Thriller वापसी की कीमत (Completed)

[TheBlackBlood]

Ye tanj aacha tha akasar hum isse bharam mai rahte hai ki humara apne hai par sach toh ye hai ki humare maa baap ke alawa shayad hi koe hoga jise humare hone ya na hone se farq padeta hai.
Wo kya kahte hai,
Duniya mai bhagwaan har jagah nahin rah sakta isse liye ussne maa baap banae aur ussi tarah duniya mai shaitaan bhi har jagah nahin rah sakta isse liye ussne rishtedaar banae.

Waise is kahani me fasaad ki jad wo ladki thi. Ek baar vijay ke sath kar leti to kya bigad jata.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ju ki story purani so mera review bhi purana btw us time mere Revo pe reply nahi diya ju ne

wiase ye contest story thi badi dilchasp .....

Shayad dhyan nahi diya hoga.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

very nice story dil ko chu gayi bhai pita ki ankhen tarasti rahi apne gussa hua bete ko dekhne ki aur bete ki futi kismat usko apni galti samjh aayi bhi to sab lut chuka tha uska..ek pita hamesha apni aulaad ka bhala sonchta hai..dil ko chune wali story hai thoda painful hai lekin achchi story hai

Shukriya bhai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

contest me aapki short story ka dil se intzaar rahega

Time milega to zarur likhuga bhai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

supreb story

Shukriya bhai