Thriller KAYAKALP

[Rockstar Rocky]

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

Hum fir job chod de

 

[GhostRider]

Update

 

[Dildar420]

Superb update...

 

[Dildar420]

Waiting for next...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

bole to ekdm gajab. generally hota ye hai ke fata poster nikalaa hero. uske ulaat is story me d'coza ki ankhe khulii aur hatyara uske ankho ke saamne

biwi bache ko jaan se marne ki dhamki dekar nakab pehne wala banda d'coza ko majbur kiya suicide note likhne aor khud ko goli maarne .
lekin hairani ki baat ye he , d'coza ki biwi aur bacha goli chalne ki awaz sunke bhi nind se kyu nahi jage. Kyuki goli chalne ki awaz baht jada loud hoti he.

Ab se nazar ka chashma laga ke story read karna bhai
Story me saaf shabdo me likha gaya hai ki kaale labaade ke hath me jo revolver tha uski naal par silencer laga hua tha aur jab usne disuza ko goli maari to bas "Pitt" ki awaaz huyi thi. Ab kya disuza ki biwi aur beti halki Pitt ki awaaz se jag jaati? Mutth maaro lekin thoda kam maara karo mitra

dusra banda, jisko ladki khud samne keh rahii thi ki meri le lo par usne aise ignore aur neglect kiya jaise karwa karela khane ko keh rahi ho. jiska pet bhara ho wo kya jaane bhukhe pet k dard ko

Agar usne uske dard ki taraf dhyaan diya to uska kalyaan ho jayega bhai. Is liye bande ne samajhdari se kaam liya hai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

So the show begin
Disuza ka kissa khatam hogaya jis tarah se wo shaks Disuza se Baat kar raha tha starting mai usse aisa laga ki wo Disuza ko bohut hi Dard bhari maut dega but usne aisa kuch nahi kiya shayad Disuza ke bete aur uski family ke bare mai sunkar ya Phir usse Disuza ki maut ko sirf suicide dikhana tha isliye usne Disuza ko Pehle itna dara diya ki wo khud apni Jaan lele aur wo letter likhe.

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai. Uska maksad disuza ko khud maarna nahi balki suicide karna hi dikhana tha. Bekaar me police ka lafda use nahi chahiye tha

Viraj ghar der se pahuncha jaha wafa uska Intezar kar rahi thi jaha ek taraf wafa uske liye kuch bhi karne ko tayyar hai wahi viraj ko pata nahi aise konse gham hai ki wo kisi se koi rishta hi nahi rakhna chahta.
Awesome Update Bhai
Waiting for next

Dekho kya hota hai aage. Khair shukriya is sameeksha ke liye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

O bhaishaab
Kya mast likha hai bhai. Mene kaha tha na ye pahle waali se aage jaagi.
Padh ke ye laga mano sab saamne huva ho.
Disuza ki suza di. Uska nicche waala fuse toh pahle hi fuse tha upar wala kalu bhai ne kar diya.
Par ye pura majhra kya hai ye toh aage pata chalega.
Par thriller ka tag sahi lagaya.
Ek dum thrill feel ho raha hai.
Ye ladki sex ke liye bol rahi thi kya?
Aur ye ladke ne kiski kasam kha ke rakhi hai bechari ka dil tode diya.
Par lagta hai kalu aur ladka ek hi hai.
Warna ittni raat ko kya karne gaya tha ye.
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Jo bhi ho ek baat paki hai
Story shandaar hone waali hai
Waiting for next update bhaishaab

Thanks for this beautiful feedback bhai. Sab kuch dheere dheere clear ho jayega. Bas sath bane rahe

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Pahla hi update aur do suspense disuza kaun tha jise us kaale lavade wale shaks ne goli mar diya. Aisa kiya hua tha jis karan kale lawade wale shaksh ne dusuza ko maar diya.

Bahut gahre raj hai guru dimag me khalbali machane wala hai.

Dusara ye ladka kaun hai jiski tadap mitane ke liye ladki karar hone ke bad bhi karar taudne ka apradh kiya. Jo hua vo ek gahre raj ki aur ishara kar raha hai.

Kitna mast ho batli pe batli gatakkar gum ko bhula raha tha kuch pal ki sakun kud ko de raha tha par is wafa ne usmme bhi khalal daal diya para mudde ki bat ye hai ye wafa hai kaun.

Sala total confusion hai phir bhi padhne solid maza aaya.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

Thanks for your beautiful feedback bhai. Is story ka pura maajra tabhi samajh me aayega jab iske pahle part ko read karoge. Is part ki story pahle part ki story ke end se saat saal aage se shuru ki gayi hai. Yaani pahle part ke end ke baad saat saalo me kya hua ye is part me bataya jayega. Saral shabdo me ye ki saat saal me bahut kuch badal gaya hai, thrill suspense aur mystery ko banaye rakhne ke liye kahani ko saat saal aage se start kiya gaya hai. Saat saal pahle kya kya hua ye pahle part me maujood hai aur ab saat saalo me kya kya hua hai ye is part me dikhaya jayega. So, pahle iske first part ko dhyaan se padho

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Okay toh pahle mai usse read karti hun.
Thanks for help

Ju ke review ka intzaar rahega

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Waiting bhai...

Update

Kal time nikaal ke editing karuga bhai, agar complete ho gaya to post kar duga.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Superb update...

Thanks bhai