Incest Badalde Rishtey.. (ਬਦਲਦੇ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੇ..)

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Update 9​

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Es sab kamman toh saria kudia pareshan si par mindo jo sab toh vaddi si te sab toh syani si. Oh sab toh jayada pareshan si oston apne bapu di eh halat dekhi nahi si jandi. Oh jmaa apni maa parsinni te gyi si ohi sanwla jeha rang... tikhe nain naksh... gol mol ang te apni maa di trademark bund.

Ik din jad jeeta kamm karn khet nu geya tan mindo ohdi roti leke ohde magar pahunchna si. Ghare vehli honn karke oh thoda saajre aa gyi. Mindo ne char chufere nazar daudayi par ohda bapu kidhre nazar na aaya. Thoda pare toodi te kupp valon awaaz aa rahi si kise di siskian lain di. Jad oh othe pahunchi te ohne dekheya....

Jeet toodi de kupp de parle pase baitha si joke pind toh dooje paase si. Jis pase osni koi dekh nahi si sakda. Mindo jma pole pole pair puttan laggi ke koi sunn na lawe. Par agge jake jo ohne dekheya ohdeya parian thallo jameen khishak gayi. Ohda peo jeet singh chadre di gand kholi chadra thalle viccha ke betha si. Ohda laal fullan wala kaccha ohde godeya tak hoya si. Mindo nu ohde godhe tak hi dikh rahe san jad oh dekhan layi hor agge hoyi ohnu apnia akhan te kanna te jakeen na reha. Ohde baapu ne aapna kala shah lun apne haath vich fadheya hoya te ohnu hauli hauli agge piche kar reha si te naal naal apni marhoom gharwali nu yaad kar reha si.

"Nii hun kaun aa tere baajon mera... hun kaun deuga menu pyar parsinn kaure" jeet ronn haaki awaaz vich boleya.

Naale naale oh apni gharwalia nu yaad kar reha si naale oh apna haath hila reha si.

Mindo hai taan bhave umar di niyani si par oh sab samjh rahi si ke ohde peo nu kehre pyar di ghaat radak rahi hai. Naal di naal mindo nu ohde bapu de ohdi maa prati pyar te maan vi hoya te apne bapu te ohnu taras vi ayaa. Ke kive ohda peo apni janani de veyog vich tadaph reha hai. Eh gal soch ke ohdi akhan cho pani nikal aya.

Pani taan ek hor jagah toh vi nikal aya si oh jagah mindo di kunwari kali fuddi. Eh gal nahi si ke oh pehli vari lun vekh rahi si ya ohde mann vich apne peo bare koi durvichar si par oh ek lun hi dekh rahi si te fuddi da simmna taan lagbhag lajim si. Oh ek takk jeet seoh de kaale shah lun val dekh rahi si jis vich laal topa kis neole vang jhaatia maar reha si.

Jeet naal naal hauke le reha si apni swaragwasi biwi nu taahne vi maar reha si " ni mere ikalle te sara bhaar paagi, char char kudia degi ni ik mera munda hunda meri thaave khad da mere modhe naal modha jodhda mere naal haath vandhaunda"
"Tu taan kudia detia hun ehna de viah da jabb "

Mindo nu eh gal sunnke bda gussa aya par jaldi hi shant vi ho gyi kyuki oh jandi si ke ohda bapu sara kuch sacch hi taan keh reha hai.

Ohne mann vich sochya ke hun oh mundeya vang apne peo da saath devegi te ohnu ohdi gharwali te munde di ghaat kade nahi radakan devegi.

Ik ucchi deni hauka goojeya... mindo ne chor akh naal takkeya ke ohda bapu apne haath nu poori teji naal hila reha si te lamme lamme saah le reha si. Kuch hi palan de vich jeet singh da maal pichkari bann hawa vich si. Te kuch ohde kapdeya te pai geya.

Mindo ne hun wapis jaan vich bhalayi smjhi te jake motor te beh gyi.

Kuch der baad jeet toodi de kupp picho nikal motor val aa geya te dova peo dhee ne ikattheyan baith ke roti khadi.

Ohna dova de darmyan thodi bahut galbat hoi, jis vich jeet ne ohnu dseya ke oh shami shehar javega jaruri kamm hai usnu. Mindo jaan gyi si ajj usda jarur shraab peen layi shehar javega.

Roti khan toh baad mindo bhande chukk ke pind val nu turdi bani. Hazaran mann vich sawaal te shanke utth rahe si oh ki kare te ki naa kare. Ohnu hun oh apne peo te bojh lagg rahi si oh sochan laggi ke kive oh aapne peo te paye bojh nu hatave.

Ohne eh gal apni bhua naal karn di sochi, jo ke ohna de pind es dukh di ghadi vich rehn aayi si. Jyo hi mindo ghare vadhi ohne dekheya bhua taan pehla hi jaan nu tyari kari bethi si.

Mindo : bhua ji tusi kidher di tyari kari hai?

Bhua : bas dheeye, apne ghar da dekha jaa ke kuch mere vi nikke nikke jawak ne.

Mindo : Kuch din hor rukh jande bhua ji

Bhua : Nahi putt tera fuffad vi kahla peya hona

Mindo : Menu taan bhua hi kahli lagdi aa

Bhua : Chal besharm jehi na hove tan

Mindo : Bhua ji tuhade naal ek jaruri gal karni si baapu bare

Bhua : Haan putt bol

Mindo: Bhua ji tusi bapu da dooja viah ni karwa sakde

Bhua : Main taan batheriyaan sir diya theekarian bhanniyan par oh nahi mannda

Mindo : Kyu bhua ji?

Bhua : Kehnda meria jawan dheeyan hun mere barabar diya. Ehna de viah di sochanga hun apne di nahi.

Ohte hor gal kehnda je viah karva leya te meria dheeyan rul jaangiya.

Mindo awaak reh gyi bas ohdia akhan vicho neer fer vehan lagg peya. Ohnu apna peo duniya da sab toh pyara banda lagg reha si jisde layi hun oh jaan vi de sakdi si.

Tarkaalan da vela ho geya si, lok ghara nu mudh rahe san te jeet singh ajje kite rah vich aunda nahi si dikhda. Mindo ne apniya bhaina nu roti pani chakka ke suwa dita. Holi holi karke sare ghar de jee sau gye te.

Mindo bahut vadda faisla lai chukki si oh os kamre vich gyi jithe ohna de petia te trunk paye hoye san ohne apni maa da viah vala jodha kadheya te ohnu neejh naal dekhan lagg payi. Kuch hi palan de vich ohne apne kapde laah ke oh jodha paa leya te os manjhe te saun gayi jithe ohda peo jeet singh roz saunda si.

Lamme payi mindo de mann vich ajje vi dwand si ke oh jo kar rahi hai oh sahi hai ya nahi par aapne peo di dobara viah naa karvaun vali kurbani agge ohnu apni kurbani chhoti jehi laggi. Ohnu moohre bas apne peo te khushi te apne parivar di khushhali dikh rahi si.

Enne nu cycle de booheo langhan da khadka hoya. Mindo jehi malook jaan de taan jive saah soote gaye hon. Eh jeeta hi si jo es vele adhi raat nu shehro shraab naal rajj ke aya si.
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Sirraa

 

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Update 1


Harman apne mann vich pichle kuch mahineya vich jo jo vi vapreya os bare soch reha si. Kive usnu apne maa baap te choti bhain nu chhadna peya atte apni dil di sathan saheli nu alwida kehni payi. Ohnu apne yaara beliya te girlfriend naal bitaye sare pal ik movie wang yaad aa rahe san. Par hun oh apni nawi jindgi layi mann maar ke tyari kari baitha si.

Ohdi es sochan di ladhi nu todheya achanak hoyi jahaz di announcement ne, jo ke dass rahi si ke jahaz toronto pahunch wala hai te yatri apnia beltan ban lain.

Kuch hi der vich jahaz toronto airport te land kar geya te harman bahaut hi sehaj naal handbag leke bahar nikal geya. Oh hairani naal chaare paase dekh reha si, nwi jagah... nwe log sab kuch osnu excite kar reha si. Usne luggage leke ik call kiti te bahar arrivals wal nu aa gya.

Bahar nikalde edher odhur dekhan lgga enne nu ohnu awaz aayi "harman veere". Osne awaz da picha krde hoye dekheya ek sohni mutiyar ohda naam le rahi si. Eh mutiyar si harman di saggi bhain Gurleen, jo ke harman to 6 saal vaddi si. Par harman diya nazra ne osnu pehchanan toh inkar kar dita. Kyuki harman apni bhain nu 4 saal baad mil reha si atte usne gurleen nu photos vich hi dekheya si. Jo ke hun poori tarah badal chukki si.... kapdeya valon vi te shareer valo vi.

Harman ne apni bhain nu ik nazar bhar ke sir to pairan tak takeya, hawa vich lehraunde waal, kajle naal bharia manmohak akhan, surkh gulabi bull, usda kaale rang da sleeveless top jo osde gundwe anga nu hor ughad ke pesh kar reha si, usde spat dhid utte chhoti jehi dhunni, te usdi tang jeen di pant jo usde joban nu smaun di asafal koshish kar rahi si. Bhave harman apni bhain nu maadhi nigah naal nahi dekh reha si par hairan jarur si gurleen di khoobsurti te gundwe badan te.

Harman bhaj ke gurleen kol geya. Dove kuch palan lyi bhul gye ke hor wi log ne ohna de aas pass. Bas ohna dona ne ik dooje nu bahan vich le leya te ghutt ke jaffi paa lyi. Harman apni bhain nu apne kol pake khush si te gurleen aapne bhra da saath milan karke apne app nu khushkismat samjh rahi si.

Harman ne apni bhain di galwakdi da hor nigh manan layi jaffi di grifat hor tez kar diti. Gurleen da shareer ohde shareer naal ik pal lyi judh gya. Harman ne apni bhain de koole koole anga nu apne shareeh naal lagge mehsoos kita te oh sihar geya. Gurleen nu jad eh ehsas hoya oh thoda piche hatt gyi. Ehne naal dona di surat khuli te dekheya aase log ehna nu premi jodha smjh ke dekh rahe san. Gurleen thoda shrma ke piche ho gyi. Kuch gallan karn de baad oh dono gaddi vich beth ke ghar aa gye.
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NICE START G busty_kaur4

 

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update 2​

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Kahani de Patar : eh kahani de pataran di brief jehi intro. Ohna de asal character da tuhanu story padhke patta chlega.

1. Harman : Harman ik 18 saal da uche kadd kaath wala gabhru hai. Bhave sir toh mona hai par pagg sohni bann lainda hai. Es karke jayadatar pagg bann ke rakhda hai. Padhayi vich theek si par madhi sangat vich pain de dukho osde pita malkeet ne karza chukk ke osnu canada bhejya hai. Oh hune canada study vise te pahunchya hai te ek nawe jeewan di shuruaat karn laga hai. Os di saheli jisnu oh bahut pyar karda c dilo vi te jismo vi... osnu oh punjab hi chhad geya.

Gurleen : Maa Peo di Ladli dhee te ghar vich sab toh vaddi kudi. Bahut hi saau te shusheel subah, kise nu manda fikka na bolan vali, apne kamm nal kamm rakhn wali. Bahar aun karke ohda rang hor vi nikhar geya si te osde ang osde rang nu char chann launde san. Kadd kaath valo sare parivar* vang hi uche kadd di malik te roop te suhappan valon apni maa parminder te gayi si. Ek hor cheez ohdi aapni maa naal mel khandi si oh si ohdi figure. Joke canada Osnu canada aayi nu 4 saal to vadh sama ho gya si te oh apni padhayi poori kar chukki si te ik restaurant vich job kardi si.

Jasleen kaur : Ghar di sab toh choti te sab di chaheti jisnu sare pyar naal jassi kehnde han. Es saal jasleen ne dasvi class de paper dene han par ohnu es ghar da dana pani enna lag geya ke koi keh nahi sakda ke eh kudi dasvi vich hai. Matlab ke oh apni gundwe shareer te ubharde angan karke apni umar nallo vadhi lagdi hai.

Malkeet Singh : umar 45 saal. Sardar Sucha singh da puttar, jo ke harman, gurleen te jasleen da pita hai. Ek bahut hi vadhiya insaan, ek changa pati te ek bahut hi samjhdar peyo. Jisne eni gareebi de chaldeya apne bacheya nu padhaya te kabil banaya. Ohne kade vi himmat nahi hari, naa hi ohne kade apni patni nu koi kami mehsoos hon diti naa roohi pyar valo na jismani valo. Oh ek aam kisan hai jo khetibaadi karda hai te pashu paalda hai ese siro ohna de ghar da guzara chalda hai.*

Parminder kaur : urf parm umar 43 saal. Malkeet singh di dharam patni. Jo ke apne pati toh bahut khush hai. Hun chahe ohdi jawani dhal rahi si par ajje vi ohde roop vich jadu si jo change bhale da dil beiman kar deve.

Sucha singh : umar 75 saal. Eh janab ne ghar de sab vadde bajurg te malkeet singh de pitaji. Umar de 7 dahake paar karke vi jawani de din nahi bhulde, yoga te varjish da jo naim jawani ch banaya si oh ajj vi jaari hai. Ese kar dada ji da shareer poora razi hai. Par hor vi vadhiya hona si je dhann kaur jeondi hundi, dadi de pehli umare mar jan naal sucha singh ras heen jiwan bita reha si.​

SIRRA..............

 

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Update 3​

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Dooje paase : Harman da ghar
Harman ik madhvargi parivar to si, jo ke jameen thodi honn karke mandhaali da jeewan bateet kar rahe san. Esse karke ohna ghar vi khasa vadda nahi si par fer vi rehn layi bahut vadiya si. Ghar khetan vich baneya hon karke khafi khulla vehda si ohna kol.

Malkeet singh, harman da pita, apne putt de canada pahunchan te bahut khush si. Ehi khushi sanjhi karn layi oh drawing room de naalde kamre vich vadh geya. Jithe osdi bhaagwaan parminder kaur svere uthde sar hi bistre ikathe kar rahi si. Malkeet ne malak dene picho di aanke parminder nu galwakdi vich le leya. Parminder vi bhanp gyi ke kon ho skda.

Parm: ki gal bdde khush jaap rehe o?

Malkeet: hova kive na? Ajj mera putt canada pahunch geya. Hun aapne madhe din gaye.

Parm : waheguru da shukar hai ji (hath jodhdi hoyi kehndi hai)

Malkeet : hun todh du mera putt sadi gareebi dollar bhej bhej ke. (Naal hi mucch nu watt denda hai)

Parm : bas rabb sukh rakhe. Kitte ethe vangu madhi sangat vich na pe jave.
( pind rehnda hoya harman pind de kuch nashedi mundeya naal uthan behan lag gya si jo osde pariwar nu pasand nahi si)

Malkeet : haan time naal hi nikal geya nahi te ohne v lagg jana si kise chandre nashe te. (Parm de hor kol aunda hoya kehnda hai) wese ik gal hor vi changi ho gyi, hun sanu hor v chohal mohal karn nu time mil jaya kru.

Enna kehke malkeet parm da khabba mumma jor naal dabb denda hai.

Malkeet : ainve mera sala sara din ghare betha rehnda si. Kade pyar diya do gallan vi nahi si karn denda. (Malkeet naal naal parm de mumme di dodi napp reha si)

Parm : (siski lendi hoyi)sssss...ahhh... kyu mere munde di burayi karde o. Saabar taan tuhade toh nahi hunda. Koi apni umar da lihaaj karo.

Malkeet : ehh le... umar nu ki hoya meri nu. Ajje vi poora fit aan main. Chahe jawan kudi aaje poori tasalli karadu jatt.

Parm : accha ji... lbha koi jawan kudi tuhadi layi. Hun mere toh tan chit bhar geya tuhada. (moonh bnandi hoyi kehndi hai)

Malkeet : nahi nahi mere patoleya eho jehi koi gal nahi. Tu taan ajje vi mere dil di rani aa rani. (Malkeet parm nu apne val ghuma ke usde bulla* te bull rakhda hai.)

Parm thoda piche hundi hoi : ajj ki ho geya tuhanu savere savere. Bade mood ch lagg rahe ho?

Malkeet : yaar ki dssa tenu svere sver khey nu geya ki dekh aaya... hun taan bahla jee karda.

Parm : ki dekh aaye ho enni svakhte.

Malkeet : ajje mere ohi scene moohre aayi janda.
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EH TUHADI STORY BAHUT HI VADIYA HAI KEEP IT UP

 

[Tarachand choudhary]

Dear update bhout hi gaint ha keep it up. Or mindo nu sucheta theley jaldi padeo.....

 

[Tarachand choudhary]

Bhai update bhout hii gaint ha check deo fatey dab deo killi sube jalandar shami Delhi.

 

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Bhai update bhout hi gaint ha . Mindo nu te gurleen di thukai karwa do jaldi 2

 

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Update 1


Harman apne mann vich pichle kuch mahineya vich jo jo vi vapreya os bare soch reha si. Kive usnu apne maa baap te choti bhain nu chhadna peya atte apni dil di sathan saheli nu alwida kehni payi. Ohnu apne yaara beliya te girlfriend naal bitaye sare pal ik movie wang yaad aa rahe san. Par hun oh apni nawi jindgi layi mann maar ke tyari kari baitha si.

Ohdi es sochan di ladhi nu todheya achanak hoyi jahaz di announcement ne, jo ke dass rahi si ke jahaz toronto pahunch wala hai te yatri apnia beltan ban lain.

Kuch hi der vich jahaz toronto airport te land kar geya te harman bahaut hi sehaj naal handbag leke bahar nikal geya. Oh hairani naal chaare paase dekh reha si, nwi jagah... nwe log sab kuch osnu excite kar reha si. Usne luggage leke ik call kiti te bahar arrivals wal nu aa gya.

Bahar nikalde edher odhur dekhan lgga enne nu ohnu awaz aayi "harman veere". Osne awaz da picha krde hoye dekheya ek sohni mutiyar ohda naam le rahi si. Eh mutiyar si harman di saggi bhain Gurleen, jo ke harman to 6 saal vaddi si. Par harman diya nazra ne osnu pehchanan toh inkar kar dita. Kyuki harman apni bhain nu 4 saal baad mil reha si atte usne gurleen nu photos vich hi dekheya si. Jo ke hun poori tarah badal chukki si.... kapdeya valon vi te shareer valo vi.

Harman ne apni bhain nu ik nazar bhar ke sir to pairan tak takeya, hawa vich lehraunde waal, kajle naal bharia manmohak akhan, surkh gulabi bull, usda kaale rang da sleeveless top jo osde gundwe anga nu hor ughad ke pesh kar reha si, usde spat dhid utte chhoti jehi dhunni, te usdi tang jeen di pant jo usde joban nu smaun di asafal koshish kar rahi si. Bhave harman apni bhain nu maadhi nigah naal nahi dekh reha si par hairan jarur si gurleen di khoobsurti te gundwe badan te.

Harman bhaj ke gurleen kol geya. Dove kuch palan lyi bhul gye ke hor wi log ne ohna de aas pass. Bas ohna dona ne ik dooje nu bahan vich le leya te ghutt ke jaffi paa lyi. Harman apni bhain nu apne kol pake khush si te gurleen aapne bhra da saath milan karke apne app nu khushkismat samjh rahi si.

Harman ne apni bhain di galwakdi da hor nigh manan layi jaffi di grifat hor tez kar diti. Gurleen da shareer ohde shareer naal ik pal lyi judh gya. Harman ne apni bhain de koole koole anga nu apne shareeh naal lagge mehsoos kita te oh sihar geya. Gurleen nu jad eh ehsas hoya oh thoda piche hatt gyi. Ehne naal dona di surat khuli te dekheya aase log ehna nu premi jodha smjh ke dekh rahe san. Gurleen thoda shrma ke piche ho gyi. Kuch gallan karn de baad oh dono gaddi vich beth ke ghar aa gye.
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Nice start

 

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Update 1


Harman apne mann vich pichle kuch mahineya vich jo jo vi vapreya os bare soch reha si. Kive usnu apne maa baap te choti bhain nu chhadna peya atte apni dil di sathan saheli nu alwida kehni payi. Ohnu apne yaara beliya te girlfriend naal bitaye sare pal ik movie wang yaad aa rahe san. Par hun oh apni nawi jindgi layi mann maar ke tyari kari baitha si.

Ohdi es sochan di ladhi nu todheya achanak hoyi jahaz di announcement ne, jo ke dass rahi si ke jahaz toronto pahunch wala hai te yatri apnia beltan ban lain.

Kuch hi der vich jahaz toronto airport te land kar geya te harman bahaut hi sehaj naal handbag leke bahar nikal geya. Oh hairani naal chaare paase dekh reha si, nwi jagah... nwe log sab kuch osnu excite kar reha si. Usne luggage leke ik call kiti te bahar arrivals wal nu aa gya.

Bahar nikalde edher odhur dekhan lgga enne nu ohnu awaz aayi "harman veere". Osne awaz da picha krde hoye dekheya ek sohni mutiyar ohda naam le rahi si. Eh mutiyar si harman di saggi bhain Gurleen, jo ke harman to 6 saal vaddi si. Par harman diya nazra ne osnu pehchanan toh inkar kar dita. Kyuki harman apni bhain nu 4 saal baad mil reha si atte usne gurleen nu photos vich hi dekheya si. Jo ke hun poori tarah badal chukki si.... kapdeya valon vi te shareer valo vi.

Harman ne apni bhain nu ik nazar bhar ke sir to pairan tak takeya, hawa vich lehraunde waal, kajle naal bharia manmohak akhan, surkh gulabi bull, usda kaale rang da sleeveless top jo osde gundwe anga nu hor ughad ke pesh kar reha si, usde spat dhid utte chhoti jehi dhunni, te usdi tang jeen di pant jo usde joban nu smaun di asafal koshish kar rahi si. Bhave harman apni bhain nu maadhi nigah naal nahi dekh reha si par hairan jarur si gurleen di khoobsurti te gundwe badan te.

Harman bhaj ke gurleen kol geya. Dove kuch palan lyi bhul gye ke hor wi log ne ohna de aas pass. Bas ohna dona ne ik dooje nu bahan vich le leya te ghutt ke jaffi paa lyi. Harman apni bhain nu apne kol pake khush si te gurleen aapne bhra da saath milan karke apne app nu khushkismat samjh rahi si.

Harman ne apni bhain di galwakdi da hor nigh manan layi jaffi di grifat hor tez kar diti. Gurleen da shareer ohde shareer naal ik pal lyi judh gya. Harman ne apni bhain de koole koole anga nu apne shareeh naal lagge mehsoos kita te oh sihar geya. Gurleen nu jad eh ehsas hoya oh thoda piche hatt gyi. Ehne naal dona di surat khuli te dekheya aase log ehna nu premi jodha smjh ke dekh rahe san. Gurleen thoda shrma ke piche ho gyi. Kuch gallan karn de baad oh dono gaddi vich beth ke ghar aa gye.
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Nice story