Incest Deewaana the devil

[Blackk]

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[Blackk]

Congratulation bhai

Congratulations for new story

Bhai congratulation for story

Ye tha kya update bhai
Bahan bik gyi
Fir paise par thoda gyan
Fir intro
Baap gayab h
Hero murderer bhi ban gaya
Hero ko ek mauka mila jan bchane ka apna
Hero achanak immortal ho gaya
Aur fir bahan ko hi pel diya ..... gun se


Tha kya ye

nice starting. Prem ki dadi matlabi hai aur hinsak bhi.
par prem ke paas immortal power ai kaha se. aur first update me hi anjane me prem ne apni sagi bahan ko maar dala.

Are uski bahen mar rahi hai inna julm hua uske sath ab Jo bhi log doshi hain sabki aisi taisi Karo

plot acha hai par speed kuch jyada hai. ek sthirta honi chahiye. prem ki life me bahut kuch ho raha hai. lekin ache jyada bura hi hua hai uske aur uski family ki sath ab tak. Parivar me khalnayika khud ghar ki pramukh arthath prem ki dadi hi hai. jisne apni poti ko hi bech di. aur update ke end me self-defense me kuch bure logo goli maarte waqt uski bahan bhi goli lag gai. maybe apni shakti se use jinda kar de.

bhai itne sence me to mai 50 update chhap deta

Ye na insafi hai .... sadhna ki bhi skip kr diye

Hm paathko ka hak na chhino hmse

waiting

Ye sonchna aapka kaam hai bhai kaise karna hai kya karna hai kyuki story aapki aur mai chahta hun aap apne hisaab se aage badhen aur story complete karen

for new story..

Shuruwaat kaafi dilchasp huyi hai kahani ki.... dadi jaise prem ke ghar pe grahan ban ke baith gayi ho.... uske liye ghar ke members, specially ladkiyon ka koi mol nahi hai.... yahan tak ki zarurat padi to bech bhi sakti hai .... aise hi ek ghar ki ladki, I mean to say.... Khud ki poti ko bech di usne. Kya uska dil ek baar bhi kaanpa aisa karte huye....
Khair..... Kahani aage badhi to ... paristhitiyon se majbur hoke prem ek khooni tak ban gaya .... jab uski bahan ki aabru ki bachane ki baat aayi to...
Itna kam nahi tha ke ek aur hairaan aur dardnaak mod aaya kahani mein.... thakur ke kehne par jish jagah bag pahunchane gaya tha...wahan log dagabaaz nikle aur prem pe hamla kar diya.... lekin hairaani ki baat ye thi ki prem ko kuch nahi hua....... koi alag hi shakti thi us mein... lekin kya ye to aane wala waqt hi baata sakta hai..... khair ... Par jab usne khud ko bachaane hetu palat war kiya to un dagabaaj logo ke saath saath unke sath rehne wali kayi ladkiyon maut ho gayi.....
lekin dardnaak haalat tab bani jab prem ko pata chala ki marne wali mein se uski bahan bhi thi....
Well..... ab kya karega prem? Uski amar hone ke piche kya raaz hai?

Btw....Shaandaar kahani, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilchasp kirdaaron ki bhumika bhi ...

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

UPDATE HAS BEEN POSTED
THANKS FOR READING AND SUPPORTING...

 

[Blackk]

Shuruwaat kaafi dilchasp huyi hai kahani ki.... dadi jaise prem ke ghar pe grahan ban ke baith gayi ho.... uske liye ghar ke members, specially ladkiyon ka koi mol nahi hai.... yahan tak ki zarurat padi to bech bhi sakti hai .... aise hi ek ghar ki ladki, I mean to say.... Khud ki poti ko bech di usne. Kya uska dil ek baar bhi kaanpa aisa karte huye....
Khair..... Kahani aage badhi to ... paristhitiyon se majbur hoke prem ek khooni tak ban gaya .... jab uski bahan ki aabru ki bachane ki baat aayi to...
Itna kam nahi tha ke ek aur hairaan aur dardnaak mod aaya kahani mein.... thakur ke kehne par jish jagah bag pahunchane gaya tha...wahan log dagabaaz nikle aur prem pe hamla kar diya.... lekin hairaani ki baat ye thi ki prem ko kuch nahi hua....... koi alag hi shakti thi us mein... lekin kya ye to aane wala waqt hi baata sakta hai..... khair ... Par jab usne khud ko bachaane hetu palat war kiya to un dagabaaj logo ke saath saath unke sath rehne wali kayi ladkiyon maut ho gayi.....
lekin dardnaak haalat tab bani jab prem ko pata chala ki marne wali mein se uski bahan bhi thi....
Well..... ab kya karega prem? Uski amar hone ke piche kya raaz hai?

Btw....Shaandaar kahani, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilchasp kirdaaron ki bhumika bhi ...

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Shukriya meherbaani
Naina jee
Itni taareef karne ke liye
Bas aise hi sath banaye rakhiye...

 

[Blackk]

INDEX HAS BEEN UPDATED

 

[Vikash05]

Congratulations bro and nice updates

 

[Riya]

UPDATE 2

Main apni behen ki laash ko uthaya
aur laake gaadi mein daal diya

sukhiya...yeh kaun hai

main kuchh nahi bola
aur phir wapas gaya
dono bag uthaye
ek jo main laaya tha
dusra jo mujhe Thakur ko dena tha
woh dono bag mein gaadi mein daal diya

sukhiya..yeh tere maathe mein chhed kaisa hai
aur yeh ladki kaun hai
humein toh ek hi bag le jaana tha
yeh dusra bag kahan se aaya

main..wapas chal

kareeb 4 ghante baad hum wapas haveli pahunche

thakur bhi chaunk gaya mere maathe mein chhed dekhke
use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
apni aankho pe

main..woh log bag dene se mana kar rahe the
isi liye un sabko maar diya
aur dono bag le aaya

thakur is baat se bahut khush hua

thakur..theek hai ab tum.jaa sakte ho

main..jis gaadi mein main gaya tha
woh gaadi mujhe chahiye

yeh sunke thakur ka chhota beta
bol pada
kutte apni aukaat mein reh
warna zinda nahi bachega

main muskura diya
chhote Thakur
yeh sar mein chhed dekh rahe ho
yeh goli se bana hai
mujhse faaltu bolne se pehle hazaar baar soch lena
ki anjaam kya hoga
main ajay hoon amar hoon
main mar nahi sakta

yeh bolke main apni shirt utaar diya
body mein 17 goli lagi thi

main..samajh rahe ho

tabhi thakur ka bada beta bol pada
Arjun woh chhota hai tum jaao

aur main wahan se nikal gaya

thakur...ajit kitni baar kaha hai
ki soch samajhke bola karo

Ajit.. pitaji aaj tak kisi gaon waale ki himmat nahi hui
ki woh humare saamne sar bhi utha sake
aur isne aapse gaadi maang li

ravindra.. chhote bhai
yeh ladka humein crorepati se arabpati banayega
yeh Brahmāstra hai

lekin wohin thakur apni soch mein dooba hua tha

ravindra.. kya hua pitaji

thakur..kuchh nahi beta
Ajit kabhi bhi tum is ladke se baat nahi karoge
yeh humara aadesh hai

Ajit kuchh nahi bola

main bhi kabhi kabhi tractor chalata tha
isi liye mujhe gaadi chalani aati thi
main apni behen ki laash ko apne ghar leke pahuncha

mujhe dekhte hi sab mere paas aagaye
maine apne sar pe patti baandh li thi
aur kapde bhi badal liye the

maa rote hue mujhse lipat gayi

maa..kahan tha mere laal
mujhe bahut dar lag raha tha

main..theek hoon maa

madhuri..bhai tu theek toh hai
tujhe kuchh hua toh nahi

main..theek hooon didi

tere chehre pe chot ke nishaan kyun hain beta
sadhna chachi ghabrate hue puchhi

sheetal rone lagi

main.. theek hoon gudiya

aur main uske sar pe hath fer diya

main bahar gaya

maa..kahan jaa raha hai beta

main meera ki laash ko andar leke gaya
sab chaunk gaye
ek ladki ki laash ko mere hathon mein dekhkar

maa ki aankho se aansu behne lage

madhuri..yeh kaun hai

main..raaste pe padi mili mujhe yeh

maa..pata nahi kis jaanwar ne is phool si bachchi ka yeh haal kiya
bhagwan use kabhi khushi na de

tabhi daadi daudti hui aayi
aur mere chehre pe hath ferne lagi

daadi..beta tu theek toh hai
kuchh hua toh nahi
mere laal main bahut ghabra gayi thi

meri aankho mein khoon utar aaya
mere jabde bheench gaye the

main ek khaat pe meera ko lita diya

kuchh der baad daadi mere liye khana leke aayi

daadi..le beta khana khaa le

main..bhukh nahi hai

daadi..beta khaa lena
tujhe toh pata hai
ki agar tu nahi khaayega
toh main bhi nahi khaaungi

main..cheekhte hue..kaha na bhukh nahi hai

yeh sunke maa mere paas aayi
aur mujhe thappad maar di

maa..kya tareeka hai baat karne ka
maafi maang amma ji se

main kuchh nahi bola

daadi..mere bete pe dobara hath nahi uthana
warna teri taangein tod dungi
jaa ab yahan se

maa chali gayi

us raat main nahi khaaya khana
toh kisi ne bhi nahi khaaya
subah hote hi main meera ko shamshaan le gaya
aur uska antim sanskar kar diya

kaise batata main maa ko
ki maine hi uski khoyi hui beti ko jaan se maar diya
main uske jalti hui chita ke paas baitha rota raha

aise hi kayi din gujar gaye

maa..beta tu school nahi jaata
kya baat hai

main..man nahi karta maa

maa...aisa mat bol beta
badi mushkil se sab tujhe padha rahe hain
agar school nahi jaayega
toh hum sabki ummido ka kya hoga

tabhi sadhna chachi mere paas aagayi

sadhna..beta bahar woh gaadi kiski hai

main..meri hai

sadhna.. lekin tere paas gaadi kahan se aayi

main.. thakur ne di hai

maa.. thakur ne di hai
kyun di hai
aur tu uske paas Kyu gaya tha

main..maa pareshan mat karo

daadi.. Kyu pareshan kar rahi ho use
chalo jaao yahan se

shaam ko chhote chacha aaye
daaru peeke

aur aangan mein khaat pe baith gaye

hardev..jaya rekha
kahan mar gayi dono

dono bhagati hui chacha ke paas pahunchi

hardev..khana tumhara baap dega
jaldi khana do

daadi..hardev beta

hardev.. bolo maa

daadi..teri shaadi ke liye baat chala rahi hoon
kal ladki waalo ke yaha. jaana hai

hardev..chal lunga maa

dono chachi ki shakal rone jaisi ho gayi
chhote chacha bade chacha se jyada kamate the
kyunki thakur ke kheto ki dekhbhaal karte the woh
apni maa se baatein karte waqt theek rehta tha woh
lekin apni biwiyo se baat karne ki tameez nahi thi use

kuchh der baad bade chacha bhi aagaye
main apne room mein aagaya
ek hi room mein hum sab rehte the
main meri maa meri Madhuri didi aur gudiya

main let gaya

raat ko kareeb 9 baje ranjeet aaya ghar pe
munh hath dhoke khaana khaya

aur phir apne room mein chala gaya
sadhna apne room mein hi baithi thi
kuchh der baad ranjeet ne sadhna ki chudai shuru kar di

sadhna ko bahut maza aaraha tha
apne pati ke 4 inch ke laude se chudne mein
jab se uski shaadi hui thi
tabse ranjeet use roz chodta tha
lekin umar badhte badhte ranjeet ki taqat kam hoti gayi
lekin sadhna ki garmi khatam nahi hui
sadhna ko jaise hi maza aane laga chudai mein
waise hi ranjeet jhad gaya

Aur phir karwat.leke so gaya

Sadhna tadapke reh gayi
uski aankho se aansu nikalne lage
usne khud hi apni boor mein apni teen ungli daalke andar bahar karna shuru kar diya

main soya hua tha
tabhi kisi ka hath mujhe apne sar pe mehsus hua
main apni aankhein kholke dekha
toh meera thi
main shocked ho gaya

usne mera hath pakda
aur mujhe chhat pe leke gayi

mai shayad sapna dekh raha tha

meera..main sapna thodi hoon

main..tum tum yahan kaise aayi

meera..gayi kab thi

main rone laga

meera..kya bachcho ki tarah ro rahe ho
mere sath jo hona tha woh toh ho gaya

main..mujhe maaf kar do

meera.. tumhari galti nahi thi
ab rona band karo

main..aao main tumhein sabse milwata hoon

meera..hanste hue..main ek aatma hoon
mujhe sirf tum dekh sakte ho

main..aatma

meera..haan jaise hi main apne sharir se nikli
tumhare andar sama gayi

main.. lekin kaise

meera..yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata
mujhse tumhari haalat dekhi nahi gayi
isi liye aaj main tumhare saamne aayi hoon

meera.. school Kyu nahi jaate

main..kya fayda

meera..maarungi bahut
kal se school jaane lag jaao

main..nahi jaaunga

meera..meri baat bhi nahi maanoge

main..tum wahan kya kar rahi thi

meera..ek aadmi ne mujhe bech diya tha
mera pehla din tha wahan
woh mere sath kuchh karte
usse pehle hi tumne un sabko maar diya

main..naam batao us madarchod ka

meera.. thakur shamsher singh

main.. tumhein thakur ne khareeda tha

meera..mujhe hi nahi
kayi ladkiyo ko
aur phir woh humein neelaam karwata
uske baad jo jyada paise deta
use humein bech diya jaata

main..main use jaan se maar dunga
uski hasti mita dunga

meera..aur phir faansi ho jaayegi tumhein
yahi chahte ho tum

main..main amar hoon
mujhe koi nahi maar sakta

meera..10 aadmi milke tumhein qaid toh kar sakte hain

yeh toh main socha hi nahi
mere andar super strength kahan hai

main..haan toh main kaunsa jaake din dahade use maarunga
raat koa jaaunga maarke wapas aajaunga

meera..itna asaan thodi hai

main khada ho gaya
aur chhat se kood gaya neeche
aur phir haveli ki taraf badh gaya

meera..kahan jaa rahe ho
ruk jaao

main.. shamsher Singh ko maarne

meera..kaha na ruk jaao

main..tum jaao yahan se

meera..agar tum nahi ruke
toh main yahan se chali jaaungi
aur phir tum mujhe kabhi nahi dekh paaoge

main ruk gaya

main.. toh phir kya karu main

meera.. pehle apne aapko kuchh banao
phir kuchh karne ki sochna

main.. kaise

meera.. insaan ke liye q sabse keemti cheez kya hai

main..insaan ki sehat

meera...jo hai tumhare paas
aaj tak tumhein kabhi koi bhi beemaari nahi hui
aur ab chahiye tumhein paisa
itna ameer bano
ki tumhein dekhte hi log tumhare saamne sar jhuka lein

main.. aur woh kaise hoga

meera..main bataungi tumhein
bas tum thoda intezaar karo
ab main jaati hoon
suraj nikalne waala hai

aur phir woh gayab ho gayi

main wapas ghar aagaya
aur tayyar hoke aangan mein baith gaya

chaaro chachi rasoi mein thi
main aur dono chacha ek sath baithe the
aur phir chachi ne humein nashta diya
hum khaane lage

hardev.. Arjun
tumhein thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

main.. school ke baad jaaunga

Hardev...theek hai
lekin jaana jarur

aur phir main school pahunch gaya
abhi 10th mein hi toh tha main

agle mahine exam the

tabhi ek ladki mere paas aayi

Arjun main yahan baith jaaun

main..baith jaao

woh mere paas baith gayi

aur tabhi usne ek chit mere hath mein rakh diya
main use ghurke dekha

woh aage dekhne lagi

kuchh der baad ek madam class mein ghusi
bala ki khubsurat thi

main..yeh kaun hai

ladki..humari nayi math teacher

aadhe se jyada launde madam ko dekhke laar tapka rahe the
madam ne ek ek student pe najar maari
aur phir jab unki najar mujhpe padi
toh unki aankhein chamak gayi
waise main tha bhi gora chitta lamba chauda
lekin mujhe samajh nahi aaya
ki unhone mujhe aise kyun dekha

bachcho mishra sir ki tabiyat kharab hai
isi liye ab main tumhein math padhaungi
mera naam shamita hai

aur phir aate hi unhone bola ki aaj humara test hai
sab man mein hi use gaaliya dene lage
kuchh der baad humara test khatam hua
hum sabka paper unhone le liya

tabhi mere paas baithi ladki ne mujhse puchha
ek hafte se school kyun.nahi aarahe the

Arjun..tumse matlab

yeh sunke woh udaas ho gayi
aur phir chali gayi

lunch time mein main woh chit kholke dekha
toh usmein likha tha
I love you

main us chit ko ghumake fenk diya
jiske baad woh chit ek ladki ke sar pe gidi
usne peeche mudke dekha
toh use main dikha

main wahan se nikal gaya
us ladki ne chit kholke dekha
toh usmein likha tha i love you
woh ladki muskura di

phir main thakur ki haveli pahuncha
us madarchod ko dekhke mera khoon khaul gaya

thakur.. is pate pe jaana hai

main.. paise kitne milenge

thakur..ek lakh

main..5 lakh lunga

thakur..agar dono bag wapas leke aaye tab

aur main nikal gaya
is baar main poori tarah se tayyar tha
main us pate pe pahuncha
is baar maine bag diya
toh un logo ne mujhe dusra bag de diya

main bag laake thakur ke saamne rakh diya

thakur..dusra bag nahi laaye

main..nahi

thakur ne munim ki taraf dekha

aur phir munim ne mujhe ek lakh rupya de diya
main ghar aagaya
ghar aake khana khaaya
aur let gaya
raat mein main meera ka intezar karta raha
use kayi baar awaj bhi diya
lekin woh nahi aayi
phir main agle din school pahunch gaya

aur phir mujhe pata chala ki main test mein fail ho gaya

behenchod

shamita.. Arjun naam hai na tumhara

main..jee madam

Shamita.. school ki chutti hone ke baad
mere ghar aajana

main.. Kyu

Shamita..kaha na bas aajana

main.. address toh dijiye

aur phir unhone mujhe address bata diya....

wonderful update..bahan ki maut se prem tut gaya tha. ye acha kiya prem ne ghar par nahi bataya. warna uski mom ki halat kharab ho jati.
prem dadi ko sirf apne bete aur pote ko chhod ke kisi se bhi matlab nahi. uski aur thakur ke waja se meera ki muat huii. lekin meera ki atma meera prem ke sath hi reh gyi aur prem ko sambhall bhi rahi hai aur salah bhi de rahi hai ke kya karna hai ane wale samay me . prem ka naam arjun kaise hua. arjun to thakur ke bade bete ka naam hai. kya school ka naam arjun hai?

 

[Blackk]

wonderful update..bahan ki maut se prem tut gaya tha. ye acha kiya prem ne ghar par nahi bataya. warna uski mom ki halat kharab ho jati.
prem dadi ko sirf apne bete aur pote ko chhod ke kisi se bhi matlab nahi. uski aur thakur ke waja se meera ki muat huii. lekin meera ki atma meera prem ke sath hi reh gyi aur prem ko sambhall bhi rahi hai aur salah bhi de rahi hai ke kya karna hai ane wale samay me . prem ka naam arjun kaise hua. arjun to thakur ke bade bete ka naam hai. kya school ka naam arjun hai?

Thank you riya jee
Sath banaye rakhiye

 

[Aakesh.]

Yeh ek kaalpanik kahani hai
Sachchayi se door door tak iska koi vaasta nahi hai
Kirpa karke ismein dikhaye gaye karnaamo ko asli jindagi mein karne ki koshish na karein
Warna kahin se bhi udti hui chappal aake lag sakti hai
Aapki gaand toot sakti hai
Phir bhi agar aapke gurdo mein khujli hoti hai
Toh uske jimmedar aap khud Honge
Khush rahiye
Swasth rahiye
Aur sath dete rahiye....

for new story.

 

[Aakesh.]

UPDATE 1
main bahut chhota tha
jab meri judwa behen ko meri daadi ne bech diya
bas thode se paiso ke liye
zindagi mein aur kuchh ho ya na ho
paisa hona chahiye
paise se tum kuchh bhi khareed sakte ho
paise se hi toh meri behen khareeda tha kisi ne
pata nahi kahan hai woh
is baat ko 10 saal ho gaye
meri maa ne bahut koshish ki mere baap ko rokne ki
lekin mera baap nahi maana
apni maa ka laadla tha na
agar meri maa kehti ki jaake apni biwi ko bech aa
tab bhi mera baap ek jara bhi nahi sochta

meri daadi ke 6 bachche hain
sabse bada

ranjeet singh
wife sadhna
ek number ki chudakkad aurat hai
jab tak raat ko ek baar chud nahi legi
ise neend nahi aati
har roz chacha ise chodta hai
lekin phir bhi iski aag thandi nahi hoti hai

iske teen bachche hain

sabse badi beti
seema
uske baad
meena
uske baad
reena

teeno hi kunwari hain
shaadi karne ke liye paise chahiye
aur paise kahan se aayenge
chacha khud mazdoori karta hai thakur ke yahan

mera baap
rajesh Singh
5 saal pehle gayab ho gaya
tab se iska kuchh ata pata nahi hai

maa
sharmila
usi ki tarah dikhti bhi hai

meri badi behen
madhuri

uske baad main
prem

meri judwa behen
meera
jise meri daadi ne bech diya tha

uske baad meri chhoti behen
sheetal

phir mera chacha
hardev singh


abhi tak do shaadi kar chuka hai
lekin dono mein se koi bhi maa nahi ban paayi
woh budhiya ab teesri shaadi karwana chah rahi hai
uski

pehli biwi
jaya

dusri biwi
rekha

roz raat ko daaru peeke aata hai
boor toh maari nahi jaati
lekin dono ko maarta bahut hai

daadi rokti nahi hai
uski maansikta hi aisi hai
uski najar mein
pati jo hota hai
patni ka maalik hota hai
jo chahe kar sakta hai woh

yeh baat us samay shuru hui
jab main 18 saal ka hua
ek din main apni didi ke sath bazar gaya

wahan kuchh ladke meri didi ko uthake le jaane lage
mera khoon khaul gaya
unmein se do ladko ko maine jaan se maar diya

ab gaon ke kisi bhi area mein kisi ko bhi pakda jaata
pehle thakur ko khabar di jaati

thakur ne mujhe haveli bulwaya
khud daroga mujhe haveli leke gaya

thakur..main tujhe bacha sakta hoon
lekin tujhe mere liye kaam karna hoga

main..kaisa kaam

thakur.. inspector tum jaao

police waale chale gaye
itna rob dabdaba tha thakur ka

thakur..padhna aata hai

main..jee

thakur..yeh bag lo
aur yeh raha pata
ise wahan pahuncha do
wahan yeh bag deke
tumhein wahan se dusra bag laana hoga
sukhiya tumhare sath jaayega

main maan gaya
mujhe pata tha ki mujhe faansi hogi
agar maine thakur ki baat nahi maani toh

main aur sukhiya nikal gaye
kareeb 4 ghante baad hum us pate pe pahunch gaye

sukhiya..room number 34 mein jaa
andar se jab puchha jaaye
ki mera desh
toh tu bolega mahan


main bag uthaya pata nahi us bag mein kya tha
main bag leke room number 34 pe pahuncha
gate knock kiya

andar se awaj aayi

mera desh

main..mahan

aur phir gate khula

main andar ghusa
wahan full daaru baaji randi baaji chal rahi thi
kuchh ladkiya thi
aur kuchh buddhe the
jo chudai karne mein lage hue the

main bag de diya
aur side mein khada ho gaya

khada Kyu hai
ab jaa

main..dusra bag

yeh sunke usne apne saathiyo ko dekha
aur hansne laga

usmein se ek ne mujhpe gun taan di

jaa na Bhosdike
warna yahin dher kar dunga

main.. bina bag ke nahi jaaunga

dekh kya raha hai khatam kar de saale ko

usne mere maathe se gun bhida diya
aur phir trigger daba diya
mere maathe mein ek chhed ho gaya
lekin main waise ka waise hi khada tha

woh sab shocked ho gaye
woh kya main khud bhi shocked ho chuka tha

jisne mujhe goli maari thi
main uske hath se gun chheenne ki koshish karne laga
lekin woh mujhse jyada taaqatwar tha
usne phir se mujhe goli maar di

lekin phir bhi mujhe kuchh nahi hua
woh sab ghabra gaye
aur sab milke mujhe goli maarne lage
aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua
ki main toh ajay hoon amar hoon

main unsabpe toot pada
bhale hi woh mujhse Jyada taaqatwar the
lekin main unhein maarta raha
aur aakhir mein mere hath mein gun aagayi
main bina dekhe trigger dabata raha
sabke sab maare gaye

wahan jitni bhi ladkiya thi
sabki sab mar chuki thi
ek ko chhodke
woh apni aakhri saansein le rahi thi

main uske paas gaya
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the

meri maa ka naam sharmila hai
mera gaon shaktipur hai
meri laash meri maa tak pahuncha dena

uski baatein sunke meri aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya

main cheekh cheekh ke rone laga
use apne seene se lagake rota raha....

Super update hai bhai
Prem ko pta hi nahi tha uske pas supernatural powers hai. wo ajay amar hai . wo kisi hathiyar se nahi marne wala. par apni behen ko bacha nahi paya.

 

[Aakesh.]

UPDATE 2

Main apni behen ki laash ko uthaya
aur laake gaadi mein daal diya

sukhiya...yeh kaun hai

main kuchh nahi bola
aur phir wapas gaya
dono bag uthaye
ek jo main laaya tha
dusra jo mujhe Thakur ko dena tha
woh dono bag mein gaadi mein daal diya

sukhiya..yeh tere maathe mein chhed kaisa hai
aur yeh ladki kaun hai
humein toh ek hi bag le jaana tha
yeh dusra bag kahan se aaya

main..wapas chal

kareeb 4 ghante baad hum wapas haveli pahunche

thakur bhi chaunk gaya mere maathe mein chhed dekhke
use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
apni aankho pe

main..woh log bag dene se mana kar rahe the
isi liye un sabko maar diya
aur dono bag le aaya

thakur is baat se bahut khush hua

thakur..theek hai ab tum.jaa sakte ho

main..jis gaadi mein main gaya tha
woh gaadi mujhe chahiye

yeh sunke thakur ka chhota beta
bol pada
kutte apni aukaat mein reh
warna zinda nahi bachega

main muskura diya
chhote Thakur
yeh sar mein chhed dekh rahe ho
yeh goli se bana hai
mujhse faaltu bolne se pehle hazaar baar soch lena
ki anjaam kya hoga
main ajay hoon amar hoon
main mar nahi sakta

yeh bolke main apni shirt utaar diya
body mein 17 goli lagi thi

main..samajh rahe ho

tabhi thakur ka bada beta bol pada
Arjun woh chhota hai tum jaao

aur main wahan se nikal gaya

thakur...ajit kitni baar kaha hai
ki soch samajhke bola karo

Ajit.. pitaji aaj tak kisi gaon waale ki himmat nahi hui
ki woh humare saamne sar bhi utha sake
aur isne aapse gaadi maang li

ravindra.. chhote bhai
yeh ladka humein crorepati se arabpati banayega
yeh Brahmāstra hai

lekin wohin thakur apni soch mein dooba hua tha

ravindra.. kya hua pitaji

thakur..kuchh nahi beta
Ajit kabhi bhi tum is ladke se baat nahi karoge
yeh humara aadesh hai

Ajit kuchh nahi bola

main bhi kabhi kabhi tractor chalata tha
isi liye mujhe gaadi chalani aati thi
main apni behen ki laash ko apne ghar leke pahuncha

mujhe dekhte hi sab mere paas aagaye
maine apne sar pe patti baandh li thi
aur kapde bhi badal liye the

maa rote hue mujhse lipat gayi

maa..kahan tha mere laal
mujhe bahut dar lag raha tha

main..theek hoon maa

madhuri..bhai tu theek toh hai
tujhe kuchh hua toh nahi

main..theek hooon didi

tere chehre pe chot ke nishaan kyun hain beta
sadhna chachi ghabrate hue puchhi

sheetal rone lagi

main.. theek hoon gudiya

aur main uske sar pe hath fer diya

main bahar gaya

maa..kahan jaa raha hai beta

main meera ki laash ko andar leke gaya
sab chaunk gaye
ek ladki ki laash ko mere hathon mein dekhkar

maa ki aankho se aansu behne lage

madhuri..yeh kaun hai

main..raaste pe padi mili mujhe yeh

maa..pata nahi kis jaanwar ne is phool si bachchi ka yeh haal kiya
bhagwan use kabhi khushi na de

tabhi daadi daudti hui aayi
aur mere chehre pe hath ferne lagi

daadi..beta tu theek toh hai
kuchh hua toh nahi
mere laal main bahut ghabra gayi thi

meri aankho mein khoon utar aaya
mere jabde bheench gaye the

main ek khaat pe meera ko lita diya

kuchh der baad daadi mere liye khana leke aayi

daadi..le beta khana khaa le

main..bhukh nahi hai

daadi..beta khaa lena
tujhe toh pata hai
ki agar tu nahi khaayega
toh main bhi nahi khaaungi

main..cheekhte hue..kaha na bhukh nahi hai

yeh sunke maa mere paas aayi
aur mujhe thappad maar di

maa..kya tareeka hai baat karne ka
maafi maang amma ji se

main kuchh nahi bola

daadi..mere bete pe dobara hath nahi uthana
warna teri taangein tod dungi
jaa ab yahan se

maa chali gayi

us raat main nahi khaaya khana
toh kisi ne bhi nahi khaaya
subah hote hi main meera ko shamshaan le gaya
aur uska antim sanskar kar diya

kaise batata main maa ko
ki maine hi uski khoyi hui beti ko jaan se maar diya
main uske jalti hui chita ke paas baitha rota raha

aise hi kayi din gujar gaye

maa..beta tu school nahi jaata
kya baat hai

main..man nahi karta maa

maa...aisa mat bol beta
badi mushkil se sab tujhe padha rahe hain
agar school nahi jaayega
toh hum sabki ummido ka kya hoga

tabhi sadhna chachi mere paas aagayi

sadhna..beta bahar woh gaadi kiski hai

main..meri hai

sadhna.. lekin tere paas gaadi kahan se aayi

main.. thakur ne di hai

maa.. thakur ne di hai
kyun di hai
aur tu uske paas Kyu gaya tha

main..maa pareshan mat karo

daadi.. Kyu pareshan kar rahi ho use
chalo jaao yahan se

shaam ko chhote chacha aaye
daaru peeke

aur aangan mein khaat pe baith gaye

hardev..jaya rekha
kahan mar gayi dono

dono bhagati hui chacha ke paas pahunchi

hardev..khana tumhara baap dega
jaldi khana do

daadi..hardev beta

hardev.. bolo maa

daadi..teri shaadi ke liye baat chala rahi hoon
kal ladki waalo ke yaha. jaana hai

hardev..chal lunga maa

dono chachi ki shakal rone jaisi ho gayi
chhote chacha bade chacha se jyada kamate the
kyunki thakur ke kheto ki dekhbhaal karte the woh
apni maa se baatein karte waqt theek rehta tha woh
lekin apni biwiyo se baat karne ki tameez nahi thi use

kuchh der baad bade chacha bhi aagaye
main apne room mein aagaya
ek hi room mein hum sab rehte the
main meri maa meri Madhuri didi aur gudiya

main let gaya

raat ko kareeb 9 baje ranjeet aaya ghar pe
munh hath dhoke khaana khaya

aur phir apne room mein chala gaya
sadhna apne room mein hi baithi thi
kuchh der baad ranjeet ne sadhna ki chudai shuru kar di

sadhna ko bahut maza aaraha tha
apne pati ke 4 inch ke laude se chudne mein
jab se uski shaadi hui thi
tabse ranjeet use roz chodta tha
lekin umar badhte badhte ranjeet ki taqat kam hoti gayi
lekin sadhna ki garmi khatam nahi hui
sadhna ko jaise hi maza aane laga chudai mein
waise hi ranjeet jhad gaya

Aur phir karwat.leke so gaya

Sadhna tadapke reh gayi
uski aankho se aansu nikalne lage
usne khud hi apni boor mein apni teen ungli daalke andar bahar karna shuru kar diya

main soya hua tha
tabhi kisi ka hath mujhe apne sar pe mehsus hua
main apni aankhein kholke dekha
toh meera thi
main shocked ho gaya

usne mera hath pakda
aur mujhe chhat pe leke gayi

mai shayad sapna dekh raha tha

meera..main sapna thodi hoon

main..tum tum yahan kaise aayi

meera..gayi kab thi

main rone laga

meera..kya bachcho ki tarah ro rahe ho
mere sath jo hona tha woh toh ho gaya

main..mujhe maaf kar do

meera.. tumhari galti nahi thi
ab rona band karo

main..aao main tumhein sabse milwata hoon

meera..hanste hue..main ek aatma hoon
mujhe sirf tum dekh sakte ho

main..aatma

meera..haan jaise hi main apne sharir se nikli
tumhare andar sama gayi

main.. lekin kaise

meera..yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata
mujhse tumhari haalat dekhi nahi gayi
isi liye aaj main tumhare saamne aayi hoon

meera.. school Kyu nahi jaate

main..kya fayda

meera..maarungi bahut
kal se school jaane lag jaao

main..nahi jaaunga

meera..meri baat bhi nahi maanoge

main..tum wahan kya kar rahi thi

meera..ek aadmi ne mujhe bech diya tha
mera pehla din tha wahan
woh mere sath kuchh karte
usse pehle hi tumne un sabko maar diya

main..naam batao us madarchod ka

meera.. thakur shamsher singh

main.. tumhein thakur ne khareeda tha

meera..mujhe hi nahi
kayi ladkiyo ko
aur phir woh humein neelaam karwata
uske baad jo jyada paise deta
use humein bech diya jaata

main..main use jaan se maar dunga
uski hasti mita dunga

meera..aur phir faansi ho jaayegi tumhein
yahi chahte ho tum

main..main amar hoon
mujhe koi nahi maar sakta

meera..10 aadmi milke tumhein qaid toh kar sakte hain

yeh toh main socha hi nahi
mere andar super strength kahan hai

main..haan toh main kaunsa jaake din dahade use maarunga
raat koa jaaunga maarke wapas aajaunga

meera..itna asaan thodi hai

main khada ho gaya
aur chhat se kood gaya neeche
aur phir haveli ki taraf badh gaya

meera..kahan jaa rahe ho
ruk jaao

main.. shamsher Singh ko maarne

meera..kaha na ruk jaao

main..tum jaao yahan se

meera..agar tum nahi ruke
toh main yahan se chali jaaungi
aur phir tum mujhe kabhi nahi dekh paaoge

main ruk gaya

main.. toh phir kya karu main

meera.. pehle apne aapko kuchh banao
phir kuchh karne ki sochna

main.. kaise

meera.. insaan ke liye q sabse keemti cheez kya hai

main..insaan ki sehat

meera...jo hai tumhare paas
aaj tak tumhein kabhi koi bhi beemaari nahi hui
aur ab chahiye tumhein paisa
itna ameer bano
ki tumhein dekhte hi log tumhare saamne sar jhuka lein

main.. aur woh kaise hoga

meera..main bataungi tumhein
bas tum thoda intezaar karo
ab main jaati hoon
suraj nikalne waala hai

aur phir woh gayab ho gayi

main wapas ghar aagaya
aur tayyar hoke aangan mein baith gaya

chaaro chachi rasoi mein thi
main aur dono chacha ek sath baithe the
aur phir chachi ne humein nashta diya
hum khaane lage

hardev.. Arjun
tumhein thakur sahab ne bulaya hai

main.. school ke baad jaaunga

Hardev...theek hai
lekin jaana jarur

aur phir main school pahunch gaya
abhi 10th mein hi toh tha main

agle mahine exam the

tabhi ek ladki mere paas aayi

Arjun main yahan baith jaaun

main..baith jaao

woh mere paas baith gayi

aur tabhi usne ek chit mere hath mein rakh diya
main use ghurke dekha

woh aage dekhne lagi

kuchh der baad ek madam class mein ghusi
bala ki khubsurat thi

main..yeh kaun hai

ladki..humari nayi math teacher

aadhe se jyada launde madam ko dekhke laar tapka rahe the
madam ne ek ek student pe najar maari
aur phir jab unki najar mujhpe padi
toh unki aankhein chamak gayi
waise main tha bhi gora chitta lamba chauda
lekin mujhe samajh nahi aaya
ki unhone mujhe aise kyun dekha

bachcho mishra sir ki tabiyat kharab hai
isi liye ab main tumhein math padhaungi
mera naam shamita hai

aur phir aate hi unhone bola ki aaj humara test hai
sab man mein hi use gaaliya dene lage
kuchh der baad humara test khatam hua
hum sabka paper unhone le liya

tabhi mere paas baithi ladki ne mujhse puchha
ek hafte se school kyun.nahi aarahe the

Arjun..tumse matlab

yeh sunke woh udaas ho gayi
aur phir chali gayi

lunch time mein main woh chit kholke dekha
toh usmein likha tha
I love you

main us chit ko ghumake fenk diya
jiske baad woh chit ek ladki ke sar pe gidi
usne peeche mudke dekha
toh use main dikha

main wahan se nikal gaya
us ladki ne chit kholke dekha
toh usmein likha tha i love you
woh ladki muskura di

phir main thakur ki haveli pahuncha
us madarchod ko dekhke mera khoon khaul gaya

thakur.. is pate pe jaana hai

main.. paise kitne milenge

thakur..ek lakh

main..5 lakh lunga

thakur..agar dono bag wapas leke aaye tab

aur main nikal gaya
is baar main poori tarah se tayyar tha
main us pate pe pahuncha
is baar maine bag diya
toh un logo ne mujhe dusra bag de diya

main bag laake thakur ke saamne rakh diya

thakur..dusra bag nahi laaye

main..nahi

thakur ne munim ki taraf dekha

aur phir munim ne mujhe ek lakh rupya de diya
main ghar aagaya
ghar aake khana khaaya
aur let gaya
raat mein main meera ka intezar karta raha
use kayi baar awaj bhi diya
lekin woh nahi aayi
phir main agle din school pahunch gaya

aur phir mujhe pata chala ki main test mein fail ho gaya

behenchod

shamita.. Arjun naam hai na tumhara

main..jee madam

Shamita.. school ki chutti hone ke baad
mere ghar aajana

main.. Kyu

Shamita..kaha na bas aajana

main.. address toh dijiye

aur phir unhone mujhe address bata diya....

mast update tha bhai
Budhiya ko do chamat marna chahiye tha. uski wajah se meera duniya chhod ke chali gayi . kaisi dadi hai apni poti ki jaan kha gayi.
meera ki ruh guide karegi sayad prem ko. udhar ko sadhna ungi karke khush rehna pad raha hai
Shamita se pehle sadhna ki khujli ko mitana chahiye tabhi prem ka life safal hoga.

 

[Rana007]

Superb Update and Awesome thread bhai. Kahani thodi alag hain umeed karta hun ye kahani aap puri karoge.
Waiting for next Update bhai