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[Destiny]

[H1]~Preem milan~[/H1]
Rahul aaj apne ghar me udash sa baitha hua tha kya nahi tha uske pass uncha ohda rupya paisa naukar chakar aur bahut bada bangla sabkuch tha lekin fir bhi udash baitha tha wo kyu ish ko samjhne ke liye hamko uske piche samai Jo hua un ghatnaon ko samjhna hoga.
To kahani ki suruaat hoti hai Raaj Jo ek safal businessman tha aur unki chulbuli sararati wife Dr.Naina ji aur in dono ke pyaar ki nishani Rahul unka pyara beta jishme un dono ki jaan basti thi.lekin Rahul bachpan se bahut sararati tha itna sararati tha ki Jo bhi milta so uski naak me dam kar deta tha ye dekhkar Raaj ko kabhi kabhi bahut gussa aata tha lekin Rahul ki mom ko usse bada masoom duniya me nai dikhta tha aur Raaj waise to bahut gusse wale the lekin apni biwi ke aage unki kuch nai chalti thi to ishiliye Rahul bahut jiddi aur bilkul careless tipe ka banda ban gaya tha..Rahul jab college me pahuncha to wahan wo pahli baar kisi ke preem jaal me fans gaya Jo ek bahut hi bholi pyari masoom ek minute yahan masoom ka matlab wo sach wala masoom hai okay..to us ladki ka naam tha Mahi jiske pyaar me Rahul fans gaya aur bahut kosish ke baad Mahi ko bhi usse pyaar ho gaya dono sath rahte ghumte firte enjoy karte (enjoy ko sex na samjhna) Mahi aur Rahul ki pyaar ki bhanak ek din story ke khalnayak yani ki Raaj ji tak pahunch gayi to ek din wo khud mahi ke ghar jakar usse mile.. Mahi ke mata pita hairaan the ki itna bada aadmi unke yahan aaya hai..khair Raaj achcha insaan tha sabse pyaar se mila aur usne Mahi se Kahan ki Rahul ki sonch aur Zindagi jine ka Jo tarika usse undono aage jakar bahut problem hogi life me kyuki Rahul jimmedar nahi hai aur isks piche uski ma ka hath hai mai chahta hun tum meri madad karo aur Rahul ko jindgi me jimmedar insaan banane me meri taki tum dono baad me khus raho..mahi me puncha kya karna hoga to unhone kaha ki tum Rahul ko chhod do ye bolkar ki tumhari khud ki koi pahchan nai hai ishiliye mai tumhare sath nai rah sakti hum dono ke rashte alag hain..iske baad wo chale gaye to mahi ke maa baap ne bhi wahi kaha usko ki Raaj ji bilkul sahi baat bolkar gaye hain jaisa unhone bola hai waisa karo..mahi ka dil nai maan raha tha lekin do botal vodka pikar usne Rahul ka dil tod diya bahut buri tarah se.. breakup ke baad Rahul bilkul bikhar sa gaya usko uski mom ne badi muskil se samhala usko bolkar ki kahe pareshan hota hai mai tere liye line laga dungi tension mat lo lekin Rahul ko baat dil me lag gayi thi usko kaamyaab banna tha har haal me..

Rahul ne dhere dhere khud ko badalna suru kiya aur wo kamyaab raha aur apni ma ki tarah wo bhi doctor bankar kuch din baad baad papa ka business join kar liya kyuki uske papa ka business bahut bada tha aur wo eklauta tha to ushi ko dekhna tha..7 shaal bahut hota hai duniya badal jati hai log badal jate hain Rahul ki kismat bhi badal gayi thi lekin insaan ki fitrat hai Jo hota hai uska sukh kam Jo nahi hota hai uska gum Jada hota hai to ishiliye aaj Rahul udas tha use wo gujre hue lamhe yaad aa rahe tha waise wo apni life me aage badh chuka tha lekin idhar kuch din se uske papa uski shadi ke liye usko bol rahe the ki ab waqt aa gaya koi ladki ho tumhari nazar me to bata do nahi to hum hi dhunte hain kisi ko.. Rahul ko fir kisi se pyaar na hua dobara wo aaj bhi us gum ko bhula nai tha usko kisi ladki par yakin nai tha.. Rahul ne bol diya usko shadi nai karni kisi se to Raaj ne kaha ek ladki hai meri nazar me usse mil lo ek baar aur aaj wo ladki milne aa rahi thi aur idhar ye Rahul udas ho gaya tha purani baten sonchkar wo apna gujra hua Kal bhul nai pa raha tha.kuch der me uske papa ki aur mom aur mom uske pass aaye aur bole taiyaar ho jao hum ladki ke ghar chal rahe hain..Rahul ko lekar wo log chal diye aur Rahul apni sonch me gum tha kuch der baad Rahul ko wo rashta kuch Jana pahchana laga kyuki ye rashta to mahi ke ghar jata tha aur had to tab ho gayi jab wo log mahi ke ghar ke aage ruke Jo aaj bahut saja dhaja hua tha..Rahul ne puncha yahan kyu aaye hum log to uske papa ne bola aaj mahi ki sagai hai jisko sun Kar Rahul ko mare gussa aur dukh ke pareshan ho gaya

Rahul jab kafi samjhane ke baad Mahi ke ghar ke andar gaya Jahan mahi ke papa bahut pyaar se mile aur sabko unhone chai nasta karaya uske baad mahi ko bulaya gaya to pata chali ki emergency case aa gaya hai ishiliye mahi ko Jana pada hai kyuki mahi ka koi dost hai jisko koi problem hui hai to usko Jana pada achanak se..ye sunkar Rahul hairaan ho gaya ki mahi bhi doctor ban gayi thi filhaal sab intzaar karte rahe aur mehmaan log sab kha pikar chale gaye dhire dhire han ek baat notice ki Rahul ne ki wo ladka na mila usko jiski mahi ke sath sagai honi thi aaj..fir wo log bhi ghar aa gaye kyuki mahi lo pata nai kitna time lagna tha

Ghar aakar Rahul apne dad se lad gaya ki usko wahan lekar kyu gaye the to Naina ne usko bataya ki jis ladke ke sath mahi ki sagai honi thi wo aur koi nai tum ho to Rahul ne kaha ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai tab Raaj ne usse mafi mangte hue usko Puri baat batai.. unhone bataya ki mahi ne kaha ki Rahul kuch bane na bane to bhi wo Rahul ke sath rahegi Han wo khud ko is qabil banayegi ki agar Rahul jindgi me nakaamyaab bhi hua to wo samhaal legi sab akele hi har haal me usko Rahul ka sath chahiye..To uske papa ne usko Naina ko hawale Kar diya Jo uspar bahut gussa thi lekin Puri baat samjhkar unhone uski help ki aur doctor ban gayi to ab wo dono hi Life me safal the to ab uski shadi fix ki gayi thi..ye sab Rahul pareshan ho gaya mahi se Milne ke liye

Dusre din Rahul jakar mahi se mila sare gile sikwe door hue dono ke fir dhum dhaam se shadi ho gayi dono ki jish me Rahul ka khas dost ladkiyon ke sath nach ga raha tha aur gana tha ye wala...


Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Kalle ka khot koi na
Gella mere yaar kameene gella mere yaar kameene
Yaari ki kasam khavan ke
Pad gaye manne peg ye peene pad gaye manne peg ye peene
Bottle meri....bottle meri.......
Reh ri aadhi isne koyi khoso na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Banda main gental mental ho gaya pee ke angreji
Handle karni situation ghar kya ke shaami peshi
Arrey koyi na kar lenge handle
Aaj jee lo pee lo khul ke koi bhadak nai leni
Saare nacho khul ke DJ aaj poori raat baajan de beat
Jo roke saala uske maaro Itt
Repeat chala de gaane gel se mere saare yaar purane
Bhool ke zindagi ke roule saare bolo bam bam bhole
Om namah shivay
Sunn re bhai DJ aale
Laade tagda sa gaana laade tagda sa gaana
Baajan de yaar purane
Yaara ne dhumma thaana yaara ne dhumma thaana
Pal pal manne pal pal manne jeena
Aaj mere sir pe koyi bhoko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Khatri ki beats re
Arrey baajan de ne yaar khatri

Dosta is rachna me racha gaya ek ek shavd dil se jodkar likha gaya. Rahul ek laparvaha ladka hai jise is baat ki parvaha nehi vo future me kya karga par baap ko fikar tha. Kahi na kahi bache ke bigdne me haath ma bap ka jayada hota ho ma ke pyaar se rahul bigad gaya. Aur mahi ke pyaar ne use ek kamiyab insan bana diya.

Rahul ko yahan tak pahuchne me jitna haath raj ka tha use kahi jayada tayag mahi ne kiya. Mahi ko kaha kisi bhi haal me apna pyaar pana hi tha. Chahe rahul kabil inshan ban paye ya na ban paye usse mahi ko koyi lena dena nehi.

Ant me dono ka milan hua rahul ko sach bata diya gaya ki mahi ne uske saath aisa kyu kiya tha. Aant wala gaana udenge noot gulabi... Bahut mast tha.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

 

[Aakash Meena]

Humari adhuri prem kahanee

Pyaar vo ehasaas hai, jo har kisee ko nahin hota. Ehasaas hi kyu ehasaaso ki ek khubshurate kahani hai. Par ye ehasaas sab ko nahin hota ya u kahu ki sab ke nasseb mai nahin hota.​

Pyaar vo samundar hai... jesme doob jaane ka mann karta hai. Pyaar vo manate hai jese har dil mangna ta hai. Par puri sirf kuch nasheeb walo ki hoti hai. Pyaar karna toh aasan hai par usse nibha pana muskil aur usse bhi muskil hai pyaar ka kamyab hona.
Par ye toh sach hai pyaar ehasaaso ki ek adhbhute kahani hai.
Yahee ek ehasaas main aapako bataana chaahata hoon...usse ehasaas se aap sabko bhi rubaru karana chahta hu.

Shaam ka samay tha .... aur main apane dost Anuj ka intajaar kar raha tha.
Steshan ke baahar... hamalog ka baahar kahee ghoomane jaane ka plaan tha aur main jaldee pahunch gaya tha...iska karan ye tha ki mujhe travel karna bhoute pasand hai. Alag alag jagah jaana logo se milna aur dosto ke saath waqt guzarna.
Mujhe ye sab pasand tha iss liye mai waqt se pahle hi steshan aa gaya. Mai waha pahoch toh gaya tha par kuchh samajh nahee aa raha tha kee main kya karoon. Kyuki abhi tak koe dost aaya hi nahin.
Kuchh der idhar udhar ghumne ke baade main steshan ke paas ja ke baith gaya. Mainee ek taraf apna bag rakha aur phire mai apna phone chalane lag gaya, kyuki aur kuch karne ko tha nahin.
Mai apna phone dekh raha tha par, tabhee kuchh aisa hua ki meree jindagee ek alag mod lene vaalee thee.

Steshan kee taraph main dekh raha tha kee mera dost aaya kee nahin tabhee achaanak se meree nazar ek ladakee par padee.
Vo jo vaqt tha main pooree tarah kuchh der ke lie tham sa gaya tha. Belkul filmo ki traah manno sab slowmotion mai chal raha ho. Waqt tham sa gaya ho , background mai romantic music bajne laga ho aur dil mai left side wali ghnti bajne lagi ho.
Main sab bhool gaya tha kee main kaha hoon kyon hoon ?
Bas meree aankhe us ladakee kee taraph se hat hee nahin rahee thee aur is tarah se main use dekhata hee ja raha tha .
Uski tasvir meri aakho se utaar kar meri rooh par ankit ho rahi thi. Usakee maasoom chehara, usakee chhotee-chhotee aankhee, usake maasoom sa chehare pe vo maasoom see usakee hansee jaise maano koee paree ho vo..use dekh pahalee nazar me maano dil ko kuchh hone laga tha.
Ek alag sa ehsaas tha ye jo hume pahle kabhi nahin huva.
Dil ki dhadkan badh gae thi. Mann mai bus ek khawaish ki buss usse dekhta rahu...aur ye lamha kabhi khatam hi na ho.
Kya ye pyaar tha??
Mujhe nahin pata bas dil bol raha tha ki mera dost kuchh der baad aaye ya ye vaqt ruk jae. Hum humesha ke liye bus isse lamhe ke ho jaae.
Mujhe usaka naam jaanana tha...usake baare mein bahut kuchh pata karane ko dil kar raha tha ... lekin kaise karoon ye samajh hee nahin aa raha tha.
Jab kuchh samajh nahin aaya tab mainne bas bhagavaan se praarthana kiya kee mujhe ye ladakee meree jindagee mein chaahie. Kyuki isse ladakee ke saath mai jindagee ki har khushi batna chahta tha aur uske hise ke har dukh khude sahna chahta tha.

Par tabhi dil mai ek dard mahshoosh huva. Vo ja rahee thee....meree aankhon se door mujhe rokana tha use.
Usase baaten karana tha. usase dostee karanee thee aur use apane dil kee baat bataanee thee. lekin kaise ???
Yahee savaal bas baar-baar mere man mein aa raha tha aur mujhe baichain kiye ja raha tha.

Mainne phir soch liya ki meree aankhon se door hone se pahale mujhe isaka naam pata chal jaaye to main isase apana banoonga aur shaayad bhagavaan ne hee use bheja hoga mere lie ye main samajhoonga tabhee bhagavan ne chamatkaar kar diya..peechhe se aavaaj aaya priya main yahaan hoon.

Phir vo peechhe dekhi to mainne dekha vahaan se ek ladakee aavaaj dee aur vo us ka paas chalee gayee..tabhee main samajha us ladakee ka naam priya tha.

Main khush ho gaya aur us ladakee ko man kiya ja ke dhanyavaad bol doo kyonki usee ke vajah se mujhe us ka naam pata chala....bas tabhee mainne thaan lee ab use apana banaana hai, use apanee jindagee mein laana hai.

Phir tabhee mai usake pichhe jaane laga ki achaanak hee peechhe se ek haath aaya. Peechhe dekha to dost aa gaya tha.
Jese dost ka khuch pal pahle hum intezaar kar rahe the uss dost ko dekh kar ab main kya karoon samajh nahin aa raha tha..main kya boloon usase..kaise mana karoon usase?..kaise jaoo main us ke peechhe ? main isee soch mein laga raha raha tab tak vo meree aankhon se door ja chukee thee dil maano rone laga tha aur tabhee maano aisa laga ki jaise sab kuchh ek sapana sa tha bas aur aankhe khul gaya to sapana toot gaya.
Main vaha se chala to gaya apane dost anuj ke saath lekin pooree raaste bas anuj ko mann se gaaliya deta raha aur jab mann thoda khali huva toh priya ke baare mein sochata raha.

Maano mera dil ab usake khyaal se nikalane ko taiyaar hee nahin tha.
Doosare din main kolej lie taiyaar ho gaya aur main kolej panhucha...aur bench pe ja ka baith gaya..tabhee anuj ne bulaaya aur kaha dekh apane kolej mein ek naee ladakee aayee hai.
Mera man abhee bhee bas usee ke khyaalon me dooba hua tha.
Aankhon se us ka chehara mano hat hee nahee raha tha...vo baar baar mujhe aavaaj diye ja rahee tha.
Tabhee mujhe gussa aaya aur aana bhi lajmi tha kal anuj ki wajah se mai priya se nahin mile paya aur ab jab mai apni priya ke khayalo mai khoya huva tha tab bhi isse chain nahin hai.
Kal jo dost mujhe jaan se payara tha vo mujhe ab manhoos lagne laga tha. Pata nahin kyu par sach yahi tha yaha mai ye sab soch raha tha vahi vo abhi bhi laga huva tha mujhe awwaz dene mai toh mai ghusaa hokar peechhe usase bolane ja hee raha tha ki main ruk sa gaya.

Meree najar maano phir se ek baar sapanon me chala gaya. Mainne dekha kee vahee thee.
Maano jaise meree khushee ka koee thikaana nahin raha main khud ko rok hee nahin pa raha tha aur mere samajh mein hee nahin aa raha tha kee main kya karoo ? kya bolata main, bas ja ke apane dost ke gale lag gaya... Ab wapas mujhe anuj apna sab se accha dost mahshush ho raha tha.. 2 min. Pahle jese mai gaaliya nikal raha tha ab mai usse duwa de raha tha.. ittna ajeeb vehwar maine kabhi nahi kiya par pata nahi priya ko dekhne ke baade se mujhme bhoute kuch ulta fhulta chal raha tha.
Aur jab mujhe abhee ye pata chala ki vahee vah naee ladakee thee jo kolej mein aaj pahala din aayee thee.

Main to maano hava me udane laga... anuj ne mujhe pucha ki aakhir majhra kya hai...kyuki vo janta tha mujhe acche se ...aur kal se jo mai ajeeb vahwar kar raha tha..iss karan usse yakin ho gaya ki kuch gadbade hai...phir uske kahne par mainne anuj ko bataaya kee aisa aisa hai..usane kaha ja ke bol de use apane dil kee baat.. lekin main darata tha... ki vo kya kahegee..kya lagega use..yahee soch ke main hamesha ruk jaata tha.

Main sochane lagata tha ki kahee vo meree baaten sun ke mujhase door na ho jae. Yahi hota hai jab hum kisi ko khude se jayada chahte hai toh khude ko chahie kitni bhi talklif kyu na ho saamne wale ko agar humari wajah se thodi se bhi taklif hone ki ghunjaish ho toh hum himmate nahin kar paate.
Main usase door nahin hona chaahata tha. mujhe ye ehasaas ho gaya tha ki shaayad vo bhee mujhe pasand karatee thee...lekin vo kabhee kuchh nahin kahatee thee.
usase lagata ki mere man mai us ka lie kuchh nahin hai. lekin vo kya jaane ki use pahalee najar mein dekh ke hee mainne use apana dil de chuka tha.

Din beetate gae hamalog ek achchhe dost kee tarah saath rahate aur baate karate the..lekin na kabhee mujhe himmat hua usase kuchh bhee kahane ka na aur hee use.
Vaqt beet gaya aur is tarah hamalog kee padhaee pooree ho gayee. lekin mere dil me usake ke lie abhee bhee pahala aur aakharee pyaar tha aur shaayad us ke lie bhee.
Aur is tarah se hame sabako alag alag kampanee me job lag gaee thee tabhee bas ek din mainne soch liya ki ab bas.. main usase kal ja ke dil kee baat bata doonga.
Main agale din subah utha aur mainne use fon kiya aur usase kaha kee mujhe milana hai usase ..usane milane ka lie haan kar diya aur is baat se mujhe bahut khushee mila. hamalog ne ek samay nirdhaarit kiya tha aur main samay se pahale vahaan usaka intajaar kar raha tha ....tabhee meree najar us pe padee.. vahee kapade..vahee baig.. vahee chhotee-chhotee aankhe aur chehare pe vahee pyaaree se muskaan, maano aisa lag raha tha..kee vahee pahala din ho..jab mainne use pahalee baar dekha tha..vo dheere dheere aa rahee thee.
Aaj bhi wahi dhimme dhimme hawae bah rahi thi , time jese slow ho gaya tha aur wahi romantic song aaj bhi background mai baj raha tha. Dil ki dhadkan kaafi tej ho gae thi. main to bas use dekhata hee ja raha tha..phir vo paas aatee hai..phir vo mere saamane baith jaatee hai..tabhee bas..mainne usase kaha kee mujhe kuchh kahana hai usase.
Phir tabhee usane bhee kah diya kee mujhe bhee kuchh kahana hai tumhen ...main khush ho gaya.. mujhe laga kee aaj vo bhee apane dil kee baat bol degee...phir mainne usase kaha diya ki tum pahale bol do...usane to pahale mana kiya pahale bolane se..lekin mainne hee jid kar diya... ki pahale tum bole aur vo bolane ja rahee thee.
Maano meree saans ruk gae the..usakee baate sunane ka liye...sab kuchh tham sa gaya...bas aisa laga main aur vo..aur kuchh nahee hai aas-paas... aaj dil ko manno sukoon milne wala tha.
Jes lamhe ka intezaar mene ittni saalo se kiya vo aaj pura hone wala hai. Mai buss in khayalo mai tha ki tabhee phir usane apane baig se ek kaard nikaala..aur diya mujhe...vo jo pal tha.
Vahee pahala pal..jab mujhe laga ki mera sapana tha..aur sapana toot gaya...us kaard main usakee shaadee ka aamantran tha...bas..phir kya..sab kuchh vaheen ruk gaya...dil mai ek bhout tezz tise uthhi...shaayad aaj saas tham si gae thi..jaha khuch pal pahle mai khude ko duniya ka sab se khushnaseeb insaan mann raha tha..wahi ab mai khude ko sab se dhukhi aur bebasse pa raha tha.
Bhagwan ne toh mujhe usse milaya tha par shaayad mainne bahut der kar dee usase apanee dil kee baat bataane me..shyaad bahot-bahot der... phir usane mujhase poochha.. ki tum kya kahana chaahate the ? main kya kahata tab..baat badal dee..aur vo chalee gayee...aur main vahee baithe rah gaya....mujhe use apana banaane ka bas ek sapana hee tha shaayad.......jo ek samay pe aa ka toot gaya....vo aaj ka din aur pahala din...maano kyon aaya tha meree jindagee main ab tak ye baat samajh nahee aaya.... pahala din bhee ek sapane kee tarah aaee aur kuchh der baad toot gayee...aur ye aaj ka pal..jo phir se ek sapana banakar pal mai toot gaya........ iseelie doston kabhee bhee apanee dil kee baat bataane me der na karo... varana itana der ho jaata hai ki....apane pyaar ko bas sapane main hee apana banaana pad jaata hai... aur jab essa hota hai na toh sach kahta hu jaan toh nahin niklti par jindagi bemtlab se lagne lagti hai. Har par ek ajjeb sa khalipan mehshossh hota hai. Isse liye agae aap kisi se pyaar karte ho toh usse apne dil ka haal bata do..kahi essa na ho ki aap sahi waqt ka intezaar karte rahe aur aapko pata chale ki waqt hi nahin raha...

-The End​

Bhoute accha likha hai bhai. Jab time tha tab kaha nahin aur jab kahne ka mann banya toh time hi nahin raha. First sight love ki ye sab se badi problem hai. Lekine ye accha raha ki ussne apne dil ko sambhala aur sab kuch khatam nahin kiya. Aur priya ko jindagi mai aage badhne se nahin roka.
Good story bhai

 

[Aakash Meena]

[H1]~Preem milan~[/H1]
Rahul aaj apne ghar me udash sa baitha hua tha kya nahi tha uske pass uncha ohda rupya paisa naukar chakar aur bahut bada bangla sabkuch tha lekin fir bhi udash baitha tha wo kyu ish ko samjhne ke liye hamko uske piche samai Jo hua un ghatnaon ko samjhna hoga.
To kahani ki suruaat hoti hai Raaj Jo ek safal businessman tha aur unki chulbuli sararati wife Dr.Naina ji aur in dono ke pyaar ki nishani Rahul unka pyara beta jishme un dono ki jaan basti thi.lekin Rahul bachpan se bahut sararati tha itna sararati tha ki Jo bhi milta so uski naak me dam kar deta tha ye dekhkar Raaj ko kabhi kabhi bahut gussa aata tha lekin Rahul ki mom ko usse bada masoom duniya me nai dikhta tha aur Raaj waise to bahut gusse wale the lekin apni biwi ke aage unki kuch nai chalti thi to ishiliye Rahul bahut jiddi aur bilkul careless tipe ka banda ban gaya tha..Rahul jab college me pahuncha to wahan wo pahli baar kisi ke preem jaal me fans gaya Jo ek bahut hi bholi pyari masoom ek minute yahan masoom ka matlab wo sach wala masoom hai okay..to us ladki ka naam tha Mahi jiske pyaar me Rahul fans gaya aur bahut kosish ke baad Mahi ko bhi usse pyaar ho gaya dono sath rahte ghumte firte enjoy karte (enjoy ko sex na samjhna) Mahi aur Rahul ki pyaar ki bhanak ek din story ke khalnayak yani ki Raaj ji tak pahunch gayi to ek din wo khud mahi ke ghar jakar usse mile.. Mahi ke mata pita hairaan the ki itna bada aadmi unke yahan aaya hai..khair Raaj achcha insaan tha sabse pyaar se mila aur usne Mahi se Kahan ki Rahul ki sonch aur Zindagi jine ka Jo tarika usse undono aage jakar bahut problem hogi life me kyuki Rahul jimmedar nahi hai aur isks piche uski ma ka hath hai mai chahta hun tum meri madad karo aur Rahul ko jindgi me jimmedar insaan banane me meri taki tum dono baad me khus raho..mahi me puncha kya karna hoga to unhone kaha ki tum Rahul ko chhod do ye bolkar ki tumhari khud ki koi pahchan nai hai ishiliye mai tumhare sath nai rah sakti hum dono ke rashte alag hain..iske baad wo chale gaye to mahi ke maa baap ne bhi wahi kaha usko ki Raaj ji bilkul sahi baat bolkar gaye hain jaisa unhone bola hai waisa karo..mahi ka dil nai maan raha tha lekin do botal vodka pikar usne Rahul ka dil tod diya bahut buri tarah se.. breakup ke baad Rahul bilkul bikhar sa gaya usko uski mom ne badi muskil se samhala usko bolkar ki kahe pareshan hota hai mai tere liye line laga dungi tension mat lo lekin Rahul ko baat dil me lag gayi thi usko kaamyaab banna tha har haal me..

Rahul ne dhere dhere khud ko badalna suru kiya aur wo kamyaab raha aur apni ma ki tarah wo bhi doctor bankar kuch din baad baad papa ka business join kar liya kyuki uske papa ka business bahut bada tha aur wo eklauta tha to ushi ko dekhna tha..7 shaal bahut hota hai duniya badal jati hai log badal jate hain Rahul ki kismat bhi badal gayi thi lekin insaan ki fitrat hai Jo hota hai uska sukh kam Jo nahi hota hai uska gum Jada hota hai to ishiliye aaj Rahul udas tha use wo gujre hue lamhe yaad aa rahe tha waise wo apni life me aage badh chuka tha lekin idhar kuch din se uske papa uski shadi ke liye usko bol rahe the ki ab waqt aa gaya koi ladki ho tumhari nazar me to bata do nahi to hum hi dhunte hain kisi ko.. Rahul ko fir kisi se pyaar na hua dobara wo aaj bhi us gum ko bhula nai tha usko kisi ladki par yakin nai tha.. Rahul ne bol diya usko shadi nai karni kisi se to Raaj ne kaha ek ladki hai meri nazar me usse mil lo ek baar aur aaj wo ladki milne aa rahi thi aur idhar ye Rahul udas ho gaya tha purani baten sonchkar wo apna gujra hua Kal bhul nai pa raha tha.kuch der me uske papa ki aur mom aur mom uske pass aaye aur bole taiyaar ho jao hum ladki ke ghar chal rahe hain..Rahul ko lekar wo log chal diye aur Rahul apni sonch me gum tha kuch der baad Rahul ko wo rashta kuch Jana pahchana laga kyuki ye rashta to mahi ke ghar jata tha aur had to tab ho gayi jab wo log mahi ke ghar ke aage ruke Jo aaj bahut saja dhaja hua tha..Rahul ne puncha yahan kyu aaye hum log to uske papa ne bola aaj mahi ki sagai hai jisko sun Kar Rahul ko mare gussa aur dukh ke pareshan ho gaya

Rahul jab kafi samjhane ke baad Mahi ke ghar ke andar gaya Jahan mahi ke papa bahut pyaar se mile aur sabko unhone chai nasta karaya uske baad mahi ko bulaya gaya to pata chali ki emergency case aa gaya hai ishiliye mahi ko Jana pada hai kyuki mahi ka koi dost hai jisko koi problem hui hai to usko Jana pada achanak se..ye sunkar Rahul hairaan ho gaya ki mahi bhi doctor ban gayi thi filhaal sab intzaar karte rahe aur mehmaan log sab kha pikar chale gaye dhire dhire han ek baat notice ki Rahul ne ki wo ladka na mila usko jiski mahi ke sath sagai honi thi aaj..fir wo log bhi ghar aa gaye kyuki mahi lo pata nai kitna time lagna tha

Ghar aakar Rahul apne dad se lad gaya ki usko wahan lekar kyu gaye the to Naina ne usko bataya ki jis ladke ke sath mahi ki sagai honi thi wo aur koi nai tum ho to Rahul ne kaha ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai tab Raaj ne usse mafi mangte hue usko Puri baat batai.. unhone bataya ki mahi ne kaha ki Rahul kuch bane na bane to bhi wo Rahul ke sath rahegi Han wo khud ko is qabil banayegi ki agar Rahul jindgi me nakaamyaab bhi hua to wo samhaal legi sab akele hi har haal me usko Rahul ka sath chahiye..To uske papa ne usko Naina ko hawale Kar diya Jo uspar bahut gussa thi lekin Puri baat samjhkar unhone uski help ki aur doctor ban gayi to ab wo dono hi Life me safal the to ab uski shadi fix ki gayi thi..ye sab Rahul pareshan ho gaya mahi se Milne ke liye

Dusre din Rahul jakar mahi se mila sare gile sikwe door hue dono ke fir dhum dhaam se shadi ho gayi dono ki jish me Rahul ka khas dost ladkiyon ke sath nach ga raha tha aur gana tha ye wala...


Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Kalle ka khot koi na
Gella mere yaar kameene gella mere yaar kameene
Yaari ki kasam khavan ke
Pad gaye manne peg ye peene pad gaye manne peg ye peene
Bottle meri....bottle meri.......
Reh ri aadhi isne koyi khoso na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Banda main gental mental ho gaya pee ke angreji
Handle karni situation ghar kya ke shaami peshi
Arrey koyi na kar lenge handle
Aaj jee lo pee lo khul ke koi bhadak nai leni
Saare nacho khul ke DJ aaj poori raat baajan de beat
Jo roke saala uske maaro Itt
Repeat chala de gaane gel se mere saare yaar purane
Bhool ke zindagi ke roule saare bolo bam bam bhole
Om namah shivay
Sunn re bhai DJ aale
Laade tagda sa gaana laade tagda sa gaana
Baajan de yaar purane
Yaara ne dhumma thaana yaara ne dhumma thaana
Pal pal manne pal pal manne jeena
Aaj mere sir pe koyi bhoko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Khatri ki beats re
Arrey baajan de ne yaar khatri

Rahul jese ke liye jo bhi hai aaj hai kal kya hoga kabhi socha nahin. Maa baap ke jayada pyaar ke wajah se bigade gaya. Aur Mahi ne usse kamyab bana diya aur aakhir mai sach bhi bataya ussne ki ussne aakhir wo kyu kiya tha aur aakhir ka gaana bhi aacha laga.
Good Story

 

[Aakash Meena]

Kon Galath kon Sahi?​

Ye kahani hai Priya aur Sooraj ki. Dono ek dusre ke saath school me padte the. College me bhi dono saath the aur college me hi dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho gaya. Dono ka pyar ek dusre ke liye itna gehra tha ki college me sab jaante the ki inki marriage ho jaayegi. Aur ho bhi kyu na jab se inhone hosh sambhala hai aur inko pyaar ka mtlab samjhe aaya hai tab se inn dono ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maan liya hai...aur in dono ka rahne ka tarika aur ek dusre ke liye vo deewangi sabko ye samjhane ke liye kaafi thi ki ye dono ek dusree se sacha wala pyaar karte hai.

Dono ko ek dusre ki bhoutee jayada fiker thi. Yee kahna galath nahin tha ki ye do jism aur ek jaan the. Chote ek ko pahochti thi par dard dono ko hota tha. Jab ek baar Sooraj ka bike se accident ho gaya tha tab priya 1 mahine tak chain se so nahin paae. Dinn raat bus sooraj ka dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse kis time konsi medicience deni hai kab konsi tube lagani hai , sab ka dhyaan priya rakhti thi. Aur jab priya ko tonsil huva tab sooraj uska dhyaan rakhta tha....college ki canteen me jab bhi Priya Ice Cream khati thi to Sooraj use aksar kehta tha " Priya…Ice Cream mat khao, sardi lag jayegi" Sooraj Priya ki bahut care karta tha aur kabhi ice cream nahi khane deta tha. Kuch bhi jayada thanda ho ya koe khatai vo priya ko usse khane nahin deta tha...kyuki doctor ne priya ko inn sabhi ke liye mana kiya tha.

College khatam hone ke baad Sooraj ki ek acchi company me job lag gayi aura ab Sooraj jaldi se Priya ke saath shadi karna chahta tha...aur life mai settle hona chata tha.
Ek din dono saath me baithe the aur dono ne apne ghar marriage ki baat karne ka faisla kiya... ye faisla unhone bhoute pahle hi kar liya tha par dono ko darr tha aur vo bhi bewajah nahin. Dono alag alag caste se the , iss karan dono ko andesha tha ki agar undono ne apne gharwalo se shaadi ki baat ki toh vo inn dono ka milna bhi bande kara denge...iss liye dono ne graduation ka wait kiya aur ye decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono apne pairo par khade nahin ho jaate tab tak vo shaadi ki baat apne gharwalo se bilkul nahin karenge. Aur jab ab vo dono apne apne pairo par khade ho chuke the toh dono ne ye faisla kiya.

Dono ghar gaye aur dono ne apne-apne maa baap ko apne pyar ke bare me bataya. Dono ke rishtey me sabse badi rukavat thi unki caste. Sooraj pandit caste se tha aur Priya Rajpoot caste se thi. Jab Priya ne apne gharwalo ko Sooraj ke bare me bataya to wo bahut naraz huye lekin aakhirkaar maan gaye. Kyunki, unhone socha ki ladka padha likha hai aur acchi naukri bhi karta hai isliye unhe zyada problem nahi thi.

Jab Sooraj ne apni family se Priya ke bare me baat ki to unke oopar to jaise dukh ka pahad hi toot gaya ho. Sooraj ke pita ne is rishtey ke liye saaf mana kar diya. Lekin Sooraj Priya se saccha pyar karta tha aur har haal me usi se shadi karna chahta tha, isliye wo bhi zidd par ada raha aur usne ghar chodne ki dhamki de di. Itna sunte hi Sooraj ke pita ko heart attack aa gaya. Sooraj aur uski maa Sooraj ke pita ko hospital le kar gaye. Waha Sooraj ki maa ne bataya ki "Tumhare pita ne tumhare liye ladki dhoond li thi aur wo tumse baat karne wale the. Unhone ladki ke parivar se bhi baat kar li thi. Ab tum please Nisha se shadi ke liye maan jao"

Sooraj ek dharam sankate mai ghire gaya tha. Ek taraf uske pitah the jenhone aaj tak uski har khawaish puri ki. Usse aaj iss kaabil banaya ki wo apne pairo par khada ho sake. Uske pitah ne na jaane kitni taklif sahane ki aur sooraj ko padhaya aur kaabil banaya. Aaj sooraj agar kaamyab tha toh uske kaamyabi ke liye uski pitah ne bhoute kuch koorbaan kiya tha. Apna sapna..apna jeevan...sab kuch.

Wahi dusri taraf thi Sooraj ki dhadkan uski priya jeesne har pal uska saath diya. Sooraj ke har kadam ki prerna thi priya. Uske har kadam par prerna ne uska saath diya tha...jab jab sooraj ko jarurate thi prerna uske saath khadi thi.

Ab Sooraj esi dharm sakate mai tha, ki vo kise chunne. Agar vo priya ko chunta hai toh ek Aashique toh jeet jaega par ek beta haar jaaega...aur ho sakta hai iss haar ka bojh usse apne pitah ki mout se chukana pade.
Aur agar vo apne pitah ko chunta hai toh ek beta toh jeet jaaega par ek aashique mar jaae ga.
Priya wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj shadi karna chahta tha aur Nisha wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj ke pita uski shadi karvana chahte the.
Bete aur Aashique ke iss janug mai koe bhi jeete par haar toh sooraj ki hi honi thi. Agar usse apni zindagi roshan karni thi toh usse uski maa ke jeevan par grahan lagana tha...aur agar nahin toh apne jeevan par.
Aakhir pita aur pyaar ke bich sooraj ne pitah ko chuna... Sooraj haar gaya aur usne Nisha se shadi kar li.

Shadi se pehle Sooraj aur Priya ne ek dusre se phone par baat bhi ki thi, bahut roye the dono aur dono ne ye kurbani dedi. Sooraj ne apne pitah ke liye aur Priya ne sooraj ke liye. Priya ne sooraj se kaha tha " Sooraj , Maa -Baap badee naishbo se milte hai... hum bacho ke liye wo kitna kuch sahte hai ye hum andaza bhi nahin laga sakte...unhe taklif dekar hum kabhi kush nahin rah sakte...Jab humne pyaar kiya tha tab hum anjaane the par aaj sabkuch jaan kar apno ki kabar par hum ishq ki imaarate nahin bana sakte...Hum humesha acche dost rahenge par jeevansaathi bnne na ...humari kismate mai nahin"
Aur ye kah kar Priya ne phone cut kar diya uss raat dono koob roe the...aakho ke aasu sookh chuke the par dil tha jo chup hone ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.Waqt beeta par usse dine ke baad Sooraj ne Priya ko kabhi call nahi kiya aur na hi Priya ne Sooraj ko.

After 5 Years (5 Saal Baad)

Paanch saal baad Sooraj ke college ka reunion tha aur Sooraj ko bhi invitation tha. Isliye, Sooraj apni wife Nisha ke saath college reunion me jaata hai aur waha Priya ko dekhkar surprised ho jaata hai. Old memories uske dimag me ghoomne lagti hai. Priya apne husband ke saath aayi thi. Almost sabhi ki shadi ho chuki thi aur sab khush lag rahe the.

Reunion party ke end me Sooraj aur Nisha lunch kar rahe the. Unke saath me 2 seats bhi khali thi aur Priya ke husband ne Priya se waha baithne ko kaha. Abe k baar fir Sooraj aur Priya aamne saamne the lekin waha par sirf khamoshi thi.

Abhi Sooraj lunch kar hi raha tha ki Priya ice cream lekar aa jati hai aur khane lagti hai lekin tabhi Sooraj ke zuban se nikal jaata hai "Priya….ice cream mat khana varna sardi lag jaayegi.."

Priya aur Sooraj ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai aur……. Silence…….

Sirf khamoshi………

Priya ke husband aur Sooraj ki wife sab kuch samajh jaate hai lekin kuch nahi bolte.

Friends, kya aapko lagta hai ki ye kahani yaha par end ho sakti hai? Nahi….Bilkul Nahi.

Sooraj ke pita ne apni zidd aur shaan ke liye sirf sooraj ki hi nahi balki 4 zindagiyan barbad kar di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye charo kabhi khushi se reh payenge. Yakeenan Sooraj aur Priya ek dusre se saccha pyar karte the lekin maa baap ki zidd kea aage haar gaye.
Par yaha Galath kon hai,
Kya Sooraj aur Priya galath hai?
Jenhone ne ye faisla kiya ki unki prem kahani ki kaamyabi se kahi jayada jaruri hai unke gharwalo ke khushiya.
Kya unke life partner galath hai?
Jo shayad apne maa baap ki baat maante huwe kisi anjaan se shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gae.
Kya unke maa baap galath hai?
Jenke faisle galath ho sakte hai par unki niyate kabhi galath nahin ho sakti jo kewale apne baacho ka bhala chahte hai.
Kon Galath kon Sahi?
Jawab bus yahi ki pta nahin.
Isse kahani ko padh kar aap kya feel kar rahe ho comment me zarur bataye ga.

The End

Galath toh sirf haalath the.
Na Maa baap galath hai na sooraj aur priya. Sab ne wo kiya jo unhe karna chahiye tha. Par ye bhi sahi hai ki 4 jindagiya barbaade ho gae. Unhe ye pachtawa humesha rahega ki jo unka jeevan saathi hai vo unhone chuna nahin tha balki thopa gaya tha.
Par kahani acchi thi.
Good story

 

[Ahamdeepo]

Kon Galath kon Sahi?​

Ye kahani hai Priya aur Sooraj ki. Dono ek dusre ke saath school me padte the. College me bhi dono saath the aur college me hi dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho gaya. Dono ka pyar ek dusre ke liye itna gehra tha ki college me sab jaante the ki inki marriage ho jaayegi. Aur ho bhi kyu na jab se inhone hosh sambhala hai aur inko pyaar ka mtlab samjhe aaya hai tab se inn dono ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maan liya hai...aur in dono ka rahne ka tarika aur ek dusre ke liye vo deewangi sabko ye samjhane ke liye kaafi thi ki ye dono ek dusree se sacha wala pyaar karte hai.

Dono ko ek dusre ki bhoutee jayada fiker thi. Yee kahna galath nahin tha ki ye do jism aur ek jaan the. Chote ek ko pahochti thi par dard dono ko hota tha. Jab ek baar Sooraj ka bike se accident ho gaya tha tab priya 1 mahine tak chain se so nahin paae. Dinn raat bus sooraj ka dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse kis time konsi medicience deni hai kab konsi tube lagani hai , sab ka dhyaan priya rakhti thi. Aur jab priya ko tonsil huva tab sooraj uska dhyaan rakhta tha....college ki canteen me jab bhi Priya Ice Cream khati thi to Sooraj use aksar kehta tha " Priya…Ice Cream mat khao, sardi lag jayegi" Sooraj Priya ki bahut care karta tha aur kabhi ice cream nahi khane deta tha. Kuch bhi jayada thanda ho ya koe khatai vo priya ko usse khane nahin deta tha...kyuki doctor ne priya ko inn sabhi ke liye mana kiya tha.

College khatam hone ke baad Sooraj ki ek acchi company me job lag gayi aura ab Sooraj jaldi se Priya ke saath shadi karna chahta tha...aur life mai settle hona chata tha.
Ek din dono saath me baithe the aur dono ne apne ghar marriage ki baat karne ka faisla kiya... ye faisla unhone bhoute pahle hi kar liya tha par dono ko darr tha aur vo bhi bewajah nahin. Dono alag alag caste se the , iss karan dono ko andesha tha ki agar undono ne apne gharwalo se shaadi ki baat ki toh vo inn dono ka milna bhi bande kara denge...iss liye dono ne graduation ka wait kiya aur ye decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono apne pairo par khade nahin ho jaate tab tak vo shaadi ki baat apne gharwalo se bilkul nahin karenge. Aur jab ab vo dono apne apne pairo par khade ho chuke the toh dono ne ye faisla kiya.

Dono ghar gaye aur dono ne apne-apne maa baap ko apne pyar ke bare me bataya. Dono ke rishtey me sabse badi rukavat thi unki caste. Sooraj pandit caste se tha aur Priya Rajpoot caste se thi. Jab Priya ne apne gharwalo ko Sooraj ke bare me bataya to wo bahut naraz huye lekin aakhirkaar maan gaye. Kyunki, unhone socha ki ladka padha likha hai aur acchi naukri bhi karta hai isliye unhe zyada problem nahi thi.

Jab Sooraj ne apni family se Priya ke bare me baat ki to unke oopar to jaise dukh ka pahad hi toot gaya ho. Sooraj ke pita ne is rishtey ke liye saaf mana kar diya. Lekin Sooraj Priya se saccha pyar karta tha aur har haal me usi se shadi karna chahta tha, isliye wo bhi zidd par ada raha aur usne ghar chodne ki dhamki de di. Itna sunte hi Sooraj ke pita ko heart attack aa gaya. Sooraj aur uski maa Sooraj ke pita ko hospital le kar gaye. Waha Sooraj ki maa ne bataya ki "Tumhare pita ne tumhare liye ladki dhoond li thi aur wo tumse baat karne wale the. Unhone ladki ke parivar se bhi baat kar li thi. Ab tum please Nisha se shadi ke liye maan jao"

Sooraj ek dharam sankate mai ghire gaya tha. Ek taraf uske pitah the jenhone aaj tak uski har khawaish puri ki. Usse aaj iss kaabil banaya ki wo apne pairo par khada ho sake. Uske pitah ne na jaane kitni taklif sahane ki aur sooraj ko padhaya aur kaabil banaya. Aaj sooraj agar kaamyab tha toh uske kaamyabi ke liye uski pitah ne bhoute kuch koorbaan kiya tha. Apna sapna..apna jeevan...sab kuch.

Wahi dusri taraf thi Sooraj ki dhadkan uski priya jeesne har pal uska saath diya. Sooraj ke har kadam ki prerna thi priya. Uske har kadam par prerna ne uska saath diya tha...jab jab sooraj ko jarurate thi prerna uske saath khadi thi.

Ab Sooraj esi dharm sakate mai tha, ki vo kise chunne. Agar vo priya ko chunta hai toh ek Aashique toh jeet jaega par ek beta haar jaaega...aur ho sakta hai iss haar ka bojh usse apne pitah ki mout se chukana pade.
Aur agar vo apne pitah ko chunta hai toh ek beta toh jeet jaaega par ek aashique mar jaae ga.
Priya wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj shadi karna chahta tha aur Nisha wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj ke pita uski shadi karvana chahte the.
Bete aur Aashique ke iss janug mai koe bhi jeete par haar toh sooraj ki hi honi thi. Agar usse apni zindagi roshan karni thi toh usse uski maa ke jeevan par grahan lagana tha...aur agar nahin toh apne jeevan par.
Aakhir pita aur pyaar ke bich sooraj ne pitah ko chuna... Sooraj haar gaya aur usne Nisha se shadi kar li.

Shadi se pehle Sooraj aur Priya ne ek dusre se phone par baat bhi ki thi, bahut roye the dono aur dono ne ye kurbani dedi. Sooraj ne apne pitah ke liye aur Priya ne sooraj ke liye. Priya ne sooraj se kaha tha " Sooraj , Maa -Baap badee naishbo se milte hai... hum bacho ke liye wo kitna kuch sahte hai ye hum andaza bhi nahin laga sakte...unhe taklif dekar hum kabhi kush nahin rah sakte...Jab humne pyaar kiya tha tab hum anjaane the par aaj sabkuch jaan kar apno ki kabar par hum ishq ki imaarate nahin bana sakte...Hum humesha acche dost rahenge par jeevansaathi bnne na ...humari kismate mai nahin"
Aur ye kah kar Priya ne phone cut kar diya uss raat dono koob roe the...aakho ke aasu sookh chuke the par dil tha jo chup hone ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.Waqt beeta par usse dine ke baad Sooraj ne Priya ko kabhi call nahi kiya aur na hi Priya ne Sooraj ko.

After 5 Years (5 Saal Baad)

Paanch saal baad Sooraj ke college ka reunion tha aur Sooraj ko bhi invitation tha. Isliye, Sooraj apni wife Nisha ke saath college reunion me jaata hai aur waha Priya ko dekhkar surprised ho jaata hai. Old memories uske dimag me ghoomne lagti hai. Priya apne husband ke saath aayi thi. Almost sabhi ki shadi ho chuki thi aur sab khush lag rahe the.

Reunion party ke end me Sooraj aur Nisha lunch kar rahe the. Unke saath me 2 seats bhi khali thi aur Priya ke husband ne Priya se waha baithne ko kaha. Abe k baar fir Sooraj aur Priya aamne saamne the lekin waha par sirf khamoshi thi.

Abhi Sooraj lunch kar hi raha tha ki Priya ice cream lekar aa jati hai aur khane lagti hai lekin tabhi Sooraj ke zuban se nikal jaata hai "Priya….ice cream mat khana varna sardi lag jaayegi.."

Priya aur Sooraj ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai aur……. Silence…….

Sirf khamoshi………

Priya ke husband aur Sooraj ki wife sab kuch samajh jaate hai lekin kuch nahi bolte.

Friends, kya aapko lagta hai ki ye kahani yaha par end ho sakti hai? Nahi….Bilkul Nahi.

Sooraj ke pita ne apni zidd aur shaan ke liye sirf sooraj ki hi nahi balki 4 zindagiyan barbad kar di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye charo kabhi khushi se reh payenge. Yakeenan Sooraj aur Priya ek dusre se saccha pyar karte the lekin maa baap ki zidd kea aage haar gaye.
Par yaha Galath kon hai,
Kya Sooraj aur Priya galath hai?
Jenhone ne ye faisla kiya ki unki prem kahani ki kaamyabi se kahi jayada jaruri hai unke gharwalo ke khushiya.
Kya unke life partner galath hai?
Jo shayad apne maa baap ki baat maante huwe kisi anjaan se shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gae.
Kya unke maa baap galath hai?
Jenke faisle galath ho sakte hai par unki niyate kabhi galath nahin ho sakti jo kewale apne baacho ka bhala chahte hai.
Kon Galath kon Sahi?
Jawab bus yahi ki pta nahin.
Isse kahani ko padh kar aap kya feel kar rahe ho comment me zarur bataye ga.

The End

Bhut Acha story bhai..
Aapne story ke madyam se samaj ki samasya ka Acha varnan kiya hai..
Rahi bat Kon galat.. Kon sahi.. ..to dil ko dilasa dene ke liye ye keh sakte hai ki Halat galat the par Aisa nhi hota..
Agar sooraj or priya ka pyar itna gehra tha ki sare clg ko Pta tha or almost sab to unke maa baap se bhi nhi chupa hoga( ye reality Hai.. Kyuki ma-bap se zyada hme koi nhi smghta) To unhe pehle hi apne gharo me bat karni chahiye..
Dusra ye ki.. Maa-bapp itna sab karte hai.. Puri zindagi hum logo ke liye hi bita dete hai kam karte karte to unka bhi Kuch haq banta hai..

 

[Soku74]

Humari adhuri prem kahanee

Pyaar vo ehasaas hai, jo har kisee ko nahin hota. Ehasaas hi kyu ehasaaso ki ek khubshurate kahani hai. Par ye ehasaas sab ko nahin hota ya u kahu ki sab ke nasseb mai nahin hota.​

Pyaar vo samundar hai... jesme doob jaane ka mann karta hai. Pyaar vo manate hai jese har dil mangna ta hai. Par puri sirf kuch nasheeb walo ki hoti hai. Pyaar karna toh aasan hai par usse nibha pana muskil aur usse bhi muskil hai pyaar ka kamyab hona.
Par ye toh sach hai pyaar ehasaaso ki ek adhbhute kahani hai.
Yahee ek ehasaas main aapako bataana chaahata hoon...usse ehasaas se aap sabko bhi rubaru karana chahta hu.

Shaam ka samay tha .... aur main apane dost Anuj ka intajaar kar raha tha.
Steshan ke baahar... hamalog ka baahar kahee ghoomane jaane ka plaan tha aur main jaldee pahunch gaya tha...iska karan ye tha ki mujhe travel karna bhoute pasand hai. Alag alag jagah jaana logo se milna aur dosto ke saath waqt guzarna.
Mujhe ye sab pasand tha iss liye mai waqt se pahle hi steshan aa gaya. Mai waha pahoch toh gaya tha par kuchh samajh nahee aa raha tha kee main kya karoon. Kyuki abhi tak koe dost aaya hi nahin.
Kuchh der idhar udhar ghumne ke baade main steshan ke paas ja ke baith gaya. Mainee ek taraf apna bag rakha aur phire mai apna phone chalane lag gaya, kyuki aur kuch karne ko tha nahin.
Mai apna phone dekh raha tha par, tabhee kuchh aisa hua ki meree jindagee ek alag mod lene vaalee thee.

Steshan kee taraph main dekh raha tha kee mera dost aaya kee nahin tabhee achaanak se meree nazar ek ladakee par padee.
Vo jo vaqt tha main pooree tarah kuchh der ke lie tham sa gaya tha. Belkul filmo ki traah manno sab slowmotion mai chal raha ho. Waqt tham sa gaya ho , background mai romantic music bajne laga ho aur dil mai left side wali ghnti bajne lagi ho.
Main sab bhool gaya tha kee main kaha hoon kyon hoon ?
Bas meree aankhe us ladakee kee taraph se hat hee nahin rahee thee aur is tarah se main use dekhata hee ja raha tha .
Uski tasvir meri aakho se utaar kar meri rooh par ankit ho rahi thi. Usakee maasoom chehara, usakee chhotee-chhotee aankhee, usake maasoom sa chehare pe vo maasoom see usakee hansee jaise maano koee paree ho vo..use dekh pahalee nazar me maano dil ko kuchh hone laga tha.
Ek alag sa ehsaas tha ye jo hume pahle kabhi nahin huva.
Dil ki dhadkan badh gae thi. Mann mai bus ek khawaish ki buss usse dekhta rahu...aur ye lamha kabhi khatam hi na ho.
Kya ye pyaar tha??
Mujhe nahin pata bas dil bol raha tha ki mera dost kuchh der baad aaye ya ye vaqt ruk jae. Hum humesha ke liye bus isse lamhe ke ho jaae.
Mujhe usaka naam jaanana tha...usake baare mein bahut kuchh pata karane ko dil kar raha tha ... lekin kaise karoon ye samajh hee nahin aa raha tha.
Jab kuchh samajh nahin aaya tab mainne bas bhagavaan se praarthana kiya kee mujhe ye ladakee meree jindagee mein chaahie. Kyuki isse ladakee ke saath mai jindagee ki har khushi batna chahta tha aur uske hise ke har dukh khude sahna chahta tha.

Par tabhi dil mai ek dard mahshoosh huva. Vo ja rahee thee....meree aankhon se door mujhe rokana tha use.
Usase baaten karana tha. usase dostee karanee thee aur use apane dil kee baat bataanee thee. lekin kaise ???
Yahee savaal bas baar-baar mere man mein aa raha tha aur mujhe baichain kiye ja raha tha.

Mainne phir soch liya ki meree aankhon se door hone se pahale mujhe isaka naam pata chal jaaye to main isase apana banoonga aur shaayad bhagavaan ne hee use bheja hoga mere lie ye main samajhoonga tabhee bhagavan ne chamatkaar kar diya..peechhe se aavaaj aaya priya main yahaan hoon.

Phir vo peechhe dekhi to mainne dekha vahaan se ek ladakee aavaaj dee aur vo us ka paas chalee gayee..tabhee main samajha us ladakee ka naam priya tha.

Main khush ho gaya aur us ladakee ko man kiya ja ke dhanyavaad bol doo kyonki usee ke vajah se mujhe us ka naam pata chala....bas tabhee mainne thaan lee ab use apana banaana hai, use apanee jindagee mein laana hai.

Phir tabhee mai usake pichhe jaane laga ki achaanak hee peechhe se ek haath aaya. Peechhe dekha to dost aa gaya tha.
Jese dost ka khuch pal pahle hum intezaar kar rahe the uss dost ko dekh kar ab main kya karoon samajh nahin aa raha tha..main kya boloon usase..kaise mana karoon usase?..kaise jaoo main us ke peechhe ? main isee soch mein laga raha raha tab tak vo meree aankhon se door ja chukee thee dil maano rone laga tha aur tabhee maano aisa laga ki jaise sab kuchh ek sapana sa tha bas aur aankhe khul gaya to sapana toot gaya.
Main vaha se chala to gaya apane dost anuj ke saath lekin pooree raaste bas anuj ko mann se gaaliya deta raha aur jab mann thoda khali huva toh priya ke baare mein sochata raha.

Maano mera dil ab usake khyaal se nikalane ko taiyaar hee nahin tha.
Doosare din main kolej lie taiyaar ho gaya aur main kolej panhucha...aur bench pe ja ka baith gaya..tabhee anuj ne bulaaya aur kaha dekh apane kolej mein ek naee ladakee aayee hai.
Mera man abhee bhee bas usee ke khyaalon me dooba hua tha.
Aankhon se us ka chehara mano hat hee nahee raha tha...vo baar baar mujhe aavaaj diye ja rahee tha.
Tabhee mujhe gussa aaya aur aana bhi lajmi tha kal anuj ki wajah se mai priya se nahin mile paya aur ab jab mai apni priya ke khayalo mai khoya huva tha tab bhi isse chain nahin hai.
Kal jo dost mujhe jaan se payara tha vo mujhe ab manhoos lagne laga tha. Pata nahin kyu par sach yahi tha yaha mai ye sab soch raha tha vahi vo abhi bhi laga huva tha mujhe awwaz dene mai toh mai ghusaa hokar peechhe usase bolane ja hee raha tha ki main ruk sa gaya.

Meree najar maano phir se ek baar sapanon me chala gaya. Mainne dekha kee vahee thee.
Maano jaise meree khushee ka koee thikaana nahin raha main khud ko rok hee nahin pa raha tha aur mere samajh mein hee nahin aa raha tha kee main kya karoo ? kya bolata main, bas ja ke apane dost ke gale lag gaya... Ab wapas mujhe anuj apna sab se accha dost mahshush ho raha tha.. 2 min. Pahle jese mai gaaliya nikal raha tha ab mai usse duwa de raha tha.. ittna ajeeb vehwar maine kabhi nahi kiya par pata nahi priya ko dekhne ke baade se mujhme bhoute kuch ulta fhulta chal raha tha.
Aur jab mujhe abhee ye pata chala ki vahee vah naee ladakee thee jo kolej mein aaj pahala din aayee thee.

Main to maano hava me udane laga... anuj ne mujhe pucha ki aakhir majhra kya hai...kyuki vo janta tha mujhe acche se ...aur kal se jo mai ajeeb vahwar kar raha tha..iss karan usse yakin ho gaya ki kuch gadbade hai...phir uske kahne par mainne anuj ko bataaya kee aisa aisa hai..usane kaha ja ke bol de use apane dil kee baat.. lekin main darata tha... ki vo kya kahegee..kya lagega use..yahee soch ke main hamesha ruk jaata tha.

Main sochane lagata tha ki kahee vo meree baaten sun ke mujhase door na ho jae. Yahi hota hai jab hum kisi ko khude se jayada chahte hai toh khude ko chahie kitni bhi talklif kyu na ho saamne wale ko agar humari wajah se thodi se bhi taklif hone ki ghunjaish ho toh hum himmate nahin kar paate.
Main usase door nahin hona chaahata tha. mujhe ye ehasaas ho gaya tha ki shaayad vo bhee mujhe pasand karatee thee...lekin vo kabhee kuchh nahin kahatee thee.
usase lagata ki mere man mai us ka lie kuchh nahin hai. lekin vo kya jaane ki use pahalee najar mein dekh ke hee mainne use apana dil de chuka tha.

Din beetate gae hamalog ek achchhe dost kee tarah saath rahate aur baate karate the..lekin na kabhee mujhe himmat hua usase kuchh bhee kahane ka na aur hee use.
Vaqt beet gaya aur is tarah hamalog kee padhaee pooree ho gayee. lekin mere dil me usake ke lie abhee bhee pahala aur aakharee pyaar tha aur shaayad us ke lie bhee.
Aur is tarah se hame sabako alag alag kampanee me job lag gaee thee tabhee bas ek din mainne soch liya ki ab bas.. main usase kal ja ke dil kee baat bata doonga.
Main agale din subah utha aur mainne use fon kiya aur usase kaha kee mujhe milana hai usase ..usane milane ka lie haan kar diya aur is baat se mujhe bahut khushee mila. hamalog ne ek samay nirdhaarit kiya tha aur main samay se pahale vahaan usaka intajaar kar raha tha ....tabhee meree najar us pe padee.. vahee kapade..vahee baig.. vahee chhotee-chhotee aankhe aur chehare pe vahee pyaaree se muskaan, maano aisa lag raha tha..kee vahee pahala din ho..jab mainne use pahalee baar dekha tha..vo dheere dheere aa rahee thee.
Aaj bhi wahi dhimme dhimme hawae bah rahi thi , time jese slow ho gaya tha aur wahi romantic song aaj bhi background mai baj raha tha. Dil ki dhadkan kaafi tej ho gae thi. main to bas use dekhata hee ja raha tha..phir vo paas aatee hai..phir vo mere saamane baith jaatee hai..tabhee bas..mainne usase kaha kee mujhe kuchh kahana hai usase.
Phir tabhee usane bhee kah diya kee mujhe bhee kuchh kahana hai tumhen ...main khush ho gaya.. mujhe laga kee aaj vo bhee apane dil kee baat bol degee...phir mainne usase kaha diya ki tum pahale bol do...usane to pahale mana kiya pahale bolane se..lekin mainne hee jid kar diya... ki pahale tum bole aur vo bolane ja rahee thee.
Maano meree saans ruk gae the..usakee baate sunane ka liye...sab kuchh tham sa gaya...bas aisa laga main aur vo..aur kuchh nahee hai aas-paas... aaj dil ko manno sukoon milne wala tha.
Jes lamhe ka intezaar mene ittni saalo se kiya vo aaj pura hone wala hai. Mai buss in khayalo mai tha ki tabhee phir usane apane baig se ek kaard nikaala..aur diya mujhe...vo jo pal tha.
Vahee pahala pal..jab mujhe laga ki mera sapana tha..aur sapana toot gaya...us kaard main usakee shaadee ka aamantran tha...bas..phir kya..sab kuchh vaheen ruk gaya...dil mai ek bhout tezz tise uthhi...shaayad aaj saas tham si gae thi..jaha khuch pal pahle mai khude ko duniya ka sab se khushnaseeb insaan mann raha tha..wahi ab mai khude ko sab se dhukhi aur bebasse pa raha tha.
Bhagwan ne toh mujhe usse milaya tha par shaayad mainne bahut der kar dee usase apanee dil kee baat bataane me..shyaad bahot-bahot der... phir usane mujhase poochha.. ki tum kya kahana chaahate the ? main kya kahata tab..baat badal dee..aur vo chalee gayee...aur main vahee baithe rah gaya....mujhe use apana banaane ka bas ek sapana hee tha shaayad.......jo ek samay pe aa ka toot gaya....vo aaj ka din aur pahala din...maano kyon aaya tha meree jindagee main ab tak ye baat samajh nahee aaya.... pahala din bhee ek sapane kee tarah aaee aur kuchh der baad toot gayee...aur ye aaj ka pal..jo phir se ek sapana banakar pal mai toot gaya........ iseelie doston kabhee bhee apanee dil kee baat bataane me der na karo... varana itana der ho jaata hai ki....apane pyaar ko bas sapane main hee apana banaana pad jaata hai... aur jab essa hota hai na toh sach kahta hu jaan toh nahin niklti par jindagi bemtlab se lagne lagti hai. Har par ek ajjeb sa khalipan mehshossh hota hai. Isse liye agae aap kisi se pyaar karte ho toh usse apne dil ka haal bata do..kahi essa na ho ki aap sahi waqt ka intezaar karte rahe aur aapko pata chale ki waqt hi nahin raha...

-The End​

Bhai pahle toh aapko congratulations aur himmat ki daad Deni padegi ki aap isme participate kar rahe ho.
Bhai sahi kahu toh kahani thodi romantic hai. But writing skill thik hai. Kahani aur acchi ho sakti thi. But at the end it was nice.....
Keep entertaining like this...

 

[Soku74]

[H1]~Preem milan~[/H1]
Rahul aaj apne ghar me udash sa baitha hua tha kya nahi tha uske pass uncha ohda rupya paisa naukar chakar aur bahut bada bangla sabkuch tha lekin fir bhi udash baitha tha wo kyu ish ko samjhne ke liye hamko uske piche samai Jo hua un ghatnaon ko samjhna hoga.
To kahani ki suruaat hoti hai Raaj Jo ek safal businessman tha aur unki chulbuli sararati wife Dr.Naina ji aur in dono ke pyaar ki nishani Rahul unka pyara beta jishme un dono ki jaan basti thi.lekin Rahul bachpan se bahut sararati tha itna sararati tha ki Jo bhi milta so uski naak me dam kar deta tha ye dekhkar Raaj ko kabhi kabhi bahut gussa aata tha lekin Rahul ki mom ko usse bada masoom duniya me nai dikhta tha aur Raaj waise to bahut gusse wale the lekin apni biwi ke aage unki kuch nai chalti thi to ishiliye Rahul bahut jiddi aur bilkul careless tipe ka banda ban gaya tha..Rahul jab college me pahuncha to wahan wo pahli baar kisi ke preem jaal me fans gaya Jo ek bahut hi bholi pyari masoom ek minute yahan masoom ka matlab wo sach wala masoom hai okay..to us ladki ka naam tha Mahi jiske pyaar me Rahul fans gaya aur bahut kosish ke baad Mahi ko bhi usse pyaar ho gaya dono sath rahte ghumte firte enjoy karte (enjoy ko sex na samjhna) Mahi aur Rahul ki pyaar ki bhanak ek din story ke khalnayak yani ki Raaj ji tak pahunch gayi to ek din wo khud mahi ke ghar jakar usse mile.. Mahi ke mata pita hairaan the ki itna bada aadmi unke yahan aaya hai..khair Raaj achcha insaan tha sabse pyaar se mila aur usne Mahi se Kahan ki Rahul ki sonch aur Zindagi jine ka Jo tarika usse undono aage jakar bahut problem hogi life me kyuki Rahul jimmedar nahi hai aur isks piche uski ma ka hath hai mai chahta hun tum meri madad karo aur Rahul ko jindgi me jimmedar insaan banane me meri taki tum dono baad me khus raho..mahi me puncha kya karna hoga to unhone kaha ki tum Rahul ko chhod do ye bolkar ki tumhari khud ki koi pahchan nai hai ishiliye mai tumhare sath nai rah sakti hum dono ke rashte alag hain..iske baad wo chale gaye to mahi ke maa baap ne bhi wahi kaha usko ki Raaj ji bilkul sahi baat bolkar gaye hain jaisa unhone bola hai waisa karo..mahi ka dil nai maan raha tha lekin do botal vodka pikar usne Rahul ka dil tod diya bahut buri tarah se.. breakup ke baad Rahul bilkul bikhar sa gaya usko uski mom ne badi muskil se samhala usko bolkar ki kahe pareshan hota hai mai tere liye line laga dungi tension mat lo lekin Rahul ko baat dil me lag gayi thi usko kaamyaab banna tha har haal me..

Rahul ne dhere dhere khud ko badalna suru kiya aur wo kamyaab raha aur apni ma ki tarah wo bhi doctor bankar kuch din baad baad papa ka business join kar liya kyuki uske papa ka business bahut bada tha aur wo eklauta tha to ushi ko dekhna tha..7 shaal bahut hota hai duniya badal jati hai log badal jate hain Rahul ki kismat bhi badal gayi thi lekin insaan ki fitrat hai Jo hota hai uska sukh kam Jo nahi hota hai uska gum Jada hota hai to ishiliye aaj Rahul udas tha use wo gujre hue lamhe yaad aa rahe tha waise wo apni life me aage badh chuka tha lekin idhar kuch din se uske papa uski shadi ke liye usko bol rahe the ki ab waqt aa gaya koi ladki ho tumhari nazar me to bata do nahi to hum hi dhunte hain kisi ko.. Rahul ko fir kisi se pyaar na hua dobara wo aaj bhi us gum ko bhula nai tha usko kisi ladki par yakin nai tha.. Rahul ne bol diya usko shadi nai karni kisi se to Raaj ne kaha ek ladki hai meri nazar me usse mil lo ek baar aur aaj wo ladki milne aa rahi thi aur idhar ye Rahul udas ho gaya tha purani baten sonchkar wo apna gujra hua Kal bhul nai pa raha tha.kuch der me uske papa ki aur mom aur mom uske pass aaye aur bole taiyaar ho jao hum ladki ke ghar chal rahe hain..Rahul ko lekar wo log chal diye aur Rahul apni sonch me gum tha kuch der baad Rahul ko wo rashta kuch Jana pahchana laga kyuki ye rashta to mahi ke ghar jata tha aur had to tab ho gayi jab wo log mahi ke ghar ke aage ruke Jo aaj bahut saja dhaja hua tha..Rahul ne puncha yahan kyu aaye hum log to uske papa ne bola aaj mahi ki sagai hai jisko sun Kar Rahul ko mare gussa aur dukh ke pareshan ho gaya

Rahul jab kafi samjhane ke baad Mahi ke ghar ke andar gaya Jahan mahi ke papa bahut pyaar se mile aur sabko unhone chai nasta karaya uske baad mahi ko bulaya gaya to pata chali ki emergency case aa gaya hai ishiliye mahi ko Jana pada hai kyuki mahi ka koi dost hai jisko koi problem hui hai to usko Jana pada achanak se..ye sunkar Rahul hairaan ho gaya ki mahi bhi doctor ban gayi thi filhaal sab intzaar karte rahe aur mehmaan log sab kha pikar chale gaye dhire dhire han ek baat notice ki Rahul ne ki wo ladka na mila usko jiski mahi ke sath sagai honi thi aaj..fir wo log bhi ghar aa gaye kyuki mahi lo pata nai kitna time lagna tha

Ghar aakar Rahul apne dad se lad gaya ki usko wahan lekar kyu gaye the to Naina ne usko bataya ki jis ladke ke sath mahi ki sagai honi thi wo aur koi nai tum ho to Rahul ne kaha ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai tab Raaj ne usse mafi mangte hue usko Puri baat batai.. unhone bataya ki mahi ne kaha ki Rahul kuch bane na bane to bhi wo Rahul ke sath rahegi Han wo khud ko is qabil banayegi ki agar Rahul jindgi me nakaamyaab bhi hua to wo samhaal legi sab akele hi har haal me usko Rahul ka sath chahiye..To uske papa ne usko Naina ko hawale Kar diya Jo uspar bahut gussa thi lekin Puri baat samjhkar unhone uski help ki aur doctor ban gayi to ab wo dono hi Life me safal the to ab uski shadi fix ki gayi thi..ye sab Rahul pareshan ho gaya mahi se Milne ke liye

Dusre din Rahul jakar mahi se mila sare gile sikwe door hue dono ke fir dhum dhaam se shadi ho gayi dono ki jish me Rahul ka khas dost ladkiyon ke sath nach ga raha tha aur gana tha ye wala...


Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Kalle ka khot koi na
Gella mere yaar kameene gella mere yaar kameene
Yaari ki kasam khavan ke
Pad gaye manne peg ye peene pad gaye manne peg ye peene
Bottle meri....bottle meri.......
Reh ri aadhi isne koyi khoso na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Banda main gental mental ho gaya pee ke angreji
Handle karni situation ghar kya ke shaami peshi
Arrey koyi na kar lenge handle
Aaj jee lo pee lo khul ke koi bhadak nai leni
Saare nacho khul ke DJ aaj poori raat baajan de beat
Jo roke saala uske maaro Itt
Repeat chala de gaane gel se mere saare yaar purane
Bhool ke zindagi ke roule saare bolo bam bam bhole
Om namah shivay
Sunn re bhai DJ aale
Laade tagda sa gaana laade tagda sa gaana
Baajan de yaar purane
Yaara ne dhumma thaana yaara ne dhumma thaana
Pal pal manne pal pal manne jeena
Aaj mere sir pe koyi bhoko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Khatri ki beats re
Arrey baajan de ne yaar khatri

Nice story bhai. Writing skill acchi hai.

 

[Soku74]

Kon Galath kon Sahi?​

Ye kahani hai Priya aur Sooraj ki. Dono ek dusre ke saath school me padte the. College me bhi dono saath the aur college me hi dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho gaya. Dono ka pyar ek dusre ke liye itna gehra tha ki college me sab jaante the ki inki marriage ho jaayegi. Aur ho bhi kyu na jab se inhone hosh sambhala hai aur inko pyaar ka mtlab samjhe aaya hai tab se inn dono ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maan liya hai...aur in dono ka rahne ka tarika aur ek dusre ke liye vo deewangi sabko ye samjhane ke liye kaafi thi ki ye dono ek dusree se sacha wala pyaar karte hai.

Dono ko ek dusre ki bhoutee jayada fiker thi. Yee kahna galath nahin tha ki ye do jism aur ek jaan the. Chote ek ko pahochti thi par dard dono ko hota tha. Jab ek baar Sooraj ka bike se accident ho gaya tha tab priya 1 mahine tak chain se so nahin paae. Dinn raat bus sooraj ka dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse kis time konsi medicience deni hai kab konsi tube lagani hai , sab ka dhyaan priya rakhti thi. Aur jab priya ko tonsil huva tab sooraj uska dhyaan rakhta tha....college ki canteen me jab bhi Priya Ice Cream khati thi to Sooraj use aksar kehta tha " Priya…Ice Cream mat khao, sardi lag jayegi" Sooraj Priya ki bahut care karta tha aur kabhi ice cream nahi khane deta tha. Kuch bhi jayada thanda ho ya koe khatai vo priya ko usse khane nahin deta tha...kyuki doctor ne priya ko inn sabhi ke liye mana kiya tha.

College khatam hone ke baad Sooraj ki ek acchi company me job lag gayi aura ab Sooraj jaldi se Priya ke saath shadi karna chahta tha...aur life mai settle hona chata tha.
Ek din dono saath me baithe the aur dono ne apne ghar marriage ki baat karne ka faisla kiya... ye faisla unhone bhoute pahle hi kar liya tha par dono ko darr tha aur vo bhi bewajah nahin. Dono alag alag caste se the , iss karan dono ko andesha tha ki agar undono ne apne gharwalo se shaadi ki baat ki toh vo inn dono ka milna bhi bande kara denge...iss liye dono ne graduation ka wait kiya aur ye decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono apne pairo par khade nahin ho jaate tab tak vo shaadi ki baat apne gharwalo se bilkul nahin karenge. Aur jab ab vo dono apne apne pairo par khade ho chuke the toh dono ne ye faisla kiya.

Dono ghar gaye aur dono ne apne-apne maa baap ko apne pyar ke bare me bataya. Dono ke rishtey me sabse badi rukavat thi unki caste. Sooraj pandit caste se tha aur Priya Rajpoot caste se thi. Jab Priya ne apne gharwalo ko Sooraj ke bare me bataya to wo bahut naraz huye lekin aakhirkaar maan gaye. Kyunki, unhone socha ki ladka padha likha hai aur acchi naukri bhi karta hai isliye unhe zyada problem nahi thi.

Jab Sooraj ne apni family se Priya ke bare me baat ki to unke oopar to jaise dukh ka pahad hi toot gaya ho. Sooraj ke pita ne is rishtey ke liye saaf mana kar diya. Lekin Sooraj Priya se saccha pyar karta tha aur har haal me usi se shadi karna chahta tha, isliye wo bhi zidd par ada raha aur usne ghar chodne ki dhamki de di. Itna sunte hi Sooraj ke pita ko heart attack aa gaya. Sooraj aur uski maa Sooraj ke pita ko hospital le kar gaye. Waha Sooraj ki maa ne bataya ki "Tumhare pita ne tumhare liye ladki dhoond li thi aur wo tumse baat karne wale the. Unhone ladki ke parivar se bhi baat kar li thi. Ab tum please Nisha se shadi ke liye maan jao"

Sooraj ek dharam sankate mai ghire gaya tha. Ek taraf uske pitah the jenhone aaj tak uski har khawaish puri ki. Usse aaj iss kaabil banaya ki wo apne pairo par khada ho sake. Uske pitah ne na jaane kitni taklif sahane ki aur sooraj ko padhaya aur kaabil banaya. Aaj sooraj agar kaamyab tha toh uske kaamyabi ke liye uski pitah ne bhoute kuch koorbaan kiya tha. Apna sapna..apna jeevan...sab kuch.

Wahi dusri taraf thi Sooraj ki dhadkan uski priya jeesne har pal uska saath diya. Sooraj ke har kadam ki prerna thi priya. Uske har kadam par prerna ne uska saath diya tha...jab jab sooraj ko jarurate thi prerna uske saath khadi thi.

Ab Sooraj esi dharm sakate mai tha, ki vo kise chunne. Agar vo priya ko chunta hai toh ek Aashique toh jeet jaega par ek beta haar jaaega...aur ho sakta hai iss haar ka bojh usse apne pitah ki mout se chukana pade.
Aur agar vo apne pitah ko chunta hai toh ek beta toh jeet jaaega par ek aashique mar jaae ga.
Priya wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj shadi karna chahta tha aur Nisha wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj ke pita uski shadi karvana chahte the.
Bete aur Aashique ke iss janug mai koe bhi jeete par haar toh sooraj ki hi honi thi. Agar usse apni zindagi roshan karni thi toh usse uski maa ke jeevan par grahan lagana tha...aur agar nahin toh apne jeevan par.
Aakhir pita aur pyaar ke bich sooraj ne pitah ko chuna... Sooraj haar gaya aur usne Nisha se shadi kar li.

Shadi se pehle Sooraj aur Priya ne ek dusre se phone par baat bhi ki thi, bahut roye the dono aur dono ne ye kurbani dedi. Sooraj ne apne pitah ke liye aur Priya ne sooraj ke liye. Priya ne sooraj se kaha tha " Sooraj , Maa -Baap badee naishbo se milte hai... hum bacho ke liye wo kitna kuch sahte hai ye hum andaza bhi nahin laga sakte...unhe taklif dekar hum kabhi kush nahin rah sakte...Jab humne pyaar kiya tha tab hum anjaane the par aaj sabkuch jaan kar apno ki kabar par hum ishq ki imaarate nahin bana sakte...Hum humesha acche dost rahenge par jeevansaathi bnne na ...humari kismate mai nahin"
Aur ye kah kar Priya ne phone cut kar diya uss raat dono koob roe the...aakho ke aasu sookh chuke the par dil tha jo chup hone ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.Waqt beeta par usse dine ke baad Sooraj ne Priya ko kabhi call nahi kiya aur na hi Priya ne Sooraj ko.

After 5 Years (5 Saal Baad)

Paanch saal baad Sooraj ke college ka reunion tha aur Sooraj ko bhi invitation tha. Isliye, Sooraj apni wife Nisha ke saath college reunion me jaata hai aur waha Priya ko dekhkar surprised ho jaata hai. Old memories uske dimag me ghoomne lagti hai. Priya apne husband ke saath aayi thi. Almost sabhi ki shadi ho chuki thi aur sab khush lag rahe the.

Reunion party ke end me Sooraj aur Nisha lunch kar rahe the. Unke saath me 2 seats bhi khali thi aur Priya ke husband ne Priya se waha baithne ko kaha. Abe k baar fir Sooraj aur Priya aamne saamne the lekin waha par sirf khamoshi thi.

Abhi Sooraj lunch kar hi raha tha ki Priya ice cream lekar aa jati hai aur khane lagti hai lekin tabhi Sooraj ke zuban se nikal jaata hai "Priya….ice cream mat khana varna sardi lag jaayegi.."

Priya aur Sooraj ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai aur……. Silence…….

Sirf khamoshi………

Priya ke husband aur Sooraj ki wife sab kuch samajh jaate hai lekin kuch nahi bolte.

Friends, kya aapko lagta hai ki ye kahani yaha par end ho sakti hai? Nahi….Bilkul Nahi.

Sooraj ke pita ne apni zidd aur shaan ke liye sirf sooraj ki hi nahi balki 4 zindagiyan barbad kar di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye charo kabhi khushi se reh payenge. Yakeenan Sooraj aur Priya ek dusre se saccha pyar karte the lekin maa baap ki zidd kea aage haar gaye.
Par yaha Galath kon hai,
Kya Sooraj aur Priya galath hai?
Jenhone ne ye faisla kiya ki unki prem kahani ki kaamyabi se kahi jayada jaruri hai unke gharwalo ke khushiya.
Kya unke life partner galath hai?
Jo shayad apne maa baap ki baat maante huwe kisi anjaan se shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gae.
Kya unke maa baap galath hai?
Jenke faisle galath ho sakte hai par unki niyate kabhi galath nahin ho sakti jo kewale apne baacho ka bhala chahte hai.
Kon Galath kon Sahi?
Jawab bus yahi ki pta nahin.
Isse kahani ko padh kar aap kya feel kar rahe ho comment me zarur bataye ga.

The End

Nice story bhai.....
Ek dam masssttt.....
Koi v galat nhi tha sab apne maa pita se pyaar karte hai. Sab yahi karte joh sooraj ne kiya.
Good story.... Padke maza aya bhai...

 

[Destiny]

Kon Galath kon Sahi?​

Ye kahani hai Priya aur Sooraj ki. Dono ek dusre ke saath school me padte the. College me bhi dono saath the aur college me hi dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho gaya. Dono ka pyar ek dusre ke liye itna gehra tha ki college me sab jaante the ki inki marriage ho jaayegi. Aur ho bhi kyu na jab se inhone hosh sambhala hai aur inko pyaar ka mtlab samjhe aaya hai tab se inn dono ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maan liya hai...aur in dono ka rahne ka tarika aur ek dusre ke liye vo deewangi sabko ye samjhane ke liye kaafi thi ki ye dono ek dusree se sacha wala pyaar karte hai.

Dono ko ek dusre ki bhoutee jayada fiker thi. Yee kahna galath nahin tha ki ye do jism aur ek jaan the. Chote ek ko pahochti thi par dard dono ko hota tha. Jab ek baar Sooraj ka bike se accident ho gaya tha tab priya 1 mahine tak chain se so nahin paae. Dinn raat bus sooraj ka dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse kis time konsi medicience deni hai kab konsi tube lagani hai , sab ka dhyaan priya rakhti thi. Aur jab priya ko tonsil huva tab sooraj uska dhyaan rakhta tha....college ki canteen me jab bhi Priya Ice Cream khati thi to Sooraj use aksar kehta tha " Priya…Ice Cream mat khao, sardi lag jayegi" Sooraj Priya ki bahut care karta tha aur kabhi ice cream nahi khane deta tha. Kuch bhi jayada thanda ho ya koe khatai vo priya ko usse khane nahin deta tha...kyuki doctor ne priya ko inn sabhi ke liye mana kiya tha.

College khatam hone ke baad Sooraj ki ek acchi company me job lag gayi aura ab Sooraj jaldi se Priya ke saath shadi karna chahta tha...aur life mai settle hona chata tha.
Ek din dono saath me baithe the aur dono ne apne ghar marriage ki baat karne ka faisla kiya... ye faisla unhone bhoute pahle hi kar liya tha par dono ko darr tha aur vo bhi bewajah nahin. Dono alag alag caste se the , iss karan dono ko andesha tha ki agar undono ne apne gharwalo se shaadi ki baat ki toh vo inn dono ka milna bhi bande kara denge...iss liye dono ne graduation ka wait kiya aur ye decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono apne pairo par khade nahin ho jaate tab tak vo shaadi ki baat apne gharwalo se bilkul nahin karenge. Aur jab ab vo dono apne apne pairo par khade ho chuke the toh dono ne ye faisla kiya.

Dono ghar gaye aur dono ne apne-apne maa baap ko apne pyar ke bare me bataya. Dono ke rishtey me sabse badi rukavat thi unki caste. Sooraj pandit caste se tha aur Priya Rajpoot caste se thi. Jab Priya ne apne gharwalo ko Sooraj ke bare me bataya to wo bahut naraz huye lekin aakhirkaar maan gaye. Kyunki, unhone socha ki ladka padha likha hai aur acchi naukri bhi karta hai isliye unhe zyada problem nahi thi.

Jab Sooraj ne apni family se Priya ke bare me baat ki to unke oopar to jaise dukh ka pahad hi toot gaya ho. Sooraj ke pita ne is rishtey ke liye saaf mana kar diya. Lekin Sooraj Priya se saccha pyar karta tha aur har haal me usi se shadi karna chahta tha, isliye wo bhi zidd par ada raha aur usne ghar chodne ki dhamki de di. Itna sunte hi Sooraj ke pita ko heart attack aa gaya. Sooraj aur uski maa Sooraj ke pita ko hospital le kar gaye. Waha Sooraj ki maa ne bataya ki "Tumhare pita ne tumhare liye ladki dhoond li thi aur wo tumse baat karne wale the. Unhone ladki ke parivar se bhi baat kar li thi. Ab tum please Nisha se shadi ke liye maan jao"

Sooraj ek dharam sankate mai ghire gaya tha. Ek taraf uske pitah the jenhone aaj tak uski har khawaish puri ki. Usse aaj iss kaabil banaya ki wo apne pairo par khada ho sake. Uske pitah ne na jaane kitni taklif sahane ki aur sooraj ko padhaya aur kaabil banaya. Aaj sooraj agar kaamyab tha toh uske kaamyabi ke liye uski pitah ne bhoute kuch koorbaan kiya tha. Apna sapna..apna jeevan...sab kuch.

Wahi dusri taraf thi Sooraj ki dhadkan uski priya jeesne har pal uska saath diya. Sooraj ke har kadam ki prerna thi priya. Uske har kadam par prerna ne uska saath diya tha...jab jab sooraj ko jarurate thi prerna uske saath khadi thi.

Ab Sooraj esi dharm sakate mai tha, ki vo kise chunne. Agar vo priya ko chunta hai toh ek Aashique toh jeet jaega par ek beta haar jaaega...aur ho sakta hai iss haar ka bojh usse apne pitah ki mout se chukana pade.
Aur agar vo apne pitah ko chunta hai toh ek beta toh jeet jaaega par ek aashique mar jaae ga.
Priya wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj shadi karna chahta tha aur Nisha wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj ke pita uski shadi karvana chahte the.
Bete aur Aashique ke iss janug mai koe bhi jeete par haar toh sooraj ki hi honi thi. Agar usse apni zindagi roshan karni thi toh usse uski maa ke jeevan par grahan lagana tha...aur agar nahin toh apne jeevan par.
Aakhir pita aur pyaar ke bich sooraj ne pitah ko chuna... Sooraj haar gaya aur usne Nisha se shadi kar li.

Shadi se pehle Sooraj aur Priya ne ek dusre se phone par baat bhi ki thi, bahut roye the dono aur dono ne ye kurbani dedi. Sooraj ne apne pitah ke liye aur Priya ne sooraj ke liye. Priya ne sooraj se kaha tha " Sooraj , Maa -Baap badee naishbo se milte hai... hum bacho ke liye wo kitna kuch sahte hai ye hum andaza bhi nahin laga sakte...unhe taklif dekar hum kabhi kush nahin rah sakte...Jab humne pyaar kiya tha tab hum anjaane the par aaj sabkuch jaan kar apno ki kabar par hum ishq ki imaarate nahin bana sakte...Hum humesha acche dost rahenge par jeevansaathi bnne na ...humari kismate mai nahin"
Aur ye kah kar Priya ne phone cut kar diya uss raat dono koob roe the...aakho ke aasu sookh chuke the par dil tha jo chup hone ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.Waqt beeta par usse dine ke baad Sooraj ne Priya ko kabhi call nahi kiya aur na hi Priya ne Sooraj ko.

After 5 Years (5 Saal Baad)

Paanch saal baad Sooraj ke college ka reunion tha aur Sooraj ko bhi invitation tha. Isliye, Sooraj apni wife Nisha ke saath college reunion me jaata hai aur waha Priya ko dekhkar surprised ho jaata hai. Old memories uske dimag me ghoomne lagti hai. Priya apne husband ke saath aayi thi. Almost sabhi ki shadi ho chuki thi aur sab khush lag rahe the.

Reunion party ke end me Sooraj aur Nisha lunch kar rahe the. Unke saath me 2 seats bhi khali thi aur Priya ke husband ne Priya se waha baithne ko kaha. Abe k baar fir Sooraj aur Priya aamne saamne the lekin waha par sirf khamoshi thi.

Abhi Sooraj lunch kar hi raha tha ki Priya ice cream lekar aa jati hai aur khane lagti hai lekin tabhi Sooraj ke zuban se nikal jaata hai "Priya….ice cream mat khana varna sardi lag jaayegi.."

Priya aur Sooraj ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai aur……. Silence…….

Sirf khamoshi………

Priya ke husband aur Sooraj ki wife sab kuch samajh jaate hai lekin kuch nahi bolte.

Friends, kya aapko lagta hai ki ye kahani yaha par end ho sakti hai? Nahi….Bilkul Nahi.

Sooraj ke pita ne apni zidd aur shaan ke liye sirf sooraj ki hi nahi balki 4 zindagiyan barbad kar di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye charo kabhi khushi se reh payenge. Yakeenan Sooraj aur Priya ek dusre se saccha pyar karte the lekin maa baap ki zidd kea aage haar gaye.
Par yaha Galath kon hai,
Kya Sooraj aur Priya galath hai?
Jenhone ne ye faisla kiya ki unki prem kahani ki kaamyabi se kahi jayada jaruri hai unke gharwalo ke khushiya.
Kya unke life partner galath hai?
Jo shayad apne maa baap ki baat maante huwe kisi anjaan se shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gae.
Kya unke maa baap galath hai?
Jenke faisle galath ho sakte hai par unki niyate kabhi galath nahin ho sakti jo kewale apne baacho ka bhala chahte hai.
Kon Galath kon Sahi?
Jawab bus yahi ki pta nahin.
Isse kahani ko padh kar aap kya feel kar rahe ho comment me zarur bataye ga.

The End

Pyaar (प्यार) shavd hi adhura hai. Suraj aur priya do chahne walo ka pyaar anjam tak kaise pahuch pata. Dono ek dusre ka khayal bakhubi rakhte the. Dono ko pata tha kise kis chiz se pareshani hai chahe vo khane ki chiz hi kyu na ho. Sach me dono ek dusre ka purak the. Jevan shathi ka matlab ye nehi ki samjh ke samne ghathbandhan kar liya aur ho gaye ek dusre ke, balki jivan shati ka matlab hota hai ek dusre ko samjhna ek dusre ka sabhi paristhiti me saath dena, paristhiti bhale hi kaisa ho. Suraj aur priya dono ek dusre ko ache se samjhte the aur dono ek dusre ka acha jivan sathi ban sakte the. Par aisa ho na saka kyu?

Is kyu ke piche kai karan hai. Aur sabse bada karan hai balidan dono ne apne pyaar ka balidan kar diya sirf is liye ki suraj ke baap khush nehi the lekin suraj ke bap kyu khush nehi the. Unki man samman aur vachan ade jo aa raha tha. Vachan tutne ke dar ne un par vjraghat kiya aur unhe hrdayagat aaya gaya.

Islye mere najar me suraj ke bap ka diya vachan galt tha. Bina soche samjhe bina puche kisi ko aisa vachan hi kyu dena jisse sirf jindegiya barvad hoga aur kuch nehi aur suraj ke bap ke diye ek vachan ne char jindgiya varbad kar diya.

Bahut khoob kam shavdo me samjh ke sachai ko badi khubi se racha gaya. Dost apki racha tarif ke kavil hai aur jitni tarif kiya jaye kaam hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

 

[Devil Junaid]

Kon Galath kon Sahi?​

Ye kahani hai Priya aur Sooraj ki. Dono ek dusre ke saath school me padte the. College me bhi dono saath the aur college me hi dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho gaya. Dono ka pyar ek dusre ke liye itna gehra tha ki college me sab jaante the ki inki marriage ho jaayegi. Aur ho bhi kyu na jab se inhone hosh sambhala hai aur inko pyaar ka mtlab samjhe aaya hai tab se inn dono ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maan liya hai...aur in dono ka rahne ka tarika aur ek dusre ke liye vo deewangi sabko ye samjhane ke liye kaafi thi ki ye dono ek dusree se sacha wala pyaar karte hai.

Dono ko ek dusre ki bhoutee jayada fiker thi. Yee kahna galath nahin tha ki ye do jism aur ek jaan the. Chote ek ko pahochti thi par dard dono ko hota tha. Jab ek baar Sooraj ka bike se accident ho gaya tha tab priya 1 mahine tak chain se so nahin paae. Dinn raat bus sooraj ka dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse kis time konsi medicience deni hai kab konsi tube lagani hai , sab ka dhyaan priya rakhti thi. Aur jab priya ko tonsil huva tab sooraj uska dhyaan rakhta tha....college ki canteen me jab bhi Priya Ice Cream khati thi to Sooraj use aksar kehta tha " Priya…Ice Cream mat khao, sardi lag jayegi" Sooraj Priya ki bahut care karta tha aur kabhi ice cream nahi khane deta tha. Kuch bhi jayada thanda ho ya koe khatai vo priya ko usse khane nahin deta tha...kyuki doctor ne priya ko inn sabhi ke liye mana kiya tha.

College khatam hone ke baad Sooraj ki ek acchi company me job lag gayi aura ab Sooraj jaldi se Priya ke saath shadi karna chahta tha...aur life mai settle hona chata tha.
Ek din dono saath me baithe the aur dono ne apne ghar marriage ki baat karne ka faisla kiya... ye faisla unhone bhoute pahle hi kar liya tha par dono ko darr tha aur vo bhi bewajah nahin. Dono alag alag caste se the , iss karan dono ko andesha tha ki agar undono ne apne gharwalo se shaadi ki baat ki toh vo inn dono ka milna bhi bande kara denge...iss liye dono ne graduation ka wait kiya aur ye decide kiya ki jab tak vo dono apne pairo par khade nahin ho jaate tab tak vo shaadi ki baat apne gharwalo se bilkul nahin karenge. Aur jab ab vo dono apne apne pairo par khade ho chuke the toh dono ne ye faisla kiya.

Dono ghar gaye aur dono ne apne-apne maa baap ko apne pyar ke bare me bataya. Dono ke rishtey me sabse badi rukavat thi unki caste. Sooraj pandit caste se tha aur Priya Rajpoot caste se thi. Jab Priya ne apne gharwalo ko Sooraj ke bare me bataya to wo bahut naraz huye lekin aakhirkaar maan gaye. Kyunki, unhone socha ki ladka padha likha hai aur acchi naukri bhi karta hai isliye unhe zyada problem nahi thi.

Jab Sooraj ne apni family se Priya ke bare me baat ki to unke oopar to jaise dukh ka pahad hi toot gaya ho. Sooraj ke pita ne is rishtey ke liye saaf mana kar diya. Lekin Sooraj Priya se saccha pyar karta tha aur har haal me usi se shadi karna chahta tha, isliye wo bhi zidd par ada raha aur usne ghar chodne ki dhamki de di. Itna sunte hi Sooraj ke pita ko heart attack aa gaya. Sooraj aur uski maa Sooraj ke pita ko hospital le kar gaye. Waha Sooraj ki maa ne bataya ki "Tumhare pita ne tumhare liye ladki dhoond li thi aur wo tumse baat karne wale the. Unhone ladki ke parivar se bhi baat kar li thi. Ab tum please Nisha se shadi ke liye maan jao"

Sooraj ek dharam sankate mai ghire gaya tha. Ek taraf uske pitah the jenhone aaj tak uski har khawaish puri ki. Usse aaj iss kaabil banaya ki wo apne pairo par khada ho sake. Uske pitah ne na jaane kitni taklif sahane ki aur sooraj ko padhaya aur kaabil banaya. Aaj sooraj agar kaamyab tha toh uske kaamyabi ke liye uski pitah ne bhoute kuch koorbaan kiya tha. Apna sapna..apna jeevan...sab kuch.

Wahi dusri taraf thi Sooraj ki dhadkan uski priya jeesne har pal uska saath diya. Sooraj ke har kadam ki prerna thi priya. Uske har kadam par prerna ne uska saath diya tha...jab jab sooraj ko jarurate thi prerna uske saath khadi thi.

Ab Sooraj esi dharm sakate mai tha, ki vo kise chunne. Agar vo priya ko chunta hai toh ek Aashique toh jeet jaega par ek beta haar jaaega...aur ho sakta hai iss haar ka bojh usse apne pitah ki mout se chukana pade.
Aur agar vo apne pitah ko chunta hai toh ek beta toh jeet jaaega par ek aashique mar jaae ga.
Priya wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj shadi karna chahta tha aur Nisha wo ladki thi jisse Sooraj ke pita uski shadi karvana chahte the.
Bete aur Aashique ke iss janug mai koe bhi jeete par haar toh sooraj ki hi honi thi. Agar usse apni zindagi roshan karni thi toh usse uski maa ke jeevan par grahan lagana tha...aur agar nahin toh apne jeevan par.
Aakhir pita aur pyaar ke bich sooraj ne pitah ko chuna... Sooraj haar gaya aur usne Nisha se shadi kar li.

Shadi se pehle Sooraj aur Priya ne ek dusre se phone par baat bhi ki thi, bahut roye the dono aur dono ne ye kurbani dedi. Sooraj ne apne pitah ke liye aur Priya ne sooraj ke liye. Priya ne sooraj se kaha tha " Sooraj , Maa -Baap badee naishbo se milte hai... hum bacho ke liye wo kitna kuch sahte hai ye hum andaza bhi nahin laga sakte...unhe taklif dekar hum kabhi kush nahin rah sakte...Jab humne pyaar kiya tha tab hum anjaane the par aaj sabkuch jaan kar apno ki kabar par hum ishq ki imaarate nahin bana sakte...Hum humesha acche dost rahenge par jeevansaathi bnne na ...humari kismate mai nahin"
Aur ye kah kar Priya ne phone cut kar diya uss raat dono koob roe the...aakho ke aasu sookh chuke the par dil tha jo chup hone ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.Waqt beeta par usse dine ke baad Sooraj ne Priya ko kabhi call nahi kiya aur na hi Priya ne Sooraj ko.

After 5 Years (5 Saal Baad)

Paanch saal baad Sooraj ke college ka reunion tha aur Sooraj ko bhi invitation tha. Isliye, Sooraj apni wife Nisha ke saath college reunion me jaata hai aur waha Priya ko dekhkar surprised ho jaata hai. Old memories uske dimag me ghoomne lagti hai. Priya apne husband ke saath aayi thi. Almost sabhi ki shadi ho chuki thi aur sab khush lag rahe the.

Reunion party ke end me Sooraj aur Nisha lunch kar rahe the. Unke saath me 2 seats bhi khali thi aur Priya ke husband ne Priya se waha baithne ko kaha. Abe k baar fir Sooraj aur Priya aamne saamne the lekin waha par sirf khamoshi thi.

Abhi Sooraj lunch kar hi raha tha ki Priya ice cream lekar aa jati hai aur khane lagti hai lekin tabhi Sooraj ke zuban se nikal jaata hai "Priya….ice cream mat khana varna sardi lag jaayegi.."

Priya aur Sooraj ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai aur……. Silence…….

Sirf khamoshi………

Priya ke husband aur Sooraj ki wife sab kuch samajh jaate hai lekin kuch nahi bolte.

Friends, kya aapko lagta hai ki ye kahani yaha par end ho sakti hai? Nahi….Bilkul Nahi.

Sooraj ke pita ne apni zidd aur shaan ke liye sirf sooraj ki hi nahi balki 4 zindagiyan barbad kar di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye charo kabhi khushi se reh payenge. Yakeenan Sooraj aur Priya ek dusre se saccha pyar karte the lekin maa baap ki zidd kea aage haar gaye.
Par yaha Galath kon hai,
Kya Sooraj aur Priya galath hai?
Jenhone ne ye faisla kiya ki unki prem kahani ki kaamyabi se kahi jayada jaruri hai unke gharwalo ke khushiya.
Kya unke life partner galath hai?
Jo shayad apne maa baap ki baat maante huwe kisi anjaan se shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gae.
Kya unke maa baap galath hai?
Jenke faisle galath ho sakte hai par unki niyate kabhi galath nahin ho sakti jo kewale apne baacho ka bhala chahte hai.
Kon Galath kon Sahi?
Jawab bus yahi ki pta nahin.
Isse kahani ko padh kar aap kya feel kar rahe ho comment me zarur bataye ga.

The End

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