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Mera story apko kaisi lag rahi h

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Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki achanak ek din...
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Subah ka time tha suresh office jane ki taiyari kar rha tha aur aditya so rha tha ki achanak puspa ko chakar aane lga aur bechari gir ke behosh ho suresh usko behosh ho kar girte dekh liya aur o puspa... chilate huye dorkar uske pass gya aur usko utha ke gadi me lekar hospital ki taraf chala gya hospital me puspa ka chekup hone lga kuch der bad use hos aa gya phir doctor aake bola Mubarak ho aap bap banane wale h ye sunkar suresh bahut khus huya aur puspa ke pass jakar uske aankho me dekhte huye bola

Suresh- aaj mai bahut khus hu ki mere ghar me laxmi aane wali h
Puspa- thodi sarmati huyi aapko kaise pata ki laxmi hi aayegi ladka bhi ho sakta h
Suresh- mera dil kahta h mujhe beti hi milegi aur mujhe beti hi chahiye kyuki beta to pahle hi ghar pe h bas ek beti ki kami thi
Puspa- ha aap sahi kah rhe h meri ek beta to h hi mujhe bhi beti hi chahiye mai bhagwan se yahi duya karungi ki beti hi ho kyuki aditya ko bhi khelne ke liye ek bahan mil jayegi

Aaj suresh aur puspa bahut khus the phir dactor se chhuti lekar ghar aa gye suresh ab ghar me ek nokarani rakh liya tha ghar ka kam karne ke liye ab suresh puspa ko kam karne nhi deta tha isi tarah samay bitne lga aaj puspa ko pregnant huye 9 month ho gya tha ab aditya bhi chalne lga tha aur totli aavaj me bat bhi karne lga tha aise hi hasi khusi se inka pariwar chal rha tha ki achanak ek din puspa ko pain start ho gya us samay suresh office me tha udhar puspa ko bahut hi pain ho rha tha idhar suresh ko baichani hone lga usko kam me man hi nhi lag rha tha to socha thora ghar pe bat kar lu phir suresh ghar pe call kiya to uska nokarani phon uthai or boli sahab maidam ko pain start ho gya h aap ghar jaldi aa jaiye phir suresh waha se jaldi hi ghar aa jata h aur puspa ko lekar hospital ke liye nikal jata h

Dusri taraf

Himalay pe kuchh rishi dhyan me baithe the tabhi ek rishi ka dhyan tut jata h aur chehre pe muskan aa jata h jise ek rishi dekh leta h aur puchta h

(Note-ye rishi aur koi nhi guru parsuram h)

Rishi- guruji aaj apke chehre par muskan kyu h abhi to aap dhyan me the
Guruji- mai is liye khus hu putra ki ab wakt aa gya h rakshak ki sakti ke janam ka jo mata parvati ki ansh hogi ab mujhe jana hoga waha phir guru ji waha se gayab ho gye

Idhar hospital me suresh baichani se idhar udhar ghum rha tha udhar puspa ko bahut jyada dard ho rha tha bechari dard se chila rhi thi ki achanak uska dard kam ho gya sath me ek bachi ki rone ki awaj Anne lgi yani bache ka janam ho gya aur bache ko janam lete hi pura room me prakash phial gya aur usi wakt samay ruk gya phir waha pe guru parsuram aa gye aur us bachi ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse o prakash bachi me jane lga jab sara prakash us bachi me chala gya to guru ji gayab ho gye phir se samay chalne laga bahar suresh ke pass ek narse aayi aur boli Mubarak ho aapko ek pyar si ladki huyi h jise sun suresh khus ho gya aur bhag kar puspa ke pass gya aur bachi ko god me utha liya bachi apne papa dekh muskurane lgi jisse suresh usi me kho gya phir uska dhyan puspa pe gya jo suresh ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi

Puspa- aise kya dekh rhe ho ji
Suresh - dekh rha hu ki meri beti kitni sundar h bilkul tumhari tarah isse najar hi nhi hat rha h
Puspa- (sarmate huye ) dhat ji aap kuchh bhi bolte ho achha aap kya to h n
Sureah- mai maito bahut khus hu puspa aaj mera pariwar pura ho gye thank u puspa mujhe itna pyari ladki dene ke liye aur meri life me aane ke liye aaj mai bahut khus hu
Puspa- ye to mera saubhagya h ho aap ke jaisa pati mujhe mila aditya jaisa beta aur iske jaise pyari beti


Phir hospital se discharge leke suresh aur puspa ghar aa gye aaj unke ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unke ghar me laxmi aayi thi jab ye log ghar me pahuche to aditya dodte huye aa aur apni totali awaj me puchha
Aditya- papa ye ton h
Suresh- beta ye mai tumhare liye dol laya hu
Aditya-ye mela dol aa dya mela dol aa dya mummy mele dol ko mudhe do na
Puspa- abhi nhi beta abhi tum bahut chhote ho jab bade ho jaoge tab tumhe dunga thik h
Aditya- thith h mama pal mudhe dethna h
Phir puspa aditya ko dekhane lagti h aditya bade dhyan se dekh rha tha o bachi bhi aditya ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi
Puspa- suniye aaj guruji ko bol dijiye kal ham apne beti ki name karam karwayenge
Suresh - thik h
Phir suresh guruji ko man hi man yad karta h aur kal name karan ke liye aane ka nimantran deta h isi tarah aaj ka din khatam ho jata h dusre din
Aaj name karan ka din tha aaj guruji aane wale the phir kuchh der bad guruji aa gye suresh ne unhe aasan diya baitne ke liye phir guru ji baitne ke bad bachi ko lane ko bole puspa bachi ko lekar aayi aur guruji ko dedi phir guruji dhyan lagate h aur phir muskutlrate huye bolte h
Guruji- mere ahobhagya jo mai i divya bachi ki kundali aur namkaran kar rha hu tumlog bahut kismat wale h jo tumahare ghar me aise divya bache ka agman huya haur tum dono inke mata pita ho ye ladki me sare gun h ye sarva gun sampun h ye ladki bahut sushil aur shant hogi iske chehre pe hamesa muskan hi hoga ye bahut hi dyalu swabhav ki hogi ise manushya ho ya pashu pakhsi sabse pram hoga ise waise to kabhi gusa nhi aayega aur jadi kabhi gusa aa gya to kisi se bhi santh nhi hogi sivay aditya ke aditya hi ise sant karega tumhari putri me mata parvati ki pratima dikhti h jaise ye unhi ki ansh ko iss liye iska name p se suru hoga

Ye sab aditya badi dhyan se sun rha tha ki achanak uske mukh se palvi nikla papa aur suresh guruji ke bat sun kar bahut hi jyada khus the unhe apne kismat pe bahut hi garva ho rha tha ki achanak aditya ke mukh se palvi sun kar aur bhi jyada khus ho gye
Puspa- are wah aditya beta kitna achha name diya h palvi bahut hi pyara name h
Surwsh- ha puspa tum sahi bol rhi ho aditya ne apne doll ki bahut hi pyara name rakha h palvi

Phir namekaran hone ke bad guruji chale jate h aaj ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unka pariwar pura ho gya tha isi tarah samay bitne lga suresh ka business bhi achha khasa chal rha tha dhire dhire samay bitta gya isi tarah 3 sal bit gya
Aaj se do din bad aditya ka pure 5 sal ho jayega
Ab palvi bhi 3 sal ki ho gyi thi ab suresh ka business bhi bahut badh gya tha ab ye log ka name pura india me nami grami logo me aane lga tha ab inka business india ke top 10 me aane lga tha aise hi aditya rat ko soya huya tha ki achanak jor se chilaya nhi...
Superb story. Kisi film ki tarah amezing.
 
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jabardast story hai bhai
Rahul bhai writer se puch kr dekhiye ki kya vo is story ko continue kr paenge?? chahe hafte m ek update de
 
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Rahul

Bhai writer se pta kro jra ki kya vo story ko continue kr paenge ya nahi
 
DARK HUNTER {u can hide but can't survive}
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Ab mushkil hai namumkin nahi hai wapas aa sakte hain kab ye pata nahi hai contact me nahi hai wo ab hamare
ohh
try krke dekhna else koi aur writer continue kre ise
 
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ohh
try krke dekhna else koi aur writer continue kre ise
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