Fantasy Aditya@#The Dark Hunter#@

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Pahle dono update behad khubsurat hain, sath mein padhne wale ke mann ko baandh kar rakhne me bhi saksham hain.

Jaha First update me koi aurat uss bachche ko bachane ki khatir bhag rahi thi, kintu vah khud ko nahi bacha payi aur vo bachcha bridge ke niche gir gaya.

Lekin vo aurat koun thi aur vah admi usko kyon maarna chahte the...? khair, iss baat ka pata to kahani me aage ja kar hi chalega.
Dhyan me baithe ek sadhu ne antatah uss bachche ko sakushal bacha liya, sath hi ek maa ki sooni gond bhi abaad kar di uss balak ko use sounp kar.

Second update me bachche ka naam karan hua jisme uska naam aditya rakha gaya.

Ab dekhte hain ki gurudev aur aage kya batate hain, apne aur aditya ke vishay me...?
 
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papa- ye tumne bahut achha kiya jo tum ise niche leke aa gya ye upar apne room me pade pade bor ho jati hogi
maa- aur nhi to kya meri beti upar akeli rahti h ab mai ise niche dying table pe hi roj lake khana khilaungi

fir isi tarah se bate karte huye khana khane lage fir khana khane ke bad priya ko uske room me chhod diya aur mai aur palvi collage ke taraf nikal gye udhar ansika bhi taiyar hoke collage nikal gyi
Ab aage
mai apna bike leke collage nikal gya fir thodi der bad collage me pahuch gya aur sidha class room me gye mai class room me gya to dekha ki pura class bhara huya h khi bhi seat khali nhi tha sivay ek jagah ke jaha pe ek ladki baithi huyi thi jo apna sar niche kar ke baithi thi isliye ye bata pana muskil h ki waha kon baithi h fir mai pure class me ek najar ghuma ke dekha ki mera dost abhinav kha baitha h lekin wo class me khi nhi dikha sayad wo aaj nhi aaya tha fir mai us ladki ke pass chala gya jaha ek seat khali tha mai jake waha usse bola

Mai- Excuse me kya mai yaha baith sakta hu
ladki- (apna sar niche kiye huye hi boli) nhi..
mai- dekhiye yaha khi bhi seat khali nhi h sirf apke pass hi seat khali h please mujhe yaha baithne dijiye
ladki- (ladki guse se apna sar upar uthate huye ) tumhe ek bar me samajh me nhi aata.....

jaise hi uska najar mere upar gya wo bolte bolte chup ho gyi aur mere taraf dekhne lagi mai bhi usko dekha to mujhe uspe gusa aane lga kyoki ye ansika thi mai guse me bola

Mai- sorry mujhe pta nhi tha ki tum yaha baithi ho nhi to mai yaha aata hi nhi mujhe ek gamandi aur nakchadi ladki ke pass baithne ka koi saukh nhi h

abhi wo kuchh bolti usse pahle hi mai waha se dusre bench pe chala gya waha ek ladka aur ladki baithi thi mai us ladki se bola ki wo ansika wala bench pe jake baith jaye wo turant waha se uth ke ansika wali bench pe chali gyi fir mai ek bar guse se ansika ko dekha aur waha pe baith gya
idhar jab ansika mujhe apne pass dekhi to bahut khus huyi fir jab mai use guse se suna ke waha chala aaya to bechari ke aanckho me aansu aa gya fir wo dhire se apna ansu pochh li aur man me sochi ye mere sath kya ho rha h mai bar bar unka dil kyu dukha de rhi hu mai kitna buri hu ye sochte huye fir se usko aankho me ansu aane lga

idhar subah subah Devraj bhi lab ke liye nikal gya fir kuchh der bad wo lab me pahuch gya jab devraj lab me pahucha to use dekh ke ek admi bhagte huye lab me hi bana ek room me gya ye room scientist ka tha wo admi room me gya aur scientist se bola
admi- sir sir wo wo wo
sci- kya huya tumhe tum ye wo wo wo kya lga rakha h jo bhi bolna h saf saf bola
admi- sir wo wo boss aaye h lab me
sci- kya....

itna bolte huye scientist bhagte huye lab me gya aur bola

sci- (darte huye bola) ggggoooodddd morning boss asap iss samay yaha
Devraj- to mujhe yaha nhi aana chahiye
sci- nhi boss mere kahne ka matlab ye nhi..
Devraj- thik h thik h chhodi wo sab bat aur batao ki hamara project kha tak pahucha
sci- boss project ka kam almost compleet ho hi gya h bas one week aur lagega iske bad uska test hoga fir project compleet ho jayega
Devraj-good buhut achha kam kar rhe ho lekin mujhe ye project jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi compleet chahiye samajh gye
sci- ji boss mai kosish karunga ki ye project me ek week se bhi kam samay lage
devraj- good aisa hi hona chahiye nhi to tum jinda nhi bachoge

itna bolke devraj waha se apne ghar aa gya aur dara ko bula ka bola

devraj- Dara tum Home Minister ko call kar ke puchho ki Jonny is waqt kha h aur use bolo ki Jonny ko mere pass call karne ke liye bole
Dara- ji bhai

Phir Dara HM ko call kiya aur use Jonny ke bare me puchha fir wo HM ko bola ki Wo Jonny ko bole bhai ke pass call karne ke liye

Dara- bhai bas jonny ka apke pass 10 minat me call aayega
Devraj- thik h tumhe ek kam diya tha huya ya nhi
Dara- Nhi bhai abhi tak pata nhi laga ki John ko kisne mara aur us ladki ki kisne bachaya
Devraj- tum sab ke sab nikame ho koi bhi kam dhang se nhi karte

abhi ye log bat kar hi rhe the ki tabhi Devraj ka mobile pe call aane lga wo call recieve kiya aur bola

Devraj- Hallo Kon
udhar se- Hallo boss mai Jonny bol rha hu apne mujhe call karne ke liye bola tha
devraj- ha Jonny tumhe to pata hoga ki aaj mera corodo consignment aane wala h
jonny- ji boss HM ne mujhe bataya tha aap tensan nhi lijiye wo sahi salamat apni jagah pe pahuch jayega
Devraj- good lekin ek bat yad rakhna tum raw walo ko halke me mat lena
jonny- aap uska tenson nhi lijiye boss is jonny ke muh se uska sikar nikal ke le jana kisi ke bas ka bat nhi h agar raw wale waha aa bhi gye to unka lass waha se jayega
devraj- good mujhe tumse yahi umid thi

iske bad devraj ne phone discanect kar diya idhar collage me launch tume ho gya tha isliye mai waha se sidha canteen me aa gya waha aake dekha to palvi bhi apne friend arusi ke sath wala baithi thi mai wahi jake wo log ke pass baith gya aur bola
mai- yar palvi mujhe bhukh lagi h jake kuchh ordar kronna
palvi- thik h bhai abhi karti hu

wo jake khuch khane ke liye ordar karti h aur aake mere samne baith jati h udhar ansika bhi launch tume me mujhse mafi mangne ke liye mujhe dhundh rahi thi lekin mai use class room me nhi mila to wo mujhe dhundhte huye cantten me aa gyi aur ek ladke se mere bare me puchi to wo ladka ishara karke mere taraf bataya aur fir ansika mere taraf aane lagi tabhi palvi ki najar uspe padi to guse se boli

palvi- ye kalmuhi yaha bhi aa gyi aur ye hamare taraf kyu aa rhi h
mai- (ascharya se) ye tum kaisi baye kar rhi ho aur tumhe itna gusa jispe aa rha h
palvi- wo dekho samne maharani aa rhi h agar usne is bar apke sath kuchh bhi galat karne ki sochi to mai use jinda nhi chhodungi

Jab mai bhi ansika ko dekha to mujhe bhi gusa aaya lekin mai apne guse pe kabu karte huye palvi se bola

mai- chhodo use wo us din ke bad se ab mujhse ulajhne ki kosish nhi karegi lekin ye hamare taraf kyu aa rhi h

tab tak wo hamare pass aa gyi aur aate hi mujhse boli
ansika- (apna hath jodte huye ) please mujhe maf kar dijiye mujhse bahut badi galti ho gyi mai apni galti pe bahut sarminda hu please mujhe maf kar dijiye
mai- (haste huye) mafi aur wo bhi thakur ki ladki ye to tajub ki bat ho gyi chalo madam jao jao yaha koi bhi tumhari chal me nhi aane wala
ansika- nhi mai koi chal nhi khel rhi mai apse dil se mafi mang rahi hu mai bahut sarminda hu apne kiye par
mai- dekho tum yaha se chali jao mujhe tumhare koi bhi bat pe bivas nhi h aur waise bhi mujhe tumse koi lena dena nhi h is liye tum yaha se chali jao
ansika- please aap jo kahenge mai wo karungi please mujhe maf kar dijiye
palvi- tumhe ek bar me samajh me nhi aa rha h ki bhai tumse bat bhi nhi karna chahte tum yaha se chali jao nhi to tumhare liye achha nhi hoga
ansika- please aap mujhe ek bar maf kar dijiye mai aainda se kisi ke sath koi jyadti nhi karungi please

idhar palvi ko bahut gusa aa rha tha wo guse me ek tapad khich ke mar ansika ko ye tapad itna jordar tha ki uski awaj pura canteen me gunj gya sab ladka ladki awaj hoke dekh rhe the ansika bhi ek pal ke liye sochh me pad gyi ki uske sath kya huya fir use realise huya ki uske sath kya huya h to wo rote huye waha se chali gyi idhar sab ladke apas me hi khusur fusur karne lage ki kaise aise ansika chup chap chali gyi idhar mujhe bhi ascharya ka koi thikana nhi tha mujhe ye ummid nhi tha ki palvi ansika ko aise tapad bhi mar sakti h lekin sabse jyada ascharya ka bat ye tha ki jo ladki khud ke galti pe bhi dusro se lad jati thi wo aaj ek tapad khane ke bad bhi bina kuchh bole rote huye chali gyi kya wo sach me sudhar gyi ya isme bhi uska koi chal h ha isme uska koi chal hi h nhi to aisa ladki kabhi sudharti nhi h

Mai- palvi ye tumne achha nhi kiya tumhe use tapad nhi marna chahiye tha
palvi- sorry bhai lekin mai bhi kya karu uspe pahle se hi mujhe bahut gussa tha aur abhi jab aap bar bar use jane ke liye bol rhe the aur wo ja nhi rhi thi isliye use guse me tapap mar diya

mai chalo koi bat nhi nasta aa gya h nasta kro aur apne class jao iske bad hamlogo ne nasta kiya aur palvi aur arushi apne class me chali gyi mai bhi apne class me jane laga tabhi mere mobile pe call aaya to mai apna mobile nikal ke dekha to ye call devendra uncle ka call tha fir maine call pick kiya aur bola

Mai- Hallo ha uncle pranam
devendra- khus raho beta kaise ho
mai- mai thik hu uncle aap kaise ho aur Neetu kaisi h
devndra- sab thik h beta adi mujhe tumse kuchh kam tha tum abhi mere office aa sakte ho
mai- ji uncle mai abhi aata hu aap apna office ka adress msg kar dijiye

fir uncle ne mujhe apna office ka adress msg kiye aur fir mai apna bike leke unke office ke taraf nikal gya fir kuchh der me mai office me pahuch gya jab mai office me andar jane laga to gate pe gaurd ne mujhe roke liya fir maine use bataya ki mujhe devendra uncle ne bulaya h to wo intercom pe bat kar ke confirm kiya iske bad mujhe andar jane diya fir mai andar jake uncle ke kebin ke bare me puchha iske bad mai unke kabin ke pass jake bola.
mai- kya mai undar aa sakta hu
Devendra- (mere taraf dekh ke) are adi aao aao mai tumhara hi intjar kar rha tha

fir mai andar chala gya uncle ne mujhe ek chair pe baithne ko bola mai uspe baith gya aur bola.

Mai- boliye uncle apne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya h
devendra- are itni bhi kya jaldi h pahle ye batao tum chay loge ya koffie
mai- uncle koffie chalega

fir uncle ne apne table par rakhe huye bell bajaya to waha ek admi uncle ne use do koffie lane ko bola wo admi waha se chala gya fir kuch der bad wo kaffie leke aaya aur ham dono koffie pite pite bat karne lage
uncle- tum soch rahe hoge ki mai tumhe itna jaldi yaha kyu bulaya hu
mai- ji uncle

devendra- dekho beta mai ghuma fira ke bat nhi karta is liye sidhe point pe aata hu kya tum raw join karna chahoge tumhare jaise ladke ka is raw ko bahut jaruri h
 
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Mai- boliye uncle apne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya h
devendra- are itni bhi kya jaldi h pahle ye batao tum chay loge ya koffie
mai- uncle koffie chalega

fir uncle ne apne table par rakhe huye bell bajaya to waha ek admi uncle ne use do koffie lane ko bola wo admi waha se chala gya fir kuch der bad wo kaffie leke aaya aur ham dono koffie pite pite bat karne lage
uncle- tum soch rahe hoge ki mai tumhe itna jaldi yaha kyu bulaya hu
mai- ji uncle
devendra- dekho beta mai ghuma fira ke bat nhi karta is liye sidhe point pe aata hu kya tum raw join karna chahoge tumhare jaise ladke ka is raw ko bahut jaruri h
Ab aage
Mai- lekin uncle mai kaise mujhe aisa nhi lagta ki mai raw ke liye perfect hu
devendra- aisa nhi h aditya tum raw ke liye ek perfect agent banoge mai tumhari kabiliyat janta hu
mai- uncle aap sirf mujhse ek bar mile h aur ek hi bar me meri kabiliyat ke bare me jan gaye kahi aisa to nhi ki maine apki beti ko bachaya is liye aap ye bol rhe h
devendra- nhi ye galat bol rhe ho mai tumhe Neetu ko bachane ke chalte raw me nhi le rha hu bhale hi mai tumse us din pahli bar mila tha lekin mai tumhe bahut pahle se janta hu
mai- (ascharya se) pahle se ye kaise mumkin h hamlog to usdin pahli bar mile the
devendra- yad h jab tum kuchh din pahle jabardasti ladko se bhikh mangwane wale giroh ko pakda tha mar mar ke sab ko behosh kar diya tha aur unke boss ko hath pair kat diya tha
mai- ha mujhe yad h lekin mai ye kam bahut chupke se kiya tha fir apko ye bat kaise pata chala
devendra- jante ho us din mai bhi usi raste se ja rha tha to mai dekha ki tum ek bhikh mangne walr ladki ko 2000 ke note diye to mujhe bahut tajub huya to mai tum pe najar banaye rakha fir tum kuchh der bad us ladki ke piche jane lage to mai bhi apna gadi sid karke tumhare pichha karne laga lekin jab mai waha pahucha to dekha ki tum kaise in ladko aur ladkiyo ke liye apne jan ka parwah kiye bagair un gundo se bhid gye fir tum in ladkiyo ko bacha kar le gye to maine apne team ko call kar ke bula liya aur waha ka sara kachra saf karwaya aur sabut bhi mitaya mai chahta to tumhe giraftar karva sakta tha lekin tumne ek bahut hi achha kam kiya tha fir mai apna 2 agent ko tumhare piche laga diya fir wo log hame tumhare pal pal ka khabar dete the tumne kaise MLA MLA ka Beta principle aur us inpector ko sabak sikhaya mai tabhi soch liya tha ki ye banda to mere raw me hona chahiye ab ye tum par nirbhar karta h ki tum tum raw join karna chahte ho ya nhi lekin mai ek bat bata de rha hu tumhare jaise honhar ladke ko is desh ki jarurat h

mujhe devendra uncle ke bat sun kar bahut ascharya huya sala mere piche do agent lage huye the mujhe pata hi nhi chala aur sala ye kalketu kha gya tha use bhi nhi pata chala tabhi mere man me kalketu ka awaj aaya akka ye bat mujhe pahle hi malum tha ki apke piche do admi lage huye h lekin mai apne sakti se ye bhi jan gya tha ki wo apko nukshan pahuchane nhi aaye h balki kabhi aap musibat me ho to wo apka sahayata hi karte isliye mai ye bat jyada gambhirta se nhi liya mujhe chhama kre mere akka mai apne man me koi bat nhi kalketu lekin aage se dhayan rakhana

mai- mujhe to ab bhi bisvas nhi ho rha h uncle ki mere piche do agent lage huye the aur mujhe pata bhi nhi chala kya mai un do agent se mil sakta hu
devendra- sorry aditya tum un logo se abhi mil nhi sakte hamara ek rool hota h ki hamare agent ko sirf raw wala hi janta h
mai- ok uncle koi bat nhi
devendra- to tumhara kya decision kya h aur apna decision lene se pahle ek bar ye jarur sochna ki tum un ladko aur ladkiyo ke tarah kitne ko bacha sakte ho na jane kitni ladkiyo ko jismani dhandhe ke liye kidnap karte h aur na jane kitne log drugs ka sikar ho rhe h tum un logo ko bacha sakte ho
mai- aap sahi bol rhe ho uncle lekin mujhe sochne ke liye time chahiye
devendra- thik h mai tumhe 2 din ka samay de rha hu tum soch samajh kar apna decision dena
mai- thik h uncle mai do din bad apko confirm kar dunga ab mai chalta hu

iske bad mai waha se ghar nikal gya
idhar ansika canteen se rote huye nikali aur sidha apne gadi leke ghar nikal gyi aur apne room me jake fut fut ke rone lagi aur rote rote bolne lagi mai kaise aapko samjhau ki ab mere dil me apko lekar koi chal nhi h mai sach me badal gyi hu mai apke bina nhi rahi sakti aap mujhe maf kar dijiye nhi to apki ye ansika apni jan de degi abhi wo ronhi rahi thi ki uski mummy uske room me aayi to dekhti h ki uski beti apni bed par padi huyi rote jaa rhi h to wo bhagte huye ansika ke pass aayi aur usko apne gale se laga li ansika jab apne maa ke gale lagi to wo aur jor jor se rone lagi Rohini ko apne beti ki yu rona bardast nhi ho rha tha wo use chup karte huye boli

rohini- mat ro beti chup jo ja kya huya mere sona ko kyu aise ro rhi h kya kisi ne tumhe kuchh bola h batao mujhe mai use chodungi nhi kya huya h kuchh to bolo dekho tum chup raho nhi to mai bhi rone lagunga
Ansika-( chup hokar siskate huye) nhi maa mujhe kisi ne kuchh nhi bola h mai to apne kismat pe ro rhi hu
rohini- kya huya h tumhe khi aditya ne to kuchh nhi bola
Ansika- nhi maa unhone kuchh nhi bola bas mai apni kiye par ro rha hu mai unki najar me itni gir gyi hu ki ab wo mujhe maf bhi nhi kar rhe h maa mai unke bina nhi ji sakti maa maine unse mafi mangi lekin wo mujhe maf nhi kiye unko lagta h mai abhi bhi unke sath koi chal khel rhu
rohini- woh to ye bat h tum isliye itna ro rhi ho meri beti to itna kamjor nhi h kya huya yadi wo tumhe maf nhi kiya to tum pahle hi har man li tum unlogo ke sath itna kuchh ki h ki wo tumpe turant kaise bivas kar lega tumhe uske najar me achha banana hoga aur dekhna jab tum uske najar me achha ban gyi to wo to mhe bahut pyar Karega
Ansika- ( khus hote huye) sach maa aap sach bol rhi ho wo mujhe apnayenge wo mujhe pyar karenge maa
Rohini- ha beti wo tumhe bahut pyar Karega lekin isse pahle tumhe use ye yehsas karwana hoga ki tum ab pahle wali ansika nhi rahi tum ab badal gyi ho ek bat aur tum aise bat bat pe rona nhi samajh gyi tum
ansika- maa mai ab unhe ye yehsas karwa ke rahungi ki ab mai wo ansika nhi rhi jo ghamandi thi ab mai wo ansika hu jo unhe dilo jan se pyar karti h (fir man ne ab mujhe unko manane se pahle unki nakchadhi bahan ko manana padega kamini ka kya hat h mujhe din me hi tare dikha di)

Idhar mai bhi apne ghar pahuch gya tha aur abtak palvi bhi ghar aa gyi thi fir mai apne room me gya aur fress huya aur apne bed par so gya fir aaj ke bare me sochte huye nind ke wadiyo me chala gya fir rat me palvi mere room me aayi aur mujhe sota huya dekh kar mere pass aayi aur baith gyi aur mujhe dekhne lagi fir apne man me bolne lagi
palvi- (apne man me) haye bhai sote huye kitna Masum lag rhe h kya mai ek kis kar lu nhi nhi kahi bhai jag gye to mere bare me kya sochenge chhiii mai ye kya sochne lagi wo mera bhai h aur mai apne bhai ke bare me aise kaise soch sakti hu
lekin bhai kitna sundar lag rhe h mujhe bar bar bhai ko dekhte huye kya hone lagta h aise mera dil jor jor se kyu dhadkane lagta h kya mujhe bhai se pyar ho gya h..... ha mujhe lagta h aisa hi h mujhe bhai se pyar ho gya h lekin mai ye inhe kaise bataungi ki mujhe inse pyar hi gya h kya ye mere pyar ko samjhenge kya ye mujhe apnayenge agar ye mujhe nhi apnaye to mai to jite ji mar hi jaungi nhi nhi mujhe kuchh karna hoga kisi tarah bhai ko ye yehsas dilwana hoga ki mai unse kitna pyar karti hu mai bha ko unke 18 janamdin me prapose karungi ha ye sahi rahega
fir palvi mere pass aayi mere hoth pe ek chhota sa kis ki aur fir sarma ke apne room me bhag gyi fir thodi der bad mummy mere pass aayi aur mujhe khana khane ke liye jagayi iske bad mai uth ke washroom me gya aur fress huya fir priya ke room me gya aur priya ko lekar niche dyning table pe aa gya papa bhi office se ghar aa gye the fir hamlog dyning table pe baith ke khana khane laga tabhi papa bole

papa- to adi kab ja rhe ho apne guruji se milne
mai - papa mai soch raha hu kal subah me waha pe chala jau aur fir din bhar me laut ke bhi aa jaunga isliye papa mai kal subah subah hi waha ke liye nikal jaunga
papa- thik h jaisi tumhari marji

isi tarh bat karte huye hamlogo ka khana khatam huya fir mai priya ko le jakar usko room me chhod diya aur waha se apne room me aake bed par so gya aur aaj ke bare me sochne laga aise hi sochte sochte na jane kab mujhe nind aa gya

ab chalte h dusre taraf jaha jonny bhi apne best admi ko lekar nikal gya consigment lane ke liye wo sidha ek jangal me ja pahuch jaha 2 truck laga huya tha aur sath me waha pe kuchh admi bhi khade the wo un admiyonke pass gya aur ek 10 ka kata huya note diya un admiyo me se ek jo dekhne me uska boss lag rha tha wo bhi apne pass se ek 10 ka kata huya note nikala aur dono ko mila ke dekha jab wo dekha ki dono note apas me mil rhe h to wo use gadi ko lekar jane ka anumati de diya fir Jonny waha se consigment leke nikal gya aur apne boss yani ki devraj ko call kiya

jonny- boss consigment mil gya h ise kha sift karna h
devraj- ek kam kro abhi ise le jakar xxx wala godam me rakh do fir mai jab tak call nhi karunga tabtak ye wahi rahna chahiye aur apne admiyo ko bhi wahi chhod dena aur satark rahne ke liye bol dena
jonny- ji boss

fir Jonty wo truck leke us godam me pahuch gya aur apne admiyo se bola

jonny- ye truk ko andar lelo aur ise achi tarah se dhak do taki kisi ko pata nhi chale ki yaha pe koi gadi bhi h aur tum log yahi pe ruko jab tak boss ka phone number aata tabtak aur ha thoda satark rahna koi bhi gadbad nhi hona chahiye nhi to tumlogo ke liye achha nhi hoga samajh gye
sab - ha samajh gya aap befikar hoke jaiye hamare rahte yaha pe parinda bhi par nhi mar sakta
wahi dusre taraf 5 log apas me bat kar rhe the jisme 3 ladka aur 2 ladkiya thi usme se ek ladka bola

ladka- mujhe abhi abhi pata chala h ki wo consigment xxx godam me abhi abhi aaya h aur waha pe pahara bhi bahut tight ho gya h ab hamlogo ko apna kam savdhani se karna padega
 
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sab - ha samajh gya aap befikar hoke jaiye hamare rahte yaha pe parinda bhi par nhi mar sakta
wahi dusre taraf 5 log apas me bat kar rhe the jisme 3 ladka aur 2 ladkiya thi usme se ek ladka bola
ladka- mujhe abhi abhi pata chala h ki wo consigment xxx godam me abhi abhi aaya h aur waha pe pahara bhi bahut tight ho gya h ab hamlogo ko apna kam savdhani se karna padega
Ab aage
ladki- to hame ek jabardast plan ki jarurat padegi
ladka- tum sahi bol rhi ho agant 4 hame ek plan ke tahat hi aage badhna padega

fir ye log ek plan banate h aur plan ke tahat aaj ke kam ko anjam dene nikal jate h to plan kuchh is tarah ka banaya ye log agant 1 jo ek ladki h wo dur se hi snipering karegi agant 4 ye bhi ek ladki h iska kam h waha ke camera ko apne handle me lene ka aur agant 0 jo inka team leader h wo godham me andar jayega aur agant 2 aur agant 3 jo ladka h ye log agant 0 ko backup dega fir ye log us godham se kuchh dur pe jake ruke fir agant1 sniper leke ek building pe chali gyi aur waha se snipering karne lagi fir agant 4 ne camero ko apne handle me kar li yani ki use hak kar li
agant0- agant1 kya tum taiyar ho
agant1- yas boss mai taiyar hu aur target bhi fix h aap bolo uda du sale ko
agant0- nhi mera ordar ka wait karo agant 4 kya tum camere ko apne handle me kar li
agant4- yas boss
Agant0- good ab batao waha pe kitne admi h aur kha kha h
agant4- boss total 20 admi h char chat pe banduk liye khade h aur 6 gate pe khade h aur 10 andar godam me h
agant0- to chalo dosto aaj ka party start karte h agant 2 and 3 kya tum dono taiyar ho
agant2- boss apka ordar ka intjar h mere hath me to kab se khujali ho rahi h bas aap hi der kar rhe ho ordar dene me
agant3- mujhse bhi ab raha nhi ja rha h boss aaj bahut din ke bad samay mila h apne hath ka khujali mitane ke liye
agant0- gud to chalo khel start karte h agant 1 apna target lock kro aur chat pe jitne bande h sab ko uda do
agant1- ok boss

Aur isi ke sath chat pe ek ek kar ke charo bando ka bheja ud gya idhar agant 0 apne dono hath me gun jisme silencer laga huya tha use liye aage badh gya aur agant 2 and 3 ne bhi apne gun pe silencer laga ke aage badh gye ab tak ye log gate ke pass pahuch gye gate pe jo 6 gunde the wo log dekha ki 3 log unke taraf badh rhe h to wo inpe fire karne hi wale the ki ye log goliya barsana chalu kar diya agant0 jo dono se aage tha wo gate pe 3 gundo ko uda diya aur baki bache 3 me se do ko ye dono agant ne kam tamam kar diya ab bacha ek jo apne sathi ko aise marte huye dekh wapi chhup gya aur chhup ke ye log par firing karne laga firing ke awaj sun ke andar ke jo gunde the wo satark ho gye tabtak agant 0 ne us chupe huye gunde ko bhi kam tamam kar diya aur ye log aage badh gye tabhi agant0 ko agant4 ka awaj sunai diya
agant4- boss andar wale sara gunda satark ho gya h wo log darwaje ke pass hi gun point kiye huye h apko andar jane ke liye koi dusra rasta dudhna hoga
agant0- ok mai dekhta hu

fir agant 0 us godam ke charo taraf ghum kar andar jane ka rasta talash karne laga tabhi use ek khuli huyi khidaki dikha to wo khidaki se hi andar chala gya uske bad agant 2 and 3 bhi usi raste se andar chale gye abhi agant 3 andar aaya hi tha ki wo andar kisi chij se takra gya aur usko takrane se awaj ho gyi awaj sun ke un gundo ne uske taraf firing karna start kar diya ye log bhi chhip kar firing karne lage waha pe itna firing huya ki dono taraf ke gun ka goli samapt ho gya jab goli khatam huya to ye log unpe tut pade aur fir 10 minat me sare gundo ko khatam kar diya
Iske bad agant0 ne agant 2 se bola

Agant0- agant 2 & 3 dekho in dono trako me kya h
agant 2 & 3 - ji boss abhi dekhta hu

fir dono waha se trak je pass chale gye jab wo log trak me dekha to unka ascharya se aankhe fati fati rah gyi
agant2- are bap re ye log kya karne wale the
agant0- kya huya tumhare chehre pe aise 12 kyu baj gye
agant2- boss aap bhi dekhoge ki isme kya h to apko bhi yahi hal hoga
agant0- kya h usme
agant2- RDX wo bhi pura truk bhar ke
agant0- kya... Ye log pura sahar hi udane wale the kya jo itna sara RDX laye h aur ye log itna sara RDX laya kha se ok next truk me kya h
agant3- boss isme drugs aur hathiyar h
agant0- kya... Ye log ye pura sahar hi barbad karna chahte the kya mai nhi chhodunga kisi ko jo hamare desh par gandi najar dala h pata lagav ye sab kha se aur kisne mangawaya h aur kis maksad se ise sahar me laya gya h
agant3- ok boss
agant0- agant2 RDX wala truk yaha se nikal ke is godam ko uda do
agant2- ok boss

agant2 ne gadam me bam laga diya iske bad agant0 ne apne boss ko call kiya aur aaj ke mission ka report kiya fir ye log waha se chale gye wo log waha se kuchh dur hi gye the ki boom ka awaj aya aur gadam ke chithde us gye

idhar devraj abhi apne room me soya huya tha ki achanak uske mobile pe call aaya ye mahashay gahari nind me soye huye the jab teen char bar call aaya tab jake usne call uthaya aur call pe jo bat usne suni to uska hoss ud gya wo guse me chilane laga
devraj- nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mera arbo ka nuksan ho gya mai kisi ko nhi chhodunga mere nukshan ka bharpai ab is sahar ko karna padega

devraj ko aise chilata huya sun ke devraj ke bhai dara ne bhagte huye apne bhai ke pass gya aur puchh

Dara- kya huya bhaiya aap aise kyu chilaye kuchh huya h kya
devraj- ( guse me) kisi ne hamara consigment ko barbad kar diya ham lut gye barbad ho gya hamara arbo ka nuksan huya h ab mai unko kya jabab dunga agar unka kam nhi huya to wo hame jan se mar denge
dara- bhai ye jarur raw wale ka kam hoga unko siva aisa karne ka dusahas kisi me nhi h
devraj- tum pata kro ye raw wale ka kam h ya kisi aur ka jiska bhi kam hoga use mai jinda nhi chodunga usko uske pure pariwar ke sath hi da jala dunga
Dara- thik h bhaiya lekin bhaiya mujhe ek bat samajh me nhi aa rha h ki Jonny ke rahte aise kaise ho gya
devraj- ye bat to mujhe bhi samajh me nhi aa rha h tum ek kam kro us sale Jonny ko yaha bulao aaj wo mere sath se nhi bachega

tabhi Devraj ke mobile pe phone aaya wo jab apne mobile dekha to uske sar se pasina nikalne laga wo dar se thar thar kapne laga wo kapte huye phone recieve kiya aur darte huye bola

Devraj- hhhaaalllo boss
udhar se- are boss ke bache ye main kya sun rha hu tumse ek bhi kam dhang se nhi hota h
devraj- boss wo wo mujhe bhi abhi pata chala h hamara consigment to sahi salamat godam tak pahuch gya tha fir pata nhi kya huya kisne waha par jake sab barbad kar diya
urhar se - mai kuchh nhi sunna chahta hu hamar arbo ka nuksan huya h aur iska bharpai tumhe karna h pahle tum ye pata karo ki kisne hamara itna bada nukshan kiya h jo bhi hamara nukshan kiya h usko uske pariwar ke sath jinda jala do mai tumhe do din ka samay de rha hu mujhe uski lash chahiye jisne aisa kiya h nhi to tum jante hi ho ki tumhare sath kya ho sakta h
devraj- jjjiii bbooss ho jayaga

iske bad uska phone cut gya fir usne dara ko bolo
devraj- mujhe abhi ke abhi yaha pe Jonny chahiye use ya jaldi se lekar aao

Fir dara ne Jonny ko call kiya aur use jaldi se yaha aane bola fir karb 1 ghante bad waha Jonny aaya Jonny ko dekh kar devraj ka gusa satve asman pe chadh gya wo guse me apna gun nikal ke Jonny pe tante huye bola
devraj- mai tumse bola tha na ki koi gadbad nhi hona chahiye fir ye kaise ho gya iska saja pane ke liye taiyar ho jao

jonny- (devraj ke pair pe girte huye) mujhe maaf kar do boss mujhse galti ho gyi mujhe apni galti sudharne ka ek mauka dijiye main is bar apka kam jarur kar dunga
devraj- devraj ke dictionary me mafi name ka koi sabd nhi tumhe iska saja jarur milega

fir devraj usko goli mar deta h aur dara se bolata h

devraj- iske lash ko thikane laga do aur jald se jald pata kro ki kisne hamara godam ko udaya h
dara- ji bhai

iske bad Dara Jonny ke lash ko waha se le jata h aur use thikane lagata h iske bad wo apne kam pe lag jata h yani ki ye pata karne me ki us godam ko kisne udaya h
idhar mai soya huya tha ki mujhe fir se wahi sapna aaya jo jab mai 5 sal ka tha tab aaya tha mai sapne me dekh raha tha ki ek aurat ek bache ko lekar bhag rhi h aur uske piche kuchh gunde lage huye h fir achanak ek gunde ne goli chalaya jo jakar us aurat ke pith me lagi isi ke sath mera nind tut gya mai pura pasine se bhig gya tha mujhe samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki jab mai 5 sal ka tha tab mujhe yahi sapna aaya tha aur aaj bhi mujhe yahi sapna aaya kya mere is aurat se kuchh reletion h kyu ye mere sapno me aayi fir mai apne sar ko jhatakate huye socha ye to bas ek sapna h aur sapna kabhi sach tode hi hota h fir mai uth ke mobile me time dekha to 3 baj rhe the fir mai washroom me jake fress huya aur fir palvi ko jagane uske room me chala gya usko jagane ke bad hamdono chember me chale gye iske bad palvi ka traning start huya traning do din tak chala yani ki chambar ke bahar ke samay se 1 ganta iske bad mai palvi ko wahi pe aur traning karne ko bol kar kalketu ko yad kiya aur bola
mai- kalketu mujhe Himalay parvat pe leke chalo

kalketu- jo agya aka
 
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apne sar ko jhatakate huye socha ye to bas ek sapna h aur sapna kabhi sach tode hi hota h fir mai uth ke mobile me time dekha to 3 baj rhe the fir mai washroom me jake fress huya aur fir palvi ko jagane uske room me chala gya usko jagane ke bad hamdono chember me chale gye iske bad palvi ka traning start huya traning do din tak chala yani ki chambar ke bahar ke samay se 1 ganta iske bad mai palvi ko wahi pe aur traning karne ko bol kar kalketu ko yad kiya aur bola
mai- kalketu mujhe Himalay parvat pe leke chalo
kalketu- jo agya aka
Ab aage
fir kalketu ne mujhe kuchh hi der bad Himalay parwat pe pahucha diya aur bola

Kalketu- hame chhama kare mere akka mera sima yahi tak h kyuki ye ek pavitra jagah h aur mai bahut pap kiya hu iske chalte mai yaha se aage nhi ja sakta
mai- thik kalketu tum ab wapas chale jao aur mere ghar pe najar rakhna aur mere pariwar ka raksha karna
kalketu- jo hukum mere akka

itna bol ke kalketu gayab ho gya abhi subah hone me 1:30 hours time baki tha mujhe itne samay me wo sarowar dundhna tha jaha dristikarni puspa ugta tha fir mai waha charo taraf ghum kar dekhne laga lekin mujhe wo sarowar khi nhi dikha fir mai waha se dusre taraf chala gya waha bhi mujhe wo sarowar khi nhi dikha mujhe sarowar dundhte dhundhte 30 minat ho gya tha ab subah hone me kewal ek hi ghanta bacha tha
mai pareshan hoke idhar udhar ghum raha tha fir socha chalo gurudev se puchh ke dekhta hu fir maine gurudev ka dhyan kiya to gurudev mere dhyan me aaye aur bole
gurudev- kho wats mujhe kaise yad kiya
mai- pranam gurudev gurudev mujhe yaha pe koi sarowar nhi dikh rha h kripya aap mera madad kare
gurudev- awasya putra tum yaha se sidha purva disha ki or badhte jao tumhe kuchh dur aage chalne ke bad ek gufa dikhega tumhe usi gufa me andar jana h gufa me kuch der andar chalne ke bad tumhe bholenath ka mandir dikhega aur us mandir ke pass hi wo sarowar h jaha wo dristikarni pusp ugta h lekin ye saral nhi hone wala h the tumhe pahle wo gufa par karna h aur wo gufa par karna itna saral nhi h tumhe usme aneko badhaye aayengi jab tum us badha ko par karoge tabhi tum us sarowar tak pahuch sakte ho
mai- apka bahut bahut dhanyabad gurudev jo apne mujhe apne kartvya par aage badhne ka marg dikhaya chahe mujhe apne kartvya ke Marge kitne bhi kathinaiya aaye mai apna pag piche nhi hataunga
gurudev- jao putra tum apna kartvya kro mera asirwad tumhare sath h (man me - putra tumhe is kartavya ke Marge ek bahut hi kathin pariksha hone wala h ab dekhna ye h ki tum ye pariksha pass karte ho ya nhi )

fir mai gurudev ko pranam kar ke aage badh gya mujhe kuchh dur chalne ke bad gurudev ke bataye anusar ek gufa dikha mai us gufa ke pass pahuch gya aur mai us gufa me andar pravesh karne ke liye aage badha mai jaise hi us gufa me pravesh karne ki kosish ki mai udta huya piche ja gira mujhe aisa laga jaise kisi se mujhe utha ke pichhe fek diya ho mai uth kar dobara andar jane ke liye prayas kiya lekin is bar bhi mujhe koi utha ke piche fek diya mai fir se dobara utha aur us gufa ke pass ja kar ruk gya mai is bar andar nhi gya kyuki mai ye jan gya tha ki koi h jo nhi chahta ki koi is gufa me pravesh kare jo us mandir ke rakshak ho sakta h aur jo dev mandir ka raksha kare wo prabhu bholenath ka koi bhakt hi hoga is liye mai us gufa ke darvaje par jake bola

mai- hey is darwaje ke rakshak aap jo koi bhi ho bhut pret devi devta yas kinar nag chahe jo bhi ho kripya mera pranam swikar kare aur mujhe andar jane de mujhe andar jana ati avasyak h

Mera itna bolne ke bad bhi udhar se koi jabab nhi mila to mai fir se bola

mai- hey rakshak kripya mera bat ko samajhiye mujhe apne bahan ke aankh ke roushani ke liye mujhe dristi karni pusp lana h jo is gufa me bane sarowar me prakat hota h is liye kripya mujhe andar jane de

is bar bhi mujhe koi jabab nhi mila mai aise hi bar bar us rakshak se aagrah karte raha lekin uska koi jabab nhi aaya to mujhe ab gusa aane laga tha isliye mai fir se us darwaje ke andar jane ka prayas kiya lekin is bar bhi mujhe koi utha ke piche fek diya ab mujhe bahut jyada gusa aane laga tha guse se mera aankh pura red colour ka vo gya mai apne guse ko kabu karna chahta tha lekin ho nhi raha tha is liye mai dhyan me baitha gya fir thodi der bad mera gusa sant ho gya to fir mai sochne laga ki mai is darwaje ko kaise par karu mainusse lad bhi nhi sakta kyuki wo adrisya h wo mujhpe adrisya hoke war kar rha h kuch der sochne ke bad mujhe ek upay sujha ki mai apne indriyo ke madad se uska war ko rok sakta hu is liye mai wahi pe fir se dhyan me baith gya aur apne sato chakro ko jagrit karne laga kuch der bad mera sato chakra jagrit ho gya fir mai utha ke us darwaje par gya aur apna aankh band kar ke jaise ji aage badne laga tabhi mujhe anubhav huya ki koi hath mere taraf aa rha h mai turant hi us hath ko pakad liya aur usko utha ke niche patak diya ke bad mai utha aur fir se andar jane laga is bar bhi waisa hi huya is bar bhi mai usko utha ke patak diya is bar usko jaise hi patka wo mere samane prakat ho gya



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wo dikhane me hi lag rha tha ki wo koi bahut bada pret h wo mujhe guse se gurate huye bola

pret- tumne bahut badi galti kar di mere upar hath utha ke tumhare pahle galti jo tumne yaha aake ki wo to mai maf kar deta lekin ab tumhara ye galti ka tumhe mafi nhi milega ab tumhe marna padega
Mai- kon ho tum aur tum mera rasta kyu roka h aur isme mera koi galti nhi h maine pahle tumse bahut binati kiya ki mujhe andar jane do lekin tumne mujhe andar jane nhi diya is liye majburan mujhe tumse ladna pada
pret- mai bhuto aur preto ka raja aghora hu mujhe is dwar ka raksha karne ke liye khud bhagwan bholenath ne hi rakha h mai iske andar kisi ko bhi jane anumati nhi de sakta isliye mai tumhare bat ka koi jabab nhi de rha tha mai socha mai tumhe kuchh nhi bolunga to tum yaha se chale jaoge lekin tum yaha se jane ke bajaye mujhpe apna hath utha diya ab tumhe mujhse koi nhi bachha sakta h
mai- dekho mai yaha kisi se ladne nhi aaya hu bas mai apni bahan ke liye wo dristikarni pusp lene aaya hu isliye mujhe andar jane do nhi to tumhare liye achha nhi hoga
Aghora- dhamki aghora ko dhamki tu marega tu jarur marega mere hath lekin tumhe marne se pahle mai tumpe ek upkar kar de rha hu tu bhi kya yad rakhega ki tumhe kis pret se pala pada tha tum mujhse hara do mai tumhe sirf andar hi jane dunga balki mai khud tumhe us sarowar tak pahucha dunga lekin agar mai jit gya to tumhe tumhari pura pariwar ke sath marna hoga bolo manjur h
mai- ha mujhe manjur h
aghora- to bolo tum mujhse kaise ladna pasand karoge
mai- mai tumse talwar se ladna chahunga lekin tumhe bhagwan bholenath ki sapath lena hoga ki tum is ladai me chhal nhi karoge
aghora- tumhe marne ke liye mujhe kisi bhi chhal ki avasyakta nhi h mujhe apne Aradhya bholenath ka saugandh ki mai koi chal nhi karunga waise tumne marne ke liye achha shastra chuna h

fir aghora ne apna dono hath upar kiya to uske dono hatho me ek ek talwar aa gya fir usne ek talwar mere taraf feka maine us talwar ko utha liya
Aghora- tum soch rhe hoge ki mai to ek pret hu mujhe is talwar se kya hoga lekin mai tumhe ye bata du ki ye talwar koi mamuli talwar nhi h ye talwar se mujhe nukshan pahuch sakta h

fir mai aur wo do bhid gya aapas me hamari talwar aapas me takra rhi thi waha watawaran me sirf hamari talware takarane ki hi awaj aa rhi thi hamari ladai bahut der tak chali akhir me maine use hara hi diya huya darsal aisa ki hamdono aapas me lad rhe the mujhe ladte huye kafi der ho gya tha to mai sochha ab ladai samapt karni chahiye is liye maine apna gurutwakarshan chambar wala speed ka istemal karte huye palak japkate huye uske pass pahucha aur talwar ke muthe se uske pith par war kiya to wo aage jake gira uske girte hi uska talwar uske hath se chhut ke kuchh dur ja gira fir mai bhagte huye uske pass gya aur uske gardan pe apna talwar rakh diya

Mai- bolo apna har mante ho ya nhi agar abki bar talwar chalu to tumhara gardan dhad se alag ho jayega
Aghora- mai apna har swikar karta hu kripya mujhe mere sar ko dhad se alag na kare
mai- thik tum apna har man liya to ab mai themhara sar dhad se agal nhi karunga
aghora- apne mera sir dhad se alag na kar ke mere aur mere bhuto aur preto ke upar upkar kiya h is liye mai apko kuchh dena chahta hu

itna bolke wo apna aankh band kiya to uske sarir se ek roushani nakal ke aaya aur mere andar sama gya aur mere gardan pe ek tatoo ban gya jo is tarah ka tha
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aghora- aaj se aap hamare malik huye aaj se sare bhut pret chahe wo achha ho ya bura sab aapke gulam honge

iske bad wo mujhe lekar us sarowar ke pass gya fir mai us sarowar me snan kiya aur fir waha se mandir me aa gya jab mandir me gaya to dekha ki waha pe ek kamandal rakha huya h to mai use lekar sarowar me chala gya aur usme Pani bharke mandir me aa gya aur shiv ling ko abhisek karne laga

दु:स्वप्नदु:शकुनदुर्गतिदौर्मनस्य,दुर्भिक्षदु‌र्व्यसन दुस्सहदुर्यशांसि।उत्पाततापविषभीतिमसद्ग्रहार्ति,व्याधीश्चनाशयतुमे जगतातमीश:॥

Abhishek karne ke bad mai waha se sarowar ke pass aa gya aur surya udhay hone ka intjar karne laga uska mujhe jyada intjar nhi karna pada bas kuchh der me surya udhay ho gya jaise hi surya udhay huya ki surya ki pahli kiran sidha aake niche ek podhe par padi aur jaise hi surya ki kiran us paudhe par padi usme se ek pusp bahar nikla jo dikhne me kuchh aisa lag rha tha



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maine jab wo pusp dekha to mai khusi ke mare uchalne laga fir mai age badh ke us pusp ko tod liya aur fir mandir me jake bhagwan bhole nath ko pranam kiya aur nikal gya apne ghar ke taraf nikal gya ab mujhe yaha se paidal hi ghar jana tha wo bhi surya dhalne se pahle to mai waha se bhagna satart kiya mai apni puri raftar se bhag rha tha bhagte bhagte mai ek gaon se gujar rha tha ki mujhe ek jagah bahut bhid dikhi aur us bhid se mujhe ek ataur ki rone ki awaj aa rha tha
 
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maine jab wo pusp dekha to mai khusi ke mare uchalne laga fir mai age badh ke us pusp ko tod liya aur fir mandir me jake bhagwan bhole nath ko pranam kiya aur nikal gya apne ghar ke taraf nikal gya ab mujhe yaha se paidal hi ghar jana tha wo bhi surya dhalne se pahle to mai waha se bhagna satart kiya mai apni puri raftar se bhag rha tha bhagte bhagte mai ek gaon se gujar rha tha ki mujhe ek jagah bahut bhid dikhi aur us bhid se mujhe ek aurat ki rone ki awaj aa rha tha
Ab aage
Maine jab us gaon me ek jagah bhid iktha dekha aur usme ek aurat ko rote suna to mujhe waha jane ki ikchha hone lagi lekin mai fir socha ki mere pass samay bahut kam h mujhe surya dhalne se pahle ghar pahuchna h agar mai yaha pe ruka to bina wajah hi mera samay nast hoga ye soch kar mai aage badhne laga lekin mujhe fir se us aurat ki dard bhari rone ki awaj sunayi di mere pair apne aap hi ruk gya fir mai socha ki na jane wo aurat kis pida me ho mujhe jake dekhna chahiye akhir waha itna bhid kyu ikatha h aur wo aurat kyu ro rhi h sayad mai uska koi madad kar saku fir mai waha se us bhid ke taraf nikal gya kuchh der chalne ke bad mai waha pahuch gya aur dekha ki waha pe ek budhi aurat bilakh bilakh ke ro rhi h aur kuchh aurat usko sambhalne me lage huye h to mai waha pe ek admi se puchha

Mai- kaka yaha kya ho rha h aur ye aurat kyu itna ro rhi h

jab mai us admi se puchha to wo pahle mujhe niche se upar tak ghura aur phir bola

Admi- tum kon bhai tum yaha ke to nhi lagte
mai- nhi kaka mai yaha ke nhi hu mai musafir hu aap kripya kar ke ye bataye ki yaha kya ho rha h aur ye aurat ro kyu rhi h
admi- kya batau beta yaha ke agal bagal sare gaon pe musibat aayi huyi h
mai- kaisa musibat kaka toda saf saf bataiye yaha pe kaisi musibat aayi huyi h
admi- yaha aaye din gaon ki kuwari ladkiya gayab ho rhi h agal bagal sare gaon ka yahi hal h aur aaj subah se is bechari ke beti gayab h wo bechari nadi me bartan dhone gyi thi lekin waha wapas nhi lauti
mai-kya kon kar rha h aisa aur kyu
admi- pta nhi beta wo kon h aur use hamlogo se kya dusmani h kyu hamari ladkiyo ko gayab kar rha h
mai- aaplog police me complain nhi kiye abhi tak
admi- sab kuchh kar liye h beta lekin abhi tak kuchh bhi pata nhi chala h aur jo police unko khoj me gye the wo bhi wapas nhi laute
mai- nhi laute matlab kha gye the wo log
admi- wo log jangal ke taraf gye ladkiyo ko dundhte huye lekin wo log tan se wo log bhi gayab h
mai- aisa kaise ho sakta h police kaise gayab ho sakti h jarur koi bat h mujhe pata lagana hoga

fir mai waha us aurat ke pass chala gya aur usko chup karate huye bola

mai- maa ji aap kripya chup rahiye apko is tarah rone se apki ladki wapas nhi lautegi aur upar se apki tabiyat bhi kharab ho jayegi

mai jab itna bola to abki bar pura bhid mere taraf dekhne laga aur apas me khusur fusur karne laga fir unme se jo bujurg the wo bhi us admi wala hi sawal puche tum kon ho kha se aaye ho fir mai unko utar diya aur fir us aurat ko chup karane lga to wo aurat boli

aurat- mai kaise chup rahu beta meri eklauti beti meri jine ka sahara thi wo ab mai kiske sahare jiungi koi to (itna bol ke wo fir se rone lagi aur bolne lagi) koi to meri beti ko lado mai apni beti ke bina nhi ji paungi
bechari roti roti behosh ho gyi to unme se ek aurat ne jaldi se jake pani layi aur us aurat pe dali to wo aurat hosh me aa gyi aur fir se rone lagi aur fir mujhse boli

aurat- beta tum meri ko khoj ke lado kripya is dukhiyari pe raham karo mai gaon walo se kah kah ke thak gyi koi meri beti ko khojne nhi gya
mai- lekin mai kaise mai to ek Musafir hu mujhe yaha ke bare me kuchh bhi nhi malum aur waise bhi mujhe bahut jarur kam h mujhe aaj surya dubne se pahle ghar jana h jaruri h
aurat- beta mai tumhare aage hath jodti hu mai tumhara pair padti hu kripya meri beti ko dhundh ke la do mai tumhari jindagi bhar gulami karungi

mai ab yaha dubidha me pas gya kya kru mai kuchh samajh me nhi aa rha tha mere pass samay bhi nhi bacha tha fir mai kuchh sochte huye us aurat se bola

Mai- thik h mata ji mai apki beti ko aaj dhundhne jaunga aur mai apko bachan deta hu ki use dhundh ke sahi salamat apke pass launga ab aap chup ho jaiye aur bhagwan bholenath pe Biswas kijiye
aurat- sach sach me tum meri beti ko dhundhoge meri beti wapas mere pass aa jayegi ab ab mai bikul nhi roungi ha bilkul nhi roungi meri beti mere pass aa jayegi meri beti

wo aurat meri bat sun ke bahut khus ho gyi fir mai waha se uth ke jane laga tabhi mujhe ek admi ne bulaya aur bola

admi- tum sach me us ladki ko dhundhne jaoge
mai- ha mai sach me use dhundhne jaunga aur use dhundh ke launga bhi
admi- dekho tum ek Musafir honaur hamare mehman bhi is liye mai kahta hu use dhundhne mat jao kyuki aaj tak ladkiyo ko khojne jo bhi gya wo wapis nhi aaya is liye mai is gaon ke mukhiya hone ke nath tumhe samjha rha hu( ab mai us admi ko mukhiya likhunga)
mai- mujhe apne pran se jyada priye mera vachan h samajh gye aur mai us ladki ke maa ko wachan de diya hu ab mai piche nhi hatunga
mukhiya- thik mujhe samjhna kam tha maine samjha diya ab tum jano aur tumhara kam jane mujhe agar kisi tarah ka sahayta chahiye to bata dena
mai- mukhiya ji mujhe aap bas itna bata dijiye ki ladkiya gayab kha se hoti h
mukhiya- nadi ke kinare se
mai- nadi ke kinare se lekin kaise
mukhiya- ladkiya nadi me nahane kapda dhone ya bartan saf karne jati h tabhi waha se gayab ho jati h mujhe lagta h ki un ladkiyo ko jangal me le jaya jaya h
mai- apko aisa kyu laga
mukhiya- kyuki jangal waha se pass me h aur agar un ladkiyo ko idhar se le jate to koi na koi jarur dekha hota
mai- hmm apki bat to sahi h mujhe pahle jangal me hi dekhna hoga

Fir mai waha se nikal gya us jangal ke taraf aur un ladkiyo ko dundhne laga mai ladkiyo ko dhundhate huye jangal ke kafi andar aa gya lekin mujhe wo log kahi nhi dekhe mujhe unhe dhundhte huye kafi samay hi gya tha ab mujhe tenson hone laga ki mai kaise un ladkiyo ko dhundhu ab mere pass samay bhi jyada nhi bacha tha kyuki mujhe aaj suryast se pahle ghar bhi pahuchna tha mai abhi soch hi rha tha ki tabhi mujhe kalketu ka yad aaya to mai turant kalketu ko yad kiya agle hi pal wo mere samne tha

kalketu- hukum kare mere akka apne mujhe kis prayojan se bulaya h
mai- kalketu tumhe ek kam karna h yaha aas pas ke gaon ki ladkiya gayab ho rhi h aur mujhe aisa lag rha h ki wo ladkiya yahi is jangal me h lekin mujhe mil nhi rhi h kya them pata laga sakte ho wolog kha h
kalketu- ji mere aka mai abhi pata kar ke batata hu

fir kalketu ne apna aankh band kiya aur pura jangal ko nirakshan karne laga kuchh der nirakshan karne ke bad wo apni aankhe khola aur bola

kalketu- akka mujhe is jangal me ladkiya Kah nhi dikhe parantu
mai- parantu kya kalketu
kalketu- parantu akka is jangal me ek aisi jagah h jaha mera dristi nhi ja paa rhi h
mai- aisi kon si jagah h jaha tum bhi nhi dekh paa rhe ho
kalketu- ek gufa h akka mai us gufa ke andar nhi dekh pa rha hu aur aise tabhi hota h jab waha koi suraksha kawach lagaya ho mujhe aisa lag rha h wo ladkiya wahi uske andar hi h
mai- to thik tum mujhe usngufa tak pahucha do
kalketu- jo hukum mere akka

fir kalketu ne mujhe wahanpe pahucha diya jaha wo gufa tha fir maine kalketu ko ghar jane ko bol diya iske bad mai us gufa ko dhyan se dekhne laga jo dikhne me is tarah ka tha



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Us gufa ko dhyan se dekhne ke bad mai usme andar jane ke liye aage badha aur jaise hi mai us gufa me pahla pair rakha to mujhe ek jo ka jhtka laga aur udte huye piche jake gira pahle to mujhe samajh me hi nhi aaya ki mere sath kya huya fir thodi der bad mujhe samajh me aaya ki ye jhatka mujhe us suraksha kawach ke chalte laga h fir mai us suraksha kawach ko todne ke liye sochne laga ki use kaise toda jaye fir mujhe ek upay sujha to mai wahi dhyan me baith gya aur gurudev ko yad kiya fir gurudev ne mujhe darshan diye

Gurudev- kho putra tum mujhe kis liye yad kiya
mai- pranam gurudev
gurudev- tathastu putra
mai- gurudev mujhe aaj apke sikhaye dhanur vidhya ati avasyak h is liye mai apse dhanur vidya ki upyog karne ki anumati chahta hu aur apka asirwad bhi chahta hu
gurudev- tum mere kuchh bhi sikhaye vidya ke prayog karne ke liye mere anumati ki awasyakta nhi h tum usko prayog ke liye ajad ho sirf itna dhyan me rakhna ki is vidhya ka galat prayog nhi karna jao putra apna kartvya kro vijayi bhav

fir mai gurudev ko pranam kar ke utha gya aur apne aankh band kar ke ek mantra bola aur fir apna hath upar kiya aur bola vijayi dhanus prakat ho mera itna Kate hi asman me bijaliya kadkane lagi aur fir asman se ek bijal sidhe mere taraf aane lagi wo bijali mere tak pahuchte pahuchte ek dhanus me badal gya jo dikhne me aisa tha




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fir vijayi dhanus mere hatho me aa gye maine usko leke pahle apne sar se lagay aur pranam kiya iske bad mai usko upar utha ke apna aankh band kiya aur aur ek mantra padha iske bad bola indrastra prakat ho fir mere dhanus pe indrastra aa gya fir mai dhanus ko niche kiya aur us gufa ke barwaja pe nishana laga ke dhanus pratyancha khicha aur chod diya mere dhanus se intrastra nikal aur apne tribra gati se gufa ke dravaje pe jo kavach tha usse takraya aur ek bhayankar bispot huya uska awaj itna bhayanak tha ki pura jangal kap gya wah charo taraf dhul hi dhul tha fir maine apna dhanus gayab kiya aur aage badh gya aur us gufa me andar chala gya abhi mai kuch hi andar gya tha ki mujhe kisi ne jabardast panch mara jisse mai udta huya piche gya aur ek ped se takra gya fir mujhe ek karkash awaj sunayi di

awaj- kiska kiska itna dusahas ki mera jaduyi suraksha kawach ko toda aaj wo yaha se jinda wapas nhi jayega
mai- kon h jo chhip ke war kar rha h aur bada bada bhasan kar rha h dam h to samne aa

mai abhi itna hi bola tha ki waha ek bahut hi bhayank dikhne wala rakshas prakat hu jo dikhne me aisa tha



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Wo itna bhayanak tha ki koi kamjor dil wala admi hota to use dekhte hi mar jata fir uske piche ek ek karke 10 aur rakshas prakat huye wo bhi dikhne me utna hi bhayanak the jitna ki ye pahle wala raksas tha mera unko dekhte hi halat kharab ho gya mai agar ye log ke hath lag jau to ye mere noch noch ke kha jayenge fir wo log ka najar mere upar pada to jo rakshas samane tha wo haste huye bola

raksas- (haste huye) hahahahah manush bhojan manush bhojan maja aayega tujhe khane me hahahahah ( fir guse me ) tumhare itni himat ki mere suraksha kawach ko toda
mai- tum jo koi bhi ho hat jao mere samne se mujhe is gufa me andar jana h nhi to tum logo ke liye achha nhi hoga
rakshas- murkh mujhe dhamki de rha h mujhe mere hi gufa se hatne ko bol rha h

wo itna hi bol kar guse se mere taraf bada aur mere sine par ek punch mara jisse mai udta huya piche jake gira uska war itna jabardast tha ki koi bhi manusya us war ko sah nhi pata lekin mujhe to mere Aradhya bhagwan shiv ka vardan prapt tha isliye kuchh nhi huya mai uth ke khada ho gya wo mujhe kuchh na huya dekh kar guse se pagal ho gya aur bola

rakshas- wo to tum mayabi bhi ho chalo achha h tumhe marne me aur bhi maja aayega lo ab isse bacho

itna bol ke wo apna hath aage kiya to uske hath me ek bahut bada aag ka gola aa gya wo us gole ko mere upar chhod diya wo gola aake sidha mujhe takaraya aur...


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rakshas- wo to tum mayabi bhi ho chalo achha h tumhe marne me aur bhi maja aayega lo ab isse bacho

itna bol ke wo apna hath aage kiya to uske hath me ek bahut bada aag ka gola aa gya wo us gole ko mere upar chhod diya wo gola aake sidha mujhe takaraya aur...
Ab Aage
wo aag ka gola jaise hi mujhse takraya to ek bahut bada bisfot huya aur charo taraf dhuya hi dhuya fail gya wo rakshas ne jab dekha ki mere charo taraf dhuya fail gya to wo socha ki mai mar gya aur wo jor jor se hasne laga

Rakshas- ha hahahah ek tukchh manusya mujhse takrane chala tha sala mar gya hahhahahh

wo abhi khusi hi mana raha tha ki mere pass se dhuya hat gya to uska dhyan mere taraf gya to dekha ki mujhe kuchh nhi huya h mai sahi salamat apne jagah pe khada hu wo mujhe kuchh na huya dekh kar ascharya ho gya aur bola

rakshas- asambhav nhi nhi ye nhi ho sakta tum mere war se nhi bach sakte ye ye kaise ho gya tum kaise bach gye
mai- tum mujhe aise chhote mote war se kuchh nhi kar sakte aur waise bhi tumne suna hoga jake rakhe sainya mar sake na koy
rakshas- tum jarur koi mayabi hi ho mai tumhe ek tukchh manusya samajhne ki galti kar di lekin ab tum mere war se nhi bachoge

itna bolke wo apna hath upar uthaya aur uske hath me ek bijli ka gola aa gya aur wo gola mujhpe chhod diya wo gola sidhe aake mujhse takraya lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nhi huya ye sab mere Bholenath ke vardan ke karan ho rha tha jo unhone mujhe diye the ki tumhe panch tatva ki sakti se koi bhi hani nhi hoga chahe ho sachai ki sakti ho ya burai ki jab us rakshas ne dekha ki uski ek aur sakti bekar chali gyi to use bahut jyada krodh aane laga aur wo krodh me pagal ho gya fir ane sathiyo ko bola jo us manusya ko mar ke layega use aaj khane me 5 manusya diye jayenge ye sun kar sare rakshas apna katar le kar mere taraf bhagte huye mujhe marne aane lage mai unhe apne taraf aata dekh ek bar fir vijay dhanuch ko yad kiya aur apna hath upar kiya mere hath upar karte hi wo mera dhanus me hath me aa gya fir mai dhanus ko wo log ke samne karte huye pratyancha khicha to usne apne aap tir aa gya aur mai use in rakshaso par chhod diya wo tir aage jane ke bad teen tir me badal gya aur teen rakshaso ko laga lekin un rakshaso ko kuchh nhi huya ye dekh kar sare rakshas hasne lage mai ye dekh kar ascharya huya fir maine socha ki ye aise nhi marenge mujhe inpe divyastro ka prayog karna hoga fir maine apne dhanus ko upar uthaya aur agni dev ko Asmaran kar ke agnyastra ko avahan kiya mere avahan karte hi agnyastra mere dhanus me aa gya fir maine us astra ko un rakshos par chhod diya dekhte hi dekhte us leadar ko chhod kar sare rakshas jal ke mar gye ye dekh kar un rakshaso ka leader guse me pagal ho gya aur mujhse bola
rakshas- tune mere sathiyo ko mar kar achha nhi kiya ab tum iska dand avasya bhugtoge mai pahle tumhe asan maut dena chahta tha lekin ab tumhe mai thadpa thadpa ke marunga

itan bolke wo anpe hath ko aage kar ke apna muthi ko band kiya aur apna aankh band kar ke kuchh mantra padhne laga to uske hath ke charo taraf ek kale rang ka aag utpan hone laga aur wo dhire dhire bada hone laga fir us rakshas ne apna aankh khol ke mere taraf dekha aur bola

rakshas- ab tum mere is sakti se bach ke dikhao

itna bolke ke wo us kale rang ke aag ke gole ko mere taraf chhod diya aur wo aag ka gola tribra gati se mere taraf aane laga
maine jab dekha ki wo gola mere taraf tribra gati se badh rha h to maine varun dev ka astra varunastra ka avahan kiya aur fir us varunastra ko us gole par chhod diya jab dono sakti apas me takraya to woha ek bada sa visfot huya fir isi tarah us rakshas ne apna aneko sakti se me re upar prahar kiya lekin mai sab ko bich me hi apne divyastro se kat diya mujhe usse yudh karte huye kafi samay bit gya to mai sochha ki aab mujhe es yudh ko katham karna chahiye is liye maine bhagwan bhisnu ko dhayan karke narayanastra ko avahan kiya aur use use rakshas pe chhod diya wo narayanastra thoda aage jake ek chakra me badal gya aur teji se us raksas ki or badhne laga aur kuchh hi pal me us rakshas ka sar dhad se alag kar ke gayab ho gya jab maine dekha ki rakshas mar gya to mai us gufa me chala gya thodi der chalne ke bad dekha ki sare ladkiya waha pe behos padi thi mai unhe hos me lane ke liye waha pe idhar udhar pani dekhne laga to mujhe kahi pani nhi dikha to maine apna dhanus ke pratyancha kicha to usne tir aa gya aur mai wo tir ko dharti me mar diya jisse dharti se pani aane laga fir mai apna dhanus ko gayab kar diya iske bad mai wo pani lekar sare ladkiyo pe chhita mara to sare ladkiya dhire dhire hos me aane lagi
fir kuchh der ke bad sari ladkiya hos me aa gyi aur mujhe waha dekh ke darne aur rone lagi fir sari ladkiya rote huye mujhse boli please mujhe jane dijiye mujhe mat mariye mai wo log ko aise rote aur mujhe darte huye dekha to mai bola

mai- dekho mujhe darne ki jarurat nhi h mai tumhe yaha se bachha ke tumhare pahuchane aaya hu is liye aaplog mujhse dariye nhi aur mere sath chaliye

mera itna kahne ke bad wo log chup ho gyi aur mere sath chalne lagi fir hamlogo ko kuchh der chalne ke bad wo gaon me aa gye jaha mujhe wo aurat mili thi fir mai waha jake sare gaon walo ko bulaya sare gaon wale waha pe ladkiyo ko sahi salamat dekh ke kush ho gye wo khusi se nachane lage fir wo aurat mere pass aayi aur mere pair chhune lagi to mai use hatate huye bola

Mai- maa ji ye aap kya kar rhi h aap mere pair chhu ke mujhe pap ki bhagedari kyu bana rhi h maa ji apka hath mujhe asirwad dene ke liye uthna chahiye naki mere pair chhune ke liye
aurat- aap manusya nhi koi farista h apne meri beti ke sath sath pure gaon ke ladkiyo ko apne jan dav pe laga ke bachaya h mai apki sada abhari rahungi
mai- nhi mata ji mai koi farista nhi hu mai ek sadharan sa manusya hu aur bat ye ladkiyo ko bachane ki to ek mansuya hone ke nate ye mera kartvya tha mai koi apke upar upkar nhi kiya ye mera dharm tha ek manusya hone ke nate
aurat- yahi apki bate aur apka karya to apko farista banata h ab kripya aap aaj mere yaha ruk ke apki seva ka ek mauka dijiye
mukhiya- ha beta aaj aap is gaon me rahkar hame hamare seva ka ek mauka dijiye
mai- nhi mukhiya ji ye sambhav nhi h mujhe kisi karya hetu aaj Sam tak ghar pahuchna jaruri h is liye mujhe chhama kare mujhe abhi yaha se jana hoga aur aap in ladkiyo ko unke ghar tak pahucha dijiyega

gaon wale mujhse bahut binati ki waha aaj ke rat rukne ke liye lekin mai waha ab ek bhi pal nhi rukna chahta tha kyuki mera bahut time bilanb ho gya tha ab mere pass sirf 5 ghanta hi bacha tha ghar pahuchne ke liye aur ye panch ghanta ne mujhe ghar tak pahuchna asambhav lag rha tha fir bhi mujhe pyas to karna hi tha ab mai bhagwan se yahi duya kar rha tha ki raste me koi aur adchan na aaye fir mai waha sab se anumati lekar aage nikal gya
wahi dusre taraf chhir sagar me bhagwan vishnu apne saiya pe soye huye dhyan me the aur mata lakshami unki pair daba rhi thi bhagwan vishnu aankh band kiye huye muskura rhe the
unhe is tarah muskurata dekh mata laxmi raha nhi gya aur unhone bhagwan vishnu se puchha

Mata- mai aapko kab se yu hi muskurata huya dekh rhi ho isliye hey prabhu kripya aap apne is das ko apne muskan ka rahasya se avgat karvaiye
Prabhu- mai mere Aradhya prabhu bholenath ke ansh ko dekh kar muskura rha hu
Mata- aap khi aditya ka bat to nhi kar rhe h
Prabhu- ha priye mai bagwan shiv ke ansh aditya ke karya ko dekh kar hi muskura raha hu
Mata- aisa usne kon karya kiya h prabhu jise dekh kar aap muskura rahe h
Prabhu- uska manusyo ke prati niswarth karya ko dekh kar mujhe prasanta ho rhi h
Wo aaj himalya se dristi karni pusp lekar apne ghar ja rha tha raste me wo ek gaon me gya jaha kuchh din se us gaon ke ladkiyo ko rakshas utha ke le ja rhe the aditya ye jante huye bhi agar wo unlogo ki madad karega to use apne manjil tak pahuchne me der ho sakti h fir bhi wo un logo ka madad kiya mai jab ye dekha to mere chehre par apne aap hi muskan aa gya
Mata- mai ye nhi manti ki wo manusyo ke prati niswarth bhav se unka sahyog karta h wo bhale hi bhagwan shiv ka ansh h lekin h to ek manusya hi na
Prabhu- nhi priye mai jo bola wo satya h wo jo bhi kisi ke liye karta h niswarth bhav se hi karta h wo ek nek dil insan h uske dil me thoda bhi kapat ya kisi ke liye bair bhav nhi rahta na use kisi chij ke liye koi lobh h chahe to aap uska pariksha le sakte h
Mata- to thik h swami aaj aap khud uska pariksha lijiye aur ye sidh kar dijiye ki jo aap bole wo satya h
Prabhu- thik h mai aaj aditya ka pariksha lunga lekin kaise ye apko ya kisi ko bhi nhi pta chalega aur aaj ye sidh bhi ho jayega ki wo is sansar ka rakshak banne yogya h ya nhi
Mata-thik h swami lekin mujhe ek bat samajh me nhi aayi ki wo rakshas un ladkiyo ko agwa kyu kar rhe the
Prabhu- wo rakshas rakshaso ka raja trisura ka sena me se the jo apne senapati ke adesh pe ladkiyo ko agwa kar ke wo apne lok le jana chahte the taki jab trisura kaid se ajad ho to un ladkiyo ko bali de sake lekin ajane me hi sahi aditya apne lakshya ki aur badh chuka h
Mata- ye to wahi trisura h na jise hajaro sal pahle apne aur bhagwan shiv ne kaid kiya tha jise marna aap dono ke bas me bhi nhi h
Prabhu- ha priye ye wahi trisura h jise swam bhagwan shiv aur bhramdev se bardan prapt h jo amar na hoke bhi amar h (ye aage chal ke pata chalega ki usko kya vardan prapt h jiske chalte wo amar na hoke bhi amar h jise bhagwan vishnu aur mahadev bhi nhi mar sakte h ) agar apki bate khatam ho gyi ho to kya mai ja sakta hu aditya ke pariksha ke liye
lakshami- ha ha aap ka sakte h maine apko kab roka h

iske bad bhagwan vishnu waha se antradhyan ho jate h
ab chalte h dusre taraf asurlok me jaha dristdhum Yuvraj ke singhasan pe baitha tha tabhi waha senapati bhagte huye aaya aur darte huye bola

senapati- yyyuuuvraj aaappp chhama kre to ek bat batana chahta hu
dristdhum- thik h mai tumhe chhama dan deta hu batao kya bat h
senapati- wo wo Yuvraj dharti lok pe hamne jo sena bheja tha use waha kisi ne mar diya h
dristdhum- asambhav ye namumkin h dharti lok ke manusyo me itna samarth nhi ki wo asur lok ke sena ko prajit kar sake
senapati- ye stya h Yuvraj ki waha ke manusyo me itna samarth nhi h fir bhi waha hamara sena mara gya
dristdhum- hmmm ye sochne wali bat h ye jarur devtao ka koi chal h jarur isme devtao ka koi hath h lekin mai kisi ko nhi chhodunga chahe wo koi bhi ho manusya ho ya devta jisne bhi hamare sena ko mara h usko mrityu dand milega bidhutjiva ko bulaya jaye

fir senapati waha se chala gya aur todi der bad waha bidhutjiva ko lekar aa gya bidhutjiva dikhne me itna bhayanak tha ki achho achho ka use dekhte hi pran pakhedu us jaye uske pure sarir se bijali nikal rha tha iska bijali itna khatanak tha ki agar wo kisi ko bas chhu bhi jaye wo rakh ban jaye
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Bidhutjiva aane ke bad Yuvraj ke aage jhuk gya aur bola

bidyutjiva- Yuvraj ki jay ho Yuvraj aapke mujhe kaise yad kiya
dristdhum- bidyutjiva tumhe dharti lok jana hoga aur waha pe pata lagana h ki hamare rakshaso ko waha pe kisne mara h aur use pata laga ke bahut darnak mauth dena h use samajh gye
bidyutjiva- samajh gya Yuvraj chahe wo koi bhi ho is bidyutjiva ke bijali se bach nhi sakta mujhe jane ka anumati de Yuvraj
Dristdhum- thik h tum jao aur sath me kuchh sainik bhi lete jana
bidyutjiva- jo agya Yuvraj

itna bolke bidyutjiva gayab ho jata h
 
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bidyutjiva- samajh gya Yuvraj chahe wo koi bhi ho is bidyutjiva ke bijali se bach nhi sakta mujhe jane ka anumati de Yuvraj
Dristdhum- thik h tum jao aur sath me kuchh sainik bhi lete jana
bidyutjiva- jo agya Yuvraj

itna bolke bidyutjiva gayab ho jata h
Ab Aage
Mai us gaon se nikal ke apne manjil ki or badh gya mai teji se bhagte huye ja rha tha kyuki mere pass samay bahut kam tha aur manjil bahut dur mai apne Aradhya bhagwan bholenath se binati kar rha tha ki ab raste me mujhe aur koi adchan na aaye mai bhagte huye kabhi dur Nikal aaya tha aur mai is samay ek jangal me tha mai abhi is jangal me kuchh dur gya hi tha ki mujhe mujhe ek ladke ki awaj sunayi di wo jor jor se madad ke liye pukar raha tha

awaj- bachao bachao koi to mujhe bachao

mai us awaj ko sun ke ruk gya aur apne aap se bola lagta h aaj mai samay se ghar nhi pahuch paunga
aur fir mai us awaj ke taraf nikal gya kuch dur jane ke bad dekha ki ek ladke ko kuchh lutere mar pit kar rhe the aur wo ladka unse bachane ki liye hath pao chala rha tha wo ladka kaphi ghayal ho gya tha mai ye dekh kar guse me un lutero ko bola

mai- apni jan ki salamati chahte ho to chhod do us ladke ko aur bhag jao yaha se

meri awaj sun ke pahle to lutere dar gye phir idhar udhar dekhne lage jab wo logo ka najar mere upar gya to wo log mujhe dekh ke hasne lage aur usme se ek lutera jo unka boss lag rha tha wo bola

lutera- ha ha ha ha dekho ek pidi bhar ka ladka hame jan se marne ki dhamki de rha h aaj bhagwan bahut khus h hampe aaj ek aur musafir mil gya hame lutne ko hahahah
Ladka- kripya hame in darindo se bacha lijiye nhi to ye hame mar dalenge
mai- tum chinta nhi kro mitra mai tumhe inse bachha lunga
Lutera- ye tumhe mujhe bachayega pahle ye khud hamse bach ke dikhaye tab na tumhe bachayega padka lo sale ko
mai- mai tumlogo ko aakhari bar bol rha hu bhag jao yaha se nhi to bad me bahut pachhtaoge

mera bat sun ke wo lutere guse se mere taraf badhne lage mai unhe apne tarah padhta dekh ke unse ladne ke liye taiyar ho gya wo mere taraf aake jaise hi mujhe pakadana chaha mai do lutere ko ek ek jhap mara wo wahi gir ke behos ho gye ye dekh kar baki lutere acharya se mujhe dekhne lage aur thoda dar bhi gye ki mai kaise dono ko ek jhap me behos kar diya fir in lutero ka jo boss tha wo guse me mujhse bola

lutera-tumne bahut badi galti kar di mere admi par hath utha ke mai to pahle tumhare pass ka saman lut ke tumhe chhod dena chahta tha lekin ab tumhe mai jinda nhi chodunga (fir apne admiyo se) mar dalo isko ye bachna nhi chahiye agar ye bach gya to tumlog mere hath se nhi bachoge

uski bat sun ke lutere mere taraf apne apne talwar leke aane lage unme se do lutera apne hath me talwar ko majbut se pakadte huye mere taraf dod ke aane lage aur me pass aake ek ne mere upar talwar chalayi to maine niche jhukte huye uske jis hath me talwar tho wo pakad liya tabtak dusra admi talwar chalane pe huya isse pahle hi maine usko ek lat uske pet me mara jisse wo udta huya piche jake gira aur behos ho gya fir maine jiska hath pakda tha usko ek jhap uske kanpati ke niche mara wo bhi bechara wahi gir ke behos ho gya ye dekh kar baki jo lutere bache the sab ek sath mujhpe tut pade mai bhi mai bhi ek ek ko jam kar dhoya abhi mai inhe pit hi rha tha ki jo do lutere us ladke ko padke the usko piche ki taraf Dhaka deke mere taraf aane lage ye log jab us ladke ko Dhaka diya to wo ladka piche ki taraf jhadi pe gira aur wo jhadi katila tha is liye jab wo ladko uspe gira to us jhadi ke khante us ladke ke dono aankho me chala gya us ladke ko itna jyada dard huya ki wo bechara chila bhi na paya aur wahi behos ho gya
mai idhar inhe pit pit ke behos kar diya tha ab lutero mese sirf teen hi bache the ek unka boss aur do wo log jo us ladke ko pakde the jo abhi mere taraf badh rhe the mai un teeno ko bhi mar mar ke behos kar diya fir mai us ladke ke taraf gya to dekha ki wo niche gir ke behos pada h mai bhagte huye uske pass gya to dekha ki uske dono aankho me kanta ghusa huya h mai ye dekh kar ghabra gya mujhe laga ki ye ladka mar gya aur wahi baith ke rone laga aur khud se bolne laga

Mai- Maine ye kya kar diya mai ek ladke ko bhi bacha nhi paya mai rakshak ke name pe kalank hu mai chahta to ise bacha sakta tha ab mai kya karu maine bahut bada pap kiya h mai rakshak banane ke kabil nhi hu jab mai ek ladke ko nhi bacha paya to mai is sansar ko kaise bacha paunga

abhi mai rote huye apne aap ko kose hi ja rha tha ki tabhi us ladke ko hoss aa jata h aur wo karahne lagta h mai use hos me aaya dekh bahut jyada khus ho gya wo ladka karahte huye bola

ladka- aah ye dard ye dard meri jan le legi aah kuchh kijiye sahab aah kripya kuchh kar ke meri dard ko kam kijiye aah nhi to ye meri jan le legi aah
mai- thik h mitra mai kuchh jadi buti leke aata hu kripya tab tak tum dhairya rakho

phir mai wahi us jandal me jadi buti jisse uska dard kam ho use khojne laga mujhe waha dard me kam karne wala teen jadi buti mila jo chhatriya , brahni aur asgan tha mai teeno ko le kar us ladke ke pass aa gya aur teeno ko mila kar ek pathar pe pis kar uska ras nikala aur us ladke ko pilaya fir kuchh der me uska dard kam ho gya to maine usse bola

Mai- mujhe maf kar dena mitra mai tumhari raksha nhi kar paya
ladka- aap mujhse mafi mang ke mujhe pap ke bhagidari nhi banaye aapne to mujhe bachhane ka bahut pryas kiya lekin upar wale ka yahi marji tha ki mai bas itna hi dekh pau

Itna bol ke wo bechara rone laga fir mai kisi tarah usko chhup karaya aur bola

Mai- mitra tum apne ghar ka pata bata do mai tumhe waha pe chhod deta hu
ladka- (rote huye) nhi bhai mai ab ghar ja kar kya karunga mai ab apni budi ma ke upar bhoj nhi banana chahta mai majduri karta tha to do wakt ka roti kamata tha aab to meri aankhe bhi nhi rahi ab mai apne budi maa ko kya khilaunga ab mai apni maa pe bhoj nhi banana chahta

uski bad sun ke mujhe bhi aansu aane laga

Mai- mitra tum agar apne ghar nhi jaoge to phir kha jaoge
ladka- aap mujhe yahi chhod do mai yahi se khi chala jaunga ya phir kisi jangali janwar ka sikar ban jaunga lekin ab mai ghar nhi jaunga aap chale jao

Mai- ye kaisi bate kar rhe ho mitra aise marna to kayarta hoga chalo tum ghar pe chalo upar wale ne chaha to sab thik ho jayega
ladka- nhi ab kuchh thik nhi hoga kya meri aankhe wapas aa jayegi nhi na aur mai agar ghar pe jata hu to meri maa ne agar dekh liya ki meri aankhe nhi h to wo apni jan de degi nhi mai ghar nhi jaunga aur aap yadi upar wale ko itna hi mante ho to unse bolo ki meri aankhe wapas kar de

itna bol ke wo ladka fut fut ke rone laga uski halat aur uski bat sun ke rona to mujhe bhi aa rha tha lekin mai apne aap ko sambhal ke rakha tha fir mai socha ki agar iski aankh ki raushani aa jaye to sab sahi ho jayega aur ye possible tabhi hoga jab dristi karni pusp se iski aankhe thik hi aur mere pass to dristi karni pusp hai hi lekin ise to mai apne bahan ke liye leke ja rha hu fir mere man me dwandh chalne laga

dil- are iski aankhe to dristi karni pusp se thik ho sakti h
dimag- Ha thik to ho sakti h lekin abhi dristi karni pusp aayega kha se
dil- kyu ek h na apne pass
dimag- Ha h lekin wo apni bahan ke liye leke ja rha hu
dil- to kya huya usko kisi aur tarike se thik karne ki kosis karunga abhi is pusp ki sabse jyada jaruri is ladki ko h
dimag- nhi iski jarurat meri bahan ko bhi itna hi h kyuki bechari ne bahut kuchh Saha h aur agar usko uski aankh nhi thik huya to usko ham par se Biswas uth jayega
dil- nhi isko jyada jarurt h kyuki agar iski aankh nhi thik huya to ye kam nhi kar payega aur agar kam nhi kar payega to ye aur iski maa bhukhe mar jayegi aur ye bat meri bahan ko bhi manjur nhi hoga ki uske chalte kisi ki jan jaye is liye final h ki ab iski aankh ki raushani is dristi karni pusp se laya jay
dimag- tumhari bat bhi sahi h hame iske aankh ki raushani pahle lana chahiye apni bahan ko thik karne ke liye koi aur upay sochenge

fir maine us ladke se bola

mai- tum chinta mat karo mitra mai abhi tumhari aankho ki raushani wapas lata hu
ladka- kyu majak kar rhe ho mitra ye kaise ho sakta h kya aap vaidh ho ya fir jadugar jo meri aankho ki raushani laa sakte ho aab meri aankhe kabhi thik nhi ho sakta h
Mai- mai majak nhi kar rha mitra aur na hi mai koi vaidh ya jadugar hu bas mere pass ek aushadhi h jisse aankhe thik ho jati h
Ladka- (khus hote huye) kya aisa ho sakta h agar aap aisa kar sakte h to aapka mere upar bahut upakar hoga

Fir mai us dristi karni pusp ko nikal kar uske aankh ke pass le ja kar usko masal kar ke us mese ras nikala aur us ras ko uske dono aankho me dal diya tabhi uska aankh chamakane laga aur uske aankho se roushani nikalne lagi wo raushani itna tibra ho gya ki meri aankhe band ho gyi tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunayi di

Awaj - uttam ati uttam putra




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