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UPDATE 14

thakur..kya baat hai prem

arjun..jiska dar tha wohi hua
kaha tha pitaji se ki chhoti maa ko sambhaliye
ab yeh ladka pakka yahan koi na koi hungama karega

main.. thakur sahab main kya soch raha tha
ki aap ek kaam kijiye
apne saare aadmiyo ko yahan bulwaiye
aur unse kahiye ki woh mujhe maar dein
agar unhone maar diya
toh theek hai
aur agar nahi maar paaye
toh main aap dono ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetke

apne apmaan ka badla lunga

thakur aur uske bete ki haalat kharab ho gayi
unhein pata tha
ki main jo keh raha hoon
karunga jarur

main..aur rahi baat thakurain ke talwe chaatne ki
toh do wajah hain

pehli wajah
mere chacha yahan the
agar main ladta
unhein kuchh ho jaata
toh nuksaan mera tha
aur dusri wajah

ghamand todne mein jo maza hai
woh kisi aur cheez mein nahi
uff kitna maza aayega
jab main aap dono baap bete ko
kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga
thakurain ke saamne

thakur aur uska beta dono buri tarah se ghabra gaye the
sath mein dono ka khoon khaul raha tha
aaj tak kisi gaon waale ne uske saamne sar nahi uthaya tha
aur kal ka launda unhein ghaseetne ki baat kar raha tha


jab aapke ahankaar ko thes pahunchti hai
tab aapko sach nahi dikhta
aap andhe ho jaate hain
thakur aur Arjun Singh dono jaante the
ki prem amar hai
phir bhi unhone sachchai ki jagah ahankaar chuna

thakur..dekh kya rahe ho
jaan se maar do
is haramzade ko

abhi yahan pe na
thakurain thi
na arjun ki wife


aur phir thakur ke aadmi meri taraf badhe ek sath
sab ek sath aaya
pehla ke seene pe main punch maara
uske seene ki haddi toot gayi
dusre ke jabde pe punch
uski cheekh nikal gayi
teesre ke sar pe apna sar maara
aur phir cheekhein sunke thakurain aur Arjun ki wife dono bahar aagayi
upar se jab unhone dekha
ki 10 aadmi zameen pe gide hain
aur main akayla baakiyo maar raha tha
madam ne jis tarah se mujhe trained kiya tha
aaram se main akayle 100 aadmiyon ko akayle maar sakta tha
aur mere andar shaktiya bhi thi

arjun ki wife sushma ne deepali ki taraf dekha

deepali..yeh kya ho raha hai chhoti maa


deepali chup rahi

main thakurain ki taraf dekha

main..ginti raho thakurain
bas ginti raho
aaj tumhare jitne bhi ghulam hain
un sabko dhoo chatane ke baad
tumhare pati ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga

thakur..cheekhte hue..hathiyar se vaar karo
madarchodo

main muskura diya
20 toh zameen pe dhool chaat rahe the
baakiyo ne hathyar utha liya
kisi ke hath mein chaaku tha
toh kisi ke hath mein rifle

aur tabhi 4 aadmi chaaku leke meri taraf badhe
main uske chehre pe punch maara
aur uske hath se chaaku chheen ke
uski aankh mein ghusa diya

baaki sab ke pair jam gaye
main chaaku uski aankh se nikaala
aur uske gale pe chala diya

baaki sab phirse mujhpe ek sath jhapte
lekin meri speed pehle se 100 guna jyada thi

jahan maine training li thi
wahan ki gravity yahan se 100 guna jyada thi
wahan mera weight ek tank ke Barabar tha

un sabne jaise hi mujhpe apne hathyar chalaye
main usse pehle hi un sabke sharir ko kholke rakh diya
kisi ke pet mein
kisi ke gale mein kisi ke kandhe mein
kisi ke seene mein
kisi ke kaan mein

hathyar jinhone uthaye the
woh khud uth chuke the
ab bache the
rifle waale

un sabke pair kaanp.rahe the
yeh najara dekhke
kareeb 50 laashein wahan padi thi
baaki bache the woh 20

main..agar goli chalayi
toh tum sabka bhi yahi haal hoga
main amar hoon
mar nahi sakta
soch lo


15 ne apne hathyar fenk diya

baaki bache the 5
unsabne mere sharir mein goli daag di
meri cheekh nikal gayi

master.. not anymore
hahahahahah hahahahaha

main zameen pe gid gaya
ghutno ke bal

thakur aur Arjun uchhal pade

thakur...shabash
aur namak haramo
tumhein toh kutte ki maut maarenge hum

deepali bhi khushi se uchhal padi

yaad hai na
maine tumse kya kaha tha
ab tum immortal nahi ho
dard hoga tumhein
takleef bhi hogi


main..not today


yeh bolke main khada ho gaya

woh sab shocked ho gaye
aur phirse mujhpe goli chala di
main phirse cheekh pada

lekin is baar main gida nahi
main unki taraf badha
aur isse pehle woh kuchh samajh paate
main un sabki gardan pe chaaku chala diya

ek second mein un sabki laash neeche gidi hui thi

main phirse cheekh pada
aur cheekhte hue thakur aur uske bete ki taraf dekha


main..aaj se tum 15 mere liye kaam karoge

un sabki fati padi thi
un sabne apni mundi haan mein hila diya

main..ek chair laake do

ek ne mujhe chair di
main uspe baith gaya

main..aur ab thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karo

yeh sunke thakur aur uske bete bhaagne ki koshish karne lage
unke paas koi hathiyar bhi nahi tha
kyunki unke paas ek se ek khunkhaar aadmi the

thakur..beta prem humein maaf kar do
humne tumhein police se bachaya tha

main chup raha
woh 15 aadmi milke thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karne lage

thakur..namak haramo main tumhara maalik hoon
tumhein maine khaana diya kapda diya
paisa diya

yeh sunke ek ne thakur ko thappad maar diya
aur bola
meri behen ki izzat bhi looti tere bete ajit ne

main..thoda khaatirdaari karo inki
apni bhadaas nikaalo

yeh sunke woh 15 unpe laat aur ghuse barsane lagi

woh cheekhne lage
tabhi thakurain cheekhte hue neeche aagayi
aur un aadmiyo pe hath uthane lagi

Deepali..haram ke jano
kya tum nahi jaante ki iska kya anjaam hoga
mere bhaiya
tum sabko khatam kar denge

aadmi...maalik inka kya karein

yeh usne mujhse bola tha

main..maalik nahi bhaiya
aur agar thakurain tumhein roke
toh ise bhi nanga kar do
aur nanga karke gadhe pe bitha dena
aur poore gaon mein ghumana

yeh sunke deepaali ki rooh kaanp gayi

woh but ban gayi
arjun ki biwi sushma ke toh pair wohin jam gaye the
woh upar se hi apne pati ko maar khaata dekh rahi thi

jab mera dard thoda kam hua
toh main khada ho gaya

aur thakur aur uske bete ke paas pahuncha

main..naam kya hai tumhara

vinay naam hai bhaiya

main..jara doctor ko phone karo
aur jaldi se bulao
kehna thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

yeh sunke usne turant thakur ke family doctor ko phone kar diya

ab 5 aadmi thakurain ko pakdo

Deepaali..cheekhte hue..nahi nahi


un paancho ne thakurain ko pakad liya

main..ab tum paancho thakur ko khada karo

aur tum paancho arjun ko khada karo

un sabne wohi kiya

main apne pant ki belt nikaala
aur thakur ke gale mein daal diya

main..bhaunkiye thakur sahab

thakur chup raha

main..agar thakur sahab na bhaunke
toh inka lund kaat dena

yeh sunte hi thakur rote hue bhaunkne laga

main..kutte bhi ban jaaiye

thakur kutta bhi ban gaye

main belt aage kiya

main..bhaunk aur kutte ki tarah chal
jaldi kar

kuchh der idhar udhar ghumane ke baad main use leke arjun ke paas pahuncha

main..koi belt do bhai
arjun jee ka bhi man kar raha hai
apne baap ki tarah kutta banne ka

ek ne belt nikaala
main use pehna diya

aur phir main dono ko leke ghumane laga

main.. ghamandi todne mein jitna maza hai
utna maza kunwari ladki ko chodne mein bhi nahi hai
kyun thakurain

thakurain apni najrein neeche kar li

tabhi doctor bhi aagaye
aur uske hosh udd gaye
thakur ko is haalat mein dekhke

doctor..yeh yeh kya ho raha hai
kya ho raha hai yeh

main..vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. thakur aur uske bete ka lund kaat do
aur hath kaat do
kohni se
uske baad doctor baabu dono ka ilaaj karenge
phir dono ko unke room mein le jaake rakh dena
theek hai na

doctor..tum yeh theek nahi kar rahe ho
yeh galat hai

main.. Vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. doctor sahab agar ek shabd aur bolein
toh inhein bhi nanga kar dena
aur inka lund bhi kaat dena
hath mat kaat na
bas lund kaatna

yeh sunke doctor ki ghighi band ho gayi

main phirse chair pe baith gaya

deepaali cheekhne lagi
aur tabhi dono ka lund bhi kat gaya
aur hath bhi
dono buri tarah se cheekhne lage

phir doctor ne dono ko injection diya
dono ki patti ki
dawayi likh diya
aur phir chala gaya
dono ko unke unke room mein bade aadar ke sath le jaake bed pe lita diya gaya

thakur aur Arjun singh behosh the
deepali ko ab bhi pakda hua tha
un paancho ne

main..chhod do ab thakurain ko

Deepaali ghutno ke bal baithi rone lagi

main deepaali ke saamne baith gaya

main..ab aapka kya hoga thakurain


aur main muskura diya...
to prem haweli jake badla le hi liya. katleam macha diya. par deepali ke sath kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha. jo bhi ho wo ek aurat thi. kuch to reham dikhata.
Kahani super ja rahi hai bhai.
 
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UPDATE 14

thakur..kya baat hai prem

arjun..jiska dar tha wohi hua
kaha tha pitaji se ki chhoti maa ko sambhaliye
ab yeh ladka pakka yahan koi na koi hungama karega

main.. thakur sahab main kya soch raha tha
ki aap ek kaam kijiye
apne saare aadmiyo ko yahan bulwaiye
aur unse kahiye ki woh mujhe maar dein
agar unhone maar diya
toh theek hai
aur agar nahi maar paaye
toh main aap dono ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetke

apne apmaan ka badla lunga

thakur aur uske bete ki haalat kharab ho gayi
unhein pata tha
ki main jo keh raha hoon
karunga jarur

main..aur rahi baat thakurain ke talwe chaatne ki
toh do wajah hain

pehli wajah
mere chacha yahan the
agar main ladta
unhein kuchh ho jaata
toh nuksaan mera tha
aur dusri wajah

ghamand todne mein jo maza hai
woh kisi aur cheez mein nahi
uff kitna maza aayega
jab main aap dono baap bete ko
kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga
thakurain ke saamne

thakur aur uska beta dono buri tarah se ghabra gaye the
sath mein dono ka khoon khaul raha tha
aaj tak kisi gaon waale ne uske saamne sar nahi uthaya tha
aur kal ka launda unhein ghaseetne ki baat kar raha tha


jab aapke ahankaar ko thes pahunchti hai
tab aapko sach nahi dikhta
aap andhe ho jaate hain
thakur aur Arjun Singh dono jaante the
ki prem amar hai
phir bhi unhone sachchai ki jagah ahankaar chuna

thakur..dekh kya rahe ho
jaan se maar do
is haramzade ko

abhi yahan pe na
thakurain thi
na arjun ki wife


aur phir thakur ke aadmi meri taraf badhe ek sath
sab ek sath aaya
pehla ke seene pe main punch maara
uske seene ki haddi toot gayi
dusre ke jabde pe punch
uski cheekh nikal gayi
teesre ke sar pe apna sar maara
aur phir cheekhein sunke thakurain aur Arjun ki wife dono bahar aagayi
upar se jab unhone dekha
ki 10 aadmi zameen pe gide hain
aur main akayla baakiyo maar raha tha
madam ne jis tarah se mujhe trained kiya tha
aaram se main akayle 100 aadmiyon ko akayle maar sakta tha
aur mere andar shaktiya bhi thi

arjun ki wife sushma ne deepali ki taraf dekha

deepali..yeh kya ho raha hai chhoti maa


deepali chup rahi

main thakurain ki taraf dekha

main..ginti raho thakurain
bas ginti raho
aaj tumhare jitne bhi ghulam hain
un sabko dhoo chatane ke baad
tumhare pati ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga

thakur..cheekhte hue..hathiyar se vaar karo
madarchodo

main muskura diya
20 toh zameen pe dhool chaat rahe the
baakiyo ne hathyar utha liya
kisi ke hath mein chaaku tha
toh kisi ke hath mein rifle

aur tabhi 4 aadmi chaaku leke meri taraf badhe
main uske chehre pe punch maara
aur uske hath se chaaku chheen ke
uski aankh mein ghusa diya

baaki sab ke pair jam gaye
main chaaku uski aankh se nikaala
aur uske gale pe chala diya

baaki sab phirse mujhpe ek sath jhapte
lekin meri speed pehle se 100 guna jyada thi

jahan maine training li thi
wahan ki gravity yahan se 100 guna jyada thi
wahan mera weight ek tank ke Barabar tha

un sabne jaise hi mujhpe apne hathyar chalaye
main usse pehle hi un sabke sharir ko kholke rakh diya
kisi ke pet mein
kisi ke gale mein kisi ke kandhe mein
kisi ke seene mein
kisi ke kaan mein

hathyar jinhone uthaye the
woh khud uth chuke the
ab bache the
rifle waale

un sabke pair kaanp.rahe the
yeh najara dekhke
kareeb 50 laashein wahan padi thi
baaki bache the woh 20

main..agar goli chalayi
toh tum sabka bhi yahi haal hoga
main amar hoon
mar nahi sakta
soch lo


15 ne apne hathyar fenk diya

baaki bache the 5
unsabne mere sharir mein goli daag di
meri cheekh nikal gayi

master.. not anymore
hahahahahah hahahahaha

main zameen pe gid gaya
ghutno ke bal

thakur aur Arjun uchhal pade

thakur...shabash
aur namak haramo
tumhein toh kutte ki maut maarenge hum

deepali bhi khushi se uchhal padi

yaad hai na
maine tumse kya kaha tha
ab tum immortal nahi ho
dard hoga tumhein
takleef bhi hogi


main..not today


yeh bolke main khada ho gaya

woh sab shocked ho gaye
aur phirse mujhpe goli chala di
main phirse cheekh pada

lekin is baar main gida nahi
main unki taraf badha
aur isse pehle woh kuchh samajh paate
main un sabki gardan pe chaaku chala diya

ek second mein un sabki laash neeche gidi hui thi

main phirse cheekh pada
aur cheekhte hue thakur aur uske bete ki taraf dekha


main..aaj se tum 15 mere liye kaam karoge

un sabki fati padi thi
un sabne apni mundi haan mein hila diya

main..ek chair laake do

ek ne mujhe chair di
main uspe baith gaya

main..aur ab thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karo

yeh sunke thakur aur uske bete bhaagne ki koshish karne lage
unke paas koi hathiyar bhi nahi tha
kyunki unke paas ek se ek khunkhaar aadmi the

thakur..beta prem humein maaf kar do
humne tumhein police se bachaya tha

main chup raha
woh 15 aadmi milke thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karne lage

thakur..namak haramo main tumhara maalik hoon
tumhein maine khaana diya kapda diya
paisa diya

yeh sunke ek ne thakur ko thappad maar diya
aur bola
meri behen ki izzat bhi looti tere bete ajit ne

main..thoda khaatirdaari karo inki
apni bhadaas nikaalo

yeh sunke woh 15 unpe laat aur ghuse barsane lagi

woh cheekhne lage
tabhi thakurain cheekhte hue neeche aagayi
aur un aadmiyo pe hath uthane lagi

Deepali..haram ke jano
kya tum nahi jaante ki iska kya anjaam hoga
mere bhaiya
tum sabko khatam kar denge

aadmi...maalik inka kya karein

yeh usne mujhse bola tha

main..maalik nahi bhaiya
aur agar thakurain tumhein roke
toh ise bhi nanga kar do
aur nanga karke gadhe pe bitha dena
aur poore gaon mein ghumana

yeh sunke deepaali ki rooh kaanp gayi

woh but ban gayi
arjun ki biwi sushma ke toh pair wohin jam gaye the
woh upar se hi apne pati ko maar khaata dekh rahi thi

jab mera dard thoda kam hua
toh main khada ho gaya

aur thakur aur uske bete ke paas pahuncha

main..naam kya hai tumhara

vinay naam hai bhaiya

main..jara doctor ko phone karo
aur jaldi se bulao
kehna thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

yeh sunke usne turant thakur ke family doctor ko phone kar diya

ab 5 aadmi thakurain ko pakdo

Deepaali..cheekhte hue..nahi nahi


un paancho ne thakurain ko pakad liya

main..ab tum paancho thakur ko khada karo

aur tum paancho arjun ko khada karo

un sabne wohi kiya

main apne pant ki belt nikaala
aur thakur ke gale mein daal diya

main..bhaunkiye thakur sahab

thakur chup raha

main..agar thakur sahab na bhaunke
toh inka lund kaat dena

yeh sunte hi thakur rote hue bhaunkne laga

main..kutte bhi ban jaaiye

thakur kutta bhi ban gaye

main belt aage kiya

main..bhaunk aur kutte ki tarah chal
jaldi kar

kuchh der idhar udhar ghumane ke baad main use leke arjun ke paas pahuncha

main..koi belt do bhai
arjun jee ka bhi man kar raha hai
apne baap ki tarah kutta banne ka

ek ne belt nikaala
main use pehna diya

aur phir main dono ko leke ghumane laga

main.. ghamandi todne mein jitna maza hai
utna maza kunwari ladki ko chodne mein bhi nahi hai
kyun thakurain

thakurain apni najrein neeche kar li

tabhi doctor bhi aagaye
aur uske hosh udd gaye
thakur ko is haalat mein dekhke

doctor..yeh yeh kya ho raha hai
kya ho raha hai yeh

main..vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. thakur aur uske bete ka lund kaat do
aur hath kaat do
kohni se
uske baad doctor baabu dono ka ilaaj karenge
phir dono ko unke room mein le jaake rakh dena
theek hai na

doctor..tum yeh theek nahi kar rahe ho
yeh galat hai

main.. Vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. doctor sahab agar ek shabd aur bolein
toh inhein bhi nanga kar dena
aur inka lund bhi kaat dena
hath mat kaat na
bas lund kaatna

yeh sunke doctor ki ghighi band ho gayi

main phirse chair pe baith gaya

deepaali cheekhne lagi
aur tabhi dono ka lund bhi kat gaya
aur hath bhi
dono buri tarah se cheekhne lage

phir doctor ne dono ko injection diya
dono ki patti ki
dawayi likh diya
aur phir chala gaya
dono ko unke unke room mein bade aadar ke sath le jaake bed pe lita diya gaya

thakur aur Arjun singh behosh the
deepali ko ab bhi pakda hua tha
un paancho ne

main..chhod do ab thakurain ko

Deepaali ghutno ke bal baithi rone lagi

main deepaali ke saamne baith gaya

main..ab aapka kya hoga thakurain


aur main muskura diya...
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UPDATE 14

thakur..kya baat hai prem

arjun..jiska dar tha wohi hua
kaha tha pitaji se ki chhoti maa ko sambhaliye
ab yeh ladka pakka yahan koi na koi hungama karega

main.. thakur sahab main kya soch raha tha
ki aap ek kaam kijiye
apne saare aadmiyo ko yahan bulwaiye
aur unse kahiye ki woh mujhe maar dein
agar unhone maar diya
toh theek hai
aur agar nahi maar paaye
toh main aap dono ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetke

apne apmaan ka badla lunga

thakur aur uske bete ki haalat kharab ho gayi
unhein pata tha
ki main jo keh raha hoon
karunga jarur

main..aur rahi baat thakurain ke talwe chaatne ki
toh do wajah hain

pehli wajah
mere chacha yahan the
agar main ladta
unhein kuchh ho jaata
toh nuksaan mera tha
aur dusri wajah

ghamand todne mein jo maza hai
woh kisi aur cheez mein nahi
uff kitna maza aayega
jab main aap dono baap bete ko
kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga
thakurain ke saamne

thakur aur uska beta dono buri tarah se ghabra gaye the
sath mein dono ka khoon khaul raha tha
aaj tak kisi gaon waale ne uske saamne sar nahi uthaya tha
aur kal ka launda unhein ghaseetne ki baat kar raha tha


jab aapke ahankaar ko thes pahunchti hai
tab aapko sach nahi dikhta
aap andhe ho jaate hain
thakur aur Arjun Singh dono jaante the
ki prem amar hai
phir bhi unhone sachchai ki jagah ahankaar chuna

thakur..dekh kya rahe ho
jaan se maar do
is haramzade ko

abhi yahan pe na
thakurain thi
na arjun ki wife


aur phir thakur ke aadmi meri taraf badhe ek sath
sab ek sath aaya
pehla ke seene pe main punch maara
uske seene ki haddi toot gayi
dusre ke jabde pe punch
uski cheekh nikal gayi
teesre ke sar pe apna sar maara
aur phir cheekhein sunke thakurain aur Arjun ki wife dono bahar aagayi
upar se jab unhone dekha
ki 10 aadmi zameen pe gide hain
aur main akayla baakiyo maar raha tha
madam ne jis tarah se mujhe trained kiya tha
aaram se main akayle 100 aadmiyon ko akayle maar sakta tha
aur mere andar shaktiya bhi thi

arjun ki wife sushma ne deepali ki taraf dekha

deepali..yeh kya ho raha hai chhoti maa


deepali chup rahi

main thakurain ki taraf dekha

main..ginti raho thakurain
bas ginti raho
aaj tumhare jitne bhi ghulam hain
un sabko dhoo chatane ke baad
tumhare pati ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga

thakur..cheekhte hue..hathiyar se vaar karo
madarchodo

main muskura diya
20 toh zameen pe dhool chaat rahe the
baakiyo ne hathyar utha liya
kisi ke hath mein chaaku tha
toh kisi ke hath mein rifle

aur tabhi 4 aadmi chaaku leke meri taraf badhe
main uske chehre pe punch maara
aur uske hath se chaaku chheen ke
uski aankh mein ghusa diya

baaki sab ke pair jam gaye
main chaaku uski aankh se nikaala
aur uske gale pe chala diya

baaki sab phirse mujhpe ek sath jhapte
lekin meri speed pehle se 100 guna jyada thi

jahan maine training li thi
wahan ki gravity yahan se 100 guna jyada thi
wahan mera weight ek tank ke Barabar tha

un sabne jaise hi mujhpe apne hathyar chalaye
main usse pehle hi un sabke sharir ko kholke rakh diya
kisi ke pet mein
kisi ke gale mein kisi ke kandhe mein
kisi ke seene mein
kisi ke kaan mein

hathyar jinhone uthaye the
woh khud uth chuke the
ab bache the
rifle waale

un sabke pair kaanp.rahe the
yeh najara dekhke
kareeb 50 laashein wahan padi thi
baaki bache the woh 20

main..agar goli chalayi
toh tum sabka bhi yahi haal hoga
main amar hoon
mar nahi sakta
soch lo


15 ne apne hathyar fenk diya

baaki bache the 5
unsabne mere sharir mein goli daag di
meri cheekh nikal gayi

master.. not anymore
hahahahahah hahahahaha

main zameen pe gid gaya
ghutno ke bal

thakur aur Arjun uchhal pade

thakur...shabash
aur namak haramo
tumhein toh kutte ki maut maarenge hum

deepali bhi khushi se uchhal padi

yaad hai na
maine tumse kya kaha tha
ab tum immortal nahi ho
dard hoga tumhein
takleef bhi hogi


main..not today


yeh bolke main khada ho gaya

woh sab shocked ho gaye
aur phirse mujhpe goli chala di
main phirse cheekh pada

lekin is baar main gida nahi
main unki taraf badha
aur isse pehle woh kuchh samajh paate
main un sabki gardan pe chaaku chala diya

ek second mein un sabki laash neeche gidi hui thi

main phirse cheekh pada
aur cheekhte hue thakur aur uske bete ki taraf dekha


main..aaj se tum 15 mere liye kaam karoge

un sabki fati padi thi
un sabne apni mundi haan mein hila diya

main..ek chair laake do

ek ne mujhe chair di
main uspe baith gaya

main..aur ab thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karo

yeh sunke thakur aur uske bete bhaagne ki koshish karne lage
unke paas koi hathiyar bhi nahi tha
kyunki unke paas ek se ek khunkhaar aadmi the

thakur..beta prem humein maaf kar do
humne tumhein police se bachaya tha

main chup raha
woh 15 aadmi milke thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karne lage

thakur..namak haramo main tumhara maalik hoon
tumhein maine khaana diya kapda diya
paisa diya

yeh sunke ek ne thakur ko thappad maar diya
aur bola
meri behen ki izzat bhi looti tere bete ajit ne

main..thoda khaatirdaari karo inki
apni bhadaas nikaalo

yeh sunke woh 15 unpe laat aur ghuse barsane lagi

woh cheekhne lage
tabhi thakurain cheekhte hue neeche aagayi
aur un aadmiyo pe hath uthane lagi

Deepali..haram ke jano
kya tum nahi jaante ki iska kya anjaam hoga
mere bhaiya
tum sabko khatam kar denge

aadmi...maalik inka kya karein

yeh usne mujhse bola tha

main..maalik nahi bhaiya
aur agar thakurain tumhein roke
toh ise bhi nanga kar do
aur nanga karke gadhe pe bitha dena
aur poore gaon mein ghumana

yeh sunke deepaali ki rooh kaanp gayi

woh but ban gayi
arjun ki biwi sushma ke toh pair wohin jam gaye the
woh upar se hi apne pati ko maar khaata dekh rahi thi

jab mera dard thoda kam hua
toh main khada ho gaya

aur thakur aur uske bete ke paas pahuncha

main..naam kya hai tumhara

vinay naam hai bhaiya

main..jara doctor ko phone karo
aur jaldi se bulao
kehna thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

yeh sunke usne turant thakur ke family doctor ko phone kar diya

ab 5 aadmi thakurain ko pakdo

Deepaali..cheekhte hue..nahi nahi


un paancho ne thakurain ko pakad liya

main..ab tum paancho thakur ko khada karo

aur tum paancho arjun ko khada karo

un sabne wohi kiya

main apne pant ki belt nikaala
aur thakur ke gale mein daal diya

main..bhaunkiye thakur sahab

thakur chup raha

main..agar thakur sahab na bhaunke
toh inka lund kaat dena

yeh sunte hi thakur rote hue bhaunkne laga

main..kutte bhi ban jaaiye

thakur kutta bhi ban gaye

main belt aage kiya

main..bhaunk aur kutte ki tarah chal
jaldi kar

kuchh der idhar udhar ghumane ke baad main use leke arjun ke paas pahuncha

main..koi belt do bhai
arjun jee ka bhi man kar raha hai
apne baap ki tarah kutta banne ka

ek ne belt nikaala
main use pehna diya

aur phir main dono ko leke ghumane laga

main.. ghamandi todne mein jitna maza hai
utna maza kunwari ladki ko chodne mein bhi nahi hai
kyun thakurain

thakurain apni najrein neeche kar li

tabhi doctor bhi aagaye
aur uske hosh udd gaye
thakur ko is haalat mein dekhke

doctor..yeh yeh kya ho raha hai
kya ho raha hai yeh

main..vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. thakur aur uske bete ka lund kaat do
aur hath kaat do
kohni se
uske baad doctor baabu dono ka ilaaj karenge
phir dono ko unke room mein le jaake rakh dena
theek hai na

doctor..tum yeh theek nahi kar rahe ho
yeh galat hai

main.. Vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. doctor sahab agar ek shabd aur bolein
toh inhein bhi nanga kar dena
aur inka lund bhi kaat dena
hath mat kaat na
bas lund kaatna

yeh sunke doctor ki ghighi band ho gayi

main phirse chair pe baith gaya

deepaali cheekhne lagi
aur tabhi dono ka lund bhi kat gaya
aur hath bhi
dono buri tarah se cheekhne lage

phir doctor ne dono ko injection diya
dono ki patti ki
dawayi likh diya
aur phir chala gaya
dono ko unke unke room mein bade aadar ke sath le jaake bed pe lita diya gaya

thakur aur Arjun singh behosh the
deepali ko ab bhi pakda hua tha
un paancho ne

main..chhod do ab thakurain ko

Deepaali ghutno ke bal baithi rone lagi

main deepaali ke saamne baith gaya

main..ab aapka kya hoga thakurain


aur main muskura diya...
Wah.....Ye huyi naa baat....
Jab tak hero khunkhar, beraham nahi ban jata tab tak maza hi naa aayye padhne mein ....
kyunki kabhi kabhi haivaan jaise thakur logis ko maarne ke liye prem ko bhi haivaan banna padega.....
waise main kya keh rahi thi ki.... ki prem haivaaniyat dikhane mein kanjusi kar raha hai..... Kyun na deepali ka pet faad ke khoon se lath path antriya nikal le :devil: aur thakur aur uske dono beto ke jishm pe jagah jagah blade se kaat kar acid ke laga de..... tab thakur aur uske dono bete dard gala faadenge to shayad prem ke kaleje ko bhi thandak milegi :devil:

Btw us haramjade master ki maut khaufnaak honi chaahiye..... aisi maut ki jishe padh readers ki ruh tak kaanp jaaye..... jishm mein ek dar ki thandi lahar daud jaaye.... :D

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur dilachasp tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..

.. let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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UPDATE 14

thakur..kya baat hai prem

arjun..jiska dar tha wohi hua
kaha tha pitaji se ki chhoti maa ko sambhaliye
ab yeh ladka pakka yahan koi na koi hungama karega

main.. thakur sahab main kya soch raha tha
ki aap ek kaam kijiye
apne saare aadmiyo ko yahan bulwaiye
aur unse kahiye ki woh mujhe maar dein
agar unhone maar diya
toh theek hai
aur agar nahi maar paaye
toh main aap dono ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetke

apne apmaan ka badla lunga

thakur aur uske bete ki haalat kharab ho gayi
unhein pata tha
ki main jo keh raha hoon
karunga jarur

main..aur rahi baat thakurain ke talwe chaatne ki
toh do wajah hain

pehli wajah
mere chacha yahan the
agar main ladta
unhein kuchh ho jaata
toh nuksaan mera tha
aur dusri wajah

ghamand todne mein jo maza hai
woh kisi aur cheez mein nahi
uff kitna maza aayega
jab main aap dono baap bete ko
kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga
thakurain ke saamne

thakur aur uska beta dono buri tarah se ghabra gaye the
sath mein dono ka khoon khaul raha tha
aaj tak kisi gaon waale ne uske saamne sar nahi uthaya tha
aur kal ka launda unhein ghaseetne ki baat kar raha tha


jab aapke ahankaar ko thes pahunchti hai
tab aapko sach nahi dikhta
aap andhe ho jaate hain
thakur aur Arjun Singh dono jaante the
ki prem amar hai
phir bhi unhone sachchai ki jagah ahankaar chuna

thakur..dekh kya rahe ho
jaan se maar do
is haramzade ko

abhi yahan pe na
thakurain thi
na arjun ki wife


aur phir thakur ke aadmi meri taraf badhe ek sath
sab ek sath aaya
pehla ke seene pe main punch maara
uske seene ki haddi toot gayi
dusre ke jabde pe punch
uski cheekh nikal gayi
teesre ke sar pe apna sar maara
aur phir cheekhein sunke thakurain aur Arjun ki wife dono bahar aagayi
upar se jab unhone dekha
ki 10 aadmi zameen pe gide hain
aur main akayla baakiyo maar raha tha
madam ne jis tarah se mujhe trained kiya tha
aaram se main akayle 100 aadmiyon ko akayle maar sakta tha
aur mere andar shaktiya bhi thi

arjun ki wife sushma ne deepali ki taraf dekha

deepali..yeh kya ho raha hai chhoti maa


deepali chup rahi

main thakurain ki taraf dekha

main..ginti raho thakurain
bas ginti raho
aaj tumhare jitne bhi ghulam hain
un sabko dhoo chatane ke baad
tumhare pati ko kutte ki tarah ghaseetunga

thakur..cheekhte hue..hathiyar se vaar karo
madarchodo

main muskura diya
20 toh zameen pe dhool chaat rahe the
baakiyo ne hathyar utha liya
kisi ke hath mein chaaku tha
toh kisi ke hath mein rifle

aur tabhi 4 aadmi chaaku leke meri taraf badhe
main uske chehre pe punch maara
aur uske hath se chaaku chheen ke
uski aankh mein ghusa diya

baaki sab ke pair jam gaye
main chaaku uski aankh se nikaala
aur uske gale pe chala diya

baaki sab phirse mujhpe ek sath jhapte
lekin meri speed pehle se 100 guna jyada thi

jahan maine training li thi
wahan ki gravity yahan se 100 guna jyada thi
wahan mera weight ek tank ke Barabar tha

un sabne jaise hi mujhpe apne hathyar chalaye
main usse pehle hi un sabke sharir ko kholke rakh diya
kisi ke pet mein
kisi ke gale mein kisi ke kandhe mein
kisi ke seene mein
kisi ke kaan mein

hathyar jinhone uthaye the
woh khud uth chuke the
ab bache the
rifle waale

un sabke pair kaanp.rahe the
yeh najara dekhke
kareeb 50 laashein wahan padi thi
baaki bache the woh 20

main..agar goli chalayi
toh tum sabka bhi yahi haal hoga
main amar hoon
mar nahi sakta
soch lo


15 ne apne hathyar fenk diya

baaki bache the 5
unsabne mere sharir mein goli daag di
meri cheekh nikal gayi

master.. not anymore
hahahahahah hahahahaha

main zameen pe gid gaya
ghutno ke bal

thakur aur Arjun uchhal pade

thakur...shabash
aur namak haramo
tumhein toh kutte ki maut maarenge hum

deepali bhi khushi se uchhal padi

yaad hai na
maine tumse kya kaha tha
ab tum immortal nahi ho
dard hoga tumhein
takleef bhi hogi


main..not today


yeh bolke main khada ho gaya

woh sab shocked ho gaye
aur phirse mujhpe goli chala di
main phirse cheekh pada

lekin is baar main gida nahi
main unki taraf badha
aur isse pehle woh kuchh samajh paate
main un sabki gardan pe chaaku chala diya

ek second mein un sabki laash neeche gidi hui thi

main phirse cheekh pada
aur cheekhte hue thakur aur uske bete ki taraf dekha


main..aaj se tum 15 mere liye kaam karoge

un sabki fati padi thi
un sabne apni mundi haan mein hila diya

main..ek chair laake do

ek ne mujhe chair di
main uspe baith gaya

main..aur ab thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karo

yeh sunke thakur aur uske bete bhaagne ki koshish karne lage
unke paas koi hathiyar bhi nahi tha
kyunki unke paas ek se ek khunkhaar aadmi the

thakur..beta prem humein maaf kar do
humne tumhein police se bachaya tha

main chup raha
woh 15 aadmi milke thakur aur uske bete ko nanga karne lage

thakur..namak haramo main tumhara maalik hoon
tumhein maine khaana diya kapda diya
paisa diya

yeh sunke ek ne thakur ko thappad maar diya
aur bola
meri behen ki izzat bhi looti tere bete ajit ne

main..thoda khaatirdaari karo inki
apni bhadaas nikaalo

yeh sunke woh 15 unpe laat aur ghuse barsane lagi

woh cheekhne lage
tabhi thakurain cheekhte hue neeche aagayi
aur un aadmiyo pe hath uthane lagi

Deepali..haram ke jano
kya tum nahi jaante ki iska kya anjaam hoga
mere bhaiya
tum sabko khatam kar denge

aadmi...maalik inka kya karein

yeh usne mujhse bola tha

main..maalik nahi bhaiya
aur agar thakurain tumhein roke
toh ise bhi nanga kar do
aur nanga karke gadhe pe bitha dena
aur poore gaon mein ghumana

yeh sunke deepaali ki rooh kaanp gayi

woh but ban gayi
arjun ki biwi sushma ke toh pair wohin jam gaye the
woh upar se hi apne pati ko maar khaata dekh rahi thi

jab mera dard thoda kam hua
toh main khada ho gaya

aur thakur aur uske bete ke paas pahuncha

main..naam kya hai tumhara

vinay naam hai bhaiya

main..jara doctor ko phone karo
aur jaldi se bulao
kehna thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

yeh sunke usne turant thakur ke family doctor ko phone kar diya

ab 5 aadmi thakurain ko pakdo

Deepaali..cheekhte hue..nahi nahi


un paancho ne thakurain ko pakad liya

main..ab tum paancho thakur ko khada karo

aur tum paancho arjun ko khada karo

un sabne wohi kiya

main apne pant ki belt nikaala
aur thakur ke gale mein daal diya

main..bhaunkiye thakur sahab

thakur chup raha

main..agar thakur sahab na bhaunke
toh inka lund kaat dena

yeh sunte hi thakur rote hue bhaunkne laga

main..kutte bhi ban jaaiye

thakur kutta bhi ban gaye

main belt aage kiya

main..bhaunk aur kutte ki tarah chal
jaldi kar

kuchh der idhar udhar ghumane ke baad main use leke arjun ke paas pahuncha

main..koi belt do bhai
arjun jee ka bhi man kar raha hai
apne baap ki tarah kutta banne ka

ek ne belt nikaala
main use pehna diya

aur phir main dono ko leke ghumane laga

main.. ghamandi todne mein jitna maza hai
utna maza kunwari ladki ko chodne mein bhi nahi hai
kyun thakurain

thakurain apni najrein neeche kar li

tabhi doctor bhi aagaye
aur uske hosh udd gaye
thakur ko is haalat mein dekhke

doctor..yeh yeh kya ho raha hai
kya ho raha hai yeh

main..vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. thakur aur uske bete ka lund kaat do
aur hath kaat do
kohni se
uske baad doctor baabu dono ka ilaaj karenge
phir dono ko unke room mein le jaake rakh dena
theek hai na

doctor..tum yeh theek nahi kar rahe ho
yeh galat hai

main.. Vinay bhaiya

Vinay..jee bhaiya

main.. doctor sahab agar ek shabd aur bolein
toh inhein bhi nanga kar dena
aur inka lund bhi kaat dena
hath mat kaat na
bas lund kaatna

yeh sunke doctor ki ghighi band ho gayi

main phirse chair pe baith gaya

deepaali cheekhne lagi
aur tabhi dono ka lund bhi kat gaya
aur hath bhi
dono buri tarah se cheekhne lage

phir doctor ne dono ko injection diya
dono ki patti ki
dawayi likh diya
aur phir chala gaya
dono ko unke unke room mein bade aadar ke sath le jaake bed pe lita diya gaya

thakur aur Arjun singh behosh the
deepali ko ab bhi pakda hua tha
un paancho ne

main..chhod do ab thakurain ko

Deepaali ghutno ke bal baithi rone lagi

main deepaali ke saamne baith gaya

main..ab aapka kya hoga thakurain


aur main muskura diya...
Fabulous update. story me bahut sare turning points a rahe hai.
training lene ke bad prem ko aur jyada gussa ane laga tha.
thakur ke pure parivar ko barbad kar dia, par me yahi kahungi ki prem ne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya. ab se gaon wale bina dare saanti aur sukun ki jindgi jienge.
 

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