Incest Deewaana the devil

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Nice update thakur or uske bete ke sath thakurain ka bhi ghamnd toot gaya ab pata nhi Thakur or uska beta kya plan Kare qke prem ne inko zinda to chor diya h or thakurain ke bhai ke aane baad dekhna h kya hota h or ye acha hua jo ab prem ko bhi pain hua tab usko smjh aaye ke power ke sath jimdari bhi aati h jisko majak nhi smjhna chahiye. Overall very good update.

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Wah.....Ye huyi naa baat....
Jab tak hero khunkhar, beraham nahi ban jata tab tak maza hi naa aayye padhne mein ....
kyunki kabhi kabhi haivaan jaise thakur logis ko maarne ke liye prem ko bhi haivaan banna padega.....
waise main kya keh rahi thi ki.... ki prem haivaaniyat dikhane mein kanjusi kar raha hai..... Kyun na deepali ka pet faad ke khoon se lath path antriya nikal le :devil: aur thakur aur uske dono beto ke jishm pe jagah jagah blade se kaat kar acid ke laga de..... tab thakur aur uske dono bete dard gala faadenge to shayad prem ke kaleje ko bhi thandak milegi :devil:

Btw us haramjade master ki maut khaufnaak honi chaahiye..... aisi maut ki jishe padh readers ki ruh tak kaanp jaaye..... jishm mein ek dar ki thandi lahar daud jaaye.... :D

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur dilachasp tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..

.. let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
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Deepaali toh waise hi aadhi mar chuki hai
Pehle beta aur phir pati

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Fabulous update. story me bahut sare turning points a rahe hai.
training lene ke bad prem ko aur jyada gussa ane laga tha.
thakur ke pure parivar ko barbad kar dia, par me yahi kahungi ki prem ne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya. ab se gaon wale bina dare saanti aur sukun ki jindgi jienge.
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Wonderful update , , Pichle kai dino se ek bad ek ghatana ghatti ja rhi thi prem ke sath, unme se uski training sabse khas thi aur ajib bhi. darti ka ek saal us training center ka ek din barabar hota hai.
aur ab thakur ne ajit ka badla lene bulake prem ko jalil kiya. natija usne apne chacha ko ghar bhejkar haweli par dhaba bo diya. emotionless ho kar sabhi ko saja di . mujhe lagta hai deepaly ko maaf kar dena chahiye. warna prem aur thakur me koi fark nahi reh jaega.
Shukriya meherbaani riya jee
Abhi deepaali ka asli chehra aapne dekha kahan hai
Maaf use kiya jaata hai
Jo dil se maafi maange
Majburi mein maafi maangne waale
Humesha dhokha dete hain


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