Romance Bewafa (Hum ya Woh ?) completed

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Story is good, but ending, and few things like understanding of each other, and some changes in plot of story. It will be great. Is my thinking.

Else it is great

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Bewafa to waqt tha jo saari chal chali .... Very Emotional ending hua story ka par zindagi to ruk nahi sakti na to ye bhi chalta rahega.

 

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Bewafa to waqt tha jo saari chal chali .... Very Emotional ending hua story ka par zindagi to ruk nahi sakti na to ye bhi chalta rahega.

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Nadi k kinare gadi khadi thi ..Aur uske head light ke samne aik pathar k upper 21 Saal ka aik ladka betha tha .. Hath me Sigeret .. Jisme chars daal raha tha .. Badhi hui daadhi .. Laal aankhein .. Aur unme nami .. Wahi uske paas aik pathar k upper aik diary .. Jiske andar Qalam rakha tha .. Taa ke jab bhi dmaagh me poetry aaye to likh de .. Ladka abhi full nashe mein tha .. Aur ye uska 10wa sigeret tha .. who bhi chars se bhara hua ..

Abhi jab sigeret tayar hua .. To usne aik lamba kash le kar sigeret ka dhua andar kheencha .. Aur jab dhua chodha to uske aankhein nam ho gayi .. Ye har rozana aik baar is jagah pe zaroor ata tha .. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..Kyu ke aik yehi jagah thi jahan uske dil ko sukoon milta tha ..

Magar aaj yaha bhi uske dil ko sukoon nehi mil raha tha .. Aaj uske aansu khud ba khud beh rahe the .. Aur Sigeret pe sigeret bana ke peeta jaa raha tha .. Aur nashi me aur bhi choor hota jaa raha tha ..

Who ladkhadata hua us pathar se khada hua .. Aur neem khuli aankhon se apne diary ki taraf dekha .. aur phir diary uthaya aur gadi ki taraf chal padha .. Ladhkhadate hue gadi k paas pohoncha .. aur door open kar ke driving seat pe betha .. Phir door band kar ke gadi start kiya aur main road ki taraf le gaya ..

Jab main road pe pohoncha to aram se drive kar raha tha .. Usne socha tha k ghar jayega abhi .. Kher aik haath pe sigeret dusre se stearing ko pakda hua tha .. Abhi raat k lagbhag 10 baj rahe the .. Ye rasta usey itne ache se yaad tha .. K who aankhein band kar ke bhi apne ghar pohonch sakta tha .. Isliye itna nashi me hone ki wajah se bhi who aaram se drive kar raha tha ..

Jab aik street light k samne se guzra gadi .. to light uske chehre pe padhi .. Aankhon se ansu ab baqaida beh rahe the .. aur dil ki dhadkanein badhti jaa rahi thi .. Aankhon me kisi ko na paane ka ghum .. Dimaagh me kisi k sath bitaye hue haseen palon k yaadein .. Dil mein aik dard aik sawal .. K Bewafa kon Hum ya who .. Bujha hua chehra .. Jo kabhi ladkiyon ko pagal kiya karta tha ..

Abhi drive karte hue who jaa raha tha .. Door se hi usey main road pe aik ghar dikhayi padhi .. Jisme shadi ho rahi thi .. Lightein jal rahi thi .. Gane ki awazein door se hi aa rahi thi .. Aur bahar bhi log phir rahe the .. Usey dekh k uske dil ki dhadkanein badh gayi .. Aur sath hi sath gadi ki speed bhi .. Ankhon se aansu behna aur bhi ziada ho gaya tha ..

Jab who us ghar k samne se guzar raha tha .. To apna gerdan ghuma k ghar ki taraf dekha .. Ye uski aadat thi .. Jab bhi who is raaste se guzarta tha .. Apna sar ghuma k us ghar ki taraf zaroor dekhta tha .. Magar is baar kuch ziada hi der us taraf dekha .. Jab usne aage dekha to boht der ho chuki thi .. Uske aankhon me aansu hone ki wajah se theek se dekh nahi paa raha tha ..

Uske kaanon me truck k horn ki awaz padhi .. aur ankhon me head light .. Jab tak who samajh pata .. aage se aati hui truck uske gadi se takra chuki thi .. Aur dono ki speed tez hone ki wajah se bada zordar accident hua tha .. Truck ulat gaya tha .. aur siddha gadi ke upper tha .. Uske neeche gadi dab gayi thi .. Aur sath hi sath who ladka bhi ..Log daudhte hue us taraf aa rahe the ..

Aur gadi k andar se uski diary nikal kar bahar gir gayi thi .. Aur hawa k jhonke uske panne palat rahe the .. Aik page pe aa ke ruk gayi .. Usme us ladke ka likha hua aakhri Poetry thi ..

Pehle Pehel Dunya Ne Rulaya
Sitam kam Na The ? Jo Tu Ne Sataya


Ada E Qatil Ne Kyu Paas Bulaya
Kya Khoob Pyar Se Dil Ko Jalaya


Tang aa Kar Hum Ne Khuda Ko Bataya
Jab Chaha Jahan Chaha Paas Paya


Be Khud Hum Hue Haal E Dil Sunaya
Ab Ishq Ne Hai Muhabbat Mitaya


Ek Kiran Dikhi Umeed Pe Jagaya
Bakhsh Ab Zakki Ko Aye Khudaya​

Muje laga squad cocolding in faith story hogi. Par kavita se to lag Rana he romantic story he. Par jabardast start liya.

 

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Update 2

Some years back



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Subah sub 4 ladke bus stop pe khade bus ka wait kar rahe the .. Unme se 2 ladke aik dusre se baat kar rahe the .. 1 keh raha tha

Ladka 1 :- Yar Zakki tension kyu le raha hai .. Tu hi 1st​ ayega bhai .. Aaj tak tujhse koi ziada number le paya hai ..

Zakki :- Yar Zohaib tension mujhe numbers ki nahi hai .. Mujhe pata hai 1st​ me hi aunga ..

Zohaib :- Phir kis baat ki tension hai yar ..

Zakki :- Yar tension is baat ki hai .. K kahi zeeniya mujhse ziada number na le le ..

Zohaib :- Hahaha pata tha yar mujhe .. Tension na le tere marks ziada ayenge .. Mana k pichli baar uske ziada the .. But mujhe pakka yaqeen hai is baar tumhare honge ..

Zakki :- Hope so ..

Abhi dono baat hi kar rahe the .. K dusri taraf se teesra ladka awaz deta hai

Ladka :- Zakki Zohaib aa jao … Bus aa gayi hai ..

Phir who dono bhi bus ki taraf jate hai .. Aur andar jaa ke Aik seat pe beth jate hai .. Jo hamesha unke liye khali rehti hai .. Chahe bus full hi kyu na ho .. Dono waha beth jate hai ..

Zaki ur rehman AKA Zakki Age 18 , Abhi inter part 2 mein hai , Bio liya hai inter me .. Ghussa jald hi ata hai usey .. City k sab se bade school me study kar raha hai .. Aur kafi respected aur rich family se belong karta hai .. Ya aise keh lein k city k sab se respected familye se .. Kyu ke inke ilawa koi ziada respected family nahi hai .. Khud k khubsurti aur apne family pe ghamand .. Jiske chalte ladkiyon ki taraf dekhta tak nahi .. Chehra aisa k har ladki pagal ho jaye .. Ziada style nahi karta aur kam bhi nahi .. Lehja aisa k aik bar baat karne k baad har koi dubara baat karna chahe .. Padhai me no. 1 .. Hamesha 1st​ hi aya hai ..

Zohaib age 18 , Zakki ka hi class fellow hai .. Aur uska cuzn bhi hai .. Shakal o surat achi hai .. Aur had se ziada style karta hai .. Aksar ladkiyon k sath flirt karta rehta hai .. Padhai me kuch acha nahi hai .. Lehja aur bolne ka andaz iska bhi boht acha hai .. Iska credit jata hai inke Dada ko .. Jinki tarbiyat ki wajah se ye sab aise the ..

Teesra ladka jisne awaz diya tha .. Faizan age 20 .. Zakki ka bada bhai .. Shaklo surat achi khasi hai .. Zakki ke school k sath hi hai usme jata hai .. Apne bhai ko hamesha support karta hai apne father k 2 hi bete hai ..

Thodi dair me bus school pohonch gayi .. Bus se sab utar kar apne apne classes me jane lage .. Abhi zakki aur zohaib apne class me jaa hi rahe the .. K unko engineering k class k samne aik ladki dikhi … Jisey dekhne k baad to Zakki ka chehra hi utar gaya .. Phir dono class me gaye .. who ladki unke dekh k smile kar rahi thi ..

Zakki aur zohaib apne class room me jate hai .. Aur who ladki apne class room me .. Aaj Mid term exams k result announce hone wale the .. to sare school me usi k charche ho rahe the .. Kher thodi dair me bell baji aur sab student assembly k liye ground pe chale gaye ..

Prayers waghera k baad results announce hone the .. To pehle medical k result announce ho rahe the .. pehle 3rd​ aur 2nd​ position wale ko unke result de rahe the .. Jab 1st​ position k liye Zakki ko bulaya gaya .. to zakki Us ladki ki taraf dekh k smile karte hue jaa raha tha .. Jaise usey jala raha ho apne 1st​ ane pe .. who ladki bs usko dekh k itminaan se smile kar rahi thi .. Jaise usey pehle se hi pata ho k uske marks ziada ayenge ..

Phir baari ayi engineering walon ki .. Unki taraf bhi same hi hua .. 1st​ position k liye principal ne kaha

Principal :- Engineering me 1st​ position liya hai .. Zeeniya ne .. plz come in front and take your result ..

Phir zeeniya aage jati hai … aur apni result lene k baad wapis ati hai .. aur ate hue Zakki ko dekh k smile kar rahi thi .. Phir apne line me aa ke khadi hone k baad result kholti hai .. Uske marks 85% the .. Zakki thoda door khade usey hi dekh raha tha t.. tab usey khayal aya k usne to apna result dekha hi nahi .. Phir who jaldi se apna result kholta hai ..

Result dekhne k baad sochta hai .. gayi bhens pani me .. Is bar to pehle se bhi kam hai .. Abki baar bhi Zeeniya se kam hai .. Mujhe pata hai who 90 + le chuki hogi .. Assembly k baad bujhe man se zakki result hath me le class ki taraf jata hai ..

Class k andar jaa ke result siddha apne bag me rakhta hai .. Sab usey congrats kar rahe the .. But who chup chap betha tha .. zohaib uske paas ata hai .. aur kehta hai

ZOhaib :- kya hua be moon kyu latkaya hai .. 1st​ to aa gaya na ..

Zakki :- Pehle se bhi kam hai yar marks .. Engineering ka shayad 2nd​ position wala bhi mujhse ziada marks liya hoga ..

Abhi zohain kuch bolta usse pehle hi zeeniya class room me enter hoti hai .. Chehre pe khushi dikh rahi thi ..Abhi 10 min tha class start hone mein .. Zeeniya siddha chalte hue zakki k Chair k paas ati hai .. aur table pe chadh k beth jati hai .. Zakki apna chehra dusri taraf karta hai .. Who wahi beth k zohaib se kehti hai

Zeeniya :- zohaib tumhare marks kitne aye hai .. Isbar bhi mujhse kam aye honge tumhare .. Mujhe pata hai tum mujhse ziada marks nahi le sakte ..

Zeeniya keh to zohaib ko rahi thi .. but who ye sab zohaib k zariye zakki ko kehna chah rahi thi .. Zakki uski baat sun raha tha .. aur usey uspe boht ghussa aa raha tha .. aik to who uske desk pe bethi thi .. aur ye sab keh rahi thi .. Zohaib jawab deta hai

Zohaib :- Mera to tumhare sath koi competition nahi hai .. Jitna mein ne mehnat kiya tha utne hi marks .. Aye so mujhe koi ghum nahi hai kam marks aane ka ..

Zeeniya :- Ghum kaise nahi hoga .. Mujhse jo kam aye hai marks .. Chahe ktna bhi mehnat kar lo mujhse ziada nahi le paoge .. Lolloo loo rote kyu ho bache .. dekho ro raha hai bacha .. Ohho rote nahi

Waqi me zakki ka chehra rone jaisa ho gaya tha .. Who usey hi chidhane k liye keh raha tha .. magar sara action zohaib ki taraf kar rahi thi .. Ab zakki ko waqi ghussa ane laga tha .. Zakki khada hota hai aur pakadh k zeeniya ko apne desk se neeche utarta hai .. aur ghusse se kehta hai

Zakki :- haan liye hai tumse kam marks Ab ? .. Mehnat karne k bawjood kam aye hai ab bolo kya ? Aur ayinda mere desk pe bethogi to sochunga nahi ladki ho .. Sidha aik thappadh marunga .. uske baad khud theek ho jaoge ..

Zeeniya :- Ayinda mujhe hath lagaya na to mein bhi nahi sochungi k tum ladke ho .. Aik chanta marunga phir khud theek ho jaoge .. Himmat nahi hai mujhse ziada marks lene ki .. aur mujh pe zor azma rahe ho .. is baar mere 85 aye the .. sochi thi k tumhare mujhse ziada honge .. But yaha to alag hi mahol hai .. 85 bhi nahi le paye tum .. ab accept kar lo .. tum pehle jaisa zakki nahi rahe .. Ab to tum mere level k bhi nahi rahe ..

Zeeniya ki baat sunne k baad zakki moon phadh k hasne lagta hai .. Aur haste haste kehta hai ..

Zakki :- 85 % hahaha 85 % hahaha mere to 88 hai .. haha aur yaha aa ke mujhe chidha rahe the tum .. haha 85 haha ab to tum mere level k nahi rahe zeeniya hahahah .. Jao jao .. tumhara kam nahi hai mujhse ziada marks lena ..

Zeeniya :- Pichli baar to tumse ziada hi the mere marks bhoolo mat .. Dekhti hu final me kaise lete ho tum mujhse ziada marks .. 90+ na li to mera naam bhi zeeniya nahi ..

Zakki :- ladkon se fursat ho to logi na 90+ ..

Zakki ne usey taana diya tha .. aur iske baad to zeeniya bhi ghusse mein aa gayi .. aur Zakki ko marne k liye aage ayi .. aur is taraf se zakki bhi gaya .. to class fellows beech me aye aur unko alag kiya .. Aur usi waqt Engineering ki class teacher bhi class me enter hui .. Phir Usey dekh k zakki aur zeeniya khud ba khud alag ho gaye .. Aur zeeniya waha se apne class ki taraf chali gayi .. Apne friends k sath ..

Zeeniya Age 18 , Pre Medical ki student .. Kamal ki khubsurat .. Green aankhein .. Aur lambe baal .. Gaalon pe dimples .. Jo uski khubsurati ko dugna kar rahe the .. Zakki ka sabse bada dushman .. Dono ki aik dusre se bilkul nahi banti .. Zeeniya ka father zakki k father ka friend tha .. aur k zamane me room mate bhi … Sarkari job karte the ..

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