Thriller DARD

[Itz Anjum]

supreb update dost

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[DAMON]

UPDATE -1

Ye baat aaj se 19 saal pehele ki hai Bangalore me ek aurat city ke sabse bde hospital me dard se chilla rhi thi uski delivery hone wali thi. Raat ke 12 baje ne me sirf 7 min baki the. Bahar us aurat ke ghar wale khade the. Kuch hi samay me us aurat ne thik 12 baje ek sundar se ladke ko janam diya. Nurse bhagti hui operation theater se bahar aai aur boli.

Nurse: mubarak ho raghuveer ji aap ko Beta hua hai.
( ji haa ye aadmi koi aur nhi mere hi Dad hai aur wo aurat meri maa.)
Dad bohot khush ho gye kyuki mai pehela beta jo tha aur unhone jeb se do 2000 ke bundle nikal ke nurse ko dediye aur bole.

Dad: jaao aur pure hospital me mithai batwado logo ko bhi to pta chalna chahiye ki Rajput khandan ka waris aa gya hai.

Nurse wo paise leke nikal gyi aur dad ne ye kahbar dadaji, chacha, aur chachi ko sunayi.
Wo sab bhi bohot khush ho gye aur sab mujhe dekhne andar aagye. Dad ki godh me 1 sal ki janvi didi bethi thi. Dad ne use chachi ki godh me de kar mujhe godh me liya aur dekhne lage meri kali aakho me. Wo thodi der ke liye kho se gye phir mera matha chuma aur bole.

Dad: dekha babuji maine aapko waris de hi diya.
Dada ji : ha, kitna sundar pota hai mera.



Didi ko kuch samaj to aa nhi rha tha par sab ko khush dekh wo bhi khush thi. Chachi kuch khas khush nhi thi kyuki abhi tak unko ladka nhi hua tha. Chacha khush the par chachi ke karan jahir nhi kar paa rhe the.
Kuch der me maa ko bhi hosh aagya aur unhone mujhe dad ke pas se lekar apne baaju me rakh kar dekhne lagi aur boli.

Mom: kitna sundar hai mera beta kisiki nazar na lage.
Dadaji : ha, bahu sach me mera pota bohot sundar hai.
Chacha : aakhir bhatija kiska hai.

Aise hi sab acha chalta rha aur agle din maa aur mujhe ghar laya gya. Kafi saare rishtedaar mujhe dekhne aur badhai dene aaye jise dekh chachi khush nhi thi.
Jab maa mujhe doodh pila rhi thi achanak thodi der me doodh ki kami ke karan doodh ki jagah khoon nikal ne laga aur maa ne mera muh nipple se hta diya jise dekh chachi ko mouka mil gya aur wo boli.

Chachi : are re ghar me aate hi apshagun kra diya manhus ne.
Dadaji : choti bahu khabardar jo mere pote ko kuch kaha to.
Chachi : maaf kar dijiye babuji galti se muh se nikal gya.
Mom : haa choti ye to mere kamjori ke karan ho tha hai.

Chahi tab to chup ho gyi par unki man me kadwahat bad gyi.

Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

nice update bro, keep it up,

 

[DAMON]

UPDATE - 2


Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

Ab aage..

2 din baad pandit ji ko naam karan ke liye bulaya gya. Us din hamare ghar ko dulhan ki tarah rajaya gya tha. Achcha hamara ghar banglore se thoda bahar sabse shant aur posh area me hai. hamare ghar ko ghar kahana galat hoga kyuki ye to pura bangla tha. 3 floor ka tha niche hall, kitchen, aur dining room tha. Uper mummy papa , chachi chachi aur didi ka kamra tha uske bagal me dadaji ka kamra tha. Baaki kamre band the jab koi rishtedaar ata to unke liye khulwa diya jata.




Chalo ab story pe ate hai..

To pandit ji bhi aagye phir puja shuru hui phir wo bole.
Pandit: Mata Pita apne bacche ke sath puja me bethe.
Mom dad puja me baith gye mom ki god me mai soya tha phir jaisa jaisa pandit bolta gya waise waise mom dad karte gye. Jab pandit me hawan me aahuti dene ko kaha, jaise hi papa ne aahuti di achanak aag ki lapte bhadak gyi. Jise dekh pandit ji chouk gye aur bole.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua ye kisi anishth ka sanket hai.
Dad: aree panditji aap kuch jada hi soch rahe hai.
Dad ne iss chiz ko nazar andaz kiya kyuki wo insab chizo vishwas nhi rakhte the par maa ke chehre pe pareshani ki lakire zaroor thi par unhone kuch zahir nhi kiya itne logo ke samne Aakhir mere gharwalo ke rutube ka sawal tha jise wo log kisi bhi insan se upar rakhte the chahe wo mai hi kyu na hu. To puja phir khatam hui phir pandit ji ne mujhe god me liya aur dekhne lage tab meri aakhe bad thi par jaise hi pandit ne mere hath ko chua mai aakhen khol use dekhne lga unhe aashcharya hua par badme mujhe maa ki god me dekar wo kundali banane lage. Wo jaise jaise kundali bana rhe the waise waise unki aakhen badi hoti ja rhi thi aur maathe per chinta ki lakire badh rhi thi. Kuch der bad wo maa se bole.

Pandit : putri balak ka janm sthan aur samay batao.
Mom: pandit ji mere bete ka janm isi sheher ke sabse bde hospital me raat ke thik 12 baje hua hai.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua bachche ka jamn subh samay ke viprit samay par hua hai. Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mom ne bas itna suna aur pandit ko paise dekar bahar nikal diya. Unke hisab se agar ye baat kisiko pta chalti to unka naam kharab ho jata.
Dad ne is baat ko itna serious nhi liya. Unke liye itna hi kafi tha ki unhone ek waris de diya baki unko mujhe se zaada matlab nhi tha wo business ko hi apna sab kuch mante the.
Par dadaji mujh par jaan chidakte the tab us samay maa ko bhi mujh se lagav tha par meri janm kundali wali baat unhe kahi na kahi khatakti thi.

Khair 2 saal aaise hi nikal gaye. Is beech choti moti baate kahe ya durghatna hoti rahi jo sab nazar andaz kar dete par chachi hamesha mujhe manhus kah kar sab mere uper dal deti. ab mai 2 sal ka tha aur janvi didi 3 saal ki thi hum sath khelte par mere aajane se unhe pyaar thoda kam milta toh wo mujh par gussa utar diya karti ( ab aap bachcho ko to jante hi hai kaise hote hai) mom phir se pregnant thi. Kuch hi din me hamare ghar meri pyari princess Swara aayi mere bachpan ka khilona bankar. Mai khud to bachcha tha par iska khayal mai khud rakhne ki koshish karta. Ab papa bhi ghar aur hum par dhayan dene lage the. Chachi ka ravayaiya abhi bhi vaisa hi tha. Dada ji bhi khush the bhara pura pariwar dekh kar.

Aise hi kuch mahine bit gaye. Mai to apni princess me hi magan rehta. Didi ko bhi ab maa papa ka pyaar barabar mil rha tha phir bhi hamari zyada nhi banti this.

Aaj sunday tha dad bhi aaj ghar pe the. Sab kahana kha rahe the tabhi dad ka pgone baja.

Dad: hello
Samne se : ....................
Dad : kya baat kar rhe ho.
Samne se : ....................
Dad: aisa nhi ho skta.
Samne se : ....................
Dad : nhiii.........
Isi le sath dad ne phone diwar par phek mara aur sar pakad kar baith gye. Jisse dekh kar mom, chacha aur dadaji ghabra gye. Mom ne phucha.

Mom: kya hua aap aise kyu sar pakad rkha hai. ?
Dad : sab barbad ho gya.
Mom: kya hua hai bataiye.
Dad : jewelry ke showroom me aag lag gyi hai.
(dadaji, mom, chacha, chachi ek sath): kya?
Mom ne dad ko paani diya aur boli.
Mom: shaant ho jaiye. Sab thik ho jaiga.
(Itne me chachi bhi bol uthi wo kaha piche rehne wali thi. )
Chachi : Ab khuch this nhi hoga sab iss manhus ki wajah se hua hai.
Dadaji : (gusse me) bahu apni zuban sambhal kar.
Chachi : aaj nhi babuji ab paani sar se upar nikal chuka hai.
Dad: aaj pehli baar mujhe kamya ki baat sach lag rhi hai jab se aya hai nuksaan ho rga hai.
Mom: aaj to mujhe bhi iss baat par yakin jo gya ki ye manhus hai.

Ye bolkar mom ne mere pass se meri princess Swara ko utha liye aur use room me le gyi. mai rone laga par kisine dhyaan nhi diya.
Dadaji mhuje gle laga kar mera sar sehlane lage aur bole.
Dadaji : koi kuch bhi bole par mujhe pta hai ki mera pota mahus nhi hai balki ek acha aur sachcha bachcha hai.
Dadaji mujhe god me liye aise hi selhlate rhe jab tak mai so nhi gya. Aur mujhe bed per lita diya.



Aaage dekhte hai kya hota hai........

nice update , keep posting

 

[Itz Anjum]

nice update bro, keep it up,

Hmmm

 

[Itz Anjum]

nice update , keep posting

Hmmm

 

[LEON 32]

Family Introduction

• Raghuveer Rajput (Dad) : ye India ke jane maane business man hai. Age ab 43 hai . Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krte hai.




• Shikha Rajput (Mom) : ye ek housewife hai. Inki age ab 37 hai. Inhe bhi Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krti hai.



• Janvi Rajput (Badi behen) : inki age abhi 21 hai. Ye nature se kaffi gusaal hai aur ghamand to maa baap se mila hi hai. Sab inhe pyaar se janu kehete hai.



• Swara Rajput (choti behen) : ye hai meri princess. Inki age abhi 18 hai. Bohot hi soft hearted hai aur shayad yehi mujhe sach me apna manti thi.



• Yash Rajput (chacha) : ye mere papa ke chote bhai. Inki age 38 hai. Ye apne bhai se alag hai par unke dar se kabhi unke faisle ke khilaf nhi gye.



• kamya Rajput (chachi) : inhe bhi apni khubsurti pe kafi ghamand hai
.inki age abhi 34 . Inka baki nature aage pta chalega.



• Divya Rajput ( behen) : ye chacha chachi ki beti hai. Inki bhi age abhi 18 hai. Ye kafi shant rehti hai par Mujse nafrat krti hai . ise gareebo se sakt nafrat hai.



• Mahaveer Rajput (dadaji) : ye mere sab kuch the . Ye meri jine ki wajah the jo ab nhi rhi.



Last But Not The Least

• Reyansh Rajput (mai) : meri age abhi 20 saal. Pariwar ke hote hue bhi anath ki zindagi jine wala jiski kismat hi " DARD " ku sihyai se likhi hai.





Baki character aage bataya jaega

Itz Anjum for your story
Ummid karta hu aapki ye "DARD" bhari kahani humare mann mai apna ek vishesh isthan banaegi.

Sab se pahle toh 1st msg mai sidha kahani ke kirdaro ka introduction dena ye dikhata hai ki aap ke mind main ye kahani bilkul clear hai and aap esse jarure pura karenge.

Dusri baate ye ki kahani ke kirdaro ka intro kaafi aache se diya gaya hai kahne ka mtlab ye ki kirdaar samne hote huwe bhi unke baare mai utna hi pata chal raha hai jeetna aap chahte ho aur ye kubhi har writer mai dekhe ko nahi milti. Eske liye aapki taarif banti hai.

Kahani ke har update ko mai mairee puri imandari se padhunga aur apne vichar aapko bataoga.
AAPKA MASOOM READER

 

[R kami]

Nice update bro keep it up bro waiting for the next updates bro

 

[Itz Anjum]

Itz Anjum for your story
Ummid karta hu aapki ye "DARD" bhari kahani humare mann mai apna ek vishesh isthan banaegi.

Sab se pahle toh 1st msg mai sidha kahani ke kirdaro ka introduction dena ye dikhata hai ki aap ke mind main ye kahani bilkul clear hai and aap esse jarure pura karenge.

Dusri baate ye ki kahani ke kirdaro ka intro kaafi aache se diya gaya hai kahne ka mtlab ye ki kirdaar samne hote huwe bhi unke baare mai utna hi pata chal raha hai jeetna aap chahte ho aur ye kubhi har writer mai dekhe ko nahi milti. Eske liye aapki taarif banti hai.

Kahani ke har update ko mai mairee puri imandari se padhunga aur apne vichar aapko bataoga.
AAPKA MASOOM READER

Hmmm

 

[Itz Anjum]

Nice update bro keep it up bro waiting for the next updates bro

Hnmm

 

[Itz Anjum]

UPDATE-3

Dadaji mujhe god me liye aise hi selhlate rhe jab tak mai so nhi gya. Aur mujhe bed per lita diya.

an aageee........

Jab mai utha mujhe meri princess ke pass jana tha par jaise hi mai Mom ke room me princess ke sath khelne ke liya bda mom ne mujhe phiche jhatak diya aur boli.
Mom: dur hat manhus meri beti se. Apne baap ka business to kha hi gya hai ab meri choti beti ko to chod de.

Mujhe kuch samaj to nhi aya par mom ke dhakka dene ki wajah se mai gir gya to mujhe rona aa gya aur mai uth kar papa ke pass jane laga par jaise hi papa ki godh me chadha papa ne bhi mujhe dur hata diya aur bole.
Dad: dur reh mujhse manhus pehele hi mujhe barbad kar chuka hai.

Mujhe ab kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha mai bas roye jaa rha tha. Dadaji ne bhi ye baat sunli. Wo jaldi se mere paas aaye aur godh me utha liya aur dad se bole.
Dadaji: pagal ho gya hai kya, ek chota sa bachcha ue sab kaise kar sakta hai.
Dad: babuji aap bich mat boliye. Aap jante bhi hai kitna nuksan hua hai??
Dadaji: kitna bhi hua ho par mere liye kuch mere pote se jada to nhi hai .
Dad : poore 630 karod ka nuksaan hua hai.
Dadaji : beta paise wapas bhi kamaye jaa sakye hai par rishte nhi.
Dad : kaisa rishta?? Aajse mera air iska koi rishta nhi hai.

Itna bole dad waha se chale gye. Dadaji mujhe leke apne kamre me aagye. Par koi ye sab hote hue dekh rha tha. ye koi aur nhi kamya chachi thi , aaj wo bohot jada khush tji aakhir unki man ki muraad jo puri ho rhi thi.

Khair 2-3 ghante to dadaji ke sath nikal gye par baad me mujhe bhuk lagne lagi ( mai 2 saal ka tha par abhi tak meri maa ka dodh pine ki aadat nhi chuti thi) to mai rone laga dadaji ko samajne me der nhi lagi ki mujhe bhuk lagi hai to dadaji mujhe mom ke paas le gye aur bole.

Dadaji : Bahu lo reyansh ko bhuk lagi hai ise doodh pila do.
Mom ne saaf mana karte hue kaha.
Mom: maaf karna babuji par mai iss manhus ko dudh nhi pila sakti.
Dadaji : bahu ye kaisi baate kar rhi ho. Kya maa hote hue bhi tumhe apne bachche ki bookh nhi dikhai deti??
Mom : aaisa mahus mera beta ho hi nhi sakta.

Ye keh kar maa swara ko godh me liye janvi ka hath pakad kar room se bahar nikal jati hai aur chod jati hai piche ek bhook se tadapta apna bachcha . Aaj dadaji aasoo bhate hue khud ko bohot bebas mehsoos kat rhe the ye soch kar ki wo apne pote ki bookh tak shaant na kar sake.

Tabhi mera rona sun waha saima ( hamare ghar me kaam karne wali maid) waha aa gyi
Aur mujhe bookh me rota dekh uska dil pasijh gya aur wo boli.

Saima : bade sahab agar aap ijazat de to mai chote baba ko doodh pila du.
( saima ki bhi 1 saal ki bachi hai isi liye use bhi doodh ata tha)
Uski baat sun dadaji sochne lage kyuki wo ek nichi jaat ki aurat thi aur ham rajput par mere bhook ki tadap ke aage wo haar gye aur saima ke godh meujhe dene ke baad hath jod ke bole.

Dadaji : danya ho tum beti mai tumhara ye karz jindagi bhar nhi chuka paaunga.
Saima : aap mujhe beti bhi kehete hai karz ki baate karte hai.

Dadji ab chup ho gye aur saima mujhe kamre me le jake doodh pilane lagi.
( aaj saima maa ne mujhe doodh pila kar meri zindagi khareed li thi. Isliye mai unhe saima maa kehta tha)
Doodh pila ne ke baad saima ne mujhe dadaji ke paas dediya.

Aaise hi din nikalye gye. Jab bhi mai maa ya papa ke paas unka naam apni tutlati jubaan se lete hue jata to wo mujhe dat dete, dhakka de dete ya kabhi kbhi to maar bhi dete. Ye sab wo dadaji ke phiche karte the kyuki wo unke saamne karne ki himmat nhi rakhte the. Chachi ko to waise bhi mujhse koi khaas lagav nhi tha to unhe insab se koi farak nhi pda. Chacha ko mere liye dukh hota par wo dad aur chachi ke laran kuch bol nhi pate par akele me thoda bohot pyaar kar liya karte. Janvi didi ko farak nhi pda kyuki ab maa hi unhe mujh se door rahane ke liye kahati.

Chachi bhi pregnant thi khuch hi din me hamare yaha ek aur gudiya aa gyi divya. Chachi to mujhe divya ke ass pass bhi bhatakne deti thi.

Aab to dadaji aur saima maa hi meri zindagi ban gye the . Aise hi din bitne lage.
Ek din mai dadaji ke laye hue khilono se khel rha tha tabhi janvi didi aa gyi aur mere khilone todne lagi to mai rone laga . Mere rone ki awaj sun kar maa aur chachi aa gyi. Par maa ne meri taraf dekha bhi nahi aur didi ko puchne lagi.

Mom : kya hua meri rani beti ko kahi iss manhus ne kuch kiya toh nhi.
Janvi didi : ( jhut bolte hue) haa maa isne mujhe dhakka de diya.
Mai : nhi maa maine kuch nhi kiya.
( totli juban me)
Chaataakkkk....
Jaise hiaine ye bola maa ne mujhe thappad mar diya aur boli.
Mom: himmat kaise hui mujhe maa kehne ki. Teri aukat ek kutte ki bhi nhi hai aur teri himmat kaise hui meri beti ko dhakka dene ki.
Chachi : bhabhi ye lato ka bhut hai aise nhi manega.
Isi ke sath
Chaataakk. ...chaataakkk..... Chataaakkkk.
7-8 thappad mare. Mai bas rota ja rha tha mere muh se shabd nhi nikal rhe the. Aree bolna to dur mujhe meri galti bhi samaj nhi aa rhi thi. Mere gaal tamatar ki tarah laal ho gye the kyuki mera rang bohot gora tha. Chachi ye sab dekh ke muskura rhi thi aur janvi bhi khush thi. Tabhi waha saima maa aa gyi aur boli.
Saima maa : mem sab chod dijiye bachcha hai galti ho gyi.
Maa : tu yaha ki naukar hai to aukat me reh. Ye sunke saima maa chup ho gyi.
Achanak pta nhi kaha se dadaji bich me aa gye aur mujhe maa se dur kar apne godh me le liya. Aur maa chachi par bhadak gye.
Dadaji : himmat kaise hui tum doni ki mere pote ko hath lagane ki. Dur ho jao tum dono meri nazaron se.

Maa, chachi aur janvi didi dadaji ki dahad se dar kar ghar ke andar chale gye. Aaj mujhe itna "DARD" ho rha tha ki mai baya nhi kar sakta tha kyuki ye thappad sidha mere dil par lage the. aaj mere chehere pe ki masoomiyat kahi gum ho gyi thi aur uski jagah darr ne leliya tha. Darr ek maa ki mamta na milne ka darr, ek baap ka pyaar na milne ka darr, akele pad jane ka darr.

Aise hi samay bitta gya ab janvi didi school jane lagi thi. Maa ki maar chalti rehti thi unhe maa pukarne pe aur chachi aur janvi mujhe paresha karti rehti par dadaji ke piche. Mai ye sab dadaji ko nhi batata tha kyuki mai nhi chahta tha ki mere karan dadaji ke rishte kisise kharab ho.



Dekhte hai aage kya hota haii.........