Romance Choti si Bhool by Jatin(completed)

[Mr.X]

“tum kitne badal gaye ho jatin” —- ritu ne kaha
“sab tumhaare pyar ka asar hai, meditation bhi maine tumhaare pyar mein dub kar hi ki thi, ab utho na ye bra mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hai”
“theek hai baba ye lo” —- ritu ne kaha aur kah kar thoda upar ho gayi
maine ritu ki bra utaar kar ek taraf rakh di
ritu ke ubhaaro ko dekh kar mere muh se nikal gaya, “ohh my god, kitne pyare lag rahein hain ye chaandni raat mein, inki shundarta ke aage to chaand bhi sharma jaayega”
“chup karo, badmaash kahin ke” —- ritu ne sharmaate huve kaha
“nahin ritu ye sach hai, tumhaare ubhaaro ki chamak ke aage chaand bhi feeka pad gaya hai” —– maine kaha
mere liye vo pal bahut hi pyara tha. man kar raha tha ki bas ritu ke ubhaaro ko dekhta rahun.
Kab madhosh ho kar maine ritu ke baayein ubhaar ke nipple ko honto mein daba liya pata hi nahi chala
Jaise hi maine nipple ko honto mein dabaaya, ritu ke muh se halki si awaaj nikli, aaahhhh…. Aisa laga maano maine shitaar ke taar ched diyein hon aur ushmein se pyar bhara mitha sa sangeet nikal pada ho
Ush vakt mujhe vishwaas ho gaya ki ritu mere saath pyar ke safar par chalne ke liye taiyaar hai. phir maine thaan liya ki aaj apni jaan ko pyar ki ush gahraayi mein ley jaaunga jo ush ne sapne mein bhi nahi sochi hogi. main ritu ko pyar ka special gift dena chaahta tha
Maine ritu ke dono ubhaaro ko haatho mein thaam liya aur unhe thoda jor se masalne laga.
Ritu ki saanse phoolne lagi
“Aaaahhh jatin, ruk jao…….” Ritu ne haanpte huve kaha
“kya huva jaan acha nahi lag raha kya” —– maine pucha
“nahin aisi baat nahi hai, itni jor se kyon daba rahe ho” —– ritu ne halki se awaaj mein pucha
“in phoolon par thoda jor ajmaana jaroori hai, varna ye kheel nahin paayenge, dekho jor se masalne par kaise tan gayein hain, pehle se bhi bade nazar aa rahein hain” —– maine hanste huve kaha
“tum kya kamasutra mein expert ho” — ritu ne pucha
“nahin, tum se pyar karne mein expert hun” —- maine kaha
ye kah kar maine ritu ke ubhaaro par apne honto se pyar barsaana shuru kar diya. main baar baar ritu ke nipples ko choos raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise ki ritu ke ubhaaro mein prem ras bhara ho aur main ritu ke nipples se prem ras pee raha hun
“kya tumne in ubhaaro mein mere liye pyar bhar liya hai ritu” —- maine pucha
“kaisi baat karte ho jatin, mujhe sharam aa rahi hai, please ……. Mujhe aise mat chedo” —– ritu ne sharmaate huve kaha
“nahin ritu ched nahi rahaan hun, bas tumhaari jheezak dur kar raha hun, ab tum meri patni ho aur hamaara bahut pyara rista ban gaya hai. pyari pyari baate to hum kar hi sakte hain” —- maine kaha
“vo to theek hai, par abhi nahin, abhi mujhe…..” —- ritu ne sharmaate huve kaha
ritu ke chehre par sharam ke saath saath jo pyari si hansi thi ush se ye saaf pata chal raha tha ki vo mere pyar mein dub chuki hai. main khud aisa hi chaahta tha. badi mushkil se paya tha maine vo pal ritu ke saath. Mera pyar ritu par asar karne laga tha.
ubhaaro ko masalte huve main ritu ke sharir ko kiss karta huva ushki naabhi tak pahunch gaya aur ushke chaaro aur ushe chumne laga.
ritu mere neeche theerakne lagi, jaise ki vo bardaast nahi kar pa rahi ho. Par mujhe ritu ko be-intaha pyar dena tha.
ritu ki naabhi ko kiss karte karte main aur neeche ki taraf sarakne laga.
ab mere hont ritu ki salwaar ke naade ke upar the
maine naade ko chum liya aur ushe daanto mein daba kar kheenchne laga
“ohh jatin aaahhh…. Ruk jao” — ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
“kya huva ritu” — maine gardan utha kar pucha
“thodi der ruk jao jatin, meri saanse phool rahin hain” —- ritu ne haanpte huve kaha
“nahin jaan yahaan rukna theek nahi hai, pyar ki aag bahut bhadak chuki hai, yahaan ruke to ye aag hamein jhulsa degi. Hamein aage badhna hoga” —– maine kaha
“thodi der ruko to jatin” —– ritu ne phir kaha
maine upar aa kar ritu ke honto ko apne honto mein ley liya aur ek bahut gahri kiss ki
ritu ki saanso ki garmi mujhe mere honto par mahsush ho rahi thi.
main jaldi hi neeche pahunch gaya, ab intezaar karna mushkil ho raha tha, ritu ke chehre se lag raha tha ki vo ab khud ko thaam nahi pa rahi. main vakt barbaad nahi karna chaahta tha.
maine ritu ke naade ko khol kar salwaar neeche sarka di aur bola, “wow kitni pyari panti hai, kala rang mujhe bahut pasand hai”
“ohh jatin baate mat karo….” —- ritu ne kaha
maine dheere se panti neeche sarka di
chaandni raat mein ritu ki yoni itni pyari lag rahi thi ki mujh se raha nahi gaya aur maine ushki pankhudiyon ko chum liya aur chum kar unhe honto mein ley kar choosne laga.
“aaaahhhh………ooohhhhh….. jatin” —- ritu aahein bharte huve gardan daayein baayein ghuma rahi thi
“kaisa lag raha hai jaan” —- maine pucha
“aaaahhhh….bardaast nahin ho raha jatin, please thodi der hat jao” —– ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
maine ritu ki yoni ko faila kar apni jeebh ritu ki yoni mein daal di aur jitni ho sake utni ander sarka di
“ohh no….. tum aaj mujhe maar daaloge” —- ritu ne apni taange patakte huve kaha
par maine rukna theek nahi samjha, kyonki mujhe ritu ko pyar ki aur jyada gahraayi mein ley jaana tha. main ritu ki yoni mein apni jeebh ragadta raha aur ritu aaaahhh..oohhh karke aahein bharti rahi.
chaandni raat mein hum dono ka pyar ek alag hi unchaayi cho raha tha.
maine ab aur intezaar karna theek nahi samjha, ritu ki saanse bahut tej chal rahi thi. hamaare milan ka sahi vakt aa gaya tha.
main salwaar ko utaarne laga to ritu boli, “jatin, ruko ishe utaarna jaroori hai kya, hum khule aasmaan ke niche hain”
main samajh gaya tha ki ritu jheejak rahi hai. maine jaldi se salwaar utaar kar ek taraf rakh di aur phir panti bhi dheere dheere neeche sarka kar utaar di.
Main khud itna bahak chuka tha ki ek pal bhi rukna mushkil ho raha tha.
Maine jaldi se apne kapde utaar kar ek tataf faink diye aur ritu ke upar aa gaya.
Jaise hi main ritu ke upar aaya mera ling ritu ki yoni se takra gaya.
“Aaaahhhhh….” —- ritu ke muh se nikla
Ritu ne apna chehra apne haatho mein dhak liya

 

[Mr.X]

Maine ushke haatho ko hataaya aur ushke honto ko apne honto mein ley liya.
Maine pucha, “jaan ab hum ish safar ke aakhri padaav par hain. Kya tum final ride ke liye taiyaar ho, main apna ling tumhaari yoni mein daalne ja raha hun”
“Ohh jatin,……. please mujh se kuch mat pucho, mere liye kuch bhi kahna mushkil hai,…… I love you. ley chalo mujhe jahaan ley chalna hai, main tumhaari patni hun, har kadam par tumhaare saath rahungi” —– ritu ne aahein bharte huve bhaavuk andaaj mein kaha
“ok jaan fasten your seat belt I am going to take you to the moon” —- maine kaha
“ley chalo jatin jahaan ley chalna hai, mujhe pura yakin hai ki tum mujhe girne nahi doge” —- ritu ne pyar se kaha
maine apne ling ko apne daayein haath mein pakda aur ritu ki yoni par laga diya.
ek pal key liye mere ling aur ritu ki yoni ke beech bahut pyari kiss huyi. Man kar raha tha ki ushi position mein ruka rahun.
Par kishi anjaan shakti ne mujhe aage dhakail diya aur mera ling lagbhagh aadha ritu ki yoni mein sama gaya
“Aaaaahhhhhhhh…… jatin….. I love you” —- ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
“I love you too jaan” —— maine kaha
aur ye kah kar maine ek jhatke mein apne ling ko ritu ki yoni mein dhakail diya. sab kuch pyar ki madhoshi mein ho raha tha
ritu ne mujhe baahon mein bhar liya aur apne naakhun meri peeth par gada diye. Mujhe halka sa dard huva par vo dard itna pyara tha ki main kah nahi sakta. ish se saaf pata chal raha tha ki ritu ush pal ko bahut jyada enjoy kar rahi hai. ye mere pyar ki jeet thi
phir maine bina ruke ritu ki yoni ke ander apne pyar ki halchal shuru kar di. Maine pyar ka vo toofan khada kar diya ki ritu jor jor se aahein bharne lagi
“aaaahhhhh…….. jatin thodi der ruko varna main chaand tak pahunchne se pehle hi gir jaaungi” —– ritu ne kaha
“aaahhhh…..nahin jaan, chaand ka safar beech mein ruk kar pura nahi kiya ja sakta. hang on. Main tumhe hargeez girne nahi dunga. Agar tum gir bhi gayi to main tumhe phir utha lunga. Par ye gaadi ab apni manjil par hi rukegi” —— maine haanpte huve kaha
“ooohhh……tum bahut badmaash ho jatin” —- ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
“tumhe pyar karne ka ye matlab nahi hai ki main ye khubsurat badmaashi nahi karunga” —– maine kaha
“aaahhhh……lagta hai, maine tumse shaadi karke galti kar li hai, tum ab mujhe jeendagi bhar sataaoge” —- ritu ne haanpte huve kaha
“aahhh…haan sataaunga, vo bhi pure haq se, I love you” —- maine kaha
“I love you too jatin, thodi der ruko na” —– ritu ne kaha
“kya tumhe dard ho raha hai, ritu” —— maine dhakke maarte huve pucha
“nahin jatin dard nahin hai, par bardaast nahi ho raha” —– ritu ne kaha
“chaand ki unchaayi tak pahunchne ke liye tumhe thodi der aur bardaast karna hoga. Hum pyar ki aisi unchaayi ki taraf badh rahein hain jahaan hum kho jaayenge aur parmaatma mein mil jaayenge” —– maine kaha
“oooohhh….tumhaari baate meri samajh se baahar hai jatin, please jaldi khatam karo….aaahhhh” —- ritu ne kaha
“mujh par vishwaas rakho jaan, main ish milan ko sex se kahin aage ley ja rahaan hun…..aahhh” —- maine bina ruke kaha
“k..k..kahaan ley ja rahe ho jatin” —- ritu ne pucha.
“Pyar ke charam par, mujhe khud vahaan ka rasta nahi pata. Shuna hai ki vahaan bhagvaan rahte hain. Shaayad ye pyar hamein vahaan ley jaaye” —- maine kaha
mujhe khud nahi pata tha ki main kya kah raha tha. apne aap mere dil se kuch na kuch nikal raha tha.
main thodi der yu hi laga raha. ritu bhi thodi der kuch nahi boli. bas padi padi aahein bharti rahi
“aaahhh……kaisa lag raha hai tumhe jaan” —– maine apni speed aur badha kar pucha
“bahut acha…..par bardaast nahi ho raha, ab ruk bhi jao” —– ritu ne kaha
maine apni speed aur tej kar di. Hum dono ki saanse apne charam par pahunch gayi
“bas jaan…….. hum pahunchne… hi wale hain, hang on” —- maine kaha aur apni speed ko toofaan ki gati de di.
Aur phir achaanak mera prem ras ritu ke ander bah gaya aur main ritu ke upar gir gaya.
Vakt maano tahar gaya.
Achaanak maine mahsush kiya ki ritu subak rahi hai. maine sar utha kar dekha to vo ro rahi thi.
Maine pucha, “kya huva jaan, maine kuch galat kiya kya” ?
“Main aaj phir ye soch kar ro rahin hun ki agar bhagvaan ko hamein ye khubsurat rista dena tha to hamein itne badsurat rasto par kyon ghumaaya. Kya hum pehle nahi mil sakte the” —- ritu ne rote huve kaha.
“Dukhi mat ho jaan, sukar manaao ki hum aakhir mein mil to gaye. Ish jeendagi mein hum dono bahut neeche gire the. Tumhaari galti kam thi. main hi tumhe neeche ghasit kar ley gaya tha. kya tumhe ye baat pata hai ki prakriti ka ek niyam hai, ‘jo bahut neeche girta hai ushi ki bahut uncha uthne ki bhi sambhaavna hoti hai’. Newton ka third law bhi to yahi kahta hai, ‘To every action there is always an equal and opposite reaction’. Shaayad bhagvaan ko hamein neeche gira kar bahut upar uthaana tha. Dekho aaj hum pyar ki ek khubsurat unchaayi par khade hain. Yahaan se ye duniya aur ye jeendagi bahut khubsurat nazar aa rahi hai. dil chota mat karo aur bhagvaan ko hamein ish mod par laane ke liye sukriya karo” —— maine kaha
“tum sach mein bahut badal gaye ho jatin” — ritu ne kaha
“sab tumhaare pyar ka asar hai jaan, sab tumhaare kaaran hai”
“vaise tum ab baahar nikloge ya phir main dkakka de kar baahar nikaalun” —- ritu ne hanste huve kaha
“tum hi nikaal do dhakka de kar. Mera tumse dur jaane ka man nahi hai” —– maine kaha
“tum ek dum deewane ho gaye ho” — ritu ne kaha
“jishe jeendagi mein itna pyar mile vo bhala deewana kyon nahi hoga” —- maine kaha
“jatin tumne apni diary mein leekha tha ki hum bas chintoo ko rakhenge, aur bacho ki kya jaroorat hai. par kya hum ish pyar ka phool nahi kheelaayenge” —- ritu ne sharmaate huve kaha
“tum chaahti ho ki ish pyar ka phool kheele” — maine ritu ki aankho mein jhaank kar pucha
“haan jatin” —- ritu ne kaha
“theek hai phir main din raat tumhaari jamin ki seenchaayi kar dunga, dekhna pyar ka bahut pyara phool kheelega” —- maine kaha
“din raat ki jaroorat nahi hai Mr… tumne kya meri jaan lene ki thaan rakhi hai” —- ritu ne kaha
“tumhaari jaan mein meri jaan hai ritu, I love you. Tum chinta mat karo mera pyar tumhe pareshaan nahi karega” — maine kaha
“main to majaak kar rahi thi jatin, tumhaara pyar meri jeendagi hai, pareshaani nahi. dubaara aisa mat bolna” —- ritu ne kaha
aur phir hum ek dushre ki baahon mein kho gaye aur thodi der chupchaap pade rahe. Main abhi bhi ritu ke upar tha.
kab neend aa gayi pata hi nahi chala
par jab mein neend mein tha to mere dil mein mitha mitha ahsaash ho raha tha. hum dono ka milan mujhe meri aatma tak mahsush ho raha tha.
hamaara milan, delhi mein hoga, vo bhi chaandni raat mein, maine socha bhi nahi tha. maano koyi sapna sach ho gaya ho.
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subah chidiyon ki awaaj ne hamein uthaaya. Pehle meri aankh khul gayi. ritu mere baaju mein sikud kar lati huyi thi. hum dono ke upar ek patli si chaddar thi. kab main ritu ke upar se hata, kab vo chaddar hamne odhi mujhe kuch yaad nahi. yaad hai to bas itna ki chaandni raat mein maine apni patni ko pa liya
mumbai jaane ke liye aaj shaam 6 baje ki flight hai. ritu koyi 10 baje karol bagh apne ghar chali gayi thi. main ushke ghar ke liye nikalne wala hun. vaha se hum dono airport ke liye nikal lenge.

 

[Mr.X]

Date : 24-09-09
11:30 pm
Bahut dard dekha hai ritu ne apni jeendagi mein, vo bhi itne kam vakt mein. Bahut had tak main khud ushke dukho ke liye zimmedaar tha.
Par aaj vo bahut khus hai. aankhe band karke mere paas hi lati huyi hai. ushe dekhta hun to ush par bahut pyar aata hai. hum abhi abhi pyar karke hate hain. Aaj ushne pyar karte vakt khub shor machaaya. Mujhe bahut acha laga ki vo ab sab kuch bhula kar ish pyar mein kho jaati hai.
Peechle hafte se maine ghar par hi ritu ko meditation seekhana shuru kar diya hai. vo bade pyar se seekh rahi hai. mera maksad ish riste ko ek alag hi unchaayi tak ley jaane ka hai. mujhe khusi hai ki ritu mera saath de rahi hai. meditation hamaare man ko shudh karke hamaare jeevan ko ek nayi disha deti hai. meri yahi koshish hai ki hum har vakt apne man ko shudh rakhein aur ache positive vichaar lekar jeendagi mein aage badhein. Maine aur ritu ne bure vichaaro ke parinaam apne jeevan mein dekhe hain ishliye ish baat ko ache se samajhte hain
Hum har Sunday ko mandir jaate hain, aur bhagvaan ka sukriya karte hain ki unhone hamein ek hasin rista diya hai.
Mera aur ritu ka bahut pyara rista chal raha hai. hamaare riste mein pyar hi pyar hai. takraar bhi hai jhut nahi bolunga par ushme bhi to pyar hi hota hai. pyar aur takraar saath saath chalte hain. Ritu jab ruth jaati hai to ushe manaane mein bahut maja aata hai. ruthte manaate aksar hum pyar mein dub jaate hain.
Abhi hamein ek saath bahut saare challenges ka saamna karna hai. chintoo jab yahaan aayega to pata nahi mujhe apnaayega ki nahi. par ritu ne kal kaha tha ki, “jab maine tumhe pyar kar liya to hamaara beta bhi karne lagega”
Mujhe pata hai ki ye itna aasaan nahi hai. par mujhe ummeed hai ki sab kuch theek hoga
Mujhe abhi jeendagi mein bahut kuch karna hai. maine m.com correspondence shuru kar di hai. civil services ka attempt bhi lene ja raha hun. ish December mein form bhar dunga. Jab mein b.com first year mein tha to maine socha tha ki ek baar civil services try karunga. ye chance lene ka ab vakt aa gaya hai.
Main aur ritu dil mein dher sara pyar ley kar pyar ke safar par chal pade hain. Jo bhi mushkilein hongi unka hum saath saath mukaabla karenge.
Vaise aaj shaam ko hamaare beech ek bahut pyara pal aaya.
Hum dono ne ek dushre ko surprise gift diya aur phir kuch aisa huva ki hum khud ko rok nahin paaye aur bhaavnaao mein bah kar pyar kar baithe.
Mujhe ritu saree mein bahut pyari lagti hai. main ushe yellow saree mein dekhna chaahta tha. maine aaj dopahar ko ek yellow saree kharid li thi.
Ghar aate hi maine ritu ko saree thama di. Vo saree dekh kar chonk gayi.
Maine pucha, “kya huva jaan saree pasand nahi aayi kya”
“Nahin bahut pyari hai jatin, tum aankhe band karo mujhe bhi tumhe kuch dena hai” —- ritu ne kaha
maine aankhe band kar li
ritu ne thodi der mein kaha, “aankhe kholo pati dev”
jaise hi maine aankhe kholi ritu ne mere haath mein ek shirt thama di. vo yellow shirt thi.
“arey tum bhi yellow shirt ley aayi” — maine kaha
“haan ishiliye to main hairaan thi ki ye matching kapde kaise kharid liye hamne, vo bhi bina baat kiye” —- ritu ne kaha
“yahi to pyar ka chamatkaar hai jaan, we are realy made for each other” —- maine kaha
ush pal mein hum itne madhosh ho gaye ki hamne ek dushre ko baahon mein jakad liya aur phir hamaare beech vo toofaani pyar huva ki kah nahi sakta.
ushi toofaan se chakna choor ho kar ritu mere baaju mein sho rahi hai aur main ish diary ka aakhri panna bharne mein laga hun.
hamaara pyar chaand ki unchaayi se bhi kahin aage badh gaya hai. shaayad hum bhagvaan ke nazdeek pahunch gaye hain
Shaayad kah raha hun kyonki sachaayi mujhe bhi nahi pata. Pata hai to bas itna ki main ritu ke pyar mein khud ko bhula chuka hun.
The End

 

[Mr.X]

story ccompleted

 

[Bholu]

wonderfull story

 

[chaman chutiya]

badhiya kahani maja aa gaya

 

[Aanand]

superb story

 

[Mr.X]

superb story

thanks

 

[Mr.X]

superb story

thanks

 

[Mr.X]

badhiya kahani maja aa gaya

thanks