Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

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Posted dosto... Maafi chahunga late dene ke liye.. Par aap sab ke liye maine aadhi story raat ki jaag kar fir lika... Lagbhad 2000 words starting ke update galti se delete ho gaya tha.
Jis karan update raat ko samay pe nhi de paya... Update padhe aur apne apne revos de..
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Jeewan ka kaha kaisa modh le leta hai koi nahi kaha sakta ek aur kishan jisne khud ki pareewar walo ka tanj saha phir bhi apne rah se nahi bhatka kyuki uske shath uski dadi thi jo use pal pal samjhya karti thi aur utna pyaar diya jiski jarurat kishn ko tha. Par dusri aur rohan samjh me rahne wale kuch logo ne ek uske saath chal kiya apne matab ke liye isteml kiya jiska natija ye hia ki rohan ne pura parivar kho diya. Jab rohan ko shahre ki jarurat tha tab uska samna ek dhirt tantrik se hua jisne use badla ek rah dikhya jo aage jakar smajh ke liye kitna Ghatak sidh hoga kaha nahi ja sakta.

Bhut khoob likh rahe ho :yourock::yourock::yourock:
 
परमकाल का परमभक्त... आशक्त, शशक्त!
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agaaz hua lag raha hai
can't going to say anything from now on to anyone
Bhai, har time nirdharit karna bhi jaruri tha.... Ab beech beech me koi chhota update nhi aayega... Hafte me do update aayege wo bhi 5000 se 6500 words ke beech...
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Aur mujhe update likhne me 3 dino ko jo samay milega uske falswaroop update bhi shandaar aur rochak milenge..
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Sath hi sath time tabale fix ho jane ke baad kahani ki raftar me bhi tezi aayegi..
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Aur ek kaaran ye bhi hai ki mujhe apne pariwar ko samhalne ke liye job bhi to karna hai ... Issiliye 3 din tak thoda thoda update likhunga to chauthe din post bhi kar dunga...
 
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Jeewan ka kaha kaisa modh le leta hai koi nahi kaha sakta ek aur kishan jisne khud ki pareewar walo ka tanj saha phir bhi apne rah se nahi bhatka kyuki uske shath uski dadi thi jo use pal pal samjhya karti thi aur utna pyaar diya jiski jarurat kishn ko tha. Par dusri aur rohan samjh me rahne wale kuch logo ne ek uske saath chal kiya apne matab ke liye isteml kiya jiska natija ye hia ki rohan ne pura parivar kho diya. Jab rohan ko shahre ki jarurat tha tab uska samna ek dhirt tantrik se hua jisne use badla ek rah dikhya jo aage jakar smajh ke liye kitna Ghatak sidh hoga kaha nahi ja sakta.

Bhut khoob likh rahe ho 
Dhanyawaad Destiny bhai sahab... 🙏
 
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Bhai, har time nirdharit karna bhi jaruri tha.... Ab beech beech me koi chhota update nhi aayega... Hafte me do update aayege wo bhi 5000 se 6500 words ke beech...
.
Aur mujhe update likhne me 3 dino ko jo samay milega uske falswaroop update bhi shandaar aur rochak milenge..
.
Sath hi sath time tabale fix ho jane ke baad kahani ki raftar me bhi tezi aayegi..
.
Aur ek kaaran ye bhi hai ki mujhe apne pariwar ko samhalne ke liye job bhi to karna hai ... Issiliye 3 din tak thoda thoda update likhunga to chauthe din post bhi kar dunga...
maine mere 21.5 saal ke jeevan mai ek hi chiz sikhi hai koi bhi chiz nirdharit na karo har chiz ko sambhalo par nirdharit nahi
nirdharit karne se ap us chiz ke sath bandh jate ho. Duniya mai jab kal ke kal mahakaal bhi apne jivan ko nirdharit nahi kar paye to ....
koi nahi ap bhi prayas karke dekh lijiye
par jab bande ayeenge sunday aur wednesday ko tab update na mila aur app bhi update nahi likh sake phir kya hoga ap apne majburiyo se nipt rahe honge aur yaha logo ki aas tut rahi hogi phir phayda kya

mai bas itna kahunga jab bhi man kare tabhi vo kam kardo chahe lekhan ho ya kuch aur hobbie
baki parivar aur job ke liye to samay sabse pehle nikaliyega kyunki ye ek dusri duniya ki tarah to dusri duniya ke liye apni asli duniya ko thens na pahuchayiega

baki ant mai samay bada balwan hai sab sambhalega.....
 
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maine mere 21.5 saal ke jeevan mai ek hi chiz sikhi hai koi bhi chiz nirdharit na karo har chiz ko sambhalo par nirdharit nahi
nirdharit karne se ap us chiz ke sath bandh jate ho. Duniya mai jab kal ke kal mahakaal bhi apne jivan ko nirdharit nahi kar paye to ....
koi nahi ap bhi prayas karke dekh lijiye
par jab bande ayeenge sunday aur wednesday ko tab update na mila aur app bhi update nahi likh sake phir kya hoga ap apne majburiyo se nipt rahe honge aur yaha logo ki aas tut rahi hogi phir phayda kya

mai bas itna kahunga jab bhi man kare tabhi vo kam kardo chahe lekhan ho ya kuch aur hobbie
baki parivar aur job ke liye to samay sabse pehle nikaliyega kyunki ye ek dusri duniya ki tarah to dusri duniya ke liye apni asli duniya ko thens na pahuchayiega

baki ant mai samay bada balwan hai sab sambhalega.....
He mahaprabhu... Mai kasam kha kar kahta hunn pujari ji aapki baate dil ko chhu jaati hai.
Yaar, aapne baat to ekdam kadak satya boli hi, agar mai wed ya sun ko kisi karan update nhi de paya tab readers ko problem hogi ...
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Khair mai koshish karunga ki jaisa aap soch rahe hai waisa na ho...
 
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He mahaprabhu... Mai kasam kha kar kahta hunn pujari ji aapki baate dil ko chhu jaati hai.
Yaar, aapne baat to ekdam kadak satya boli hi, agar mai wed ya sun ko kisi karan update nhi de paya tab readers ko problem hogi ...
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Khair mai koshish karunga ki jaisa aap soch rahe hai waisa na ho...
mai bhi yahi chhunga ki meri soch galat sabit ho
2% cheezo ke liyee hi mai aisa sochta hu
 

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