Romance Bewafa (Hum ya Woh ?) completed

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Update 7

Ab to inke dosti shuru ho chuki thi .. school mein hamesha aik dusre k sath rehte .. Jab bhi free hote .. Free periods mein school k chat pe jaa ke bethte aur baatein karte .. Ye baat school mein chhupi nahi thi .. Sab yehi keh rahe the k dono ka chakkar chal raha hai ..

Magar dono in sab se be khabar apne dunya mein mast rehte the .. 1 mahine aise hi guzri .. School mein to dono aik sath hote hi the .. Magara b ghar jaa ker bhi baatein shuru ho gayi thi .. Aksar phone pe chating hoti rehti thi dono mein .. Ab to har waqt dono aik sath rehte .. Ajeeb sa rishta ban gaya tha dono mein .. Aik dusre se door reh hi nahi paa rahe the .. Dono ko andaza ho gaya tha k ye rishta kya hai .. Aise hi aik din zakki usse kehta hai ..

Zakki :- Yaar zeeniya Is Sunday mein free hu .. agar tum bhi free ho to bahar ghoomne chalte hai .. Maza ayega ..

Zeeniya :- mein to free hu .. aur jayenge kaha ?

Zakki :- hmmm ??? Dekhte hai Sunday tak sochta hu mein ..

Zeeniya :- Aik kam karte hai mera aik fav. Jagah hai waha jate hai .. Tumhein zaroor pasand ayega ..

Zakki :- Hmm theek hai .. Phir done is Sunday ko .. Tum apne ghar mein bolna k apne friend k ghar jaa rahi hu .. aur mein bhi yehi bahana banaunga ..

Phir zeeniya ok kehti hai .. Dono ne faisla kiya tha .. K Sunday k din aik dusre se dil ki baat karenge .. Ab aik aik second ghante lag rahe the unhein .. aur kisi tarah ye kuch din guzar gaye .. aur Sunday bhi aa gaya .. Zakki dopeher ko kapde pehen k ready hota hai .. aur bal waghera bana k perfume laga k nikalta hai ..Us jagah ki taraf jahan zeeniya ko pick karna tha ..

Ye zeeniya k dost ka ghar tha .. Zakki waha se usey pick karta hai .. Aaj to zeeniya aur bhi khubsurat lag rahi thi .. Uper Burqa aur shawl pehenne ki wajah se kapdon ka pata nahi chal raha tha .. k kis colour k hai .. Kher zakki ko who batati hai us jageh ka raasta .. Zakki jab waha pohonchta hai ..

To ye Naddi k kinare ka pathreela zameen tha .. Road se hat kart ha .. aur left aur right side pe sirf darakht hi the .. Aur yaha kisi k ane ka koi chance nahi tha .. Zakki aur zeeniya aik pathar k upper beth k naddi ki taraf dekh rahe the .. Zakki k haathon mein zeeniya ka haath tha .. Dono bs chup chap naddi ki taraf dekh rahe the .. Kuch der chup rehne k baad Zeeniya kehti hai

Zeeniya :- Zakki mujhe tum kuch kehna hai ..

Zakki :- Hmm mujhe bhi kehna hai ..

Zeeniya :- Phir tum bol do mein baat mein bolungi ..

Zakki :- Nahi pehle tum ..

ISi tarah kuch der pehle tum pehle tum hota hai dono mein .. Akhir kar zakki hi bolta hai k pehle who bolega .. Phir zakki kuch der chup rehne k baad kehta hai ..

Zakki :- Pata hai zeeniya mujhe khud pe , apne khubsurat hone pe aur apne family pe boht ghamand tha .. Ladkiyan mujh pe marti thi .. aur mein unki taraf dekhta bhi nahi tha .. Ghuroor tha mujhe khud pe .. apne wajood pe .. Phir 7th​ mein tum ayi humari class mein .. Who ghamandi aur ghuroor wala Zakki us din ghayal ho gaya tha .. Zakhmi ho gaya tha uska dil .. Aur mera ghamand todhne wali tum the .. Mujhe pata nahi tha who kya tha but us din tumne mere dil mein apne liye ghar bana liya tha .. mere family mein mere doston mein mera reputation aik aise ladke ka tha .. Jo ladkiyon ko dekhta bhi nahi tha .. Aise mein agar kisi ko pata chalta k mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai .. to mera kya izzat rehti .. yehi sab soch k mein tumse jhagda karna shuru kiya .. taa ke mere feelings k bare mein kisi ko pata na chale .. Jb tum mujhse jhagda karti thi to mujhe boht maza ata tha .. Mujhe tumhare jhagde se bhi pyar ho gaya tha .. Mujhe tumse kya tumse related har cheez se pyar ho gaya tha .. Magar mera ego mera ghamand aur mera ghuroor hamesha bheech mein ata tha .. Aur kafi der bhi ho chuki thi apne pyar ko chhupate chhupate mein tumhara dushman ban gaya tha ..Aur shayad tumhare dil mein apne liye nafrat paida kiya tha .. Isliye tumse dosti karne ki ya tumhein batane ki kabhi himmat na hui .. Aur jab us din Iqbal aur Qadir ko tumhare sath zabardasti karte dekha .. to mujhse bardasht nahi hua .. Kaise bardasht karta apne pyar k sath aisi bezti .. mere liye who aik zariya tha tumhare qareeb ane ka .. Aur mein tumhare itne qareeb aa gaya tha .. K tumhein apne feeling bataye bagher reh nahi paa raha tha .. Agar feeling batata to shayad tumhein kho deta ye dar paida ho gaya tha dimagh mein .. aur na batata to aise dost ban k rehte thak gaya tha mein .. Isliye aaj batane ka socha aur bata raha hu .. Zeeniya I love you .. I really love you .. Ab tum pe hai

Zakki ki baat beech mein hi ruk gayi .. Kyu k zeeniya uske seene se lag gayi thi .. aur uske aankhon se aansu beh rahe the .. Zakki bhi usko apne baahon mein bharta hai .. aur usse kehta hai

Zakki :- Ab rona band karo yar .. Agar mujhse pyar nahi karti ho to koi baat nahi but aise roo mat ..

Ye sunke zeeniya aik mukka uske seene pe maarti hai .. aur kehti hai ..

Zeeniya :- Pagal agar pyaar na karti to aise tumhare gale thodi lagti .. Aur ye khushi k aansu hai mein bhi tumse boht pyar karti hu.. Boht boht boht ziada .. Had se ziada jitna tumhein koi bhi na karta ho

Zakki :- mujhe chodoge to nahi na ?

Zeeniya :- pagal hu kya jo itne pyare aur sweet lover ko chodhungi .. Mujhe dar hai k tum na chodh do mujhe .. Aisa kabhi mat karna zakki .. Tumhare bagher zeeniya zinda to rahegi magar maut se badtar zindagi jiyegi ..

Zakki :- Aisa sochna bhi mat mein kabhi nahi chodhunga tumein .. Jan ho tum meri ..

Dono ne apne pyar ka izhar kar diya tha .. Aur aise hi kuch der aur aik dusre k baahon mein rahe .. Phir waha se uth k ghadi mein bethe .. aur nikal padhe gharon ki aur .. Abhi zakki main road pe aya hi tha k uska bada bhai Faizan .. gadi le k uske samne se guzra aur gadi mein Zakki k sath kisi ladki ko dekh k hairan ho gaye .. Usey yaqeen nahi aa raha tha apne aankhon pe .. zakki ne bhi unhein dekh liya tha ..

Kher zakki zeeniya ko uske friend k ghar drop karta hai .. aur apne ghar chala jata hai .. ghar pe faizan uska wait kar raha tha .. ghar pohonchte hi usey le k apne room me gaya .. aur Faizan ne usse poocha to zakki ne sab kuch sach sach bata diya .. Sab kuch sunne k baad Faizan usey ziada kuch nahi kehta .. Bs thoda boht nasihat kar ke chala jata hai ..

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Update 8

Ab to pyar k panchi hawa mein udhne lage the .. School mein aik sath .. ghar mein phone baatein .. Aur Sunday ghoomne jana .. aur har baar usi aik jagah pe jana .. itni si zindagi thi dono ki .. Apni dunya mein mast the ane wale tufaano se bekhabar ..

Isi tarah din kat rahe the .. Aik din zeeniya school nahi ayi .. Zakki ne phone kiya no. bhi nahi lag raha tha .. Usne boht koshish kiya usse contact karne ki but na mumkin raha .. Usne uske ghar jane ka socha phir ye soch k ye idea drop kiya .. K zeeniya k parents ko shak hoga ..

Kya ajeeb dastur hai dunya ka .. Jab dono mein kuch na tha to be dhadak hi ghar mein jata tha zakki .. aur Ab dono aik dusre se pyar karte hai to ghar jane se ghabra raha hai zakki .. K kahi ghar walon ko shak na ho jaye .. Isi tarah 7 din guzar gaye .. zakki k to 1 1 min mein ghanton k hisab se guzar rahe the ..

Usey zeeniya ki boht yaad aa rahi thi .. akhir kar usne uske dost se poocha k zeeniya kyu nahi aa rahi pata karein .. tab usne bataya k zeeniya k liye rishta aya hai .. aur ghar wale haan kar rahe the .. aur zeeniya manah kar rahi thi .. isi baat pe jhagda ho gaya .. aur zeeniya ghar walon se naraz ho ke school nahi aa rahi ..

Ye sunne k baad zakki ko boht ghussa aa raha tha .. aur soch raha tha k kya karein .. Baqi bache hue classes liye bagher hi school se nikal liya .. gadi le k sidha ghar chala gaya .. aur sidha apne room mein gaya .. uske ghar mein sab maujood the .. sare ghar wale .. Usse sab ne poocha magar jawab diye bagher hi chala gaya .. Yahan tak k Rehman sahib k baat bhi nahi suni ..

Room mein jaa ke zeeniya ko call kar raha tha .. Aur ring jaa rahi thi magar zeeniya call nahi utha rahi thi .. woh mobile bed pe phenkta hai .. aur ghusse se room mein tehel raha tha .. itna ghussa aya k sidha mirror pe aik mukka mara .. Jisse mirror toot gya aur uske haath se khoon behne laga .. Usse bhi uska dil nahi bhara aur windows k sheeshon pe mukke maarna start kar diya ..

Bahar ye sab awaazein sunne k baad sab uske room ki taraf bhaage .. Jab room mein aa ke uski haalat dekhi .. to rehman sahib ne kheench k aik thappadh mara usey .. Aur jaldi se first aid box mangwa k uske haath pe bandage baandhne laga .. aur sath poochta hai

Rehman Sahab :- ye sab kya hai zakki ? .. pagal ho gaye ho kya ? aisa koi karta hai ..Ye sab kyu kiya tumne ..

Abhi zakki jawab deta usse pehle hi uske phone pe call ata hai .. jo bed pe padhi hui thi .. Zakki ki ammi phone check karti hai .. phone zeeniya ki hoti hai .. who poochti hai

Zakki Ammi :- Ye zeeniya tumhein phone kyu kar rahi hai ?

Zakki chup rehta hai .. Sar jhuka k uske dada kehte hai

Rehman Sahab :- beti zara call receive kar ke speaker on karo ..

Zakki ki ammi aisa hi karti hai .. Dusri taraf se rone ki awaz aa rahi thi .. Phir zeeniya ki aansuon mein doobi hui awaz aati hai

Zeeniya :- Zakki mere liye rishta aya tha .. mere ammi abbu haan karne wale the .. magar mein ne manah kar diya .. phir mere aur unme jhagda hua mere manah karne pe .. Mein 7 din se unse baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi .. Tumhein bata bhi nahi payi aur na himmat hui .. Aaj ammi abbu ne jab manah karne ki reason pooche .. to mein ne hum dono k bare mein bata diya .. Who kehte hai k tum apne family walon ko ghar bhej do .. Who unhi se baat karenge .. Zakki tum sun rahe ho na .. toot toot toot

Ye sab sunne k baad zakki ki ammi phone kaat deti hai .. Ab sab ko samajh aa gaya tha k kya baat hai .. Zakki k abbu bina der kiye hi kehte hai

Z. abbu :- Zakki bhool jao k mein tumhari shadi usse karaunga .. Humey dekho aur unko dekho .. Unke level k log humare ghar mein naukar hai .. aur tum aise ladki ko humare ghar ki bahu banana chahte ho ..

Zakki :- per abbu hum dono aik dusre se pyar karte hai

Z. abbu :- bhaadh mein gayi tumhari pyar .. Tumne socha bhi kaise k hum tumhari shadi usse karayenge .. Maana k uske abbu mere dost the but iska matlab ye nahi k mein uske beti se tumhari shadi karaunga .. Apne dimaagh se nikal do k ye mein tumhari shadi usse karaunga ..

Ye kehte hue zakki k abbu nikal jate hai room se .. Uske peeche peeche zakki k chacha chachi aur ammi bhi chale jate hai .. Room me zakki k ilawa dada hi rehte hai .. Zakki Apne dada g ki taraf dekhta hai nam aankhon k sath .. aur aik iltija liye k shayad who uski baat manenge .. Magar dada g kehte hai

Rehman Sahab :- Log tumhein Rehman Jr. kehte the .. magar aaj jo tumne kiya hai who kisi bhi angle se mere se match nahi karta .. Aaj tumhein ya to humey choose karna hoga ya us ladki ko .. Hum kabhi bhi apne family level se kam level wale family mein shadi nahi karayenge tumhari .. Mein ye nahi kahunga .. k agar tum us ladki ko choose karoge to mein tumhein apne jaidaad se be dakhal kar dunga .. Nahi mein tumhein tumhara hissa de dunga .. magar uske baad tum kabhi laut kar is ghar mein nahi aaoge .. hum mein se kisi se koi rishta nahi rakhoge ..

Zakki kuch der sochne k baad kehta hai

Zakki :- Theek hai .. Mein apne family ko choose karta hu ..

Rehman Sahab :- Ab kin a tum ne Rehman Jr. wali baat ..

IS beech phone lagatar baj raha tha .. Zakki phone uthata hai .. aur bagher sune hi zeeniya se kehta hai

Zakki :- Zeeniya mere family tumhein accept karne k liye ready nahi hai .. Aur mujhe option diya hai .. ya tumhein choose karu ya unhein .. Mein unhein nahi chodh sakta .. Mujhe maaf karo ..

Zeeniya jab bolti hai to uske alfazon mein itna dard itna ghum hota hai .. K sunne k baad zakki k aankhon se aansu behne lagte hai .. Zeeniya kehti hai

Zeeniya :- Mein ne kaha tha zakki mujhe dar lagta hai k kahi tum hi mujhe na chodh do .. Zakki tum ne aaj mujhe wahi laa ke khada kar diya jaha se tum ne mujhe nikala tha .. Iqbal aur Qadir ne to mera rape karne ki koshish kkiya tha .. magar tumne mere andar k insane ko maar diya .. Laash bana diya tumne mujhe ..

Zakki :- Mein majboor hu .. mujhe maaf karo ..,

Aur phone kaat deta hai .. Zakki phone kaatne k baad apna sar pakadh k rone lagta hai .. aur baqaida awaz nikal k ro raha tha .. ladkiyon ki tarah .. Rehman sahib room se bahar chale jate hai ..

Room mein sirf zakki aur uski ammi hi the .. Uski ammi uske paas ati hai aur uske sar pe hath rakhti hai .. To zakki apna sar utha k laal aur nam aankhon se apne ammi ko dekhti hai .. aur kehti hai

Zakki :- Aap logon ne mujhse mera pyar chheena na ammi .. Mujhe jeete ji maar diya .. Mere feelings ki qadar na ki .. Apne family ki reputation aap logon ko dikhi .. Magar mera pyar mere feelings ki koi fikar nahi .. Mein aaj aap se wada karta hu .. Agar zindagi mein me ne kabhi shadi kiya to .. Mein aik baap ka beta nahi .. Mar jaunga magar shadi nehi karunga .. wada raha aap se ..

Zakki k ammi jaldi se uske honthon pe hath rakhti hai .. aur kehti hai

Zakki ammi :- Nahi beta aisa mat kaho ..

Magar zakki chup chap unke haath ko apne honthon se hatata hai .. aur waha se uth k washroom me chala gaya .. aur apna hath moon dho k bahar nikla .. Ab who normal lag raha tha .. phone utha k Zeeniya ka no. delete karta hai aur block list mein daalta hai ..

Lunch ka time ho raha tha .. who bahar jaa ke dekhta hai k lunch lag chukka tha table pe .. Who bhi jaa ke chup chap beth jata hai .. Aur khana start karta hai .. Usko Normal dekh k Rehman sahib kehte hai ..

Rehman Sahab :- Acha hua k tum jald hi samajh gaye ..

Zakki :-Dada g mein ne aap logon ki baat maan li ab aap logon ko meri baat manni padegi .. Ab aap log mujh pe who pehle jaisa haq nahi jatayenge .. Kyu k baap dada aap logon jaisa nahi hote .. Ab mein job hi karu meri marzi .. Mein kabhi dubara kisi ladki k chakkar mein padh k aap logon ko badnam nahi karunaga .. wada hai aap se .. bs mere raste kabhi na ayiga aap log ..

 

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