Incest Deewaana the devil

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Yeh ek kaalpanik kahani hai
Sachchayi se door door tak iska koi vaasta nahi hai
Kirpa karke ismein dikhaye gaye karnaamo ko asli jindagi mein karne ki koshish na karein
Warna kahin se bhi udti hui chappal aake lag sakti hai
Aapki gaand toot sakti hai
Phir bhi agar aapke gurdo mein khujli hoti hai
Toh uske jimmedar aap khud Honge
Khush rahiye
Swasth rahiye
Aur sath dete rahiye....
 
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UPDATE 1
main bahut chhota tha
jab meri judwa behen ko meri daadi ne bech diya
bas thode se paiso ke liye
zindagi mein aur kuchh ho ya na ho
paisa hona chahiye
paise se tum kuchh bhi khareed sakte ho
paise se hi toh meri behen khareeda tha kisi ne
pata nahi kahan hai woh
is baat ko 10 saal ho gaye
meri maa ne bahut koshish ki mere baap ko rokne ki
lekin mera baap nahi maana
apni maa ka laadla tha na
agar meri maa kehti ki jaake apni biwi ko bech aa
tab bhi mera baap ek jara bhi nahi sochta

meri daadi ke 6 bachche hain
sabse bada

ranjeet singh
wife sadhna
ek number ki chudakkad aurat hai
jab tak raat ko ek baar chud nahi legi
ise neend nahi aati
har roz chacha ise chodta hai
lekin phir bhi iski aag thandi nahi hoti hai

iske teen bachche hain

sabse badi beti
seema
uske baad
meena
uske baad
reena

teeno hi kunwari hain
shaadi karne ke liye paise chahiye
aur paise kahan se aayenge
chacha khud mazdoori karta hai thakur ke yahan

mera baap
rajesh Singh
5 saal pehle gayab ho gaya
tab se iska kuchh ata pata nahi hai

maa
sharmila
usi ki tarah dikhti bhi hai

meri badi behen
madhuri

uske baad main
prem

meri judwa behen
meera
jise meri daadi ne bech diya tha

uske baad meri chhoti behen
sheetal

phir mera chacha
hardev singh


abhi tak do shaadi kar chuka hai
lekin dono mein se koi bhi maa nahi ban paayi
woh budhiya ab teesri shaadi karwana chah rahi hai
uski

pehli biwi
jaya

dusri biwi
rekha

roz raat ko daaru peeke aata hai
boor toh maari nahi jaati
lekin dono ko maarta bahut hai

daadi rokti nahi hai
uski maansikta hi aisi hai
uski najar mein
pati jo hota hai
patni ka maalik hota hai
jo chahe kar sakta hai woh

yeh baat us samay shuru hui
jab main 18 saal ka hua
ek din main apni didi ke sath bazar gaya

wahan kuchh ladke meri didi ko uthake le jaane lage
mera khoon khaul gaya
unmein se do ladko ko maine jaan se maar diya

ab gaon ke kisi bhi area mein kisi ko bhi pakda jaata
pehle thakur ko khabar di jaati

thakur ne mujhe haveli bulwaya
khud daroga mujhe haveli leke gaya

thakur..main tujhe bacha sakta hoon
lekin tujhe mere liye kaam karna hoga

main..kaisa kaam

thakur.. inspector tum jaao

police waale chale gaye
itna rob dabdaba tha thakur ka

thakur..padhna aata hai

main..jee

thakur..yeh bag lo
aur yeh raha pata
ise wahan pahuncha do
wahan yeh bag deke
tumhein wahan se dusra bag laana hoga
sukhiya tumhare sath jaayega

main maan gaya
mujhe pata tha ki mujhe faansi hogi
agar maine thakur ki baat nahi maani toh

main aur sukhiya nikal gaye
kareeb 4 ghante baad hum us pate pe pahunch gaye

sukhiya..room number 34 mein jaa
andar se jab puchha jaaye
ki mera desh
toh tu bolega mahan


main bag uthaya pata nahi us bag mein kya tha
main bag leke room number 34 pe pahuncha
gate knock kiya

andar se awaj aayi

mera desh

main..mahan

aur phir gate khula

main andar ghusa
wahan full daaru baaji randi baaji chal rahi thi
kuchh ladkiya thi
aur kuchh buddhe the
jo chudai karne mein lage hue the

main bag de diya
aur side mein khada ho gaya

khada Kyu hai
ab jaa

main..dusra bag

yeh sunke usne apne saathiyo ko dekha
aur hansne laga

usmein se ek ne mujhpe gun taan di

jaa na Bhosdike
warna yahin dher kar dunga

main.. bina bag ke nahi jaaunga

dekh kya raha hai khatam kar de saale ko

usne mere maathe se gun bhida diya
aur phir trigger daba diya
mere maathe mein ek chhed ho gaya
lekin main waise ka waise hi khada tha

woh sab shocked ho gaye
woh kya main khud bhi shocked ho chuka tha

jisne mujhe goli maari thi
main uske hath se gun chheenne ki koshish karne laga
lekin woh mujhse jyada taaqatwar tha
usne phir se mujhe goli maar di

lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nahi hua
woh sab ghabra gaye
aur sab milke mujhe goli maarne lage
aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua
ki main toh ajay hoon amar hoon

main unsabpe toot pada
bhale hi woh mujhse Jyada taaqatwar the
lekin main unhein maarta raha
aur aakhir mein mere hath mein gun aagayi
main bina dekhe trigger dabata raha
sabke sab maare gaye

wahan jitni bhi ladkiya thi
sabki sab mar chuki thi
ek ko chhodke
woh apni aakhri saansein le rahi thi

main uske paas gaya
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the

meri maa ka naam sharmila hai
mera gaon shaktipur hai
meri laash meri maa tak pahuncha dena

uski baatein sunke meri aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya

main cheekh cheekh ke rone laga

use apne seene se lagake rota raha....
 
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Bhai congratulation for story
:confuse:
Ye tha kya update bhai :hmm:
Bahan bik gyi
Fir paise par thoda gyan
Fir intro
Baap gayab h
Hero murderer bhi ban gaya
Hero ko ek mauka mila jan bchane ka apna
Hero achanak immortal ho gaya
Aur fir bahan ko hi pel diya ..... gun se :slap:


Tha kya ye :dontknow:
 
A

Avni

UPDATE 1
main bahut chhota tha
jab meri judwa behen ko meri daadi ne bech diya
bas thode se paiso ke liye
zindagi mein aur kuchh ho ya na ho
paisa hona chahiye
paise se tum kuchh bhi khareed sakte ho
paise se hi toh meri behen khareeda tha kisi ne
pata nahi kahan hai woh
is baat ko 10 saal ho gaye
meri maa ne bahut koshish ki mere baap ko rokne ki
lekin mera baap nahi maana
apni maa ka laadla tha na
agar meri maa kehti ki jaake apni biwi ko bech aa
tab bhi mera baap ek jara bhi nahi sochta

meri daadi ke 6 bachche hain
sabse bada

ranjeet singh
wife sadhna
ek number ki chudakkad aurat hai
jab tak raat ko ek baar chud nahi legi
ise neend nahi aati
har roz chacha ise chodta hai
lekin phir bhi iski aag thandi nahi hoti hai

iske teen bachche hain

sabse badi beti
seema
uske baad

meena
uske baad

reena

teeno hi kunwari hain
shaadi karne ke liye paise chahiye
aur paise kahan se aayenge
chacha khud mazdoori karta hai thakur ke yahan

mera baap
rajesh Singh
5 saal pehle gayab ho gaya
tab se iska kuchh ata pata nahi hai

maa
sharmila
usi ki tarah dikhti bhi hai

meri badi behen
madhuri

uske baad main
prem

meri judwa behen
meera
jise meri daadi ne bech diya tha

uske baad meri chhoti behen
sheetal

phir mera chacha
hardev singh


abhi tak do shaadi kar chuka hai
lekin dono mein se koi bhi maa nahi ban paayi
woh budhiya ab teesri shaadi karwana chah rahi hai
uski

pehli biwi
jaya

dusri biwi
rekha

roz raat ko daaru peeke aata hai
boor toh maari nahi jaati
lekin dono ko maarta bahut hai

daadi rokti nahi hai
uski maansikta hi aisi hai
uski najar mein
pati jo hota hai
patni ka maalik hota hai
jo chahe kar sakta hai woh

yeh baat us samay shuru hui
jab main 18 saal ka hua
ek din main apni didi ke sath bazar gaya

wahan kuchh ladke meri didi ko uthake le jaane lage
mera khoon khaul gaya
unmein se do ladko ko maine jaan se maar diya

ab gaon ke kisi bhi area mein kisi ko bhi pakda jaata
pehle thakur ko khabar di jaati

thakur ne mujhe haveli bulwaya
khud daroga mujhe haveli leke gaya

thakur..main tujhe bacha sakta hoon
lekin tujhe mere liye kaam karna hoga

main..kaisa kaam

thakur.. inspector tum jaao

police waale chale gaye
itna rob dabdaba tha thakur ka

thakur..padhna aata hai

main..jee

thakur..yeh bag lo
aur yeh raha pata
ise wahan pahuncha do
wahan yeh bag deke
tumhein wahan se dusra bag laana hoga
sukhiya tumhare sath jaayega

main maan gaya
mujhe pata tha ki mujhe faansi hogi
agar maine thakur ki baat nahi maani toh

main aur sukhiya nikal gaye
kareeb 4 ghante baad hum us pate pe pahunch gaye

sukhiya..room number 34 mein jaa
andar se jab puchha jaaye
ki mera desh
toh tu bolega mahan


main bag uthaya pata nahi us bag mein kya tha
main bag leke room number 34 pe pahuncha
gate knock kiya

andar se awaj aayi

mera desh

main..mahan

aur phir gate khula

main andar ghusa
wahan full daaru baaji randi baaji chal rahi thi
kuchh ladkiya thi
aur kuchh buddhe the
jo chudai karne mein lage hue the

main bag de diya
aur side mein khada ho gaya

khada Kyu hai
ab jaa

main..dusra bag

yeh sunke usne apne saathiyo ko dekha
aur hansne laga

usmein se ek ne mujhpe gun taan di

jaa na Bhosdike
warna yahin dher kar dunga

main.. bina bag ke nahi jaaunga

dekh kya raha hai khatam kar de saale ko

usne mere maathe se gun bhida diya
aur phir trigger daba diya
mere maathe mein ek chhed ho gaya
lekin main waise ka waise hi khada tha

woh sab shocked ho gaye
woh kya main khud bhi shocked ho chuka tha

jisne mujhe goli maari thi
main uske hath se gun chheenne ki koshish karne laga
lekin woh mujhse jyada taaqatwar tha
usne phir se mujhe goli maar di

lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nahi hua
woh sab ghabra gaye
aur sab milke mujhe goli maarne lage
aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua
ki main toh ajay hoon amar hoon

main unsabpe toot pada
bhale hi woh mujhse Jyada taaqatwar the
lekin main unhein maarta raha
aur aakhir mein mere hath mein gun aagayi
main bina dekhe trigger dabata raha
sabke sab maare gaye

wahan jitni bhi ladkiya thi
sabki sab mar chuki thi
ek ko chhodke
woh apni aakhri saansein le rahi thi

main uske paas gaya
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the

meri maa ka naam sharmila hai
mera gaon shaktipur hai
meri laash meri maa tak pahuncha dena

uski baatein sunke meri aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya

main cheekh cheekh ke rone laga

use apne seene se lagake rota raha....
:congrats:
nice starting. Prem ki dadi matlabi hai aur hinsak bhi.
par prem ke paas immortal power ai kaha se. aur first update me hi anjane me prem ne apni sagi bahan ko maar dala.
 
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UPDATE 1
main bahut chhota tha
jab meri judwa behen ko meri daadi ne bech diya
bas thode se paiso ke liye
zindagi mein aur kuchh ho ya na ho
paisa hona chahiye
paise se tum kuchh bhi khareed sakte ho
paise se hi toh meri behen khareeda tha kisi ne
pata nahi kahan hai woh
is baat ko 10 saal ho gaye
meri maa ne bahut koshish ki mere baap ko rokne ki
lekin mera baap nahi maana
apni maa ka laadla tha na
agar meri maa kehti ki jaake apni biwi ko bech aa
tab bhi mera baap ek jara bhi nahi sochta

meri daadi ke 6 bachche hain
sabse bada

ranjeet singh
wife sadhna
ek number ki chudakkad aurat hai
jab tak raat ko ek baar chud nahi legi
ise neend nahi aati
har roz chacha ise chodta hai
lekin phir bhi iski aag thandi nahi hoti hai

iske teen bachche hain

sabse badi beti
seema
uske baad

meena
uske baad

reena

teeno hi kunwari hain
shaadi karne ke liye paise chahiye
aur paise kahan se aayenge
chacha khud mazdoori karta hai thakur ke yahan

mera baap
rajesh Singh
5 saal pehle gayab ho gaya
tab se iska kuchh ata pata nahi hai

maa
sharmila
usi ki tarah dikhti bhi hai

meri badi behen
madhuri

uske baad main
prem

meri judwa behen
meera
jise meri daadi ne bech diya tha

uske baad meri chhoti behen
sheetal

phir mera chacha
hardev singh


abhi tak do shaadi kar chuka hai
lekin dono mein se koi bhi maa nahi ban paayi
woh budhiya ab teesri shaadi karwana chah rahi hai
uski

pehli biwi
jaya

dusri biwi
rekha

roz raat ko daaru peeke aata hai
boor toh maari nahi jaati
lekin dono ko maarta bahut hai

daadi rokti nahi hai
uski maansikta hi aisi hai
uski najar mein
pati jo hota hai
patni ka maalik hota hai
jo chahe kar sakta hai woh

yeh baat us samay shuru hui
jab main 18 saal ka hua
ek din main apni didi ke sath bazar gaya

wahan kuchh ladke meri didi ko uthake le jaane lage
mera khoon khaul gaya
unmein se do ladko ko maine jaan se maar diya

ab gaon ke kisi bhi area mein kisi ko bhi pakda jaata
pehle thakur ko khabar di jaati

thakur ne mujhe haveli bulwaya
khud daroga mujhe haveli leke gaya

thakur..main tujhe bacha sakta hoon
lekin tujhe mere liye kaam karna hoga

main..kaisa kaam

thakur.. inspector tum jaao

police waale chale gaye
itna rob dabdaba tha thakur ka

thakur..padhna aata hai

main..jee

thakur..yeh bag lo
aur yeh raha pata
ise wahan pahuncha do
wahan yeh bag deke
tumhein wahan se dusra bag laana hoga
sukhiya tumhare sath jaayega

main maan gaya
mujhe pata tha ki mujhe faansi hogi
agar maine thakur ki baat nahi maani toh

main aur sukhiya nikal gaye
kareeb 4 ghante baad hum us pate pe pahunch gaye

sukhiya..room number 34 mein jaa
andar se jab puchha jaaye
ki mera desh
toh tu bolega mahan


main bag uthaya pata nahi us bag mein kya tha
main bag leke room number 34 pe pahuncha
gate knock kiya

andar se awaj aayi

mera desh

main..mahan

aur phir gate khula

main andar ghusa
wahan full daaru baaji randi baaji chal rahi thi
kuchh ladkiya thi
aur kuchh buddhe the
jo chudai karne mein lage hue the

main bag de diya
aur side mein khada ho gaya

khada Kyu hai
ab jaa

main..dusra bag

yeh sunke usne apne saathiyo ko dekha
aur hansne laga

usmein se ek ne mujhpe gun taan di

jaa na Bhosdike
warna yahin dher kar dunga

main.. bina bag ke nahi jaaunga

dekh kya raha hai khatam kar de saale ko

usne mere maathe se gun bhida diya
aur phir trigger daba diya
mere maathe mein ek chhed ho gaya
lekin main waise ka waise hi khada tha

woh sab shocked ho gaye
woh kya main khud bhi shocked ho chuka tha

jisne mujhe goli maari thi
main uske hath se gun chheenne ki koshish karne laga
lekin woh mujhse jyada taaqatwar tha
usne phir se mujhe goli maar di

lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nahi hua
woh sab ghabra gaye
aur sab milke mujhe goli maarne lage
aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua
ki main toh ajay hoon amar hoon

main unsabpe toot pada
bhale hi woh mujhse Jyada taaqatwar the
lekin main unhein maarta raha
aur aakhir mein mere hath mein gun aagayi
main bina dekhe trigger dabata raha
sabke sab maare gaye

wahan jitni bhi ladkiya thi
sabki sab mar chuki thi
ek ko chhodke
woh apni aakhri saansein le rahi thi

main uske paas gaya
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the

meri maa ka naam sharmila hai
mera gaon shaktipur hai
meri laash meri maa tak pahuncha dena

uski baatein sunke meri aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya

main cheekh cheekh ke rone laga

use apne seene se lagake rota raha....
Are uski bahen mar rahi hai inna julm hua uske sath ab Jo bhi log doshi hain sabki aisi taisi Karo
 
R

Riya

UPDATE 1
main bahut chhota tha
jab meri judwa behen ko meri daadi ne bech diya
bas thode se paiso ke liye
zindagi mein aur kuchh ho ya na ho
paisa hona chahiye
paise se tum kuchh bhi khareed sakte ho
paise se hi toh meri behen khareeda tha kisi ne
pata nahi kahan hai woh
is baat ko 10 saal ho gaye
meri maa ne bahut koshish ki mere baap ko rokne ki
lekin mera baap nahi maana
apni maa ka laadla tha na
agar meri maa kehti ki jaake apni biwi ko bech aa
tab bhi mera baap ek jara bhi nahi sochta

meri daadi ke 6 bachche hain
sabse bada

ranjeet singh
wife sadhna
ek number ki chudakkad aurat hai
jab tak raat ko ek baar chud nahi legi
ise neend nahi aati
har roz chacha ise chodta hai
lekin phir bhi iski aag thandi nahi hoti hai

iske teen bachche hain

sabse badi beti
seema
uske baad

meena
uske baad

reena

teeno hi kunwari hain
shaadi karne ke liye paise chahiye
aur paise kahan se aayenge
chacha khud mazdoori karta hai thakur ke yahan

mera baap
rajesh Singh
5 saal pehle gayab ho gaya
tab se iska kuchh ata pata nahi hai

maa
sharmila
usi ki tarah dikhti bhi hai

meri badi behen
madhuri

uske baad main
prem

meri judwa behen
meera
jise meri daadi ne bech diya tha

uske baad meri chhoti behen
sheetal

phir mera chacha
hardev singh


abhi tak do shaadi kar chuka hai
lekin dono mein se koi bhi maa nahi ban paayi
woh budhiya ab teesri shaadi karwana chah rahi hai
uski

pehli biwi
jaya

dusri biwi
rekha

roz raat ko daaru peeke aata hai
boor toh maari nahi jaati
lekin dono ko maarta bahut hai

daadi rokti nahi hai
uski maansikta hi aisi hai
uski najar mein
pati jo hota hai
patni ka maalik hota hai
jo chahe kar sakta hai woh

yeh baat us samay shuru hui
jab main 18 saal ka hua
ek din main apni didi ke sath bazar gaya

wahan kuchh ladke meri didi ko uthake le jaane lage
mera khoon khaul gaya
unmein se do ladko ko maine jaan se maar diya

ab gaon ke kisi bhi area mein kisi ko bhi pakda jaata
pehle thakur ko khabar di jaati

thakur ne mujhe haveli bulwaya
khud daroga mujhe haveli leke gaya

thakur..main tujhe bacha sakta hoon
lekin tujhe mere liye kaam karna hoga

main..kaisa kaam

thakur.. inspector tum jaao

police waale chale gaye
itna rob dabdaba tha thakur ka

thakur..padhna aata hai

main..jee

thakur..yeh bag lo
aur yeh raha pata
ise wahan pahuncha do
wahan yeh bag deke
tumhein wahan se dusra bag laana hoga
sukhiya tumhare sath jaayega

main maan gaya
mujhe pata tha ki mujhe faansi hogi
agar maine thakur ki baat nahi maani toh

main aur sukhiya nikal gaye
kareeb 4 ghante baad hum us pate pe pahunch gaye

sukhiya..room number 34 mein jaa
andar se jab puchha jaaye
ki mera desh
toh tu bolega mahan


main bag uthaya pata nahi us bag mein kya tha
main bag leke room number 34 pe pahuncha
gate knock kiya

andar se awaj aayi

mera desh

main..mahan

aur phir gate khula

main andar ghusa
wahan full daaru baaji randi baaji chal rahi thi
kuchh ladkiya thi
aur kuchh buddhe the
jo chudai karne mein lage hue the

main bag de diya
aur side mein khada ho gaya

khada Kyu hai
ab jaa

main..dusra bag

yeh sunke usne apne saathiyo ko dekha
aur hansne laga

usmein se ek ne mujhpe gun taan di

jaa na Bhosdike
warna yahin dher kar dunga

main.. bina bag ke nahi jaaunga

dekh kya raha hai khatam kar de saale ko

usne mere maathe se gun bhida diya
aur phir trigger daba diya
mere maathe mein ek chhed ho gaya
lekin main waise ka waise hi khada tha

woh sab shocked ho gaye
woh kya main khud bhi shocked ho chuka tha

jisne mujhe goli maari thi
main uske hath se gun chheenne ki koshish karne laga
lekin woh mujhse jyada taaqatwar tha
usne phir se mujhe goli maar di

lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nahi hua
woh sab ghabra gaye
aur sab milke mujhe goli maarne lage
aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua
ki main toh ajay hoon amar hoon

main unsabpe toot pada
bhale hi woh mujhse Jyada taaqatwar the
lekin main unhein maarta raha
aur aakhir mein mere hath mein gun aagayi
main bina dekhe trigger dabata raha
sabke sab maare gaye

wahan jitni bhi ladkiya thi
sabki sab mar chuki thi
ek ko chhodke
woh apni aakhri saansein le rahi thi

main uske paas gaya
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the

meri maa ka naam sharmila hai
mera gaon shaktipur hai
meri laash meri maa tak pahuncha dena

uski baatein sunke meri aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya

main cheekh cheekh ke rone laga

use apne seene se lagake rota raha....
plot acha hai par speed kuch jyada hai. ek sthirta honi chahiye. prem ki life me bahut kuch ho raha hai. lekin ache jyada bura hi hua hai uske aur uski family ki sath ab tak. Parivar me khalnayika khud ghar ki pramukh arthath prem ki dadi hi hai. jisne apni poti ko hi bech di. aur update ke end me self-defense me kuch bure logo goli maarte waqt uski bahan bhi goli lag gai. maybe apni shakti se use jinda kar de.
 
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plot acha hai par speed kuch jyada hai. ek sthirta honi chahiye. prem ki life me bahut kuch ho raha hai. lekin ache jyada bura hi hua hai uske aur uski family ki sath ab tak. Parivar me khalnayika khud ghar ki pramukh arthath prem ki dadi hi hai. jisne apni poti ko hi bech di. aur update ke end me self-defense me kuch bure logo goli maarte waqt uski bahan bhi goli lag gai. maybe apni shakti se use jinda kar de.
Yeh ho chuka tha prem ke sath
Jise badla nahi jaa sakta
Ab story present mein chalegi
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