Incest Deewaana the devil

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Wo kutiya jitna bhi maar le ghar ki bahuo ko lekin ghar ki bahuye aisi ki ushi ka aadar samman kare.....in fact us budhiya ke khilaaf bolne par prem ko thappad maar diya uski maa ne :roflol: Aur thappad khane ke baad madhuri ushe le gayi naasta thusane ke liye :roflol:
aainn.... :hmm: jaya sushma rekha ki pasand to neerma sabun tha....... ab prem pasand aa gaya.....
Jab bhi kahani mein prem aur iske ghar aur family jikar hoti hai......Aur jish tarike ye log baatein karte hai ya inki activities etc... padhkar hanshi rok nahi paati hoon......
udhar haweli mein shayad ush thakur ko ajit ko dhundhne bulaawa bheja hoga prem ko....

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur saralata se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..

Khair... let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Shukriya meherbaani naina jee
Sath banaye rakhiye...
 
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Chachi ke mission maa bnna start Ho gya hai. Jb tk maa bnegi Kya Pta chacha 3ri shadi kr le shushma se fir 3ri chachi ko bhi maa bnaya jayega.. Ashi or sejal ko hone lgi khujli Prem babu kb khujli mitata hai dekhte hain. Ab thakur ka Kya panga hone wala hai. Very nice
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The way the author has decorated the story, it was a very successful presentation. Writing is an art in which every word and grammatical expressions are very important.
To understand a story, the reader has to raise his instincts at the level of the writer. Your story has impressed me the most among the stories I have read so far.
The theme of the story was well explained.
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The update was really great.
ghar bade hi ghar ke niv hote. jis din ye niv hile pura parivar tahas nahas ke kagar par pahuch sakte hai. prem ki dadi aur chote chacha ye bat kyu nahi samjh rahe hai. ghar ke bade baki parivar ke sadasyo ko pyar dular aur suraksa dete hai lekin prem ke ghar me tiraskar milti hai har bat par. bete beti me fark kiya jata hai.
Shukriya avni jee
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jaya aur rekha ne koi rasta na dekh akhir me prem ko bulake sari bate bata di. prem bhi ek jhatke me taiyar ho gaya. lekin tino ko karna hai jaldi karna hoga. kahi dadi apne bete ki shadi jaldi na kara dei. kahani super ja rahi hai bhai.
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