Thriller KAYAKALP

[Rockstar Rocky]

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

Hum fir job chod de

 

[TheBlackBlood]

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Likhne ka time nahi Mila

 

[TheBlackBlood]

wo bewda kya kar lega

Uski bimaari ke bare me jab jaanoge to aisa bolne se pahle hazaar baar sochoge
Naina madam bataao zara

mere a jane se aur takatwali ban jayegi

Ghanta

 

[Naina]

Uski bimaari ke bare me jab jaanoge to aisa bolne se pahle hazaar baar sochoge
Naina madam bataao zara

Ghanta

Usko aap kahani mein entry kara hi dijiye.... bas shart ye hoga ki viraj ke dusmano ki list mein daal dijiyega uska naam viraj ko aisa lagna chaahiye ki ush disuja ko maarne ke baad ek dusman miss ho gaya jish ka naam aakash hai.. baaki viraj dekh lega kya karna hai uska...

 

[Naina]

wo bewda kya kar lega

Bakra khud kasayi ke paas jaane ke liye uchhal raha hai ...

 

[Naina]

Uski bimaari ke bare me jab jaanoge to aisa bolne se pahle hazaar baar sochoge
Naina madam bataao zara

Ghanta

Btw sach mein lagta hai viraj ke dil mein pehle jo karuna tha dusro ke prati wo kahin kho saa gaya hai..... Kyunki ek baat main puri confidence ke saath keh sakti hoon ki agar ush din ajay ushse ya baaki pariwar se dil se maafi maang leta to shayad maaf to nahi karta lekin thodi bahot hi saza deta..
Lekin 2nd part mein jish viraj ne entry li hai , yeh bilkul alag hai.... uska dard uska gussa ban chuka ban chuka hai....

 

[Aanya]

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Dᴏsᴛᴏ,
Hᴀᴀᴢɪʀ ʜᴜ एक नया संसार ᴋᴀʜᴀɴɪ ᴋᴀ sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ᴘᴀʀᴛ Kᴀʏᴀᴋᴀʟᴘ ʟᴇ ᴋᴀʀ. Hᴀʟᴀᴀᴋɪ ᴋᴜᴄʜ sᴀᴍᴀʏ ᴘᴀʜʟᴇ ᴍᴀɪɴᴇ Kᴀʏᴀᴋᴀʟᴘ ᴋᴏ ʟɪᴋʜɴᴀ sʜᴜʀᴜ ʙʜɪ ᴋᴀʀ ᴅɪʏᴀ ᴛʜᴀ ʟᴇᴋɪɴ ᴋɪsɪ ᴠᴀᴊᴀʜ sᴇ ʙᴇᴇᴄʜ ᴍᴇ ʜɪ ᴋᴀʜᴀɴɪ ᴋᴏ ʀᴏᴋ ᴅᴇɴᴀ ᴘᴀᴅᴀ ᴛʜᴀ. Eᴋ ʟᴀᴍʙᴇ sᴀᴍᴀʏ ᴋᴇ ʙᴀᴀᴅ ᴍᴀɴ ʙᴀɴᴀ ʀᴀʜᴀ ʜᴜ ᴋɪ ɪs 2ɴᴅ ᴘᴀʀᴛ ᴋᴏ ғɪʀ sᴇ sʜᴜʀᴜ ᴋᴀʀᴜ ʟᴇᴋɪɴ ɴᴀʏᴇ ᴛᴀʀᴇᴇᴋᴇ sᴇ.

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Naye readers se bas yahi kahuga ki is kahani ko padhne se pahle iske pahle part एक नया संसार ko zarur padhe kyoki usko read kiye bina 2nd part ki ye story samajh me nahi aayegi.

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Humne pdf dowload karke read karli aapki puri story .

Sabhi readers se mera ye bhi kahna hai ki story padhne ke baad apna feedback zarur dena taaki likhne wale ko achha bhi lage aur likhne ka uska manobal bhi bana rahe. Agar ye story beech me rok di gayi to samajh lena iska jimmedaar writer nahi hoga.

Ju chinta na karo hum humara feedback ju ko jarure denge par ju story rokne ka sochna bhi mat . Fir ju ke saath jo hoga uske jimmedar ju khude honge .

Aisa is liye kyoki har writer apne readers se ye expect karta hai ki jo log uski story read karte hain wo story read karne ke baad story se related apne vichaar bhi byakt kare. Agar aisa nahi hota to writer ko yahi lagta hai ki wo bekaar me hi mehnat kar raha hai, is vajah se wo story beech me hi rok deta hai. ​

Aapki mehnat ko hum bekar nahin jaane denge .

Isi liye kah raha hu ki agar story beech me rok di gayi to uska jimmedaar writer nahi balki readers hi honge.

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Hum apna feedback jarure denge par agar ju ne ek aur baar story rokne ka kaha toh ju apni halate ke jimmedaar khude honge .

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Story thread open kar diya hai. Readers ka response agar achha dikha to story ke update likhna shuru kar duga. Baaki to aap log samajhdaar hain hi.

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Mene bola tha na .

Aaj kal har insaan apni personal life me bahut zyada busy hai. Aise me long story likhna kisi bhi writer ke liye asaan nahi hota. Iske bavjood jab koi writer readers ke manoranjan ke liye story likhta hai to usko dhanyawaad dena chahiye aur uska manobal badhaate rahna chahiye.

Agree with ju

Main ye nahi kahta ki readers writer ko sirf khush karne ke liye hi apna review ya feedback de balki ye kahta hu ki story ke bare me chaahe jis tarah ke khayaal man me aaye use aap apne comments ya review ke dwara byakt kijiye. ​

Update read karne me agar 10 minute ka time lagta hai to 5 minute kharch kar ke apna feedback bhi dijiye.

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Hum 10 min. laga kar ju ko feedback denge .

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Supereb poster and starting by TheBlackBlood .

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Usko aap kahani mein entry kara hi dijiye.... bas shart ye hoga ki viraj ke dusmano ki list mein daal dijiyega uska naam viraj ko aisa lagna chaahiye ki ush disuja ko maarne ke baad ek dusman miss ho gaya jish ka naam aakash hai.. baaki viraj dekh lega kya karna hai uska...

Kahani me entry ki baat kayi baar bol chuke hain bhai sahab, lagta hai entry karani hi padegi ju ke type wali

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Btw sach mein lagta hai viraj ke dil mein pehle jo karuna tha dusro ke prati wo kahin kho saa gaya hai..... Kyunki ek baat main puri confidence ke saath keh sakti hoon ki agar ush din ajay ushse ya baaki pariwar se dil se maafi maang leta to shayad maaf to nahi karta lekin thodi bahot hi saza deta..
Lekin 2nd part mein jish viraj ne entry li hai , yeh bilkul alag hai.... uska dard uska gussa ban chuka ban chuka hai....

Pahle me aur ab me fark bhi to hua hai. Pahle uske upar jo julm huye aur jo kuch usne kiya wo hak ke liye normal haalat me Kiya tha lekin aaj jo situation hai wo alag hai. Aaj wo normal hai hi nahi to bhala usse kisi normal kaam ki ummid bhi kaise ki ja sakti hai??

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Humne pdf dowload karke read karli aapki puri story .

Ju chinta na karo hum humara feedback ju ko jarure denge par ju story rokne ka sochna bhi mat . Fir ju ke saath jo hoga uske jimmedar ju khude honge .

Aapki mehnat ko hum bekar nahin jaane denge .

Hum apna feedback jarure denge par agar ju ne ek aur baar story rokne ka kaha toh ju apni halate ke jimmedaar khude honge .

Mene bola tha na .

Agree with ju



Hum 10 min. laga kar ju ko feedback denge .

Supereb poster and starting by TheBlackBlood .

Shukriya
10 minute laga kar diye jane wale feedback ka intzaar rahega

 

[Aakash Meena]

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