Romance Ajnabi hamsafar rishton ka gatbandhan

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shadi ka rista tutne ki bajaye fir se jud jane par ravan kisi ghayal sher ki tarah bilbila utha, jis sukanya ko jan se jyada pyar karta tha,gusse me usii par bhi hath utha diya . sukanya itni asani se maf nahi karne wali usko.kamla aur raghu ki shadi todne ke liye ravan fir se koi nya scheme taiyar kar raha hai.lkin kamla raghu aur baaki sabhi is bat se anjan hai..
Sukriya ji

Gussa aur lobh vivek ko kha jata hai. Ravan lalach me sabhi snargal kam karta raha jab nakami haat laga to gusse me ye bhi bhul gaya ki vo kis par haath utha raha apni patni par. Kahir ab haath utha diya to diya dekhte hai aage in dono ke rishte me kaun kaun se mod aate hai.
 
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Shopping karte huye raghu aur kamla kitne khush hai. par unko to pata hi nahi ravan har samay dono ki life mein grahan lagaye betha hai. haweli me ek kohraam aaya ho ,ravan to pagal hi ho gaya tha, sukanya ko bhi lappad jhappad mar diya . dusro ka bura chahne wala ravan ab uski biwi hi usse naraj hai .
Sukriya Aakesh. Ji

Khush to hoga hi itne siddat se samay chakr bhi dono ke ek karne me jhuta hai. Aise me khush hi milega
Ravan ke lagye grhan ne usi ke khushi ko nigal gaya. Aage dekhte hai aur kaun kaun se grhan rawan ke life me aane wala hai.
 
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Update 28
so finally jo main chaah rahi thi wohi hua .. ravan aur sukanya le bich jo rishta hai us mein ab ek kadwahat aa chuki hai, ravan ki galti ke chalte dono ke bich dooriyaan paida ho chuki hai... der saber dono alag bhi jaayenge.... aur phir.... phir surbhi aur sukanya ko ek hone se koi rok paayega :love2: :D dono ki mohabbat ki ek alag hi daastaan likhi jaayegi sunhare aksharon mein... :poet:
Surbhi and Sukanya be like
Hum hain is pal yahaan
Jaane ho kal kahaan
Hum milein na milein
Hum rahe na rahein
Rahegi sada yaha
Pyaar ki ye daastaan
Sunenge sada jise
Ye jameen aasmaan......
waise aaj agar surbhi ghar pe hoti to aisi himmat kabhi nahi kar pata ravan... ki surbhi ke samne hi usiki premika sukanya pe hath utha de :goftogo:

Khair.... itno ki chahat to parwaan chadh hi jaayegi... baaki wo ravan phir se chaal chal di hai shaadi todne ke liye... btw jab Rajendra & family ko pata chalega ki asli culprit koun hai tab ravan kya haal hoga.. aur us tute fute dalal ka...

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
Will Change With Time
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Update 28
so finally jo main chaah rahi thi wohi hua .. ravan aur sukanya le bich jo rishta hai us mein ab ek kadwahat aa chuki hai, ravan ki galti ke chalte dono ke bich dooriyaan paida ho chuki hai... der saber dono alag bhi jaayenge.... aur phir.... phir surbhi aur sukanya ko ek hone se koi rok paayega :love2: :D dono ki mohabbat ki ek alag hi daastaan likhi jaayegi sunhare aksharon mein... :poet:
Surbhi and Sukanya be like
Hum hain is pal yahaan
Jaane ho kal kahaan
Hum milein na milein
Hum rahe na rahein
Rahegi sada yaha
Pyaar ki ye daastaan
Sunenge sada jise
Ye jameen aasmaan......
waise aaj agar surbhi ghar pe hoti to aisi himmat kabhi nahi kar pata ravan... ki surbhi ke samne hi usiki premika sukanya pe hath utha de :goftogo:

Khair.... itno ki chahat to parwaan chadh hi jaayegi... baaki wo ravan phir se chaal chal di hai shaadi todne ke liye... btw jab Rajendra & family ko pata chalega ki asli culprit koun hai tab ravan kya haal hoga.. aur us tute fute dalal ka...

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:

Bahut bahut shukriya 🙏 itna shandar revo motivated revo diya.

Ravan aur sukanya ke rishte me kadwahat aa gaya to kiya hua do char bori chini gholkar rawan mithas la hi lega:D rawan jaisa admi ke pas sabhi musibat se niklne ka ilaj hota hai.

Ye chand laine bahut khubsurat hai.
 

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