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Bohot khub likha he bro......shandar
Zalim baap ne bete ko akhir dikha hi diya khadus andaz.........Updated 14
Shaan aur tripti shaam 6 baje ghar pohocha ……shaam to jeise teise guzar gayi lekin raat shaan ke liye Jatil raha…….
Pura pariwar dinner table ghere me bhojan upbhog kar rahe the ……tritpi apni shopping ki chizo ko badha chadha ke tarifen batar rahi thi sabko suna suna ke….usi bich Mr.shurjit kr baladev ne baat ched di ………
Mr.baladev ….." To hero ab apni rang dikhane shuru kar diye yeha bhi…."
Shaan nivala muh me dalne hi wala tha bapach thali me rakh diya ……
Shaan…." Matlab daddy.."
Mr.baladev….." Jo laad sahab tune kiya aaj……jab action seen de raha tha Then your live telecast was happening in front of the whole world…….shabbash bete shabbash"
Mrs.baladev apni pati ko shant rehne ka isara ki …….lekin Mr.baladev aur gusse me dahar pade usne dinning table haath patka jisse sari bartane bikhar gayi…..sabhi sakit reh gaye sivay shaan ke …….
Mr.baladev……." Board of directors in corporate governance ke saath meeting chal rahi thi aur news channel me aapke laadle dhasu action film chal rahi thi …… zindegi me kabhi itna sarmida nehi huya me jitna aaj sarmida huya me …..sach me mera hi khoon he na reena ….sach sach batana …."
Shaan bhi aaj aise gussa jeise aaj tak kabhi usne kabhi utna gussa nehi huya aur dinning tabel ko laat maar ke apne kamre me chala gaya ….sabhi log sannh reh gaye jeise sard hawa ka jhoka chuh gayi ho ….. Paas khad servent thar thar kanp uthe ….
Ek hi thi jo ab shaan ko sambhal sakti thi……reena bhi aaj dar rahi thi shaan ke gusse ko shant karwane me ……
Wo sankoch bhare kadmo ke saath shaan ke kamre gayi ….., darwaza lock nehi tha …. shaan bed pe baitha tha sayed uske asoon nikle the nam aankhe bayan kar rahi thi ……
Reena uske karib baith gayi aur shaan ke kandhe pe apni hath rakh di jiski resam ehsaas se shant prakrtisth ho jaya karta tha ……
Shaan ki awaz baith gayi thi apni rukhe awaaz ke saath bola…." Mom daddy lagta he me usne nafrat karta hoon "
Reena use gale se laga li …." Nehi nehi baby…..aisa nehi he wo bas tumhari bohot fikr karte he …. kabhi kabhi kaam ke tension me gusaa humpe nikal dete he…."
Shaan…" Haa janta hoon mom….daddy mera fikr karta he ….kyu na kare ek louta aulad hoon…."
Reena….." Haa….. bas wo tumhe sakhti dikha ke tumhe sakht banana chahte he taki tum apne pedo pe khade ho jao…"
Shaan…." Your are absolutely right mom…..aaj bhi meine galti kar di ….wo badhmas meri dost ke saath battamizi kar rahe the……agar meri jagah koi samjhdar ladka hota to wo police bulata ya kuch aisa karta jo kanoon ke dayere me ho …..manta hoon meri galti he lekin daddy mujhe pyaar se samjha bhi to sakte the isi wazah se…..isi wazah se me unke saath kaam nehi karna chahta ….."
Reena apne ladle ko kas ke gale laga li…." No baby….me tumhare daddy ko samjhaunga…….mujhe bas ek hi dar he ….tumhara gussa…..jis gusse ki wazah se tumhe yeha le aana pada wo phir na ho……"
Shaan rone laga……"haa mom….maine aap dono ko bobot dukh pohochaya na……me baar baar bolta hoon ki me kashish kar raha hoon sudharne ki lekin baar baar wohi galti karta hoon na…..mom I am not your good son……"
Reena tadap uthi …..koun maa apne bete ko aise tutte dekh payegi bechari…….khud chahe jitni bhi dari hui ho komjor ho lekin bachche ki hosla abjai me do pal ke liye sherni ban jati he maaye…….
Reena….." Nehi aisa nehi he……aisa bilkul nehi he …..tum mere achche bete ho …..daddy ki baat abhi bhool jao uska gussa subah tak thanda bhi ho jayega dekhna…..achcha abhi so jaao ….."
Reena ne shaan ko bed pe leita di aur kambal odh diye chaati tak aur jhuk ke bate ki chehre ko chumne lagi ……pehle lalat pe phir gaal phir uski chumban anayas hi shaan ke gile labon pe kuch pal ke liye tham gayi ……..
Dono ki aankhe kuch pal ke liye band rahi …….lobon ki ehsaas ek dusre ki ruh chuh gayi ….waqt wohi ruk gaya kuch pal ke liye ……..do viprit ling ka sabse sanbedanshil ang he honth aur wo jab aapas me judte he to mano wo ehsaas sari duniya bhool ke ek bhram ki tabassum me bilin ho jaye………..
Jeise koi aatur nehi koi mansik baystata nehi aur dhimi sesta se dono ki palke khul gayi ek dusre ki aankho me kho gaye jeise samundar ki gehrai me par koi dar nehi koi aashnka nehi ……….
reena apne bete ke jhulfon me ungli sehlate huye pyaar se boli….." Aaj yehi so jau me "
Shaan bas shir haan me hila diya…..
Reena….." Thik he thora wait karo …..me baki sabko goodnight bol ke aati hoon"
Wo raat shaan ki zindagi me yaadgar haseen raat me se ek raat ban gayi…..aksar reena apne bete ki dukh door karne ke liye apne seene se laga ke sulati thi …….bachpan me shaan ko tara jagat ki kahaniya suna ke sulaya karti thi …….
Gajab ka updated bhai........Updated 14
Shaan aur tripti shaam 6 baje ghar pohocha ……shaam to jeise teise guzar gayi lekin raat shaan ke liye Jatil raha…….
Pura pariwar dinner table ghere me bhojan upbhog kar rahe the ……tritpi apni shopping ki chizo ko badha chadha ke tarifen batar rahi thi sabko suna suna ke….usi bich Mr.shurjit kr baladev ne baat ched di ………
Mr.baladev ….." To hero ab apni rang dikhane shuru kar diye yeha bhi…."
Shaan nivala muh me dalne hi wala tha bapach thali me rakh diya ……
Shaan…." Matlab daddy.."
Mr.baladev….." Jo laad sahab tune kiya aaj……jab action seen de raha tha Then your live telecast was happening in front of the whole world…….shabbash bete shabbash"
Mrs.baladev apni pati ko shant rehne ka isara ki …….lekin Mr.baladev aur gusse me dahar pade usne dinning table haath patka jisse sari bartane bikhar gayi…..sabhi sakit reh gaye sivay shaan ke …….
Mr.baladev……." Board of directors in corporate governance ke saath meeting chal rahi thi aur news channel me aapke laadle dhasu action film chal rahi thi …… zindegi me kabhi itna sarmida nehi huya me jitna aaj sarmida huya me …..sach me mera hi khoon he na reena ….sach sach batana …."
Shaan bhi aaj aise gussa jeise aaj tak kabhi usne kabhi utna gussa nehi huya aur dinning tabel ko laat maar ke apne kamre me chala gaya ….sabhi log sannh reh gaye jeise sard hawa ka jhoka chuh gayi ho ….. Paas khad servent thar thar kanp uthe ….
Ek hi thi jo ab shaan ko sambhal sakti thi……reena bhi aaj dar rahi thi shaan ke gusse ko shant karwane me ……
Wo sankoch bhare kadmo ke saath shaan ke kamre gayi ….., darwaza lock nehi tha …. shaan bed pe baitha tha sayed uske asoon nikle the nam aankhe bayan kar rahi thi ……
Reena uske karib baith gayi aur shaan ke kandhe pe apni hath rakh di jiski resam ehsaas se shant prakrtisth ho jaya karta tha ……
Shaan ki awaz baith gayi thi apni rukhe awaaz ke saath bola…." Mom daddy lagta he me usne nafrat karta hoon "
Reena use gale se laga li …." Nehi nehi baby…..aisa nehi he wo bas tumhari bohot fikr karte he …. kabhi kabhi kaam ke tension me gusaa humpe nikal dete he…."
Shaan…" Haa janta hoon mom….daddy mera fikr karta he ….kyu na kare ek louta aulad hoon…."
Reena….." Haa….. bas wo tumhe sakhti dikha ke tumhe sakht banana chahte he taki tum apne pedo pe khade ho jao…"
Shaan…." Your are absolutely right mom…..aaj bhi meine galti kar di ….wo badhmas meri dost ke saath battamizi kar rahe the……agar meri jagah koi samjhdar ladka hota to wo police bulata ya kuch aisa karta jo kanoon ke dayere me ho …..manta hoon meri galti he lekin daddy mujhe pyaar se samjha bhi to sakte the isi wazah se…..isi wazah se me unke saath kaam nehi karna chahta ….."
Reena apne ladle ko kas ke gale laga li…." No baby….me tumhare daddy ko samjhaunga…….mujhe bas ek hi dar he ….tumhara gussa…..jis gusse ki wazah se tumhe yeha le aana pada wo phir na ho……"
Shaan rone laga……"haa mom….maine aap dono ko bobot dukh pohochaya na……me baar baar bolta hoon ki me kashish kar raha hoon sudharne ki lekin baar baar wohi galti karta hoon na…..mom I am not your good son……"
Reena tadap uthi …..koun maa apne bete ko aise tutte dekh payegi bechari…….khud chahe jitni bhi dari hui ho komjor ho lekin bachche ki hosla abjai me do pal ke liye sherni ban jati he maaye…….
Reena….." Nehi aisa nehi he……aisa bilkul nehi he …..tum mere achche bete ho …..daddy ki baat abhi bhool jao uska gussa subah tak thanda bhi ho jayega dekhna…..achcha abhi so jaao ….."
Reena ne shaan ko bed pe leita di aur kambal odh diye chaati tak aur jhuk ke bate ki chehre ko chumne lagi ……pehle lalat pe phir gaal phir uski chumban anayas hi shaan ke gile labon pe kuch pal ke liye tham gayi ……..
Dono ki aankhe kuch pal ke liye band rahi …….lobon ki ehsaas ek dusre ki ruh chuh gayi ….waqt wohi ruk gaya kuch pal ke liye ……..do viprit ling ka sabse sanbedanshil ang he honth aur wo jab aapas me judte he to mano wo ehsaas sari duniya bhool ke ek bhram ki tabassum me bilin ho jaye………..
Jeise koi aatur nehi koi mansik baystata nehi aur dhimi sesta se dono ki palke khul gayi ek dusre ki aankho me kho gaye jeise samundar ki gehrai me par koi dar nehi koi aashnka nehi ……….
reena apne bete ke jhulfon me ungli sehlate huye pyaar se boli….." Aaj yehi so jau me "
Shaan bas shir haan me hila diya…..
Reena….." Thik he thora wait karo …..me baki sabko goodnight bol ke aati hoon"
Wo raat shaan ki zindagi me yaadgar haseen raat me se ek raat ban gayi…..aksar reena apne bete ki dukh door karne ke liye apne seene se laga ke sulati thi …….bachpan me shaan ko tara jagat ki kahaniya suna ke sulaya karti thi …….
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