Thriller KAYAKALP

[Rockstar Rocky]

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

Hum fir job chod de

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ek I'd se 15 -15 stories pe ek din mein long revos dene padte the.warna writers bura maan jaate the.... ish hi pasine nikal jaate the aur aap keh rahe ki iske baad alias id se stories bhi likhu aur alag se revos bhi.....

Yaha ju ke kitne alias hain waise

 

[Naina]

Yaha ju ke kitne alias hain waise

ek hai .... Nandini...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

ek hai .... Nandini...

Isi se pahle mulaqaat huyi thi

 

[Naina]

Isi se pahle mulaqaat huyi thi

 

[TheBlackBlood]

ap horror stories bhi likhte hai.
Plot kafi badhiya tha. { kya nitin ka marna jaruri tha? }

Horror prefix par abhi maine koi story nahi likhi hai. Waise horror story ka ek plot zahen me to hai lekin time nahi hai likhne ka. Filhaal to yahi koshish hai ki jo incomplete stories hain unhe complete Karu. Baaki dekhte hain future me kya hota hai

Ji haan nitin ka marna zaruri tha warna paranormal activity ka matlab hi kya rah jata. Story ke anusaar wo bhootni ek aisi ladki thi jo nitin jaise ladko ka shikaar karti thi. Pichhle ek mahine se nitin uske prabhaav me tha, zaahir hai uska marna to pahle hi Tay ho chuka tha. Bachne ka jo chance bana tha use usne khud hi gawa diya tha.

 

[Naina]

Isi se pahle mulaqaat huyi thi

waise yaad hai .....2020 contest mein aapne ritu aur viraj ko leke ek short story post karne par readers naraz ho gaye the aap par... us waqt main bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki aapne aisa kyun kiya.... Kyunki second part mein kirdaaro ki life kaafi pechida hone wala tha ... kayi raaz gehraayio mein chupe shuruwaat se hi....lekin usko ritu aur viraj ki love story bana ke post kar diya tha us waqt

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Sabhi ki dil me raj yani viraj ke liye ek alag hi ahashas panpa hua hai maa jo us par jaan chikdta tha vo usse iss kadar nafrat karne lagi hai ki uska chehra nehi dekhna chata. Ritu. Neelam nishi sonam sabhi raj se bepanha pyaar karne lagi hai koyi apne jajbato ko baya kar rahi hai to vahi nidhi natkhat aur chulbuli sabhav wali ladki ekaek gumsum si ho gayi hai.

Aisa kiya hua tha jisse karn viraj ko mahal hi nehi sibhi ke life se alag thalag kar diya gaya.

Neelam ka kahna ek najriya se sahi hai sabhi apne bare me soch rahe hai to vo kyu na soche to neelam ne khud ke bare me socha aur sabhi se chupkar ritu ki help se mumbai ja rahi hai. Dekhte hai aage kiya hota.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

Shukriya bhai is khubsurat sameeksha ke liye
Ye story pahle part wali story ke saat saal aage se shuru ki gayi hai. Matlab saal baad ka drishya chal raha hai lekin in saat saalo me aisa kya hua hai jo present me ye sab dikh raha hai yahi ek dilchaspi se bhara suspense hain. Khair jald hi kuch cheezo ka khulasa hoga.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Sabhi behne hi viraj ko chahti hai aur in sab ko pata hai ki viraj unka nahi hoga but ye teen neelam gudiya aur riya shayad hi kabhi kisi aor se shadi kare.
Neelam and riya to shadi karna bhi nahi chahti viraj se kyunki unko pata hai wo possible nahi hai but wo kisi aur se bhi shadi nahi karna chahti to aise mai inka future kya hoga.

Very point and very good question
Bro, ye question mere zahen me tab se maujood hai jab maine ek naya sansaar likha tha aur yakeen maano iska jawaab bhi hai zahen me lekin bata nahi sakta kyoki suspense aur curiosity dono hi khatm ho jaayengi.
Waise jab kahi bhi is tarah ke sawaal khade hote hain to unka jawaab bhi samdhaan ke roop me dhoondhna padta hai. Maine samadhaan khoja to hai lekin wo readers ke nazariye se kitna sahi aur uchit honge ye to waqt hi batayega ya fir aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki mere readers bhai hi koi gazab ka samadhaan mujhe bata de. Yaani main bhi intzaar karuga aise kisi samadhaan ka

Gauri jo shayad viraj se sabse zyada pyaar karti thi aaj wahi uska Naam tak lena nahi chahti kya ek baar bhi gauri ne viraj ke barey mai nahi soncha hoga? Kya ek baar bhi gauri ki dimag mai ye baat nahi ayi hogi ki uska beta kabhi galat nahi karta? Ya Phir gauri kisi majburi ke karan viraj se Nafrat kar rahi hai? Kya Koi aisi wajah bhi hai ki wo

Is bare me itna hi kahuga ki bewajah kuch nahi hota.

Gudiya ka kya hoga wo kab tak aise hi zinda lash ki tarah rahegi?
Sawal to bohut hai jo shayad agey hume pata lage.
Ab agey kahani kis aur mod leti hai dekhna dilchasp hoga.

Sach kahu to is part ko jayaz aur perfect roop se likhna mere liye bahut badi chunauti hai. Aisa is liye ki har kirdaar ke sath nyaay karna hoga sath hi waqt aur halaat ko dekh kar sabhi kirdaaro ke bare me sochna bhi hoga. Sabse badi baat ye bhi dhyaan me rakhni hogi ki desh aur samaaj me kya except kiya jaayega aur kya nahi. Aap samajh sakte ho ki in saari baato ko dhyaan me rakh kar kahani likhna mere liye kitna mushkil kaam hoga aur upar se job ki wajah se time bhi nahi hai likhne ka. Khair dekhte hain kya hota hai.

Shukriya is Khubsurat sameeksha ke liye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

1 number story hain bhai. 1st part padha huwa hain mera sach mein jaandaar story hain

Shukriya bhai,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

waise yaad hai .....2020 contest mein aapne ritu aur viraj ko leke ek short story post karne par readers naraz ho gaye the aap par... us waqt main bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki aapne aisa kyun kiya.... Kyunki second part mein kirdaaro ki life kaafi pechida hone wala tha ... kayi raaz gehraayio mein chupe shuruwaat se hi....lekin usko ritu aur viraj ki love story bana ke post kar diya tha us waqt

Yaar wo bas ek story thi, ek trial tha ye dekhne ke liye ki agar aisa ho to readers ki kya pratikriya hogi. Baaki maine bataya bhi tha uska real story se koi taalluk nahi hai.