Fantasy Dark Love (Completed)

[TheBlackBlood]

Waise TheBlackBlood ji ju ko Kya lagta hai ...dhruv ki is sachi mohabbat ka kya anjaam hoga?

Wahi, jo manjure khuda hoga

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Update 3

Jaise ki maine ye baat pehle bhi jikar ki thi ki..... pyar jinda logo se kiya jaaye to hi behtar hai insaan ke liye

Megha dwara kahi gayi sabhi baaton pe kabhi achhe se gaur kya hi nahi dhruv ne...
megha ka sach ....aur us sach ko janne ke baad bhi uske sath jeena chahta tha dhruv....lekin megha ko katayi manjur na thi coz ye dhruv ke liye khatarnaak sabit ho sakta tha
...maybe jaan bhi jaa sakti thi dhruv ki...lekin dhruv thehra uske pyar mein duba .ushe insab parinaamo se koi matlab nahi tha ushe bas megha ke sath jeena chaahta tha..ab megha bhi kare bhi to kya kare ....

Dhruv ke sath kuch galat na ho jaaye,, issi dar aur fikar ke chalte wo Dhruv se door ho gayi... Par haan nischit hi uska ye faisla khud uske jazbaaton ko bhi jhanjhor dene waala raha hoga......kyunki kahi na kahi uske dil mein bhi ek soft corner bana chuka tha dhruv ne...
usse dur hote waqt wo kaafi duvidha mein rahi hogi.... Lekin dhruv sahi salamat rahe isliye wo door huyi usse...
lekin ek wo dhruv uski kahi gayi baaton ko nazarandaaj kar bas ushe talaashne mein laga hai.... Majnu kahi ka
pyar andha hota hai... ye baat sabit kar di dhruv ne...

Well.... are kya baat hai ...dhruv ne us jharne ko bhi dhundh liya jiski aawaaz us ghar pe rehte waqt sunayi deta tha usko...
Jharne yun mil jaane pe jaise ek alag hi josh aa gaya ho usme... ek ummeed kiran bhi jaagi hai....
Ab to Lagta us ghar ko bhi dhundh nikalega wo....
waise ek baat tay hai ki ye dhruv kaafi dhith hai... aur uske dhithpan aur zidd ko dekh yahi lage ki jab tak megha nahi mil jaati tab tak wo chain se nahi baithne wala ....

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Aise majnu kam hi milte hain duniya me
Khair shukriya is Khubsurat sameeksha ke liye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

I think...dhruv jab jab megha ke khayaalo me gum hota hai tab tab wo yahi sochta hua dikhaai deta hai ki megha se wo kaise mila aur uske sath uski kya kya baatein huyi. Uski yaadein ...matlab ye flashback tabhi khatam hoga jab us saat din ka vivran pura hoga....

Sahi samjha, saat din ka vivran tabhi nazar aata hai jab dhruv Megha ke khayalo me gum hota hai aur wahi flashback bhi hai

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Shukriya

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Waise TheBlackBlood ji bahot gajal shayeri add kar rahe har update mein...
To padhiye ye shayari meri taraf se...
Ek to bhatakti jindagi
Kahi ruk kar dhruv ko pyar sametne nahi deti...
Dusri.. Jindagi ki kadwahat...
Jo Megha aur dhruv mein har baar dooriyaan paida kar deti...

Ju ki shayari ju par zyada fit ho reli hai
Btw story ke har update me situation ke hisab se ek ghazal add ki hai.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Uski baatein bhi to badi ajeebogreeb hai ... totally out of the word

She looks like you too...right??

Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with tragic situations , thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .

Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills

Thanks for this beautiful appreciation

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Bas ab ek haan ke intezaar mein raat yunhi guzar jaayegi,
Ab toh bas uljhan hai saath mere neend kahan aayegi,
Subah ki kiran na jaane konsa sandesh laayegi,
Rimjhim si gungunayegi ya pyaas adhuri reh jaayegi.......
Kya megha se phir se mulakaat ho paayegi..

Noice shayari, well let's see what happens

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Thanks for this beautiful appreciation

 

[TheBlackBlood]

ek baat sau taka sahi hai.... ki dhruv ke dard aur bhavna ko aur megha ki majboori ko behad hi kadile tarif tarkike se pesh ki hai aapne...

Fir bhi aansu na nikle ju ke
Jab tak dhruv ka kachumar na nikal aaye tab tak use bakshana nahi hai

Are chhodo...
aage ke update read karti hun
Andaza laga laga ke pak chuki hun...
Hey TheBlackBlood ji... kahe tadpa rahe hai dono ko...

Ye to latest news hai
Jaise dar ke aage jeet hoti hai waise hi tadapne ke baad shayad dhruv ko megha bhi mil jaye

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills...

Thanks for this beautiful feedback

 

[TheBlackBlood]

kyun na is kahani mein pratima ji aa jaaye.. Are tel lene gayi megha ...
pratima ji bhere r ju...
Pratima ji aake dhruv ke tute huye dil ko sambhal legi..wo usko apni style mein sikhayegi ki pyar kis chidhiya ka naam hai

Pratima high class aur kheli khaayi aurat hai, dhruv ko nigal jayegi wo

 

[Naina]

Apne hone wale jija ji ke sath aisa bartav bhala koun sala karta hai ....
Balki rudra ka farz ye hona chahiye aur sath mein soch bhi yahi honi chahiye uski ki

 

[Naina]

Pratima high class aur kheli khaayi aurat hai, dhruv ko nigal jayegi wo

btw rudra kuch zyada hi bad behave kar raha hai apne hone wale jija dhruv ke sath