Fantasy Power of God with Devil MindA Magical Fantasy Tale (completed)

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ye khani h ek aise ldke ki jo life m bhot kuch dkhta h mdad sbki krna cahta h par paise na hone s nhi kr pata kuki vo khud grib h....vo bhgvaan s roj prathna krta ki kash m sab ki mdad kr pata....yhi uski Phli khuaish thi aur dusri khuaish vo jo use kbhi ni mila pyar kuki use mila hmesha dhoka dukh or nafrat.....
y story romance,action with powers se bhrpur h..or emotion to bht h
 
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earth ek aisi jgh jha jivan h..or yha rhne vaale log ek dusre k khoon k pyase....kyi pidhiya aayi kyi gyi or waqt bi niklta gya..par logo m gussa nafrat bdti hi gyi..

india k ek chote s state haryana k chote city jha ek aadmi ek aurt ko leke ek sarkari hospital m leke ja rha h kuki uski biwi pregnent h or baby kbi bi ho skta h...jb baby hua vo time janmastmi ka tha or bht hi jyda barish ho rhi thi....khr bacha bht normal tarike s hua par usme ek khas chiz thi vo thi uski muskan....kuki vo rota nhi hsta hua peda hua tha (or usme kya khas h vo aapko 2 update k baad pta chlega)...khr bache k jnam k bd dono pati patni bht khus the kuki ghr ek cute sa baby n janam liya tha....after some days uska naam vishal rkha jata h......

bachapan m vishal k dada dadi usko bht pyr krte the par uske dada ki death ho gyi....lekin fr bi uski dadi use pyr dti par vo kam pd jaata kuki uski maa use kam time dti thi or uske chote bhai p jyda...or uske papa ko dono s hi mtlb ni tha...dhire dhire dono bde hone lge jha rohit sararti tha vhi vishal dyaalu or nmr svbhav ka tha...lekin dhire dhire y nmr svbhav gusse or jidd m tabdil ho gya....lekin vo apna gussa ander hi rkhta tha gussa aane par sirf chup hi rhta tha...bachpan s apne papa ki maar kha kha use ab kisi s bi hmdardi nhi thi thi to sirf uski dadi s....time niklta gya or vishal ab 19th birth day aane vala tha.....
ab story start
subh k 7:30 hone vaale the or vishal abi tak so rha tha...tbi uski dadi use uthane aati h...
dadi- beta uth ja kb s so ra h.
mai- dadi sone do na ku utha re ho ab to school bi ni jana...
dadi- to kya hua beta subh itni late tak nhi sona cahiy...
mai- m ni uth ra aap jao.
dadi- kash tre dada jinda hote to tujhe lath mar mar uthate jb tujhe mja aata....
is baat p phle vishal hasta h lekin baad m bhavuk ho k khta h
mai- ha dadi kash dada ji hote to aaj tak papa itna ni marte...
is bt par dadi ki aakho s aasu aa jaate h or vishal ko gle lga leti h or khti h...
dadi- nhi mre bacche aisa nhi sochte...
mai- thk h dadi maa ap jao m fresh hoe ja ra hu.
dadi- thk h.
vishal fresh hota h nhata h or aa kar apni dadi s bolta h
mai- dadi m dost k pas ja rha hu.
dadi- phle nasta kr le beta.
mai- m bhar kr lunga aap phikr mt kro.
or y kh kr vo vha s chla jata h.bhar jakr vo apne dost ghr paidal niklta h or raste m ja hi rha tha ki ek gaadi us k pass s bht tji gujrti h.or vishal us s dar sa jata h. lekin ek dum s use gussa ata h par vo kuch ni kr skta kuki gaadi ja chuki h.
dimag s ghtna nikal vo aage chlta h or .5km chlne k bad uske dost ka ghr aata h...vo dor bell bjata h to ek ldka dor kholta h.
mai- or bhai kaisa h.
ladka- bs tre saamne hu.mai- bdiya h.or bta kab hmara result aa ra h...
ldka - m kya jotish hu saale jo tujhe btau
mai- oye monu tu aise bhdk ku ra h sidha jwab ni d skta.
(monu: ek acha ldka koi nsha vgrha ni krta lekin chidda rhta h kuki koi ldki iske pass ni bhtkti kuki kala h or face p jgh jgh dane h. to thoda drawna bhi lgta h lekin bnda great h.or vishal k sath school m bachpan s h)
monu- or ni to kya subh subh tension dne aayga to aise hi react krunga.
mai- chal koi ni sory bs khus...or park chl tu ldkiya taadio m thoda dhua nikal lunga
( ji frnd jb ghr m kisi n dhyan ni diya to vishal n nshe ko apna hmdard bna liya drinks or smoking vo 9th s pine lga tha)
monu- kya taadu yar koi pat hi ni ri jo bnti h 3 din paisa khati h or agle din laat mar deti h...
mai- chal koi ni drama mt kr or chal.


y dono yha park ja re h itne chlte h vapis usi time m jb vishal paida hone vala tha tb saare devta vishnu bhgwan k pas the kuki aaj janmastmi thi yaani unke krishn avtar ki saalgirh sb devta un s aarshiwad le rhe the jbhi aakashvaani hoti dharti pr sankat aane vala h...to sab devta prehan ho jaate h ki ab hum kya kre...tb bhgwan hste h or khte h mujhe pta h kya krna h...
sb devta- parbhu jldi btaiy kya krna
 
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bhgwan vishnu- m ek urja apne m s nikalunga tum sab 5 cho tatv ki sakti isme samlit kr dena...fr ise m aaj raatri hone vaale sbse aakhir m hone vaale sishu m samlit kr dunga...
inderdev- pranyu prabhu kya vo sishu itni urja smbhal payga.
bhgwan vishnu- mne isme aisi urja bhi samlit ki h jab vo 18 varsh ka hoga tab use thodi thodi apni saktio ka abhas hoga or jb vo apne sarir ko sakshm kr lega to use sari urja prapt ho jaygi or is kaary k liy m parshu ram ko uska guru bna k bhejunga jo uska marg darshan kre.
devtagan- thk h prabhu...
fr sabhi panch tatv devta usme apni sakti samilit krte h...
jb vishal pita uski maa ko hospital m admit krte h tbhi ek roshni unke pet pr pdti h jo sidha vishal m sma jati h...or jb uska janam hota h to hsta hua peda hota h kuki uski aakho k saamne bhagwan vishnu hste hue dikhai dte h....
is trh vishal ko sakti milti h....
back to present.....
jb dono dost park pohcte vha koi ldki ni dikhti sivaay budhe or auntio k ilava...
monu- saale in budho ko dikhane laya tha mujhe....
vishal- cool dude ku thak ra h kal thoda jaldi aa jaynge....
phr dono idhr udhr ghumte h or din m ghr lot jaate h pura din kuch khas ni hota agli subh jb vishal uth ta h to ghr m ldaayi chal ri hoti h uske maata pita ki jise dekh use dukh hota h...lekin jb vo dhyan deta h to uski daadi jmin pr pdi hoti h or unke sir pr choti h jise dkh vishal ghbra jata h or dadi ko utha bhar ki trf bhagta h or jb hospital phochta h to doctor btata h inki mot to aadhe ghnte phle ho chuki h....jaise hi vishal y sunta h to vo ander s toot jata h or baith kr rone lagta h kaafi der rone k bad jb vishal dadi ki lash leke ghr phochta h to uske mata pita uske pas aate h puchte h...
(yha m vishal k pita ko papa or mata ko maa likhunga)
papa-mummy ek sath- kya hua inhe or kha gye the inhe leke.
mai koi jvab ni dta bs pandit bolane jata hu or kuch padosio ko ikhta krta hu phr unhe samshan ghat lejaya jata vha pr pandit papa s agni dne ko khta h....
mai- koi jrurt ni h aap ko inhe aag dne ki inhe aag sirf mai hi dunga...
papa- sab logo ki trf dekh k thk h khte h kuki unhe dar tha khi m koi ulti baat na bol du sab k saamne.
fr mne dadi ko agni dke unhe is jaalim duniya s alvida kiya....
aaj vishal ka sab kuch khatm ho chuka tha maa baap to bachpan s hi alg the bs bachi khuchi dadi thi vo bi in logo n chin liya ab uske liy kuch ni rha or use ab kisi s matlab bi ni tha or khi jaane man bna k vo vha s ghr jaata h aaj usne soch liya tha ki ab vo yha bilkul ni rhega



To be continued.....
 
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jaise hi vishal ghr phocta h to dekhta h uske papa lathi liye bathe h lekin aaj ek bat thi vishal k ander ki vo ab kisi s ni dabega yani usne y faisla kr liya ki agr ab mujhe kisi n hath lgaya to m bi ab chup ni baithunga....yhi soch kr vo ander aaya...
papa- tu ne vha mujhe aag ku ni dne di.
mai- mri mrji. or aap logo ki vjh s hi to unki jaan gyi to m ku aap ko aag dne dta...
papa- chup kar ab juban ldayga tra baap hu m.
mai- acha aap ko pta h mujhe lga aap log to bhul gye mujhe ki aap logo ka koi bda ldka h.
papa- lgta h mar khani h tujhe jo tu mujhe bakvas kre ja ra h.
mai- bakvas nhi sach bol ra hu or ab hath lgaane ki glti mat krna bht sah chuka hu ab nhi shunga
itna hi bola tha vishal n ki uske papa n uske papa n jake uski tang m ek lathi s var kiya jis s vishal ko koi fark ni pda kuki ab vo bht guse m tha. lathi lgte hi usne apne papa ka hath pkda or ek dhka d diya jis s uske papa piche ja k gire.y dkh k uski maa aage aane lgi to vishal n guraht bhari chikh mari jis s uski maa dar gyi vapis piche hat gyi....or vishal vha or na ruka or sidha apne room m jaake apni packing krne lga...apni packing krke usne kuch ni bola or bahr chla gya...
bhr aake vo sidha monu k pas gya vha monu n use smjhaya.
monu- bhai abi 3-4 din ruk ja result k bad chla jaio kuki uske bina tu kuch ni kr skta.
vishal uski bat smjh jata h or vo monu k ghr ruk jata h.kuki use bi lga bina marksheet k vo koi job bi ni kr skta.
1 week bad unka result declare hona tha... vishal or monu dono ko hi chinta ni thi result ki kuki dono pdhai m A1 the...
dhire dhire time nikal gya or dono n apna result check kiya vishal pure state m 1 st aaya tha or monu 2nd.
monu- bhai ab tu kya krega
mai- kuch ni bhai koi job dhundunga fr aage ki pdhai distance s. aur tu bta tu kya krega.
monu- bhai m to b.tec krne ki soch ra hu.
mai- thk bhai m chlta hu aur sayd kismat s mile hum.
monu- bhai ek bar or soch le
mai- bhai mera faisla atal h bas tu mri thodi mdad kr or kuch paise ko intzam kr
monu- yr abhi to mre pas 10000 h tu inhe hi lele.
mai- thank u bhai m inhe jb bi hum milenge tab lauta dunga.
monu- bhai bi bolta h or thank u bi saale tu mujh s bt mat kr.
mai- chal chal thk h santi mat kr.
ab vishal anjane safr pr nikal pdta h use y bhi ni pta ki ab kha jana h..kya pta kya likha h uski jindgi m
 
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ab vishal ek train pkdta h delhi k liy or nikal pdta h...mn m yhi sochta h ki ab koi achi si job mil jay or ek chota sa kiray ka kmra...2 ghnte m delhi phochne k bad vo kmra dhundne lgta h jo sasta ho pr delhi jaise bde shar m saste kmre kha...
kmre dhundte dhunte bht der ho jati h pr koi kmra nhi mila fr vo sochta ku aaj rat kisi lodge m ruk kr subh kisi jgh kaam dhundta hu fr kmra dhundunga....
isiliy vo ek chota lodge dhundta h vha rukta h fr khane k liy ek jata h or kisi rhdi s kuch na kuch kha k aa jata h. or alaram lga k so jata h..
agli subh alaram k sath uth jata h or fresh or nha dho k nikal pdta h kaam dhundne...
kyi choti choti factory or stores m kaam dhundta h par khi kuch nhi milta...thak har k vaaps lodge vapas aa k apna sara saman leke nikal pdta h room dhundne.
lekin fr s vhi purana haal to vishal tang aa jata h or khi jaane ki sochta h...jaise hi highway trf ja rha tha ek uncontrol car us s tkra jati h jis s bht gambhir ghayl hota h....thodi aage ja kr vo rukti h or usme s ek aadmi or ek aurat nikal kr uske pas aate h...or vishal ko utha kr m dalta h or hospital ki trf doda dta h...
raste m jb aurat dkhti h ki vishal halke hosh m h or drd s krha rha to vo bolti h..

aurat- beta tumhe kuch nhi hoga hum jald hospital phoch jaaynge...

vishal sirf ek jhlak us aurat ko dekhta h or vaapis krahne lgta h...
jise dkh aurat k aakho m aasu aa jate h or vo vishal s puchti h...
aurat- beta tumhara nam kya h ....tumhara ghr kha tumhare papa or mummy h...
mai- krhati avaj m mra ish dunia m ab koi nhi or behosh ho jata h....

or itne m hi hospital bi aa jata h dono jaldi s vishal ko hospital k ander lejate h admit krvaate h doctor btata btata h ki conditio bht hi critical h opration hoga....
to aurat bolti h kuch bi kriy bs mre bacche ko bcha lijiy...
aadmi aurat ki trf dekhta h lekin kuch ni bolta h...aise hi 1.5 mhine nikal jata h par vishal hosh m ni aata bs uski sas chalti rhti h...vo aurat or aadmi rishikesh k rhne vaale the to unlogo n vishal ko vhi transfer kr va liya tha...
in 1.5 mhine m ek din bi aisa ni tha jb vishal ko dkhne vo aurat na aayi ho roj ka uska niyam bn chuka tha ki vo km s km 3-4 ghnte vishal k pass rukti thi aise ek din aurat baithi thi ki vishal ko hosh aane lga to aurat chilati hui doctor ko bulaya doctor n aake vishal ko check kiya or btaya ki kha abhi jld hi ise hosh jayga...
doctor checkup krke vha s chla jata h...
aurat jldi s phn krke apne pati ko vha bulati h...uska pati thodi der m vha aata h...
ab dono ko intzar tha to bs vishal ke uthne ka...
thodi der m vishal ko pura hosh aata h hosh m aate hi vo dkhta h ki ek aurat ek aadmi vha khde h....
aurat- beta....
itna hi bol payi thi ki vishal bol pda
vishal- aap log kon ho or m kon hu... ishi k sath vishal behosh ho jata h....aadmi phr s doctor ko bulata h or use sb btata h ki abi kya hua...to doctor bolta h inki aadas ja chuki lgta h....or bolta h ya to saal bhr m thk ho jay ya kbi ni so coprate him....
aadmi- thk h doctor...hm dhyan rkhenge iska...
doctor vha s chla jata h....
aurat- suniye ku na hum ise god le le ab iska koi h bi ni isne khud hi btaya tha or hmari bi aaj tak koi aulad ni h..
aadmi- kya y thk rhega..
aurat- aap phikr mt kriy ise hum bht pyar dnge taaki y aadas aane pr bhi hmare sath rhe...
aadmi- thk h jaan jaisi tumhari mrji...


ab ek chota sa intro.
aaditya singh- ek 45 years k bhut bde buisness man jo apni patni s bht pyar krte h...lekin un m kmjori ki vjh s koi santan paida nhi kr paaye.
mamta singh- y ek 43 ki sundar mhila h y bi apne pati s bht pyar krti h...or house wife h.
in dono n bhag kr saadi ki thi to inka koi privaar vala sath nhi h....aaditya singh pure india m top business man m s ek h jinka karobar bhr desho m bhi h....





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aurat- beta tumhara nam kya h ....tumhara ghr kha tumhare papa or mummy h...
mai- krhati avaj m mra ish dunia m ab koi nhi or behosh ho jata h....

or itne m hi hospital bi aa jata h dono jaldi s vishal ko hospital k ander lejate h admit krvaate h doctor btata btata h ki conditio bht hi critical h opration hoga....
to aurat bolti h kuch bi kriy bs mre bacche ko bcha lijiy...
aadmi aurat ki trf dekhta h lekin kuch ni bolta h...aise hi 1.5 mhine nikal jata h par vishal hosh m ni aata bs uski sas chalti rhti h...vo aurat or aadmi rishikesh k rhne vaale the to unlogo n vishal ko vhi transfer kr va liya tha...
in 1.5 mhine m ek din bi aisa ni tha jb vishal ko dkhne vo aurat na aayi ho roj ka uska niyam bn chuka tha ki vo km s km 3-4 ghnte vishal k pass rukti thi aise ek din aurat baithi thi ki vishal ko hosh aane lga to aurat chilati hui doctor ko bulaya doctor n aake vishal ko check kiya or btaya ki kha abhi jld hi ise hosh jayga...
doctor checkup krke vha s chla jata h...
aurat jldi s phn krke apne pati ko vha bulati h...uska pati thodi der m vha aata h...
ab dono ko intzar tha to bs vishal ke uthne ka...
thodi der m vishal ko pura hosh aata h hosh m aate hi vo dkhta h ki ek aurat ek aadmi vha khde h....
aurat- beta....
itna hi bol payi thi ki vishal bol pda
vishal- aap log kon ho or m kon hu... ishi k sath vishal behosh ho jata h....aadmi phr s doctor ko bulata h or use sb btata h ki abi kya hua...to doctor bolta h inki aadas ja chuki lgta h....or bolta h ya to saal bhr m thk ho jay ya kbi ni so coprate him....
aadmi- thk h doctor...hm dhyan rkhenge iska...
doctor vha s chla jata h....
aurat- suniye ku na hum ise god le le ab iska koi h bi ni isne khud hi btaya tha or hmari bi aaj tak koi aulad ni h..
aadmi- kya y thk rhega..
aurat- aap phikr mt kriy ise hum bht pyar dnge taaki y aadas aane pr bhi hmare sath rhe...
aadmi- thk h jaan jaisi tumhari mrji...


ab ek chota sa intro.
aaditya singh- ek 45 years k bhut bde buisness man jo apni patni s bht pyar krte h...lekin un m kmjori ki vjh s koi santan paida nhi kr paaye.
mamta singh- y ek 43 ki sundar mhila h y bi apne pati s bht pyar krti h...or house wife h.
in dono n bhag kr saadi ki thi to inka koi privaar vala sath nhi h....aaditya singh pure india m top business man m s ek h jinka karobar bhr desho m bhi h....





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ab tak aapne pda ki kaise mamta aaditya ko vishal ko god lene k liy mnati h or aaditya bi mn jata h.

ab aage....
ab khani vishal ki jubani....
jb mujhe hosh aaya to mamta or aaditya mere saamne khde the mre bolne s phle hi mamta bol padi....
mamta- m tri maa mamta beta or y tre papa aaditya h or tum hamare bete vishal ho....
(note: jb vishal ka accident hua tha tb uska bag bi uske sath tha jab mamta n use khola to usme use vishal k doLove waterent mile jisme oska nam or date of birth sab tha....)
mai- kya aap mri mummy or y mre papa?
mamta- ha mre bache tum hmare bete ho bht dino s trse h hm tumahre liy...
mai- mummy m ab thk hu or m ab aap logo or dukh nhi dunga....

ab s mamta ko mummy or aaditya ko papa likhunga....

or y kh kr m mummy ko gle lga leta hu...
2-3 din m mujhe hospital s discharged kr diya jata h....jb m ghr pochta hu to kya dekhta hu ki y ek bht bda bangla h...mummy mujhe ander darvaaje p khda krke ander jaati h or aarti utarne ka sman lati h or mri aarti utaarti h...
mai- mummy y kya kr ri ho....
mummy- chup rh tu or mujhe apna kam krne de...
phr m kuch ni bolta...
aarti hone k mummy mujhe ander lejati h...ander s ghr bht hi khubsurt tha....
mummy n mujhe mra kmara dikhaya or mujhe aaram krne ko kh k niche papa k pas aa gyi or boli...
mummy- aap ek kam kriy is k orignal doLove waternts m s is k purane maa baap ki jgh hmara nam krva dijiy or address bhi yhi ka krva dijiy taki ise pta na chle ki hum iske mummy papa ni h nhi to iske dimag pr bht ghra dhka lgega jo ise shan nhi hoga....or m apne bete ko khona ni cahti...
papa- jaisi tum thk smjho....or ha m ab raat ko aaunga mri meeting h abi...
fr papa mre doLove waterent le k chle jate h....or idhr dimag m bht si chize chal ri thi ki meri yaadash kse chli gyi or mujhe kuch bi yaad ku ni h....itne m mummy mre pas aati h...or bolti h

mummy- kya hua beta kya soch re ho.
mai- kuch ni mummy bs yhi soch ra hu ki mri yadaash kse chli gyi mujhe kuch yaad ku ni h....
mummy-beta jyda mt socho
or ek jhuti khani sunati h ki kaise m result lene gya kaise mra vaapis aate time accident hua...
mummy - is trh tumhare sir m jyda chot lgi or tum coma m chle gye or jb tumhe hosh aaya to tumhe kuch yaad ni tha...
mujhe is khani pr visvas ho jata h....or m apni aakhe bnd kr let jata hu mummy ki god m...or mummy pyr s mra sir shalati h....jb mri nind khulti h to shaam k 6 bj re the yaani m 3 ghnte s so ra tha....
m uth ta hu muh hath dho k hall m aata hu jha mummy baithi tea pi ri thi ...m vha ja k unke pas baith gya...mummy n mri trf dekha or boli
mummy- uth gya beta
or mre sir pr pyr s hath pher kr vaapis tea pine lagi....achank mujhe kya mne mummy s bola...
mai- mummy pta nhi ku jb bhi aap pyr s mujhe chuti ho ya beta khti ho to aisa lgta h jaise m is pyr k liy bht tadpa hu...
mummy- aisa kuch ni h beta m to hmesa s apne bete ko bht pyar krti hu...
or mujhe gale lga liya or boli

mummy- kuch pioge
mai- ha ek cup tea pyr bhri
mummy- mra bacha abi lati hu....

mummy mujhe tea la k dti h or puchti h
mummy- ab kaisa feel kr re ho.
mai- ab thk lag ra h mummy.
mummy- ok
mai- mummy papa kha h dikh ni re
mummy- papa ki meeting h late aaynge.
mai- ok mummyraat ko dinner k time door pr bell bjti h to m kholta hu saamne papa khde the mne papa ka bag liya or unke gale mila or gate bnd kr dono ander aa gye.
hmne sath dinner kiya or sone chal diye.
rat m papa mummy s
papa- jb vishal n mujhe gle lgaya to aisa lga jaise vo sach m mra beta h jo bht time bad mila h....
mummy- vo hmara hi beta h ab vo hi hmara varish hoga ab...or uska birth day bi aane vala h kuch dino m...uske liy achi party rkhna taaki hm bta ske ki hmara bhi beta h....
papa- ha m bi y hi soch rha tha...acha idea h....ab hum bi hak s bol skte h ki hmara bi ek beta h....




to be continue........


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ab tak aapne pda ki aaditya ko vishal k gle milna bht acha lgta h or mamta aaditya ko vishal k birthday or party rkhne k liy btati h jisme vo sbko apne bete vishal ko milana cahti h......or aaditya bi is k liy haami bhrta h.......

ab aage....
dono y baate kr so jaate h...subh 9 bj jaate h lekin m nhi uth ta thodi der bad mummy mujhe jgaane aati h or mujhe jgati h m bi ek avaj m jag jata hu....
mai- good morning mummy
mummy- good morning beta. beta kab tak sote ho subh jaldi uth kr work out kiya kro ab tum bde ho gye ho.
mai- ok mummy.
mummy- jaldi fresh ho kr aao nasta tyar h...or tumhare papa intzar kr rhe h table par.
mai- ok mummy bs 15 minute m aata hu.
15 min m apna daily ka rutin krke m dinning table pr baith ta hu or papa ko gud mrng wish krta hu....thodi der m mummy hme nasta la kr dti h or hum nasta krte h...
papa- beta aage ka kya socha h graduation kroge ya b.tech.
mai- papa mujhe gradution krni taki bad m aap ko aram de sku...
papa- well think beta kon sa course kroge.
mai- m soch ra hu comuter science
papa- thk h beta mujhe apne doLove waternt do m admission krva dta hu.
mai- nhi papa m khud krvaunga admission or papa clg m apna naam RV singh likhvaane ki soch ra hu taaki jo mujh s mile vo mujhe mre naam s jaane aapke nhi...
papa- thk h jaisa tume thk lge m tumhe kisi chiz k liy mna ni krunga but koi problem ho to mujhe btana...
mai- thk h papa jb tak mre under problem control hogi to thk nhi to aapko bta dungawaada.
papa- ok son. ab m chlta hu or tum jaake clg form le aao or driver ko sath le jana.
mai- ok


thodi der m papa office chle jate h or m ready hone mne ek black t shirt phni or ek blue jeans or mummy s permission le k bhar aa gya. jb m bhar aaya to mne socha yr akela jaunga to mummy daatengi or sbse bdi bt mujhe to yha k raaste or clg ka bi ni pta. or driver ko leke gya to sb yhi sochenge m rich hu...yhi sochte sochte mujhe idea aaya or m chal pda driver k pas.
mai- kaka mujhe aapse ek kam tha.
driver- bolo beta
mai- kaka mujhe yha sbse ache clg jana h or vo bi bina gaadi k kya aap mujhe le chloge bina gaadi.
driver- aise kaise jaaoge....clg bht door h
mai- kaka bike s chle.
driver- mre pas to hero honda ki chota si bike h..
mai- koi ni kaka is s kam ho jayga chliy.
hm vha s bike nikal jate h m ab bilkul thk tha bs bhari choto k nissan the.koi aadha ghnte bad hum ek clg k pas ruke jo xxx clg tha..vha bht hi bhid thi or kafi bache aaye hue the form k liy. kafi lambi line thi krib ek ghnte bad mujhe form mila or mne usme sb doLove waternt vgrh lgay or chal pda submit krne. mai abi line m hi tha ki ek aayi jise dkh sab piche hat gye kuki uske sath 2 body gurd the with machine gun. vo apna form submit krti h chli jati h....mujhe vo ldki ghmandi lgi...uski soch ko mne pre htaya or ded ghnte bad apna form submit kr vha s nikla jisne bi mujhe dkha unko lga m ek middle class family s hu...vha s nikal m ghr aaya or mummy n mujh s phle pucha kis clg madmission liya fr mujhe khana diya..m khana kha k apne room m late gya kuki m bht thk gya tha....

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ab aap n pda ki vishal clg ka form bhr kr submit krke aa jata h...or so jata h.
ab aage..
shaam ko mri nind khuli or m fresh hokar hall m aake baith gya mummy n mujhe tea la k di..
tea pine k bad mne mummy s kha

mai- mummy mujhe ek bike cahiye clg jane k liy.
mummy ok beta jao driver k sath le aao payment k liy apne papa ko phn kr dna vo apne aap kr dnge or abi jaate time mujh s paise le jana apne liy shoping kr lena...
mne ok kha or baitha baitha y sochne lga kon si lu jo aam aadmi le skta h...phr dhyan aaya pulsur le leta hu. vo normal bike h .m mummy k pass gya or kha ki mai ja rha hu....mummy n mujhe 25000 diy or kha inse apne kpde or shoes le lena or koi party dress le lena...or agr paise khtm ho jaay to vha apne papa s bt krva dna vo smbhal lenge...m ok bol vha s driver k pas gya or kha ki mujhe kisi achi si kpdo ki dukan le chlo....
driver n gaadi nikali chal pda market ki trf.vha phoch kr m 5 jodi shirt or jeans leta hu or payment kr dusri shop p jata hu vha s coat pent leta hu...
dusri shop s shoes le kar car m aa jata hu....phr m driver s bike k showroom k liy khta hu vha mujhe bht bike psand aati h fr bhi m pulsure leta hu or papa ko phn kr payment k liy kh deta hu....driver ab aage aage car chla ra tha or m uske piche raaste phchan rha thodi der m mai ghr phocha bike park ki or chal pda hall m
abi dinner m time tha to m tv p movie dkhne lga.1 ghnte bad mummy n dinner k liy kha..
mai- papa ni aaye mummy.
mummy- beta vo aaj late aaynge kuki unki aaj ek important meeting h..
mai- ok mom.
mai khana khata hu or chal pdta hu apne room vha ja kr m sochta hu clg m kya kya krna cahiye...y bi ki kya koi mra dost bnega...
yhi sb sochte sochte nind aa jati h....lekin sone s phle m 5 bje ka alaram lga leta hu...
agli subh 5 bje alaram bjta h or m uth kr fresh hota hu or chal pdta hu jogging krne mre bunglow k saamne hi park tha m vhi jogging krne lga or thodi der bad normal exercise ki kuki mera first day tha....jaise hi m chlne ko hua mujhe ek ldki dikhai di vo bht hi khubsurt thi or m to usko dkhne m hi kho gya vo apni kuch frnds k saath jogging kr ri thi fr bad m mujhe dhyan aaya y to vohi clg vali ldki h....y yha kya kr ri h....hai to vaise khubsurt pr ghmandi bht h m yhi soch ra tha ki vo mre pas s gujri or mujhe pta bi ni chla...jb mra dhyan gya to vo vha ni thi...mne y soch jhtki or chal pda ghr. jha mri mummy n mri dum nikalne k liy kisi ko bulaya hua tha....
khar m ghr phocha to hall m mummy papa or aadmi baitha hua tha...
mai- good mrng all of u..
mummy -papa- gud mrng beta...
papa- to mr. rghuveer ji y h mra beta vishal or beta y h tumhare jim traner,yoga guru or martialart teacher...ab s y tumhe train krenge taaki tum self defense or fit rh sko...
mai- papa inki koi jrurt ni h mai apne aap fit rh lunga.
papa- nhi beta tumhe y bt maan ni hi pdegi y mra final decision h....
mai- ok
m man m sochne lga mri khaat to ghr valo ne roj ke liy khdi kr di...
papa-raghuveer ji aap kal s ise train kre...
raghuveer sir- ok aaditya ji or vishal beta kal s mujhe 6 bje yha bungalow k park m mil na or us pahle ek ghnta running kr k aaya krna.
mai- bujhe man s ji sir...
or m nahne chla jata hu



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ab tak pda aapne ki kaise vishal k mummy papa us k rghuveer naam ka trainer us k liy rkhte h....

ab aage....
nahne k bad m apne kpde phn bed p baith jata hu sochta hu yaar y raghuveer sir n to mujhe ek ghnta running k liy kh diya or m to 10 mint m hi thk jata hu...1 ghnte m to mri sas ruk jaygi....is raghuveer sir ka kuch krna pdega taki kal s aay na yani ab mujhe koi plan bnana hoga.... kafi der sochne k bad mne ek idea socha chal pda nasta krne....
naste ki table par papa baithe the or mummy kitchen m nasta bna ri thi ... m bi baith gya....fr papa bole
papa- beta mre aisa krne s bura lga kya jo tum udas ho.
mai- nhi aisi koi bt ni h.
papa- beta m jo y kr ra hu tumhare liy hi kr ra h...socho agr clg ya bhr tumhare sath ldayi ki to tum un bach paoge...or agr tum bach kr vha s bhag bi gye to agli bar fr tumhe pakd lnge....
mai- thank u papa...
m mn m sochne lga papa kh to thk rhe h lekin y rghuveer sir ka to kuch krna hoga...
papa- beta y card rkhlo iski limit ni h...
mai- nhi papa m ise nhi le skta lekin jb jrurt hogi to mng lunga.
papa- ok beta...as u wish.

m vha s utha or bola papa mujhe puri city ghumni h....
papa ok bol k chle gye office or m chal pda apni bike le ke kuki m akela ghumna cahta tha....rasto ko yad krta ja rha tha ki mujhe ek chota sa ldka dikha jo raste p bhik mng rha tha or aisa lg rha jaise us din s kuch khaya na ho....m us k pas gya or bola
mai- beta aap bhik ku mng re ho aapke mummy papa kha h.
b.bacha- shab vo to is duniya m ni h or bhik nhi mngunga to m khana ni kha paunga....
mujhe uski bt s bht hi sad feeling hui. mujhe lga ki itni sanstha hone k bad bi chote chote bache bhik mangte h....
mai- chlo beta mre sath
m usko ek stall p le k gya or use kuch khilaya....khane bad vo sukriya bhiya bol k jane lga to mne use roka or kha tum mre sath chlo...mne papa s phn krke pucha
mai- papa kya koi sanstha h jo grib bacho ko rkhe khana d pdhaye....
papa- ha beta h ek sanstha jise m donation bi dta hu vha sb kuch h....
mai- papa aap mujhe uska address msg kr do m vha ja ra hu or un ko phn kr dna ki m ek bache ko le k aa rha hu to vo use rkh le...
papa- ok beta m bol dunga.
papa n mujhe bhj diya mne us bacche ko bike p bithaya or chal diya sanstha...puch puch kr m vha phocha...us bache ka naam likhvaya apna no. diya us bacche vha chod nikal pda vapis ghumne.....
thodi der or ghum m vaapis aa gya ghr...
ghr pr kiya or chal diya room.
thodi leta fr mobile pe khel kr time pas kiya sham ko papa bi aa gye unhone mujh s pucha...
papa- beta kise le kr gye the vha...
mai- papa mujhe raste pr ek baccha bhik mngta dikha or mujhe dkha ni gya to le gya use sanstha...
papa- great beta tum dusro dukh apna smjhte ho y achi bt mujhe tum par proud h.
mai- thank u papa... y to aap logo ka pyr h....
mai thodi der papa s bt krta hu or bhar aa kr ghumne lgta hu raaste m mujhe ek shop dikhti h pta ni mujhe ku aisa lgne lga ki m smoking krta hu....udhr jaane lga.
jaise m shop pr phocha to mne socha y galt chiz h m y ni krta or vaapis ghr aa gya...thodi der m hi dinner kra or apne room ja k so gya.


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