Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Reviews & Comments Thread

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​ I can't write without a reader. It's precisely like a kiss—you can't do it alone. ​ ~ John Cheever Readers are an important part and parcel of Lustyweb , so when Writers get a prize for churning out the best story, why should readers be left behind, as they are the one's who keep motivating writers to keep churning out imaginations and keep writing stories. For the first time ever we will be recognizing and rewarding the effort of readers. Attempts on giving positive, genuine and encouraging reviews for stories will be rewarded with best readers award + like reactions for being the "Best Reader"​

On behalf of the admin team I invite you all to take part in
Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 and wish all the Reviewer best of luck.​

Prizes​
Winner : + 5,000 Like Reactions + 30 Day sticky thread (Story Section) ​
Ist Runner up : + 4,000 Like Reactions + 7 Day Sticky Thread (Story Section) ​
II nd Runner Up : 3,500 Like Reactions​
Best Reader : + 3,000 Like Reactions​
Best Reader : Ist Runner Up : 2,500 Like Reactions​
Best Reader : II nd Runner Up : 2,000 Like Reactions​
Bonus : Members reporting Copied Stories with Valid Proof will get 100 Like Reactions per Each Report.​

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Important : Participants are requested to take negative reviews also sportingly and do not panic and end up deleting their stories. Also note that reviews posted here are the individual reactions of the readers and these do not influence Judges.

We are giving respect to all reviewer and their comments , but we will not tolerate if someone intentionally criticize any story or writer. In this contest all genre of stories are allowed,if you don't like any story then move to your favorite genre but don't give any harsh comments. Detailed reviews are welcome and Best reader will be selected from qualified reviews.

Dear Fellow Lustywebiyans

This thread is only for posting reviews on the stories submitted in the contest.
Please note no counter discussions and replies would be entertained in this thread. For that please use the
Lustyweb's Story Contest 2022 ➤Chit Chat & Discussion Thread
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& Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Rules And Queries.
Please refrain from spamming and doing chit chat on this thread. There would be strict action against defaulters.

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STORY~ Humari adhuri prem kahanee WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ ~Preem milan~ WRITER~ Aanand ​

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STORY~ Kon Galath Kon Sahi? WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Veerakshi ki Love Story WRITER~ Aakesh. ​

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STORY~ Virgin Seal Tooti, Lekin L***d Ki WRITER~ ELIXIR ​

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STORY~ Sanyog A true love WRITER~ Destiny ​

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STORY~ Hadh se jayada kuch bhi nahin WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ EK SAFAR…( AN UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY) WRITER~ Ares ​

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STORY~ Mannat ke Diye WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Rishi aur Dolly ki Love Story WRITER~ Rapchik Rishi ​

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STORY~ BACHPAN KA PYAAR MERA BHOOL NAHIN JANA RE WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ wo ishk jo hum se rooth gayaa… WRITER~ rusty blade ​

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3.​	Destiny​	​
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STORY~ Lagi Lund Ki Lagan, Chudi Sajan Ke Sange WRITER~ iMUNISH ​

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STORY~ ~khusi jiwan ki~ WRITER~ Rubal ​

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STORY~ Ishq hi toh hain WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Pachtawa WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Priya ka Pyaar Mujhe par Shumaar WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Ae dil hai mushkil WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Aakhir Kyu??? WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Kya paya hai , Kya khoya hai WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Ishq Mein marjawan WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ ~Dard~ WRITER~ sumo ​

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STORY~ :YAADEN: WRITER~ kaliya ​

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STORY~ Facebook ka Pyaar WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Ghost Rider Ki Choti se Love Story WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ ~Pyaar ka ek safar ye bhi~ WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Dost Ka Baap Ban Gya WRITER~ ELIXIR ​

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STORY~ Internet ki Dunia WRITER~ ​

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STORY~ Aisa kyu huva.. WRITER~ rusty blade ​

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STORY~ एक प्यारा सा वादा WRITER~ DREAMBOY40 ​

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STORY~ ✮ Dark Matter ✮ WRITER~ TheBlackBlood ​

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STORY~ साजिश WRITER~ Mahi Maurya ​

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STORY~ कर्मों का फल WRITER~ Mahi Maurya ​

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STORY~ Kalpna ka Sapna WRITER~ XP 007 ​

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[Ahamdeepo]

Humari adhuri prem kahanee

Pyaar vo ehasaas hai, jo har kisee ko nahin hota. Ehasaas hi kyu ehasaaso ki ek khubshurate kahani hai. Par ye ehasaas sab ko nahin hota ya u kahu ki sab ke nasseb mai nahin hota.​

Pyaar vo samundar hai... jesme doob jaane ka mann karta hai. Pyaar vo manate hai jese har dil mangna ta hai. Par puri sirf kuch nasheeb walo ki hoti hai. Pyaar karna toh aasan hai par usse nibha pana muskil aur usse bhi muskil hai pyaar ka kamyab hona.
Par ye toh sach hai pyaar ehasaaso ki ek adhbhute kahani hai.
Yahee ek ehasaas main aapako bataana chaahata hoon...usse ehasaas se aap sabko bhi rubaru karana chahta hu.

Shaam ka samay tha .... aur main apane dost Anuj ka intajaar kar raha tha.
Steshan ke baahar... hamalog ka baahar kahee ghoomane jaane ka plaan tha aur main jaldee pahunch gaya tha...iska karan ye tha ki mujhe travel karna bhoute pasand hai. Alag alag jagah jaana logo se milna aur dosto ke saath waqt guzarna.
Mujhe ye sab pasand tha iss liye mai waqt se pahle hi steshan aa gaya. Mai waha pahoch toh gaya tha par kuchh samajh nahee aa raha tha kee main kya karoon. Kyuki abhi tak koe dost aaya hi nahin.
Kuchh der idhar udhar ghumne ke baade main steshan ke paas ja ke baith gaya. Mainee ek taraf apna bag rakha aur phire mai apna phone chalane lag gaya, kyuki aur kuch karne ko tha nahin.
Mai apna phone dekh raha tha par, tabhee kuchh aisa hua ki meree jindagee ek alag mod lene vaalee thee.

Steshan kee taraph main dekh raha tha kee mera dost aaya kee nahin tabhee achaanak se meree nazar ek ladakee par padee.
Vo jo vaqt tha main pooree tarah kuchh der ke lie tham sa gaya tha. Belkul filmo ki traah manno sab slowmotion mai chal raha ho. Waqt tham sa gaya ho , background mai romantic music bajne laga ho aur dil mai left side wali ghnti bajne lagi ho.
Main sab bhool gaya tha kee main kaha hoon kyon hoon ?
Bas meree aankhe us ladakee kee taraph se hat hee nahin rahee thee aur is tarah se main use dekhata hee ja raha tha .
Uski tasvir meri aakho se utaar kar meri rooh par ankit ho rahi thi. Usakee maasoom chehara, usakee chhotee-chhotee aankhee, usake maasoom sa chehare pe vo maasoom see usakee hansee jaise maano koee paree ho vo..use dekh pahalee nazar me maano dil ko kuchh hone laga tha.
Ek alag sa ehsaas tha ye jo hume pahle kabhi nahin huva.
Dil ki dhadkan badh gae thi. Mann mai bus ek khawaish ki buss usse dekhta rahu...aur ye lamha kabhi khatam hi na ho.
Kya ye pyaar tha??
Mujhe nahin pata bas dil bol raha tha ki mera dost kuchh der baad aaye ya ye vaqt ruk jae. Hum humesha ke liye bus isse lamhe ke ho jaae.
Mujhe usaka naam jaanana tha...usake baare mein bahut kuchh pata karane ko dil kar raha tha ... lekin kaise karoon ye samajh hee nahin aa raha tha.
Jab kuchh samajh nahin aaya tab mainne bas bhagavaan se praarthana kiya kee mujhe ye ladakee meree jindagee mein chaahie. Kyuki isse ladakee ke saath mai jindagee ki har khushi batna chahta tha aur uske hise ke har dukh khude sahna chahta tha.

Par tabhi dil mai ek dard mahshoosh huva. Vo ja rahee thee....meree aankhon se door mujhe rokana tha use.
Usase baaten karana tha. usase dostee karanee thee aur use apane dil kee baat bataanee thee. lekin kaise ???
Yahee savaal bas baar-baar mere man mein aa raha tha aur mujhe baichain kiye ja raha tha.

Mainne phir soch liya ki meree aankhon se door hone se pahale mujhe isaka naam pata chal jaaye to main isase apana banoonga aur shaayad bhagavaan ne hee use bheja hoga mere lie ye main samajhoonga tabhee bhagavan ne chamatkaar kar diya..peechhe se aavaaj aaya priya main yahaan hoon.

Phir vo peechhe dekhi to mainne dekha vahaan se ek ladakee aavaaj dee aur vo us ka paas chalee gayee..tabhee main samajha us ladakee ka naam priya tha.

Main khush ho gaya aur us ladakee ko man kiya ja ke dhanyavaad bol doo kyonki usee ke vajah se mujhe us ka naam pata chala....bas tabhee mainne thaan lee ab use apana banaana hai, use apanee jindagee mein laana hai.

Phir tabhee mai usake pichhe jaane laga ki achaanak hee peechhe se ek haath aaya. Peechhe dekha to dost aa gaya tha.
Jese dost ka khuch pal pahle hum intezaar kar rahe the uss dost ko dekh kar ab main kya karoon samajh nahin aa raha tha..main kya boloon usase..kaise mana karoon usase?..kaise jaoo main us ke peechhe ? main isee soch mein laga raha raha tab tak vo meree aankhon se door ja chukee thee dil maano rone laga tha aur tabhee maano aisa laga ki jaise sab kuchh ek sapana sa tha bas aur aankhe khul gaya to sapana toot gaya.
Main vaha se chala to gaya apane dost anuj ke saath lekin pooree raaste bas anuj ko mann se gaaliya deta raha aur jab mann thoda khali huva toh priya ke baare mein sochata raha.

Maano mera dil ab usake khyaal se nikalane ko taiyaar hee nahin tha.
Doosare din main kolej lie taiyaar ho gaya aur main kolej panhucha...aur bench pe ja ka baith gaya..tabhee anuj ne bulaaya aur kaha dekh apane kolej mein ek naee ladakee aayee hai.
Mera man abhee bhee bas usee ke khyaalon me dooba hua tha.
Aankhon se us ka chehara mano hat hee nahee raha tha...vo baar baar mujhe aavaaj diye ja rahee tha.
Tabhee mujhe gussa aaya aur aana bhi lajmi tha kal anuj ki wajah se mai priya se nahin mile paya aur ab jab mai apni priya ke khayalo mai khoya huva tha tab bhi isse chain nahin hai.
Kal jo dost mujhe jaan se payara tha vo mujhe ab manhoos lagne laga tha. Pata nahin kyu par sach yahi tha yaha mai ye sab soch raha tha vahi vo abhi bhi laga huva tha mujhe awwaz dene mai toh mai ghusaa hokar peechhe usase bolane ja hee raha tha ki main ruk sa gaya.

Meree najar maano phir se ek baar sapanon me chala gaya. Mainne dekha kee vahee thee.
Maano jaise meree khushee ka koee thikaana nahin raha main khud ko rok hee nahin pa raha tha aur mere samajh mein hee nahin aa raha tha kee main kya karoo ? kya bolata main, bas ja ke apane dost ke gale lag gaya... Ab wapas mujhe anuj apna sab se accha dost mahshush ho raha tha.. 2 min. Pahle jese mai gaaliya nikal raha tha ab mai usse duwa de raha tha.. ittna ajeeb vehwar maine kabhi nahi kiya par pata nahi priya ko dekhne ke baade se mujhme bhoute kuch ulta fhulta chal raha tha.
Aur jab mujhe abhee ye pata chala ki vahee vah naee ladakee thee jo kolej mein aaj pahala din aayee thee.

Main to maano hava me udane laga... anuj ne mujhe pucha ki aakhir majhra kya hai...kyuki vo janta tha mujhe acche se ...aur kal se jo mai ajeeb vahwar kar raha tha..iss karan usse yakin ho gaya ki kuch gadbade hai...phir uske kahne par mainne anuj ko bataaya kee aisa aisa hai..usane kaha ja ke bol de use apane dil kee baat.. lekin main darata tha... ki vo kya kahegee..kya lagega use..yahee soch ke main hamesha ruk jaata tha.

Main sochane lagata tha ki kahee vo meree baaten sun ke mujhase door na ho jae. Yahi hota hai jab hum kisi ko khude se jayada chahte hai toh khude ko chahie kitni bhi talklif kyu na ho saamne wale ko agar humari wajah se thodi se bhi taklif hone ki ghunjaish ho toh hum himmate nahin kar paate.
Main usase door nahin hona chaahata tha. mujhe ye ehasaas ho gaya tha ki shaayad vo bhee mujhe pasand karatee thee...lekin vo kabhee kuchh nahin kahatee thee.
usase lagata ki mere man mai us ka lie kuchh nahin hai. lekin vo kya jaane ki use pahalee najar mein dekh ke hee mainne use apana dil de chuka tha.

Din beetate gae hamalog ek achchhe dost kee tarah saath rahate aur baate karate the..lekin na kabhee mujhe himmat hua usase kuchh bhee kahane ka na aur hee use.
Vaqt beet gaya aur is tarah hamalog kee padhaee pooree ho gayee. lekin mere dil me usake ke lie abhee bhee pahala aur aakharee pyaar tha aur shaayad us ke lie bhee.
Aur is tarah se hame sabako alag alag kampanee me job lag gaee thee tabhee bas ek din mainne soch liya ki ab bas.. main usase kal ja ke dil kee baat bata doonga.
Main agale din subah utha aur mainne use fon kiya aur usase kaha kee mujhe milana hai usase ..usane milane ka lie haan kar diya aur is baat se mujhe bahut khushee mila. hamalog ne ek samay nirdhaarit kiya tha aur main samay se pahale vahaan usaka intajaar kar raha tha ....tabhee meree najar us pe padee.. vahee kapade..vahee baig.. vahee chhotee-chhotee aankhe aur chehare pe vahee pyaaree se muskaan, maano aisa lag raha tha..kee vahee pahala din ho..jab mainne use pahalee baar dekha tha..vo dheere dheere aa rahee thee.
Aaj bhi wahi dhimme dhimme hawae bah rahi thi , time jese slow ho gaya tha aur wahi romantic song aaj bhi background mai baj raha tha. Dil ki dhadkan kaafi tej ho gae thi. main to bas use dekhata hee ja raha tha..phir vo paas aatee hai..phir vo mere saamane baith jaatee hai..tabhee bas..mainne usase kaha kee mujhe kuchh kahana hai usase.
Phir tabhee usane bhee kah diya kee mujhe bhee kuchh kahana hai tumhen ...main khush ho gaya.. mujhe laga kee aaj vo bhee apane dil kee baat bol degee...phir mainne usase kaha diya ki tum pahale bol do...usane to pahale mana kiya pahale bolane se..lekin mainne hee jid kar diya... ki pahale tum bole aur vo bolane ja rahee thee.
Maano meree saans ruk gae the..usakee baate sunane ka liye...sab kuchh tham sa gaya...bas aisa laga main aur vo..aur kuchh nahee hai aas-paas... aaj dil ko manno sukoon milne wala tha.
Jes lamhe ka intezaar mene ittni saalo se kiya vo aaj pura hone wala hai. Mai buss in khayalo mai tha ki tabhee phir usane apane baig se ek kaard nikaala..aur diya mujhe...vo jo pal tha.
Vahee pahala pal..jab mujhe laga ki mera sapana tha..aur sapana toot gaya...us kaard main usakee shaadee ka aamantran tha...bas..phir kya..sab kuchh vaheen ruk gaya...dil mai ek bhout tezz tise uthhi...shaayad aaj saas tham si gae thi..jaha khuch pal pahle mai khude ko duniya ka sab se khushnaseeb insaan mann raha tha..wahi ab mai khude ko sab se dhukhi aur bebasse pa raha tha.
Bhagwan ne toh mujhe usse milaya tha par shaayad mainne bahut der kar dee usase apanee dil kee baat bataane me..shyaad bahot-bahot der... phir usane mujhase poochha.. ki tum kya kahana chaahate the ? main kya kahata tab..baat badal dee..aur vo chalee gayee...aur main vahee baithe rah gaya....mujhe use apana banaane ka bas ek sapana hee tha shaayad.......jo ek samay pe aa ka toot gaya....vo aaj ka din aur pahala din...maano kyon aaya tha meree jindagee main ab tak ye baat samajh nahee aaya.... pahala din bhee ek sapane kee tarah aaee aur kuchh der baad toot gayee...aur ye aaj ka pal..jo phir se ek sapana banakar pal mai toot gaya........ iseelie doston kabhee bhee apanee dil kee baat bataane me der na karo... varana itana der ho jaata hai ki....apane pyaar ko bas sapane main hee apana banaana pad jaata hai... aur jab essa hota hai na toh sach kahta hu jaan toh nahin niklti par jindagi bemtlab se lagne lagti hai. Har par ek ajjeb sa khalipan mehshossh hota hai. Isse liye agae aap kisi se pyaar karte ho toh usse apne dil ka haal bata do..kahi essa na ho ki aap sahi waqt ka intezaar karte rahe aur aapko pata chale ki waqt hi nahin raha...

-The End​

Bhut hi bdiya kahani dost..
Sabdo ka Acha istemal kiya hai aapne.. Kahani ki stithi ko achi Tarah se vyakhankit Karti hai.. Pyar me insan ko der nhi Karni chahiye Lkn ye bhi dhyan rakhna chahiye ki jaldbazi bhi na ho.. Station ka vatavaran, Bhut Acha btaya gya hai ,mujhe bhi Apni station ki yatraye Yaad aa gyi.. Overall achi story hai.. Good writting

 

[Ahamdeepo]

~Preem milan~

.Rahul aaj apne ghar me udash sa baitha hua tha kya nahi tha uske pass uncha ohda rupya paisa naukar chakar aur bahut bada bangla sabkuch tha lekin fir bhi udash baitha tha wo kyu ish ko samjhne ke liye hamko uske piche samai Jo hua un ghatnaon ko samjhna hoga.
To kahani ki suruaat hoti hai Raaj Jo ek safal businessman tha aur unki chulbuli sararati wife Dr.Naina ji aur in dono ke pyaar ki nishani Rahul unka pyara beta jishme un dono ki jaan basti thi.lekin Rahul bachpan se bahut sararati tha itna sararati tha ki Jo bhi milta so uski naak me dam kar deta tha ye dekhkar Raaj ko kabhi kabhi bahut gussa aata tha lekin Rahul ki mom ko usse bada masoom duniya me nai dikhta tha aur Raaj waise to bahut gusse wale the lekin apni biwi ke aage unki kuch nai chalti thi to ishiliye Rahul bahut jiddi aur bilkul careless tipe ka banda ban gaya tha..Rahul jab college me pahuncha to wahan wo pahli baar kisi ke preem jaal me fans gaya Jo ek bahut hi bholi pyari masoom ek minute yahan masoom ka matlab wo sach wala masoom hai okay..to us ladki ka naam tha Mahi jiske pyaar me Rahul fans gaya aur bahut kosish ke baad Mahi ko bhi usse pyaar ho gaya dono sath rahte ghumte firte enjoy karte (enjoy ko sex na samjhna) Mahi aur Rahul ki pyaar ki bhanak ek din story ke khalnayak yani ki Raaj ji tak pahunch gayi to ek din wo khud mahi ke ghar jakar usse mile.. Mahi ke mata pita hairaan the ki itna bada aadmi unke yahan aaya hai..khair Raaj achcha insaan tha sabse pyaar se mila aur usne Mahi se Kahan ki Rahul ki sonch aur Zindagi jine ka Jo tarika usse undono aage jakar bahut problem hogi life me kyuki Rahul jimmedar nahi hai aur isks piche uski ma ka hath hai mai chahta hun tum meri madad karo aur Rahul ko jindgi me jimmedar insaan banane me meri taki tum dono baad me khus raho..mahi me puncha kya karna hoga to unhone kaha ki tum Rahul ko chhod do ye bolkar ki tumhari khud ki koi pahchan nai hai ishiliye mai tumhare sath nai rah sakti hum dono ke rashte alag hain..iske baad wo chale gaye to mahi ke maa baap ne bhi wahi kaha usko ki Raaj ji bilkul sahi baat bolkar gaye hain jaisa unhone bola hai waisa karo..mahi ka dil nai maan raha tha lekin do botal vodka pikar usne Rahul ka dil tod diya bahut buri tarah se.. breakup ke baad Rahul bilkul bikhar sa gaya usko uski mom ne badi muskil se samhala usko bolkar ki kahe pareshan hota hai mai tere liye line laga dungi tension mat lo lekin Rahul ko baat dil me lag gayi thi usko kaamyaab banna tha har haal me..

Rahul ne dhere dhere khud ko badalna suru kiya aur wo kamyaab raha aur apni ma ki tarah wo bhi doctor bankar kuch din baad baad papa ka business join kar liya kyuki uske papa ka business bahut bada tha aur wo eklauta tha to ushi ko dekhna tha..7 shaal bahut hota hai duniya badal jati hai log badal jate hain Rahul ki kismat bhi badal gayi thi lekin insaan ki fitrat hai Jo hota hai uska sukh kam Jo nahi hota hai uska gum Jada hota hai to ishiliye aaj Rahul udas tha use wo gujre hue lamhe yaad aa rahe tha waise wo apni life me aage badh chuka tha lekin idhar kuch din se uske papa uski shadi ke liye usko bol rahe the ki ab waqt aa gaya koi ladki ho tumhari nazar me to bata do nahi to hum hi dhunte hain kisi ko.. Rahul ko fir kisi se pyaar na hua dobara wo aaj bhi us gum ko bhula nai tha usko kisi ladki par yakin nai tha.. Rahul ne bol diya usko shadi nai karni kisi se to Raaj ne kaha ek ladki hai meri nazar me usse mil lo ek baar aur aaj wo ladki milne aa rahi thi aur idhar ye Rahul udas ho gaya tha purani baten sonchkar wo apna gujra hua Kal bhul nai pa raha tha.kuch der me uske papa ki aur mom aur mom uske pass aaye aur bole taiyaar ho jao hum ladki ke ghar chal rahe hain..Rahul ko lekar wo log chal diye aur Rahul apni sonch me gum tha kuch der baad Rahul ko wo rashta kuch Jana pahchana laga kyuki ye rashta to mahi ke ghar jata tha aur had to tab ho gayi jab wo log mahi ke ghar ke aage ruke Jo aaj bahut saja dhaja hua tha..Rahul ne puncha yahan kyu aaye hum log to uske papa ne bola aaj mahi ki sagai hai jisko sun Kar Rahul ko mare gussa aur dukh ke pareshan ho gaya

Rahul jab kafi samjhane ke baad Mahi ke ghar ke andar gaya Jahan mahi ke papa bahut pyaar se mile aur sabko unhone chai nasta karaya uske baad mahi ko bulaya gaya to pata chali ki emergency case aa gaya hai ishiliye mahi ko Jana pada hai kyuki mahi ka koi dost hai jisko koi problem hui hai to usko Jana pada achanak se..ye sunkar Rahul hairaan ho gaya ki mahi bhi doctor ban gayi thi filhaal sab intzaar karte rahe aur mehmaan log sab kha pikar chale gaye dhire dhire han ek baat notice ki Rahul ne ki wo ladka na mila usko jiski mahi ke sath sagai honi thi aaj..fir wo log bhi ghar aa gaye kyuki mahi lo pata nai kitna time lagna tha

Ghar aakar Rahul apne dad se lad gaya ki usko wahan lekar kyu gaye the to Naina ne usko bataya ki jis ladke ke sath mahi ki sagai honi thi wo aur koi nai tum ho to Rahul ne kaha ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai tab Raaj ne usse mafi mangte hue usko Puri baat batai.. unhone bataya ki mahi ne kaha ki Rahul kuch bane na bane to bhi wo Rahul ke sath rahegi Han wo khud ko is qabil banayegi ki agar Rahul jindgi me nakaamyaab bhi hua to wo samhaal legi sab akele hi har haal me usko Rahul ka sath chahiye..To uske papa ne usko Naina ko hawale Kar diya Jo uspar bahut gussa thi lekin Puri baat samjhkar unhone uski help ki aur doctor ban gayi to ab wo dono hi Life me safal the to ab uski shadi fix ki gayi thi..ye sab Rahul pareshan ho gaya mahi se Milne ke liye

Dusre din Rahul jakar mahi se mila sare gile sikwe door hue dono ke fir dhum dhaam se shadi ho gayi dono ki jish me Rahul ka khas dost ladkiyon ke sath nach ga raha tha aur gana tha ye wala...


Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Kalle ka khot koi na
Gella mere yaar kameene gella mere yaar kameene
Yaari ki kasam khavan ke
Pad gaye manne peg ye peene pad gaye manne peg ye peene
Bottle meri....bottle meri.......
Reh ri aadhi isne koyi khoso na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Banda main gental mental ho gaya pee ke angreji
Handle karni situation ghar kya ke shaami peshi
Arrey koyi na kar lenge handle
Aaj jee lo pee lo khul ke koi bhadak nai leni
Saare nacho khul ke DJ aaj poori raat baajan de beat
Jo roke saala uske maaro Itt
Repeat chala de gaane gel se mere saare yaar purane
Bhool ke zindagi ke roule saare bolo bam bam bhole
Om namah shivay
Sunn re bhai DJ aale
Laade tagda sa gaana laade tagda sa gaana
Baajan de yaar purane
Yaara ne dhumma thaana yaara ne dhumma thaana
Pal pal manne pal pal manne jeena
Aaj mere sir pe koyi bhoko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi manne koi roko na
Udenge note gulaabi manne koi toko na
Aaj mere yaar ki shaadi oye......
Khatri ki beats re
Arrey baajan de ne yaar khatri

Bhai Bhut majedar story hai.. Or pyari bhi.. Last me gana sunkar to maza hi aa gya..

 

[Destiny]

Humari adhuri prem kahanee

Pyaar vo ehasaas hai, jo har kisee ko nahin hota. Ehasaas hi kyu ehasaaso ki ek khubshurate kahani hai. Par ye ehasaas sab ko nahin hota ya u kahu ki sab ke nasseb mai nahin hota.​

Pyaar vo samundar hai... jesme doob jaane ka mann karta hai. Pyaar vo manate hai jese har dil mangna ta hai. Par puri sirf kuch nasheeb walo ki hoti hai. Pyaar karna toh aasan hai par usse nibha pana muskil aur usse bhi muskil hai pyaar ka kamyab hona.
Par ye toh sach hai pyaar ehasaaso ki ek adhbhute kahani hai.
Yahee ek ehasaas main aapako bataana chaahata hoon...usse ehasaas se aap sabko bhi rubaru karana chahta hu.

Shaam ka samay tha .... aur main apane dost Anuj ka intajaar kar raha tha.
Steshan ke baahar... hamalog ka baahar kahee ghoomane jaane ka plaan tha aur main jaldee pahunch gaya tha...iska karan ye tha ki mujhe travel karna bhoute pasand hai. Alag alag jagah jaana logo se milna aur dosto ke saath waqt guzarna.
Mujhe ye sab pasand tha iss liye mai waqt se pahle hi steshan aa gaya. Mai waha pahoch toh gaya tha par kuchh samajh nahee aa raha tha kee main kya karoon. Kyuki abhi tak koe dost aaya hi nahin.
Kuchh der idhar udhar ghumne ke baade main steshan ke paas ja ke baith gaya. Mainee ek taraf apna bag rakha aur phire mai apna phone chalane lag gaya, kyuki aur kuch karne ko tha nahin.
Mai apna phone dekh raha tha par, tabhee kuchh aisa hua ki meree jindagee ek alag mod lene vaalee thee.

Steshan kee taraph main dekh raha tha kee mera dost aaya kee nahin tabhee achaanak se meree nazar ek ladakee par padee.
Vo jo vaqt tha main pooree tarah kuchh der ke lie tham sa gaya tha. Belkul filmo ki traah manno sab slowmotion mai chal raha ho. Waqt tham sa gaya ho , background mai romantic music bajne laga ho aur dil mai left side wali ghnti bajne lagi ho.
Main sab bhool gaya tha kee main kaha hoon kyon hoon ?
Bas meree aankhe us ladakee kee taraph se hat hee nahin rahee thee aur is tarah se main use dekhata hee ja raha tha .
Uski tasvir meri aakho se utaar kar meri rooh par ankit ho rahi thi. Usakee maasoom chehara, usakee chhotee-chhotee aankhee, usake maasoom sa chehare pe vo maasoom see usakee hansee jaise maano koee paree ho vo..use dekh pahalee nazar me maano dil ko kuchh hone laga tha.
Ek alag sa ehsaas tha ye jo hume pahle kabhi nahin huva.
Dil ki dhadkan badh gae thi. Mann mai bus ek khawaish ki buss usse dekhta rahu...aur ye lamha kabhi khatam hi na ho.
Kya ye pyaar tha??
Mujhe nahin pata bas dil bol raha tha ki mera dost kuchh der baad aaye ya ye vaqt ruk jae. Hum humesha ke liye bus isse lamhe ke ho jaae.
Mujhe usaka naam jaanana tha...usake baare mein bahut kuchh pata karane ko dil kar raha tha ... lekin kaise karoon ye samajh hee nahin aa raha tha.
Jab kuchh samajh nahin aaya tab mainne bas bhagavaan se praarthana kiya kee mujhe ye ladakee meree jindagee mein chaahie. Kyuki isse ladakee ke saath mai jindagee ki har khushi batna chahta tha aur uske hise ke har dukh khude sahna chahta tha.

Par tabhi dil mai ek dard mahshoosh huva. Vo ja rahee thee....meree aankhon se door mujhe rokana tha use.
Usase baaten karana tha. usase dostee karanee thee aur use apane dil kee baat bataanee thee. lekin kaise ???
Yahee savaal bas baar-baar mere man mein aa raha tha aur mujhe baichain kiye ja raha tha.

Mainne phir soch liya ki meree aankhon se door hone se pahale mujhe isaka naam pata chal jaaye to main isase apana banoonga aur shaayad bhagavaan ne hee use bheja hoga mere lie ye main samajhoonga tabhee bhagavan ne chamatkaar kar diya..peechhe se aavaaj aaya priya main yahaan hoon.

Phir vo peechhe dekhi to mainne dekha vahaan se ek ladakee aavaaj dee aur vo us ka paas chalee gayee..tabhee main samajha us ladakee ka naam priya tha.

Main khush ho gaya aur us ladakee ko man kiya ja ke dhanyavaad bol doo kyonki usee ke vajah se mujhe us ka naam pata chala....bas tabhee mainne thaan lee ab use apana banaana hai, use apanee jindagee mein laana hai.

Phir tabhee mai usake pichhe jaane laga ki achaanak hee peechhe se ek haath aaya. Peechhe dekha to dost aa gaya tha.
Jese dost ka khuch pal pahle hum intezaar kar rahe the uss dost ko dekh kar ab main kya karoon samajh nahin aa raha tha..main kya boloon usase..kaise mana karoon usase?..kaise jaoo main us ke peechhe ? main isee soch mein laga raha raha tab tak vo meree aankhon se door ja chukee thee dil maano rone laga tha aur tabhee maano aisa laga ki jaise sab kuchh ek sapana sa tha bas aur aankhe khul gaya to sapana toot gaya.
Main vaha se chala to gaya apane dost anuj ke saath lekin pooree raaste bas anuj ko mann se gaaliya deta raha aur jab mann thoda khali huva toh priya ke baare mein sochata raha.

Maano mera dil ab usake khyaal se nikalane ko taiyaar hee nahin tha.
Doosare din main kolej lie taiyaar ho gaya aur main kolej panhucha...aur bench pe ja ka baith gaya..tabhee anuj ne bulaaya aur kaha dekh apane kolej mein ek naee ladakee aayee hai.
Mera man abhee bhee bas usee ke khyaalon me dooba hua tha.
Aankhon se us ka chehara mano hat hee nahee raha tha...vo baar baar mujhe aavaaj diye ja rahee tha.
Tabhee mujhe gussa aaya aur aana bhi lajmi tha kal anuj ki wajah se mai priya se nahin mile paya aur ab jab mai apni priya ke khayalo mai khoya huva tha tab bhi isse chain nahin hai.
Kal jo dost mujhe jaan se payara tha vo mujhe ab manhoos lagne laga tha. Pata nahin kyu par sach yahi tha yaha mai ye sab soch raha tha vahi vo abhi bhi laga huva tha mujhe awwaz dene mai toh mai ghusaa hokar peechhe usase bolane ja hee raha tha ki main ruk sa gaya.

Meree najar maano phir se ek baar sapanon me chala gaya. Mainne dekha kee vahee thee.
Maano jaise meree khushee ka koee thikaana nahin raha main khud ko rok hee nahin pa raha tha aur mere samajh mein hee nahin aa raha tha kee main kya karoo ? kya bolata main, bas ja ke apane dost ke gale lag gaya... Ab wapas mujhe anuj apna sab se accha dost mahshush ho raha tha.. 2 min. Pahle jese mai gaaliya nikal raha tha ab mai usse duwa de raha tha.. ittna ajeeb vehwar maine kabhi nahi kiya par pata nahi priya ko dekhne ke baade se mujhme bhoute kuch ulta fhulta chal raha tha.
Aur jab mujhe abhee ye pata chala ki vahee vah naee ladakee thee jo kolej mein aaj pahala din aayee thee.

Main to maano hava me udane laga... anuj ne mujhe pucha ki aakhir majhra kya hai...kyuki vo janta tha mujhe acche se ...aur kal se jo mai ajeeb vahwar kar raha tha..iss karan usse yakin ho gaya ki kuch gadbade hai...phir uske kahne par mainne anuj ko bataaya kee aisa aisa hai..usane kaha ja ke bol de use apane dil kee baat.. lekin main darata tha... ki vo kya kahegee..kya lagega use..yahee soch ke main hamesha ruk jaata tha.

Main sochane lagata tha ki kahee vo meree baaten sun ke mujhase door na ho jae. Yahi hota hai jab hum kisi ko khude se jayada chahte hai toh khude ko chahie kitni bhi talklif kyu na ho saamne wale ko agar humari wajah se thodi se bhi taklif hone ki ghunjaish ho toh hum himmate nahin kar paate.
Main usase door nahin hona chaahata tha. mujhe ye ehasaas ho gaya tha ki shaayad vo bhee mujhe pasand karatee thee...lekin vo kabhee kuchh nahin kahatee thee.
usase lagata ki mere man mai us ka lie kuchh nahin hai. lekin vo kya jaane ki use pahalee najar mein dekh ke hee mainne use apana dil de chuka tha.

Din beetate gae hamalog ek achchhe dost kee tarah saath rahate aur baate karate the..lekin na kabhee mujhe himmat hua usase kuchh bhee kahane ka na aur hee use.
Vaqt beet gaya aur is tarah hamalog kee padhaee pooree ho gayee. lekin mere dil me usake ke lie abhee bhee pahala aur aakharee pyaar tha aur shaayad us ke lie bhee.
Aur is tarah se hame sabako alag alag kampanee me job lag gaee thee tabhee bas ek din mainne soch liya ki ab bas.. main usase kal ja ke dil kee baat bata doonga.
Main agale din subah utha aur mainne use fon kiya aur usase kaha kee mujhe milana hai usase ..usane milane ka lie haan kar diya aur is baat se mujhe bahut khushee mila. hamalog ne ek samay nirdhaarit kiya tha aur main samay se pahale vahaan usaka intajaar kar raha tha ....tabhee meree najar us pe padee.. vahee kapade..vahee baig.. vahee chhotee-chhotee aankhe aur chehare pe vahee pyaaree se muskaan, maano aisa lag raha tha..kee vahee pahala din ho..jab mainne use pahalee baar dekha tha..vo dheere dheere aa rahee thee.
Aaj bhi wahi dhimme dhimme hawae bah rahi thi , time jese slow ho gaya tha aur wahi romantic song aaj bhi background mai baj raha tha. Dil ki dhadkan kaafi tej ho gae thi. main to bas use dekhata hee ja raha tha..phir vo paas aatee hai..phir vo mere saamane baith jaatee hai..tabhee bas..mainne usase kaha kee mujhe kuchh kahana hai usase.
Phir tabhee usane bhee kah diya kee mujhe bhee kuchh kahana hai tumhen ...main khush ho gaya.. mujhe laga kee aaj vo bhee apane dil kee baat bol degee...phir mainne usase kaha diya ki tum pahale bol do...usane to pahale mana kiya pahale bolane se..lekin mainne hee jid kar diya... ki pahale tum bole aur vo bolane ja rahee thee.
Maano meree saans ruk gae the..usakee baate sunane ka liye...sab kuchh tham sa gaya...bas aisa laga main aur vo..aur kuchh nahee hai aas-paas... aaj dil ko manno sukoon milne wala tha.
Jes lamhe ka intezaar mene ittni saalo se kiya vo aaj pura hone wala hai. Mai buss in khayalo mai tha ki tabhee phir usane apane baig se ek kaard nikaala..aur diya mujhe...vo jo pal tha.
Vahee pahala pal..jab mujhe laga ki mera sapana tha..aur sapana toot gaya...us kaard main usakee shaadee ka aamantran tha...bas..phir kya..sab kuchh vaheen ruk gaya...dil mai ek bhout tezz tise uthhi...shaayad aaj saas tham si gae thi..jaha khuch pal pahle mai khude ko duniya ka sab se khushnaseeb insaan mann raha tha..wahi ab mai khude ko sab se dhukhi aur bebasse pa raha tha.
Bhagwan ne toh mujhe usse milaya tha par shaayad mainne bahut der kar dee usase apanee dil kee baat bataane me..shyaad bahot-bahot der... phir usane mujhase poochha.. ki tum kya kahana chaahate the ? main kya kahata tab..baat badal dee..aur vo chalee gayee...aur main vahee baithe rah gaya....mujhe use apana banaane ka bas ek sapana hee tha shaayad.......jo ek samay pe aa ka toot gaya....vo aaj ka din aur pahala din...maano kyon aaya tha meree jindagee main ab tak ye baat samajh nahee aaya.... pahala din bhee ek sapane kee tarah aaee aur kuchh der baad toot gayee...aur ye aaj ka pal..jo phir se ek sapana banakar pal mai toot gaya........ iseelie doston kabhee bhee apanee dil kee baat bataane me der na karo... varana itana der ho jaata hai ki....apane pyaar ko bas sapane main hee apana banaana pad jaata hai... aur jab essa hota hai na toh sach kahta hu jaan toh nahin niklti par jindagi bemtlab se lagne lagti hai. Har par ek ajjeb sa khalipan mehshossh hota hai. Isse liye agae aap kisi se pyaar karte ho toh usse apne dil ka haal bata do..kahi essa na ho ki aap sahi waqt ka intezaar karte rahe aur aapko pata chale ki waqt hi nahin raha...

-The End​

Dost apne Adbhut rachna racha hai. Pahli najar me dekhkar pyaar ka ahsas dil me jaga aur khoa sa gaya. Love ki sruvat ho chuka tha. Ek shukhad anubhuti deen katne laga. Kahna chaha par kahi bura na maan jaye ye soch kah na paya aur jab kahne gaya to der ho chuka tha. Aisa to hona hi tha ek lamba arsa saath me raha phir bhi hummat jhuta kah na paya. Bas isi soch me raha vo kiya sochegi sochti tab na jab kuch kaha jata kaha hi nehi gaya to anjam to adhira rahna hi tha.

Bahut shandar shavdho se suru kiya varnit ghatnao ko apne shavdho me bakhubi dhala adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal