Romance Ajnabi hamsafar rishton ka gatbandhan

[Naina]

Update 7

Kya baat hai.... Sukanya to chupi rustam nikli ek tarah se... kirdaar to kirdaar yaha tak ki readers ko bhi bhanak tak lagne nahi diya ki actually mein uski soch kya hai.... main to ise kamini lalachi samajh rahi thi, lekin ye to bahot hi suljhi huyi ..nek dil aurat nikli.... wo kehte hai na ki har baar aankhon dekha sach nahi hota...Sukanya kabhi buri na thi aur na hi uski soch buri thi...Sukanya to sach me bilkul apne naam ki tarah hai...par ye sukanya ravan ke saamne uski hi tarah chaalbaaz ,dhokhebaaz aur lalchi hone ki acting kyun kar rahi thi... aisi kya majboori thi jiske chalte apne pati ke paksh le rahi hai...
Btw ek baat aur khatak rahi hai...mana ki pati ke saamne itni achhi banke rehna uski majboori hai... lekin chori chupe surbhi aur Rajendra ki baatein kahe sunne gayi thi wo... Naa to us waqt ravan ghar pe tha aur naa hi usne sukanya ko kahke gaya tha ki jaake unki baatein suno, to kyun taak jhank karne gayi thi wo....
Kahi sukanya ne jaan buj kar undono ki baatein sunne to nahi gayi thi.... aur jo baatein suni thi kahi na kahi sukanya ko laga ho ki wo baatein kaafi hai abhi ke liye apne pati pe lagam lagane ke liye... isliye raat ko jaanbujhkar pati saamne wo sari baatein bata di taaki ye jo sajish rach raha tha ravan, uspe kaam karna bandh kar de...
Shayad sukanya aisa isliye kiya taaki temporarily hi sahi lekin aapne pati ki sajishon pe pani fer di...

Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi... Khas Kar kamla..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Destiny]

for new story

Thank you Naina ji and welcome my story

 

[Naina]

Update 8
dinning table pe nasta karte waqt to wohi pe sukanya bhi thi lekin apsyu ko daat padte dekh sirf surbhi hi apsyu ke paksh leke baaki sabko daatne se mana kar rahi thi, even badi maa nahi balki sagi maa ki tarah ushe samjha rahi thi, itne pyar se khana khila rahi thi...
Mana ki apsyu had se zyada bigda hua hai, lalchi hai lekin kam se kam surbhi ki mamta anadar nahi karna chahiye kabhi bhi... baakiyon ke liye uski soch kuch bhi ho, lekin kam se kam surbhi ko dil se respect dena chahiye ushe...
Waise apsyu se bhi kya hi ummeed lagaye koi. ..
Gyan ka paath dene wale ,sahi disha dikhane wale shikshak ya guru pe jo insaan haath uthaye usse aur koi ummeed bhi nahi laga satke koi bhi... ek college ke principal ki reputation aur ahmiyat kya hai ye sabhi jaante hai... unpe hi hath utha diya apsyu ne... Khair ye jo mahapaap kiya hai isne apne dosto ke sath milkar, ek na ek din saza jarur milegi in logo ko,wo bhi sut samet ...
wohi apsyu se ulat raghu ...jisse ek baar uske pita Rajendra ne keh diya wo baat jaise uske patthar ki lakirr ho..
hmmm.. so un bachho ko padhane ke udasya ke sath sath ek aur udasya ye bhi tha ki raghu khud pe sayam rakhe, jawaab dene ka tarika sikhe...Rajendra raghu ko duniydari ki sikh bahot hi saadhaaran bar unique tarkike de rahe hai ..

Udhar dusri taraf surbhi Rajendra ke paas calcutta jaane wali hai college function attend karne, sath hi waha rahkar study kar rahi apni beti se bhi milne wali hai itne dino baad..

Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi... Khas Kar kamla..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Thank you Naina ji and welcome my story

Waise ye villain ka naam apsyu kyun hai

 

[Destiny]

Bahot hi jabardast aur shaandar suruwat huyi hai kahani ki... ek minute
ye raghu veer ke taraf se huyi hai suruwat..... Jaha ek baat saaf hai ki agar mata pita bachpan se hi apne bachho ko sathik soch vichar tatha sathik raah dikhaye, sathik anushaasan mein Koyi kami na aane de to aulad kabhi apne sachhayi aur achhayi ke maarg nahi bhatakega... virashat mein jo achhe soch vichar mile hai ushe apne aage aane wale pidiyo ko bhi sikhaya jayega...
Rajendra ji aur raghu bhi iske sakshat udaharan hai...

Wohi dusri taraf...
(ye kirdaar aur reader ke bich ki baatein hai, isliye kripaya ispe dhyan na de..

duniya kayi tarah ke suwar hote hai... Lekin inme ek common baat ye hai ki ye sabhi ko gatar mein, gande naali mein rehna bahot pasand karte hai, kyunki waha gatar aur gandi naali se jo cheeje nikalti ushe khana in suwaro ko bahot pasand hai.... ye hawasi Apasyu bare mein padhke, is haramkhor ke tanashahi ko dekh ke lage ki ye harami bhi unhi suwaro mein se ek suwar hai... Suwar Apasyu oops sorry ye kamina to suwar jaat se bhi zyada gaya gujre hai, suwar bhi is Bastard Apasyu ko dekh le to ulti kar de..

Naah actually galti iski nahi hai, galti iski parwaris ki hai..

agar ye aise hai to inke maa baap kaise honge
Tharki baap aur haaraman maa ki kaali raat mein huyi laparwahi ka natiza hai ye Apasyu
Khair... aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai is Apasyu ke liye )
Well... Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan.... ...Aap jis tarah likhte hai har mod aur pehlu ko dhyan mein rakhte huye, readers ko kirdaaro ke bhaavnao ko gehrayi se mehsoos aur ehsaas karne ke liye majbur kar de .. ... padhte waqt lage ki kirdaar jaise ankhon ke samne bhumika nibha rahe ho.... Sach mein jis tarah se realistic roop mein role nibha rahe hai kirdaar, readers ko majboor kar de unke sath judne ke liye... yahin to aapki lekhni ka jaadu hai....

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Bahut hi shandar aur motivated revo diya apne iske liye bahut bahut shukriya aise hi motivat karne wale revo ek adult froum par non adult story ko chahiye hota hai. Jo apne bakhubi diya hai.

Sabhi ma bap chahe vo achhe ho ya bure bo kabhi nehi chahenge ki unke bachche bure marg par chale saath hi ye bacho par nirbhar karta hai ma bap ke diye sanskaro ko kitna tarjih deta hai. Raghu ko achhe sanskar mila aor usi chlne ka marg chuna.

Baki rahi apashyu aur uske ma bap ki to pahle update me aashyu ko jaisa dikhya gaya hai us hisab se jitni katu shavdh aapne kaha vo sabhi shavdh satheek baithta hai.

 

[Destiny]

Waise ye villain ka naam apsyu kyun hai

Ek achhe aur sammmaniye pathak ke nivedan par apashyu nam rakha tha.

 

[Naina]

Ek achhe aur sammmaniye pathak ke nivedan par apashyu nam rakha tha.

Aisa kya waise naam kya tha?

 

[Destiny]

insaan kad Kathi ya paiso se nahi balki apni insaaniyat aur soch vichar se bada hota hai... agar dil mein sabke liye karwahat hi rakhe, har kisiko nich bhav se dekhe to wo kaheka insaan.. Btw aisa to janwar bhi nahi karta... Matlab saaf hai sukanya janwaro se bhi zyada gayi gujri hai... Pakki haaraman no 1 kirdaar hai wo.... upar chal kapat laalach se bharpur aur sath hi Dusron ki khushi aur unnati dekh jalne walo se bhi to sukanya,, ab aise mein usse kya hi ummid kar sakti hai surbhi....
Waise sukanya se ulat surbhi hamesha sab ko ek nazar se dekhti hai.. wo bhed bhav nahi karti... wo apni Umar bade chhote sabhi ko samman deti hai aur shenh bhi....isliye to sabhi aadar aur saamman karte surbhi ko.. yahi to hai achhe sanskar ke lakshan jo ushe apne mata pita se virashat mein mile aur ab bete ko bhi ishi tarah achhe soch vichar rakhne ki sikh de rahi hai aur parwarish bhi...
Shayad sukanya ke mata pita chaalbaaz, kutte, kamine the isliye sukanya bhi aisi hai
Khair.....
chalo hella na sahi uski jagah super angry girl, baat baat pe jhagda karne wali kamla sahi... kaafi dilchasp kirdaar lagi ye kamla...
Kalu aur bablu ko dho diya bina sabun ke... aur ghar aake saaman fod rahi thi so alag...
Heroine banne ke liye bilkul perfect hai kamla


Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi... Khas Kar kamla..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Is shandaar aur motivated revo ke liye bahut bahut shukriya

Virashat, virashat me dan daulat mil sakta hai to phir sanskaar kyu nehi shayad shurbhi aur sukanya dono ko ache sanskar mila ho. Surbhi khud. Ko Virasat me mile sanskaro ka parman sabhi ke samne rakhti hai isliye sabhi surbhi ka adar satkar karti hai.

Baki suknya ke bare me abhi jayada kuch kahna theek n hoga ho sakta hai aage aane wale Update me suknya ka roop parivartn dekhne ko mile.

 

[Destiny]

Aisa kya waise naam kya tha?

Unka bhi naam naina hai par aaya ye n pata savan bhado me barasne wale naina ya sadharan naina

 

[Naina]

I think anuraag aur apsyu ke bich koi to nata hai... I mean to say.. koi rishtedaaei ho dono ke bich par shayad apsyu ko ye baat pata nahi...