Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Complete)

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Hafte bhar baad Nishchal Apne mummy papa, Savita aur Raghav ke sath Sarita ke yaha pahucha. Jalpan ke baad Savita Sarita ke paas chali gayi. Naina ji aur Mahendra ji ne Nishchal ke Rishte ki baat ki aur Nishchal ke liye Sarita ka hath manga to Raani ji aur Aanand ji ek doosre ko dekhne lage. Paas mein baithi Manisha ne kaha.


Manisha- Mummy papa. Aap chaukiye mat. Aap ko yaad hain Mummy. Jab aap di ko job chhodne ke liye kah rahi thi to maine kaha tha ki ek ladka hai jo di ko bahut pyaar karta hai. Wo Boss hi hain. aur didiya ki taraf se bhi haan hai.


Manisha ki baat sunkar Raani ji waha se uthkar jane lagi to usne kaha.


Manisha- Ab aap kahan ja rahi hain.

Raani ji- (muskurate huwe) tum buddhu ho kya. Meri beti ka Rishta tay hua hai to kya aise hi sukhe muh sab baithe rahenge. Main mithayi lene ja rahi hoon. Ab to ham dono ki dosti rishtedari mein jo badal gayi hai.


Raani ji jakar Mithayi lekar aayi. Sab ne ek doosre ka munh mitha karwaya. Thodi der mein Savita bhi bahar aa gayi. Manisha Sarita ko ye khushkhabri sunane ke liye daud padi. Manisha Nishchal ko bhi jabran apne sath mein le gayi. Savita ne Sarita se yaha aane ka karan nahi bataya tha. Sarita kamre mein idhar udhar chakkar kaat rahi thi.


Tabhi Manisha ne darwaza khola. Sarita ne jab darwaze ki taraf dekha to wo chauk gayi, kyonki samne nishchal khada tha Manisha ke sath. Sarita ne Manisha ko dant-te huwe kaha.


Sarita- Manisha tumhe bilkul bhi tameez nahi hai kya?? Aise inhe yahan par leti aayi ho. Sab kya soch rahe honge??

Manisha- Tumhare alawa koi kuchh nahi soch raha hai. sab bat karne mein busy hain.

Sarita- Thik hai to tum bhi yaha mere sath baitho. Mujhe akela mat chhodo.

Manisha- main yahan kabab mein haddi kyon banu?? Mujhe pata hai ki tum khali upar upar se kah rahi ho ki ruk jao. Andar andar hi mujhe gali de rahi hogi.


Manisha ki baat sunkar Sarita ne Nishchal ki taraf dekha aur kaha.


Sarita- Dekha aapne yah kitni badmash hai??

Nishchal- Are use badmash mat bolo. Usne hi to apni setting karwayi hai.


Abhi Sarita kuchh aur bolti tab tak Manisha ne Nishchal ko kamre mein thel kar darwaza band kar liya aur waha se bhag gayi.


Sarita ne daudkar darwaze ke paas jana chaha uske pahle hi nishchal ne uske hath ko pakadkar apni taraf kheech liya aur uske hontho par apni ungli rakhte huwe kaha.


Nishchal- Tumhari problem kya hai?? ham pahli baar to mil nahi rahe hain na?? fir itna kyon pareshan ho rahi ho tum??


Sarita ekdam chup hokar apni badi badi aankho se use dekhne lagi. Nishchal ne kaha.


Nishchal- Achha bolo. Ab nahi bolta main tumhe kuchh bhi.


Sarita ne dhire se kaha.


Sarita- mummy papa ke samne aise achha nahi lagta. Wo log kya soch rahe honge hamare bare mein.

Nishchal- Kuchh bhi nahi soch rahe honge wo. Hamara Rishta tay ho gaya hai. main to tumhe bas ye batane aaya hoon ki kuchh hi mahino baad main tumhe yaha se lekar jaunga.


Nishchal ki baat sunkar Sarita ke chehre par Aashcharya aur Khushi ke mile jule bhav the. Sarita ne Sharam se apni aankhe jhuka li. Nishchal abhi aur bhi kuchh kahna chahta tha, lekin tabhi Manisha ne darwaza knowk karte huwe kaha.


Manisha- Bas kariye ab. Milne ka samay samapt hota hai ab.


Manisha ki aawaz sukar dono ek doosre se door ho gaye. Nishchal ne Sarita ki taraf dekhte huwe Manisha se kaha.


Nishchal- Chhote miya tum na bahut kharab ho. tum hamesha galat time par entry kyon marti ho??

Manisha- hmmm pata hai mujhe. Bas kuchh hi mahine ki baat hai uske baad koi bhi rokne wala nahi hoga aap dono ko. Fir jitna marji utna pyaarтАжтАж.


Manisha iske aage kuchh aur bolti ki Sarita ne use aankhe dikhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- Bas ab iske aage aur nahi.

Manisha- Thik hai. tum yahi baitho main ja rahi hoon.


Manisha ne Nishchal ka hath pakda aur use lekar jane lagi. Sarita Nishchal ko aur Nishchal Sarita ko dekhte rahe.


Nishchal waha par aakar baith gaya. Raghav aur Manisha bhi aankho hi aankho mein bate karne lage. Manisha ko samay nahi mil pa raha tha ki wo Raghav se ekant mein kuchh baat kare.


Udhar Naina ji Raani ji se baat karte huwe kaha.


Naina ji- ham log chahte hain ki Training mein jane se pahle hi dono ki shadi ho jaye.

Raani ji- Lekin itni jaldi kaise.

Naina ji- Isme jaldi kaha hain Samadhan ji. Poore 2 mahine hain aapke paas. Uske baad main aakar apni bachhi ko yaha se le jaungi.


Naina ji ki baat sunkar Raani ji ne Aanand ji ki taraf dekha to unhone sahmati mein Sir hilakar Apni Manjuri de di to Raani ji ne kaha.


Raani Ji- Ab main kya bolu. Aapki hi beti hai. aapka jab man ho tab aakar le jaiye use.

Naina ji- Achha. Ek baat aur. Bachcho ki Safalata ki Khushi mein hamne ghar mein pooja rakhi hai. hamein Achha lagega agar aap log bhi us pooja mein shamil ho.

Raani ji- Pahle to ham dono dost the to sochna nahi padta tha lekin ab beti ke sasural mein thodi hi aa jayenge.

Naina Ji- Wo Bhi to Sarita ka hi ghar hai na aur Abhi Sasural ban-ne mein 2 Mahine ka samay hai.


Naina ji ki baat sunkar sab hansne lage. Raani ji ne kaha.


Raani ji- Thik hai ham waha aayenge, lekin ham jeth ji ke yahan par rukenge.

Naina ji- Jaise aapko thik lage.


Uske baad kuchh der baithne ke baad Nishchal Sapariwar sabse vida lekar ghar wapas chala gaya. Aaj Sarita ke ghar walon ko bahut Khushi ho rahi thi ki Sarita ko uski pasand ka ladka mil gaya hai. Sath hi Is baat ki bhi Khushi thi ki Sarita itne bade ghar ki bahu banegi.


Aaise hi samay bit-ta gaya. Nishchal aur Sarita phone par baat karte the. Kabhi kabhi Savita ka bhi phone aa jata Sarita ko. Raghav aur Manisha bhi ghanto phone par lage rahte the. Isi tarah ek hafte gujar gaya.


Aaj Sab pooja mein shamil hone ke liye Kanpur pahuch gaye the. Savita aur Anant bhi Aaye huwe the. Buwa ji bhi waha par maujud thi. Sarita & Family jab waha par pahuchi to buwa ji ne khud aage badhkar unka Swagat kiya to Manisha ko bahut ashcharya huwa aur wo unhe bahut gaur se dekhne lagi.


Sarita ne pile rang ka chudidar pahna huwa tha to Manisha ne neele rang ka. Dono us shoot mein bahut pyaari lag rahi thi.


Nishchal ne gahre pile rang ka kurta aur safed paayjama pahna huwa tha to Raghav ne kreem color ka kurta paayjama pahna huwa tha. dono kurte payjame mein bahut handsome lag rahe the.
Sarita aur Manisha ne sabhi ke pair chuuwe. Manisha ne Savita se poochha.


Manisha- Aap kaisi hai didi.

Savi- Main bahut achhi hoon.

Manisha- Aap kaise hain jeeja ji. Aap to mujhe ekdam bhool hi gaye hain.

Anant- Main bhi thik hoon Sali Sahiba. Wo kya hai na Tumhari didi ke alava aur kisi ko yaad karna ka samay hi nahi milta. Din bhar inki hi sewa mein din gujar jata hai.

Manisha- Kyaa baat hai Jeeja ji. Kash mujhe bhi aisa hi pyaar karne wala pati mile.

Anant- Milega Milega. Tumhari bhi manokamna jaroor poori hogi Sali ji.

Savi- Kya aap bhi. Kyon pareshan kar rahe hain Manisha ko.

Anant- Lo ji. Maine kahan pareshan kiya ise. Dekh lo Sali ji. Aise hi meri aawaz dabayi ja rahi hai Shadi ke baad. Tum khud socho. Aise mein main kise yaad karunga. Mujhe ghar mein bhi to rahna hai.

Manisha- Achha Bas Bas ab aap dono ladne mat lag jaiyega.


Itna kahkar Manisha Raghav ke paas chali gayi aur usase baat karne lagi, Kuchh der baad Buwa ji ko koi kaam pada to Buwa ji ne bahut pyaar se Raghav ko bulaya.


Buwa ji- Raghav Beta. Jara idhar aana. Kuchh kaam hai.

Raghav- Ji buwa dadi ji. Aa raha hoon.


Manisha ne jab ye suna to Uske Aashcharya ki sima na rahi. uski aankhein badi ho gayi. Wo man hi man boli.


Manisha- Is medona ke haav-bhaav kaise badal gaye??


Samay ke sath Pooja ki vidhi bhi sampann hone lagi. Sarita aur Nishchal chori chori ek doosre ko dekh rahe the. Yahi haal Raghav ka bhi tha.


Pooja Bahut achhe se sampann ho gayi. Sab hall mein ekattha baithe huwe the ki tabhi Manisha apni jagah se khadi ho gayi aur boli.


Manisha- Mujhe aap sabhi logo se permission chahiye.

Savi- Kis baat ki tarmission??

Manisha- Mujhe kuchh kahna hai uski parmission.

Anant- Boliye boliye Sali Sahiba. Waise bhi aapko koi chuup kara de aisa kisi mein bhi sahas kaha??


Sabhi Anant ki baat sunkar hansne lage. Manisha ne Raghav se kaha.


Manisha- Raghav please yaha par aao.


Manisha ke aise bulane par Raghav ne man hi man kaha.


Raghav- Pata nahi is ladki ke dimag mein kya chal raha hai. pata nahi kya karne wali hai sabke samne ye. Hey bhagwan bacha lena mujhe.


Raghav man hi man aisa sochte huwe jakar Manisha ke samne khada ho gaya. Manisha ne ek baar sabki taraf apni najar uthakar dekha uske baad Manisha ghutne par baith gayi aur uski taraf ek gulab ka laal phool badhate huwe kaha.


Manisha- Raghav I Love You. Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon. Kya tum mujhe apni better half banaoge??


Manisha ka aisa kahna tha ki Raghav samet hall mein jitne bhi log baithe huwe the SAbhi chaunk gaye. Raani ji ne Manisha se kaha.


Raani ji- Manisha Ye kya behudgi hai. aise har samay Mazak karna achhi baat nahi hai.


Manisha- Mummy. Kya aapko lagta hai ki is samay main Mazak kar rahi hoon. Main sach bol rahi hoon. Main Raghav se bahut pyaar karti hoon.


Raani Ji- Lekin ye sab kaise. Kab Samajh mein nahi aa raha hai??

Savi- Aunty ji. Kya aapko ye achha nahi laga ki Manisha Raghav se pyaar karti hai.

Raani ji- Nahi beti aisi baat nahi hai, lekin Manisha ne kabhi bhi nahi bataya is bare mein. Shayad apni bahan ko bhi nahi bataya hai. isliye ham sab chaunk gaye iski ye baat sunkar.


Raani ji ki baat sunkar Savita apni jagah se uthi aur jakar Manisha ke paas khadi ho gayi aur boli.


Savi- Tumne kabhi kisi ko bataya kyon nahi.

Manisha- Ye mujhe batana nahi tha didi. Sabko dikhana tha.


Raghav ki halat is samay bahut kharab thi. usne to sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Manisha Aise sabke samne usase apne pyaar ka izhaar karegi. Use bahut sharam aa rahi thi aur wo sharam se gada ja raha tha. Manisha ki baat sunkar Savita ne kaha.


Savi- Tumne bahut hi achha kiya Manisha. Tumhari pasand lakho mein ek hai. bahut achhi jodi bani hai tumhari aur Raghav ki. Jo kaam tumhein karna chahiye tha wo kaam mera bhaai kar raha hai. dekho kitna sharma raha hai wo ladkiyon ki tarah.


Savita ki baat sunkar Raghav ne sabki taraf dekha to Sabhi ko apni taraf hi dekhta paya. Raghav ne apne man mein socha.


Raghav- Achha fansaya hai tumne mujhe aaj. Iska badla main apne tarike se lunga. Chhodunga nahi tumhe main.


Raghav ko kisi soch mein dooba dekhkar Manisha ne kaha.


Manisha- Boliye na Raghav ji. Kuchh to jawab dijiye.


Lekin Raghav sharma raha tha. use kuchh na bolta dekh kar Savita ne kaha.


Savi- Ladka to sharma raha hai isliye kuchh nahi bol raha hai, lekin ladke walon ki taraf se haa hai. Kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki dono bahnon ki ek hi mandap mein shadi ho jaye. Mujhe ek sath do-do bhabhiya mil jayengi.


Savita ki baat sunkar Sarita sharma gayi, lekin Manisha ne tapak se jawab diya.


Manisha- Nahi didi. Main didiya ki shadi ko khoob achhe se enjoy karna chahti hoon. Maine to ye isliye kaha hai ki didiya ka to ho gaya, ab koi mere upar bhi dhyan de.


Raani ji- (narazgi ke sath) Manisha. Tumhe bilkul bhi sharam nahi aati aisi batein karte huwe.

Savi- Aunty ji. Jisne ki sharam uske phoote karam. Aur waise bhi Manisha ne koi galat kaam to kiya nahi hai, balki himmat dikhate huwe sabke samne apne pyaar ko sweekar kiya hai.


Nishchal Sarita ke paas hi baitha tha. Usne dhire se Sarita ke kan mein kaha.


Nishchal- Kuchh sikho apni chhoti bahan se.


Nishchal ki baat sunkar Sarita ne ghoorkar Nishchal ki taraf dekha to usne apni gardan jhuka li aur muskurane laga.


Raghav waise hi khamosh khada huwa tha ki tabhi Buwa ji ne kaha.


Buwa ji- Are haan bol do Raghav bitwa. Nahi to ye ladki tumhare hi pichhe padi rahegi. Haan nahi to batao jara.

Manisha- (dhire se) Jaise aapke pichhe padi thi.

Savi- Ab to buwa dadi ji ne bhi bol diya hai Raghav. Ab to haam kar hi do.

Buwa Ji- Ab jaldi se haan kah do Warna itne din tak jo meri sewa ki hai wo sab bekar ho jayega. Haan nahi to bataao jara.


Ab Raghav ke paas koi chara nahi tha to usne bhi muskurate huwe apni mundi haan mein hila di aur bola.


Raghav- I Love you too.


Raghav ki baat sunkar Manisha bahut khush hui aur usne Khushi se Raghav ko gale laga liya. SAbhi ghar wale bahut khus huwe. Naina ji ne kaha.


Naina ji- Lo ji Ab to Raghav ne bhi apni hami de di hai. Bahut Khushi ki baat hai ye. Rukiye main sabka munh mita karti hoon.


Itna kahkar unhone ek mulajim ko mitayi lane ke liye bol diya aur Raani ji ki taraf dekhte huwe kaha.


Naina ji- Aapki dono betiyon ka ab hamare paas rahne ka samay aa raha hai Raani ji.

Raani ji- Lekin Abhi 2 sal tak main Manisha ki shadi nahi karungi. Ek sath dono betiya mere ghar se vida ho jayengi to mera aangan suna ho jayega.

Naina ji- Hmmmmm. Main samajh sakti hoon. Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.


Tab tak Mulajim mithayi lekar aa gaya. Sabhi ne ek ek piece mithayi lekar apna munh meetha kiya.



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Hafte bhar baad Nishchal Apne mummy papa, Savita aur Raghav ke sath Sarita ke yaha pahucha. Jalpan ke baad Savita Sarita ke paas chali gayi. Naina ji aur Mahendra ji ne Nishchal ke Rishte ki baat ki aur Nishchal ke liye Sarita ka hath manga to Raani ji aur Aanand ji ek doosre ko dekhne lage. Paas mein baithi Manisha ne kaha.


Manisha- Mummy papa. Aap chaukiye mat. Aap ko yaad hain Mummy. Jab aap di ko job chhodne ke liye kah rahi thi to maine kaha tha ki ek ladka hai jo di ko bahut pyaar karta hai. Wo Boss hi hain. aur didiya ki taraf se bhi haan hai.


Manisha ki baat sunkar Raani ji waha se uthkar jane lagi to usne kaha.


Manisha- Ab aap kahan ja rahi hain.

Raani ji- (muskurate huwe) tum buddhu ho kya. Meri beti ka Rishta tay hua hai to kya aise hi sukhe muh sab baithe rahenge. Main mithayi lene ja rahi hoon. Ab to ham dono ki dosti rishtedari mein jo badal gayi hai.


Raani ji jakar Mithayi lekar aayi. Sab ne ek doosre ka munh mitha karwaya. Thodi der mein Savita bhi bahar aa gayi. Manisha Sarita ko ye khushkhabri sunane ke liye daud padi. Manisha Nishchal ko bhi jabran apne sath mein le gayi. Savita ne Sarita se yaha aane ka karan nahi bataya tha. Sarita kamre mein idhar udhar chakkar kaat rahi thi.


Tabhi Manisha ne darwaza khola. Sarita ne jab darwaze ki taraf dekha to wo chauk gayi, kyonki samne nishchal khada tha Manisha ke sath. Sarita ne Manisha ko dant-te huwe kaha.


Sarita- Manisha tumhe bilkul bhi tameez nahi hai kya?? Aise inhe yahan par leti aayi ho. Sab kya soch rahe honge??

Manisha- Tumhare alawa koi kuchh nahi soch raha hai. sab bat karne mein busy hain.

Sarita- Thik hai to tum bhi yaha mere sath baitho. Mujhe akela mat chhodo.

Manisha- main yahan kabab mein haddi kyon banu?? Mujhe pata hai ki tum khali upar upar se kah rahi ho ki ruk jao. Andar andar hi mujhe gali de rahi hogi.


Manisha ki baat sunkar Sarita ne Nishchal ki taraf dekha aur kaha.


Sarita- Dekha aapne yah kitni badmash hai??

Nishchal- Are use badmash mat bolo. Usne hi to apni setting karwayi hai.


Abhi Sarita kuchh aur bolti tab tak Manisha ne Nishchal ko kamre mein thel kar darwaza band kar liya aur waha se bhag gayi.


Sarita ne daudkar darwaze ke paas jana chaha uske pahle hi nishchal ne uske hath ko pakadkar apni taraf kheech liya aur uske hontho par apni ungli rakhte huwe kaha.


Nishchal- Tumhari problem kya hai?? ham pahli baar to mil nahi rahe hain na?? fir itna kyon pareshan ho rahi ho tum??


Sarita ekdam chup hokar apni badi badi aankho se use dekhne lagi. Nishchal ne kaha.


Nishchal- Achha bolo. Ab nahi bolta main tumhe kuchh bhi.


Sarita ne dhire se kaha.


Sarita- mummy papa ke samne aise achha nahi lagta. Wo log kya soch rahe honge hamare bare mein.

Nishchal- Kuchh bhi nahi soch rahe honge wo. Hamara Rishta tay ho gaya hai. main to tumhe bas ye batane aaya hoon ki kuchh hi mahino baad main tumhe yaha se lekar jaunga.


Nishchal ki baat sunkar Sarita ke chehre par Aashcharya aur Khushi ke mile jule bhav the. Sarita ne Sharam se apni aankhe jhuka li. Nishchal abhi aur bhi kuchh kahna chahta tha, lekin tabhi Manisha ne darwaza knowk karte huwe kaha.


Manisha- Bas kariye ab. Milne ka samay samapt hota hai ab.


Manisha ki aawaz sukar dono ek doosre se door ho gaye. Nishchal ne Sarita ki taraf dekhte huwe Manisha se kaha.


Nishchal- Chhote miya tum na bahut kharab ho. tum hamesha galat time par entry kyon marti ho??

Manisha- hmmm pata hai mujhe. Bas kuchh hi mahine ki baat hai uske baad koi bhi rokne wala nahi hoga aap dono ko. Fir jitna marji utna pyaarтАжтАж.


Manisha iske aage kuchh aur bolti ki Sarita ne use aankhe dikhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- Bas ab iske aage aur nahi.

Manisha- Thik hai. tum yahi baitho main ja rahi hoon.


Manisha ne Nishchal ka hath pakda aur use lekar jane lagi. Sarita Nishchal ko aur Nishchal Sarita ko dekhte rahe.


Nishchal waha par aakar baith gaya. Raghav aur Manisha bhi aankho hi aankho mein bate karne lage. Manisha ko samay nahi mil pa raha tha ki wo Raghav se ekant mein kuchh baat kare.


Udhar Naina ji Raani ji se baat karte huwe kaha.


Naina ji- ham log chahte hain ki Training mein jane se pahle hi dono ki shadi ho jaye.

Raani ji- Lekin itni jaldi kaise.

Naina ji- Isme jaldi kaha hain Samadhan ji. Poore 2 mahine hain aapke paas. Uske baad main aakar apni bachhi ko yaha se le jaungi.


Naina ji ki baat sunkar Raani ji ne Aanand ji ki taraf dekha to unhone sahmati mein Sir hilakar Apni Manjuri de di to Raani ji ne kaha.


Raani Ji- Ab main kya bolu. Aapki hi beti hai. aapka jab man ho tab aakar le jaiye use.

Naina ji- Achha. Ek baat aur. Bachcho ki Safalata ki Khushi mein hamne ghar mein pooja rakhi hai. hamein Achha lagega agar aap log bhi us pooja mein shamil ho.

Raani ji- Pahle to ham dono dost the to sochna nahi padta tha lekin ab beti ke sasural mein thodi hi aa jayenge.

Naina Ji- Wo Bhi to Sarita ka hi ghar hai na aur Abhi Sasural ban-ne mein 2 Mahine ka samay hai.


Naina ji ki baat sunkar sab hansne lage. Raani ji ne kaha.


Raani ji- Thik hai ham waha aayenge, lekin ham jeth ji ke yahan par rukenge.

Naina ji- Jaise aapko thik lage.


Uske baad kuchh der baithne ke baad Nishchal Sapariwar sabse vida lekar ghar wapas chala gaya. Aaj Sarita ke ghar walon ko bahut Khushi ho rahi thi ki Sarita ko uski pasand ka ladka mil gaya hai. Sath hi Is baat ki bhi Khushi thi ki Sarita itne bade ghar ki bahu banegi.


Aaise hi samay bit-ta gaya. Nishchal aur Sarita phone par baat karte the. Kabhi kabhi Savita ka bhi phone aa jata Sarita ko. Raghav aur Manisha bhi ghanto phone par lage rahte the. Isi tarah ek hafte gujar gaya.


Aaj Sab pooja mein shamil hone ke liye Kanpur pahuch gaye the. Savita aur Anant bhi Aaye huwe the. Buwa ji bhi waha par maujud thi. Sarita & Family jab waha par pahuchi to buwa ji ne khud aage badhkar unka Swagat kiya to Manisha ko bahut ashcharya huwa aur wo unhe bahut gaur se dekhne lagi.


Sarita ne pile rang ka chudidar pahna huwa tha to Manisha ne neele rang ka. Dono us shoot mein bahut pyaari lag rahi thi.


Nishchal ne gahre pile rang ka kurta aur safed paayjama pahna huwa tha to Raghav ne kreem color ka kurta paayjama pahna huwa tha. dono kurte payjame mein bahut handsome lag rahe the.
Sarita aur Manisha ne sabhi ke pair chuuwe. Manisha ne Savita se poochha.


Manisha- Aap kaisi hai didi.

Savi- Main bahut achhi hoon.

Manisha- Aap kaise hain jeeja ji. Aap to mujhe ekdam bhool hi gaye hain.

Anant- Main bhi thik hoon Sali Sahiba. Wo kya hai na Tumhari didi ke alava aur kisi ko yaad karna ka samay hi nahi milta. Din bhar inki hi sewa mein din gujar jata hai.

Manisha- Kyaa baat hai Jeeja ji. Kash mujhe bhi aisa hi pyaar karne wala pati mile.

Anant- Milega Milega. Tumhari bhi manokamna jaroor poori hogi Sali ji.

Savi- Kya aap bhi. Kyon pareshan kar rahe hain Manisha ko.

Anant- Lo ji. Maine kahan pareshan kiya ise. Dekh lo Sali ji. Aise hi meri aawaz dabayi ja rahi hai Shadi ke baad. Tum khud socho. Aise mein main kise yaad karunga. Mujhe ghar mein bhi to rahna hai.

Manisha- Achha Bas Bas ab aap dono ladne mat lag jaiyega.


Itna kahkar Manisha Raghav ke paas chali gayi aur usase baat karne lagi, Kuchh der baad Buwa ji ko koi kaam pada to Buwa ji ne bahut pyaar se Raghav ko bulaya.


Buwa ji- Raghav Beta. Jara idhar aana. Kuchh kaam hai.

Raghav- Ji buwa dadi ji. Aa raha hoon.


Manisha ne jab ye suna to Uske Aashcharya ki sima na rahi. uski aankhein badi ho gayi. Wo man hi man boli.


Manisha- Is medona ke haav-bhaav kaise badal gaye??


Samay ke sath Pooja ki vidhi bhi sampann hone lagi. Sarita aur Nishchal chori chori ek doosre ko dekh rahe the. Yahi haal Raghav ka bhi tha.


Pooja Bahut achhe se sampann ho gayi. Sab hall mein ekattha baithe huwe the ki tabhi Manisha apni jagah se khadi ho gayi aur boli.


Manisha- Mujhe aap sabhi logo se permission chahiye.

Savi- Kis baat ki tarmission??

Manisha- Mujhe kuchh kahna hai uski parmission.

Anant- Boliye boliye Sali Sahiba. Waise bhi aapko koi chuup kara de aisa kisi mein bhi sahas kaha??


Sabhi Anant ki baat sunkar hansne lage. Manisha ne Raghav se kaha.


Manisha- Raghav please yaha par aao.


Manisha ke aise bulane par Raghav ne man hi man kaha.


Raghav- Pata nahi is ladki ke dimag mein kya chal raha hai. pata nahi kya karne wali hai sabke samne ye. Hey bhagwan bacha lena mujhe.


Raghav man hi man aisa sochte huwe jakar Manisha ke samne khada ho gaya. Manisha ne ek baar sabki taraf apni najar uthakar dekha uske baad Manisha ghutne par baith gayi aur uski taraf ek gulab ka laal phool badhate huwe kaha.


Manisha- Raghav I Love You. Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon. Kya tum mujhe apni better half banaoge??


Manisha ka aisa kahna tha ki Raghav samet hall mein jitne bhi log baithe huwe the SAbhi chaunk gaye. Raani ji ne Manisha se kaha.


Raani ji- Manisha Ye kya behudgi hai. aise har samay Mazak karna achhi baat nahi hai.


Manisha- Mummy. Kya aapko lagta hai ki is samay main Mazak kar rahi hoon. Main sach bol rahi hoon. Main Raghav se bahut pyaar karti hoon.


Raani Ji- Lekin ye sab kaise. Kab Samajh mein nahi aa raha hai??

Savi- Aunty ji. Kya aapko ye achha nahi laga ki Manisha Raghav se pyaar karti hai.

Raani ji- Nahi beti aisi baat nahi hai, lekin Manisha ne kabhi bhi nahi bataya is bare mein. Shayad apni bahan ko bhi nahi bataya hai. isliye ham sab chaunk gaye iski ye baat sunkar.


Raani ji ki baat sunkar Savita apni jagah se uthi aur jakar Manisha ke paas khadi ho gayi aur boli.


Savi- Tumne kabhi kisi ko bataya kyon nahi.

Manisha- Ye mujhe batana nahi tha didi. Sabko dikhana tha.


Raghav ki halat is samay bahut kharab thi. usne to sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Manisha Aise sabke samne usase apne pyaar ka izhaar karegi. Use bahut sharam aa rahi thi aur wo sharam se gada ja raha tha. Manisha ki baat sunkar Savita ne kaha.


Savi- Tumne bahut hi achha kiya Manisha. Tumhari pasand lakho mein ek hai. bahut achhi jodi bani hai tumhari aur Raghav ki. Jo kaam tumhein karna chahiye tha wo kaam mera bhaai kar raha hai. dekho kitna sharma raha hai wo ladkiyon ki tarah.


Savita ki baat sunkar Raghav ne sabki taraf dekha to Sabhi ko apni taraf hi dekhta paya. Raghav ne apne man mein socha.


Raghav- Achha fansaya hai tumne mujhe aaj. Iska badla main apne tarike se lunga. Chhodunga nahi tumhe main.


Raghav ko kisi soch mein dooba dekhkar Manisha ne kaha.


Manisha- Boliye na Raghav ji. Kuchh to jawab dijiye.


Lekin Raghav sharma raha tha. use kuchh na bolta dekh kar Savita ne kaha.


Savi- Ladka to sharma raha hai isliye kuchh nahi bol raha hai, lekin ladke walon ki taraf se haa hai. Kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki dono bahnon ki ek hi mandap mein shadi ho jaye. Mujhe ek sath do-do bhabhiya mil jayengi.


Savita ki baat sunkar Sarita sharma gayi, lekin Manisha ne tapak se jawab diya.


Manisha- Nahi didi. Main didiya ki shadi ko khoob achhe se enjoy karna chahti hoon. Maine to ye isliye kaha hai ki didiya ka to ho gaya, ab koi mere upar bhi dhyan de.


Raani ji- (narazgi ke sath) Manisha. Tumhe bilkul bhi sharam nahi aati aisi batein karte huwe.

Savi- Aunty ji. Jisne ki sharam uske phoote karam. Aur waise bhi Manisha ne koi galat kaam to kiya nahi hai, balki himmat dikhate huwe sabke samne apne pyaar ko sweekar kiya hai.


Nishchal Sarita ke paas hi baitha tha. Usne dhire se Sarita ke kan mein kaha.


Nishchal- Kuchh sikho apni chhoti bahan se.


Nishchal ki baat sunkar Sarita ne ghoorkar Nishchal ki taraf dekha to usne apni gardan jhuka li aur muskurane laga.


Raghav waise hi khamosh khada huwa tha ki tabhi Buwa ji ne kaha.


Buwa ji- Are haan bol do Raghav bitwa. Nahi to ye ladki tumhare hi pichhe padi rahegi. Haan nahi to batao jara.

Manisha- (dhire se) Jaise aapke pichhe padi thi.

Savi- Ab to buwa dadi ji ne bhi bol diya hai Raghav. Ab to haam kar hi do.

Buwa Ji- Ab jaldi se haan kah do Warna itne din tak jo meri sewa ki hai wo sab bekar ho jayega. Haan nahi to bataao jara.


Ab Raghav ke paas koi chara nahi tha to usne bhi muskurate huwe apni mundi haan mein hila di aur bola.


Raghav- I Love you too.


Raghav ki baat sunkar Manisha bahut khush hui aur usne Khushi se Raghav ko gale laga liya. SAbhi ghar wale bahut khus huwe. Naina ji ne kaha.


Naina ji- Lo ji Ab to Raghav ne bhi apni hami de di hai. Bahut Khushi ki baat hai ye. Rukiye main sabka munh mita karti hoon.


Itna kahkar unhone ek mulajim ko mitayi lane ke liye bol diya aur Raani ji ki taraf dekhte huwe kaha.


Naina ji- Aapki dono betiyon ka ab hamare paas rahne ka samay aa raha hai Raani ji.

Raani ji- Lekin Abhi 2 sal tak main Manisha ki shadi nahi karungi. Ek sath dono betiya mere ghar se vida ho jayengi to mera aangan suna ho jayega.

Naina ji- Hmmmmm. Main samajh sakti hoon. Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.


Tab tak Mulajim mithayi lekar aa gaya. Sabhi ne ek ek piece mithayi lekar apna munh meetha kiya.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
 
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Rawat hi vo shaksh hai jisne srita ko kidnap karvaya. Abhisek ka banaya hua sketch jisme sirf aankhe hi tha ho na ho vo aankhe rawat ka hi hoga.

Sarita ne andha vishvas kiya tha rawat sir par aur aaj rawat sir ke karn hi vo musibat me fhas gaya hai.

Idhar nishchhal bacha ko bada karne gaya matbal uthne gaya par kauno phaida na hua. Bacha ko to kuch bhi pata na hai use to ye bhi pata na hai ki raghu jail se bhag gaya hai.

Ab dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai. Lagta hai nishchhal ki sarita bemaut mari jayegi ya phir.....khair chodo thoda wait karte hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
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Bada bikat paristhiri ban gaya hai. Ek ke baad ek part khulta ja raha hai. Aur sarita ko sirf jhatke hi mil raha hai. Rawat ne kitna kuch kiya taki sarita ko apne raste se hata sake par aisa ho na paya. Har baar nishchal kuch na kuch karke sarita ko bacha liya.

Ab jis paristhithi me sarita phasi hai is jagah se sarita kaise bachegi kiya nichshal samay par pahuch payega ya phir sarita hi kuch aisa karegi jise uski jan bache aur rawat ke chungal se nikal bhage.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
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Mast chir haran hone wala tha. Kitna maza aane wala tha sarita ke ek ek kapde yun haba me uchhlta mano tez tufan chal raha ho par ye naspita nishchhal hamesha sahi wakt par hi entry marta hai. Jab bhi sarita musibat me hoti hai na jane kaise sarita ko sungte huye pahuch hi jata hai.

Rawat to hai bada hi begairt inshan sarita ko beti kahta tha. Aur ab usi muh boli beti ke chir haran karwane par tula hua hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
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ab kya hi revo de aur kya hi bole..... Mahi Maurya ji ne apni mann marzi chala hi li.... meri ek naa suni.......

What is that one thing that makes a story interesting? ........
Abhishek! Yes abhishek......Is story ki shuruat mein hi Abhishek ke role aada kari ki wajah se is story ko padhne mein Aur zyada interest ekdum se badh gayi thi.......

Story ka flow tight ki apne......Lekin aapko ye baat bhoolni nahi chahiye ki aksar 80 % readers story mein entry lene wale kirdaaro ko hi as lead kirdaar apnate hai....aur ant tak unhe hi lead characters maante hai...
..khair readers ka dhyan samete rakhane mein nishchal aur sarita kamyaab rahe par us level pe nahi.......I think nischal ki entry bahot pehle ho jaana chahiye tha.....
One more thing I really like about this story is that it seems fantasy and not close to reality. Coz real life mein shayad hi aisa hota ho

Aur ish story ko 100 + update ki maturity se likha gaya hai, bilkul to the point. Zara bhi be matalab ki baatein nahi hai kahin bhi. It's true it's hell damn true..... warna readers mujhse hi kyun bhid jaate nischal savita ke liye.....

Normally mein review mein roast karti hoon agar meri nazar mein kahin story improvement ho sakti thi ......Lekin.......flow mein gadbada jaati story.....

Ab ish se aage aur kya kahu
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Chhaya ye villan lago ne sare kiye karaye par pani pher diya. Rawat aur neta to naam ka villan tha. Socha tha dig thoda satir niklega par ye begairat bhi kisi kaam ka nehi.ucha makan fika pakwan ye kawat in villano par satheek baithta hai. Sirfi ye lambi chaudi dialogue marna jante hai bas aur kuch nehi.

Kahir jaisa bhi sabhi villan ka haal damdol kar diya gaya. Gayal avastha me sabhi ko ilaaj karwana bhej diya gaya hai. Asli khatirdari in villano ki theek hone ke baad hogi bilkul baise jaise bakre ki mundi udane se pahle use puchkar kar pani aur ghas khilaya jata hai phir ek jhatke me jhatka wala meet bana diya jata hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
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Sarita ke dil me prem angdayi lene laga hai. Ab sarita ko lag raha hai vo hamesha nishchal ke saath galat karti aayi hai.

Der se hi sahi kuch to ahsas hua hai. Ab dekhte hai manisha aisa kiya karti hai jisse sarita kudh se pyaar ka ijhar karti hai.

Kya rani ji ke karan sarita naukri chod degi mujhe lagta hai sarita ko naukri nehi chodni chaiye.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:clapclap::clapclap::clapclap:
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