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Ajeet—thodi der rukiye na bhai sahab….abhi to maine adi ko khilaya hi nahi…….

Anand—phir khila lena adi ko abhi hum jaldi me hain…..

Dono ne apna pata aur no. Exchange kiya aur phir milne ka bol vaha se nikal gaye....anand apna address aur no. Dena to nahi chahta tha ajeet ko lekin majburi me dena pada……

Uske mann me apne bete ko khone ka darr satane laga tha…..

Ghar pahuch kar fresh hone ke baad dono adi ko sula kar khud bhi sone lage…lekin anand ki ankho se need koso dur thi….vo apni ateet me khota chala gaya……

Ab Aage……………

Anand aur urmila ki shadi ko 8 saal se upar ho chuka tha……anand ki drill banane ki chhoti si factory thi.. kul mila ke agar kaha jaye to dhan daulat ki koi kami nahi thi……

Magar phir bhi dono ke jeevan me ek dukh hamesha rahta tha…..aur vo dukh tha aulad na hone ka… shadi ke itne saal ke baad bhi unki koi aulad nahi thi……

Aisa nahi tha ki urmila maa nahi ban sakti thi ya anand me koi khas kami thi……urmila teen beer pregnant bhi huyi lekin har baar uska garbhpat ho jata tha……

Bade se bade doctors ko dikhane ke baad bhi condition vahi ki vahi thi…..urmila ki dawaiya chalu thi…

Doctors ke mutabik urmila ki bachchedani kuch kamjor thi jiski vajah se vo bachche ka vajan sambhal na sakne ke karan uska garbhpat ho raha hai….

Isi dauran urmila ki ek saal chhoti bahan megha ki usi shahar me uski bhi shadi huyi thi unke do bachche ek ladka aur ek ladki ho chuke the……

Anand aur ajeet dono chachere bhai the…lekin dono ke swabhav me bahut antar tha….ajeet ek no. ka sharabi tha vahi anand iske viprit pan gutkha tak nahi khata tha….

Ajeet ki bhi kapde ki dukan thi…jisse unka kharcha chalta tha……khair jab megha ko do bachche ho gaye aur jab bhi vo urmila se milne aati to un bachcho ko dekh kar urmila ka mann bhi maa banne ke liye machal uthata…….

Aur phir apni kismat par vo rone lagti….aise hi din gujarne lage unke….is beech dono mandir masjid jakar bhi aulad ke liye apna daaman phailate rahe….urmila ka ilaz bhi chalta raha……

Akhir ek din un dono ki fariyad ek bar phir upar wale ne sun li…..urmila phir maa banne wali thi….kahi is bar phir garbh na gir jaye is darr se urmila apna adhikansh samay bistar par hi leti rahti…..

Ghar ke kaam kaaj ke liye anand ne naukrani rakh li thi jo ghar aur urmila dono ka dhyan rakhti…vahi megha bhi tisri bar maa banne wali thi……

Itne parhej ke baad akhir urmila ka garbh is bar bach gaya aur vo ghadi bhi karib aa gayi thi….megha ne urmila se ek mahine pahle hi bete ko janam diya……

Ladke ka naam Rishi rakha gaya…..megha ki delivery ke ek mahine baad urmila ki delivery huyi…lekin is bar result me bachcha mara hua paida hua……

Doctor ne anand ko bula kar sari baat batayi…..anand behad dukhi ho gaya….use apne se jyada urmila ke dukh ki chinta thi jo philhal is samay behosh thi…….

Anand ne doctor se kuch baat karke nikal gaya hospital se……usne khidki se megha ke ghar me ghus kar ek mahine ke nanhe se Rishi ko jo bechara so raha tha ko uthakar chupchap vaha se nikal gaya…..

Aur Rishi ko apne mare huye bete ki jagah lita kar us bachche ka antim sanskar karne chala gaya….

Urmila ko jab hosh aaya tab to vo apne bachche (Rishi) ko dekh kar bahut khush huyi…….kuch der me anand bhi hospital lout aaya……

Urmila pregnant ki vajah se ghar me hi rahti thi aur megha bhi delivery ke bad milne nahi aayi thi jisse urmila us bachche ko nahi pahchan payi…..

Anand ne poore hospital me mithayi baati khushi jahir karne ke liye….dusre din discharge karwa ke anand ne vo jagah chhod kar umred aa gaya…..jaha ek ghar kharid liya tha aanan faanan me usne…

Idhar megha ko jab apna bachcha nahi mila to usne ro ro kar poora ghar sar pe utha liya…..

aaspass pata karne par bhi jab kuch nahi malum hua tha to unhone police fir ki gumshudgi ki……magar kuch malum nahi hua…..

Idhar anand ke ghar us bachche ke kadam padte hi usko khush khabri mili ki ek badi company ne drill banane ka karodo ka order diya hai……

Anand ke mann me bhi usi pal se us bachche ke liye apnapan aa gaya…..do din baad bachche ka namkaran karne ke liye mandir ke pujari ko bulaya gaya…..

Bachche ki janam kundli banate samay wo bahut hairan huye….unke chehre par aate jate bhav ko dekh kar urmila chinta karte huye boli…..

Urmila—Pandit ji sab theek to hai na…..koi chinta ki baat to nahi hai….

Pujari—Nahi Beti….Ye balak bada hi bhagyashali aur chamatkari hai…..iske andar aloukik tez hai jo iske chehre se jhalak raha hai….isme bahut si adbhut shaktiyan hain jo apne samay par use prapt hogi aur har sankat me uski raksha bhi karegi…..

Pujari ki baat sunkar urmila aur anand dono khush ho gaye…..

Anand—Pandit ji hamare bete ka naam kya hoga….?

Pujari (kuch der soch kar)—vaise to iska naam kuch aur hi hai magar isme jo suraj ke saman tez hai to iska naam Aditya rakhna theek hoga……

Anand ne pujari ko dher sari dakshina dekar khush kar diya aur vo bhi khushi khushi ashirwad dete huye chala gaya…..

Us din se aditya urmila aur anand dono ki jaan ban gaya…..in do saalo me anand ki company ko jamkar munafa hua…..ek chhoti si company ab badi hokar Aditya Industries Ban gayi thi….


Lekin anand ko hamesha ye darr satate rahta ki kahi adi ki sachchayi kisi ko malum na ho jaye….is darr se vo hamesha aditya ke prati choukanna rahta tha….megha aur uske pati se apna rishta tod liya ki kahi vo aditya ko pahchan na le…
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Munish—achchha mai chalta hu...mai tumhara hamesha abhari rahunga dost...tumne mujhe ek nayi jindagi di hai....

Iske baad munish vaha se ek jhatke me chala gaya aur mai use aise gayab hote dekh kar but bane dekhta raha...lekin ab itna kuch dekh chuka tha ki isme koi hairangi nahi huyi

Mai bhi dard se tadap raha tha to bistar me girte hi need ki hasin vadiyo me kho gaya....subah meri need jaldi khul gayi...jaise hi meri nazar apne sharir par padi to hairan ho gaya...mere poore kapde jagah jagah se fate huye the....mera sharir bhi bahut majboot lag raha tha

Mujhe apne andar besumar taqat hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha....tabhi meri nazar niche gayi to meri ankhe vo dekh kar shock se phati ki phati rah gayi.......

Ab Aage.......

Jaise hi meri nazar niche gayi...mai apne auzar ko dekhkar hi darr gaya.....jo pahle se bahut badal gaya tha...pahle ek samanya manav ka lag raha tha jo ab kisi gadhe ka lag raha tha...

Main kuch der tak usko hi dekhta raha..tabhi mujhe munish ke dhyan wali baat yaad aayi to main dhyan me baith gaya...

Lekin dhyan me mann hi nahi lag pa raha tha…maine bahut prayas kiya magar kamyabi nahi mili…tabhi mujhe kisi ke pairo ki aahat sunayi padi to main apni aisi haalat dekh kar turant bistar se uth bathroom me bhag gaya….

Darwaje par knock hone lagi thi ..main jaldi fresh hokar bahar aaya apne kapde pahanne ki koshish ki lekin sab bekar unki fitting bigad chuki thi….

Maine towel lapetkar hi door khola…samne mummy khadi thi….vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki unki nazar mere sharir ko dekhte hi shock me doob gayi….

Kuch der ankhe phade aise hi mujhe dekhne ke baad vo andar aayi aur mere body ko touch karke uska avlokan karne lagi…..

Urmila—ye tujhe kya hua hai…teri body aise kyo hai…aur teri peeth aur hath par ye tattoo kab banwaye tune….kal ke khane se koi food poisoning to nahi ho gayi kahi…..

Main bhi mummy ki tattoo wali baat se chounk gaya…maine to jaldbazi me kuch dhyan hi nahi diya apne sharir par aaye badlao par….

Main—(kuch soch kar) ha mummy ye tattoo mujhe pasand aa gaya to maine bhi kal banva liya….aur meri body ko kya hua hai..vaise hi to hai..mujhe to kuch bhi alag nahi dikh raha hai..

Urmila—nahi..nahi kuch to hua jarur hai…kal tak to aisi nahi thi…..aaj mere sath chal kisi badhiya doctor ko dikhati hu….

Main—arey mom kuch nahi hai….vo kya hai na ki main body banane ka course le raha hu….shayad ye uski medicines ka effect hoga..bas..its just normal

Urmila—sgayad aisa hi ho…phir bhi koi chinta ki baat to nahi hai na….

Main—nahi mom…but ye kapde mere fit nahi ho rahe hain…ab kya pahnu…

Urmila—ruk main abhi aati hu………tere papa ke dress lati hu…vo hi pahan le…baad me market se new purchase kar lena…

Mummy kuch hi der me papa ke kuch dress le aayi jo maine try karke pahan liye…vo bhi poori fitting ke to nahi the…lekin kaam chalau the…

Is douran mummy ektak mujhme hi khoyi huyi thi….maine ye dekh kar unhe hila kar unka tandra bhang ki..

Mai—kya hua mummy…kya meri body me kami hai koi…?

Urmila—agar ye real me normal hai to amazing hai….tu bahut handsome lag raha hai….mere bete ko kisi ki nazar na lage….ruk main abhi tere kaala tika lagati hu…

Mai—ye kya mom…aapne poora chehre hi kaala kar diya..

Urmila—mere bete ko kisi ki nazar na lage isliye….aur tu aaj andar se door lock kyo kiya tha

Aamtaur par mere room ka door open hi rahta hai….mummy ki raat me jab bhi need khulti hai vo ek baar mere me jarur aati hain mujhe dekhne…kuch der mujhe niharne ke baad mathe par kiss karke chali jati hain…ye unka bachpan se routine hai…main kal ki ghatna ke kaaran door lock kar diya tha..baad me thakan aur need ki vajah se open karne ka khyal hi nahi aaya….

Khair main kuch der baad jogging ke liye nikal gaya…mujhe sath dad bhi aa gaye…jo roj himorning walk karte the….

Anand—kya baat hai…aaj mera sher bahut badla hua lag raha hai….body shody bana li…itna jaldi aur aaj jogging bhi…kahi koi ladki sharki ka chakkar to nahi…

Mai—nahi dad…koi ladki vadki ka chakkar nahi hai….bas mann ho gaya to aa gaya apke sath

Anand—chal achchha kiya….itna bada business handle karne ke liye body ki fit rahna bhi jaruri hai

Mai—dad…abhi to main bahut chhota hu…..

Anand—ha beta tu abhi bahut chhota hai….kewal 18 saal ka hi to hua hai abhi…..arey nalayak ye umar me to hamari age me log 4-5 g/f bana lete the….ab to jamana aur bhi advance ho gaya hai…

Mai—kya dad …main mom ko batata hu ki apke pith pichhe apke pati kya kya gul khilate hain…

Anand—ye kya beta apne baap ko ghar se tadipar karwayega kya….?

Hum dono aise hi baate karte huye morning walk ka anand utha rahe the….dad to hafne lage the…magar mujhe koi fark mahsus nahi ho raha tha…thakan ka namo nishan nahi tha…..

Raste me ladkiya baar baar mujhe ghur rahi thi….mujhe bhi unme interest aa raha tha…meri nazar unki or jate hi unki body ke private parts ko scan karne lagti thi jo aaj se pahle kabhi mere sath nahi hua tha

Main samajh gaya ki ye sab gandi aadte un shaktiyo ki vajah se hi mujhme aa gayi hain…pakka ye kisi din mujhe joote chappal khilayengi..

Ek ghante ke baad hum vapis lout aaye….main naha dhokar nasta kiya aur market nikal gaya aur kuch shopping karke return aa gaya…

Aaj college ka bhi pata karna tha to maine margret ko call kiya …ek ring me hi uth gaya…jaise vo mere call ke intazar me hi hath me phone liye baithi rahi ho…

Margret—hi adi good morning

Mai—good morning my sweet heart

Margret ka chehra khil utha…aaj pahli baar tha jab aditya ne use call bhi kiya tha aur aise baat ki shuruaat ki thi…..

Margret—wow…aaj suraj pashchim se kaise nikal aaya…itna romantic

Mai—kya kar rahi ho yaar aa na….mai bor ho raha hu….tu to meri sabse best friend hai….college ka disscussion karna hai..

Margret—thanks adi…..tu ruk 10 min…main abhi aayi….

Margret khushi se uchhalte phudakte huye aanann faanan me ready hokar adi ke ghar pahuch gayi….

Urmila—aa ja beta kaisi ho…? Nasta karegi….aa ja….

Margret—Thanks aunty….vo Adi kaha hai….

Urmila (mushkura kar)—Ja uske room me chali ja…vahi milega vo …..

Margret doudte huye aditya ke room ki or badh jati hai…

Urmila (mann me)—pagal hai….mai bhi ek aurat hu…tere mann ki baat bhali bhanti samajhti hu.....


Margret jaise hi adi ke room me enter huyi to samne ka scene dekhkar uski ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi….
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