Thriller DARD

[Rahul]

Naina is story ko bhi dekh leo

 

[Naina]

Naina is story ko bhi dekh leo

Kal se

 

[Itz Anjum]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[Itz Anjum]

Next

Hmmm

 

[Itz Anjum]

Naina is story ko bhi dekh leo

Kia????

 

[Itz Anjum]

Kal se

What????

 

[Naina]

What????

Revos posting

 

[Itz Anjum]

Revos posting

Kiaaa???

 

[Naina]

Family Introduction

• Raghuveer Rajput (Dad) : ye India ke jane maane business man hai. Age ab 43 hai . Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krte hai.




• Shikha Rajput (Mom) : ye ek housewife hai. Inki age ab 37 hai. Inhe bhi Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krti hai.



• Janvi Rajput (Badi behen) : inki age abhi 21 hai. Ye nature se kaffi gusaal hai aur ghamand to maa baap se mila hi hai. Sab inhe pyaar se janu kehete hai.



• Swara Rajput (choti behen) : ye hai meri princess. Inki age abhi 18 hai. Bohot hi soft hearted hai aur shayad yehi mujhe sach me apna manti thi.



• Yash Rajput (chacha) : ye mere papa ke chote bhai. Inki age 38 hai. Ye apne bhai se alag hai par unke dar se kabhi unke faisle ke khilaf nhi gye.



• kamya Rajput (chachi) : inhe bhi apni khubsurti pe kafi ghamand hai
.inki age abhi 34 . Inka baki nature aage pta chalega.



• Divya Rajput ( behen) : ye chacha chachi ki beti hai. Inki bhi age abhi 18 hai. Ye kafi shant rehti hai par Mujse nafrat krti hai . ise gareebo se sakt nafrat hai.



• Mahaveer Rajput (dadaji) : ye mere sab kuch the . Ye meri jine ki wajah the jo ab nhi rhi.



Last But Not The Least

• Reyansh Rajput (mai) : meri age abhi 20 saal. Pariwar ke hote hue bhi anath ki zindagi jine wala jiski kismat hi " DARD " ku sihyai se likhi hai.





Baki character aage bataya jaega

First of all for new story...

akshar maine kayi stories pe gaur ki hai... writers kahani ke (story characters) intro mein hi bahot Sare kirdaar add kar dete hai... isse kya hota hai ki Readers khud confused ho jaate hai kayi baar ki kiska kya naam tha...

Lekin aapne is kahani mein characters ke introduction ke waqt utne hi characters ke bare mein parichay diya hai jitni jarurat hai...sath hi plus point ye ki bilkul saral tarike pesh ki hai aapne...

ye kahani Reyasnsh rajput ki hai...aur badhte kahani ke sath baaki ke aham kirdaar uske ird gird role ada karne wale hai .....
Well intro mein hi ek khas baat pata chali hai ki Reyasnsh ki jindagi kaafi dard ke sath sath mushkilon sebhi bhari hai... shayad family walo se avahelana milne ki wajah se.. Family mein ek dada ji hi the jo ushe pyar dular karte the,,lekin afsos wo bhi naa rahe... haan bas uski chhoti bahan swara hi wo ek hai jiske dil me apne bhai ke liye sneh hai... fikar karti hai....

Par khudke hi pariwar se ye avahelana milne ki wajah kya hai? shayad badhte kahani ke sath pata chale...
Kahani kaafi rochak aur dilchasp hone wali hai ....

 

[Naina]

Kiaaa???

kal se is kahani ko read karne wali hun.... har update read karne ke baad review post karne wali hun...