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Zeeniya k jane k baad teacher ne zakki ko congrats kiya .. ab jeet ki khushi uske chehre se dikh raha tha .. Zohaib use kehta hai

Zohaib :- Yar tu kyu usse panga leta hai har baar .. Aur hamesha usey taana deta hai ladkon ka .. Na tujhe uske bare me pata hai .. Aur upperse agar usne apne abbu ko bata diya .. Aur ghar me pata chala to dada g k hathon pit jayenge hum dono ..

Zakki :- Dekh bhai koi sidhi sadhi ladki ladkon k sath itna frank ho ke baat nahi karrti jaise who karti hai .. Aur aaj kaise mere table pe chadh k bethi thi dekha nahi .. Usse hi uske character ka pata chal raha tha .. Aur hamesha Pre engineering wale ladkon k sath hans hans k baat karti hai .. pakka aik do k sath set ho gi .. Aur aksar ladke bolte hai k who Unke sath set hai ..

Zohaib :- Khuda ka khauf kar bhai aisi baat kyu karta hai .. Jab k tum ne kuch dekha hi nahi .. Uper se mujhe bhi uspe try karne nahi dete .. Waise hai badi item haan ..

Zakki :- Saale chup kar .. mere samne aise bakwas na kiya kar ..

Phir attendance waghera k baad classes start ho gaye .. Aur lagatar 4 class me pakne k baad break ho gayi .. Aur break pe bahar nikal k Zohaib k sath sidha canteen me chala gaya .. Canteen jaa k beth k order diya dono ne .. Abhi who apne order ka intzar kar rahe the .. K canteen k gate se Zeeniya apne doston k sath enter hui .. Usko dekh k zakki ne moon pher liya ..

Zeeniya paas k hi aik seat mein aa ke beth gayi .. Aur apna order diya .. Thodi dair me uske hi class k 2 ladke waha aa ke beth gaye .. Jinka nam Qadir aur Iqbal tha .. Zeeniya dono k sath kafi friendly thi .. to sab waha hans hans k baatein kar rahe the .. Unko dekh k zakkki Zohaib se kehta hai

Zakki :- Dekha kaise hans hans k baat kar rahi hai who .. Qadir aur Iqbal se .. Mujhe Iqbal ne hi kaha tha k ye uske sath set hai ..

Zohaib :- Bhai aise to har koii bolta hai .. Tumhein lagta hai k zeeniya jaisi khubsurat ladki .. Iqbal jaise langoor k sath set ho gi .. Kuch to aqal wali baat kar yar .. Zeeniya usse 2 baat hans k karti hai .. Jisse usey lagta hai k zeeniya uske sath set hai ..

Zakki :- Mujhe to pakka yaqeen hai k is ladki k 4 5 bf honge ..

Zohaib :- Bas kar yar aise tohmat na laga kisi pe .. Sab ko pata hai k ye zeeniya ki aadat hai .. Sab ke sath Frank hone ki ..

Abhi dono baat hi kar rahe the .. K aik ladka Zohaib aur Zakki k table pea a ke bethta hai .. Jo unhi k class ka tha .. Who kehta hai

Ladka :- Zohaib 1 week baad se inter School tournament start ho rahe hai .. Aaj Sir se baat kar lo k who classes me bhi announce kar de ..

Zohaib :- Haan aaj baat karta hu .. Mujhe bhi pata chal gaya tha is bare .. Kal se trial start karte hai ..

Ye ladka zohaib se isliye keh raha tha .. Kyu ke zohaib cricket ka acha player tha .. Aur is baar usey hi captain bana rahe the cricket team k liye .. Phir thodi dair waha beth k baat karte hai .. Aur bell hone k baad classes ki taraf jate hai .. Phir zohaib Sport teacher se baat karta hai .. aur announce karte hai k kal se trial start hai .. Football aur cricket k jisko part lena hai kal se aa jaye ..

Waha se phir chhutti pe ghar aate hai .. Lunch k baad zakki sidha apne dada k room me jata hai ..

Dada jinka naam Saadat ur Rehman .. Age 80+ hai .. Rehman sahib k naam se mashhoor hai .. Ye Govt. Boys Degree college ka principal the .. Isliye pura city inka izzat karta hai .. Aur inhon ne apne bachon ko bhi acha taalem diya hai .. 2 hi bête hai inke .. Zakki ka father bada hai jo Proffessor hai .. aur Zohaib k father Advocate hai ..

Rehman sahib ka mizaaj both garam hai .. Boht jaldi ghussa ata hai .. aur jab ghussa ata hai to inke ghusse se koi nahi bachta .. Is ghar mein sab inse darte hai .. Ghar me kya city me sab darte hai .. Aur ghar mein sirf Zakki hi hai jo inse be jijhak baat karte hai .. Aur jab dil karein unke room me ghus jate hai bagher kisi kam k .. Aur aksar log yehi kehte hai k Rehman sahib k family me aik zakki hi hai .. Jo Rehman Jr. ban sakta hai

Har angle se who rehman sahib jaisa tha .. ghussa , Bolne ka andaz , Logon se milne julne ka tareeqa .. Sab kuch Rehman sahib jaisa tha .. Unka ideal hi rehman sahib tha .. Unhi ko follow karta tha zakki ..

Kamre mein jaa ke dekhta hai .. Rehman sahib apne bed pe bethe hai .. Aur kuch soch rahe hai .. Zakki sidha jaa k unke paas bethta hai .. aur salam karne k baad kehta hai

Zakki :- Kya hua dada g kin sochon mein ghum ho ?

Rehman Sahab :- Kuch nahi beta bs tumhari dadi ki yaad aa gayi thi .. tum batao kab aye school se .. aur kaisa raha aaj ka din ..

Rehman sahib k biwi ko mare 1 saal hi ho gayi hai .. Who apne biwi se boht pyuar karte the .. Isliye ab aksar unki yaad ati hai .. Zakki jawab deta hai

Zakki :- Abhi hi aya hu dada g .. Lunch kar key aha aa gaya aap ke paas ..

Rehman Sahab :- Aaj tumhara result anew ala than a .. Kitne marks aye ?

Zakki :- 86% aye hai dada g

Rehman Sahab :- Aur tumhare dushman k ?

Zakki :- Uske 85 the .. Uska chehra to dekhne layaq tha dada g aaj .. Mein samjha tha k mere usse kam honge .. aur who mujhe chidha rahi thi .. Jab mere marks sune to chehra hi latak gaya .. badi ayi mujhe chidhane wali ..

Rehman Sahab :- Usey ziada tang na kiya karo beta .. Achi ladki hai aur agar tumhare abbu ko pata chala .. to naraz ho jayega tum se ..

Zakki :- mein nahi karta dada g .. who hi ati hai mujhe tang karne ..

Kher thodi dair aur apne dada k sath beth k Zakki baat karta raha .. Aur phir uth k apne room me aya .. Aur so gaya .. Sham ko uth k phir study start ki aur raat tak study karta raha .. Phir dinner k baad thoda aur study kar ke so gaya ..

Isi tarah 7 din guzar gaye .. Is beech Cricket aur Football team k trials hue .. Zakki ne trial nahi diya but cricket team me tha .. Who koi acha player nahi tha .. but thoda boht khelta tha .. Isliye team me liya gaya tha ..

7 din k baad matches start ho gaye .. Football team pehle hi round me out gayi tournament se .. Cricket team inke school ka acha tha .. aur is city k best teams me shumar hota tha .. Aur boht se tournament jeete bhi the .. Is baar bhi boht acha khel raha tha .. aur match jeette jeette final tak pohonch gayi thi .. In matches me Zakki ka koi kirdar nahi tha .. Kyunke na usne bowling kiya tha aur na hi bating .. Bs fielding karta tha ..

Aur bating order me 9th​ player who tha .. Final tak pohonchna koi badi baat nahi thi inke team k liye .. Kyu k har sal final tak inke school ki team pohonch hi jati thi .. Is baar bhi pohonch gayi thi .. Aur jinke sath inke team tha .. Who pichle 2 saal se jeetta aa raha tha Tournament ..

Is baar bhi unka team boht acha tha .. Best players the unme .. Zohaib ka team bhi boht acha tha .. Magar inki bating line thodi weak thi .. 2 3 all rounder the .. Aur baqi bowler batsman .. Final se 1 din pehle hi practice start ho gaya tha .. aur boht hi ziada practice kar rahe the .. Is baar soch rahe the k match jeetenge hi .. Unko hattrick karne nahi denge ..
Bohot badhiya guruji..... Shaandaar character deployment bohot achcha he........ Superb zeenia ki nakchadi bohot achcha tha...... over confidence le doobi use...... :superb:
 
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Final match 10 baje tha subah k .. Aur match bhi zohaib k school k home ground me tha .. ye inke liye advantage thi .. Aur Pure school k students dekhne jaa rahe the .. Ladkiyan bhi jaa rahi thi .. Unke liye bethne ki jagah thi ..

Kher match start hua .. Toss jeet k zohaib ne bowling karne ka faisla kiya .. Bowling achi thi inki to acha khel rahe the .. 20 overs me lagbhag 106 runs kiya tha Dusre school walon ne .. Jab zohaib k team wale bating k liye gaye .. To koi 10 koi 0 koi 6 runs kar ke out ho rahe the .. 6th​ wicket jane pe zohaib khud bating k liye gaya .. who abhi tak nahi gaya tha ..

Zohaib ne khel k match ko kafi had tak barabar kiya .. Abhi 2 over reh gaye the k 1 player aur out ho gaya .. 1 over aura cha khela zohaib ne .. Dusri taraf Zakki ready ho gaya tha helmet waghera pehen k .. Kyu k abhi agar koi out hota hai .. to usey hi jana tha bating k liye ..

Who jane hi wala tha k tabhi aik ladka aya .. Aur aik chhota sa kaghaz usey diya .. aur bataya k zeeniya ne bheja hai .. Zakki usey khol k dekhta hai .. likha tha ..

Zeeniya :- Mujhe yaqeen hai k tum mein who talent hai hi nahi k tum jeeta sako .. Tum hamesha looser rahe ho aur aaj bhi looser hi hoge .. Aaj bhi school ko haraoge .. Tumhara kam nahi hai cricket khelna .. Choodiya pehen k ghar beth jao tum ..

Ye padhne k baad usko zeeniya pe itna ghussa aa raha tha .. K dil kar raha tha k abhi jaa k uska moon todh de .. Jab who ladkiyon ki taraf dekha .. to sidha uski nazar Zeeniya pe gayi .. Jo usey dekh k has rahi thi .. aur Thump down karti hai ..

Tabhi Zohaib out ho jata hai .. 4 balls pe 20runs karne the ab bhi inko .. Aur sab ko lag raha tha k zakki nehi kar payega .. Kyunke usey cricket ka ABC bhi theek se nahi ata .. Zakki jaa ke wicket k samne khada hota hai .. aur Zeeniya ki taraf dekhta hai .. Aur phir samne dekhta hai ..

Inke school wale dheere dheere khade ho ke jane lage the .. Sab ko lag raha tha k haar chuke hai who .. Kyunke zakki aik padhaaku bacha tha .. Cricket aur dusre sports me usey ziada interest nahi tha .. zakki jab ready hota hai .. to peeche se wicket keeper kehta hai ..

W.keeper :- Abey tu kya kar raha hai yaha .. Tu jaa ke bio padh le .. kam ayega tumnhare shadi k baad ..

Ye sun k Zakki chup hi rehta hai .. Usey pata tha k ye sab usey distract karne k liye keh rahe the .. Kher bowler bhi bowling karne k liye daudhte hue ata hai .. aur pehla ball karta hai ..

Aur zakki do qadam aage jaa ke hit karta hai .. Ball hawa mein udhta hua sidha boundry k bahir jaa ke girti hai .. Jiske baad sari crowd khadi ho ke taaliyan bajate hai .. Aur hausla dene lagte hai .. Ab unko aik umeed nazar aayi thi jeet ki .. Bowler Dusra ball karta hai .. Aur who bhi shot maarta hai .. Aur ball hawa mein urhta hua sidha boundry k andar girti hai .. Magar 4 hota hai ..

Ab jo jaa rahe the .. who bhi wapas aa ke beth jaate hai .. Aur dusri taraf zeeniya hairan pareshan bethi .. game dekh rahi thi .. Bowler teesra ball karta hai .. Zakki 2 3 qadam aage jaata hai aur sidha shot marta hai .. Aur ball sidha six ho jata hai .. Ab sab kuch last ball per depend tha .. 1 ball pe 4 runs karne the zakki ko ..

Sab dua kar rahe the k zakki 4 maare .. Ab zeeniya bhi dua kar rahi thi .. Kyu k school k izzat ka sawal tha .. Uski dushmani zakki se thi school se nahi .. Isliye who bhi dua kar rahi thi .. Bowler bowling k liye run leta hai .. aur ball karta hai .. Zakki aage badh k aik shot marta hai .. Ball hawa mein urhta hua boundry ki taraf jaa raha tha .. Fielder bhi us taraf jaa raha tha .. Aur ball jab boundry k bahar girne lagi to Fielder ne badi mushkil se aik haath se catch kar liya ..

Magar agle hi pal who ball hath me liye hi boundry me gir gaya .. Aur ball uske hath se chhoot gaya .. Idhar Umpire k dono haath uth gaye .. Matlab six .. Umpire k hath uthte hi school k students ground ki taraf daudhne lage ..

Aur Zakki k paas aa ke usko kandhon pe bithate hai .. aur Ghumaate hai pura ground .. who to bs zeeniya ko hi dekh raha tha .. Jab zeeniya uski taraf dekhti hai .. to uske chehre pe khushi thi school k jeetne ki .. Magar zakki bat uski taraf point kar ke hila raha tha .. Jaise keh raha ho See I am the winner .. and you are the looser ..

Trophy giving ceremony shuru ho gayi .. aur winner trophy zohaib ko di gayi .. jiske baad to ground me hi langar dance shuru ho gayi .. Zakki unke paas se dusre team k wicket keeper ki taraf aata hai .. Jo apne players k paas khada tha .. Uske paas aa ke kehta hai

Zakki :- Ehm Ehm .. Tum kuch keh rahe the ground me .. Bio .. Shadi .. something .. us waqt sunayi nahi diya tha .. Kya abhi dubara keh sakte ho ..

Who players pehle hi haar k sadme mein the .. Unka school hattrick karte karte reh gaya tha .. Aur haarne ka ghussa bhi tha .. aur is waqt who bowler ki class le rahe the … To jab zakki ne W.keeper se ye kaha .. to who w.keeper zakki ka color pakadh k kehta hai ..

W.keeper :- batata hu kya kaha tha mein ne ..

Abhi dusre player bhi uski taraf ate hai .. Magar peeche se zakki ka pura school us taraf aata hai .. aur sab aaayyy oooo k awazein nikalte hue aa rehe the .. Jinko dekh k who log dar gaye the aur peeche hat jaate hai .. Zakki dheere se uska haath apne color se hata kar kehta hai

Zakki :- Kya yaar us waqt itna critical condition tha .. Aur tum ne mujhe distract karne k liye who sab kaha .. Magar mein bagher distract hue match kiya .. Ab mein ne tumse aik chhoti si mazaq kya kiya tum ne mera color hi pakadh liya .. Not a good thing bro ..

Zakki ye keh k peeche murhta hai .. aur apne players ki taraf jane lagta hai .. Tabhi usey peeche se w.keeper ki awaz ati hai .. "Sorry" .. Zakki peeche dekhta hai .. aur smile kar ke sorry kehta hai .. aur apne doston ki taraf jata hai ..

Phir school mein jaate hai sab .. Aaj 6 7 saal baad cricket ka tournament jeeta tha inke school ne .. To principal ne raat ko party rakhi thi .. aur party ki arrangement Inter part2 k students ko diya tha .. Aur zakki ko kaha tha k who organizer hai .. aur baqi sab ko unka kaam samjha dein .. Party raat mein thi .. to subah se sham tak bs kaam mein hi rahe Inter part 2 wale .. Raat tak kafi acha set kiya tha school k aik room ko .. Jaha party hone wali thi ..

Phir raat ko usne sab ko unke kaam samjha diye .. Iqbal aur aik dusre ladke ko Gate pe rakha tha .. Taa ke koi bahar ka andar na aye .. gate keeper tha magar jab student School uniform me nahi ate to who pehchan nahi pata .. Isliye iqbal ko gate pe rakha tha .. Aur iski dusri wajah ye thi .. K is school me pehle jab bhi party hue the unme aksar Sharaab aur Chars waghera laa ke nasha karte the students .. aur outsider bhi late the isliye ..

Kher raat ko party shuru hui .. Band baja walon ko bulaya gaya tha .. Aur Cricket players dance kar rahe the traditional dance jo us city ka tha .. Uske baad phir khana waghera .. Uske baad traditional jo mauseeqi ( Music ) ka mehfil hota tha .. who shuru ho gaya ..

Phir usme aik aik kar ke sab dance kar rahe the .. aur koi gana gaa raha tha .. Tabhi zakki ko kuch outsider dikhe jinko who bahar nikalta hai .. Uske baad usey Iqbal aur Qadir nashe me jhoomte hue nazar aate hai .. Zakki samajh gaya k usne iqbal ko gate pe rakh k ghalat kiya .. Usne khud hi outsider ko andar aane diya sharab k sath .. Ab waha kuch alag mahol tha .. Aik aik kar ke students peene lag gaye the ..

Is wajah se jald hi zakki ne party khatam kar diya .. Aur sab apne apne gharon ko chale gaye .. Phir jo Inter part 2 k students waha bache the .. who sare chairs waha se nikalte hai aur andar rakhte hai zakki aur zohaib k sath .. Phir raat ko lagbhag 1 2 baje dono ghar jate hai ..
Zindagi jhandawa phir ghamadawa ......zeeniya ki nature usi type ki he....... Haar kar bhi maanti nehi ...... Dekhte he aage kya hota he kis tarah wo badalti he.......
 
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Isi tarah din guzar rahe the .. Aur aksar zakki aur zeeniya ki ladhai ho jati thi school me .. Aik dusre se lade bina dono nahi reh pate the .. Aik din class chal rahi thi .. Zakki sir se pooch k washroom jata hai .. Who boys washroom me jaa ke jab bahar aata hai .. To sath hi girls washroom the us taraf se usey awaz ayi ../

Jab who girls washroom k door k pas pohoncha .. to andar se aik ladki k rote hue ghussa karne ki awaz ayi .. Usey andaza ho gaya tha k andar kya ho raha hai .. Jab Who darwaza kholne ki koshish karta hai .. to darwaza andar se lock hota hai .. Who thoda peeche jaa ke daudhte hue aata hai .. Aur aik kick maarta hai jiske baad door khul jata hai lock toot ke ..

Jab who andar ka nazara dekhta hai .. to ghusse se uske aankhein laal ho jate hai .. Andar iqbal aur qadir the .. aur aik taraf sehmi sehmi si Zeeniya bethi thi .. apna sar apne taangon me chupaye .. Aur zakki ki taraf dekh rahi thi .. Uske kapde kuch phate se lag rahe the .. Zakki apna coat nikalta hai .. aur zeeniya k paas jaa k uske upper daalta hai ..

Phir paas padhi aik lakdi ki rod uthata hai .. Aur peeche dekhta hai to paata hai .. Iqbal aur Qadir waha nehi hai .. Zakki jaldi se bahir aata hai aur dekhta hai .. Who dono main gate ki taraf jaa rahe the .. Zakki unke peeche bhaagta hai .. aur unke peeche pohonchte hi Iqbal ke gerdan pe aik war karta hai .. Jiske baad who wahi gir jata hai ..

Phir dusri war Qadir pe karta hai .. jab who bhi girta hai to dono ko lakdi se maarne lagta hai .. Unki awaazein sun k School k staff aur students bahar aa jate hai .. Aur Staff bhagte hue us taraf aate hai .. Aur zakki ko rokne ki koshish karte hai … Magar zakki unko hata ke dubara dono ko maarne lagta hai

Tabhi principal waha aata hai .. aur usey rokta hai aur ghusse se kehta hai

Principal :- pagal ho gaye ho kya ? .. Aise koi maarta hai kisi ko .. Mar jayenge ye .. aur inko maar kyu rahe ho ..

Zakki ghusse se principal ki taraf dekhta hai .. aur lakdi neeche phenk k principal se kehta hai

Zakki :- In dono ne aik ladki ka rape karne ki koshish kiya hai .. Agar mein waqt pe waha na pohonchta .. to ye kameene uska rape kar chuke hote .. Ab ye aap pe hai k aap inke khilaaf action lete hai ya mujhe lene dete hai .. Aur agar aap ka liya hua action mujhe pasand na aya to mein khud lunga action ..

Iske baad who chup chap waha se washroom ki taraf jata hai .. Aur jab andar pohonchta hai .. to paata hai Zeeniya wahi bethi ro rahi thi .. zakki jaa ke usey uthata hai .. Uthte hi sidha zakki k gale lag jati hai who .. Zakki kuch der uske baalon ko sehla k usey dilasa deta hai ..

Zakki chahe kitna bhi ghussa kare zeeniya pe .. Chahe kitne bhi bade dushman ho dono .. magar zakki kabhi kisi ladki k sath aisa hote hue nahi dekh sakta .. Aur agar who uski itni badi dushman zeeniya ho .. to kaise bardasht kar sakta hai ..

Zakki peeche dekhta hai student aur staff door pe khade andar dekh rahe the .. Zakki zeeniya ko khud se alag karta hai .. aur phir bahar ki taraf jane lagta hai .. Bahar aa ke principal ko bata k gate se bahar nikalta hai .. Aaj kal who log apne hi gadi me school aa rahe the .. aur zakki ache se drive karta tha .. to zakki usey gadi mein bithata hai ..

Aur phir drive karte hue aage jata hai .. Aur usse uske ghar ka address poochta hai .. To zeeniya usey batati hai .. Zakki Chup chap gadi drive kar raha tha .. Kyunke who naya driver tha to thoda dar raha tha k kahi accident kuch na ho jaye .. Tabhi uske kaanon pe zeeniya ki awaz padhi ..

Zeeniya :- Tum ne mujhe kyu bachaya ? Mein to tumhari sab se badi dushman hu ..

Zakki uske is sawal pe aik smile karta hai .. aur usse kehta hai

Zakki :- Pehli baat mein kisi bhi ladki k sath aisa hota hu nahi dekh sakta .. Aur dusri baat agar who ladki meri sab se badi dushman ho to kaise bardasht kar sakta hu .. Kal ko kisse ladta agar waha chup ho ke chala jata to ..

Zeeniya k aankhon mein aansu aa jate hai zakki ki baat sun ke .. Who rote hue kehti hai

Zeeniya :- I am really sorry zakki .. Mein hamesha tumhein tang karti thi .. per mujhe nahi pata tha k tum itne ache ho ..

Zakki :- Ab chup bhi karo yar .. agar accident ho gaya to phir dono ladhne layaq nahi bachenge .. Uper se mein new hu drving mein

Iske baad zeeniya bhi chup ho gayi .. Zakki ne aik shop k samne gadi roki .. aur Zeeniya k liye juice liya .. taa ke thoda normal ho jaye .. Phir gadi uske ghar k samne ruki .. Zakki gadi se bahar aya .. aur uske sath andar gaya .. Ye uske liye naya nahi tha .. Who aksar apne ammi abbu k sath ata tha yaha .. Jab who dono andar gaye to ghar me sirf zeeniya ki ammi hi thi .. Who unko aik sath dekh k kehti hai

Z. Ammi :- Aaj do dushman aik sath kaise ? ( Phir zeeniya k kapde aur uski halat dekh k ) Aur tumhein kya hua .. Ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai ..

Phir zakki unko bithata hai .. Aur itminaan se sab batata hai .. Zeeniya apne room me jaa chuki thi .. IS hadse ka uspe kafi asar hua tha .. Kher zakki Uske ammi ko sab kuch batane k baad apne ghar chala gaya ..
Turning point yehi se shuru...... Good ...... :superr:
 
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Bohot badhiya guruji..... Shaandaar character deployment bohot achcha he........ Superb zeenia ki nakchadi bohot achcha tha...... over confidence le doobi use...... :superb:
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Zindagi jhandawa phir ghamadawa ......zeeniya ki nature usi type ki he....... Haar kar bhi maanti nehi ...... Dekhte he aage kya hota he kis tarah wo badalti he.......
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