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Ek aur deen ka surya udit hua Parantu aaj ka deen kisi bhi tarah se RajMahal ke nivashiyo ke liye samany nahi tha. Aaj hi ke deen ke liye bite kai deen se taiyari chal raha tha. Jis karan mahal ke purush varg kuch jyada hi vyasth chal rahe tha aur streeya bhi vyasth thi aakhir aaj ratri ke jalsha me unhi ka bolbala hone wala tha.


Subah ke lagbhag das baze ka time ho raha tha mahal me bhagam bhag ki paristhiti bana hua tha kisi kaam ke liye kisi ko bulaya jata to do pal ki deri aur us bande ko koyi aur dhar le jata aur bulane bala pahle to kisiya jata phir ho rahi bhagam bhag ko dekhar mand mand muskura deta kahir aise time me ek car mahal ke aangan me parvesh karta hai aur unki welcome karne mahal ki Rani maa surbhi swam dwar pe phuch jati hai. Jitni der me aaye huye aatithi car se utarte hai utne samay me surbhi swam car tak pahuch gayi aur unke utarte hi unko aane me huyi subhidha asubhidha ke bare me pucha.


Chahe aane me asubhudha hua ho chahe na hua ho lekin puchne par ek hi jabab diya jata hai ki sab teek tha hame aane me koyi asubhidha nahi hua. Theek aisa hi uttar aane wale aatithio ne diya aur surbhi aise muskurayi jaise vo janti ho ki aatithiyo ko kitni subhidha ya asubhidha hui thi. Khair ati shigra unhe andar le jaya gaya jahan unke liye jalpan ki vyvshta pahle hi karke rakha hua tha. Andar aate hi surbhi boli…pahale aap sabhi jal pan kar lijiye phir vishram kar lena.


Aaye huye atithio me do jane us aur bad gaye jis aur unke liye jal pan ki vyavastha ho rakha tha lekin ek shaks vahi khada idhr udhar taakta raha yahan dekh surbhi boli… kya hua jamai babu apko jalpan nahi karna.


“Karna hai lekin vo…”


Surbhi…huuu to aap pushpa ko dhundh rahe ho lekin jahan tak mai janti hoon pushpa ko aap logo ke aane ki suchna pakar pahale hi aa jana chaiye tha lekin vo aayi nahi iska matlab apne use bataya hi nahi ki aap log aa rahe hoon.


Raj mahal ki jamai sirf ek hi hai, ashish aur ashish apne mata pita ke saath hi aaya hai. Lekin jab surbhi ne kaha to jabab me ashish ne sirf ha me mundi hila diya tab surbhi boli…aap jalpan karne baithiye mai pushpa ko bulaba bhejti hoon.


Turant hi surbhi ne ek naukar ko bhulbaya aur use maharani pushpa ko bulane bhej diya. Udhar pushpa maharani apne kaksh me shalu, chanchal aur kamla ke saath kuch gopniye bate kar rahe the. Theek usi samay naukar sandesha liye pahucha aur bola…maharani ji kuch atithi aaye hai isliye rani maa ne apko bulawa bheja hai…


“Aatithi aaye hai to maa se kaho vo hi unka swagat satkar kare mai abhi kuch jaruri charcha kar rahi hoon.”


“Are nanadrani aap mahal ki maharani ho aur apko to atothio ke satakar me mammi ji se pahale jana chaiye.”


Itna sunte hi pushpa apne jagah se uthi aur kamla ke seer thame matha chum liya phir boli…bhabhi app mera bahut acha sagirdh ho mai bhale hi meri pad bhul jaunu lekin aap nahi bhulti.


Pushpa ki iss kirty se kamla thodi jhep gayi aur pushpa jate hue ek baar phir boli…bhabhi mere chumban ke seriously na le, lena hi hai to bhaiya ke chumban ko le..


Bas itna kaha aur pushpa aise chali gayi jaise hawa ke ek jhoke ne vaha maujud tinke ko bhi apne saath uda le gaye aur idhar pushpa ki bato ko samjhkar kamla ko tuski mar marke dono sakhiya chede ja rahe the. Jiska natija ye hua ki unke bich ho rahi bato ka rukh badal gaya aur samany bato ke jagah ashlil bato ne le liya. To inko us aur badne dete hai ham aham mudde ki aur badte hai jo ki abhi andhi ki gati se chali gayi..


Pushpa jab bhojan kaksh me pahuchi to vaha uska samna sabse pahale aashish se hua lekin ye kya? pushpa ne aashish ko aise andekha kar diya jaise vo pushpa ke liye koyi mayne hi na rakhta ho kahir pushpa aage badi aur apne hone wale sas sasur se mila unse haal chal pucha aur chali gayi.


Aashish samjh to raha tha ki kyu pushpa ne use ignore kiya aur aashish us vishay pe bat karana chahata tha lekin pushpa ne use bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya. Ashish apne masuka ke rag rag se parichit tha. Vo jitni hasmuk thi utani hi gussail bhi thi. Isse pehle jitni bhi bar pashpa roothi thi. Usse manane me aashishi ko deen me tare najar aa gaye. Ab ek vaisa hi manjar uske samne aa ubhara tha. Bas aashish ko ek paitra khoj niklna tha jo iss time uske kaam aaye lekin abhi uske dimag mai kuch aa hi nahi raha tha. Jis karan uske chahre ke barah baja hua tha aur uski yaha dasha vaha maujud kisi se chupa nahi tha. To jamai babu ko pareshan dekh surbhi boli…jamai babu aap jayda preshan na hoon.


“Na na samdhan ji ise pareshan hona chaiye isse kaha tha abhi tak pushpa ko nahi bataya koyi baat nahi par aaj bata de par nahi isse to surprise dena tha.(Itna bol thodi der ruka phir aashish se bola) De diya na surprise, haam dono ne apna palla jhad liya ab tu dekh tujhe kya karna hai. (Phir apne pati rawal se boli) Suno ji aap bhari sa check katke ise de do jarurat padne wali hai.


Aashish…maa paise ki jarurat tab padegi jab vo kharch karbayegi lekin vo kharch kaha karwati hai. Balki vo manne ke ewaj me alag alag type ki saja sochke rakhti hai ab pata nahi kyun si saja mere liye soch rakhi hai.


Lo ji ye pushpa maharani to duje qism ki premika hai. Jaha dusri premikaye rooth jaye to manne ke badle premi ke pocket pe danka dal deti hai aur hamari maharani pushpa apne premi ko alag alag qism ki saja deti hai. Halaki pushpa ke saja dene ki adat se surbhi parichit thi lekin pushpa maharani saja dene me aashish ko bhi nahi baksha ye na janti thi sirf surbhi hi nahi balki aashish ke maa bap ko bhi aaj hi pata chala ki unka beta apni premika ko manane me saja bhugtta hai na ki paisa kharch karta hai. Isliye tino ek hi waqt me aankho me chukne ka bhav liye. Bada sa muh khole bas “kya” hi bol paye aur teeno ke saath bole gaye shavd aur unke chahre ka bhav dekh aashish bola…ahaaa ye to bilaindar mistek ho gaya apna hi pol khola diya.


Jaha teeno ke chahre pe chaukne ka bhav tha. Vaha ab ashish ki bate sunke khila sa muskan tha. Jo jadli hi surbhi ke chahre se gayab ho gayi aur bharipan jaga le liya phir surbhi boli…iss pushpa ne kisi ko nahi baksha usse to……


“ji nahi aap hamari bahu ko kuch nahi kahenge ab vo hamari amant hai.” Surbhi ko tokte huye ashish ke pita rawal bole, rawal ko surbhi tokna chahti thi lekin surbhi ko mauka diye bina hi ashish ki maa bol padi…samdhan ji aap chinta na kare haam pushpa ki adato se parichit hai aur hame uski adato se koyi parhej nahi hai.


Pratek maa bap ko apne putri ki adate tab tak acha lagta hai jab tak ve sirf unki beti bankar rahti hai lekin jab ve vivah karke kisi dusre ke gar ki bahu ban jati hai ya banne wali hoti hai tab maa bap ko apne hi putri ke achi adate bhi bura lagne lagta hai. Surbhi bhi unhi maao me se ek thi aur use bhi ek ek ksan iss baat ka dar laga rahta tha ki uski putri ke kuch adate jo unke parivar ke liye sahi hai lekin vivah bad kahi uski ye adate uski vaivahik jivan me koyi badha na paida kar de isliye vo samay rahte apne putri ki kuch adato ko sudhrna chahti thi aur uspe vo kaam bhi kar rahi thi kuch adate vo sudhar chuki thi lekin vaha apne putri ki sabhi ko saja dene ki adat ko sudhar nahi pa rahi thi aur pushpa ki iss adat ko sudhrna use jaruri laga sirf isliye jab bhi pushpa kisi ko saja deti to na chahte huye bhi surbhi apne putri ko thodi pidha uski kaan umethkar deti thi. Jise shyad use lage ki ab use apni yaha adat ko badal lena chaiye lekin pushpa to pushpa hai vo apni iss adat ko badal hi nahi rahi thi.


Yaha jab pushpa ki adato se parichit hone ki baat aashish ki maa ne kaha to shurbhi aur aashish dono ki alag alag prtikriyaye thi. Ek aur ashashi chakit ho raha tha ki pushpa ki iss adat ke bare me vo janta hai lekin uski maa bap ko kaise pata chala vahi surbhi thodi der ke liye chakit huyi phir swatah hi uske chehre pe muskan aa gayi aur man hi man boli…pushpa ki jis adat se mai sabse jaydaa pareshan rahi jise sudharne ke liye mai na chahte huye bhi use pidha deti rahi aur ab sunne ko kya mila, ki jis gaar me uski vivah hogi vaha ke mukhiya ko uske iss adat se koyi parhej nahi sach me pushpa aise hi kudh ko maharani nahi kahti thi use pata tha jahan bhi jayegi vaha ek maharani ki tarh raj karegi.



Kahane ko to surbhi ne man me kaha diya lekin samdhi aur samdhan ki bate sunkar man hi man khush bhi ho rahi thi aur yaha janna ko bhi utsuk thi ki pushpa ne kab kaise apni adato ke bare me unhe bataya aur mana bhi liye isliye boli…mai to uski iss adat se pareshan thi jab man karta jisko man karta saja de deti hai lekin mudde ki baat ye hai ki jamai babu ko uske iss adat ke bare me pata hai aur hona bhi chaiye lekin aap done ko kab kaise pata chala?


Rawal…kab kaise pat chala ye janne se jaydaa jaruri ye hai kai hame hamari bahu ki iss adat ke bare me pata hona chaiye tha jo ho chuka.


Yahan ye sabhi pushpa ke saja dene ki adat pe chara kar rahe the theek usi waqt rawan aur rajendra rajmahal padhare jo kisi kaam se gaye huye the. Aate hi unhe naukro se pata chala ki kuch atithi aaye hai aur ve bhojan kaksh me hai to rawan aur rajendra us aur chale gaye. Jate huye unhe dur se hi dikh gaya ki kun aaye hai to jate hi duwar se hi unka haal chal puchte huye andar parvesh kar gaye.


Bhojan kashk me bate kisi aur vishay pe ho raha tha to rawan aur rajendra ke aate hi vaha vishya hi badal gaya. Barhal isi bich unka jalpaan bhi ho chuka tha to unko vishram karne aatithi kaksh ki aur bhej diya phir surbhi rajendra aur rawan dusre vishay pe chrcha karne lag gaye.


Ashish ke mata pita atithi kaksh me vishram kar rahe the lekin aashish babu ka vishram karne me man nahi lag raha tha. Uska man lagta bhi kaise uski masuka jo use roothi huyi hai aur use manana uska pahala kaam tha saath hi pushpa dwara di gayi saja ko bhi bhugtna tha.


Aashish pahali baar rajmahal aaya tha aur yahan ke kuch gine chune sadasy ke alawa kisi aur se parichit bhi nahi tha. Jiski help lekar vo pushpa se baat kar paye. Kuch der ki manshik daw pech ladane ke bad use laga uske iss kaam me sirf raghu hi kuch help kar sakta tha. Isske piche karan ye tha ki vo raghu se parichit tha aur ek baar dono ki bhet aur aapas me pichle deeno hui baat chit ne dono ek bich ek acha sambandh bana diya tha.


Ab aashish ka ek matra laksh tha ki kisi bhi tarah raghu se mile aur apni paristithi batakar apni masuka se baat kare aur usse manane ka koyi rasta dhundhe. Lekin raghu ka mahal me hona jaruri tha aur jab ashish ne pata lagaya tab jana raghu kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai. To usse laga ab khud se hi kuch karna hoga. Bas phir kya ashish kaam pe lag gaya isi bich ek do baar pushpa se mila bhi lekin pushpa ne aashish ko bhav hi nahi diya. Ab usse lagne laga ki sach me pushpa usse bahut jydaa rootha hua hai aur apni masuka ko nahi mana paya to aaj shaam ka jalsa ve rang ho jayega. Raghu mahal me tha nahi aur raghu ko mahal lautne me kitna waqt lagega iski bhi koyi theek theek jankari nahi tha aise me aashish ko ek aur rashta suja ki uske iss kaam me uski bhabhi yaa uski bahan dono me se koyi help kar Sakta hai lekin diswari ye thi ki uske bhai bhabhi aur bahan bhi kahi gaye huye the. To shyaad hi unse baat ho paye ab to uske paas bas ek hi rasta bacha tha aur vo sirf raghu hi tha aur raghu ke mahal lautne tak use wait karna tha jo aashish ke liye bahut bhari padne wala tha.


To be continued….
 
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Ek aur deen ka surya udit hua Parantu aaj ka deen kisi bhi tarah se RajMahal ke nivashiyo ke liye samany nahi tha. Aaj hi ke deen ke liye bite kai deen se taiyari chal raha tha. Jis karan mahal ke purush varg kuch jyada hi vyasth chal rahe tha aur streeya bhi vyasth thi aakhir aaj ratri ke jalsha me unhi ka bolbala hone wala tha.


Subah ke lagbhag das baze ka time ho raha tha mahal me bhagam bhag ki paristhiti bana hua tha kisi kaam ke liye kisi ko bulaya jata to do pal ki deri aur us bande ko koyi aur dhar le jata aur bulane bala pahle to kisiya jata phir ho rahi bhagam bhag ko dekhar mand mand muskura deta kahir aise time me ek car mahal ke aangan me parvesh karta hai aur unki welcome karne mahal ki Rani maa surbhi swam dwar pe phuch jati hai. Jitni der me aaye huye aatithi car se utarte hai utne samay me surbhi swam car tak pahuch gayi aur unke utarte hi unko aane me huyi subhidha asubhidha ke bare me pucha.


Chahe aane me asubhudha hua ho chahe na hua ho lekin puchne par ek hi jabab diya jata hai ki sab teek tha hame aane me koyi asubhidha nahi hua. Theek aisa hi uttar aane wale aatithio ne diya aur surbhi aise muskurayi jaise vo janti ho ki aatithiyo ko kitni subhidha ya asubhidha hui thi. Khair ati shigra unhe andar le jaya gaya jahan unke liye jalpan ki vyvshta pahle hi karke rakha hua tha. Andar aate hi surbhi boli…pahale aap sabhi jal pan kar lijiye phir vishram kar lena.


Aaye huye atithio me do jane us aur bad gaye jis aur unke liye jal pan ki vyavastha ho rakha tha lekin ek shaks vahi khada idhr udhar taakta raha yahan dekh surbhi boli… kya hua jamai babu apko jalpan nahi karna.


“Karna hai lekin vo…”


Surbhi…huuu to aap pushpa ko dhundh rahe ho lekin jahan tak mai janti hoon pushpa ko aap logo ke aane ki suchna pakar pahale hi aa jana chaiye tha lekin vo aayi nahi iska matlab apne use bataya hi nahi ki aap log aa rahe hoon.


Raj mahal ki jamai sirf ek hi hai, ashish aur ashish apne mata pita ke saath hi aaya hai. Lekin jab surbhi ne kaha to jabab me ashish ne sirf ha me mundi hila diya tab surbhi boli…aap jalpan karne baithiye mai pushpa ko bulaba bhejti hoon.


Turant hi surbhi ne ek naukar ko bhulbaya aur use maharani pushpa ko bulane bhej diya. Udhar pushpa maharani apne kaksh me shalu, chanchal aur kamla ke saath kuch gopniye bate kar rahe the. Theek usi samay naukar sandesha liye pahucha aur bola…maharani ji kuch atithi aaye hai isliye rani maa ne apko bulawa bheja hai…


“Aatithi aaye hai to maa se kaho vo hi unka swagat satkar kare mai abhi kuch jaruri charcha kar rahi hoon.”


“Are nanadrani aap mahal ki maharani ho aur apko to atothio ke satakar me mammi ji se pahale jana chaiye.”


Itna sunte hi pushpa apne jagah se uthi aur kamla ke seer thame matha chum liya phir boli…bhabhi app mera bahut acha sagirdh ho mai bhale hi meri pad bhul jaunu lekin aap nahi bhulti.


Pushpa ki iss kirty se kamla thodi jhep gayi aur pushpa jate hue ek baar phir boli…bhabhi mere chumban ke seriously na le, lena hi hai to bhaiya ke chumban ko le..


Bas itna kaha aur pushpa aise chali gayi jaise hawa ke ek jhoke ne vaha maujud tinke ko bhi apne saath uda le gaye aur idhar pushpa ki bato ko samjhkar kamla ko tuski mar marke dono sakhiya chede ja rahe the. Jiska natija ye hua ki unke bich ho rahi bato ka rukh badal gaya aur samany bato ke jagah ashlil bato ne le liya. To inko us aur badne dete hai ham aham mudde ki aur badte hai jo ki abhi andhi ki gati se chali gayi..


Pushpa jab bhojan kaksh me pahuchi to vaha uska samna sabse pahale aashish se hua lekin ye kya? pushpa ne aashish ko aise andekha kar diya jaise vo pushpa ke liye koyi mayne hi na rakhta ho kahir pushpa aage badi aur apne hone wale sas sasur se mila unse haal chal pucha aur chali gayi.


Aashish samjh to raha tha ki kyu pushpa ne use ignore kiya aur aashish us vishay pe bat karana chahata tha lekin pushpa ne use bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya. Ashish apne masuka ke rag rag se parichit tha. Vo jitni hasmuk thi utani hi gussail bhi thi. Isse pehle jitni bhi bar pashpa roothi thi. Usse manane me aashishi ko deen me tare najar aa gaye. Ab ek vaisa hi manjar uske samne aa ubhara tha. Bas aashish ko ek paitra khoj niklna tha jo iss time uske kaam aaye lekin abhi uske dimag mai kuch aa hi nahi raha tha. Jis karan uske chahre ke barah baja hua tha aur uski yaha dasha vaha maujud kisi se chupa nahi tha. To jamai babu ko pareshan dekh surbhi boli…jamai babu aap jayda preshan na hoon.


“Na na samdhan ji ise pareshan hona chaiye isse kaha tha abhi tak pushpa ko nahi bataya koyi baat nahi par aaj bata de par nahi isse to surprise dena tha.(Itna bol thodi der ruka phir aashish se bola) De diya na surprise, haam dono ne apna palla jhad liya ab tu dekh tujhe kya karna hai. (Phir apne pati rawal se boli) Suno ji aap bhari sa check katke ise de do jarurat padne wali hai.


Aashish…maa paise ki jarurat tab padegi jab vo kharch karbayegi lekin vo kharch kaha karwati hai. Balki vo manne ke ewaj me alag alag type ki saja sochke rakhti hai ab pata nahi kyun si saja mere liye soch rakhi hai.


Lo ji ye pushpa maharani to duje qism ki premika hai. Jaha dusri premikaye rooth jaye to manne ke badle premi ke pocket pe danka dal deti hai aur hamari maharani pushpa apne premi ko alag alag qism ki saja deti hai. Halaki pushpa ke saja dene ki adat se surbhi parichit thi lekin pushpa maharani saja dene me aashish ko bhi nahi baksha ye na janti thi sirf surbhi hi nahi balki aashish ke maa bap ko bhi aaj hi pata chala ki unka beta apni premika ko manane me saja bhugtta hai na ki paisa kharch karta hai. Isliye tino ek hi waqt me aankho me chukne ka bhav liye. Bada sa muh khole bas “kya” hi bol paye aur teeno ke saath bole gaye shavd aur unke chahre ka bhav dekh aashish bola…ahaaa ye to bilaindar mistek ho gaya apna hi pol khola diya.


Jaha teeno ke chahre pe chaukne ka bhav tha. Vaha ab ashish ki bate sunke khila sa muskan tha. Jo jadli hi surbhi ke chahre se gayab ho gayi aur bharipan jaga le liya phir surbhi boli…iss pushpa ne kisi ko nahi baksha usse to……


“ji nahi aap hamari bahu ko kuch nahi kahenge ab vo hamari amant hai.” Surbhi ko tokte huye ashish ke pita rawal bole, rawal ko surbhi tokna chahti thi lekin surbhi ko mauka diye bina hi ashish ki maa bol padi…samdhan ji aap chinta na kare haam pushpa ki adato se parichit hai aur hame uski adato se koyi parhej nahi hai.


Pratek maa bap ko apne putri ki adate tab tak acha lagta hai jab tak ve sirf unki beti bankar rahti hai lekin jab ve vivah karke kisi dusre ke gar ki bahu ban jati hai ya banne wali hoti hai tab maa bap ko apne hi putri ke achi adate bhi bura lagne lagta hai. Surbhi bhi unhi maao me se ek thi aur use bhi ek ek ksan iss baat ka dar laga rahta tha ki uski putri ke kuch adate jo unke parivar ke liye sahi hai lekin vivah bad kahi uski ye adate uski vaivahik jivan me koyi badha na paida kar de isliye vo samay rahte apne putri ki kuch adato ko sudhrna chahti thi aur uspe vo kaam bhi kar rahi thi kuch adate vo sudhar chuki thi lekin vaha apne putri ki sabhi ko saja dene ki adat ko sudhar nahi pa rahi thi aur pushpa ki iss adat ko sudhrna use jaruri laga sirf isliye jab bhi pushpa kisi ko saja deti to na chahte huye bhi surbhi apne putri ko thodi pidha uski kaan umethkar deti thi. Jise shyad use lage ki ab use apni yaha adat ko badal lena chaiye lekin pushpa to pushpa hai vo apni iss adat ko badal hi nahi rahi thi.


Yaha jab pushpa ki adato se parichit hone ki baat aashish ki maa ne kaha to shurbhi aur aashish dono ki alag alag prtikriyaye thi. Ek aur ashashi chakit ho raha tha ki pushpa ki iss adat ke bare me vo janta hai lekin uski maa bap ko kaise pata chala vahi surbhi thodi der ke liye chakit huyi phir swatah hi uske chehre pe muskan aa gayi aur man hi man boli…pushpa ki jis adat se mai sabse jaydaa pareshan rahi jise sudharne ke liye mai na chahte huye bhi use pidha deti rahi aur ab sunne ko kya mila, ki jis gaar me uski vivah hogi vaha ke mukhiya ko uske iss adat se koyi parhej nahi sach me pushpa aise hi kudh ko maharani nahi kahti thi use pata tha jahan bhi jayegi vaha ek maharani ki tarh raj karegi.



Kahane ko to surbhi ne man me kaha diya lekin samdhi aur samdhan ki bate sunkar man hi man khush bhi ho rahi thi aur yaha janna ko bhi utsuk thi ki pushpa ne kab kaise apni adato ke bare me unhe bataya aur mana bhi liye isliye boli…mai to uski iss adat se pareshan thi jab man karta jisko man karta saja de deti hai lekin mudde ki baat ye hai ki jamai babu ko uske iss adat ke bare me pata hai aur hona bhi chaiye lekin aap done ko kab kaise pata chala?


Rawal…kab kaise pat chala ye janne se jaydaa jaruri ye hai kai hame hamari bahu ki iss adat ke bare me pata hona chaiye tha jo ho chuka.


Yahan ye sabhi pushpa ke saja dene ki adat pe chara kar rahe the theek usi waqt rawan aur rajendra rajmahal padhare jo kisi kaam se gaye huye the. Aate hi unhe naukro se pata chala ki kuch atithi aaye hai aur ve bhojan kaksh me hai to rawan aur rajendra us aur chale gaye. Jate huye unhe dur se hi dikh gaya ki kun aaye hai to jate hi duwar se hi unka haal chal puchte huye andar parvesh kar gaye.


Bhojan kashk me bate kisi aur vishay pe ho raha tha to rawan aur rajendra ke aate hi vaha vishya hi badal gaya. Barhal isi bich unka jalpaan bhi ho chuka tha to unko vishram karne aatithi kaksh ki aur bhej diya phir surbhi rajendra aur rawan dusre vishay pe chrcha karne lag gaye.


Ashish ke mata pita atithi kaksh me vishram kar rahe the lekin aashish babu ka vishram karne me man nahi lag raha tha. Uska man lagta bhi kaise uski masuka jo use roothi huyi hai aur use manana uska pahala kaam tha saath hi pushpa dwara di gayi saja ko bhi bhugtna tha.


Aashish pahali baar rajmahal aaya tha aur yahan ke kuch gine chune sadasy ke alawa kisi aur se parichit bhi nahi tha. Jiski help lekar vo pushpa se baat kar paye. Kuch der ki manshik daw pech ladane ke bad use laga uske iss kaam me sirf raghu hi kuch help kar sakta tha. Isske piche karan ye tha ki vo raghu se parichit tha aur ek baar dono ki bhet aur aapas me pichle deeno hui baat chit ne dono ek bich ek acha sambandh bana diya tha.


Ab aashish ka ek matra laksh tha ki kisi bhi tarah raghu se mile aur apni paristithi batakar apni masuka se baat kare aur usse manane ka koyi rasta dhundhe. Lekin raghu ka mahal me hona jaruri tha aur jab ashish ne pata lagaya tab jana raghu kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai. To usse laga ab khud se hi kuch karna hoga. Bas phir kya ashish kaam pe lag gaya isi bich ek do baar pushpa se mila bhi lekin pushpa ne aashish ko bhav hi nahi diya. Ab usse lagne laga ki sach me pushpa usse bahut jydaa rootha hua hai aur apni masuka ko nahi mana paya to aaj shaam ka jalsa ve rang ho jayega. Raghu mahal me tha nahi aur raghu ko mahal lautne me kitna waqt lagega iski bhi koyi theek theek jankari nahi tha aise me aashish ko ek aur rashta suja ki uske iss kaam me uski bhabhi yaa uski bahan dono me se koyi help kar Sakta hai lekin diswari ye thi ki uske bhai bhabhi aur bahan bhi kahi gaye huye the. To shyaad hi unse baat ho paye ab to uske paas bas ek hi rasta bacha tha aur vo sirf raghu hi tha aur raghu ke mahal lautne tak use wait karna tha jo aashish ke liye bahut bhari padne wala tha.


To be continued….

Bahut hi khubsurat update diya jaha ek aur masuka ko mane ki jatan me ashish laga hua hai lekin koyi vajiv rasta nahi dikh raha vahi dusri aur ek maa ke man ka dar hamesha hamesha ke liye samapt ho gaya ab dekhte hai ashish kaise pushpa ko manata hai.
 
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Ek aur deen ka surya udit hua Parantu aaj ka deen kisi bhi tarah se RajMahal ke nivashiyo ke liye samany nahi tha. Aaj hi ke deen ke liye bite kai deen se taiyari chal raha tha. Jis karan mahal ke purush varg kuch jyada hi vyasth chal rahe tha aur streeya bhi vyasth thi aakhir aaj ratri ke jalsha me unhi ka bolbala hone wala tha.


Subah ke lagbhag das baze ka time ho raha tha mahal me bhagam bhag ki paristhiti bana hua tha kisi kaam ke liye kisi ko bulaya jata to do pal ki deri aur us bande ko koyi aur dhar le jata aur bulane bala pahle to kisiya jata phir ho rahi bhagam bhag ko dekhar mand mand muskura deta kahir aise time me ek car mahal ke aangan me parvesh karta hai aur unki welcome karne mahal ki Rani maa surbhi swam dwar pe phuch jati hai. Jitni der me aaye huye aatithi car se utarte hai utne samay me surbhi swam car tak pahuch gayi aur unke utarte hi unko aane me huyi subhidha asubhidha ke bare me pucha.


Chahe aane me asubhudha hua ho chahe na hua ho lekin puchne par ek hi jabab diya jata hai ki sab teek tha hame aane me koyi asubhidha nahi hua. Theek aisa hi uttar aane wale aatithio ne diya aur surbhi aise muskurayi jaise vo janti ho ki aatithiyo ko kitni subhidha ya asubhidha hui thi. Khair ati shigra unhe andar le jaya gaya jahan unke liye jalpan ki vyvshta pahle hi karke rakha hua tha. Andar aate hi surbhi boli…pahale aap sabhi jal pan kar lijiye phir vishram kar lena.


Aaye huye atithio me do jane us aur bad gaye jis aur unke liye jal pan ki vyavastha ho rakha tha lekin ek shaks vahi khada idhr udhar taakta raha yahan dekh surbhi boli… kya hua jamai babu apko jalpan nahi karna.


“Karna hai lekin vo…”


Surbhi…huuu to aap pushpa ko dhundh rahe ho lekin jahan tak mai janti hoon pushpa ko aap logo ke aane ki suchna pakar pahale hi aa jana chaiye tha lekin vo aayi nahi iska matlab apne use bataya hi nahi ki aap log aa rahe hoon.


Raj mahal ki jamai sirf ek hi hai, ashish aur ashish apne mata pita ke saath hi aaya hai. Lekin jab surbhi ne kaha to jabab me ashish ne sirf ha me mundi hila diya tab surbhi boli…aap jalpan karne baithiye mai pushpa ko bulaba bhejti hoon.


Turant hi surbhi ne ek naukar ko bhulbaya aur use maharani pushpa ko bulane bhej diya. Udhar pushpa maharani apne kaksh me shalu, chanchal aur kamla ke saath kuch gopniye bate kar rahe the. Theek usi samay naukar sandesha liye pahucha aur bola…maharani ji kuch atithi aaye hai isliye rani maa ne apko bulawa bheja hai…


“Aatithi aaye hai to maa se kaho vo hi unka swagat satkar kare mai abhi kuch jaruri charcha kar rahi hoon.”


“Are nanadrani aap mahal ki maharani ho aur apko to atothio ke satakar me mammi ji se pahale jana chaiye.”


Itna sunte hi pushpa apne jagah se uthi aur kamla ke seer thame matha chum liya phir boli…bhabhi app mera bahut acha sagirdh ho mai bhale hi meri pad bhul jaunu lekin aap nahi bhulti.


Pushpa ki iss kirty se kamla thodi jhep gayi aur pushpa jate hue ek baar phir boli…bhabhi mere chumban ke seriously na le, lena hi hai to bhaiya ke chumban ko le..


Bas itna kaha aur pushpa aise chali gayi jaise hawa ke ek jhoke ne vaha maujud tinke ko bhi apne saath uda le gaye aur idhar pushpa ki bato ko samjhkar kamla ko tuski mar marke dono sakhiya chede ja rahe the. Jiska natija ye hua ki unke bich ho rahi bato ka rukh badal gaya aur samany bato ke jagah ashlil bato ne le liya. To inko us aur badne dete hai ham aham mudde ki aur badte hai jo ki abhi andhi ki gati se chali gayi..


Pushpa jab bhojan kaksh me pahuchi to vaha uska samna sabse pahale aashish se hua lekin ye kya? pushpa ne aashish ko aise andekha kar diya jaise vo pushpa ke liye koyi mayne hi na rakhta ho kahir pushpa aage badi aur apne hone wale sas sasur se mila unse haal chal pucha aur chali gayi.


Aashish samjh to raha tha ki kyu pushpa ne use ignore kiya aur aashish us vishay pe bat karana chahata tha lekin pushpa ne use bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya. Ashish apne masuka ke rag rag se parichit tha. Vo jitni hasmuk thi utani hi gussail bhi thi. Isse pehle jitni bhi bar pashpa roothi thi. Usse manane me aashishi ko deen me tare najar aa gaye. Ab ek vaisa hi manjar uske samne aa ubhara tha. Bas aashish ko ek paitra khoj niklna tha jo iss time uske kaam aaye lekin abhi uske dimag mai kuch aa hi nahi raha tha. Jis karan uske chahre ke barah baja hua tha aur uski yaha dasha vaha maujud kisi se chupa nahi tha. To jamai babu ko pareshan dekh surbhi boli…jamai babu aap jayda preshan na hoon.


“Na na samdhan ji ise pareshan hona chaiye isse kaha tha abhi tak pushpa ko nahi bataya koyi baat nahi par aaj bata de par nahi isse to surprise dena tha.(Itna bol thodi der ruka phir aashish se bola) De diya na surprise, haam dono ne apna palla jhad liya ab tu dekh tujhe kya karna hai. (Phir apne pati rawal se boli) Suno ji aap bhari sa check katke ise de do jarurat padne wali hai.


Aashish…maa paise ki jarurat tab padegi jab vo kharch karbayegi lekin vo kharch kaha karwati hai. Balki vo manne ke ewaj me alag alag type ki saja sochke rakhti hai ab pata nahi kyun si saja mere liye soch rakhi hai.


Lo ji ye pushpa maharani to duje qism ki premika hai. Jaha dusri premikaye rooth jaye to manne ke badle premi ke pocket pe danka dal deti hai aur hamari maharani pushpa apne premi ko alag alag qism ki saja deti hai. Halaki pushpa ke saja dene ki adat se surbhi parichit thi lekin pushpa maharani saja dene me aashish ko bhi nahi baksha ye na janti thi sirf surbhi hi nahi balki aashish ke maa bap ko bhi aaj hi pata chala ki unka beta apni premika ko manane me saja bhugtta hai na ki paisa kharch karta hai. Isliye tino ek hi waqt me aankho me chukne ka bhav liye. Bada sa muh khole bas “kya” hi bol paye aur teeno ke saath bole gaye shavd aur unke chahre ka bhav dekh aashish bola…ahaaa ye to bilaindar mistek ho gaya apna hi pol khola diya.


Jaha teeno ke chahre pe chaukne ka bhav tha. Vaha ab ashish ki bate sunke khila sa muskan tha. Jo jadli hi surbhi ke chahre se gayab ho gayi aur bharipan jaga le liya phir surbhi boli…iss pushpa ne kisi ko nahi baksha usse to……


“ji nahi aap hamari bahu ko kuch nahi kahenge ab vo hamari amant hai.” Surbhi ko tokte huye ashish ke pita rawal bole, rawal ko surbhi tokna chahti thi lekin surbhi ko mauka diye bina hi ashish ki maa bol padi…samdhan ji aap chinta na kare haam pushpa ki adato se parichit hai aur hame uski adato se koyi parhej nahi hai.


Pratek maa bap ko apne putri ki adate tab tak acha lagta hai jab tak ve sirf unki beti bankar rahti hai lekin jab ve vivah karke kisi dusre ke gar ki bahu ban jati hai ya banne wali hoti hai tab maa bap ko apne hi putri ke achi adate bhi bura lagne lagta hai. Surbhi bhi unhi maao me se ek thi aur use bhi ek ek ksan iss baat ka dar laga rahta tha ki uski putri ke kuch adate jo unke parivar ke liye sahi hai lekin vivah bad kahi uski ye adate uski vaivahik jivan me koyi badha na paida kar de isliye vo samay rahte apne putri ki kuch adato ko sudhrna chahti thi aur uspe vo kaam bhi kar rahi thi kuch adate vo sudhar chuki thi lekin vaha apne putri ki sabhi ko saja dene ki adat ko sudhar nahi pa rahi thi aur pushpa ki iss adat ko sudhrna use jaruri laga sirf isliye jab bhi pushpa kisi ko saja deti to na chahte huye bhi surbhi apne putri ko thodi pidha uski kaan umethkar deti thi. Jise shyad use lage ki ab use apni yaha adat ko badal lena chaiye lekin pushpa to pushpa hai vo apni iss adat ko badal hi nahi rahi thi.


Yaha jab pushpa ki adato se parichit hone ki baat aashish ki maa ne kaha to shurbhi aur aashish dono ki alag alag prtikriyaye thi. Ek aur ashashi chakit ho raha tha ki pushpa ki iss adat ke bare me vo janta hai lekin uski maa bap ko kaise pata chala vahi surbhi thodi der ke liye chakit huyi phir swatah hi uske chehre pe muskan aa gayi aur man hi man boli…pushpa ki jis adat se mai sabse jaydaa pareshan rahi jise sudharne ke liye mai na chahte huye bhi use pidha deti rahi aur ab sunne ko kya mila, ki jis gaar me uski vivah hogi vaha ke mukhiya ko uske iss adat se koyi parhej nahi sach me pushpa aise hi kudh ko maharani nahi kahti thi use pata tha jahan bhi jayegi vaha ek maharani ki tarh raj karegi.



Kahane ko to surbhi ne man me kaha diya lekin samdhi aur samdhan ki bate sunkar man hi man khush bhi ho rahi thi aur yaha janna ko bhi utsuk thi ki pushpa ne kab kaise apni adato ke bare me unhe bataya aur mana bhi liye isliye boli…mai to uski iss adat se pareshan thi jab man karta jisko man karta saja de deti hai lekin mudde ki baat ye hai ki jamai babu ko uske iss adat ke bare me pata hai aur hona bhi chaiye lekin aap done ko kab kaise pata chala?


Rawal…kab kaise pat chala ye janne se jaydaa jaruri ye hai kai hame hamari bahu ki iss adat ke bare me pata hona chaiye tha jo ho chuka.


Yahan ye sabhi pushpa ke saja dene ki adat pe chara kar rahe the theek usi waqt rawan aur rajendra rajmahal padhare jo kisi kaam se gaye huye the. Aate hi unhe naukro se pata chala ki kuch atithi aaye hai aur ve bhojan kaksh me hai to rawan aur rajendra us aur chale gaye. Jate huye unhe dur se hi dikh gaya ki kun aaye hai to jate hi duwar se hi unka haal chal puchte huye andar parvesh kar gaye.


Bhojan kashk me bate kisi aur vishay pe ho raha tha to rawan aur rajendra ke aate hi vaha vishya hi badal gaya. Barhal isi bich unka jalpaan bhi ho chuka tha to unko vishram karne aatithi kaksh ki aur bhej diya phir surbhi rajendra aur rawan dusre vishay pe chrcha karne lag gaye.


Ashish ke mata pita atithi kaksh me vishram kar rahe the lekin aashish babu ka vishram karne me man nahi lag raha tha. Uska man lagta bhi kaise uski masuka jo use roothi huyi hai aur use manana uska pahala kaam tha saath hi pushpa dwara di gayi saja ko bhi bhugtna tha.


Aashish pahali baar rajmahal aaya tha aur yahan ke kuch gine chune sadasy ke alawa kisi aur se parichit bhi nahi tha. Jiski help lekar vo pushpa se baat kar paye. Kuch der ki manshik daw pech ladane ke bad use laga uske iss kaam me sirf raghu hi kuch help kar sakta tha. Isske piche karan ye tha ki vo raghu se parichit tha aur ek baar dono ki bhet aur aapas me pichle deeno hui baat chit ne dono ek bich ek acha sambandh bana diya tha.


Ab aashish ka ek matra laksh tha ki kisi bhi tarah raghu se mile aur apni paristithi batakar apni masuka se baat kare aur usse manane ka koyi rasta dhundhe. Lekin raghu ka mahal me hona jaruri tha aur jab ashish ne pata lagaya tab jana raghu kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai. To usse laga ab khud se hi kuch karna hoga. Bas phir kya ashish kaam pe lag gaya isi bich ek do baar pushpa se mila bhi lekin pushpa ne aashish ko bhav hi nahi diya. Ab usse lagne laga ki sach me pushpa usse bahut jydaa rootha hua hai aur apni masuka ko nahi mana paya to aaj shaam ka jalsa ve rang ho jayega. Raghu mahal me tha nahi aur raghu ko mahal lautne me kitna waqt lagega iski bhi koyi theek theek jankari nahi tha aise me aashish ko ek aur rashta suja ki uske iss kaam me uski bhabhi yaa uski bahan dono me se koyi help kar Sakta hai lekin diswari ye thi ki uske bhai bhabhi aur bahan bhi kahi gaye huye the. To shyaad hi unse baat ho paye ab to uske paas bas ek hi rasta bacha tha aur vo sirf raghu hi tha aur raghu ke mahal lautne tak use wait karna tha jo aashish ke liye bahut bhari padne wala tha.


To be continued….
Nice update and awesome writing skills
 

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