Thriller KAYAKALP

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Update de dijiye
Kaam me bahut zyada busy hu madam, is vajah se likhne ka time nahi mil raha. Idhar ke 3no update 2.6 saal pahle hi likh ke post kar diya tha to unki roman me convert kar ke post kar diya hai yaha. Ab new update likhne ka time nahi hai. Koshish kar raha hu ki thoda thoda kar ke update complete Karu aur fir post kar du. Well sorry for delay :sigh:
 
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Noi noi mai inna samjh gawa hun ki ju ki kutai na pakka hoti hai wo bhabhi ji haton se to ju sabko apni tarah musibat ka mara samjh lete ho :D
Aree bhai abhi apan single hi hai, tabhi to :shag: ke kaam chalana padta hai :D
Ju ki tarah jab mingle ho jayege to apan ka bhi ju ki tarah hi haal hoga, saala biwi ke aage har soorma murga ban jata hai :lol1:
 
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Aree bhai abhi apan single hi hai, tabhi to :shag: ke kaam chalana padta hai :D
Ju ki tarah jab mingle ho jayege to apan ka bhi ju ki tarah hi haal hoga, saala biwi ke aage har soorma murga ban jata hai :lol1:
wo kahawat hai ki bakra kab tak khair manayega baki ju samjhdaar ho :D
 
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Fabulous update.
Kya neelam ko aese akele jane dena sahi tha?
Situation ke anusaar jo uske liye sahi laga ritu ne wahi kiya lekin wo bhi jaanti thi ki aisa karna sahi nahi tha. Rahi baat akele jane dene ki to aisa pahli baar nahi hua hai ki neelam akele baahar gayi ho. Agar aapne iska pahla part ek naya sansaar padha hai to aapko bhi pata hoga ki neelam mumbai me apni mausi Poonam ke paas rah hi apni study kar rahi thi aur current me bhi wo wahi rah rahi hai.
maya , arjun aur ajeet teeno manjhe huye khilaadi hai apne apne fied me. Maya ek safal business woman hai vohi arjun aur ajeet me burai , lalach ka dusra roop hai. ajeet ka ek sapna hai. kaise bhi karke singhania ki ek loti beti maya ko apne ghar ki bahu banake Sare business empire ko apne aur apne bete ke naam kiya jaye. jahir si baat hai is sazis me uske bete ka bhi hath hai. arjun lagatar kosish kar raha hai ke kuch bhi karke maya ko impress ho jaye. lekin maya itni asani se unke sazis me nahi fansne wali. usko na to pyar mohabbat me koi interest hai aur na hi shadi jaise riste me bandhne ki..dekhna ye hai ke maya kaise arjun aur ajeet ki sazis se khud ko bachati hai.
Duniya me tarah tarah ke log hain madam. Kuch log apni mehnat ka khana pasand karte hain aur kuch log ajeet aur Arjun ki tarah doosre ki dhan daulat ko hadap lene ki soch rakhte hain. Khair ye dono apne mansubo me kamyaab honge ki nahi ye to waqt hi batayega. Filhaal next update me pata chal jaayega ki in dono ke liye apne mansube ko pura karna easy hoga ya difficult. :D
us ladke flashback bahut dardnaak tha. par abhi wafa ki halat dekh dukh ho rahi hai. us ladke sath jo kuch bhi hua uske dusman ne kiya. isme wafa ki kya galti. wafa ke sath aisa saluk kyun kar rha hai. ajj ke jamane me itna kuch dusro ke liye bhala koun karta hai. kitna chahti hai wo use.kya wafa ankho me vo chahat dikhai nhi deta use . itna sakht mizaaj hoke wo ladka khud ke dil ko dard de raha hai. maya, singhania, ajeet aur arjun ko chhodke baki sabhi ke dil me bas dard hi dard chupa hai. 😔
Sahi kaha, wafa ka koi kasoor nahi hai lekin wo shakhs bhi apni jagah sahi hai. Uske sath aisa kuch ho chuka hai ki wo is tarah patthar ka ban gaya hai. Doosri bhi ek vajah hai jiska pata aage chalega. Khair shukriya is Khubsurat sameeksha ke liye :hug2:
 
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maya ka story par ana dhamakedar tha. had se jyada attitude ,
kafi khatarnak aur gusse wali ladki bhi hai, brain with beauty dangerous combination.
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mujhe nahi lagta ke itni easily arjun sahaay usko pata payega. jhanse me lene ke chakkar me kahi toufe me thappad na mil jaye arjun ko. aur arjun me dhariya naam ki koi chij nahi hai. usko jo pasand aa jaye use jalbaji me hasil karna jyada pasand hai use. par maya ke matter me aisa karne gaya to muk ki khani padegi usko. ajeet ko bhi yahi dar tha . isliye usko samjha raha tha ke jo bhi kare soch samjh kar kare .
Aisi ladki ko apne jaal me fansana aag me ungli ghused dene jaisa hai aur ye baat Arjun ka baap Ajeet achhi tarah jaanta hai isi liye to wo apne bete ko itna samjha raha tha. Khair dekho aage kya hota hai. :D
wafa ek naik dil ladki hai. aur use us saksh se pyar hai,ye bhi sach hai . wafa ke dil me jo daya thi woh pyar me badal gaya. par ajib kasmakas ki halaat thi. Kyuki us saksh ke sath jo hua tha iske karan use aurat jaat se sakht nafrat ho gayi thi. ab wo saksh wafa kya kisise bhi pyar nahi karne wala tha .
Wafa us shakhs ko bahut pahle se jaanti hai aur use pasand bhi karti thi. Zara socho agar wo use na jaanti to wo kaise use apne ghar le aati aur kaise wo uske liye itna kuch karti? Khair is bare me aage pata chalega. :smoking:

Shukriya bhai is khubsurat sameeksha ke liye :hug2:
 
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1) ab jab my favorite pratima ji kahin chali gayi hai ....isi wajah se ab se meri favorite one hogi great Maya :dwarf: coz mujhe aise hi kirdaar zyada pasand hai.... jo kiski naa sune bas apni mann marzi chaalaye :dwarf: :D
Pahle naina, fir ritu, fir pratima aur ab maya. Kahi to ruko. Party badal rahi ju :D
2) saral aur nirmal mann ka ladki maya.....pyari bholi bhali masoom ladki maya...swabhimaani aur dariya dili ka dusra roop hai maya ji ...shadgi aur simplicity ki paribhasha hai maya ji ... family aur dosto ke liye jaan bhi kurbaan karne wali Maya ji.....mamta may, samajhdaar, sanskari guno se paripoorn Maya ji .....sabko ek nazar se bina bhed bhav ke dekhne wali Maya ji... talented hai par koi ghamand nahi, na koi abhiman.. ye hai humari no 1 story innocent character Maya ji .....komal mann aur dayalu Maya ji ....smart , padhayi mein abbal aur business mein topper hai Maya ji...

3) ab itne guno wali humari bholi bhali Maya pe kuch kamino ki buri nazar lage... isko katayi bardaasht ki nahi jaayegi :dwarf: sabko saza milegi baari baari :dwarf:
Isse achhi tareef nahi ho sakti madam maya ki :D
Sadak ke dhave pe cup plate dhone wale arjun aur ajeet ki mazal ki The great Maya ko leke sadyantra kare... aisi chaal chale . .... milegi.... barobar saza milegi :dwarf: Viraj :help2: zara jaake dekho to aakhir matter kya hai.... agar lage ki mamla kuch bhi gadbadi ki hai to disuja ke sathi samajh ke ush cup plate dhone wale arjun aur ajeet ko aisi ki taisi kar dena :chop:
Saza maya hi de to behtar hai. Viraj ko kyo bulaya jaye dusre ke lafde me? :D
4) mujhe ek samajh nahi aa rahi hai.... Ki wafa kyun.... aakhir kyun ghuse chali aa rahi hai viraj ki life mein..... maana ki jaan bachayi hai.... iska ye matlab hargiz nahi hua ki wo uske jindagi pe hak jamane lag jaaye.... Coz meri nazar is kayakalp Kahani mein Viraj ki heroine sirf aur sirf Maya hi banegi..... aur aakhiri baat bhi yahin hai.....Viraj aur Maya ki jodi, rab ne mila di jodi hai....
Wafa ka story me important role hai naina se bhi zyada :D
Ye aaj ki jaan pahchaan nahi hai, barsho puraani hai. Aage pata chalega :declare:
5) viraj ke atit mein zaroor abhay aur karuna, ush disuja aur uske sathio ke dwaara viraj ke kuch karke marne ke liye chhod diya hoga.... aur jaha tak andaza hai.... Jab viraj haweli chhod ke jaa raha tha uske turant baad hi uspe ye attack kiya gaya tha...phir jakhmi haalat mein wafa ko mili....
Abhay- karuna ....are dhitkaar hai just logis ki jindagi pe... kitna kuch nahi kiya viraj ne.... aur uska ye sila diya usko.....
Asaliyat kya hai ye abhi andhere me hain. Kya hua tha aur kaise hua tha ye mujhe hi nahi pata to ju ko kaise pata ho jaayega :lol:
6 ) sochne wali baat ye hai ki wafa kahe itna kuch kar rahi hai uske liye..... to saare muddo pe gaur kare to yahin natiza nikalta hai ki Wafa akeli ladki hai.... ab handsome viraj ko dekh uska mann dol gaya hoga aur sochi hogi ki isko life partner bana liya to life jinga la la... isiliye ush ke piche padi hai hath dhoke :D....
Ghanta :fuck:
Aur aakhir mein yahin kahungi ki The great Maya ko jald se jald viraj ki khoj nikal jana chaahiye :girl-run:
Maya ki aisi ki taisi :D
Shaandaar kahani, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan sath dilchasp kirdaaron ki bhumika bhi dekhne ko mili hai...

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :clapping: :clapping:
Shukriya is Khubsurat sameeksha aur funny pratikriya ke liye :hug2:
 

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