Thriller KAYAKALP

[TheBlackBlood]

Bhai log apan ne bhi Exclusive Story Contest me ek story post kar diya hai. Dil kare to padh kar apne vichaar chhaap dena..

Story Name:- Dark Matter

 

[Rapchik Rishi]

Bhai log apan ne bhi Exclusive Story Contest me ek story post kar diya hai. Dil kare to padh kar apne vichaar chhaap dena..

Story Name:- Dark Matter

Jarur . noon me free hote hi comment kar dunga bhai.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

ghar ke niv jab baar baar dagmagaye to aisi haalat paida hoti he. ek insaan kadi mehnat se kamaye paiso se jis haweli ko banaya ,usko usi haweli aur property ke lalach me maar diya.pehli baar niv tabhi hili thi . dusri bar niv hili jab ek beta ma baap ko accident kara ke marne ki kosis ki, tisri bar niv hili jab ajay gouri ki ijjat pe daag lagane ki kosish ki, chauthi bar niv hili jab ajay aur uski family ne itna julm kiya ke viraj ko apni family sahit gaon chhod ke jana pada. panchvi baar tab niv hili jab ek hi family me do group ban gaye aur apach mein khuni jung lade, sathi baar niv tab hili jab ajay baghel mara gaya siva jail chala gaya aur pratima haweli chhod ke chali gyi . aur akhir me saatvi baar tab niv hili jab naina baghel ke sath kuch galt hua aur viraj pe dos lagake haweli se nikal dia. us haweli aur waha rehne wale logo ke bich itna kuch ho chuka hai ke abhi jo ho raha hai usme koi hairat ki bat nahi . aur aage bhi hota rahega jab tak wo haweli aur haweli wale log hai. Viraj ,nilam ,ritu , poonam , nidhi bar bar victims bante rahenge.

Thanks for this interesting review. All your points about the story are correct but you also know that this is life. Well abhi to kahani ki bhumika hi ban rahi hai, aage bahut kuch hai. Thanks once again

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Superb update

Thanks bhai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

nahi karna hai shaadi neelam ko, ajeeb jabardasti hai. aur wo log hote kon hai faisla lene wale . uski jindagi hai, jaise jo chahe kare. aur gaon walo ka kya hai. Kuch to log bolenge unka to kaam hai kehna . ab kya neelam ki bhaavnao se jada gaon wale pyare ho gaye hai . akhir ho kya gaya hai abhay gauri karuna aur bakiyo ko, bin ma baap ki bachiyo ke sath itne berahmi se pesh a rahe hai. neelam bechari pyar ki mari ghar chhod ke chali gayi. main laga gauri tou devi hai par yeh to

Story me aur reality me yahi fark hota hai ki har koi apne apne nazariye se uske bare me apne vichaar byakt karta hai. Agar yahi sab real me kisi ke ghar me ghatit ho raha hota tab us ghar wale kaisa react karte? Samaaj ke beech izzat se rahne wala insaan sabse pahle apni aur apne khandaan ki izzat ko hi mahatwa deta hai, fir bhale hi iske liye use wo sab karna pad jaye jise karne ke liye uska dil uska sath na de. Ye kahani bhale hi ek kalpanik katha hai lekin meri koshish yahi hai ki ise aisa likhu ki kahani me ghatne wala har drishya waastavik lage. Baaki rab ki marzi

blackheart bhai kuch jada nahi ho gaya neelam aur ritu ke sath

I'm TheBlackBlood not blackheart
Abhi zyada kaha hua hai bhai, abhi to zyada hone ka bigul Baja hai

(akeli ladki khuli huyi tijori ki tarah hoti hai.eseme neelam akelii kaise rahegi. ek ache sache man ka honhar naujavan ki jarurat hai use sahare ke liye. aakesh se jadaa honhar aur kon ho sakta hai)

Viraj ki bahan ko kamzor samajh rahe ho

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ek dum maste. Bus story read kar raha tha tum bolo

for your review

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Congratulation Shubham ji aur thank you bhie. Ye story humne dusri site par read ki thi. Tab iseka first part likha tha aapne aur second part ab jakar shuru huva hai shayad 2-3 saal hogae.
Par ye jaan kar accha laga ki aapne ye shuru toh ki. Aapki lekhni ki hum fan rahi.

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Finally, something good is going to happen. Waiting for this part from last 2 and half year.

Thanks madam, stay tuned and keep giving your feedback about the story

 

[Rockstar Rocky]

Bhai log apan ne bhi Exclusive Story Contest me ek story post kar diya hai. Dil kare to padh kar apne vichaar chhaap dena..

Story Name:- Dark Matter

ance

 

[Rockstar Rocky]

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

Hum fir job chod de