Incest Deewaana the devil

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UPDATE 13

Main jab us chamber se bahar nikla
toh mere kapdo pe khoon dekhke sab chaunk gaye

reema madam bhaagti hui mere paas aayi

reema..kahan hai shamita

main kuchh nahi bola
itni training lene ke baad bhi main shamita ko nahi bacha paaya
laanat hai meri jindagi pe

main aage badhne laga

reema..prem tum chup kyun ho
batate Kyu nahi

main..mar gayi shamita

yeh sunke reema ki aankho mein aansu aagaye

main..aaj date kaunsi hai

reema..teen din hi toh gujre hain

main.. matlab

reema.. matlab tumhein yahan aaye hue teen din hi hue hain

chalo meri aadhi problem toh solve ho gayi

main..ab mujhe mere gaon chhod dijiye

Reema..tumhare kapdo pe yeh khoon kiska hai

main..bahut sawal puchhti hain aap


aur main aage badh gaya
reema bhi mere peechhe peechhe aane lagi
uske baad hum ship mein baith gaye

aur kuchh der baad hum gaon pahunch gaye the

Reema..maine kaha tha shamita se
ki woh andar na jaaye
lekin usne meri baat nahi maani

main..ab mujhe in baato se koi matlab nahi hai


yeh bolke main apne ghar ki taraf badh gaya
raaste mein maine apne kapdo pe lage khoon ko saaf kiya

jaise hi ghar mein ghusa
poore ghar mein maatam chhaaya hua tha

tabhi meena didi ki najar mujhpe padi
aur unki aankho mein aansu aagaye

sheetal ne jaise hi mujhe dekha
bhaagte hue aayi
aur mere seene se lag gayi

uske rone ki awaj sunke sabki najar mujhpe padi
aur woh sab bhi mere paas pahunchi

unke sawal
3 din se main kaha tha

tabhi daadi aake mujhse lipat gayi
aur rone lagi

maine itna hi bola ki thakur ke kaam se bahar gaya tha

yeh sunke Madhuri didi ne thakur ko gaaliya deni shuru kar di

main apne room mein aake let gaya
jaise hi aankhein band kiya
shamita ka chehra mere saamne aagaya

Reena..bhaiya so gaye kya

main..nahi gudiya

Reena..kahan the aap

main.. bahar gaya tha kisi kaam se

reena school se abhi abhi ghar aayi thi

main..ab school jaane lagi

Reena.. aap jab gayab ho gaye
toh daadi aur baaki sab bahut roye
phir daadi ne mujhe kaha ki main roz school jaya karu
mera prem yahi chahta tha

aur reena mere paas aake baith gayi

main..man lagake padhai karna

reena chali gayi
uske jaate hi meena didi room mein aagayi
aur mere paas baith gayi

Meena..yeh sab chhod Kyu nahi deta
agar tujhe kuchh ho gaya
toh teri maa behno ka kya hoga
kahan bhatkengi woh

main..aap apni batao
mere jaane ke baad aapko kaisa lagega

yeh sunke woh chaunk gayi

meena..kaisa lagega matlab
tu mera bhai hai
bura toh mujhe bhi lagega

main..ab nahi jaaunga kahin bhi
promise

Meena..kya baat badi English bol raha hai
kahan se seekha

meena baithi hui thi
main apna sar unki godi mein rakh diya

meena didi ki aankhein badi ho gayi
woh mujhe dekhne lagi
main apni aankhein band kiya
aur meena didi mere sar ko sehla ne lagi

raat mein. sab sone ke liye
room mein aagaye
main soya tha
mere bagal mein Madhuri didi
uske bagal mein maa
sheetal daadi ke sath soti thi

neend toh aanahi rahi thi
tabhi mujhe apne sar pe kisi ka hath Mehsus hua
main aankhein khola
toh dekha shamita madam thi

Shamita.. hello devdaas

main samajh gaya ki yeh madam ki aatma hai

main unke sath chhat pe aagaya

Shamita..ab aise rahoge
toh pata hai na mujhe kitni takleef hogi

Shamita..main toh waise bhi mar jaati
chamber se bahar nikalte hi
tum Kyu guilt mehsus kar rahe ho

main..aapne mujhe pehle Kyu nahi bataya

shamita..agar main tumhein pehle bata deti
toh master tumhein maar dete

main shamita se lipat gaya

Shamita..main humesha tumhare sath rahungi

Jaya..kisse baatein kar rahe ho
prem

main Jaya chachi ki taraf dekha

main..kisi se nahi chachi

Jaya.. aise bina bataye mat jaaya karo
hum sab pareshan ho jaate hain

main..ab nahi jaaunga chachi

Jaya.. hmm
ab jaao apne kamre mein

main chachi ke paas pahuncha
aur unhein dekhne laga

Jaya..kya hua

main..aapka kaam ho ho gaya ki nahi

Jaya..abhi toh nahi
itni jaldi thodi hota hai

main chachi ka hath pakda
aur unhe room mein leke ghus gaya

Jaya..abhi nahi prem
koi upar aasakta tha hai

main..koi nahi aayega chachi

aur main chachi ko kiss karne laga
woh bhi mera sath dene lagi
kuchh der tak kiss karne ke baad main unhein nanga kar diya
aur khud bhi ho gaya

Jaya..hero jaise dikhne lage ho
kya baat hai

main..aapka jaadu hai

yeh bolke main unhein lita diya
aur phir unke upar aake unki chuchiyon ko chusne laga

chachi aahein bharne lagi

jaya.. uff prem tum toh mujhe paagal hi kar dete ho
aur chuso inhein
khaa jaao uff maa

main chachi ke boobs tab tak chusta raha
jab tak mera man nahi bhar gaya
phir main unki choot pe apna munh rakh diya
aur dekhte hi dekhte Chachi ka paani nikal gaya

uske baad chachi mere lund ko chusne lagi

main..bas aise hi chusiye chachi
bahut maza aaraha hai
aur andar lijiye

chachi bhi gale tak bhar bhar ke lund chusne lagi
kuchh der baad unhone lund munh se nikaal liya
aur haanfne lagi

main unhein lita diya
aur unke choot pe lund set karke dhakka maar diya
aadha lund ghus chuka tha choot mein
aur agle dhakke mein lund bachchedani se takra gaya
chachi ki cheekh mere munh mein hi dab gayo
main bina ruke unhein chodne laga

Jaya..oh prem bas aise hi chodo apni chachi ko
bahut maza aaraha hai aur zor se prem
agar aisa hi raha toh main tunhari ghulam ban jaaungi
bas aise hi beta aur zor se chodo

kuchh der mein unka paani nikal gaya
main unhein ulta lita diya
aur phirse unhein chodne laga
is postion mein chachi ki haalat kharab hone lagi thi
chachi ki aahein poore room mein gunj rahi thi

Jaya..uff prem yeh sab kahan seekha beta
roz din alag tarah se chodte hai
kaash meri shaadi tumse hui hoti
uff maa aaj toh jaan hi nikal rahe ho


kuchha der mein chachi ki choot ne phirse paani chhod diya

aur aakhir mein main bhi chachi ki choot mein paani chhod diya
chachi ka 6 baar paani nikla tha

chachi mujhe dekh rahi thi

Jaya..kya hua hai pareshan lag rahe ho

main apne room mein aake so gaya

subah jab madhuri ki aankh khuli
toh usne dekha
ki woh prem se lipti hui hai
subah hone ki wajah se prem ka lund khada tha
Madhuri ko kuchh samajh nahi aaya woh kya kare

woh jaise hi alag hone ki koshish ki
prem ne use aur kaske gale laga liya

madhuri ki aah nikal gayi
prem ka lund madhuri ki naabhi ko touch kar raha tha

madhuri ki saansein tez ho gayi
woh waise hi let gayi

meri jab aankh khuli
toh main didi se lipta hua tha
didi so rahi thi

main unse alag hua
aur bathroom chala gaya

nahake jab room mein aaya
toh didi jaa chuki thi

main apne kapde pehna
aur angan mein aake baith gaya

seema didi mere liye nashta leke aagayi
bade aur chhote chacha apne kaam pe jaa chuke the

main paise ka bag nikaala
aur nikal gaya sheher
wahan jaake ek account khulwaya
usmein saare paise daal diya

phir jaake ek phone khareeda
sim daala
aur naresh ko call kiya

Naresh ne mujhe address bata diya
usne jaise hi mujhe dekha chaunk gaya

Naresh..tum toh bachche ho


maine use bataya
ki mujhe share market mein paisa lagana hai

woh mujhe kuchh der tak samjhata raha
2 ghante tak
dmat account
budget
invest in large cap or midcap
dont go for penny stocks

main..yeh aapka kaam hai
mujhe batana
ki mujhe kis company ke share khareedne hain
kiske nahi
aap bas mujhe call kar dena

Naresh..aur agar main tumhare paise khaa gaya

main use ghurne laga

Naresh.. matlab
kisi pe bhi andha vishwas nahi karna chahiye

main.. meri kismat thodi le jaaoge aap

Naresh..theek hai
phir main apne hisaab se tumhare stock khareedunga
aur 10 percent lunga
jitna tum invest karoge

main..20 Percent

ab mere paas jo paisa tha
woh kaunsa mere khoon paseene ka tha
haram ka hi toh paisa tha

ghar aate aate sham ho gayi
main ghar aaya
aur apne room mein aake let gaya

tabhi sheetal mere paas aagayi

sheetal..bhaiya main aapki behen hoon ki nahi

main...aisa kyun bol rahi ho gudiya

sheetal..reena school jaa sakti hai
lekin main nahi

main.. kal se tum bhi chali jaaya karna

sheetal..daadi maan jaayengi

main.. unhein main dekh lunga

tabhi Madhuri didi room mein aagayi

Madhuri..chhote chacha tumhein bula rahe hain
bahut gusse mein hain

main bahar nikla
dekha sachmein woh gusse mein the
aur tabhi unhone mujhe thappad maar diya

hardev..tumhara dimaag kharab hai
thakur sahab ke bete ko tumhari himmat kaise hui maarne ki

main..aapko kisne bataya

hardev..toh yeh sach hai

main..bataya kisne

hardev..ek ladke ne
use hosh aagaya
chalo ab haveli pe

main.. chaliye

aur main haveli pe pahunch chuka tha

thakur uska beta
aur ajit ki maa
teeno mujhe ghur ghur ke dekh rahe the

main ek chair pe baith gaya

thakur aur Arjun Singh ka khoon khaul gaya

deepali..gusse mein..khade khade dekh kya rahe ho arjun
iska sar kaatke fenk do

main..aapka beta ek ladki ka rape kar raha tha
woh mere sath padhti thi
dusra koi rehta toh use jaan se maar deta
aapka beta tha isi liye use zinda chhod diya


deepali.. arjun
tumne suna nahi

arjun..theek hai chhoti maa
jab aap yahi chahti hain
toh theek hai
Bheem Singh

bheem Singh aage aaya
6.5 feet ka haiwaan
normal aadmi dekhke hi ghabra jaaye
itna bhayankar dikhta tha woh

arjun..khatam kar do

bheem meri taraf badha
thakur chup karke baitha hua tha

hardev..maalik ek baar ki galti toh bhagwan bhi maaf kar deta hai
ise maaf kar dijiye

main..kya hai chacha
side ho jaao

chacha ka khoon khaul gaya

arjun..hat jaao hardev

aur phir chacha hat gaye

bheem mere paas pahuncha
aur usne mera gala dabana shuru kar diya
gaon mein sab jaante the ki bheem ne agar kisi ka gala pakad liya
toh woh marta bhi rahega.tab bhi woh gala nahi chhodega

meri saansein band hone lagi thi
wow
ab jaake mehsus hua dard kya hota hai

main dono hath se bheem ke kaano pe taali bajaya
bheem ki cheekh nikal Gayi
uske kaanp se khoon nikalne laga

main bheem ke gaal pe phirse hath maara
aur bheem behosh hoke neeche gid pada

sabki aankhein chaundhya gayi
bheem akayle 50 logo ko maar sakta tha

deepali..goli maar do
ise Arjun

arjun.. pitaji chhoti maa se kahiye
ki apne room mein jaaye

thakur.. tumhein toh pata hai
ki woh kitne gusse waali hai

Deepali..haramzaade kutte
mera beta kisi ke sath kuchh bhi kar sakta hai
woh maalik hai
tu hota kaun hai use rokne waala
teri aukaat kya hai
tere baap ne humari ghulami ki
tera dono chacha humari ghulami karta hai
tu bhi humara ghulam hai
aur tu humare bete pe hath uthayega
ek baar mera beta theek ho jaaye
phir tere khandan ki ek ek aurat
mere bete ke bistar pe hogi

thakur.. thakurain

deepali..aap chup rahiye

main thakur ki taraf dekha

thakur..prem thakurain ke pair pakadke maafi maango

main thakurain ke pair pakad liya

usne mujhe laat maar di

deepali..dafa ho jaa yahan se

main chacha ke sath haveli se nikal gaya

hardev.. bhagwan ki kirpa hai
thakurain ne humein maaf kar diya
warna pata nahi kya hota

main..chacha aap chalo main thoda gaon ghumke aata hoon

chacha ne mujhe ghura aur chale gaye
uske baad main haveli ki taraf badh gaya

jaise hi sabne mujhe dekha chaunk gaye...
n. C
 
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Nice update. Ab kya karega prem thakur ke ghar ja kar or chacha ke samne usne aisa q kiya ye smjh nhi aaya. Baki update acha tha. Smita bhi bhoot ban ke aa gayi. Ab us mai or uske behan mai ladai na ho jaye bas 😂😂😂😂😂
 
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UPDATE 14

thakur..kya baat hai prem

arjun..jiska dar tha wohi hua
kaha tha pitaji se ki chhoti maa ko sambhaliye
ab yeh ladka pakka yahan koi na koi hungama karega

main.. thakur sahab main kya soch raha tha
ki aap ek kaam kijiye
apne saare aadmiyo ko yahan bulwaiye
aur unse kahiye ki woh mujhe maar dein
agar unhone maar diya
toh theek hai
aur agar nahi maar paaye
toh main aap dono ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetke
apne apmaan ka badla lunga

thakur aur uske bete ki haalat kharab ho gayi
unhein pata tha
ki main jo keh raha hoon
karunga jarur

main..aur rahi baat thakurain ke talwe chaatne ki
toh do wajah hain

pehli wajah
mere chacha yahan the
agar main ladta
unhein kuchh ho jaata
toh nuksaan mera tha
aur dusri wajah

ghamand todne mein jo maza hai
woh kisi aur cheez mein nahi
uff kitna maza aayega
jab main aap dono baap bete ko
kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga
thakurain ke saamne

thakur aur uska beta dono buri tarah se ghabra gaye the
sath mein dono ka khoon khaul raha tha
aaj tak kisi gaon waale ne uske saamne sar nahi uthaya tha
aur kal ka launda unhein ghaseetne ki baat kar raha tha


jab aapke ahankaar ko thes pahunchti hai
tab aapko sach nahi dikhta
aap andhe ho jaate hain
thakur aur Arjun Singh dono jaante the
ki prem amar hai
phir bhi unhone sachchai ki jagah ahankaar chuna

thakur..dekh kya rahe ho
jaan se maar do
is haramzade ko

abhi yahan pe na
thakurain thi
na arjun ki wife


aur phir thakur ke aadmi meri taraf badhe ek sath
sab ek sath aaya
pehla ke seene pe main punch maara
uske seene ki haddi toot gayi
dusre ke jabde pe punch
uski cheekh nikal gayi
teesre ke sar pe apna sar maara
aur phir cheekhein sunke thakurain aur Arjun ki wife dono bahar aagayi
upar se jab unhone dekha
ki 10 aadmi zameen pe gide hain
aur main akayla baakiyo maar raha tha
madam ne jis tarah se mujhe trained kiya tha
aaram se main akayle 100 aadmiyon ko akayle maar sakta tha
aur mere andar shaktiya bhi thi

arjun ki wife sushma ne deepali ki taraf dekha

deepali..yeh kya ho raha hai chhoti maa


deepali chup rahi

main thakurain ki taraf dekha

main..ginti raho thakurain
bas ginti raho
aaj tumhare jitne bhi ghulam hain
un sabko dhoo chatane ke baad
tumhare pati ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga

thakur..cheekhte hue..hathiyar se vaar karo
madarchodo

main muskura diya
20 toh zameen pe dhool chaat rahe the
baakiyo ne hathyar utha liya
kisi ke hath mein chaaku tha
toh kisi ke hath mein rifle

aur tabhi 4 aadmi chaaku leke meri taraf badhe
main uske chehre pe punch maara
aur uske hath se chaaku chheen ke
uski aankh mein ghusa diya

baaki sab ke pair jam gaye
main chaaku uski aankh se nikaala
aur uske gale pe chala diya

baaki sab phirse mujhpe ek sath jhapte
lekin meri speed pehle se 100 guna jyada thi

jahan maine training li thi
wahan ki gravity yahan se 100 guna jyada thi
wahan mera weight ek tank ke Barabar tha

un sabne jaise hi mujhpe apne hathyar chalaye
main usse pehle hi un sabke sharir ko kholke rakh diya
kisi ke pet mein
kisi ke gale mein kisi ke kandhe mein
kisi ke seene mein
kisi ke kaan mein

hathyar jinhone uthaye the
woh khud uth chuke the
ab bache the
rifle waale
un sabke pair kaanp.rahe the
yeh najara dekhke
kareeb 50 laashein wahan padi thi
baaki bache the woh 20

main..agar goli chalayi
toh tum sabka bhi yahi haal hoga
main amar hoon
mar nahi sakta
soch lo


15 ne apne hathyar fenk diya

baaki bache the 5
unsabne mere sharir mein goli daag di
meri cheekh nikal gayi

master.. not anymore
hahahahahah hahahahaha

main zameen pe gid gaya
ghutno ke bal

thakur aur Arjun uchhal pade

thakur...shabash
aur namak haramo
tumhein toh kutte ki maut maarenge hum

deepali bhi khushi se uchhal padi

yaad hai na
maine tumse kya kaha tha
ab tum immortal nahi ho
dard hoga tumhein
takleef bhi hogi


main..not today


yeh bolke main khada ho gaya

woh sab shocked ho gaye
aur phirse mujhpe goli chala di
main phirse cheekh pada

lekin is baar main gida nahi
main unki taraf badha
aur isse pehle woh kuchh samajh paate
main un sabki gardan pe chaaku chala diya

ek second mein un sabki laash neeche gidi hui thi

main phirse cheekh pada
aur cheekhte hue thakur aur uske bete ki taraf dekha


main..aaj se tum 15 mere liye kaam karoge

un sabki fati padi thi
un sabne apni mundi haan mein hila diya

main..ek chair laake do

ek ne mujhe chair di
main uspe baith gaya

main..aur ab thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karo

yeh sunke thakur aur uske bete bhaagne ki koshish karne lage
unke paas koi hathiyar bhi nahi tha
kyunki unke paas ek se ek khunkhaar aadmi the

thakur..beta prem humein maaf kar do
humne tumhein police se bachaya tha

main chup raha
woh 15 aadmi milke thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karne lage

thakur..namak haramo main tumhara maalik hoon
tumhein maine khaana diya kapda diya
paisa diya

yeh sunke ek ne thakur ko thappad maar diya
aur bola
meri behen ki izzat bhi looti tere bete ajit ne

main..thoda khaatirdaari karo inki
apni bhadaas nikaalo

yeh sunke woh 15 unpe laat aur ghuse barsane lagi

woh cheekhne lage
tabhi thakurain cheekhte hue neeche aagayi
aur un aadmiyo pe hath uthane lagi

Deepali..haram ke jano
kya tum nahi jaante ki iska kya anjaam hoga
mere bhaiya
tum sabko khatam kar denge

aadmi...maalik inka kya karein

yeh usne mujhse bola tha

main..maalik nahi bhaiya
aur agar thakurain tumhein roke
toh ise bhi nanga kar do
aur nanga karke gadhe pe bitha dena
aur poore gaon mein ghumana

yeh sunke deepaali ki rooh kaanp gayi

woh but ban gayi
arjun ki biwi sushma ke toh pair wohin jam gaye the
woh upar se hi apne pati ko maar khaata dekh rahi thi

jab mera dard thoda kam hua
toh main khada ho gaya

aur thakur aur uske bete ke paas pahuncha

main..naam kya hai tumhara

vinay naam hai bhaiya

main..jara doctor ko phone karo
aur jaldi se bulao
kehna thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

yeh sunke usne turant thakur ke family doctor ko phone kar diya

ab 5 aadmi thakurain ko pakdo

Deepaali..cheekhte hue..nahi nahi


un paancho ne thakurain ko pakad liya

main..ab tum paancho thakur ko khada karo

aur tum paancho arjun ko khada karo

un sabne wohi kiya

main apne pant ki belt nikaala
aur thakur ke gale mein daal diya

main..bhaunkiye thakur sahab

thakur chup raha

main..agar thakur sahab na bhaunke
toh inka lund kaat dena

yeh sunte hi thakur rote hue bhaunkne laga

main..kutte bhi ban jaaiye

thakur kutta bhi ban gaye

main belt aage kiya

main..bhaunk aur kutte ki tarah chal
jaldi kar

kuchh der idhar udhar ghumane ke baad main use leke arjun ke paas pahuncha

main..koi belt do bhai
arjun jee ka bhi man kar raha hai
apne baap ki tarah kutta banne ka

ek ne belt nikaala
main use pehna diya

aur phir main dono ko leke ghumane laga

main.. ghamandi todne mein jitna maza hai
utna maza kunwari ladki ko chodne mein bhi nahi hai
kyun thakurain

thakurain apni najrein neeche kar li

tabhi doctor bhi aagaye
aur uske hosh udd gaye
thakur ko is haalat mein dekhke

doctor..yeh yeh kya ho raha hai
kya ho raha hai yeh

main..vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. thakur aur uske bete ka lund kaat do
aur hath kaat do
kohni se
uske baad doctor baabu dono ka ilaaj karenge
phir dono ko unke room mein le jaake rakh dena
theek hai na

doctor..tum yeh theek nahi kar rahe ho
yeh galat hai

main.. Vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. doctor sahab agar ek shabd aur bolein
toh inhein bhi nanga kar dena
aur inka lund bhi kaat dena
hath mat kaat na
bas lund kaatna

yeh sunke doctor ki ghighi band ho gayi

main phirse chair pe baith gaya

deepaali cheekhne lagi
aur tabhi dono ka lund bhi kat gaya
aur hath bhi
dono buri tarah se cheekhne lage

phir doctor ne dono ko injection diya
dono ki patti ki
dawayi likh diya
aur phir chala gaya
dono ko unke unke room mein bade aadar ke sath le jaake bed pe lita diya gaya

thakur aur Arjun singh behosh the
deepali ko ab bhi pakda hua tha
un paancho ne

main..chhod do ab thakurain ko

Deepaali ghutno ke bal baithi rone lagi

main deepaali ke saamne baith gaya

main..ab aapka kya hoga thakurain

aur main muskura diya...
 
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shamita bhi aatma ban gayi..... shayad uski ruh ko prem ka dard saha nahi gaya, isiliye wapis laut aayi....agle din meera ke kahe mutabik prem sara paisa naresh ko de diya share market mein lagane ke liye....... maybe yahin se ameer banne ka raah khul chuka hai....
dusri taraf thakur aur uske gharwaalo ko pata chal gaya ki ajit ko maarne wala saksh aur koi nahi balki prem hi hai.....
Prem waha pahunchte hi thakur ki haweli pe bada hungama hua...... prem ab pehle hi tarah nahi tha.... uski fauladi haatho ke ek waar se hi bheema ka kissa khatam ho gaya.....
I think haweli wapis isiliye jaa raha hai kyunki jo apaman hua tha uska badla lena jo tha prem ki...

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur dilachasp tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..

.. let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
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shamita bhi aatma ban gayi..... shayad uski ruh ko prem ka dard saha nahi gaya, isiliye wapis laut aayi....agle din meera ke kahe mutabik prem sara paisa naresh ko de diya share market mein lagane ke liye....... maybe yahin se ameer banne ka raah khul chuka hai....
dusri taraf thakur aur uske gharwaalo ko pata chal gaya ki ajit ko maarne wala saksh aur koi nahi balki prem hi hai.....
Prem waha pahunchte hi thakur ki haweli pe bada hungama hua...... prem ab pehle hi tarah nahi tha.... uski fauladi haatho ke ek waar se hi bheema ka kissa khatam ho gaya.....
I think haweli wapis isiliye jaa raha hai kyunki jo apaman hua tha uska badla lena jo tha prem ki...

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur dilachasp tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..

.. let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:

prem ki life master ka koi bada role lgta hai . shamita ko jan se hi maal dala.

Kahani super ja rahi hai bhai
meera ki tarh hamita bhi lot aai fir se prem ke life me. jaya ke sath pelam pelai jari hai.
prem ke mafi mangne ke bad bhi deepali ne kuch jaada hi bol gai. lath bhi mar di. prem fir se kyu ja rha hai. Kya deepali ko marne ja rha hai.

:congrats: for your first story

Update was great as always :lol1: sala suru se hi :confuse: hu phale dadi me hero ki behan ko bech diya :sad3: fir hero ka baap :angry: jo khud ki beti ko bech raha :banghead:
maa bole gi goli maar :gunfire: le ya :hang3: kar le ko Kay kar lega :sigh2: sayad kar le :dazed:
aur ye kya ye tho khud gayab hai :runaway: jarur iske piche koi sajish hai :think3: hero bhi Kamal ka hi fight kar ke :hang2: ka rasta chun liya :sigh: khair thakur ne bacha liya :woohoo: but apna koi khatarnak kam karne ke liye. Hero ready bhi ho gaya aur kam bhi kar diya but uder se bag na de rahe the aur isko hi shut kar diya :shocked5: aur hero mara nahi :cool: hero ne sab ko maar diya :innocent-killer: aur ek Ghayal ho gai but ye kya :faint: ye to iski behen nikli :angsad: ab dekte hai ki vo bach pati hai ki nahi :cry2: full emotional update :verysad:

Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nice update bhai
Bas prem ne jo Deepali pair pakad ke maafi mangi vo acha ni laga

Bohot Alla update

Man nahi bhara is update se ....

Sine me aag lagi hui h....
.Hero chahta cheer fad ke rakh deta magar usne ab bhi gali suni mafi mangi....

Ab jab tak badla nahi lega tab tak shanti nahi milegi ....

Isliye bhai agla update jald do .mmm

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Nice update. Ab kya karega prem thakur ke ghar ja kar or chacha ke samne usne aisa q kiya ye smjh nhi aaya. Baki update acha tha. Smita bhi bhoot ban ke aa gayi. Ab us mai or uske behan mai ladai na ho jaye bas 😂😂😂😂😂
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Update was great as always :lol1: sala suru se hi :confuse: hu phale dadi me hero ki behan ko bech diya :sad3: fir hero ka baap :angry: jo khud ki beti ko bech raha :banghead:
maa bole gi goli maar :gunfire: le ya :hang3: kar le ko Kay kar lega :sigh2: sayad kar le :dazed:
aur ye kya ye tho khud gayab hai :runaway: jarur iske piche koi sajish hai :think3: hero bhi Kamal ka hi fight kar ke :hang2: ka rasta chun liya :sigh: khair thakur ne bacha liya :woohoo: but apna koi khatarnak kam karne ke liye. Hero ready bhi ho gaya aur kam bhi kar diya but uder se bag na de rahe the aur isko hi shut kar diya :shocked5: aur hero mara nahi :cool: hero ne sab ko maar diya :innocent-killer: aur ek Ghayal ho gai but ye kya :faint: ye to iski behen nikli :angsad: ab dekte hai ki vo bach pati hai ki nahi :cry2: full emotional update :verysad:

Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
:thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks::thanks:
Shukriya meherbaani
Aage 13 update aur bache hain
Woh bhi padhiye
 

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