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I am new aur ye meri first story hai please app sab sath de
I am new aur ye meri first story hai please app sab sath de
introduction of character...........
Haro.........Raj ( kamjor body koi bhi marta hi sh leta hi aur kar bhi
kya sakta hi sahne ke alawa ghar me nukaro si ijjat ki jati hi study
me zero kuch bhi nhai ata siwaye ik chej ke mar khane ke alwa )
father...............Vikram Singh Thakur ( Biasness man india ke top 10 ke family me sab se pyar karte hi siwaye ik ko chod kar harami logo ke guru hi ye )
Mothar...........Rani Vikram Singh Thakur ( house wife hi ye apne chote bete ko sab se jada byar karti hi aur hero se nafrat karti hai
)
chota Brother............. Pratap Vikram Singh Thakur ( 6 pack body bahut hi handsome study me india level ka class 10 me top kia hi
I .c. s .e board se bahut hi Ghamand se bhara hua hi )
Shreya Vikram Singh Thakur and Priya Vikram Singh Thakur.........dono judwa hi bahut hi pyari hi bahut hi Ghamandi
hero se nafrat karti hi study me Pratap jesi hi )
Update number..........................1
Story hero ki jubani matlab ki hamar jubani .........
hmar nam hi Raj bas nam ki hi Raj hu ham
Jindagi jhand hi hmar baap aur maa
ne bas peda kar ke chod dia hi
maro ya jio unse koi matlab nhai hi
aur hmar roj ka kam hi pehle hmar maa ati
aur lat mar kar hamka jagati aur hamar
baap ka jab man kahta hame khub marta hi
aur hardam Jalil karta rahta hi duniya ki najar
me ham nukar hi in logo ka ik sala bhai hi
wo bhi jab man kahta hi Marta hi
apne sare kam mujhi se karwata hi aur do suparnakha jesi bahan hi hmar kono
sach kahe raha ki agar Ravan ka nas hua to
uski wajah thi bahan lekin sasura hmari bahinia
to Ravan ki bahinia se bhi sala char kadam age thi
wese ham bata de ki hamri do bahan hi
dono ka pata nhai sala mene kya kar dia hi
hamesha mera majak udaya karti jab man
karta hame marti ham bhi sha lete bhai aur kya kar
bhi sakte the ha ab app log hamka bhagwan Ram samjhe to esa nahi ho ham to kamjor hi sala esi
liye sah lete hi sabki nhai to hand phad de sabki
sala baba log kahte hi bhagwan hote hi lekin ham
nahi mante ha Setan ko jarur mante hi ham
are bhai ab app hi log btaye ki sala duniya me sabse
sukhi kon wahi jo logo ko lutta hi duniya usi ki
ijjat karti hi ache log to bas sale nukar hote hi
unhe koi nhai puchta hi pata nhai sala kisi
chutiya pandit ne hame nam Raj rakha ab ye
to hamka nahi pata sala adha pagal jarur raha
hoga ab app log soch rahe honge ki mujhe bahut bura
lagat hue esi jindagi ji ke to app bilkul galat hi
sisura dukh hot hi ik din do din mahina sal
fir dukh bhi chala jata hi same to same sala
wahi hal hmar hi ab sasura hamko dukh nhai hota
hi abhi ham na survent house ka jo sabse
bekar kamra hi na usi me ham betha hi ro raha hi
kahe are bhai batata hu kahe ko itni jaldibaji hi
app sabka ha to ham ye kah rahe the ki ham ro isliye rahe hi kahe ka kinajj hmara Akhiri din hi yaha
Matlab ki is duniya me jine ka to baat yi hi
ki ajj mene suna ki ap e kamine mai aur baap
aur sala bahi bahan yo palening kar rahe the ki sale hamka le ke jayenge Arya ke jangalo aur
ham yi bata de ki ham ro hi liye nhai raha tha ki jo
HAm marne wala tha ham to yo liye raha thi ki abhi tak ala hamne ik chut bhi nahi mara tha aur ese
hi mar raha tha ab app log soch rahe hoge ki sal kesa
chitiya insan hi marne wala hi par ika to chut ki pari hi to ham bata de ki hamla mar khane me aur
maut se dar nhai lagta tha are jab sala pata hi ki ik
din to marna hi to kahe ka dar aur kisliye dar ab ham intajar kar rahe the apni maut ka ka ki kab Wu kamla
Khana laye aur kab ham mar jaye kahe ka ki
Khane me hi hamri pyari maa ne jahar milaya tha
Kuch Der baad kisi ki awaj ane lagi ab ham samajh
Gawa rahe ki kamla a rahi hi
Chaliye ab thoda kamla ke bare me Jan liat hi to
Kamla hi hamre ghar ki mukhya nokrani matlab
Yo hi ki kamla jo hi na Wu hi hamre baap ki
Rakhel kamla ka ik beta hi jiska nam ka ha
Yad aya Chandu nam hi sale ki sakal hamre baap
Jesi hi matlab yi hi ki Wu hamre baap ki najayaj
Aulad hi Chandu ha yi baat alag hi ki uki ijjat
Yi ghar me hamse bahut jada hi Galti ho gayi
ijjat to meri ik kutte se bhi badtar hi
abhi ham apne his me hi gum the ki kamaliya a gayi
kamla........app ke liye malkin ne khud khana banaya hi
kamla ki baat sun ke ham ik bar use dekhe aur fir khane ko aur fir bole
me...........payr se......ik bar dekh ke hi khane me jahar to ache se mila diya hi na kahi esa na ho ki ham jinda bach jaye
hamri baat sun ke kamla ki jo hi na phat ke char ho gyai
aur fir ka tha ham khana khane lage sala ajj pehli bar apne maa ke hato se khana kha rahe the
Kamla ko jhatka laga ki me khana kesa kha raha hu khana khate hi mujhe khasi ane lagi tabhi hamre kamre me hamar maa aur baap a gaye
ME........janti hi kamla tu soch rahi hogi jab hame pata hi ki isme jahar hi to ham ika kahe kha rahe hi na
kamla.......ha
me.......baat yi hi na kamla ajj pehli bar hamri maa ne hamre liye khana banaya hi to ham mana kese kar sakte hi hamre jane ke baat hamri maa ka khayal rakhna thik hi
Aur uske baad hamre muh se khun nikalne laga aur ham mar gaye
kamla kj chikh nikal gayi aur tabhi kamre me aye hamre maa baap haste hue jo ki bahar khade hmare
marne ka intjar kar rahe the ki kab ham mare
maa......... hahaha bahut ache kamla ajj tumne
hame bahut jada kush kia
hi
Baap.......ha kamla sach me tune kamal kar dia
kamla......rote hue......are Setan bhi pighal jaye tum logo ne to Setan ko bhi piche chod dia tu kisi maa hi
apne bate ko mar dala
kamla.......chillate hue........mar gya wo pata tha use pahle se ki khane me jahr hi tab bhi Khan kha liya
janti ho usne ka kaha
kamla..........usne kaha ki hamri maa ka khayal rakhna kamla use koi bhi preshani mat hone dena use kahna ki wo hamesha khush rahe
kamala ki bate sun kamre me cha gaye pura pura sannata
lekin ab sannate ki ka ham maa chudaye ham to mar gaye na
Total..........words......1039
Update first.......end
next update.............come on date.......14.10.2021
ME.......baye baye to all of you good night and meet you tomorrow
writer name........God Mahakal
Nice updates broha to kal ham kaha the ya sasura yad aya
kal hamar jahar kahane se mout ho gayi thi
ab age..........
Update number.............02.
kamla ki baat sun kar kamre me sannata cha gwa
hmar maa baap kono sant admi to rahe na
to hamri maa ne jakar kamla ko do thappad mara
maa..............papa se.......samjha lo apni is randi ko ki apni aukat se bahar na jaye nahi to eske sath sath Tumhari bhi boti - boti kat kar kuttan ka khila Deb samjha
papa........darte hue.......tum kyo chinta karti ho yo randi ka abhi ham samjhawat hi
papa......kyo randi juban chalane lag gayi hi ab apne malik aur malkin ke samne
maa......dubara ani gardan hamare samne nhai uthana
ab bechari kamaliya bhi shant pad gayi aur kar bhi ka sakti thi bechari
ajj pehli bar hamla dukh hua tha
fir ka tha hamre maa aur baap ne Bhima ko bulaya
ab hamar ghar se bidai bhi to nikalni thi na yahi khatir
to jate jate ye bhi bata dete hi ki yi sasura Bhima kon hi
To yi Bhima hi hamre maa aur baap ka nukar
KIch der baad room me Bhima a gawa
bhima........ji malik boliya ka baat hi apne hamko yad kia
maa.........sun re Bhima yika hia se uthaw aur ke jakar
Forest of aeya me fekh de
forest of Arya...........yi jo forest hi na is e se ajj tak koi jinda wapas nhai aya hi Jane ke Baad
to bhi a ne hamla uthaya aur lekar chal dia
usne app ne sath kuch sathi bhi liye the
fir un logo ne mujhe charo aur se kisi cheej se covar kia aur mujhe lekar apni gadi me beth gaye kuch der bad wo jungal tak pahunch gaye waha mujhe fekh dia
dard nhai hua mujhe
mar jo dia tha meri pyari amma ne hamka
mujhe waha fekhne ke bad wo log chale agye
bhima log jab ghar pahuche to maa ne unse pucha
maa.....ache se kam kar dia na bhima koi galti nhai
hui na
bhima...........ji malkin
location..........Arya forest
Story writer ki jubani..........
Rat ka waqt tha Raj ki lash jungal me padi thi
tabhi Raj ki body me ik White colour ka gola sama gya
aur achanak Raj utha kar khada wo gay uske body jese kisi God jesi lagne lagi mukh par surya jesa tej
a me kis ki body me a gay meri energy ko kon samhal sakta hi is univarse me
iski body abhi tak to khatam ho jani chahiye thi
aur ye planet kon sa hi
mujhe is body ke brain se sari information leni hogi
...oh to uska nam Raj hi aur ye planet earth hi iski Jindagi aur meri jindagi same hi aur itna kah e ke baad uski ankho se ansu girne laga
maa baba apne mujhe dhoka dia kuch power ke khatir
to ayie jan lete hi ye kon hi jo ki Raj ke body me a gaya hi
Vikram..........Tha God of Universe son of great God
Vikram wo hi jiska pita sarva sakti man hi hi Vikram ko is univarse me koi nhai hara sakta siwaye uske mata pita ke
vikram Tha supreme God and The supreme goddess ka beta hi
supreme God ne ye Universe banaya aur bahut sare Angal aur bahut chij
some important character information........
1..........Supreme God.......pure Universe ke bhagwan ji ke age koi kuch nhai hi sab ko inhi ne banaya hi sab inke hi karna hi inka ik beta hi vikram
2.......Supreme goddess.........pure Universe me inhe bas inke pati hi hara sakte hi ye apne bete ko bahut pyar karti hi
3........God of Universe........Vikram jise koi hara na paye wo hi Vikram ha
locations...........Arya forest.....
Vikram........rote hue........iski bhi jindagi meri jesi hi na koi apna hi mujhe meri premika ne dhoka dia wo us karna ke sath shadi kar rahi hi
Jise me Amma aur Baba kaha usne hi mujhe kuch power ke liye dhoka de dia God ne mujhe ik aur jindagi di hi ab me pure Universe ko dikha dunga ki Vikram kon hi
Aur us lord chorus ko bata dunga me par mere pas jada samay nhai hi mujhe apne Time stop space me jana hoga aur practice karni hogi tabhi em us karna ko mar paunga
Ajj se me ye wada karta hu ajj se me kisi se pyar nahi krunga kisi ko bhi apne pas nhai ane dunga mujhe mere dosto premika aur jise mene apna khuda mana wo mere mai aur baap ne mujhe dokha de dia
Ajj tak me dost banata tha par ajj se me bnaunga sirf naukar apna gulam is body ne mujhe dushari life di hi
Iska nam Raj hi isliye Ajj se mera nam hoga ...........Tha Emparor Raj Vikram
Abhi tak Vikram ko ye nahi pata hi ki uske asli mata pita kon hi use bas itna pata hi ki wo anath tha use jisne pala usi ne dhoka de dia
place..........Tha magician planet earth 21
Aadmi.......malik app mujhe power de mene Vikram ko mar dia dhokhe se
ladki........ha malik me apne premi ko dhokha de dia
aurat......ha malik mene apne bete ko dokha de dia
( To app log jan ke ki ye jo aadmi hi ye Vikram ka baba hi au r aurat Vikram ki Amma aur wo ladki bikram ki premika priya )
aur ye log jisse baat kar rahi hi wo hi saint karna lord chorus ka beta aur Vikram ka Dushman
karna............ hahahahah mar gay emparor Vikram ab me banunga sab ka Bhagwan ha mere gulamo tumhe power jarur milegi kyo nhai
Lord chorus.......karna karna karna kya kar dia tumne kamal kar dia ajj hmara sabse bada dushman mar gya ab
Jashan manane ki tyari karo karna
karna.............ji pita ji jesa app kahe
location.......... forest of Arya.......
RAj Vikram.......has lo karna tumhari kushi bas matam me badalne wali hi hahahaha hahaha Priya aur amma baba tumhe me esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap jayegi .......
story neme.........Mahakal
words........1030
please read and enjoy
writer name..........Mahakal