der mein trucks mein load kiya jayega. Fir Wahi se raat mein Use Is Districs se bahar bhej diya jayega.
Sarita- ye to bahut badi khabar hai. Main aisa hone nahi doongi. Kaun kaun hai PS mein abhi.
Janahvi- Mohit Sir, Kaushal aur Vikas Sir hain abhi. Jawed Sir DSP Sir ke sath kisi kaam se bahar gaye huwe hain. Unko aane mein do-tin ghanta lagenge. Amit do din ki leave par hai.
Sarita- Sabko bulao abhi mera paas.
Janhavi- Lekin Madam aap karne kya wali hain. Kahi aap khud jane ka to nahi soch rahi hain.
Sarita- Haan main khud jaungi aur us Raghu ko pakad kar Salakhon ke pichhe dalungi.
Janhavi- Nahi madam. DSP Sir ka Sakht Nidesh hai ki Aap ko bina unki permission ke field par na jane diya jaye. Agar aapko jana hai to ek baar aap DSP Sir se baat kar lijiye. Nahi to wo naraz ho jayenge.
Sarita- Mujhe Field par jane ke liye Unki Permission ki jaroorat nahi hai. Ye area meri nigrani mein hai to Yaha par jo bhi hoga aur mujhe jo bhi karna hai apne area mein uske liye mujhe kisi ke permission ki jaroorat nahi hai.
Janhavi- Lekin Madam, Nishchal Sir ne mana kiya hai.
Sarita- Tumhari boos main hoon ya Nishchal Sir.
Janhavi- aap maidam.
Sarita- To jao aur Un tino ko bulakr lao. Main bhi dekhti hoon ki ye Drugs mere area se bahar jata kaise hain. Ek baat aur. Is bare mein tum Sir ko kuchh nahi bataogi. Samjhi.
Janhavi- Ji madam.
Itna kahkar Janhavi cabin se bahar chali gayi. Kuchh hi der mein Mohit, Vikas aur Kaushal Sarita ke samne the. Sarita ne unhe kya karna hai kaise karna hai Sab kuchh Samjha diya. Jise Sun-ne ke baad Mohit ne kaha.
Mohit- Ye sab to thik hai madam, lekin abhi aapki halat aisi nahi hai ki aap Itne bade mission par nikale. Meri maniye to ek Baar Sir se baat kar lijiye. Unhone Aapko Field kaam ke liye mana kiya hai.
Sarita- kya hai ye sab. Ye mera PS hai ya aapke Sir ka. Manti hoon ki main unke Undar mein kaam karti hoon, lekin ye PS Mere Undar mein hai. Aur mujhe kya karna hai iske liye Unki permission ki jaroorat nahi hai mujhe.
Main ye bhi janti hoon ki agar meri halat thik bhi hoti tab bhi mujhe Sir kabhi parmission nahi dete is kaam ke liye. To Is samay main aap sab ki boss hoon. Main jo kahungi wahi karna hoga aap logo ko.
Kaushal- Thik hai Madam. Us Drugs Smuglling ko rokna hi hai na to ham sab milkar Use rok lenge, Par aap mat chaliye sath mein Nahi to Sir ham logo se bahut naraz ho jayenge.
Sarita- Main to jaungi. Agar tum logo ko mere sath nahi chalna hai to chupchap PS mein baith jao aur apne Sir ki chamchagiri karo. Tum logo ko Kuchh kahna hi bekar hain. Main ja rahi hoon.
Itna kahkar Sarita bahar jane lagi. Use dekhkar Mohit. Vikas aur Kaushal bhi bahar aa gaye aur Sarita se kaha.
Vikas- Thik hai madam. Ham bhi aapke sath chal rahe hain.
Sarita ne kuchh hawaldar ko apne sath mein liya aur Mukhbir ki batai hui jagah par chal pade. Mohit phone to nahi kar sakta tha Nishchal ko Sairta ke samne to usne PS se nikalte samay Nishchal ko massage kar diya.
Kuchh hi der mein Sarita, Mohit, Vikas Kaushal aur 6 Hawaldar aur 2 constable Mukhbir ki batayi hui jagah par pahuch gaye. Unhne gadi kuchh door par roki aur paidal hi Us Godam ki taraf chal pade jis godam mein Drugs Truck mein load hona tha.
Sabhi chhupte chhupate us jagah par pahuch gaye. Bahar do aadmi khade chakkar laga rahe the. Sarita ne Mohit aur Kaushal ko ishara kiya to wo dono chupke chupke dono aadmiyon ki taraf badhne lage. Ek aadmi ke paas pahuchkar Mohit uske pichhe khada ho gaya.
Jab wo aadmi palta to mohit ko dekhkar kuchh bolne ko huwa tabhi mohit ne apne gun ki butt se uske sir par pichhe ki taraf waar kiya. Jisase wo aadmi behosh ho gaya.
Apne sathi ki halki cheekh sunkar jab Doosre aadmi ne mohit par waar karne ki koshish ki to kaushl ne furti dikhate huwe uski gardan daboch li aur ek jhatke mein uski gardan mod di. is waar se uski gardan to nahi tooti lekin bhayanak dard ke karan wo bhi behosh ho gaya.
Un Aadmiyo ko hawaldar ke hawale kar Sarita, Mohit, Vikas, Kaushal aur do hawaladar Godam ke andar ghus gaye. SAbhi log chhupte chuupate do bhago mein batkar do jagah chhup gaye aur andar ka jayja lene lage.
Godam mein do Truck khada huwa tha. Uske alava 6 Aadmi aur bhi the jo khade huwe the. Unhe ek aadmi kursi par baitha huwa kuchh nidesh de raha tha. Uski pith Sarita ki taraf thi, isliye uska chehra use dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Is bich Nishchal ne Mohit ka massage padh liya tha aur wo bahut pareshan ho gaya tha. Usne mohit ko phone lagaya, phone silant mein the, Isliye Usne phone nahi uthaya. Nishchal ne Sarita ko phone kiya to Sarita ne apna phone apni gadi mein chhod diya tha, Isliye phone nahi utha.
Dono taraf Se Phone receive na hone ke baad Nishchal ne Janhavi ko phone kiye to Janhavi ne use bataya ki Sarita ke sath kaun kaun gaya hai. To Nishchal ne Vikas aur Kaushal ko bhi phone kiya lekin kisi ne phone nahi uthaya.
JIsase nishchal ko kisi anhoni ki aashanka hui to wo Jawed ko sath lekar Jis kaam ke liye gaya tha use chhodkar wapas nikal pada, lekin Use Yaha tak aane mein bhi kam se kam 1.30 se 02.00 ghante lagne hi the.
Idhar Wo Aadmi baitha huwa apane aadmiyo ko kuchh nidesh de raha tha. Kuchh der baat karne ke baad Uske aadmi Truck load karne ki taiyari karne lage. Yahi samay uchhit jankar Sarita ne apne sathiyo ko ishara kiya action lene ke liye.
Pahla nishana khud Sarita ne lagaya. Jo sidhe Raghu ke khas aadmi (Sarita se baat karne ke baad Jis Gunde se Raghu kal baat kar raha tha saman idhar se udhar bhijwane ke liye) ke pairo mein jakar lagi.
Goli ki aawaz dunte hi Raghu Uchhalkar kursi se se khada ho gaya aur turant khambe ke pichhe chhip gaya. Goli chalne se uske aadmi bhi satark ho gaye the.
Fir dono taraf se goli bari shuru ho gayi. Raghu ne bhi kaman sambhal ki aur wo bhi Police par goli chalane laga. Tabhi usne Sarita ki ek jhalak dekh li. Wo turant khambe ke pichhe chhip gaya aur sochne laga.
Raghu- Ye yaha kya kar rahi hai. Isne to kaha tha ki ye abhi bas PS ka kaam hi karegi, field work to isne kuchh dino ko liye chhod diya hai. Lekin ye to badi sakht jaan hai.
Aswathya hone ke baavjood bhi Yaha par chali aayi. Man-na padega Raghu teri pasand ko. Bahut achhi aur bahadur ladki pasand ki hai tune apne liye. Lekin Abhi sabse bada sawal ye hai ki Isko pata kaise chala ki aaj ham yaha par Drugs ki Smuglling karne wale hain. Sala koi gaddhar hain ya Police ka koi informar hain mere kheme mein.
Sabse pahle to mujhe Sarita ki najar se apne aapko bachana hai. Nahi to main itne din se jo mehnat kar raha hoon iske kareeb jane ki wo kabhi poori nahi hogi. Mujhe kaise bhi karne yaha se nikalna hoga wo bhi bina Sarita ki najar mein aaye.
Raghu yahi sab soch raha tha, Tab tak Mohit aur Vikas aur Kaushal ne tin aur gundo ko ghayal kar diya. Sarita ne Dekha ki Ek gunda unki taraf chupke chupke badh raha hai to Sarita ne Uske pair par goli maar di. Jiske karan hath mein pakadi hui Hockey Stikk Niche gir padi. Us Gunde ke paas gun nahi thi.
Ye Sab dekhkar Raghu apne aapko Sarita ki najaro se bachane ke liye Apne munh mein kapda bandhkar Pichhe ke raste se bhagne laga. Sarita ne jab kisi ko bhagte dekha to Usne tabadtod 3 fire kar diye. Ek goli Raghu ke kandhe ko chukar nikal gayi. Jiske karan uske munh se chheekh nikal gayi, Lekin wo bhagne mein kamyab raha.
Raghu ke bhag jane ke baad Ab godam mein 4 jan bache the. Do ghayal pade huwe the aur do khambhe ke pichhe chiipe huwe the. Sarita Mohit, Vikas, Kaushal aur dono hawaldaro ko kuchh ishara kiya. Aur chupke chupke dono surakshit bache huwe gundo ko pakadne ke liye aage badhne lagi.
Tabhi ek hawaldar ne galti kar di aur bahar nikal kar tezi se chhupne ke liye bhaga, tab tak Ek gunde ne Us par goli chala di. Gunde ki goli hawaldar ki band ko chukar nikal gayi. Hawaldar chheekh marker wahi gir pada.
Isase pahle ki gunda wapas piller ke pichhe chhipta Sarita ne nishana laga diya gunde par, Sarita ke gun se lagatar do goli nikli. Ek goli uski hatheli par lagi aur doosri goli Uske pair par lagi. Wo chillate huwe wahi jammen par dharasayi ho gaya.
Ye dekhkar bache huwe ek gunde ki hatal kharab ho gayi aur usne apni gun khambe ke pichhe se bahar phenk di aur Chillate huwe bola.
Gunda- Mujhe goli mat marna. Main samarpan kar raha hoon.
Ye bolkar gunda pillar ke pichhe se bahar aa gaya. Ye dekhkar Sarita ne sabhi ko gun down karne ka ishara kiya aur bahar khade hawaldaro ko bulakar ghayal gundo ko gadi mein dalkar ilaz ke liye le jane ke liye aur Jisne samarpan kar diya use hathkadi lagakar jeep main baithane ke liya kaha. Uske baad Sarita ne Mohit se kaha.
Sarita- Mohit ji. Aur policewalo ko bulakar Yaha ke sare saman ko jabt kar lo aur Is godam ko sheej kar do.
Mohit-Ji madam. Main abhi aur police team ko bulata hoon.
Sarita- Sath mein SSP Sir ko bhi inform kar dijiye ki Drugs ka Consignment pakda gaya hai.
Mohit- Ji madam. Main inform kar deta hoon.
Sarita ke nidesh par Mohit ne Aur police force mangane ke liye PS phone kiya aur Phir SSP Sir ko phone karke Is Mission ke bare mein jankari di.
SSP Sir Thoda garam ho gaye. Kyonki Ye Mission bina permission ke anjam diya gaya tha, kyonki mohit ne unhe yahi bataya. Sarita ke nidesh ke baad hawaldar aur constable milkar ghaylo ko waha se le jane lage.
Ab godam mein Ek ghayal gunde ko chhodkar aur koi nahi tha. Mohit, Sarita, Vikas aur Kaushal Aapas mein kuchh baat karne lage. Tabhi Wo gunda jo hockey Stick se police wale par hamla karne ki firak mein tha.
Wo muaka pakar bhagne ki koshish karne laga. Tabhi Sarita ki nigah Us par padi. To usne turant apni gun nikal li aur usase kaha.
Sarita- Ruk jao nahi to goli mar doongi.
Sarita ke kahne ke baad bhi Wo Nahi ruka aur bhag kar Piller ke pichhe chhip gaya. Sarita ne phir se us Gunde se kaha.
Sarita- Maine kaha. Ruk jao nahi to goli maar dungi. Chalo chupchap bahar aao.
Sarita ke kahne dobara kahne ke baad Kuchh der to koi halchal nahi hui, Lekin Kuchh der baad wo gunda bahar aane ke bajay Jidhar se Raghu bhaga tha Udhar bhagne laga,
Sarita ne uske pair mein jo goli mari thi wo bas use ghayal karne ke liye mari thi, isliye goli uske pair mein touch kar ke nikal gayi thi, Use takleef to ho rahi thi, lekin is samay use apni takleef se jyada apne apko police ki pakad se bachana tha,
isliye Sarita ke kahne ke baad bhi jab wo bhagne laga tab Sarita ne us par goli chala di. Goli Sidha uski Pith par jakar lagi. Aur ek aawaz Sarita ko sunkai padi.
Gunda- Ohhhhhh mummmyyyyy.
Ye aawaz Sarita ke dimag mein gunj gayi, Kyonki ye aawaz use kuchh jani pahchani lagi. Sarita turant daud kar uske paas gayi to dekha ki wo gunda Munh ke bal gira huwa karah raha tha.
Mohit ne use pakad kar siddha kiya to Sarita ne uske chhehre ko dhyan se dekha. Us gunde ke chehre par badi badi dadhi aur muchhe thi. uske baal bhi chhoti karne layyak bade bade the. Sarita ki najar jab chehre se upar hokar uski aankho par padi to Use wo aankhe jani pahchani lagi.
Sarita pahchan-ne ki koshish karne lagi, lekin use kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye gunda use jana pahchana kyon lag raha hai.
Pata nahi Sarita ke dimag mein kya aaya. Usne mohit ko us gunde ke pant aur shirt ke jeb ki talashi lene ke liye kaha. Mohit ne jab uske jeb ki talashi li to use uski jeb se ek perce mila. Mohit ne wo perce Sarita ko de diya.
Sarita ne Jab Wo perce kholkar dekha to usme kuchh paise aur ek kagaj modkar rakha huwa dikha. Kagaj ke upar panni chadhayi gayi thi. Utsukta wash Sarita ne us kagaj ko nikala aur use khokkar dekhne lagi. Jaise hi Sarita ki najar Us kagaj par padi. Sarita chauk gayi.
Sarita kabhi us kagaj ko dekhti to kabhi niche pade gunde ko dekhti. Sarita ne turant niche baithkar us gunde se kaha.
Sarita- Ye kagaj tumhe kaha se mila.
Gunda, jiski halat kharab ho chuki thi. wo khoon se lathpath ho chuka tha. Usne ladkhadati aawaz mein kaha.
Gunda- Kahii se bhi mila ho. tumhe isase kya matlab. Wo kagaj mujhe do.
Sarita- pahle main jo pooch rahi hoon wo batao. Ye kagaj tumhe kaha se mila aur isme jo tasvir bani hai wo kiski hai.
Gunda- Tumhein usase koi lena dena nahin hona chahie .Nahi Nahi main nahi bataunga tumhe.
Sarita- Main aakhiri baar pooch rahi hoon. Ki ye kajaj tumhe kaha se mila aur isme jo tasveer hai wo kiski hai. Agar tumne nahi bataya to main ye kajag Abhi jala doongi.
Dard aur khoon bahne ke karan uski halat bahut kharab ho gayi thi. Uski jubaan ladkhadane lagi thi aur aankhein jhapakate lagi thi. Sarita ki baat sunkar usne ladkhadati juban mein kaha.
Gunda- Nahi.. Na..hi aisa mat karna.. Yahi tas..weer to mere jeene ka sahara hai. Aisa julam mat karna tum mere upar. Itna to mujhe sam...ajh me aa raha hai ki tum ab tak ye samajh chuki ho ki main kaun ho sa..kta hoon. Tumme too mujhhe pa..Pahchaan.. li..Liyaa hogaa... na.. bahna...
Itna kahte kahte wo gunda behosh ho gaya. Itna sunte hi Sarita ke hatho se wo kagaj chhootkar jameen par gir pada. Uska poora jism kanpne laga Aur uske Munh se ek jordaar cheekh nikal gayi..
Sarita- Bhaiyaaaaaa.......
Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Sarita aur Nishchal ke bich jo jhagda huwa tha abhi uske karan dono ka khana nahi ho paya tha, khane ko bich mein hi dono ke bich tu tu main main shuru ho gayi thi. Nishchal ke jane ke baad Sarita kuchh der wahi baithi rahi,
Jab uska gussa shant huwa to Usne realise kiya ki Usne Kuchh jyada hi over react kar diya hai. Isi karan Nishchal ne khana nahi khaya hai to usne Kitchen mein jakar dono ka khana garam kiya aur use lekar Nishchal ke kamre mein chali gayi.
Uhar Nishchal apne bister par baitha abhi jo kuchh bhi huwa tha use soch soch kar pareshan ho raha tha. Wo khud ko iska jimmedar man raha tha. Agar wo apna gussa control karta to shayad abhi Sarita se jhagda nahi hota.
apni galti ka ehsas hote hi wo Sarita se mafi mangne ke bare mein sochne laga. Yahi sochkar wo Niche jane ke liye utha tabhi uske darwaze par khatkhatahat hui. Usne jakar darwaza khola to Sarita do plate khana liye bahar khadi thi. Nishchal Samne se hat gaya.
Sarita andar aa gayi aur table par khana rakh diya. Nischal bhi akar apne bister par baith gaya. Sarita bhi waha rakhi kursi par baith gayi. dono ke bich khamoshi chhayi rahi. Thodi der khamosh rahne ke baad Nishchal ne kaha.
Nishchal- I Am Sorry. Maine us samay kuchh jyada hi react kar diya tha. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena.
Sarita- Its okk. Shayad mujhe bhi aapke matter mein nahi bolna chahiye the, lekin di ki baat thi isliye mujhse raha nahi gaya. I am Sorry. Ab khana kha lijiye nahi to fir thanda ho jayega. Main dobara nahi garam karne wali khana.
Nishchal ke chehre par muskan aa gayi ye sunkar. Usne chupchap bina kuchh bole khane ki plate utha li aur khane laga. Sarita ne bhi uske sath wahi baithkar khana khaya. Khana kha lene ke baad Nishchal ne Aabhar bhari najro se Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.
Nishchal- Thanks.
Sarita- You Wellcome.
Itna kahkar Sarita ne jhuthe plate uthaye aur Nishchal ke kamre se bahar nikal gayi. rasoighar mein juthe plate rakhne ke baad Sarita apne kamre mein chali gayi. Thodi der baad use neend aa gayi.
Subah uthkar wo Nashta banakar PS chali gayi aur apne cabin mein kaam karne lagi. Thodi der baad Janhavi Bhagti hui uske paas aayi.
Janhavi- Madam ek bahut hi khas information aayi hai mukhbir se.
Sarita- Kya bataya usne.
Janhavi- Madam, Aaj Raat mein Drugs ki bahut badi smuggling hone wali hai aisa Mukhbir ne bataya. Sath mein ye bhi bataya ki Ye sab Bachha Singh ke chhote bhaai Raghu ki nigrani mein ho raha hai.
Sarita- Kyaa. Aur kuchh bataya usne.
Janhavi- Haan madam, ...........Is jagah par Drugs rakha hai jo abhi kuchh hi der mein trucks mein load kiya jayega. Fir Wahi se raat mein Use Is Districs se bahar bhej diya jayega.
Sarita- ye to bahut badi khabar hai. Main aisa hone nahi doongi. Kaun kaun hai PS mein abhi.
Janahvi- Mohit Sir, Kaushal aur Vikas Sir hain abhi. Jawed Sir DSP Sir ke sath kisi kaam se bahar gaye huwe hain. Unko aane mein do-tin ghanta lagenge. Amit do din ki leave par hai.
Sarita- Sabko bulao abhi mera paas.
Janhavi- Lekin Madam aap karne kya wali hain. Kahi aap khud jane ka to nahi soch rahi hain.
Sarita- Haan main khud jaungi aur us Raghu ko pakad kar Salakhon ke pichhe dalungi.
Janhavi- Nahi madam. DSP Sir ka Sakht Nidesh hai ki Aap ko bina unki permission ke field par na jane diya jaye. Agar aapko jana hai to ek baar aap DSP Sir se baat kar lijiye. Nahi to wo naraz ho jayenge.
Sarita- Mujhe Field par jane ke liye Unki Permission ki jaroorat nahi hai. Ye area meri nigrani mein hai to Yaha par jo bhi hoga aur mujhe jo bhi karna hai apne area mein uske liye mujhe kisi ke permission ki jaroorat nahi hai.
Janhavi- Lekin Madam, Nishchal Sir ne mana kiya hai.
Sarita- Tumhari boos main hoon ya Nishchal Sir.
Janhavi- aap maidam.
Sarita- To jao aur Un tino ko bulakr lao. Main bhi dekhti hoon ki ye Drugs mere area se bahar jata kaise hain. Ek baat aur. Is bare mein tum Sir ko kuchh nahi bataogi. Samjhi.
Janhavi- Ji madam.
Itna kahkar Janhavi cabin se bahar chali gayi. Kuchh hi der mein Mohit, Vikas aur Kaushal Sarita ke samne the. Sarita ne unhe kya karna hai kaise karna hai Sab kuchh Samjha diya. Jise Sun-ne ke baad Mohit ne kaha.
Mohit- Ye sab to thik hai madam, lekin abhi aapki halat aisi nahi hai ki aap Itne bade mission par nikale. Meri maniye to ek Baar Sir se baat kar lijiye. Unhone Aapko Field kaam ke liye mana kiya hai.
Sarita- kya hai ye sab. Ye mera PS hai ya aapke Sir ka. Manti hoon ki main unke Undar mein kaam karti hoon, lekin ye PS Mere Undar mein hai. Aur mujhe kya karna hai iske liye Unki permission ki jaroorat nahi hai mujhe.
Main ye bhi janti hoon ki agar meri halat thik bhi hoti tab bhi mujhe Sir kabhi parmission nahi dete is kaam ke liye. To Is samay main aap sab ki boss hoon. Main jo kahungi wahi karna hoga aap logo ko.
Kaushal- Thik hai Madam. Us Drugs Smuglling ko rokna hi hai na to ham sab milkar Use rok lenge, Par aap mat chaliye sath mein Nahi to Sir ham logo se bahut naraz ho jayenge.
Sarita- Main to jaungi. Agar tum logo ko mere sath nahi chalna hai to chupchap PS mein baith jao aur apne Sir ki chamchagiri karo. Tum logo ko Kuchh kahna hi bekar hain. Main ja rahi hoon.
Itna kahkar Sarita bahar jane lagi. Use dekhkar Mohit. Vikas aur Kaushal bhi bahar aa gaye aur Sarita se kaha.
Vikas- Thik hai madam. Ham bhi aapke sath chal rahe hain.
Sarita ne kuchh hawaldar ko apne sath mein liya aur Mukhbir ki batai hui jagah par chal pade. Mohit phone to nahi kar sakta tha Nishchal ko Sairta ke samne to usne PS se nikalte samay Nishchal ko massage kar diya.
Kuchh hi der mein Sarita, Mohit, Vikas Kaushal aur 6 Hawaldar aur 2 constable Mukhbir ki batayi hui jagah par pahuch gaye. Unhne gadi kuchh door par roki aur paidal hi Us Godam ki taraf chal pade jis godam mein Drugs Truck mein load hona tha.
Sabhi chhupte chhupate us jagah par pahuch gaye. Bahar do aadmi khade chakkar laga rahe the. Sarita ne Mohit aur Kaushal ko ishara kiya to wo dono chupke chupke dono aadmiyon ki taraf badhne lage. Ek aadmi ke paas pahuchkar Mohit uske pichhe khada ho gaya.
Jab wo aadmi palta to mohit ko dekhkar kuchh bolne ko huwa tabhi mohit ne apne gun ki butt se uske sir par pichhe ki taraf waar kiya. Jisase wo aadmi behosh ho gaya.
Apne sathi ki halki cheekh sunkar jab Doosre aadmi ne mohit par waar karne ki koshish ki to kaushl ne furti dikhate huwe uski gardan daboch li aur ek jhatke mein uski gardan mod di. is waar se uski gardan to nahi tooti lekin bhayanak dard ke karan wo bhi behosh ho gaya.
Un Aadmiyo ko hawaldar ke hawale kar Sarita, Mohit, Vikas, Kaushal aur do hawaladar Godam ke andar ghus gaye. SAbhi log chhupte chuupate do bhago mein batkar do jagah chhup gaye aur andar ka jayja lene lage.
Godam mein do Truck khada huwa tha. Uske alava 6 Aadmi aur bhi the jo khade huwe the. Unhe ek aadmi kursi par baitha huwa kuchh nidesh de raha tha. Uski pith Sarita ki taraf thi, isliye uska chehra use dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Is bich Nishchal ne Mohit ka massage padh liya tha aur wo bahut pareshan ho gaya tha. Usne mohit ko phone lagaya, phone silant mein the, Isliye Usne phone nahi uthaya. Nishchal ne Sarita ko phone kiya to Sarita ne apna phone apni gadi mein chhod diya tha, Isliye phone nahi utha.
Dono taraf Se Phone receive na hone ke baad Nishchal ne Janhavi ko phone kiye to Janhavi ne use bataya ki Sarita ke sath kaun kaun gaya hai. To Nishchal ne Vikas aur Kaushal ko bhi phone kiya lekin kisi ne phone nahi uthaya.
JIsase nishchal ko kisi anhoni ki aashanka hui to wo Jawed ko sath lekar Jis kaam ke liye gaya tha use chhodkar wapas nikal pada, lekin Use Yaha tak aane mein bhi kam se kam 1.30 se 02.00 ghante lagne hi the.
Idhar Wo Aadmi baitha huwa apane aadmiyo ko kuchh nidesh de raha tha. Kuchh der baat karne ke baad Uske aadmi Truck load karne ki taiyari karne lage. Yahi samay uchhit jankar Sarita ne apne sathiyo ko ishara kiya action lene ke liye.
Pahla nishana khud Sarita ne lagaya. Jo sidhe Raghu ke khas aadmi (Sarita se baat karne ke baad Jis Gunde se Raghu kal baat kar raha tha saman idhar se udhar bhijwane ke liye) ke pairo mein jakar lagi.
Goli ki aawaz dunte hi Raghu Uchhalkar kursi se se khada ho gaya aur turant khambe ke pichhe chhip gaya. Goli chalne se uske aadmi bhi satark ho gaye the.
Fir dono taraf se goli bari shuru ho gayi. Raghu ne bhi kaman sambhal ki aur wo bhi Police par goli chalane laga. Tabhi usne Sarita ki ek jhalak dekh li. Wo turant khambe ke pichhe chhip gaya aur sochne laga.
Raghu- Ye yaha kya kar rahi hai. Isne to kaha tha ki ye abhi bas PS ka kaam hi karegi, field work to isne kuchh dino ko liye chhod diya hai. Lekin ye to badi sakht jaan hai.
Aswathya hone ke baavjood bhi Yaha par chali aayi. Man-na padega Raghu teri pasand ko. Bahut achhi aur bahadur ladki pasand ki hai tune apne liye. Lekin Abhi sabse bada sawal ye hai ki Isko pata kaise chala ki aaj ham yaha par Drugs ki Smuglling karne wale hain. Sala koi gaddhar hain ya Police ka koi informar hain mere kheme mein.
Sabse pahle to mujhe Sarita ki najar se apne aapko bachana hai. Nahi to main itne din se jo mehnat kar raha hoon iske kareeb jane ki wo kabhi poori nahi hogi. Mujhe kaise bhi karne yaha se nikalna hoga wo bhi bina Sarita ki najar mein aaye.
Raghu yahi sab soch raha tha, Tab tak Mohit aur Vikas aur Kaushal ne tin aur gundo ko ghayal kar diya. Sarita ne Dekha ki Ek gunda unki taraf chupke chupke badh raha hai to Sarita ne Uske pair par goli maar di. Jiske karan hath mein pakadi hui Hockey Stikk Niche gir padi. Us Gunde ke paas gun nahi thi.
Ye Sab dekhkar Raghu apne aapko Sarita ki najaro se bachane ke liye Apne munh mein kapda bandhkar Pichhe ke raste se bhagne laga. Sarita ne jab kisi ko bhagte dekha to Usne tabadtod 3 fire kar diye. Ek goli Raghu ke kandhe ko chukar nikal gayi. Jiske karan uske munh se chheekh nikal gayi, Lekin wo bhagne mein kamyab raha.
Raghu ke bhag jane ke baad Ab godam mein 4 jan bache the. Do ghayal pade huwe the aur do khambhe ke pichhe chiipe huwe the. Sarita Mohit, Vikas, Kaushal aur dono hawaldaro ko kuchh ishara kiya. Aur chupke chupke dono surakshit bache huwe gundo ko pakadne ke liye aage badhne lagi.
Tabhi ek hawaldar ne galti kar di aur bahar nikal kar tezi se chhupne ke liye bhaga, tab tak Ek gunde ne Us par goli chala di. Gunde ki goli hawaldar ki band ko chukar nikal gayi. Hawaldar chheekh marker wahi gir pada.
Isase pahle ki gunda wapas piller ke pichhe chhipta Sarita ne nishana laga diya gunde par, Sarita ke gun se lagatar do goli nikli. Ek goli uski hatheli par lagi aur doosri goli Uske pair par lagi. Wo chillate huwe wahi jammen par dharasayi ho gaya.
Ye dekhkar bache huwe ek gunde ki hatal kharab ho gayi aur usne apni gun khambe ke pichhe se bahar phenk di aur Chillate huwe bola.
Gunda- Mujhe goli mat marna. Main samarpan kar raha hoon.
Ye bolkar gunda pillar ke pichhe se bahar aa gaya. Ye dekhkar Sarita ne sabhi ko gun down karne ka ishara kiya aur bahar khade hawaldaro ko bulakar ghayal gundo ko gadi mein dalkar ilaz ke liye le jane ke liye aur Jisne samarpan kar diya use hathkadi lagakar jeep main baithane ke liya kaha. Uske baad Sarita ne Mohit se kaha.
Sarita- Mohit ji. Aur policewalo ko bulakar Yaha ke sare saman ko jabt kar lo aur Is godam ko sheej kar do.
Mohit-Ji madam. Main abhi aur police team ko bulata hoon.
Sarita- Sath mein SSP Sir ko bhi inform kar dijiye ki Drugs ka Consignment pakda gaya hai.
Mohit- Ji madam. Main inform kar deta hoon.
Sarita ke nidesh par Mohit ne Aur police force mangane ke liye PS phone kiya aur Phir SSP Sir ko phone karke Is Mission ke bare mein jankari di.
SSP Sir Thoda garam ho gaye. Kyonki Ye Mission bina permission ke anjam diya gaya tha, kyonki mohit ne unhe yahi bataya. Sarita ke nidesh ke baad hawaldar aur constable milkar ghaylo ko waha se le jane lage.
Ab godam mein Ek ghayal gunde ko chhodkar aur koi nahi tha. Mohit, Sarita, Vikas aur Kaushal Aapas mein kuchh baat karne lage. Tabhi Wo gunda jo hockey Stick se police wale par hamla karne ki firak mein tha.
Wo muaka pakar bhagne ki koshish karne laga. Tabhi Sarita ki nigah Us par padi. To usne turant apni gun nikal li aur usase kaha.
Sarita- Ruk jao nahi to goli mar doongi.
Sarita ke kahne ke baad bhi Wo Nahi ruka aur bhag kar Piller ke pichhe chhip gaya. Sarita ne phir se us Gunde se kaha.
Sarita- Maine kaha. Ruk jao nahi to goli maar dungi. Chalo chupchap bahar aao.
Sarita ke kahne dobara kahne ke baad Kuchh der to koi halchal nahi hui, Lekin Kuchh der baad wo gunda bahar aane ke bajay Jidhar se Raghu bhaga tha Udhar bhagne laga,
Sarita ne uske pair mein jo goli mari thi wo bas use ghayal karne ke liye mari thi, isliye goli uske pair mein touch kar ke nikal gayi thi, Use takleef to ho rahi thi, lekin is samay use apni takleef se jyada apne apko police ki pakad se bachana tha,
isliye Sarita ke kahne ke baad bhi jab wo bhagne laga tab Sarita ne us par goli chala di. Goli Sidha uski Pith par jakar lagi. Aur ek aawaz Sarita ko sunkai padi.
Gunda- Ohhhhhh mummmyyyyy.
Ye aawaz Sarita ke dimag mein gunj gayi, Kyonki ye aawaz use kuchh jani pahchani lagi. Sarita turant daud kar uske paas gayi to dekha ki wo gunda Munh ke bal gira huwa karah raha tha.
Mohit ne use pakad kar siddha kiya to Sarita ne uske chhehre ko dhyan se dekha. Us gunde ke chehre par badi badi dadhi aur muchhe thi. uske baal bhi chhoti karne layyak bade bade the. Sarita ki najar jab chehre se upar hokar uski aankho par padi to Use wo aankhe jani pahchani lagi.
Sarita pahchan-ne ki koshish karne lagi, lekin use kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye gunda use jana pahchana kyon lag raha hai.
Pata nahi Sarita ke dimag mein kya aaya. Usne mohit ko us gunde ke pant aur shirt ke jeb ki talashi lene ke liye kaha. Mohit ne jab uske jeb ki talashi li to use uski jeb se ek perce mila. Mohit ne wo perce Sarita ko de diya.
Sarita ne Jab Wo perce kholkar dekha to usme kuchh paise aur ek kagaj modkar rakha huwa dikha. Kagaj ke upar panni chadhayi gayi thi. Utsukta wash Sarita ne us kagaj ko nikala aur use khokkar dekhne lagi. Jaise hi Sarita ki najar Us kagaj par padi. Sarita chauk gayi.
Sarita kabhi us kagaj ko dekhti to kabhi niche pade gunde ko dekhti. Sarita ne turant niche baithkar us gunde se kaha.
Sarita- Ye kagaj tumhe kaha se mila.
Gunda, jiski halat kharab ho chuki thi. wo khoon se lathpath ho chuka tha. Usne ladkhadati aawaz mein kaha.
Gunda- Kahii se bhi mila ho. tumhe isase kya matlab. Wo kagaj mujhe do.
Sarita- pahle main jo pooch rahi hoon wo batao. Ye kagaj tumhe kaha se mila aur isme jo tasvir bani hai wo kiski hai.
Gunda- Tumhein usase koi lena dena nahin hona chahie .Nahi Nahi main nahi bataunga tumhe.
Sarita- Main aakhiri baar pooch rahi hoon. Ki ye kajaj tumhe kaha se mila aur isme jo tasveer hai wo kiski hai. Agar tumne nahi bataya to main ye kajag Abhi jala doongi.
Dard aur khoon bahne ke karan uski halat bahut kharab ho gayi thi. Uski jubaan ladkhadane lagi thi aur aankhein jhapakate lagi thi. Sarita ki baat sunkar usne ladkhadati juban mein kaha.
Gunda- Nahi.. Na..hi aisa mat karna.. Yahi tas..weer to mere jeene ka sahara hai. Aisa julam mat karna tum mere upar. Itna to mujhe sam...ajh me aa raha hai ki tum ab tak ye samajh chuki ho ki main kaun ho sa..kta hoon. Tumme too mujhhe pa..Pahchaan.. li..Liyaa hogaa... na.. bahna...
Itna kahte kahte wo gunda behosh ho gaya. Itna sunte hi Sarita ke hatho se wo kagaj chhootkar jameen par gir pada. Uska poora jism kanpne laga Aur uske Munh se ek jordaar cheekh nikal gayi..
Sarita- Bhaiyaaaaaa.......
Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
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1) sabhi jaante hai ki baat baat pe atirikt Gussa ho jana ya had se zyada gussa ho jana kiske liye bhi thik na hai.. naa khud ke liye aur naa saamne ke liye.. . dono update mein jo ghatanakram hua hai us puri gatanakram mein galti sirf aur sirf nischal ki thi..... lekin gusse ki aag wo ye nahi dekh pa raha tha ki galti uski hi hai.. Na ki saamne khadi uski didi ya sarita ki ...har baar ki tarah gusse ne ushe andha bana diya tha
2) kisi par bhi hak jatana, adhikaar jamana jaise nischal ki aadat si ho gayi hai.... mana ki savita uski didi hai, lekin iska matlab ye to nahi hua ki savita ki personal life mein hastkshep kare wo... Savita ko apni marji ke mutabik jeene ki puri aazadi hai aur sahi galat ki parakh bhi hai...to nischal koun hota hai uski jindagi apne mutabik chalane wala? in fact main kayi update se ye baat notice karti aa rahi hun ki wo to ab Sarita pe adhikar jatane laga hai,uski jindgi mein bhi hastkshep karne laga hai... aakhir lagta kya hai wo Sarita ka... senior officer hoga station mein.. lekin nischal jis tarah se Sarita ki personal life pe adhikaar jata raha hai ye sarasar galat hai...
3) khud ki mann marji khud pe chalani chaahiye, dusro pe chalane gaye to naa khud khus rahoge aur naa hi saamne wala.... abhi haalhi ke gatanao se to yahi lage ki nischal ke liye jaise Sarita koi khilona ho, jishe jab chaahe khela, jab chaahe fek diya... abhi haalhi ke kuch update mein hi gaur kare to kayi udhaaharan mil jaayenge... for example.. kisiko ghar se nikal jaane ko kehke phir jor jabardasti ushe rokna, jaise nischal kar raha tha Sarita ke sath... ye to saamne wale par mann marji chalana aur jabardasti karna hua na
4) nischal ko koi manners nahi ki kaise ek ladki ke sath pesh aaya jaaye... are jo insaan apni khudi didi ke sath aisa bura vyavahaar kare, Sarita bhala kya ummeed rakh sakti hai usse...
Kya isliye nischal ne apne ghar rukne ko majboor kiya Sarita ko taaki raat ke 12 baje jor jabardasti Sarita ke kamre mein ghus sake.... Kya isliye apne ghar mein rukne majboor kiya Sarita ko taaki baat baat pe uski insult kar sake, baat baat par ye jata sake Sarita nischal ke ghar pe thahri hai.. Baat baat par Sarita ko dhakka deke chhot pahuncha sake ....
5 ) nischal ke mann mein paap hai.... bina ijajat ke ek ladki ka hath pakadna, without any reason akele mein baar baar usko apne baho mein bhar lena, uske hothon ke karib apne hothon ko le jaana , ye sabhi baate nischal ke paapi mann aur soch vichaar ki aurr hi indicate kare.. Actually nischal ke maa baap ne ushe sanskaar diye hi nahi, naa hi ye sikhaya ki maryaada mein rehna kise kehte hai...
for example ek ladki matlab Sarita kapde badal rahi thi.. room chaahe kisika bhi ho, nischal agar achhe soch vichaar wala ladka hota to tabhi ke tabhi sorry bolke nikal jaata room se, lekin usne us room Sarita thodi nangi pith ko dekh ke jo lobhi soch apne maan laye aur uske baad jo jo kiya Sarita ke saath... isse saaf pata chale ki nischal ke mann mein paap hai...
Akhir mein in sabhi muddo pe gaur karu to as a reader, meri nazar mein is kahani mein ye jo nischal naam ka kirdaar hai .. wo kisi bhi angle se is kahani ka nayak banne ki yogya nahi... Naa hi uski soch ek romantic story ke nayak jaisi hai..haan ek ordinary side character ban sakta hai lekin hero to katayi nahi..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
1) sabhi jaante hai ki baat baat pe atirikt Gussa ho jana ya had se zyada gussa ho jana kiske liye bhi thik na hai.. naa khud ke liye aur naa saamne ke liye.. . dono update mein jo ghatanakram hua hai us puri gatanakram mein galti sirf aur sirf nischal ki thi..... lekin gusse ki aag wo ye nahi dekh pa raha tha ki galti uski hi hai.. Na ki saamne khadi uski didi ya sarita ki ...har baar ki tarah gusse ne ushe andha bana diya tha
2) kisi par bhi hak jatana, adhikaar jamana jaise nischal ki aadat si ho gayi hai.... mana ki savita uski didi hai, lekin iska matlab ye to nahi hua ki savita ki personal life mein hastkshep kare wo... Savita ko apni marji ke mutabik jeene ki puri aazadi hai aur sahi galat ki parakh bhi hai...to nischal koun hota hai uski jindagi apne mutabik chalane wala? in fact main kayi update se ye baat notice karti aa rahi hun ki wo to ab Sarita pe adhikar jatane laga hai,uski jindgi mein bhi hastkshep karne laga hai... aakhir lagta kya hai wo Sarita ka... senior officer hoga station mein.. lekin nischal jis tarah se Sarita ki personal life pe adhikaar jata raha hai ye sarasar galat hai...
3) khud ki mann marji khud pe chalani chaahiye, dusro pe chalane gaye to naa khud khus rahoge aur naa hi saamne wala.... abhi haalhi ke gatanao se to yahi lage ki nischal ke liye jaise Sarita koi khilona ho, jishe jab chaahe khela, jab chaahe fek diya... abhi haalhi ke kuch update mein hi gaur kare to kayi udhaaharan mil jaayenge... for example.. kisiko ghar se nikal jaane ko kehke phir jor jabardasti ushe rokna, jaise nischal kar raha tha Sarita ke sath... ye to saamne wale par mann marji chalana aur jabardasti karna hua na
4) nischal ko koi manners nahi ki kaise ek ladki ke sath pesh aaya jaaye... are jo insaan apni khudi didi ke sath aisa bura vyavahaar kare, Sarita bhala kya ummeed rakh sakti hai usse...
Kya isliye nischal ne apne ghar rukne ko majboor kiya Sarita ko taaki raat ke 12 baje jor jabardasti Sarita ke kamre mein ghus sake.... Kya isliye apne ghar mein rukne majboor kiya Sarita ko taaki baat baat pe uski insult kar sake, baat baat par ye jata sake Sarita nischal ke ghar pe thahri hai.. Baat baat par Sarita ko dhakka deke chhot pahuncha sake ....
5 ) nischal ke mann mein paap hai.... bina ijajat ke ek ladki ka hath pakadna, without any reason akele mein baar baar usko apne baho mein bhar lena, uske hothon ke karib apne hothon ko le jaana , ye sabhi baate nischal ke paapi mann aur soch vichaar ki aurr hi indicate kare.. Actually nischal ke maa baap ne ushe sanskaar diye hi nahi, naa hi ye sikhaya ki maryaada mein rehna kise kehte hai...
for example ek ladki matlab Sarita kapde badal rahi thi.. room chaahe kisika bhi ho, nischal agar achhe soch vichaar wala ladka hota to tabhi ke tabhi sorry bolke nikal jaata room se, lekin usne us room Sarita thodi nangi pith ko dekh ke jo lobhi soch apne maan laye aur uske baad jo jo kiya Sarita ke saath... isse saaf pata chale ki nischal ke mann mein paap hai...
Akhir mein in sabhi muddo pe gaur karu to as a reader, meri nazar mein is kahani mein ye jo nischal naam ka kirdaar hai .. wo kisi bhi angle se is kahani ka nayak banne ki yogya nahi... Naa hi uski soch ek romantic story ke nayak jaisi hai..haan ek ordinary side character ban sakta hai lekin hero to katayi nahi..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
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Waise Mahi Maurya ji I'm really sorry par ek sach ye bhi hai ki update 43 aur 44 padhne baad ek baat bhali bhaanti samajh chuki hun ki is kahani mein ye jo kirdaar hai nischal... Isne mujhe disappointed kiya hai, ...ye kirdaar to mera all time favourite story character nischal to ho hi nahi sakta..
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Suraksha ka bahana banake ek ladki ko apne ghar rakhkar, akele mein chance milne par us ladki ke sath jor jabardasti aise besharmi se vaahiyaad aur sharamnaak harkatein karna ,,, adult story ki buu aaye ab to...
Mahi ji aap khud gaur kariye....
For example Jaise mahendra first level pe jyoti ko seduce karne ki koshish karta tha... Bas yaha us level tak baat abhi pahunchi nahi hai... baaki tarika to wohi hai
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nischal aur raghu ki soch mein fark kitna hai, un dono ki mann ki baatein padh ke hi samajh sakte hai us fark ko hum readers
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Lekin wo kirdaar bhool kyun jata baar baar ki uske khudke behavior kaisa hai.... Ek ladki pe hath uthana , dhakka maar dena, Sarita ko akeli dekh baar baar jabarjasti ushe apne baho bhar lena .... seduce karne ki koshish karna..
Phir agle pal maafi maangne ki koshish karna... aise girgit jaisi behavior hai nischal ki.. aise behavior wale logo pe katayi viswas nahi karna chahiye...
Natiza to yahi nikle ki nischal hero hoke heroine pe hath uthata hai, bina ijajat ke uske sath jor jabardasti karta hai...
Wohi raghu villain hoke bhi apne pyar ko respect dena jaanta hai...
Khair...Suraksha dene ke naam par Sarita ko apne ghar le jaake uske sath sharmnaak harkatein karna, ye to nayak wale vichaar to hargiz bhi nahi hai...
isse to achha raghu hi hai, kam se kam Sarita ki jaisi bhi marzi hai, jo bhi soch hai ,usko respect de raha hai...
Khair... I think Sarita ko saari baatein saaf saaf bata deni chahiye savita ko ki uska bhai kaise Sarita sath gandi harkatein karta hai..
Well let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
nischal aur raghu ki soch mein fark kitna hai, un dono ki mann ki baatein padh ke hi samajh sakte hai us fark ko hum readers
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Ek taraf jaha ye kirdaar jo kahani ka hero banne ki koshish kar raha hai.. uske mutabik Sarita behavior ko leke shaq kar raha hai...
Lekin wo kirdaar bhool kyun jata baar baar ki uske khudke behavior kaisa hai.... Ek ladki pe hath uthana , dhakka maar dena, Sarita ko akeli dekh baar baar jabarjasti ushe apne baho bhar lena .... seduce karne ki koshish karna..
Phir agle pal maafi maangne ki koshish karna... aise girgit jaisi behavior hai nischal ki.. aise behavior wale logo pe katayi viswas nahi karna chahiye...
Dusri taraf ye kirdaar raghu... khalnaayak hai is kahani ka lekin pyar ka mol kya hota hai, sachhi mohabbat kise kehte hai , apne pyar ko respect dena , ye sabhi baatein bhali bhaanti jaanta hai... Even ye banda apne pyar ki suraksha ko leke bhi kitna fikarmand hai wo ....
Natiza to yahi nikle ki nischal hero hoke heroine pe hath uthata hai, bina ijajat ke uske sath jor jabardasti karta hai...
Wohi raghu villain hoke bhi apne pyar ko respect dena jaanta hai...
Khair...Suraksha dene ke naam par Sarita ko apne ghar le jaake uske sath sharmnaak harkatein karna, ye to nayak wale vichaar to hargiz bhi nahi hai...
isse to achha raghu hi hai, kam se kam Sarita ki jaisi bhi marzi hai, jo bhi soch hai ,usko respect de raha hai...
Khair... I think Sarita ko saari baatein saaf saaf bata deni chahiye savita ko ki uska bhai kaise Sarita sath gandi harkatein karta hai..
Well let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
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ऐसा नहीं है कि था का मतलब स्वर्गवासी ही होता है। अगर बात बहुत पुरानी हो जाती है। और अगर कोई चीज़ खो जाती है तो लोग यही कहते हैं कि मेरे पास भी ये चीज़ थी जो अब खो गई है।।Dekho, dekho, dekho ab to yakin hua na ju ko mahi ji... ye abhishek ke gharwaale kitne kamine hai...
budhau ki baatein to suno.... tha, thi kehke khud ke bete ko hi upar pahuncha diya.
Ye kaisa baap hai jo " Tha" Kehke jite jee khud ke bete ko swargvasi bana diya
Naam aanand aur kaam sabko dukhi karne wala
आप तो बाल की खाल निकाल देती हैं मोहतरमा।
बात की गहराई को समझने की कोशिश कीजिए।।
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प्यार है तभी तो कहानी है।
kyunki Sarita aur setan ki jodi superhit hai 
देखिएगा जब दोनों मिलेंगे तब खुद ही पता चल जाएगा।
बाकी सभी की जोड़ियां तो ऊपर वाले ने बना दी हैं।
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धन्यवाद आपका नैना जी।।Update 36
Ek baat to main bhali bhaanti samajh chuki hun ki ye aanand, rani, Sarita aur manisha ye chaaro bas duniya ko dikhane ke liye ye baatein jataate rehte ki dekho hum chaaro kitne dukhi hai abhishek ke ghar chhod ke chale jaane se... jabki asal baat ye hai in chaaro ne milke us bichare ko ghar se nikal diya... dusri baat pal bhar mein dekho to kaise khushiyaan mana rahe hai ye chaaro birthday party mein
aur aaj shaam ko nischal ke ghar mein jo nautanki chal rahi thi us hisaap se ye baat to pakki hai ki jald hi Nischal-sarita ke bich aur manisha-raghav ke bich kuch hi ku dekhne ko milenge,, wo bhi ultra pro max level pe
in logo ka moto bhi same hi hai na...
are wohi hathi ke khane ke daat alag aur dikhane ke alag
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
अब क्या कहें।
आप क्या चाहती हैं कि सारी उम्र मातम मनाएं।
कितना मातम तो मना चुके हैं सब। अब थोड़ी खुशियों के पल भी आये हैं तो आप चाहती है नहीं कि ये सब खुश रहें।
आपको कुची कूची का बड़ा शौक है ऐसा लगता है। लेकिन यहां पर कुछ भी नहीं मिलेगा देखने को।
साथ बने रहिए।।
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अब ये तो आप निर्णय लेंगीं।Aisa kyapar sarita
aur savita
वैसे भी आप शुध्द प्रेम कहानी में भी इरोटिका ढूंढने का हुनर रखती हैं।
