Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

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Update 29
Mega update 2.0
(Khalnayak) ​

Abb tak...
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Abb aage...
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Jahan, ek taraf rockey ko iss halat me dekh kar uska baap aur dada ko gussa to bahut aarha tha, par wo dono ye bhi jante the ki, thakuro se sidhe haat panga lena un logo ki bevkoofi hi hogi. Aur aisi bevkoofi karne ke baad unki kyaa halat ban jayegi yr baat to unhe bees varsh pahle hi pata chal gaya tha.
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Wahin, raju kaka ka ye fighting skill dekh kar wahan mauzud kuchh logo ko chhodkar sab hairat me the. Mujhe to samajh hi nhi aarha tha ki sala ye kya scene hai, itna khatarnak skill ek aise insaan me kaha se aasakti hai jiske baare me hamesha bataya gya hai ki wo bachpan se shirf ghar ke kaam me hi madad karne ke liye rakha gya hai.
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"Thakur sahab mai apne bete ke taraf se aap se maafi mangta hun, aap ko panchayat ke taraf jo saza dena ho hame manzur hai. Par kripya kar ke Sunil bhai sahab se mere bete ko bacha lijiyega. Uske baad, ye kabhi iss gao me nazar nhi aayega. Mai vachan deta hun Thakur sahab "
Ye ranjeet tha, gussa to isse bahut aarha tha apne bete ki ye halat dekh kar, par inn janab ko himmat nhi thi ki ek galat lafj ka bhi prayog kar le. Par haannn, iss chutiye ne man me ye jarur than liya tha ki badla wo lega jarur, bhale hi chhup kar peeth pe waar kar ke lena pade, ar lega jarur.
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Maafi usse di jaati hai ranjeete, jisse apne kiye gaye gunah ka uske zehan me malal ho, par tumhare napunshak bete ne to abhi tak apna gunah bhi nhi kaboola hai. To maafi kise aur kyu mile, khair kal shadi me sunil bhaiya bhi aarhe hai. Aur tum chahte ho ki tumhara beta sahi salamat rahe to isse kaho maafi mangne aur, kuchh dino ke liye iss gao se tum poore pariwar bahar chale jao, waise agar sunil ko pata chali tab tumhara beta chahe jahannam me hi kyu na rahe wo usse wahin pe dhoond ke marega.
Uske bete se parichay to tumhara ho hi gya hai, iske rago me bhi ussi sunil ka khoon daud raha hai, jiske gusse ke aag ne tumhare khandan ki jansankhya aadhi kar di thi. Aur jara socho ki agar ye akela tumhare bete ke sath sath uske 14 - 15 sathiyo ko dhobi ke kutte ki tarah dho sakta hai to dono baap bete ek saath me kya kya kar sakte hai. Ye mat sochna ki mujhe tum par daya gya aur maine tumhare bete ko maaf kar diya. Mai to bas apne pita ji dwara, reema bahan ko diya gya vachan ka maan rakh rha hunn, unhone vachan diya hai ki unke bete ki zaan ko koi khatra nhi hone denge, par saza to usse milegi hi, ab apne bete ko kaho sabse maafi mangne ko aur niklo yahan se. "
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Ye raghav thakur the, jinhone ye saaf keh diya ki saza to rockey ko zarur milegi, par maut ki nhi, aakhir birendra ji ne vachan jo de diya tha.
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" Bahut bahut dhanyavaad chhote thakur "
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Uske baad ranjeet ke kahne par uska beta sab se maafi manga. .
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Idhar jab se reema ko apne bete ki ye ghinauni kartut pata chali thi, tab se wo bas roye ja rhi thi, un sabhi mahilao ki bheed me ho kar bhi wo khud ko akela samajhne lagi thi, aakhi samjhegi kyu nhi, usse apne pati aur sasur ki harkate aur saari kaale dhande ke baare me gyat tha, par wo apne bete ko jab bhi dekhti thi, usse apne bete me uske baap dada ka ek bhi lakshan dikhayi nhi deta tha. Aakhir dega bhi kaise rockey gao me jab bhi aata tha, ek shant ban kar jo aata tha. Uski asliyat se wo poori tarah anzan thi, usse ye thode na pata tha ki shahar me uska beta kya kya karname kiya firta hai...
Par aaj, aaj usse apne bete ki asliyat ka pata chal chuka tha, ab usse yaha aur rukna, uske man ko bahut thesh pahuncha taha tha, abhi uska beta sab se maafi mang hi raha tha ki wo waha se nikal kar bahar jaane lagi.
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" Rukiye, meera bahan, mujhe bhi kuchh baat karni hai ........., thakur sahab, maine bhi ek bahut badi aur galat faisala kar li hun, wo bhi bina kuchh jyada soche huye , par ab mai usse nhi hone de sakti"
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Ye thi sheetal ki maa, jo aaj apne faisale pe pachhta rahi thi, aur wo faisala kya tha ye baar poora gao janta tha,
Faisala tha, apni beti ko lala ke ghar ki bahu banana, apni beti ko uss darinde ke haatho me dena jo uske beti ki zindagi ko narak banane me zara bhi waqt nhi lagata,
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Sheetal ki maa ne jaise hi kaha ki usse apne faisle ko badalna hai, waise hi mere chehre pe ek bahut bade smile ubhar aayi... Aakhir yahi to chahta tha mai... Issiliy to maine aur rajnish ne planing ki thi, bhale hi mera Plan poori tarh se kaam nhi kiya, par mera maksad jo tha wo poora ho gya tha,
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Jahan ek taraf poore gao walo ko ye baat pata chal chuki thi ki sheetal ki maa kis faisale ki baat kar rahi hai, aur unme rockey aur uske baap dada bhi shamil the, wahi reema jiska kadam kadam aage badh hu raha tha, sheetal ki maa ki baato se unka kadam wahi ruk gaya...
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" Reema bahan, mai jyada kuchh to nhi bolungi, par bas itna jarur kahungi ki ab meri beti ka byah rockey se nahi hoga , mai yr rishta ab nhi karna chahti hunn, aur thakur sahab meri shadi todne ka matra ek yahi karan nhi hai ki mujhe rockey ki asliyat pata chal gayi hai, mujhe to uski asliyat pahle hi sheetal ne bata di thi , par mujhe lagta tha ki shadi ke baad ho sake sab sahi ho jaye... Lekin nhi, ab mai khud ko galat man li hunn.... Aur meri beti bhi iss shadi se khush nhi hai.... Issliye ab jo rishta hone wala tha ham do pariwar ke beech wo nhi hoga. Maaf kijiyega....
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Jahan itni saari baat ko bina koi laag lapet ke apne haath jode sheetal ki maa ne bol diya..
Wahin uski baat ko sunkar rockey ka dimag for se out off control ho gya...
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" Ye aap kya bol rhi ho unty, sheetal aur mera rishta tod rahe ho, ye aap bahut galat kar rhe ho.... Agar meri shadi sheetal se nhi huyi to aap soch bhi nahi sakti ho ki yahan kya kya hoga fir...
Aur uss sheetal... Saali wo mujhse shadi nhi karegi... Agar wo meri bibi nahi bani to usee mai apni randddeeiii........."
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Chatakkkkkk.... Ye pada fir se ek tamacha aur wo bhi uski maa reema ke haatho se....
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Par ab rockey ne aisi galti kar di thi jisse usko ab maafi naseeb nhi hone waali thi.....
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Darasal , rockey ne jaise hi sheetal ko gaali diya mera aankh gusse se ekdam rakt jaisa laal ho gya tha, mera haath ekdam kaampne laga...
Aur mere aankho ke rang ko badalte huye shirf dadi aur raju kaka ne hi dekha...
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Abhi bechara rockey apne maa ke hatho tamacha se ubra bhi na tha ki, ek jordaar punch uske thopde pe lagi jisse wo door ped me se takra gaya...
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"Bahanchod, kyaa karega sheetal ke sathh hannn... Bol naa madharchod... "
Thudddddd......
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Ye mai tha, jiska gussa filhaal apne limit ko paar kar chuka tha... Maine rockey ke chehre pe do pucnh diye jisse uski halat aur kharab ho gayi... Ek to pahle se hi saali ki bahut dhulayi ho chuki thi upar se aaj do do baar mere gusse ka shikaar bhi ban gya... Chutiya sala
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Mai ruka nhi, balki ussi ped pe usse poori tarah se satakar, uske gale ko pakad liya aur ekdam se use upar utha diya....
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Iss samay Jahan meri ankho me khoon sabar ho chuka tha, wahin mere gusse ko dekh kar kisi me himmat nhi ho rahi thi mujhe rokne ki... Aur mujhe kuchh sunayi bhi nhi de rha tha... Mujhe to bas apne samne rockey ka chehra dikh rha tha... Aur kaan me uske bole wo apshabd gunj rha tha jo usne sheetal kk lekar bola tha.
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Rockey to poori tarah se chhatpataye ja rha tha... Uski shans ab kisi bhi pal rukne waali thi.. Ki reema mere pair ko pakad kar rone lagi... Aur mujhe kuchh bole ja rhi thi... Mujhe sach me uski aawaj nhi sunayi de rhi thi.. Par uski aankho me aanshu dekhkar maine apna hath dhila chhod diya... Aur rockey wahinn dhamm se gir gya...
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Fir mai wahann nhi ruka... Mai sidhe haveli me chala gya... Mere pichhe pichhe rajnish bhi haveli ke andar hi aagya....
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Mere gharwalo se lekar gao ke anya log bhi shocked the.. Karan tha mera gussa jo shayad gao walo ko mere baap ki yaad dila diya tha, ...
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Bechaini to mujhme bhi thi, itna gussa shayad aaj pahli baar mujhe aaya tha , jaise mujhpe mera hi control na ho. Mai khud ko bebas mehsoos kar rha tha uss waqt apne gusse ke saamne... Koi to tha jo mere gusse ko aseem shaktiya de rha tha... Koi to thaaa......
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Idhar kishan ki zindagi me 21 basant poore hone ko the, jiske karan uski shareerik aur manshik asthiti me achanak parivartan hone lage the, pahle to apne hi uss bahan ke prati aakarshit hona jisse wo beshumar nafart karta tha, aur ab yu gusse me aniyantrit hona...

Jaise koi ishara tha, ki usko aane wale dino me aur bhi ajeebogareeb drishyo ka gawah banna hoga...
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Khair, chalte hai ab kisi aur shehar ke kisi dusre jagah me....
Parantu ham vartmaan me yatra nhi karenge, ham thoda bhootkaal ki yatra me chalte hai...
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YEAR 1998
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Hamare iss sundar se mulk me Prakriti ki saari sundarta sanjoge huye ek bahut hi khoobsurat rajya Himachal....
Jiske naam se hi pata chalta hai ki ishwar ne yahan ke zameen ke aanchal ko heem yani ki barf ka nayab tohfa se nawaza hai...
Charo ore unche unche parvat aur uspe bichhi huyi safed varf ki chadar ek sukoon de jaati hai darshnabhilashi ko.
Yahi to vajah hai iss raajya ko ek sundar darshnasthal banane ka,
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Kangada districk... Himachal ka hi ek khoobsurat sahar...
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"Maaa, college ke liye late ho gaya hunn mai jaa raha hunnnn..... Maaaaa.... Sun rahi ho...
Deepak aa chuka hai bahar, uske pita ji ke gaadi se hi chala jaunga "
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Sehar ke antim chhor pe hi ek chhota sa 2 taale ka makan bana hua tha, jiske andar sidhiyo se ek navyuvak jaldbaaji me utarta hua ghar ke neeche aaya.. Ghar ki halat dekh kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki ye ghar jiss pariwar ki hai, wo ek nimn madhyam vargiye pariwar hai.
Wo ladka jo abhi apni maa ko aawaj laga rha tha, iss waqt jo kapde bhi pehne huye the use dekh kar hi pata lag jata ki wo kapde kisi aur ke dwara usse diya gya hai.
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" Pahle kuchh nashta to kar le beta, dekh aaj teri bahne bhi bina khana khaye chali gayi, pooja kah rhi thi ki school me teacher ke liye interview dene jana hai. To riya ke sath hi chali gai... Par mai tujhe khali pet kahi jane nhi dunga , Tu jaane de deepak aur uske baap ko motorgadi pe ,tere paas cycle hai na ussi se chale jana "
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Ghar ke kitchen se ek aurat, jo ki dekhne se hi sabhyata ki murat lag rahi thi, sundar to bahut thi, par zimmedariya ussko sundar dikhne ka hak usse le chuka tha...
Karan tha ki uske pati ab iss duniya me nhi the, kuchh mahine pahle hi ek sadak durghatna me unka dehant ho gya tha.
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" Thik hai maa, mai cycle se chala jaunga....
Aur aapne didi ko kyu bola school me ja kar padhane ke liye, mai to jaa hi rha hunn na gerrage me kaam karne ko, mere rahte meri bahne kaam kare ye mujhe pasand nhi hai maa"
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Apni maa ke dwara fir se wahi baat sunkar iss bar yubak ka gala rundh sa gya, kuchh dino se lagatar uski badi bahan kahi school me padhaane ki zidd kar rahi thi, jiske karan ye yuvak apne bahan se naraz bhi tha, wo nhi chahta tha ki uski bahan kahin pe kaam kare...
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"Mai bhi to yahi chahti hun beta, lekin teri didi ka kahna bhi sahi hi hai na, ek akele tujhse ghar kaise chal payega.... Ghara ka saman lana, riya aur tere college ki fees..... Iass ghar ka kiraya.... Ye sab tu akele kaise handle karoge....
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Apni maa ki baat sunkar wo yubak kuchh nhi bola, aur wahan se khali pet hi bapas bahar chala gya...
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(Introducing new character)
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1.....Rohan... Kishan ke kahani ka pehla villen
2.....Rohan ki maa ( kahani ke jyada roll nhi hai)
3.....pooja (bahan)
4.....riya (bahan)
5.....Rohan ke pita ( koi roll nhi hai)
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Yunn hi waqt beetata raha, pooja bhi rohan ko mana li thi uske kaam karne ke liye aur rohan bhi maan gya tha...
Hassi khushi ek chhota sa pariwaar chal rha tha...
Ek ladka wala bhi aaya tha, pooja ke liye rishta lekar, aur ladke ka achhi naukari , ghar pariwar rohan aur uski maa ko bahut pasand aaya... Ladke walo ko bhi pooja bahut pasand aagyi...
Aur agle 6 mahine ke baad jesth maah me uska vivah bhi tay ho gya...
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Lekinn..... Yahi pe samaj ki wo gandi nazar, rohan ke pariwar ko lag gyi jis nazar se aksar insaan yaa to HAIVAN ban jata hai yaa fir EK BECHARA...
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Rohan ka mitra deepak, jo ki pooja ko pasand karta tha, wo usse kisi bhi keemat pe pana chahta tha, ek do baar usne pooja se apne dil ki baat kaha bhi tha, par pooja ne usse sidhe muh mana kar di thi. Wo achhe tarah se waakif thi deepak ke baare me,
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Deepak ek ameer baap ka bigdail beta tha, jo gareeb logo ko apne pairo ki dhool samajhta tha, par wo Rohan se nazdeekiya badhaye rakhna chahta tha.... Wo bhi shirf pooja ke liye...
Wo aksar Rohan se milne ke bahane pooja ko taadne chala aata tha...
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Rohan inn sab baato se poori tarah anjaan tha... Seedha jo tha bechara... Shareer bhi dubla sa tha, ...
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Pooja ki shadi tay ho gayi iss baat ko sun kar deepak ka dimag kharab ho gya... Aur uske deemag me bahut khatarnak khatarnaak vichar utpann hone lage.
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Abhi kuchh hi din gujre the shadi tay hone ke baad, Rohan apne college ke bahar road ke kinaare khada bus ka intezaar kar rha tha. Aaj college me deepak nhi aaya tha, aur Rohan ki cycle chalne ki halat me na thi... To wo aaj college bus se aane aaur jane ka faisala kiya tha.
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Khair, lagbhag 20 min intezaar karne par ek bus aayi, Rohan bhi uss pe jaldi se chadh gya...
Aur aage seat dekhkar baithne chala gya...
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Par jaise hi wo bas ke beecho beech paucha...
Uski aankh hairat se khul gayi... Bas me bas ab ek hi seat khali thi, aur jo seat khali thi uske bagal me wohi baithi huyi thi, jo ki Rohan ki school se hi crush thi........Ruchi
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Ruchi... Yahi wo ladki thi, jispe Rohan bhaisahab ka bachpan se crush tha...
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Khair ab ek hi seat bachi thi, aur wo bhi apne crush ke sath, to Rohan bhi sadhe kadmo ke sath uske paas jakar baith gya...
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Hi... ( bahut der shant baithe rahne ke baad baat ki suruaat uss ladki ne hi ki...aakhi kab tak shant baithti )
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Hello... (Achanak ruchi ko apne taraf haath milata dekh aphle to Rohan ghabra gya , fir khud ko normal karte huye handshake kiya)
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Ruchi -Hmmm, to aap ***** college me padhte ho.....
Rohan- hann, par aap ko kaise pata chala...
Ruchi - are ab jo roj mujhe hamesha itne gaur se dekhta hai uske baare me kuchh bate to pata mai bhi kara sakti hunn na.
Rohan - ( sakpakate huye) are, aapko gagagalt phehme ho ggyi hogi.... Maj bhala kyun aapko ghurunga...
Ruchi - achaa, matlab mai jhoot bol rhai hun, mai na tumhe apne school time se janti hunn, tum tab bhi class me mujhe ghoorte rahte the aur ab jab college alag alag ho gya hai, to bus me ghoorte rahte ho.... Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kyu nahi bol dete, aise ghoorte kyu rahte ho...
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Rohan bechara ruchi ke aise bole jaane par ghabra gya tha, ab wo thehra ek seedha sadha aur gareeb ladka, usse aankoch tha ki wo ruchi ko apne dil ki baat kabhi nhi keh payega .
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Ruchi - acha wi sab chhodo, aur ye lo, aaj mera janm din hai aur aaj mere papa ek party de rahe hai, tumhe bhi waha ana hai, aur agar nhi aaye to soch lena...
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Itna bolte ke sath ruchi ka stop aagya aur wo utar kae chali gayi...
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Idhar rohan pahle to shockes ho gya, uske baad jab usse realise hua ki aaj ruchi khud samne se usse baat karne aayi aur apne janm din me bhi sareek hone ko bulayi hai.. Uska man khushi me nachne ko karne laga...
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Sham huyi, Rohan ke ghar me abhi wo poori tarah se taiyaar ho kar ghar se nikalne hi wala tha...
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Riya - bhaiya, kaha ja rhe ho...
Rohan - are, aise agar koi bahar jaye to usse toka nhi karte, kaam kharab ho jata hai
Riya. - ohoo, lagta hai bhabhi laane ja rhe ho, kahi wo wahi ruchi to nhi hai na jiske baare me aao hamesha baat kiya karte the.
Rohan - hann, aur aaj mai usse propose karne ja raha hunn.
Ruchi - wow bhaiya, matlab ruchi meri bhabhi banegi... Wow..
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Uske baad rohan apne ghar se nikal jata hai..
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Party me jahan sab ek se badhkar ek dress pahan kar aaye the wahi abhi abhi hi waha Rohan pahuncha tha... Ek neela shirt aur black full pant me... Pahli baar khud ka silwaya hua kapda pehan raha tha..
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Party me ruchi ne apne sabhi dosto se Rohan ko milbaya...
Rohan ko bhi achha lga.. Whi Rohan ko ek ore side me deepak bhi khada mil gya... Usne deepak se bhi thoda bahut baat ki...
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Janmdin mana lene ke baad saare guest jaa chuke the, ruchi ne filhaal Rohan ko rok rkha tha. Kuchh samay baad jab ghar ke bhi sab log chale gaye to ruchi Rohan ko kheechte huye apne ghar ke bahar lawn me le gyi jaha iss waqt koi nahi tha...
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"To mera birthday gift kaha hai, lao mujhe... Sabne de diya par shirf tum ne hi nhi diya... "
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Ruchi ek serious look dete huye Rohan se poochhi, jise sun kar Rohan ka sar niche jhuk gya, usne sach me kuchh nhi laya tha...
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"Mai to kuchh nhi laya, mera gift udhar rha... Mai kal tumhe birthday gift de dunga.. "
Rohan khud ko samhalte huye kaha...
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"Mai kuchh mangu? "
Ruchi ne Rohan ki ankho me dekhte huye poocha
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"Hmmm, mango" Rohan bhi bas itna hi bol pata.
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I love you, Rohan... Mujhe apni life ko thodi si jagah de do... Mai bhi tumhe school time se hi pyar karne lagi thi, par himmat nhi hoti thi tumse milne ki... Kya tum mera partner banoge... Love partner
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Ruchi, Rohan ke aankho me dekhte huye ye sab bolne lagi ... Jisse sun kar Rohan ki khushi ka koi thikana hi nhi rah tha...
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Rohan ne bhi apna pyar uske saamne rakh diya aur dono ek dusre ke baaho me samate vmchale gaye...
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Inn dono ka pyar din prari din parwan chadhne laga... Din beete aur sath hi sath 3 mahine bhi beet gaye inn teen mahino me jahan, Rohan apni didi ke shadi ke liye jitna ho sakta tha utna mehnat kiya.. Aur uska aur ruchi ka pyar bhi aur parvaan pe chadha...
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Wahin ek shamm, pooja aur riya sham ko ek sath sabji lene karke me pahuchi huyi thi... Jahan iss waqt bahut bheed thi... Ek taraf pooja jiski umra 26 ke lagbhag thi.. Ekdam menka ka roop lagti thi, wohi ek taraf riya jiski umra mahaz 21 varsh hi thi... Sundarta me ye bhi apne maa aur bahan pe gayi thi...
Inn dono ko dekh kar bazar me mauzud har tharki apne aahen bharne lage.
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Wohi ussi baazar me ek sharab ka dukann bhi tha, jisme se daaru pi kar niklne baka aur koi nhi balki deepak hee tha..
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Deepak ki nazar jaise hii pooja pe gayi wo thithak gya, aur sharab ke nasa hone karan aaj usne fir se pooja ko prapose kar diya...
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Pooja ne pahle ki hi tarah usse mana kar diya... Par iss waqt to uske dimag pe Pooja aur sharab ka nasha chhaya hua tha, usne wapas jaa rhi Pooja ki hath ko pakad liya aur bolne laga ki tum shadi nhi kar shakti, mai tumhari shadi nhi hone dungi
Aur bhi bahut kuchh., uske hatho ka grip bahut mazboot tha jiske karan Pooja ko dard hone laga... Abhi deepak aur kuchh kar bhi pata uske pahle hi uske gaal pe ek jhannatedaar tamacha pada jisse uska nasha bhi aadhi niche urmtar chuki thi.
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Ye tamacha riya lagayi thi, deepak ko jisse deepak shant ho gya... Pooja aur riya bhi wapas apnee ghar aagyi...
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Par iss ghatna ne deepak ko aur uksaa diya.... Usne turant apni bullet bike nikali aur chal diya kisi se milne...
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Deepak - dekho, ab mujh se aur intezaar nhi hota hai... Tum kuchh bhi kar ke un dono bahno ko mere farmhause me lekar aajana.... Ab bardaast nhi hota, saali ekdam zahar ban gayi hai... Aur uski chhoti bahan... Wo to ekdam teekhi mirach ban gayi hai...
Suna hai teri dosti achhe se hogyi hai usse, tab to aaraam se hamre changul me wo sab fasenge.
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Unknown - achha, uska to tumm kaam kar doge par mera kya.. Tumhare kahne par mai 3 maheene se iss kaam me laga huaa hunn aur tum to ho jo ki mujh par jara sa bhi dhyan nhi dete...
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Deepak - are darling... Chalo kal tum un dono bahno ko mere farmhause me lekar aao wahi pe unlogo ke saamne pahle tujhe maza dunga, uske baad unlogo ko saza dunga... Sali mujhe
Mana karti hai... Mujhe thappad maarti hai...
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Agla din, jab Rohan ghar se college gaya, to usse college ke gate ke bahar hi ruchi khadi mili, jiska chehra thoda thoda tired lag rha tha...
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Kyu khadi ho, aur ye tumhre chehre pe barah kyun baje huge hai. "
Rohan ne ruchi se poochha..
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" Wo aaj mera sar bhari bhari sa lag rha hai, mai aaj nhi ja paungi ghoomne.. Bas wihi batane aaayi thi... "
Ruchi ne apna sar niche karte huye kaha...
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" Are to isme ghabrene ki kya baat hai, tum aaram karo ham kal chal denge kahi ghhomne... "
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Rohan ki jabab se ruchi muskura di aur jhat se Rohan ko gale laga li...
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Rohan to wapas college chala gya, par ruchi apne ghar jaane ki bajaye... Chal di wapas roahn ki ghar ke taraf..
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Abhi Rohan ke ghar me uski bahne khane ke table par se khana kha kar hi uthe the.
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" Namste didi, namste unty.... Hello riya kaisi ho..."
Ruchi ghar aate ke sath poochhi.
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Are ruchi, tum yahan, apne college nhi gaye...
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Wo didi, aaj hamsab ki planing huyi hai, wo aaj cinemaghar me salman ki ek film lagi hai to wahi dekhne ja rhe hai ham log... Rohan bhi ja rha hai... Ussi ne bulaya hai aap dono ko bhi... Saare ticket kharidne ke baad 2 ticket extra mila tha jise Rohan ne aap dono ko bhi wahan pe bulaya hai.. Ham sav sath me baith kar movie enjoy karenge... Ab aao mana mat kar dena...
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Pooja -Are, mai inn sab cheejo me dhyan nhi deta , mujhe bhi ye sab pasand nhi... Jab tum dono ja hi rhe ho to hamara jana kaha se jaruri ho gya.
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Ruchi - wi sab mai nhi janti hun didi, agar aap nhi jaoge to Rohan mujhse naraz ho jayega usne saaf saaf kaha hai ki aapko lekar hi aana hai...
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Ruchi ki baato ko jyada taalna un dono bahno ko pasand nhi aaya... Aur baat uske bhai ki thi, ussi ne to bulaya tha... Yahi lag rha tha inndono ko...
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Khair ve dono apne ghar se bahar nikal gaye , ruchi iss waqt apne baap ki gaadi ko le aayi thi... Par ruchi ke itna jaldbaaji karne ke karan pooja aur riya ne apni chhoti si bags lejana hi book gayii... Usse dene ke liye rohan ki maa jaise hi ghar se bahar aaye, wo ve teeno bahar nikal chuke the...
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Unke bags me kuchh dawayi thi, jo ki pooja ki thi, usse uski bahut jaruart thi...
Yahi sab sochte huye, rohan ki maa apne ghar me tala lagakar uss gaadi ka peeche tempo me baith kar jaane lagi.
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Gaadi bahut aage thi, lekin fir bhi rohan ki maa aakhir manzil pe pahunch hi gayi, tempo bale ne uss gaadi ko pehchan liya tha, jo iss waqt ek farmhouse ke bahar lagi huyi thi...
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Rohan ki maa bhi filhaal farmhause ke andar hi chal dii....
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Idhar rohan , college me jab se ruchi ne usse bataya tha ki uska tabiyat kharab hai usse tanik bhi achha nhi lag rha tha, jiske karan 2 lecture attend kar ke wo apni cycle se nikal pada ruchi ke ghar... Jaha usse pata chala ki ruchi to subah se hi college ka bol kar ghar se nikal chuki hai.
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Rohan ko hairat huyi ki aakhir ruchi ne usse jhooth kyun bola...
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Khair wo wahan se wapas apne ghar ki ore chal pada, aur ghar pahunchte hi usse ek aur jhatka laga.. Uske ghar ke main gate pe tala laga hua atha... Ab usse kuchh galat hone ki shanka hone lagii.... Wo punah apne college ke taraf nikala... Wahan ja kar pata lagaya ki riya college aayi hai ki nahi... Waha bhi usse nirasha hi haath mila... Yahi sab karte huye dopehar ke 12 baj chuke the... Wo thak haar ke bapas apne ghar ke taraf hi aarha tha ki usse ek ladki dikhi, ye ruchi ki hi dost thi...
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Rohan ko uske throug pata chala ki ruchi kuchh kaam se deepak ke farmhouse me gyi huyi hai...
Rohan ne bhi apni cycle ussi taraf mod liya...
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Usne cycle ko bahar hi rahne diya aur chal diya farmhause ke andar...
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Abhi wo kuchh hi kadam andar gya tha ki usse siskiyo ki aawaj aane lagi..
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Aaaah, aise hi hhaannn.. Aahhh aise hi deepak... Aahha. Ssssssssss..... Aise hi faad daalo meri choot ko... Aaahhh... Hannn..
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Ye aawaje thi ruchi ki, jisse sun kar mere dhadkan maano ruk si gayi... Rohan daudte huye uss aawaj ki disha me gya... Aur wahin khidki ke paas se usse sara scen dikh gya, aur ye scene dekh kar usse ek jordaar jhatka laga... Ruchi pooori nangi, deepap usse ghodi bana kar chod raha tha, aur ruchhi jor jir se siskiya liye jaa thi thi... Abhi Rohan iss ghatna se ubhra hi nhi tha ki usi kaano me ek aur chillane ke aawaj aayi jisse sun kar uske kaan khade ho gye, uski dil ki dhadkan maano ruk si gayi aur uske muhh se achanak hi ek jordaar cheekh nikal gayi..
Riyaaaaaaaaa........
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Aur ye cheekh sunkar deepak aur ruchi ka bhi dhyan Rohan ki taraf ho gya. Jo rohan ko dekhkar muskurane lage...
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Rohan tezi se dauda uss ore jaha se riya ki aawaj aayi thi, ye ussi kamra ke bagal bala kamara tha, jisme deepak aur ruchi lage huye the..
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Rohan ne tezi se uss darwaje ka kamra toda aur andar chal gaya... Andar jane ke baad uski sanse hi halak me atak gayi thi... Anadar uski maa , aur didi ka nagn awastha me lash pada hua tha... Uski chhoti bahan bhi besudh ho chuki jisse ek hatta katta adhed nirdayita purvak balatkaar kar rha tha...
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Rohan ka gusaa achanak bahut badh gya, aur wo wahi pas me ek khanti... ( jis se jameen koda jata hai) uthakar uss aadmi ke peeth me ghoop diyaa... Wo adhed bhi wahinn tapak gayaa... Par ab bahut der ho chuka tha... Kyonki agle hi pal Rohan ke sar pe bhi ek jordaar waar huaa aur wo bhi wahin behosh hi kar gir gya...
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Deepak -Chalo, hogya iska kaam bhi tamam...(apne aadmiyo se) inn sab ki laash ko khayi me fek dena , jab tak mai aur meri darling alna adhura khel poora karlete hain.
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Uske baad wo sab, Rohan , uski maa aur bahno kk laasho ko door kisi pagad se niche gahre khayi me fenk dete hai...
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2 maheene baad...
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Achanak Rohan ki aankhe khulti hai to khud ko ek gufaa me pata hai, usse apne aas paas shirf dhuaa hi dhuaa nazar aarha hota hai. Jab wo dhyan se apne ankho ko chhota kar ke dwkhta hai to ussealne samne ek insaan yagya karta hua dikhta hai... Wo insaan poora nagn awastha me baitha huaa tha, uske bade bade baal, aur ansuljhe dadhi, ye saaf bata rahi thi ki wo bahut varsho se iss jungle ke gufaa me mauzud hai..
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Uske mantra bolne ke tareeke se bhi ye saaf pata chal rha tha ki ye koi tantrik hai, jo ki apni kaali shaktiyo ki pooja kiya karta hai ...
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Kuchh der Rohan gaur se uss tantrik ko dekhta hai, aur jab usse khud ka aur khud ke haalt ka dhyan hota hai, to uske aankho ke saamne fir se wahi sab scene chalne lagta hai jo usne farmhause me dekha tha... Aur achanak wo jor jor se dahade maarkar rone lagta hai..
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"Murkh balak, mujhe pata hai ki tumhare aur tumhre pariwar walo ke sath kitna ghrinit chal khela gaya, tumhare ankhi ke samne tumhari bahan ka balatkaar kiya gya.. Par iss baat ko sochkar rona to kaayro ka kaam hai, mai tumhe issliye yaha nhi laya hun ki tum kayar bano, balki mai tumhe issliye yahan laya hun ki tum badla le sako... Apni bahan ka badla... Apni maa ke uss tadap ka badlaa jiske saath balatkaar kar ke uski nirmamta se hatya kar di gyi... Kya tumhara khoon nhi khaulta hai, kya bas rote rahne se tumhara badla purn ho jayega nhi na... To uske liye tumhe khud wahan jaa kar apna badla lena hoga...
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Tantrik ki baato ne Rohan ke andar jo gusse ki chingaari dhadhak rahi thi usse aur badha diya.. Aur uske andar se dar ko bahar nikaal diya..
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"Aap sahi kah rahe ho baba, mai lunga badla, chun chun kar un sab se badla lungaa jisne meri hasti khelti zindagi ko nark bana diya... Mai uss poore samaz se badla lunga jiss samaj me uss jaise nirmam balatkaari ne janm liya... .. "
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Tantrik - abhi nhi, mai tumhe kuchh shaktiya dunga, tum uske madad se apna badla le sakte ho... Par tumhe, wo shaktiya matra 3 din ke lute hi milegi.. Apna badla lene ke pashchat tumhe wapas yaha aaana hoga aur 20 saal ke liye shaitan ki tapashya karni hogi jisse tum dharti ka sabse shaktishali insaan banjaoge... Uske baad tum poore samaj se badla le paoge... Wo bhi matra chutki bajate hi...
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Rogan - thik hai baba , mai abhi jata hun aaur aaj hi unn Sare darinde ko unka asli sthan... Narak me pahuncha kar aata hunn.
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Tantrik - vijayibhavah putra..
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Fir Rohan wahan se nikal jaata hai...
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2 din baad... Wohi farmhouse, wohi log bas ab game ulta ho chuka tha, Rohan apne shakti ke dam pe deepak, wahan kaam karne waale uske aadmi sab, deepak ka baap, ruchhi ka baap, matlab deepak aur ruchi ke ghar me jitne bhi mard the unsabke pair tod kar farmhouse ke hall me baitha rakha tha, .. Aur deepak ki maa, ruchi ki maa aur ruchi, uski badi bahan, deepak ki chhoti bahan... Sabko janvaro ki tarah chod rha tha... Wahinn saare mard sab bas chilla chilla ke roye ja rhe the.. Aur aurte sab siskiya le rhi thi... Iss kaam me Rohan kaa sath de raha tha tantrik ke hi kuchh log..
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Kuchh samay me un sabko maarkar uss farmhouse me aag laga diya gya aur waha se wapas jangle ki Rohan nikal pada...
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Halato ne Ab rohan ko ek sidha ladka se ek darinda bana diya tha,... Wi bhi ek aisa darinda jo ek tantrik ke baato me aakar 20 sal tak kali shaktiyo ko khush karne ke liye tap karne jaane wala tha...
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Rohan apne aap ko parishtithiyo se ladne ke liya EK BECHARA nhi balki EK DARINDA banana sahi samjha... Par isse janm liya khalnayak....
ROHAN
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Aaj ke liye itna hi. Update pasand aaye to like thok ke jana bhaiyo..

 

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Really bhai mehnat to lgi hogi itna bda update padhne main hme 20 mint lga apko likhne main 4-5 ghanta lga hoga waise keyboard khrab hua hai ya phone

Shandar update hai bhai....
Lala or Thakur pariwar ka itihas to bahut hi bhayankar dikhayi deta hai.....
Ab bas ye dekhna hai ki itihas dohrata hai ya kuch or naya dekhne ko milega..... Raju Kaka ki fight dekhne me maza aa gaya....
Agle bhag ki pratiksha rahegi bhai.

Bahut bhayankar maar peet wala update tha kinna badi dusmani hai log galat kaam karke maar khate hain fir bhi kuch sikhte nai hai

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Bada hai khufnak drishy tha jab sunil ne ek ke bad ek gajar muli ki tarha lala ke bhai aur betio ko katta gaya. Sahi kaha hawas inshani soch ko deemak ki tarh kha jata hai agar aisa nahi hota to vo teno bap bete jante huye bhi itni ghinauni harkat nahi karte.

Khir Rocky khud ka vachab karne ke liye neha par hi uljam laga diya jabki neha ka koyi dosh tha hi bakli sara kiya dhara Rocky aur uske dosto ka tha aur natija bhi bhugat liya kisan se pahle raju ne jo mara vichre ke muh ke shobha badane wale danto ne saath chod diya.

Bahut acha likha pura update padhne me lagbhag 40 minat ka samya laga par pure update me suru se lekar ant tak ek lay me rochkta aur akrshan bana raha.

still here

Posted dosto... Maafi chahunga late dene ke liye.. Par aap sab ke liye maine aadhi story raat ki jaag kar fir lika... Lagbhad 2000 words starting ke update galti se delete ho gaya tha.
Jis karan update raat ko samay pe nhi de paya... Update padhe aur apne apne revos de..
Dhanyavaad

 

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Posted dosto... Maafi chahunga late dene ke liye.. Par aap sab ke liye maine aadhi story raat ki jaag kar fir lika... Lagbhad 2000 words starting ke update galti se delete ho gaya tha.
Jis karan update raat ko samay pe nhi de paya... Update padhe aur apne apne revos de..
Dhanyavaad

rohan ki kahani nahi padhi usko padhne ka man hi nahi kiya pata nahi kyu
villain ki entry to baad mai bhi ho sakti thi abhi lala ka parivar hi bahut tha pehle is angle ko suljha lete ab ek sath do angle chalenge to sambhal lena kyunki ek nazuk mod par aa jayegi kahani
ap ise lala ke pariwar ke satth jodne ki koshish karoge par mai ye kahunga lala ke pariwar ko normal hi rehne do pehle jo museebte hai saamne unhe suljhao jaise neha aur kishan ka rishta, kishan ka apne pita ke sath rishta, kishan ka sheetal ke sath rishta , dadi aur dada ka raaz
pehle hi do kanya aa chuki hai phir teesri main character ko add karne ki soch rahe ho is villaine ke jariye to soch samajh kar karna kahi baki writer ki tarah deadlock mai mat phans jana nahi to jaise unki kahani ka hasar hua usi disha mai ye bhi kahani chal padegi

man se likhoo sahi hai par man kuch jyada hi conditions create karte jaa raha hai
kishan ko aadhi takat milne do phir age villain side badhna agar meri bat mano to
kyunki villaine tap chuka hai 20 saal tak tap karke aur main hero abhi tak nalla hi lag raha hai to soch samajh ke chalo mai itna hi kahunga

 

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baki bura mat manna bhai kahani apki hai jaise mod dena chaho apki marzi
mai bas itna soch raha tha ki maine kahaniya bahut padhi hai jinme se 80% adhuri rahi karan ki wo ek sath kai musibto ko age kar dete haii phir suljha nahi pate ya to kahani ko aise mod par chod denge ki kahani adhuri reh jaye ya phir aise mod par lake band kar denge kisi ko bhi wo ant acha na lage jai dr chutiya ne kiya tha shikari ki bimari mai dimag age chala nahi to kahani ko khade mod par band kar diya jisse kai pehlu ban ho gaye
jaise anandsngh12 saand ko adhura chod diya ki ab wo wada to karte hai update denge par 6 mahino se update ka namo nishaan nahi hai aisa lag raha hai jaise wo bhi kisi deadlock mai phas gaye

maine bhi ek kahani shuru ki thi bas ek hi update dia par uske bad kuch nahi kiya kyunki mai nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki umeed badha kar mai unhe beech mai hi chod du
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mai ye bilkul bhi nahi chahunga ki ye kahani bich mai hi bandh ho
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agar kuch galat kaha ho to sabhi members see maafi chahunga
aur rahul bhai reply edit mat hone dena jaisa xf par kar diya jata tha yaha par maine is forum ka koi rule nahi toda hai dono paritikriyao mai

 

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[Akash ⚜️]

Update 29
Mega update 2.0
(Khalnayak) ​

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Abb aage...
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Jahan, ek taraf rockey ko iss halat me dekh kar uska baap aur dada ko gussa to bahut aarha tha, par wo dono ye bhi jante the ki, thakuro se sidhe haat panga lena un logo ki bevkoofi hi hogi. Aur aisi bevkoofi karne ke baad unki kyaa halat ban jayegi yr baat to unhe bees varsh pahle hi pata chal gaya tha.
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Wahin, raju kaka ka ye fighting skill dekh kar wahan mauzud kuchh logo ko chhodkar sab hairat me the. Mujhe to samajh hi nhi aarha tha ki sala ye kya scene hai, itna khatarnak skill ek aise insaan me kaha se aasakti hai jiske baare me hamesha bataya gya hai ki wo bachpan se shirf ghar ke kaam me hi madad karne ke liye rakha gya hai.
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"Thakur sahab mai apne bete ke taraf se aap se maafi mangta hun, aap ko panchayat ke taraf jo saza dena ho hame manzur hai. Par kripya kar ke Sunil bhai sahab se mere bete ko bacha lijiyega. Uske baad, ye kabhi iss gao me nazar nhi aayega. Mai vachan deta hun Thakur sahab "
Ye ranjeet tha, gussa to isse bahut aarha tha apne bete ki ye halat dekh kar, par inn janab ko himmat nhi thi ki ek galat lafj ka bhi prayog kar le. Par haannn, iss chutiye ne man me ye jarur than liya tha ki badla wo lega jarur, bhale hi chhup kar peeth pe waar kar ke lena pade, ar lega jarur.
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Maafi usse di jaati hai ranjeete, jisse apne kiye gaye gunah ka uske zehan me malal ho, par tumhare napunshak bete ne to abhi tak apna gunah bhi nhi kaboola hai. To maafi kise aur kyu mile, khair kal shadi me sunil bhaiya bhi aarhe hai. Aur tum chahte ho ki tumhara beta sahi salamat rahe to isse kaho maafi mangne aur, kuchh dino ke liye iss gao se tum poore pariwar bahar chale jao, waise agar sunil ko pata chali tab tumhara beta chahe jahannam me hi kyu na rahe wo usse wahin pe dhoond ke marega.
Uske bete se parichay to tumhara ho hi gya hai, iske rago me bhi ussi sunil ka khoon daud raha hai, jiske gusse ke aag ne tumhare khandan ki jansankhya aadhi kar di thi. Aur jara socho ki agar ye akela tumhare bete ke sath sath uske 14 - 15 sathiyo ko dhobi ke kutte ki tarah dho sakta hai to dono baap bete ek saath me kya kya kar sakte hai. Ye mat sochna ki mujhe tum par daya gya aur maine tumhare bete ko maaf kar diya. Mai to bas apne pita ji dwara, reema bahan ko diya gya vachan ka maan rakh rha hunn, unhone vachan diya hai ki unke bete ki zaan ko koi khatra nhi hone denge, par saza to usse milegi hi, ab apne bete ko kaho sabse maafi mangne ko aur niklo yahan se. "
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Ye raghav thakur the, jinhone ye saaf keh diya ki saza to rockey ko zarur milegi, par maut ki nhi, aakhir birendra ji ne vachan jo de diya tha.
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" Bahut bahut dhanyavaad chhote thakur "
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Uske baad ranjeet ke kahne par uska beta sab se maafi manga. .
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Idhar jab se reema ko apne bete ki ye ghinauni kartut pata chali thi, tab se wo bas roye ja rhi thi, un sabhi mahilao ki bheed me ho kar bhi wo khud ko akela samajhne lagi thi, aakhi samjhegi kyu nhi, usse apne pati aur sasur ki harkate aur saari kaale dhande ke baare me gyat tha, par wo apne bete ko jab bhi dekhti thi, usse apne bete me uske baap dada ka ek bhi lakshan dikhayi nhi deta tha. Aakhir dega bhi kaise rockey gao me jab bhi aata tha, ek shant ban kar jo aata tha. Uski asliyat se wo poori tarah anzan thi, usse ye thode na pata tha ki shahar me uska beta kya kya karname kiya firta hai...
Par aaj, aaj usse apne bete ki asliyat ka pata chal chuka tha, ab usse yaha aur rukna, uske man ko bahut thesh pahuncha taha tha, abhi uska beta sab se maafi mang hi raha tha ki wo waha se nikal kar bahar jaane lagi.
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" Rukiye, meera bahan, mujhe bhi kuchh baat karni hai ........., thakur sahab, maine bhi ek bahut badi aur galat faisala kar li hun, wo bhi bina kuchh jyada soche huye , par ab mai usse nhi hone de sakti"
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Ye thi sheetal ki maa, jo aaj apne faisale pe pachhta rahi thi, aur wo faisala kya tha ye baar poora gao janta tha,
Faisala tha, apni beti ko lala ke ghar ki bahu banana, apni beti ko uss darinde ke haatho me dena jo uske beti ki zindagi ko narak banane me zara bhi waqt nhi lagata,
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Sheetal ki maa ne jaise hi kaha ki usse apne faisle ko badalna hai, waise hi mere chehre pe ek bahut bade smile ubhar aayi... Aakhir yahi to chahta tha mai... Issiliy to maine aur rajnish ne planing ki thi, bhale hi mera Plan poori tarh se kaam nhi kiya, par mera maksad jo tha wo poora ho gya tha,
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Jahan ek taraf poore gao walo ko ye baat pata chal chuki thi ki sheetal ki maa kis faisale ki baat kar rahi hai, aur unme rockey aur uske baap dada bhi shamil the, wahi reema jiska kadam kadam aage badh hu raha tha, sheetal ki maa ki baato se unka kadam wahi ruk gaya...
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" Reema bahan, mai jyada kuchh to nhi bolungi, par bas itna jarur kahungi ki ab meri beti ka byah rockey se nahi hoga , mai yr rishta ab nhi karna chahti hunn, aur thakur sahab meri shadi todne ka matra ek yahi karan nhi hai ki mujhe rockey ki asliyat pata chal gayi hai, mujhe to uski asliyat pahle hi sheetal ne bata di thi , par mujhe lagta tha ki shadi ke baad ho sake sab sahi ho jaye... Lekin nhi, ab mai khud ko galat man li hunn.... Aur meri beti bhi iss shadi se khush nhi hai.... Issliye ab jo rishta hone wala tha ham do pariwar ke beech wo nhi hoga. Maaf kijiyega....
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Jahan itni saari baat ko bina koi laag lapet ke apne haath jode sheetal ki maa ne bol diya..
Wahin uski baat ko sunkar rockey ka dimag for se out off control ho gya...
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" Ye aap kya bol rhi ho unty, sheetal aur mera rishta tod rahe ho, ye aap bahut galat kar rhe ho.... Agar meri shadi sheetal se nhi huyi to aap soch bhi nahi sakti ho ki yahan kya kya hoga fir...
Aur uss sheetal... Saali wo mujhse shadi nhi karegi... Agar wo meri bibi nahi bani to usee mai apni randddeeiii........."
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Chatakkkkkk.... Ye pada fir se ek tamacha aur wo bhi uski maa reema ke haatho se....
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Par ab rockey ne aisi galti kar di thi jisse usko ab maafi naseeb nhi hone waali thi.....
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Darasal , rockey ne jaise hi sheetal ko gaali diya mera aankh gusse se ekdam rakt jaisa laal ho gya tha, mera haath ekdam kaampne laga...
Aur mere aankho ke rang ko badalte huye shirf dadi aur raju kaka ne hi dekha...
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Abhi bechara rockey apne maa ke hatho tamacha se ubra bhi na tha ki, ek jordaar punch uske thopde pe lagi jisse wo door ped me se takra gaya...
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"Bahanchod, kyaa karega sheetal ke sathh hannn... Bol naa madharchod... "
Thudddddd......
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Ye mai tha, jiska gussa filhaal apne limit ko paar kar chuka tha... Maine rockey ke chehre pe do pucnh diye jisse uski halat aur kharab ho gayi... Ek to pahle se hi saali ki bahut dhulayi ho chuki thi upar se aaj do do baar mere gusse ka shikaar bhi ban gya... Chutiya sala
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Mai ruka nhi, balki ussi ped pe usse poori tarah se satakar, uske gale ko pakad liya aur ekdam se use upar utha diya....
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Iss samay Jahan meri ankho me khoon sabar ho chuka tha, wahin mere gusse ko dekh kar kisi me himmat nhi ho rahi thi mujhe rokne ki... Aur mujhe kuchh sunayi bhi nhi de rha tha... Mujhe to bas apne samne rockey ka chehra dikh rha tha... Aur kaan me uske bole wo apshabd gunj rha tha jo usne sheetal kk lekar bola tha.
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Rockey to poori tarah se chhatpataye ja rha tha... Uski shans ab kisi bhi pal rukne waali thi.. Ki reema mere pair ko pakad kar rone lagi... Aur mujhe kuchh bole ja rhi thi... Mujhe sach me uski aawaj nhi sunayi de rhi thi.. Par uski aankho me aanshu dekhkar maine apna hath dhila chhod diya... Aur rockey wahinn dhamm se gir gya...
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Fir mai wahann nhi ruka... Mai sidhe haveli me chala gya... Mere pichhe pichhe rajnish bhi haveli ke andar hi aagya....
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Mere gharwalo se lekar gao ke anya log bhi shocked the.. Karan tha mera gussa jo shayad gao walo ko mere baap ki yaad dila diya tha, ...
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Bechaini to mujhme bhi thi, itna gussa shayad aaj pahli baar mujhe aaya tha , jaise mujhpe mera hi control na ho. Mai khud ko bebas mehsoos kar rha tha uss waqt apne gusse ke saamne... Koi to tha jo mere gusse ko aseem shaktiya de rha tha... Koi to thaaa......
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Idhar kishan ki zindagi me 21 basant poore hone ko the, jiske karan uski shareerik aur manshik asthiti me achanak parivartan hone lage the, pahle to apne hi uss bahan ke prati aakarshit hona jisse wo beshumar nafart karta tha, aur ab yu gusse me aniyantrit hona...

Jaise koi ishara tha, ki usko aane wale dino me aur bhi ajeebogareeb drishyo ka gawah banna hoga...
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Khair, chalte hai ab kisi aur shehar ke kisi dusre jagah me....
Parantu ham vartmaan me yatra nhi karenge, ham thoda bhootkaal ki yatra me chalte hai...
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YEAR 1998
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Hamare iss sundar se mulk me Prakriti ki saari sundarta sanjoge huye ek bahut hi khoobsurat rajya Himachal....
Jiske naam se hi pata chalta hai ki ishwar ne yahan ke zameen ke aanchal ko heem yani ki barf ka nayab tohfa se nawaza hai...
Charo ore unche unche parvat aur uspe bichhi huyi safed varf ki chadar ek sukoon de jaati hai darshnabhilashi ko.
Yahi to vajah hai iss raajya ko ek sundar darshnasthal banane ka,
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Kangada districk... Himachal ka hi ek khoobsurat sahar...
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"Maaa, college ke liye late ho gaya hunn mai jaa raha hunnnn..... Maaaaa.... Sun rahi ho...
Deepak aa chuka hai bahar, uske pita ji ke gaadi se hi chala jaunga "
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Sehar ke antim chhor pe hi ek chhota sa 2 taale ka makan bana hua tha, jiske andar sidhiyo se ek navyuvak jaldbaaji me utarta hua ghar ke neeche aaya.. Ghar ki halat dekh kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki ye ghar jiss pariwar ki hai, wo ek nimn madhyam vargiye pariwar hai.
Wo ladka jo abhi apni maa ko aawaj laga rha tha, iss waqt jo kapde bhi pehne huye the use dekh kar hi pata lag jata ki wo kapde kisi aur ke dwara usse diya gya hai.
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" Pahle kuchh nashta to kar le beta, dekh aaj teri bahne bhi bina khana khaye chali gayi, pooja kah rhi thi ki school me teacher ke liye interview dene jana hai. To riya ke sath hi chali gai... Par mai tujhe khali pet kahi jane nhi dunga , Tu jaane de deepak aur uske baap ko motorgadi pe ,tere paas cycle hai na ussi se chale jana "
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Ghar ke kitchen se ek aurat, jo ki dekhne se hi sabhyata ki murat lag rahi thi, sundar to bahut thi, par zimmedariya ussko sundar dikhne ka hak usse le chuka tha...
Karan tha ki uske pati ab iss duniya me nhi the, kuchh mahine pahle hi ek sadak durghatna me unka dehant ho gya tha.
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" Thik hai maa, mai cycle se chala jaunga....
Aur aapne didi ko kyu bola school me ja kar padhane ke liye, mai to jaa hi rha hunn na gerrage me kaam karne ko, mere rahte meri bahne kaam kare ye mujhe pasand nhi hai maa"
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Apni maa ke dwara fir se wahi baat sunkar iss bar yubak ka gala rundh sa gya, kuchh dino se lagatar uski badi bahan kahi school me padhaane ki zidd kar rahi thi, jiske karan ye yuvak apne bahan se naraz bhi tha, wo nhi chahta tha ki uski bahan kahin pe kaam kare...
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"Mai bhi to yahi chahti hun beta, lekin teri didi ka kahna bhi sahi hi hai na, ek akele tujhse ghar kaise chal payega.... Ghara ka saman lana, riya aur tere college ki fees..... Iass ghar ka kiraya.... Ye sab tu akele kaise handle karoge....
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Apni maa ki baat sunkar wo yubak kuchh nhi bola, aur wahan se khali pet hi bapas bahar chala gya...
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(Introducing new character)
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1.....Rohan... Kishan ke kahani ka pehla villen
2.....Rohan ki maa ( kahani ke jyada roll nhi hai)
3.....pooja (bahan)
4.....riya (bahan)
5.....Rohan ke pita ( koi roll nhi hai)
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Yunn hi waqt beetata raha, pooja bhi rohan ko mana li thi uske kaam karne ke liye aur rohan bhi maan gya tha...
Hassi khushi ek chhota sa pariwaar chal rha tha...
Ek ladka wala bhi aaya tha, pooja ke liye rishta lekar, aur ladke ka achhi naukari , ghar pariwar rohan aur uski maa ko bahut pasand aaya... Ladke walo ko bhi pooja bahut pasand aagyi...
Aur agle 6 mahine ke baad jesth maah me uska vivah bhi tay ho gya...
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Lekinn..... Yahi pe samaj ki wo gandi nazar, rohan ke pariwar ko lag gyi jis nazar se aksar insaan yaa to HAIVAN ban jata hai yaa fir EK BECHARA...
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Rohan ka mitra deepak, jo ki pooja ko pasand karta tha, wo usse kisi bhi keemat pe pana chahta tha, ek do baar usne pooja se apne dil ki baat kaha bhi tha, par pooja ne usse sidhe muh mana kar di thi. Wo achhe tarah se waakif thi deepak ke baare me,
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Deepak ek ameer baap ka bigdail beta tha, jo gareeb logo ko apne pairo ki dhool samajhta tha, par wo Rohan se nazdeekiya badhaye rakhna chahta tha.... Wo bhi shirf pooja ke liye...
Wo aksar Rohan se milne ke bahane pooja ko taadne chala aata tha...
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Rohan inn sab baato se poori tarah anjaan tha... Seedha jo tha bechara... Shareer bhi dubla sa tha, ...
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Pooja ki shadi tay ho gayi iss baat ko sun kar deepak ka dimag kharab ho gya... Aur uske deemag me bahut khatarnak khatarnaak vichar utpann hone lage.
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Abhi kuchh hi din gujre the shadi tay hone ke baad, Rohan apne college ke bahar road ke kinaare khada bus ka intezaar kar rha tha. Aaj college me deepak nhi aaya tha, aur Rohan ki cycle chalne ki halat me na thi... To wo aaj college bus se aane aaur jane ka faisala kiya tha.
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Khair, lagbhag 20 min intezaar karne par ek bus aayi, Rohan bhi uss pe jaldi se chadh gya...
Aur aage seat dekhkar baithne chala gya...
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Par jaise hi wo bas ke beecho beech paucha...
Uski aankh hairat se khul gayi... Bas me bas ab ek hi seat khali thi, aur jo seat khali thi uske bagal me wohi baithi huyi thi, jo ki Rohan ki school se hi crush thi........Ruchi
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Ruchi... Yahi wo ladki thi, jispe Rohan bhaisahab ka bachpan se crush tha...
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Khair ab ek hi seat bachi thi, aur wo bhi apne crush ke sath, to Rohan bhi sadhe kadmo ke sath uske paas jakar baith gya...
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Hi... ( bahut der shant baithe rahne ke baad baat ki suruaat uss ladki ne hi ki...aakhi kab tak shant baithti )
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Hello... (Achanak ruchi ko apne taraf haath milata dekh aphle to Rohan ghabra gya , fir khud ko normal karte huye handshake kiya)
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Ruchi -Hmmm, to aap ***** college me padhte ho.....
Rohan- hann, par aap ko kaise pata chala...
Ruchi - are ab jo roj mujhe hamesha itne gaur se dekhta hai uske baare me kuchh bate to pata mai bhi kara sakti hunn na.
Rohan - ( sakpakate huye) are, aapko gagagalt phehme ho ggyi hogi.... Maj bhala kyun aapko ghurunga...
Ruchi - achaa, matlab mai jhoot bol rhai hun, mai na tumhe apne school time se janti hunn, tum tab bhi class me mujhe ghoorte rahte the aur ab jab college alag alag ho gya hai, to bus me ghoorte rahte ho.... Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kyu nahi bol dete, aise ghoorte kyu rahte ho...
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Rohan bechara ruchi ke aise bole jaane par ghabra gya tha, ab wo thehra ek seedha sadha aur gareeb ladka, usse aankoch tha ki wo ruchi ko apne dil ki baat kabhi nhi keh payega .
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Ruchi - acha wi sab chhodo, aur ye lo, aaj mera janm din hai aur aaj mere papa ek party de rahe hai, tumhe bhi waha ana hai, aur agar nhi aaye to soch lena...
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Itna bolte ke sath ruchi ka stop aagya aur wo utar kae chali gayi...
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Idhar rohan pahle to shockes ho gya, uske baad jab usse realise hua ki aaj ruchi khud samne se usse baat karne aayi aur apne janm din me bhi sareek hone ko bulayi hai.. Uska man khushi me nachne ko karne laga...
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Sham huyi, Rohan ke ghar me abhi wo poori tarah se taiyaar ho kar ghar se nikalne hi wala tha...
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Riya - bhaiya, kaha ja rhe ho...
Rohan - are, aise agar koi bahar jaye to usse toka nhi karte, kaam kharab ho jata hai
Riya. - ohoo, lagta hai bhabhi laane ja rhe ho, kahi wo wahi ruchi to nhi hai na jiske baare me aao hamesha baat kiya karte the.
Rohan - hann, aur aaj mai usse propose karne ja raha hunn.
Ruchi - wow bhaiya, matlab ruchi meri bhabhi banegi... Wow..
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Uske baad rohan apne ghar se nikal jata hai..
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Party me jahan sab ek se badhkar ek dress pahan kar aaye the wahi abhi abhi hi waha Rohan pahuncha tha... Ek neela shirt aur black full pant me... Pahli baar khud ka silwaya hua kapda pehan raha tha..
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Party me ruchi ne apne sabhi dosto se Rohan ko milbaya...
Rohan ko bhi achha lga.. Whi Rohan ko ek ore side me deepak bhi khada mil gya... Usne deepak se bhi thoda bahut baat ki...
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Janmdin mana lene ke baad saare guest jaa chuke the, ruchi ne filhaal Rohan ko rok rkha tha. Kuchh samay baad jab ghar ke bhi sab log chale gaye to ruchi Rohan ko kheechte huye apne ghar ke bahar lawn me le gyi jaha iss waqt koi nahi tha...
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"To mera birthday gift kaha hai, lao mujhe... Sabne de diya par shirf tum ne hi nhi diya... "
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Ruchi ek serious look dete huye Rohan se poochhi, jise sun kar Rohan ka sar niche jhuk gya, usne sach me kuchh nhi laya tha...
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"Mai to kuchh nhi laya, mera gift udhar rha... Mai kal tumhe birthday gift de dunga.. "
Rohan khud ko samhalte huye kaha...
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"Mai kuchh mangu? "
Ruchi ne Rohan ki ankho me dekhte huye poocha
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"Hmmm, mango" Rohan bhi bas itna hi bol pata.
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I love you, Rohan... Mujhe apni life ko thodi si jagah de do... Mai bhi tumhe school time se hi pyar karne lagi thi, par himmat nhi hoti thi tumse milne ki... Kya tum mera partner banoge... Love partner
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Ruchi, Rohan ke aankho me dekhte huye ye sab bolne lagi ... Jisse sun kar Rohan ki khushi ka koi thikana hi nhi rah tha...
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Rohan ne bhi apna pyar uske saamne rakh diya aur dono ek dusre ke baaho me samate vmchale gaye...
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Inn dono ka pyar din prari din parwan chadhne laga... Din beete aur sath hi sath 3 mahine bhi beet gaye inn teen mahino me jahan, Rohan apni didi ke shadi ke liye jitna ho sakta tha utna mehnat kiya.. Aur uska aur ruchi ka pyar bhi aur parvaan pe chadha...
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Wahin ek shamm, pooja aur riya sham ko ek sath sabji lene karke me pahuchi huyi thi... Jahan iss waqt bahut bheed thi... Ek taraf pooja jiski umra 26 ke lagbhag thi.. Ekdam menka ka roop lagti thi, wohi ek taraf riya jiski umra mahaz 21 varsh hi thi... Sundarta me ye bhi apne maa aur bahan pe gayi thi...
Inn dono ko dekh kar bazar me mauzud har tharki apne aahen bharne lage.
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Wohi ussi baazar me ek sharab ka dukann bhi tha, jisme se daaru pi kar niklne baka aur koi nhi balki deepak hee tha..
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Deepak ki nazar jaise hii pooja pe gayi wo thithak gya, aur sharab ke nasa hone karan aaj usne fir se pooja ko prapose kar diya...
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Pooja ne pahle ki hi tarah usse mana kar diya... Par iss waqt to uske dimag pe Pooja aur sharab ka nasha chhaya hua tha, usne wapas jaa rhi Pooja ki hath ko pakad liya aur bolne laga ki tum shadi nhi kar shakti, mai tumhari shadi nhi hone dungi
Aur bhi bahut kuchh., uske hatho ka grip bahut mazboot tha jiske karan Pooja ko dard hone laga... Abhi deepak aur kuchh kar bhi pata uske pahle hi uske gaal pe ek jhannatedaar tamacha pada jisse uska nasha bhi aadhi niche urmtar chuki thi.
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Ye tamacha riya lagayi thi, deepak ko jisse deepak shant ho gya... Pooja aur riya bhi wapas apnee ghar aagyi...
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Par iss ghatna ne deepak ko aur uksaa diya.... Usne turant apni bullet bike nikali aur chal diya kisi se milne...
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Deepak - dekho, ab mujh se aur intezaar nhi hota hai... Tum kuchh bhi kar ke un dono bahno ko mere farmhause me lekar aajana.... Ab bardaast nhi hota, saali ekdam zahar ban gayi hai... Aur uski chhoti bahan... Wo to ekdam teekhi mirach ban gayi hai...
Suna hai teri dosti achhe se hogyi hai usse, tab to aaraam se hamre changul me wo sab fasenge.
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Unknown - achha, uska to tumm kaam kar doge par mera kya.. Tumhare kahne par mai 3 maheene se iss kaam me laga huaa hunn aur tum to ho jo ki mujh par jara sa bhi dhyan nhi dete...
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Deepak - are darling... Chalo kal tum un dono bahno ko mere farmhause me lekar aao wahi pe unlogo ke saamne pahle tujhe maza dunga, uske baad unlogo ko saza dunga... Sali mujhe
Mana karti hai... Mujhe thappad maarti hai...
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Agla din, jab Rohan ghar se college gaya, to usse college ke gate ke bahar hi ruchi khadi mili, jiska chehra thoda thoda tired lag rha tha...
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Kyu khadi ho, aur ye tumhre chehre pe barah kyun baje huge hai. "
Rohan ne ruchi se poochha..
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" Wo aaj mera sar bhari bhari sa lag rha hai, mai aaj nhi ja paungi ghoomne.. Bas wihi batane aaayi thi... "
Ruchi ne apna sar niche karte huye kaha...
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" Are to isme ghabrene ki kya baat hai, tum aaram karo ham kal chal denge kahi ghhomne... "
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Rohan ki jabab se ruchi muskura di aur jhat se Rohan ko gale laga li...
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Rohan to wapas college chala gya, par ruchi apne ghar jaane ki bajaye... Chal di wapas roahn ki ghar ke taraf..
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Abhi Rohan ke ghar me uski bahne khane ke table par se khana kha kar hi uthe the.
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" Namste didi, namste unty.... Hello riya kaisi ho..."
Ruchi ghar aate ke sath poochhi.
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Are ruchi, tum yahan, apne college nhi gaye...
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Wo didi, aaj hamsab ki planing huyi hai, wo aaj cinemaghar me salman ki ek film lagi hai to wahi dekhne ja rhe hai ham log... Rohan bhi ja rha hai... Ussi ne bulaya hai aap dono ko bhi... Saare ticket kharidne ke baad 2 ticket extra mila tha jise Rohan ne aap dono ko bhi wahan pe bulaya hai.. Ham sav sath me baith kar movie enjoy karenge... Ab aao mana mat kar dena...
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Pooja -Are, mai inn sab cheejo me dhyan nhi deta , mujhe bhi ye sab pasand nhi... Jab tum dono ja hi rhe ho to hamara jana kaha se jaruri ho gya.
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Ruchi - wi sab mai nhi janti hun didi, agar aap nhi jaoge to Rohan mujhse naraz ho jayega usne saaf saaf kaha hai ki aapko lekar hi aana hai...
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Ruchi ki baato ko jyada taalna un dono bahno ko pasand nhi aaya... Aur baat uske bhai ki thi, ussi ne to bulaya tha... Yahi lag rha tha inndono ko...
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Khair ve dono apne ghar se bahar nikal gaye , ruchi iss waqt apne baap ki gaadi ko le aayi thi... Par ruchi ke itna jaldbaaji karne ke karan pooja aur riya ne apni chhoti si bags lejana hi book gayii... Usse dene ke liye rohan ki maa jaise hi ghar se bahar aaye, wo ve teeno bahar nikal chuke the...
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Unke bags me kuchh dawayi thi, jo ki pooja ki thi, usse uski bahut jaruart thi...
Yahi sab sochte huye, rohan ki maa apne ghar me tala lagakar uss gaadi ka peeche tempo me baith kar jaane lagi.
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Gaadi bahut aage thi, lekin fir bhi rohan ki maa aakhir manzil pe pahunch hi gayi, tempo bale ne uss gaadi ko pehchan liya tha, jo iss waqt ek farmhouse ke bahar lagi huyi thi...
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Rohan ki maa bhi filhaal farmhause ke andar hi chal dii....
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Idhar rohan , college me jab se ruchi ne usse bataya tha ki uska tabiyat kharab hai usse tanik bhi achha nhi lag rha tha, jiske karan 2 lecture attend kar ke wo apni cycle se nikal pada ruchi ke ghar... Jaha usse pata chala ki ruchi to subah se hi college ka bol kar ghar se nikal chuki hai.
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Rohan ko hairat huyi ki aakhir ruchi ne usse jhooth kyun bola...
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Khair wo wahan se wapas apne ghar ki ore chal pada, aur ghar pahunchte hi usse ek aur jhatka laga.. Uske ghar ke main gate pe tala laga hua atha... Ab usse kuchh galat hone ki shanka hone lagii.... Wo punah apne college ke taraf nikala... Wahan ja kar pata lagaya ki riya college aayi hai ki nahi... Waha bhi usse nirasha hi haath mila... Yahi sab karte huye dopehar ke 12 baj chuke the... Wo thak haar ke bapas apne ghar ke taraf hi aarha tha ki usse ek ladki dikhi, ye ruchi ki hi dost thi...
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Rohan ko uske throug pata chala ki ruchi kuchh kaam se deepak ke farmhouse me gyi huyi hai...
Rohan ne bhi apni cycle ussi taraf mod liya...
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Usne cycle ko bahar hi rahne diya aur chal diya farmhause ke andar...
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Abhi wo kuchh hi kadam andar gya tha ki usse siskiyo ki aawaj aane lagi..
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Aaaah, aise hi hhaannn.. Aahhh aise hi deepak... Aahha. Ssssssssss..... Aise hi faad daalo meri choot ko... Aaahhh... Hannn..
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Ye aawaje thi ruchi ki, jisse sun kar mere dhadkan maano ruk si gayi... Rohan daudte huye uss aawaj ki disha me gya... Aur wahin khidki ke paas se usse sara scen dikh gya, aur ye scene dekh kar usse ek jordaar jhatka laga... Ruchi pooori nangi, deepap usse ghodi bana kar chod raha tha, aur ruchhi jor jir se siskiya liye jaa thi thi... Abhi Rohan iss ghatna se ubhra hi nhi tha ki usi kaano me ek aur chillane ke aawaj aayi jisse sun kar uske kaan khade ho gye, uski dil ki dhadkan maano ruk si gayi aur uske muhh se achanak hi ek jordaar cheekh nikal gayi..
Riyaaaaaaaaa........
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Aur ye cheekh sunkar deepak aur ruchi ka bhi dhyan Rohan ki taraf ho gya. Jo rohan ko dekhkar muskurane lage...
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Rohan tezi se dauda uss ore jaha se riya ki aawaj aayi thi, ye ussi kamra ke bagal bala kamara tha, jisme deepak aur ruchi lage huye the..
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Rohan ne tezi se uss darwaje ka kamra toda aur andar chal gaya... Andar jane ke baad uski sanse hi halak me atak gayi thi... Anadar uski maa , aur didi ka nagn awastha me lash pada hua tha... Uski chhoti bahan bhi besudh ho chuki jisse ek hatta katta adhed nirdayita purvak balatkaar kar rha tha...
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Rohan ka gusaa achanak bahut badh gya, aur wo wahi pas me ek khanti... ( jis se jameen koda jata hai) uthakar uss aadmi ke peeth me ghoop diyaa... Wo adhed bhi wahinn tapak gayaa... Par ab bahut der ho chuka tha... Kyonki agle hi pal Rohan ke sar pe bhi ek jordaar waar huaa aur wo bhi wahin behosh hi kar gir gya...
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Deepak -Chalo, hogya iska kaam bhi tamam...(apne aadmiyo se) inn sab ki laash ko khayi me fek dena , jab tak mai aur meri darling alna adhura khel poora karlete hain.
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Uske baad wo sab, Rohan , uski maa aur bahno kk laasho ko door kisi pagad se niche gahre khayi me fenk dete hai...
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2 maheene baad...
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Achanak Rohan ki aankhe khulti hai to khud ko ek gufaa me pata hai, usse apne aas paas shirf dhuaa hi dhuaa nazar aarha hota hai. Jab wo dhyan se apne ankho ko chhota kar ke dwkhta hai to ussealne samne ek insaan yagya karta hua dikhta hai... Wo insaan poora nagn awastha me baitha huaa tha, uske bade bade baal, aur ansuljhe dadhi, ye saaf bata rahi thi ki wo bahut varsho se iss jungle ke gufaa me mauzud hai..
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Uske mantra bolne ke tareeke se bhi ye saaf pata chal rha tha ki ye koi tantrik hai, jo ki apni kaali shaktiyo ki pooja kiya karta hai ...
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Kuchh der Rohan gaur se uss tantrik ko dekhta hai, aur jab usse khud ka aur khud ke haalt ka dhyan hota hai, to uske aankho ke saamne fir se wahi sab scene chalne lagta hai jo usne farmhause me dekha tha... Aur achanak wo jor jor se dahade maarkar rone lagta hai..
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"Murkh balak, mujhe pata hai ki tumhare aur tumhre pariwar walo ke sath kitna ghrinit chal khela gaya, tumhare ankhi ke samne tumhari bahan ka balatkaar kiya gya.. Par iss baat ko sochkar rona to kaayro ka kaam hai, mai tumhe issliye yaha nhi laya hun ki tum kayar bano, balki mai tumhe issliye yahan laya hun ki tum badla le sako... Apni bahan ka badla... Apni maa ke uss tadap ka badlaa jiske saath balatkaar kar ke uski nirmamta se hatya kar di gyi... Kya tumhara khoon nhi khaulta hai, kya bas rote rahne se tumhara badla purn ho jayega nhi na... To uske liye tumhe khud wahan jaa kar apna badla lena hoga...
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Tantrik ki baato ne Rohan ke andar jo gusse ki chingaari dhadhak rahi thi usse aur badha diya.. Aur uske andar se dar ko bahar nikaal diya..
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"Aap sahi kah rahe ho baba, mai lunga badla, chun chun kar un sab se badla lungaa jisne meri hasti khelti zindagi ko nark bana diya... Mai uss poore samaz se badla lunga jiss samaj me uss jaise nirmam balatkaari ne janm liya... .. "
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Tantrik - abhi nhi, mai tumhe kuchh shaktiya dunga, tum uske madad se apna badla le sakte ho... Par tumhe, wo shaktiya matra 3 din ke lute hi milegi.. Apna badla lene ke pashchat tumhe wapas yaha aaana hoga aur 20 saal ke liye shaitan ki tapashya karni hogi jisse tum dharti ka sabse shaktishali insaan banjaoge... Uske baad tum poore samaj se badla le paoge... Wo bhi matra chutki bajate hi...
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Rogan - thik hai baba , mai abhi jata hun aaur aaj hi unn Sare darinde ko unka asli sthan... Narak me pahuncha kar aata hunn.
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Tantrik - vijayibhavah putra..
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Fir Rohan wahan se nikal jaata hai...
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2 din baad... Wohi farmhouse, wohi log bas ab game ulta ho chuka tha, Rohan apne shakti ke dam pe deepak, wahan kaam karne waale uske aadmi sab, deepak ka baap, ruchhi ka baap, matlab deepak aur ruchi ke ghar me jitne bhi mard the unsabke pair tod kar farmhouse ke hall me baitha rakha tha, .. Aur deepak ki maa, ruchi ki maa aur ruchi, uski badi bahan, deepak ki chhoti bahan... Sabko janvaro ki tarah chod rha tha... Wahinn saare mard sab bas chilla chilla ke roye ja rhe the.. Aur aurte sab siskiya le rhi thi... Iss kaam me Rohan kaa sath de raha tha tantrik ke hi kuchh log..
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Kuchh samay me un sabko maarkar uss farmhouse me aag laga diya gya aur waha se wapas jangle ki Rohan nikal pada...
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Halato ne Ab rohan ko ek sidha ladka se ek darinda bana diya tha,... Wi bhi ek aisa darinda jo ek tantrik ke baato me aakar 20 sal tak kali shaktiyo ko khush karne ke liye tap karne jaane wala tha...
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Rohan apne aap ko parishtithiyo se ladne ke liya EK BECHARA nhi balki EK DARINDA banana sahi samjha... Par isse janm liya khalnayak....
ROHAN
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Aaj ke liye itna hi. Update pasand aaye to like thok ke jana bhaiyo..

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rohan ki kahani nahi padhi usko padhne ka man hi nahi kiya pata nahi kyu
villain ki entry to baad mai bhi ho sakti thi abhi lala ka parivar hi bahut tha pehle is angle ko suljha lete ab ek sath do angle chalenge to sambhal lena kyunki ek nazuk mod par aa jayegi kahani
ap ise lala ke pariwar ke satth jodne ki koshish karoge par mai ye kahunga lala ke pariwar ko normal hi rehne do pehle jo museebte hai saamne unhe suljhao jaise neha aur kishan ka rishta, kishan ka apne pita ke sath rishta, kishan ka sheetal ke sath rishta , dadi aur dada ka raaz
pehle hi do kanya aa chuki hai phir teesri main character ko add karne ki soch rahe ho is villaine ke jariye to soch samajh kar karna kahi baki writer ki tarah deadlock mai mat phans jana nahi to jaise unki kahani ka hasar hua usi disha mai ye bhi kahani chal padegi

man se likhoo sahi hai par man kuch jyada hi conditions create karte jaa raha hai
kishan ko aadhi takat milne do phir age villain side badhna agar meri bat mano to
kyunki villaine tap chuka hai 20 saal tak tap karke aur main hero abhi tak nalla hi lag raha hai to soch samajh ke chalo mai itna hi kahunga

baki bura mat manna bhai kahani apki hai jaise mod dena chaho apki marzi
mai bas itna soch raha tha ki maine kahaniya bahut padhi hai jinme se 80% adhuri rahi karan ki wo ek sath kai musibto ko age kar dete haii phir suljha nahi pate ya to kahani ko aise mod par chod denge ki kahani adhuri reh jaye ya phir aise mod par lake band kar denge kisi ko bhi wo ant acha na lage jai dr chutiya ne kiya tha shikari ki bimari mai dimag age chala nahi to kahani ko khade mod par band kar diya jisse kai pehlu ban ho gaye
jaise anandsngh12 saand ko adhura chod diya ki ab wo wada to karte hai update denge par 6 mahino se update ka namo nishaan nahi hai aisa lag raha hai jaise wo bhi kisi deadlock mai phas gaye

maine bhi ek kahani shuru ki thi bas ek hi update dia par uske bad kuch nahi kiya kyunki mai nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki umeed badha kar mai unhe beech mai hi chod du
lekhani shuru karni asaan hai par kahani shuru aur dhang se band karna ki apkke virodhi bhi apki tareef karne pe majboor ho jaye ye kam karo
mai ye bilkul bhi nahi chahunga ki ye kahani bich mai hi bandh ho
vaha vo raja chouhan ya kahu engima kahani parsidh hote hi kahani ke portal ko hi paid kar diya unka subscription liya bhi tha kyunki mujh msmt mai kuch apna sa mehsus hota tha par wahi baat unhone bhi kahani ko bina disha ke ghumana chalu kar diya to subscription cancel karwana pada

agar kuch galat kaha ho to sabhi members see maafi chahunga
aur rahul bhai reply edit mat hone dena jaisa xf par kar diya jata tha yaha par maine is forum ka koi rule nahi toda hai dono paritikriyao mai

Aapki baate shat pratishat sahi hai pujari ji... Aap pareshan na ho kahani me villen ka roll filhaal abhi aaya nhi hai, ... Abhi bas uska intro hi karaya hunn Jo ki kahani ke kuchh aage ke update ke liye jaruri bhi tha, ab Rohan ka kirdaar kishan ke family problem khatam hone ke baad hi suru hoga... Aur ek baat... Rohan main villen nhi hai... Hann wo kishan ke saksham hone ke baad, uske takkar ka pahla villen jarur hoga...
Par kishan ke uske gao jane ke baad jab tak uska family problem chalta hai tab tak uski life me bhi chhote mote villen aate rahenge...
Rahi baat aapki ki mai story complete rakhunga ya fir adhikansh writer jaise kahani ko beech majhdaar me hi chhod dunga...
To ishka jabab ab mai kya dun... Bas itna hi kahunga ki bhale hi kabhi kabar update dene me vilambh ho jaye par aisa kabhi nahi hoga ki update aana hi band ho jaye...
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Aur aapki comment se sach me bahut kuchh seekha hunn,
Mai to iss story ko likhne ke pahle ek reader hi tha, aur abhi bhi hun, mai koi writer nhi hunn, ye kahani to bas mere kalpanao ko aap sab ke samne lane ki ek zariya hai. Aur lekhni ke kshetra me naya hone ke karan mujhse galtiya bhi bahut hoti hai, ye baat to aapsab ne notice kiya hoga...
Aur yahi wo karan hai ki mujhe aap jaise mitro ki khash aawashyakta hai samay samay par meri galtiyo ko point out karne ke liye...aur yahi ek vashtavikta bhi hai jisse mai jhuthla nhi sakta hun .
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Baaki dhanyavaad pujari ji...

 

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Padh liya bhai or update sch main acha tha main lagbhag 7 sal se story read kar raha hun kuch hin story hai jo mere dil ke karib hai ab ye story un collection main shamil ho gyi hai. Ek achi story main writter time leta hai but jo output milta hai wo bhut behtreen hota hai
Just example Anand Bhai ki story saand
2nd story Jo complete nhi hui main meri family aur mera gaon 2 ye story ke writter ne jo suspence bnaya tha but bad luck ye story complete nhi hui
Bs logon ka support milta rahega apko ap ek ache writter hai keep it up
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