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:hello1:Dᴏsᴛᴏ, :wave2:

Hᴀᴀᴢɪʀ ʜᴜ एक नया संसार ᴋᴀʜᴀɴɪ ᴋᴀ sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ᴘᴀʀᴛ Kᴀʏᴀᴋᴀʟᴘ ʟᴇ ᴋᴀʀ. Hᴀʟᴀᴀᴋɪ ᴋᴜᴄʜ sᴀᴍᴀʏ ᴘᴀʜʟᴇ ᴍᴀɪɴᴇ Kᴀʏᴀᴋᴀʟᴘ ᴋᴏ ʟɪᴋʜɴᴀ sʜᴜʀᴜ ʙʜɪ ᴋᴀʀ ᴅɪʏᴀ ᴛʜᴀ ʟᴇᴋɪɴ ᴋɪsɪ ᴠᴀᴊᴀʜ sᴇ ʙᴇᴇᴄʜ ᴍᴇ ʜɪ ᴋᴀʜᴀɴɪ ᴋᴏ ʀᴏᴋ ᴅᴇɴᴀ ᴘᴀᴅᴀ ᴛʜᴀ. Eᴋ ʟᴀᴍʙᴇ sᴀᴍᴀʏ ᴋᴇ ʙᴀᴀᴅ ᴍᴀɴ ʙᴀɴᴀ ʀᴀʜᴀ ʜᴜ ᴋɪ ɪs 2ɴᴅ ᴘᴀʀᴛ ᴋᴏ ғɪʀ sᴇ sʜᴜʀᴜ ᴋᴀʀᴜ ʟᴇᴋɪɴ ɴᴀʏᴇ ᴛᴀʀᴇᴇᴋᴇ sᴇ. :declare:

Naye readers se bas yahi kahuga ki is kahani ko padhne se pahle iske pahle part एक नया संसार ko zarur padhe kyoki usko read kiye bina 2nd part ki ye story samajh me nahi aayegi. :noo:

Sabhi readers se mera ye bhi kahna hai ki story padhne ke baad apna feedback zarur dena taaki likhne wale ko achha bhi lage aur likhne ka uska manobal bhi bana rahe. Agar ye story beech me rok di gayi to samajh lena iska jimmedaar writer nahi hoga. Aisa is liye kyoki har writer apne readers se ye expect karta hai ki jo log uski story read karte hain wo story read karne ke baad story se related apne vichaar bhi byakt kare. Agar aisa nahi hota to writer ko yahi lagta hai ki wo bekaar me hi mehnat kar raha hai, is vajah se wo story beech me hi rok deta hai. Isi liye kah raha hu ki agar story beech me rok di gayi to uska jimmedaar writer nahi balki readers hi honge. :declare:



Story thread open kar diya hai. Readers ka response agar achha dikha to story ke update likhna shuru kar duga. Baaki to aap log samajhdaar hain hi. :D

Aaj kal har insaan apni personal life me bahut zyada busy hai. Aise me long story likhna kisi bhi writer ke liye asaan nahi hota. Iske bavjood jab koi writer readers ke manoranjan ke liye story likhta hai to usko dhanyawaad dena chahiye aur uska manobal badhaate rahna chahiye. Main ye nahi kahta ki readers writer ko sirf khush karne ke liye hi apna review ya feedback de balki ye kahta hu ki story ke bare me chaahe jis tarah ke khayaal man me aaye use aap apne comments ya review ke dwara byakt kijiye. Update read karne me agar 10 minute ka time lagta hai to 5 minute kharch kar ke apna feedback bhi dijiye. :love:
:thankyou:

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Kyun bhool gaye kya aap.. hum kuch hi readers the... haalanki aur bhi readers aaye the lekin jab dekha ki prefix thriller hai to weh log ulte paao hi laut gaye... :D
Ab log bevkhufi kare to koi kya kar sakta hai? Logo ko sochna chahiye ki jab is story ka first part incest prefix par tha aur story bhi incest hi thi to 2nd part me kuch aur kaise ho jayega? Thriller prefix is liye rakha kyoki isme sab kuch aa jata hai. Kahani aur characters wahi hain jo ek naya sansaar me the is liye wo sab bhi hoga jiski log expectation rakhte hain lekin wo sab thrill suspense ke sath hoga. :declare:
 

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