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Is kahani ko maine 10 chapter me devide kiya hai…..ye kahani hai……Saajan aur Divya ke agadh Sachche Prem ki, Jaha Hawas ke liye koi jagah nahi hai… Sirf aur sirf Real True Love hai, ye kisi ek janam ki prem kahani nahi hai….balki ye to dono ke pichchle lagatar saat janmo ki Love Story hai….Ye story incest based bhi hai…

Ye kahani hai pyar ki, atoot vishwas ki, dosti ki, dhokha aur nafrat ki, Sex ki…..aur hairat angej ghatnao aur kriya kalapo ki…….

Kya Saajan aur Divya ka Pavitra, Nishchhal, Nihswarth, Nishkaam Prem Safal hoga….? Kya unke is Prem ko ye samaj swikar karega…? Kiski kiski Bali chadhegi is Prem par…? Kya hoga anjam is Prem ka..?



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Mai jaise hi ratna ke shayan kaksh me pahucha jaha vo badi bechaini se meri hi pratiksha kar rahi thi …dekhte hi meri baho me sama gayi

Ratna—in baho me samane ke liye main bahut tadpi hu saajan…mujhe aaj in baho ke ghere me hi rahne do…kitni khush nasib hu main ki apne is sharir ki antim yatra me mujhe tumhari baho ka sahara mil gaya

Raj—aisa kyo sochti ho…tum to mere hi sath ho hardum…meri saanso me samayi huyi ho…tumhare bina mai bilkul vaisa hi hu jaise saaz bina awaz

Ratna—saajan kya mujhe payal me samahit hone ke baad is janam ka yaad rahega….?

Raj—ha kuch yaad rahega kuch nahi rahega

Ratna—matlab….?

Raj—payal ke roop me abhi tum kuwari ho isliye abhi hum jo karenge vo yaad nahi hoga kintu mera pyar yaad rahega

Ratna—mujhe sirf tumhare pyar se hi matlab hai phir chahe vo kisi bhi roop me hi kyo na ho

Raj—aao aaj ki raat ko hum apne pyar ki ek yaadgar raat bana de

Maine apne hotho ko ratna ke makhmali adhar par rakh diye….behad gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise shahad se ghule larajte hotho ka madhu ras pine laga

Ratna bhi jaise is pal me doob jana chahti thi usne bakhubi mera sath diya is prem milan me….usne mere liye bahut taklife sahi hain…aaj main apne pyar ke malham se uske dard ko kam kar dena chahta tha

Hamare hotho ka chumban har prati kshan gahra hota gaya….na main use chhodna chahta tha aur na hi ratna is adbhut anandmayi lamho se vanchit hona chahti thi

Mere hath dhire dhire sarakte huye uske sine ke ubharo tak pahuch gaye jinhe main pyar se dularne laga…..uske ubharo ka komal ehsaas sab kuch bhula dene ke liye paryapt tha

Jaise jaise hamare chumban me tezi aa rahi thi usi raftar se mere hatho ne bhi ratna ki chuchiyo ko jor se masalna shuru kar diya tha

Dhire dhire kab hamare hatho ne ek dusre ke vastro ka cheer haran kar diya iska abhas hi nahi ho paya…..ek dusre ke hotho ko tab tak chuste rahe jab tak ki saanso ne alpa viram lagane ko majbur nahi kar diya

Kuch der tak ek dusre ki ankho me dekhte huye apni saanso ko gati ko niyantrit karte rahe….is douran mere hatho ne chuchi mardan ka apna kaam bakhubi chalu rakha

Ratna se ab bardast karna mushkil ho raha tha….jaise koi bahut samay se bhukha ho aur achanak uske samne bhojan ki thali aa jaye to anayas hi uski bhukh ki tivrata kayi guna badh jati hai aur use rok pana bahut kathin ho jata hai theek vahi halat is samay ratna ki bhi ho rahi thi

Jab usse nahi ruka gaya to usne jor se siskari lete huye phir se mere hotho se apne hoth tika diye aur jor jor se chusne lagi…..maine bhi uska sath dete huye ek hath ko chuchi se hata kar uske pich gand par le gaya aur unhe meesne laga jabki ek hath abhi bhi uski thos chuchiyo ko daba daba kar mulayam karta raha

Uske hotho ka jee bhar kar rasaswadan karne ke baad maine apna rukh uski yoni kati pradesh ki taraf mod diya aur dhire dhire uske jism ko chumte huye niche ki taraf jane laga jaha baadh aane ki poori sambhavna ban chuki thi

Ratna—aaaahhhhh…saajan ..ab mat tadpao…kuch to raham karo…aaahhhhhh

Maine uske amrit kalash se chhalakte amrit ki boondo ko pine laga…aur ratna madhosh hoti chali gayi…mere sar par pyar se hath ferte huye

Maine bhi ab aur vilamb na karte huye uske upar aa gaya aur dhire dhire dono pair phaila kar uske andar samane laga…..lekin andar hone me dikkat pesh aa rahi thi

Raj—ratna tumhe thoda dard jhelna padega…kya tum taiyar ho…..?

Ratna—dard…..? magar mai to kuwari nahi hu to phir…..?

Raj—tumhari baat sahi hai kintu mere sath kuch alag baat hai….mere sath jo bhi sambhog karegi phir chahe vo kitni hi baar ki sex ki huyi kyo na ho har baar uski yoni mere liye kuwari jaisi hi hai…isliye use dard bhi har bar hoga….ye ek raaz hai kyon ki raj ek raaz hai

Ratna—tum meri parwah mat karo ..saajan….tumhare pyar me agar meri jaan bhi chali jaye to mujhe koi gum nahi hai

Raj—tum mere liye bahut anmol ho

Maine uske hotho ko chumte huye ek jor se dhakka laga kar usme samane laga……ratna ki cheekh mere hotho se dabkar rah gayi lekin ankho se pani bah aaya

Maine der na karte huye dusra aur tisra dhakka lagate huye uski jad tak sama gaya….magar in dhakko ko sahan na kar pate huye ratna behosh ho gayi

Maine uske chehre par pani chhidak kar use hosh me laya…..hosh me aane ke baad uske chehre se dard saf saf jhalak raha tha lekin phir bhi usne mushkurate huye meri taraf dekh kar apne dard ko chhupane ka prayas kiya

Raj—bahut dard hai….?

Ratna (mushkura kar)—uuhhuuu…..ye to pyar ka meetha meetha dard hai…..ye mere saajan ka mere liye pyar hai

Mai uski is baat se mushkuraye bina na rah saka lekin mujhe ratna ki is ada par bahut pyar aaya….maine dhire dhire dhakke lagane chalu kiye

Ratna ko dard to ho raha tha lekin vo mera barabar sath deti rahi….dhire dhire maine raftar badhani jari rakhi….ye raftar badhte badhte prachand veg me aa gayi

Ratna ki madak siskariyo se poora kamra goonj utha….ab uske dard ki jagah rati sukh ne le li thi….har dhakke me vo apni gand upar utha utha kar mere lund ka apni chut me abhinandan karne lagi

Ratna—aaahhhhh…..saajan….aaahhhhhh

Agle hi pal vo vo mujhse joro se lipat gayi aur paglo ki tarah chumte huye jhadne lagi….lekin mai lagatar laga raha…poori raat hamara sambhog chalta raha

Dono hi kaksh me sari raat vidhi aur ratna ki chut kutayi chalti rahi…hamare jism pasine se lathpath ho gaye the… subah ki thandi hawa ke jhonko ne hame sone par vivash kar diya to ek dusre ki baho me simat kar pyar ki meethi need me so gaye

Vahi ghar me Priyadarshini ek kamre ke bed par leti hatho me apne saajan ki tasveer thame use bade gaur se dekhe ja rahi thi…tabhi Mrinal ne uske kamre me pravesh kiya

Mrinal—kya baat hai aaj phir tu us photo me kho gayi….tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki is bachpan ki photo se kya hoga.. kaise hum khojenge saajan ko….na jane vo ab bada hone ke baad kaisa dikhta hoga….? Is dharti me kaha hoga vo..?

Priyadarshini jo ki saajanki tasveer me khoyi huyi thi Mrinal ki baat sun kar uski ankho me nami utar aayi aur uski palke bojhil hokar dabdaba gayi

Mrinal—ye kya…tune phir se rona shuru kar diya….? Main to bas aise hi kah rahi thi...dekhna ek na ek din hum jarur kamyab honge....tere is anuthe sachche prem ke aage vidhata ko jhukna hi hoga....tum nirash mat ho...tumhe aise udas dekh kar mera hriday chhalni hone lagta hai

Priyadarshini (bhigi ankho se)—nahi mrinal...mai nirash nahi huyi hu....bas unki yaad aa gayi tere juban se unka naam sun kar..isiliye ye ankhe mujhse daga kar gayi hain
‘’Bhar Aayi Meri Aankhen Jab Unka Naam Aaya
Ishq Nakam Sahi Phir Bhi Bahut Kaam Aaya
Hamne Mohabbat Me Aisi Bhi Guzaari hain Raatein
Jab Tak Aansu Na Bahe Dil Ko Na Aaraam Aaya’’​
Mrinal—tera prem jarur safal hoga....tujhe tere saajan ka pyar avashya milega....maa parvati ka vachan kabhi asatya nahi ho sakta....upar wale ke ghar der hai andher nahi hai

Priyadarshini—ye main janti hu.....magar ye der hi to sabse badi andher hai sakhi….jane kab meri in ankho ko mere saajan ke darshan honge….kab mai unki baho me houngi…..vo mujhe swikar karenge bhi ki nahi….?

Mrinal—kyo swikar nahi karenge tujhe....kya kami hai tujhme.... ? ye to tumhare saajan ka saubhagya hai ki tu unhe milegi jiske liye smpurna dev lok tarasta hai matra jiski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye

Priyadarshini—aisa unke liye mat bol mrinal....vo nishchay hi koi mahan aatma hain jinhone kisi karan ya shrap vash is dharti par janam liya hai...tabhi to swayam mata parvati ne unhe mere liye chuna hai aur yahi karan hai ki mai unse asani se nahi mil pa rahi hu

Mrinal—hame kuch to karna hi hoga....aise hath par hath rakh kar baithne aur rone se kuch nahi milne wala sakhi

Priyadarshini—hame maa ne us ladki Paridhi ko milaya hai….uske madhyam se hi koi rasta nikal sakta hai

Mrinal—vo paridhi vaha us doc…farr ke paas hai aur hum yaha raj ke ghar me…aise me kaise mumkin hoga saajan ka pata lagana

Priyadarshini—hame koi na koi marg jarur milega sakhi

Mrinal—kash aisa hi ho

Tabhi vaha meera ne aakar unki baato me viram laga diya….dono meera ki oor dekhne lagi

Meera—maine tumhe kaha kaha nahi talash kiya aur tum yaha ho

Mrinal—kya hua…kahiye kuch kaam tha….?

Meera—ha..vo Roopa bhabhi ko fever tha to ek bar mai unhe doctor ke paas se injection lagwa layi thi….ab tum khud hi nurse ho hamare ghar me to tum hi unhe injection laga do

Mrinal—ha…ha..kyo nahi….jarur mai unhe unjuction laga dungi...aap chaliye mai abhi aayi

Meera—theek hai

Priyadarshini (meera ke jate hi)—tujhe ilaz karna aata bhi hai….kisi ko maar mat dena kahi tu….?

Mrinal—arey nahi…isme koi mushkil kaam thodi hi hai….vo ghatpatal (aspatal-hospital) me maine us doc…chharr ko unjuction lagate huye dekha hai….mai laga dungi tum chinta mat karo

Priyadarshini—pata nahi …tu kisi din musibat na khadi kar de

Mrinal—tum bina vajah hi darti rahti ho.....vaise ye mutra kaha gaya hai....subah se dikh nahi raha hai jab se maine use boor zara dikhane ko kaha hai tab se gayab hi ho gaya hai...khair mai abhi aati hu

Mrinal vaha se roopa mami ke kamre ki oor chali gayi aur priyadarshini phir se apne saajan ki tasveer ko chum chum kar pyar karne me magan ho gayi

Mrinal jaise hi roopa mami ke kamre me pahuchi to meera ne use injection aur syringe pakda di lagane ko....jise dekh kar mrinal soch me doob gayi

Mrinal (mann me)—itni chhoti si unjuction se itni badi aurat ko theek hone me bahut samay lagega…isme to thodi si hi aushadhi ayegi….mai aisa karti hu apni power se bada sa unjuction me ye dawayi bhar ke iske bade bade pichhwade me laga deti hu to shayad ye jaldi hi theek ho jayegi aur ho sakta hai isse khush hokar ye mujhe saajan ke bare me bhi bata de

Mrinal—aap log bahar jaiye mujhe inka ilaz karna hai

Ye khurafati vichar mann me aate hi mrinal ne sabko kamre se bahar bhej diya aur apni power se ek 6 ft ka injection bana kar usme dawayi bharne lagi

Mrinal—chalo apni sari aur petikot utar do jaldi se

Roopa ne uski baat sun kar jaise hi mrinal ki taraf palti to uske hosh hi gayab ho gaye....mrinal ke hatho me apni height ke barabar ka injection dekh kar uski halat kharab ho gayi


Roopa (shocked)—ye kya hai..... ?

Mrinal—ye unjuction hai….isko lagane se aap jaldi theek ho jaogi….chalo jaldi se kapde utaro…mujhe apki pichhwade me ise lagana hai

Roopa (full shocked)—kyaaaaaa……..? tum pagal to nahi ho gayi ho…..chal bhag yaha se jaldi

Mrinal—sab unjuction lagwane me bahana karte hain…..daro mat mai bhi doc…jharr hu….

Mrinal jaise hi uski oor injection dono hatho se pakad ke lagane ko badhi to roopa mami turant darr ke maare bistar me uth kar baith gayi aur fauran niche kud kar darwaje ki taraf bhagi

Mrinal—daro mat....mat bhago.....mai doc..tharr hu....mujhe apko ye unjuction lagana hai

Roopa (jor se chilla kar)—koi darwaja kholo......mere paas mat aana.....tu mujhe marna chahti hai

Mrinal—lagta hai mujhe jabardasti lagana padega ab

Mrinal tezi se roopa ki oor badhi....roopa jor jor se darwaja pitne lagi vo bahut darr chuki thi ab....mrinal ke us tak pahuchne se pahle hi darwaja khul gaya

Ab drishya ye ho gaya tha ki aage aage roopa mai bhag rahi thi aur unke piche piche Mrinal injection dono hatho se pakde bhag rahi thi poore ghar me yaha se vaha

Roopa—koi to bachaooooo mujhe....ye aaj maar dalegiiiiii

Meera—mrinal ruk jaooooo...

Mamta (hairan)—OMG......ye kya hai..... ? ye koun si doctor hai...kahi janwaro ki to nahi... ? he bhagwwan

Roopa (chillate huye)—koi roko is pagal doctor ko

Priyadarshini ko jaise hi shorgul sunayi diya to vo bahar nikal kar aayi usne fauran mrinal ko awaz dekar rukne ko kaha theek usi samay veer bahar se aaya aur mrinal usse takra gayi poora injection veer ke pichhwade me ghus gaya

Udhar jaise hisubah hi hamari need khuli to ratna aur vidhi ki halat khasta haal thi …unse dhang se chalte bhi nahi ban raha tha…vidhi ko vaha dekh kar sabhi chounk gaye

Payal—ye ladki koun hai…? Aur ye yaha kya kar rahi hai….?

Divya (hairan)—koun ho tum….?

Ratna—ye ladki koun hai saajan……?

Raj—ye vidhi hai

Divya—kyaaa….?

Ratna—vidhiiii.... ?

Payal—koun vidhi..... ?

Divya—didi ye inki biwi hai aur Jinn Lok ki Rajkumari bhi

Ratna—par yaha kab aayi.... ?

Raj—ye to kab se tumhare hi sath hai

Ratna (shocked)—kyaaaaaa……maya kaki….?

Raj—haan….vidhi hi maya ban kar tumhari madad kar rahi thi ab tak

Divya—par tum ab tak thi kaha….hamne bahut khoja tha tumhe..magar tum jinn lok me bhi nahi thi

Ratna—ha…tumhara to kuch pata hi nahi chala tha…hamne agyant ke sath bahut talash kiya tha tumhe

Vidhi—mai kaid me thi….baad me bataungi…lambi kahani hai….pahle ratna ka payal me samahit karna jaruri hai

Divya—lekin didi aapne us mani ka kya kiya….? Aur vo us aurat ke dil tak kaise pahuchi….?

Ratna—ye tumhe mere payal me samahit hone ke baad payal bata degi

Divya—theek hai…saajan ab didi ko mukt kar do

Maine ratna aur payal didi ko apne paas bitha kar dono ke sar me hath rakh ke apni ankhe band kar li….thodi hi der me mera sharir ek tez satrangi roshni se prakashit ho gaya

Mere hath se roshni nikal kar ratna ke sharir me samane lagi aur kuch hi der me ratna nidhal hokar jamin par gir gayi.. uske girte hi uske jism se do jyoti punj nikle ek payal me sama gaya to dusra chamakte huye kahi vilin ho gaya

Divya—ab uth jao didi

Raj—ab vo kewal mitti hai…ab vo kabhi nahi uthegi….uska aur payal ka vilay ho gaya hai

Maine ratna ke parthiv sharir ka antim sanskar kiya…..idhar ratna ke payal me samahit hone ke sath hi paridhi didi ki tabiyat achanak se bahut jyada bigad gayi…..saloni ne bharsak prayas kiya lekin vo kuch bhi kar pane me nakam rahi paridhi ke gale se bas ‘’Raj’’ naam hi nikal pa raha tha

Saloni ne mujhe yathashighra contact karne ki koshish ki lekin uski tarange mujh tak pahuchne me asmarth rahi aur vo paridhi ko nahi bacha saki…..vahi dusri taraf

‘’hahahahahahahaha………main azad ho gayi……iska matlab saajan abhi tak jinda hai…….mai azad ho gayi….meri shaktiya vapis mil gayi mujhe…….Divyaaaaa…Mai aa rahi hu……hahahahahaha’’

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5th Janam ki Love Story, Guru Maa se Divya ki Mulaqat, Pari ki asli Kahani, Rajgarh ka Sach aur Shrap, Ek Amar Prem Gatha, Horror, Suspense, Dahshat, Priyadarshini ka Saajan se Milan​
 
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Next Chapter Start Karne se Pahle Aaiye ab tak ki kahani par Ek Nazar daal lete hain jisse isse samajhne me aur kuch bhuli bisri baato ki yaad dast tarotaza hone me koi dikkat na rahe

Aisa karne ka mera pramukhtah ek hi uddeshya aur karan hai kyon ki ye kahani ka ek behad aham padav hai jaha se hokar ab ye gujarne wali hai

Yahi vajah hai ki jehan me iska koi aisa pahlu achhuta na rah jaye jisse aage jakar mann me uske vishay me kisi bhi tarah ki anbhigyata ki sthiti nirmit ho

Aham Padav maine kyo kaha iska khulasa meri agli kuch bato se saf jahir ho jayega….Kuch samay se maine mahsus kiya ki kahani ke vastavik flow jaisa ki chal raha tha, usme pahle ki apeksha kafi girawat aayi hai

Maine iski vajah janne ke liye kahani ka ek baar khud hi punrikshan (Observation) karne ki soch poori kahani ko last two days me padh kar dekha ki kaha par mujhse galti huyi hai ya kaha par kuch kami rah gayi hai

Is observation ke phalswaroop maine kuch aagami ghatnao ko unke purva nirdharit karya kram me badlav karne ka socha hai jinme se Rajgarh ka Raaz aur Pari ki kahani bhi mukhya hai jiska purva nirdharit karya kram ke anusar ye ghatna Divya aur Saajan ke Pahle Janam ki story se sambandhit hai

Maine ab is ghatna ko Chapter 4 me liya hai…ab vaha par sirf saajan aur divya ki love story rahegi…aisa karna mujhe isliye avashyak mahsus hua kyon ki kahani me bahut se character’s aa gaye hain…kayi logo ki khwahish hai ki unke sath prem sambandho ki shuruwat abhi se kramshah ho jani chahiye

Dusra, ab kahani me kuch bahri duniya se jude adventures bhi ayenge....jaha supernatural powers ka use bhi hoga aur kayi jagah asmanjas ki sthiti aa sakti hai yaha par story ko samajhne me

Chaliye ek sarsari nazar kahani ke mukhya binduo par daal lete hain………
‘’SAAJAN’’

‘Saajan’ Ye Kahani Mukhya Roop se Teen Kirdaro je ird gird ghumti hai ya ye kah lijiye ki is kahani ke ye sabse main kirdar hain jinke aas paas poori kahani ghumegi

Aur ye kirdar hain…Saajan, Divya aur Pari......kintu in teen ke alawa aur bhi kayi character’s hain jinme sabse mahatvapurna hain Rajgarh aur Guru Maa….Shesh character’s apne apne samay kaal tak hi simit hain arthat unka jikra unke jivant hone ke samay me hi hoga

Teen main kirdaro ke alawa maine Rajgarh aur Gurumaa ka jikra bahut aham isliye kaha kyon ki Ye kahani hi Rajgarh se judi hai to jahir si baat hai ki jab Rajgarh ki sachchayi aur usse sambandhit aetihasik tathya nikal kar samne ayenge to kayi hairat angej Raaz ujagar honge

Isliye maine ye avlokan ka special update dene ka faisla kiya…..Guru maa ka naam maine isliye joda kyon ki poori kahani par unka apratyaksh roop me asar hai aur lagbhag har jagah ki ghatnao me unka jikra aata rahega…unka bahut bada yogdan hai kahani me

Ab aate hain story ke main character Saajan, Divya aur Pari par…..Ye kahani hai divya aur saajan ke anoothe sachche prem ki, unke is prem ke atoot vishwas ki, unke prem ke beech aayi har badhao ki…lekin in sab ke bavjud bhi kaal chakra ke in beraham thapedo se har baar alag ho jane ke baad bhi unka prem kayi sadiyo ke baad bhi aaj vaisa hi shashwat hai jaisa pahle tha

Kitni hi ghatnaye huyi unke sath, kitne hi zulm huye unke sath kintu unke prem me koi kami nahi aayi….kaha se shuru hua ye prem….?. kaise hua unka pratham milan….? Aisa kya ghatna ghatit huyi thi ki jisne in dono ke dilo me prem ki aisi vilakshan chingari sulga di….? Jo kaal chakra ke bhi bujhaye na bujh saki…vo janam par janam lete rahe… marte rahe parantu apne prem ko har janam me yathavat amar aur yaadgar banaye rakha

Saajan……koun hai ye saajan….? Kya hai saajan ka vastavik roop….? Kya hai saajan ka sach….? Kya ye kisi ka naam hai…? Ya phir koi code word…? Philhal ye to abhi tak raaz hai jiske bare me to khud divya bhi nahi janti ki saajan ka matlab hai kya…uske liye to vo uska saajan hai

Divya…..Jise saajan ke siwa dusra koi kaam hi nahi hai..saajan ke prem me purna samarpit..365 din me shayad hi koi aisa pal ho jab vo apne saajan ki yaado se bahar aati ho yaha tak ki sote samay me bhi vo apne saajan ke sapno me hi khoyi rahti hai…jise saajan par aisa atoot vishwas hai ki agar khud bhagwan bhi aakar usse kahe ki saajan me ye burayi hai to vo kabhi na vishwas kare unka bhi

Pari…..ye character bhi divya ke samkaksh hi hai saajan ke chahne walo me……ye bhi 365 din 24 ghante saajan ki yaado me hi rahti hai…koi pal aisa nahi jab iske dil me saajan ki chhavi na rahe….kintu divya ke opposite…jaha divya prem me andhi hai vahi pari nafrat me….uski isi nafrat ne is prem kahani ko sadiyo tak pahucha diya

Ab kahani me do aise character’s hain jinka jikra bahut jaruri hai…..unke bina is prem kahani ka koi astitva hi nahi rah jayega….Priyadarshini aur Raj

Priyadarshini…..priyadarshini ka prem bhi bahut vilakshan hai….sadiyo purana…jisne bina dekhe, bina kisi jankari ke hi prem kar baithi….divya aur priyadarshini dono ke saajan ke prati prem ki tulna kar pana bahut mushkil hai ki kiska prem adhik mahan hai….? Priyadarshini ko maine story ke sabse main character’s me shamil nahi kiya kyon ki kewal yahi ek aisi kirdar hai jiska sambandh Rajgarh se door door tak nahi hai lekin phir bhi sadiyo se saajan se judi huyi hai….isliye agar ise bhi ek main character mana liya jaye to isme koi atisanyokti nahi hogi…is chapter me priyadarshini ki prem kahani kaise aur kaha se shuru huyi..jaldi hi samne ayegi

Raj….jaisa ki naam hai Raj….ye apne naam ki tarah hi ek Raaz hai…..Jiske vishay me uski Guru Maa ke alawa koi bhi uski vastavikta se parichit nahi hai….isliye is kirdar ke sandarbh me kuch bhi bata pana sambhav nahi hai abhi jab tak ki koi Raaz ka khulasa na ho jaye….

Ye sab batane ka mera abhipray sirf itna hi hai ki ab agle chapter se Rajgarh ki kahani ayegi to kayi Raaz khulenge…..pahle ke pending suspense clear honge aur kayi naye suspense banenge….to jin readers ke mann me koi duvidha ho piche ke kisi suspense ko lekar ya koi update ki kisi varnit baat ko lekar to unki vo shanka door ho sake

Last me main ek baat aur bhi clear kar dena chahunga ki meri is kahani me supernatural power (dharti par janmit) kewal Main hero aur main villain ke alawa kisi ke bhi paas na to hai aur na hi hogi ….story ki starting se lekar Ending tak

Supernatural power ko maine bachcho ka jhunjhuna nahi banaya hai ki jise chaho shaktiya mil gayi….shaktiya koi khairat me ya bazar me milne wali vastu nahi jise har koi pa jaye….dost, bhai, bahan, maa, baap, biwi hone ka ye matlab nahi ki vo inse shaktiyo ko pane ke adhikari ho gaye

Kisi bhi cheez ki keemat tabhi tak hoti hai jab tak ki vo aur kahi aprapya ho….suraj ek hai..isliye uski value hai..agar vahi ek se adhik ho jaye to uski value ghat jayegi

Koi cheez agar ek hi jagah par milegi to uski keemat bahut hogi lekin agar vo aur bhi kahi par milne lage to keemat kam ho jayegi

Mai ye nahi kahta ki koi inhe hasil kar nahi sakta lekin koi rishto ke dum par inhe pane ka adhikari nahi ho sakta aur inhe pana namumkin to nahi par atyant dushkar karya jarur hota hai jo karoro arabo salo me koi ek hi kar pane ki kshamta rakhta hai

Kahani me Raj ke paas supernatural powers hain lekin vo use kisi daan ya koi khairat me nahi mili hain…..uske liye usne bahut badi kurbani di hai….kuch pane ke liye kabhi kabhi bahut kuch khona padta hai….. shaktiya tapobal se milti hain….sirf achcha nek insan hona hi kafi nahi hota uske liye….raj ne kitni moute mar kar inhe hasil kiya hai iski kahani baad me ayegi

Kahani me jo kisi bhi hathiyar ka asar raj ke sharir par nahi hota hai usme koi shaktiyo ka use nahi hai balki ye uski guru maa dwara karayi gayi adbhut behad kathor training ka parinam hai

Anyway maine sabhi ko bahut bore kar liya…..ab chalta hu Chapter * 4 ka Pahla Update Likhne

Main aap sabhi reader’s ka jinhone pratyaksh ya apratyaksh roop me is kahani ko itna maan samman diya uske liye main hriday se sabhi ka abhari hu…..Aap sab ke pyar aur sahyog ke parinam swaroop hi aaj ye kahani is mukam tak pahuchi hai
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CHAPTER # 4 (Update-1)

STORY UPDATE-155

Ratna ka Payal me vilay ho jane ke pashchat hum mahal chale gaye….jaha pahuch kar payal didi ko sab kuch purva janam se sambandhit baate yaad aa gayi

Payal (nam ankho se)—minakshi aur vaishali dono bechari us bhayanak aag me jal kar mar gayi….kitna tadpi thi vo dono aag me jalte huye

Raj—unka bhi punar janam ho chuka hai

Payal (shock)—kyaaaa….? Kaha hain vo dono….mujhe unse milna hai….mujhe le chalo na dono ke paas

Divya—aap unse mil chuki ho didi…vo anginat baar

Payal (hairani se)—mai dono se mil chuki huuuuuu…….? Par kab....kaha..... ?

Raj—apne dimag par jor dalo darling...sab dhyan aa jayega

Payal (ankhe band kar sochte huye)—main mil chuki hu.......vaishali aur minakshi....se kaha.....kaha.....kaha......kaha.... OMG....matlab Paridhi.....apni Paridhi hi Minakshi hai

Divya—haan....minakshi ne paridhi didi ke roop me janam liya hai

Payal—aur vaishali...... ?

Divya—chanchal ke roop me

Payal (full shocked)—kyaaaaaaaa....... ?..use to main jinda nahi chhodungi….usne hamare saajan ko maarne ki koshish ki hai…mai usko kabhi maf nahi karungi…dhokhebaz hai vo

Divya—vo hamari sagi badi bahan hai

Payal ko jhatke par jhatke lag rahe the…..divya ke is jawab ne payal ko bahut adhik hairani me daal diya…usne raj ki taraf confirm karne ke liye apna rukh kiya lekin raj to kahi aur hi khoya hua tha

Payal—raj tum kuch bolte kyo nahi…bhala chanchal hamari bahan kaise ho sakti hai….? Hum to kewal teen hi hain…mere aur divya ke alawa ruchi didi hi hamari bahan hain sagi

Divya—darasal baat aisi hai ki chanchal ko bachpan me hi janam ke samay hospital se agwa kar loya gaya tha…jo maa ya kisi ko malum hi nahi hai vo to aaj bhi yahi samajhti hain ki unhe mari huyi aulad paida huyi thi…vo apharan ki huyi ladki hi chanchal hai

Payal (shocked)—kyaaaaa…..? kisne kiya itna neech kaam ….? Kamini ne….? ha wohi ho sakti hai….kya chanchal ye janti hai…..?

Divya ne is baar koi jawab nahi diya to payal ne phir se apna dhyan raj ki oor diya to raj ko abhi bhi gahri soch me paya…ye dekh uske mathe par chinta ki lakire ubhar aayi

Payal (chintit hote huye)—kya baat hai…..? tum inta chintit kyo ho….? Batao mujhe….tumne itna sab kuch mujhse chhupaya….kyo……? bolo na…kya baat hai…..?

Raj (udas hokar)—ab hame jaldi se ghar chalna chahiye…..yaha ka kaam ho gaya hai….baki baate baad me karenge

Payal (pareshan)—tu jarur mujhse kuch chhupa raha hai…..? dekh mai sab kuch dekh sakti hu lekin tujhe yu udas nahi dekh sakti main….tujhe meri kasam …bata na kya baat hai……?

Raj—abhi mera ghar jana jaruri hai….nahi to bahut der ho jayegi

Payal—dekh mera dil bahut ghabra raha hai….

Raj—mai hu na….phir ghabrane ki kya baat hai

Payal—to phir tune aisa kyo kaha…..?

Vidhi—ha…saajan batao na kya baat hai….?

Raj—mai apko sab bata dunga….aur vaise bhi yaha to abhi aana hi hai…do din baad hum phir se yaha aayenge aur yaha ke rajya ka kaam kaaj nirdharit karenge…par tab tak aap kisi ko kuch nahi bataogi

Payal—theek hai

Raj—unicorn…chalo

Unicorn—ji malik

Phir hum charo ko unicorn ne vahi lakar chhoda jaha se hum us jagah gaye the….maine unicorn ko gayab kar diya aur apni gadi lekar hum ghar ke liye nikal gaye

Ghar pahuchte hi dekha ki Priyadarshini aur Mrinal ghar ke bahar road par khadi hain….unhe bahar dekh kar maine gadi rok di…..unki nazar bhi jaise hi mujh par padi to dono bhag kar hamari taraf aa gayi

Raj—tum dono yaha bahar kya kar rahi ho…….?

Mrinal—vo gharwalo ne hame ghar se nikal diya……kaha ki hum yaha se kahi aur chale jaye

Raj—ghar se nikal diya matlab...kyo..... ?

Mrinal—pata nahi..kyo...... ? maine to bhalayi karne ki sochi lekin yaha to bhalayi karne ka zamana hi nahi hai

Raj—chalo andar main dekhta hu kya baat hai

Mrinal (khush hokar)—tanku…..nahi…thank you……ab theek bola na maine

Raj—ha…bilkul theek….aa jao andar

Mrinal—chal sakhi andar chale

Main gadi lekar compound wall ke andar chala gaya dono ko andar aane ka bol….lekin jaise hi dono andar ghusne ko huyi to security guard ne unhe rok diya

Guard—ye tum dono andar kaha chali aa rahi ho…abhi dono ko bahar nikala tha na…samajh nahi aaya

Mrinal—jyada chapad chapad ki na to tera huliya aisa bigadungi ki ghar jate hi teri lugayi tujhe gali ka awara kutta samajh ke chappal se pitegi..samajh gaya…chal kinare ho….

Raj (dono ko gate me khade dekh)—kya hua…..?

Guard—sahab in dono ko badi malkin ne bahar nikalne ko kaha hai…..ye badi hi badtamiz ladki hai

Raj—theek hai aane do unko andar…mai dekhta hu

Guard—ji sahab…jao andar dono

Mrinal—kisi din tere baal gayab karke tujhe ganja kar dungi….phir lakdi se tera takla bajaungi

Guard—badi hi badtamiz hai

Priyadarshini—mrinal chal andar

Hum sab andar aa gaye…neha chachi mujhe dekh kar vaha aa gayi….lekin jab unhone mrinal aur priyadarshini ko vaha andar dekha to unke tewar badal gaye to vidhi ko dekh chounk gayi

Neha—tum dono phir se andar kaise aayi niklo bahar turant

Raj—unhe maine andar bulaya hai chachi

Neha—par beta...tujhe malum nahi ki isne kya kiya hai.... ? tabhi to didi ne bahar kiya in dono ko

Raj—maa ne …par kyo….?

Neha—vo isliye kyon ki.....(phir chachi ne mujhe poori baat batayi) isliye didi ne bahar jane ko kaha dono ko

Neha chachi ki baat sun kar mujhe behad hasi aayi lekin maine badi mushkil se khud ko roka par payal didi aur divya to has has ke lotpot ho gayi

Raj—achcha to ye baat hai…..mrinal kyo kiya tumne aisa….? Bhala itna bada injection bhi koi insano ke lagata hai vo to mar hi jayega na aise me…bolo

Mrinal—vo maine socha ki aise me vo mami jaldi theek ho jayengi….mujhe maf kar do ek baar…aage se aisi galti nahi karungi…..priyadarshini ne koi galti nahi ki hai vo to bechari bahut sidhi hai….use kuch mat kahna vo nirdosh hai… hame yaha se mat nikalo

Raj—theek hai…jao apne kamre me jao…..agar kahi koi baat samajh me na aaye to mujh se puch lena pahle baad me kuch karna

Mrinal—samajh gayi

Neha—ye ladki koun hai raj…..?

Payal—chachi ye meri friend vidhi hai.....kuch din ye mere hi sath yaha rahegi

Neha—theek hai…aao beti..ise apna hi ghar samjho

Vidhi (pair chhukar)—ji apka bahut bahut shukriya

Neha—badi hi sushil ladki hai….isse kuch sikh mrinal tu

Mrinal—ha…ha…mai bahut kuch sikh chuki hu…aur bhi sikh jaungi jaldi hi…..mera dimag bahut tez hai…..jaldi sikh jati hu main

Mai vaha se uth kar maa ke room me chala gaya…mujhe dekhte hi khush ho gayi…maine unke gale lag kar unhe dono ko yaha rokne ka bata diya

Mamta—priyadarshini vo to bahut nek aur sidhi hai par vo mrinal badi ajib aur chalu hai…khair chal koi baat nahi tune kuch soch kar hi unhe rakha hoga

Raj—veer kaha gaya….?

Mamta—aur kaha..maine use hospital bheja jaldi se…uske piche itna bada injection thoons diya us ladki ne

Raj—kuch nahi main samjha dunga usko bhi…aap tension mat lo

Ruchi—betu aa gaya...... ? kaha rah gaya tha...jo itna time laga diya

Raj—bas didi thoda time lag gaya...achchha maa mai veer ko dekh kar aata hu

Neha—abhi aaya aur phir chal diya

Mamta—theek hai...jaldi aana

Raj—ok...my sweet maa

Mai turant vaha se nikal kar saloni ke paas chala gaya……mujhe dekhte hi uski ankho me anshoo aa gaye…vo mere pairo me gir padi

Saloni (rote huye)—mujhe maf kar do……mai tumhari amanat nahi sambhal payi

Raj—paridhi didi kaha hain..... ?

Saloni (rote huye)—maine bahut koshish ki tumhe contact karne ki lekin tumse koi sampark hi nahi ho paya

Raj—paridhi didi kaha hain..... ?

Saloni (rote huye)—tumhare jane ke baad uski tabiyat achanak se bahut jyada bigad gayi....meri to kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya ki achanak se aise kaise ho gaya...maine bahut koshish ki....

Raj (jor se)—maine tumse pucha ki paridhi didi kaha hain..... ? apni ramayan baad me sunana mujhe samjhi

Saloni (rote huye)—mai paridhi ko nahi bacha payi......she is no more.....hum sab ko chhod kar vo is duniya se chali gayi...she has dead now

Raj (jor se)—shut up…..bakwas band karo apni……aisa nahi ho sakta….mujhe unke paas le chalo

Saloni rote huye mujhe paridhi didi ki dead body ke paas le gayi jo safed kapde se dhaki huyi thi….maine ek jhatke me kampte hatho se unke chehre par se kapda khich ke dur phek diya aur dhadam se niche baith gaya…meri ankho me pani aa gaya unka masum chehra dekhte hi

Raj (nam ankho se)—nahi aisa nahi ho sakta…..aap mujhe chhod kar nahi ja sakti….main aap ko marne nahi dunga

Saloni (rote huye)—apne akhiri samay me bhi vo tumhara hi naam le rahi thi……aisa lag raha tha jaise ki vo kuch tumse kahna chahti thi magar gale se awaz hi bahar nahi nikal rahi thi uski sirf Raj tumhara naam bhar nikal raha tha

Main unki body se lipat kar rone laga…..mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki main kya karu…..mujhe aaj apni duniya veeran si lagne lagi thi paridhi didi ke chale jane se

Main unse lipat ke ro hi raha tha…meri ankho ke aage ghor andhakar chha gaya aur main us andhakar me dubne laga ki tabhi kisi ne mera hath thaam liya aur meri ankho ke samne chhaya andhera gayab ho gaya

Main turant rona band kar ke uth khada hua….jaise ki mujhe kuch achanak se yaad aa gaya ho kuch bahut hi avashyak…….aur body ko phir se usi safed kapde se dhak diya…..saloni mere rote rote achanak chup ho jane se hairan hokar mujhe dekhne lagi

Raj—is body ka vishesh khyal rakhna…kuch hona nahi chahiye is body ko

Saloni (sisakte huye)—lekin dead body ko jyada din tak rakhna theek nahi hai…..ashubh hota hai

Raj—aap kya ye body sambhal kar rakh sakti hain ya nahi…..haan ya na…..?

Saloni—kitne din……?

Raj—jab tak main kuch na kahu tab tak….

Saloni—ho jayega

Raj—ye baat is band kamre se bahar nahi jani chahiye

Saloni—nahi jayegi

Raj—theek hai mai chalta hu abhi.....jaldi hi loutunga mera intazar karna aur alert rahna har samay

Saloni—don’t worry….body tumhe sahi salamat milegi jab bhi vapis aaoge

Raj—ok…thanks

Mai vaha se nikal sidhe hospital veer se milne chala gaya…..jaha mujhe dekh kar pahle to bahut khush hua phir bhadak gaya

Veer—pahle ye bata mujhe ki tu is mrinal ko koun se chidiya ghar se pakad kar laya hai….Sali adivasi kahi ki

Raj (haste huye)—arey yaar bechari bahut dukhi thi dono….isliye le aaya

Veer—dukhi vo nahi thi….dukhi to main ho gaya hu uske karan…ab to ghar jane me bhi darr lagne laga hai

Raj—mai samjha dunga usko

Veer—vo tujhe hi ulta pahada padha degi…..pata hai subah kahti hai ki mujhe boor zara ki picture dikhao aur upar se mujhe kahti hai…..ki balatkari mutra fuck chal raha hai….usse bach ke ghar se bhag gya main….abhi dubara gaya to pichhwade me ballam size ka injection ghused diya usne…aur tujhe hasi aa rahi hai meri halat par taras aane ki jagah

Raj (haste huye)—hasi na aaye to kya karu….baat hi aisi hai…..balatkari mutra…..hahaha…kya naam diya hai mrinal ne… main to soch raha hu ki teri shadi karwa du mrinal se

Veer—tera muh tod dunga main dubara aisa sochna bhi mat……vo suhagrat me hi mujhe patak patak ke nipta degi ki kuch karne layak hi nahi rah jaunga kabhi

Raj—khair chinta mat kar….main use handle kar lunga…ab chal ghar ki yahi pada rahega

Veer—ab na jata ghar jab tak vo bhutni vaha hai uska koi bharosa nahi…mere to piche hi pad gayi hai ..pata nahi abki baar kya kar de mere sath

Raj—kuch nahi hoga…chal uth jaldi se

Veer—teri jimmedari par ghar chal raha hu...dekh lena....warna kabhi na jata ab ghar uske vaha rahte

Phir mai aur veer ghar aa gaye....main sab se mila...payal didi ne vidhi ko sabse apni friend batakar milwa diya tha jisse meri ek tension kam ho gayi thi

Raat me sabne sath me dinner kiya.....uske baad sone chale gaye.....mai aaj maa ke sath sone chala gaya....vidhi ko payal didi ne apne kamre me rok liya

Sabke so jane ke baad main chupke se uth kar paridhi didi ke room me chala gaya....secret locker khol kar ek baar phir se uski talashi li

Vaha rakhi diary ko maine ek baar phir se dhyan se padha aur us locket ko dhyan se dekhne laga…..kuch der tak dekhne ke baad maine dono cheeze yathavat rakh di aur locker band kar diya

Phir maine paridhi didi ke bed ki chhanbeen shuru ki……unke pillow kww niche wale bhag ko achchi tarah se dekhne laga….maine use cheer kar vaha rakhi vo cheez bahar nikal li

Jaise hi maine use dekha to meri hairani ki koi seema na rahi…..ab mujhe sara khel aur khiladi ke bare me samajh me aane laga tha

Raj (shocked)—ohhhhh……to ye baat hai…..ab dekho main kaise tumhara khel bigadta hu……itna bada dhokha diya tumne mujhe…akhir kyo….? Kya bigada hai maine tumhara…..?
 
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Main Paridhi didi ke kamre se nikal kar maa ke paas jakar so gaya…..kintu kuch ankhe aisi bhi thi jo abhi bhi jaag rahi thi…..unme need ki khumari ka abhi tak koi asar nahi huwa tha

Sandhya apne bistar me lete huye gahri need me apne purva janam ki yaado me tairte huye gote laga rahi thi.. kabhi uske chehre par dukh ki jhalak aa jati to kabhi gusse ki aag me uska jism tapne lag jata

Tabhi vaha ek parchhayi prakat huyi aur vo dhire dhire badhte huye sandhya ke jism me sama gayi jiske phal swaroop uska badan ekdam se bistar se kuch upar uth kar punah apni jagah aa gaya aur vo shant hokar need ki agosh me chali gayi

Neha chachi apne room me leti huyi paridhi didi ki tasveer dekhte huye anshu baha rahi thi….aur mann hi mann usse baate kar rahi thi

Neha (rote huye mann hi mann)—kaisi abhagin maa hu mai bhi ki jo apni beti ki mout par khul ke ro bhi nahi sakti.. mujhe maaf kar dena meri beti mai tujhe nahi bacha saki….mai bhi kitni majboor hu ki kisi ko teri mout ki sachchayi bhi nahi bata sakti…..lekin ek maa ka hriday to phir bhi rota hi hai na

Mai to ye bhi nahi janti ki ye bimari tujhe aayi kaha se……hame aaj raj ki chinta hai…..main janti hu ki agar use teri mout ka pata chala to vo toot kar bikhar jayega aur uske tootne se ye pariwar ka har sadasya hasna tak bhul jayenge mujhe maaf kar dena beti…..mai to bas roj raat ko akele me aise hi do boond pani baha leti hu to mann ko thoda tasalli mil jati hai…warna ab need aur aram kaha rah gaya hai meri zindagi me

Chandni mitali ke sath leti huyi to avashya thi parantu uski ankho me need ka namo nishan tak nahi tha….vo khuli ankho se aaj bhi usi scene ko rewind karke baar baar soch rahi thi jab Raj ne waqt par aakar uski jaan aur aabru ki hifajat ki thi

Jitni baar vo us bure hadse ke vishay me sochti utni baar tezi se uske dil me raj ke prati ek khichav sa badhta jata aur vo usme khichi chali ja rahi thi jaise ki chumbak kisi lohe ke tukde ko apni oor akarshit kar leta hai

Chandni (mann me)—agar raj ne us din samay par pahuch meri izzat na bachayi hoti to mera kya hota…..? mai aaj kisi kothe ki shobha badha rahi hoti ya phir khudkusi kar ke apni ye daagdar zindagi ka ant kar leti…raj ne apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina hi meri laaz bacha li……didi sahi kahti hain ki raj asadharan hai….kisi ke bhi dil me apni ek kabhi na mitne wali jagah bana leta hai

Kisi ki baat kyo karu…..mai to khud hi uski is ada par mar miti hu….har samay mera dil uske hi vishay me sochta rahta hai….aisa lagta hai ki ab meri zindagi me raj ke siwa sochne aur yaad karne ke liye kuch hai hi nahi

Mai uski taraf khichi ja rahi hu.....mera dil, meri aatma tak ab mere vash me nahi rah gayi hai usme bhi raj ne apna kabza kar liya hai…..kya mai raj se pyar karne lagi hu…..?

Kya raj mere pyar ko accept karega….? Kya didi aur unke pariwar ke sadasya mujhe swikar karenge….? Aur agar aisa nahi ho paya to phir mera kya hoga…..?

Yahi sab mann me guna bhag karte huye chandni ki ankh kab lag gayi usko khud hi malum nahi chal saka…divya apne kamre me mithi need so rahi thi….khair uske bare me kya baat karna jiska koi auchitya hi nahi hai….vo to 24 ghante apne saajan me hi khoyi rahne wali saajan ki premika hai….use saajan se pyar karne ke atirikta koi dusra kaam aata hi nahi hai aur na hi vo sikhna ya karna chahti hai iske siwa

Koyi Baat hai Tujhme Ki Tu Itna Yaad Aata hai
Ek Tera Pyar hi Mujhme Umango ko jagata hai

Kayi Janmo ka Nata hai, Sada Mujhko Lage aisa
Mohabbat Warna Koyi is tarah Thodi hi Lutata hai

Mujhe Mahsus hota hai, Koyi na Jhooth hai isme
Apni Palko Pe Tu hi, Fakat Mujhko Bithata hai

Mohabbat ke Siwa main To, Tujhe Kuch de nahi Payi
Mere Nakhro ko tu hi Sada Haskar Uthata hai

Suno Ek Raaz apne Dil ka, Main Tumko batati hu
Ek Tera Khyal hi Saajan, Meri Neede Churata hai

Ruchi didi bhi apne bistar me lete huye raj ke bare me hi soch rahi hain….ye to unka roj ka hi kaam hai…jab tak raj ki tasveer ko apne sine se lagakar ek aadh ghante usse baat na kar le unke dil ko sukun hi nahi aata hai

Dusri taraf jo sabse adhik is samay vichlit thi …jiski ankho ne to jaise need shabd ko hi bhula diya tha….jane kab se uski in neeli neeli jheel si ankho ne need ka swad nahi chakha tha…vo abhi bhi ek tasveer ko bistar me lete huye apni khoyi huyi ankho se apalak nihare ja rahi thi

Malmal se jada hua dunlop ka makhmali bistar bhi Priyadarshini ki ankho me need ki halki si bhi kharish paida nahi kar saka….vo bhi bilkul dusri divya hi ban chuki hai jo har samay bas saajan saajan ke naam ki tan mann me dhuni ramaye rahti hai

Priyadarshini (mann me)—mai kab aap se milungi....ab to ye virah behad asahniya ho gaya hai.....ankho se bahte aanshu oole ki bhanti pratit hote hain….sabhi ke hriday ullas se bhare huye hain kintu mere hriday me holika jal rahi hai….ye virahagni mujhe jalakar raakh kar degi….mujhe apne is sharir ke jal jane ka koi dukh nahi….he pawan dev.. mere sharir ki raakh ko uda kar mere saajan ke marg me bichha do….raakh par chalne se mujhe apne saajan ke charan sparsh karne ka anubhav to kam se kam prapt hoga.

Hawa ki Dekh Fitrat hai Bujhati Deep Chalti Hai
Par Jyoti Tere Prem ki, Har Pal Mere Sine me Jalti Hai

Mohabbat Ho Gayi Ek Baar Phir Ye Mit Nahi Sakti
Jawani Chahe Har Ek Roj Hum Dono ki Dhalti Hai

Tere Dil se Mila Hai Dil aur Khushbu Hai Saanso Mein
Magar Baho ki Ye Doori Mujhko Hardam Hi Khalti Hai

Tadap ka Kya Kahu Tujhse, Haal Tu Dekh Le Aa ke
Aas Tujhse Milan ki, Mere is Sine Me Palti Hai

Mohabbat ki Nahi Jati Ye To Khud se Hi Hoti Hai
Ab To Need Bhi Nahi Aati, To isme Meri Kya Galti Hai

Mai maa ke paas letkar paridhi didi ke vishay me sochne laga….unke room se mujhe jo sakshya mile vo behad choukane wale hain jinhone mujhe isse judi har kadi ke bare me punarvichar karne par vivash kar diya

Raj (mann me)—mujhe ab thoda open hona padega…..ab se main har kisi ko ek ek kar ke bahar ghumane le jaunga daily…..isse mujhe unko sahi tarah se samajhne aur samjhane me madad mil sakegi….shuruwat kal neha chachi se karta hu….mujhe unke mann se dukh ka gubbar bahar nikalna hoga

Paridhi didi ke mout ke rahasya ko bhi suljhana hai…..bahar ka koun hai ye to main samajh gaya kintu isme ghar ka koun shamil hai iska pata lagana hai abhi…aisa koun hai jise paridhi didi ke secret locker ke bare me jankari hai… jisne badi hoshiyari se unki diary badal kar uske page gayab kiye

Vo locket chanchal ke paas se yaha didi ke paas kaise aaya aur unki diary chanchal ke room me kisne rakhi….? Vo jo bhi hai jarur mujh par nazar rakh raha hai

Aur sabse bada sawal aur choukane wali baat ki vo cheez jo paridhi didi ne us shakhs se chheeni thi uske paas kaha se aayi….? Mujhe uske jariye hi paridhi didi ki mout ka raaz pata chal sakta hai…..jaldi hi kuch karna hoga mujhe ya shayad kal hi mai is par amal karna shuru kar dunga

Divya ko bhi maa se milana ab bahut jaruri ho gaya hai…..ye kaam bhi jaldi hi ab karna hoga mujhe….ye sab vichar karte karte main bhi so gaya

Subah meri need kisi ke mera sar sahlane se khuli to dekha ye maa thi jo paas baith kar mere sar me hath pher rahi thi..main bhi unki god me apna sar rakh diya….tabhi maine dekha ki dusri taraf ruchi didi bhi baithi mujhe hi dekh rahi thi

Raj—g.m. didi

Ruchi—my sweet betu…g.m.

Payal (aate huye)—uth gaye laat saab….ruk main coffee bana ke lati hu

Sandhya—aap rahne do…main bana deti hu

Payal—nahi….raj ke liye to sirf main hi banaungi

Ruchi—use hi banane de sandhya….raj ka koi bhi kaam vo kisi aur ko nahi karne deti…vo khud hi karti hai…tu aa baith

Payal—haa….aur ye baat sab ko achche se samjha dena maa….baad me kisi ko bura lage to mujhe dosh na dena

Kuch der me payal didi coffee le aayi to pine ke baad main fresh hone chala gaya…uske baad sab ke sath baith kar nasta karne laga

Nani—tu ghar ka malik hai..tu samne ki chair par baitha kar

Raj—na nani....ye kaam aap ko karna chahiye

Nani—ye mujhe shobha nahi deta beta

Raj—to phir chachu vaha baithenge

Mitali—ye mardo ka kaam hai….tu hi kar samjha

Awadhesh (sakpaka kar)—ha raj….ab tu hi is ghar ka mukhiya hai

Neha—vaise bhi us chair par baithne ka haq uska hi hai jiski baat sabhi mante ho…aur vo tu hai…aaj se tu vaha baithega…samajh gaya

Payal—correct chachi

Raj—theek hai....par mere kuch niyam honge jo sabko manna jaruri honge....phir main unme laparwahi bilkul bhi bardast nahi karunga....sab achche se soch lo

Roopa—tu bol kar to dekh...jaan bhi hazir hai teri ek awaz par

Veer—raj maine chandni ka admission kara diya hai

Raj—ab is mrinal ka bhi kara de lage hath

Veer—kyaaaaa.... ? pagal hai vo

Mrinal—pagal kisko bola..... ?

Veer—mai pagal

Mrinal—ha.....phir sahi hai

Veer—mai isko padhane ke liye ghar me Teacher ka intazam kar dunga…vo shaam ko aakar mil legi

Raj—ok

Veer—shaam ko madam ayegi usse milne ko aur achche se baat karne ko bol dena ise

Mrinal (mann me)—Fatichar……lagta hai yaha padhaane wali ko Fatichar madam kahte hain

Mrinal—ha...ha...mai sab samajh gayi....mera dimag bahut tez hai...sab jaldi hi samajh jati hu main

Raj—neha chachi chalo aaj mai aur aap kahi shopping kar ke aate hain

Avni—mai bhi chalu.... ?

Diksha—bhaiya mai bhi

Raj—no....abhi sirf mai aur neha chachi

Neha—kyaaa mai..... ?

Raj—kya apko mere sath jana pasand nahi chachi..... ?

Neha—arey nahi pagle…..mai to bahut khush hu ki mere bete ne aaj pahli baar mujhe ghumne le chalne ki baat ki hai

Geeta—kabhi mujhe bhi ghumane le chal

Raj—sabko le chalunga roj one by one....aaj neha chachi.....kal nani

Nani—jio mere lal

Neha—kab chalna hai….?

Raj—aap ready ho jao…abhi chalte hain

Payal (dhire se)—vaha kisi ke sath nain matakka mat karne lag jana nahi to teri tange tod dungi samajh gaya na

Raj (dhire se)—haaye…dil karta hai abhi apko chum lu

Payal (dhire se)—mai to teri hi hu...jo chahe kar

Thodi der baad neha chachi ready hokar aa gayi to main unke sath ghumne nikal gaya…..maine kuch khane pine ka saman liya aur ek sundar si ekant jagah par aa gaya

Neha—kitni sundar jagah hai...wow...thank you raj beta

Raj—isme thanks ki kya baat hai….jaise mere liye maa hai vaise hi aap ho

Neha—mai janti hu….mujhe naaz hai apne bete par

Raj—kitni shant jagah hai

Neha—aur beautiful bhi….abhi tak mujhe pata hi nahi thi ki yaha aisi sundar jagah bhi hai kahi….tujhe ye kaise malum huyi

Raj—mai ek baar paridhi didi ke sath yaha aa chuka hu…unhone hi mujhe bataya tha…(jhuth)

Paridhi didi ka jikra aate hi chachi ka chehra murjha gaya….na chahte huye bhi unki ankhe nam ho aayi lekin unhone jaldi se muh dusri taraf ghuma kar apni ankho me aa rahe pani ko saf kar liya…par main ye sab bade dhyan se gour kar raha tha

Raj—paridhi didi kab ayengi chachi…mujhe unki yaad aati hai

Neha (udas)—aa jayegi….chal ab chalte hain

Raj—chachi paridhi didi kaha gayi hain.... ?

Neha—bahar kahi tour par gayi hai....ab ghar chal

Raj—mujhe unka contact no. do ya phir unka address…mujhe baat karni hai

Neha—mujhe nahi malum…..ab koi sawal nahi…sidhe ghar chal jaldi se

Neha chachi ab hadbadane lagi thi…..unki ankho me baar baar pani aa raha tha….unhe darr tha ki kahi jis baat ko vo mujhse chhupana chahrahi hain vo unke anshu jahir na kar de….chachi uth kar chal di

Raj—aap ko pata nahi hai ya aap mujhe batana nahi chahti…..? vaise mujhe sab pata hai

Chachi ke aage badhte kadmo par jaise kisi ne lohe hi bediya daal di achanak se unke kadam apni jagah par ruk gaye meri baat sunte hi….apni ankhe pochh kar vo dhadakte dil ke sath palat kar mujhe dekhne lagi

Raj—haan…mujhe sach pata hai

Neha (darte huye)—kkkkyyyaaaa pata….haiii…tujheee….?

Raj—vohi jo aap mujhse chhupana chahti ho

Neha—mai kuch…nahhhii…chhupppaaa…raaahiii aur bhala main tujhse kya aur kyo chhupaungi

Raj—to mere sar me hath rakh ke kah do ek baar ki aapne abhi paridhi didi ke bare me jo kuch kaha vo sab sach tha

Neha—mujhe koi hath nahi rakhna bas…ghar chal

Raj—samajh gaya….sab ki tarah aapne bhi mujhe dhokha diya…..mere vishwas ka gala ghonta…..aap se theek to meri paridhi didi thi jinhone meri jaan bachane ki khatir apni qurbani de di

Neha (shocked)—tumhari jaan bachane ki khatir…….?

Raj—haan….mujhe pata hai ki aap unki mout ke bare me mujhe nahi batana chahte…lekin ye to mujhe yaha aate hi malum ho gaya tha

Neha (ghabrate huye)—kkkisne kaha tumse…..?

Raj—chachi…shayad aap bhul rahi ho ki mera naam Raj kyo rakha gaya tha…..? Raj Ek Raaz hai

Neha chachi akhir toot gayi aur vahi dhadam se niche baith kar dahad maar maar ke rone lagi…..maine unhe rone diya.. unke mann ko halka karna jaruri tha warna unke sine me daba ye dukh aur anshu unhe andar hi andar khokhla kar dete

Neha (rote huye)—mai apni beti ko nahi bacha saki…..raj beta mai teri paridhi didi ko nahi bacha saki…..vo mujhe akela chhod ke chali gayi

Raj—didi ne jo qurbani di hai vo aaj ke samay me koun deta hai is matlabi rishto ki duniya me…..aaj jaha har khoon ka rishta sirf ek fareb hai….aaj har rishta bemani hai…bhai ka bhai dushman, baap khud apni betiyo ko hawas ki aag me jhok dete hain, beta apni maa bahan tak ko nahi chhodta, aaj samaj ka har rishta sirf daulat aur hawas ka rah gaya hai….vahi paridhi didi ki qurbani ek adarsh hai…..anshu baha kar unki qurbani ka niradar mat karo chachi

Neha (hairan)—kaisi qurbani…..? mujhe bata..tujhe meri kasam raj…mujhe sab bata

Raj—aap ko pata hai didi ko cancer ki bimari kaise huyi…..?

Neha—nahi….mujhe jab pata chala tab bahut der ho chuki thi….aur us samay ilaz ke liye hamare paas paise bhi nahi the…to jyada ilaz bhi nahi ho paya uska….aur jab paise aaye to vahi chali gayi….mujhe sach bata raj

Raj—unhe ye bimari meri vajah se huyi ……?

Neha (shocked)—tumhari vajah se....par kaise..... ? tum to yaha abhi aaye ho 16 saal baad..jabki cancer to use pahle hi ho chuka tha tumhare aane se pahle

Raj—aane se pahle nahi balki mere yaha se jane se pahle bachpan me hi.....jab unhone meri mout ko khud apne upar le liya

Neha (hairan)—teri mout ko...... ? mujhe poori baat bata raj….akhir aisa kya raaz hai…jo aaj tak kisi ko nahi malum…?

Raj—to suno…..

Phir maine unko paridhi didi ki diary wali likhi ghatna chachi ko bata di……jise sun kar unke pairo tale se jamin khisak gayi…..maine didi ki diary apni jeb se nikal kar unke hath me rakh di….use padhte hi unki ankho se anshu kisi jharne ki tarah jhar jhar bahne lage

Vo diary padhti gayi aur roti gayi….kuch der tak rone ke baad vo uth kar khadi huyi aur mujhe jor se apne sine se laga liya…aur mere mathe ko chumne lagi

Neha (sisakte huye)—aaj mujhe apni beti par fakra hai....aaj tak mai uski mout par chhup chhup kar anshu bahati rahi lekin ab nahi….usne to qurbani di hai…mari nahi hai vo….meri beti to amar ho gayi hai….mujhe garv hai uski maa hone par

Raj—ha chachi…didi bahut mahan hain....aap ko maine kayi baar akele me rote dekha hai jo mujhe apni didi ka apman lagta tha…isliye aaj main apko yaha lekar aaya hu ki unka apman mat karo

Neha (ankh pochh kar)—nahi ab nahi roungi kabhi main apni beti ke liye…..lekin vo hain koun jisne hamare hi ghar me rah kar itna sazish racha tujhe maarne ki….? Ek to pakka jeth ji rahe honge….dusri vo aurat koun hain…? Mujhe bata main uske tukde kar dungi jisne tujhe maarne ki koshish ki…..bata mujhe

Raj—sachchayi shayad aap na sun sako…isliye jane do

Neha—nahi mujhe janna hai….tujhe maine kasam di hai yaad rakh

Raj—theek hai to suno….unme se ek apke pati uday chachu the jinhone mujhe marna chaha….yahi nahi meri bahno aur chandni par apni gandi nazar dali

Neha (jor se)—raaaajjjjjjj……..…….ye jhuth hai……aisa ho hi nahi sakta…..jarur tujhe galat fahmi huyi hai

Raj—kash ki ye jhuth hota to chachu aaj jinda hote

Neha (shocked)—kkkkyyyaaa kahaaa…..tune…..?

Raj—ha….uday chachu ab is duniya me nahi hain…….maine unhe maar diya jaan se

Neha (chillate huye)—raajjjj…chatttaakkkkk…….chatttttaaaakkkkkk….. chatttaaakkkkk…….chaattttaaakkkkk…..kah de ki ye sab jhuth hai

Raj—ye sach hai..chachi

Neha (rote huye)—mat bol mujhe apni gandi juban se chachi……achcha sila diya tune mere pyar ka…….meri mamta ka badhiya mazak udaya…..akhir apna khoon apna hi hota hai……tune ek bahan ke balidan ka achcha karz ada kiya hai uske baap ko maar kar….uski maa ko vidhwa bana kar…..dur ho ja meri nazro se…….aaj ke baad mujhe apni shakal bhi mat dikhana…..mar chuka hai tu mere liye….chala ja yaha se

Raj—ye baat mujhe uday chachu ne hi batayi thi…..aur phir bhi aap ko mujh par bharosa nahi hai to aap mitali chachi aur chandni se puch lo jiske sath unhone ye wahiyat harkat karne ki koshish ki thi jiske karan chandni mousi yaha rukna nahi chahti thi…agar maine samay par pahuch kar unhe bachaya nahi hota to aaj vo bhi mar chuki hoti

Raj—chaho to veer se puchh lo…..mere kahne par usne chachu ko chhod rakha tha warna kab ka khatam kar deta vo

Neha (rote huye)—mujhe teri kisi bhi baat ka bharosa nahi

Raj—chachu ne mujhe ye bhi bataya ki aap abhi tak kuwari ho

Neha—ooohhhh to isliye teri niyat kharab ho gayi mere upar isliye yaha akele me lekar aaya hai…..ab to mujhe lagne laga hai ki meri beti ke sath bhi tune hi kuch kar ke mar diya hoga

Raj (chillate huye)—chachiiiiiiiiiii…..aap tab se anap shanap bake ja rahi hain aur main sunta ja raha hu lekin mere swabhiman ke sath khilwad nahi karna kabhi…..main har cheez bardast kar lunga lekin swabhiman par aanch tak nahi

Neha (rote huye)—mujhe ghar chhod de

Raj—aur haan…..jo main batane yaha apko laya tha ki……paridhi didi jinda hain……jaldi hi main unhe apke paas le aunga

Neha (sisakte huye)—aur kitna jhuth bolega tu……hamne apne samne use marte huye dekha hai….uski chita jalte dekhi hai maine..samjha

Raj—mujhe jo kahna tha maine kah diya……aaj jitni taklif mujhe apki bato se huyi hai utni to mujhe tab bhi nahi huyi thi jab sab apno ne mere sine ke aar paar khanjar ghopa tha…..theek hai aaj ke baad meri shakal apko dekhne ko nahi milegi….chaliye….aur maine jo kaha vahi sach hai

Mera mood kharab ho chuka tha to main uske baad chup chap unhe lekar ghar chhoda aur phir bahar nikal gaya….Vahi dusri taraf

TBM—hahahaha……dekhi hariya hamre makadjal me kitna dum hai

Hariya—ha sarkar….aap to bhesh badalne me mahir hain….kya jaal bichhaya hai aapne…..lekin Trikal ko kyo marwaya aapne….? Vo to apne kaam aa sakta tha

TBM—tu budbak ka budbak hi rahega sala chutiya……vo Trikal sasura hamse jyada taqatwar huyi gawa raha…..kabhi bhi khatra ban sakat raha hamre liye….isliye vo jhaantu ko hum marwaye diye…

Hariya—par usse raj ka ek majbut dushman to khatam ho gaya na…..?

TBM—sasur ke nati…jab tu paida huwa raha tab kukuriya tohre sar ma tang uthaye kar moot di rahi kaa..... ? Raj ka ek dushman kam huyi gawa to ukhri jagah ma Pari to azad huyi gayi na…..ab vo dekhna kaisan sab ki chaddi utaregi

Hariya—pahle aap Uday ka roop bana ke uske ghar ma ghuse….aur sara ilzam us uday par aa gaya…maan gaye guru apki roop badalne ki kabiliyat ko…koi nahi pahchan saka aaj tak apko

TBM (mann me)—budbak ….jab hum tera hi roop bana kar tohri lugayi ko din dahade pel aata hu to vo tak nahi pahchan pati hai ki hamra admi ragad raha hai ki koi aur to sala vo uday koun sa khet ka muli tha…hahaha

TBM—bas ab tamasha dekha….dur baith ke….hum kaisan apna hisab kitab karta hu ab

Udhar dophar me veer ne kisi madam ko mrinal ko padhane ke liye baat kiya to vo milne ke liye haweli aa gayi…. Veer ne use mrinal ke room ke paas chhod kar chup chap khisak liya jaldi vaha se

Teacher—excuse me…..aap me se mrinal koun hai…..?

Mrinal—mai hu mrinal…..kahiye kya kaam hai……?

Teacher—ji mai ek teacher hu….mujhe veer ne apko padhane ke liye bheja hai

Mrinal—achcha….achcha…..namaste Fatichar madam……

Teacher (shocked)—whattttt…..? ye kya badatmizi hai…..?

Mrinal—achcha apko bhi bada tamizi hua lagta hai….

Teacher—ye kya tarika hai baat karne ka….?

Mrinal—mai samajh gayi ki aap hi vo Fatichar madam ho….mujhe us balatkari ne sab bata diya tha

Teacher—koun balatkari….hai yaha……?

Mrinal—arey vahi….veer….vo bahut bada balatkari (chamatkari) hai…..tumhare sath bhi balatkar (chamatkar) kar dega vo…. Usi mutra ne bataya ki tum hi Fatichar madam ho…aao yaha baitho

Teacher—nahi…nahi….theek hai…mai chalti hu……mujhe bahut jaruri kaam hai

Vo teacher jaise aayi thi vaise hi mrinal ki bato se darr kar ulte paon haweli ke bahar bhag gayi….mrinal use rukne ko chillati rah gayi lekin vo ab kaha rukne wali thi

Mai ghar se nikal kar ek sunsan jagah par jakar baith gaya…….aaj neha chachi ki baato se mere dil ko gahri thes pahuchi thi….mai vahi baith kar khud ko normal karne laga

Jane kitni der tak mai vahi baithe baithe so gaya….jab need khuli to surya asta hone chala tha….vaha se uth kar main chanchal ke paas chala gaya

Mere aane se chanchal behad khush ho gayi…..aaj lunch nahi kiya tha to uske sath restaurent me jakar khana khaya…..kuch samay uske sath bitane ke baad mai saloni ke hospital chala gaya….

Raj—ek baar mujhe vo body dikhaiye

Saloni—aa jao

Main saloni ke sath us room me chala gaya jaha paridhi didi ki body ko bade hi secret taarike se rakha gaya tha ki koyi aagantuk agar use dhoodna chahe to na khoj paye….main bade dhyan se body ka nirikshan karne laga

Saloni—aise kya dekh rahe ho itne gaur se ek dead body ko…..? she is dead raj…..paridhi mar chuki hai

Raj—nahi…paridhi abhi bhi jinda hai

Saloni (shocked)—whatttt.... ? ye kaise ho sakta hai.... ? jabki dead body tumhare samne hai…

Raj—theek vaise hi jaise ki paridhi ki ek dead body ka pahle antim sanskar ho chuka hai

Saloni—to kya vo paridhi ki body thi….? To phir ye koun hai….?

Raj—na to vo paridhi thi aur na hi ye paridhi didi ki body hai

Saloni (shocked)—kyaaaa….? To paridhi kaha hai….?

Raj—baat asal me ye hai ki…….
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Raj—theek vaise hi jaise ki paridhi ki ek dead body ka pahle antim sanskar ho chuka hai

Saloni—to kya vo paridhi ki body thi….? To phir ye koun hai….?

Raj—na to vo paridhi thi aur na hi ye paridhi didi ki body hai

Saloni (shocked)—kyaaaa….? To paridhi kaha hai….?

Raj—baat asal me ye hai ki…….

Ab aage…….

Raj—ye to mai bhi nahi janta ki kaha hai lekin thoda thoda andaza jarur hai

Saloni—agar ye paridhi nahi hai to iski body ka antim sanskar kar dena chahiye…..bewajah dead body ko rakhna theek nahi hai

Raj—ye bewajah body nahi hai…..ye bhi paridhi hi hai

Saloni (shocked)—ohhhhhh…..tumne to mera dimag hi kharab kar diya hai…..kabhi kahte ho ye paridhi nahi hai aur ab bolte ho ki ye paridhi hi hai…..ya to tum paridhi ki mout se pagal ho gaye ho ya mujhe pagal bana kar rahoge

Raj—dono hi bate sahi hain

Saloni—saf saf kaho akhir matlab kya hai tumhare kahne ka……?

Raj—actual me ye Minakshi hai……aur paridhi minakshi ka hi punarjanam hai isliye dono ki body ka roop rang same hai

Saloni (shock)—whattttt…….? Par ye kaise possible hai….? Minakshi to us aag me khatam ho gayi thi…..aur agar kisi tarah maan lo bach bhi gayi to itne samay tak jinda kaise rahi…..? aur jinda bhi thi to yaha tak kaise pahuchi….? Agar yaha tak pahuch bhi gayi to tum tak kaise pahuchi…..? sabse badi baat agar tum tak bhi pahuch gayi to usne tumhe pahchana kyo nahi…..? and at last paridhi kaha gayi…….?

Raj—baap re …itne sare sawal vo bhi ek sath……..simple si baat hai dono ki adla badli huyi hai….chunki dono ek hi hain to asani se dono ki yaade ek dusre me interchange ho gayi ya kar di gayi

Saloni—koun kar sakta hai aisa……..? paridhi ka kya hua..... ?

Raj—ye kaam kewal ek hi shakhs kar sakta hai...aur vo hai...... Pari

Saloni—pari..... ? par vo to qaid ho gayi thi na..... ? tum par jab usne humla kiya tha to tumne uski shaktiya hi khatam ho gayi thi to phir vo kaise kar sakti hai..... ?

Raj—minakshi ki tabiyat kal achanak kharab ratna ke payal me samahit hone ke turant baad huyi.....ratna Pari ka hi ek prati roop thi isliye jaise hi ratna ko maine payal me samahit karne ke liye kriya ki to ratna ki yaade to payal didi me samahit ho gayi kintu uske sharir se nikli dusri jyoti pari me sama gayi kyon ki vo uska hi pratiroop thi....Jiske karan pari ki shaktiya vapis aa gayi aur vo azad ho gayi

Saloni (hairan)—ohhhhh....to ratna ke payal me samahit hone aur pari ke azad hone se minakshi ka kya sambandh hai…..?

Raj—minakshi bhi to pari ka hi prati roop hai na....jahir hai ye usne shaktiya vapis pane aur azad hone ke liye kiya hai

Saloni—ratna ke khatam hote hi uski shaktiya to mil gayi na phir..... ?

Raj—shayad utni shakti azad hone ke liye paryapt nahi thi isliye usne minakshi ko apna nishana banaya

Saloni—magar minakshi us aag se bachi kaise…uske baad na to vo kabhi ratna ko mili aur na hi tumse koi contact hua…..kyo….?

Raj—yahi sab to mujhe pata lagana hai…..ki asli sach kya hai paridhi didi ki mout ke piche….? Minakshi ka bhi abhi kuch kahna jaldbazi hogi jab tak sach samne na aa jaye …isliye maine is body ko safe rakhne ko kaha hai

Saloni—ek paridhi ki body jo pahle mili thi vo koun thi phir…..?

Raj—vo to TBM ka tikdam hai

Saloni—asli paridhi ka kya hua….? Kaha ho sakti hai vo....kahi pari ne usko bhi to..... ?

Raj—nahi vo jinda hai....agar nahi hoti to minakshi ke sath aisa nahi karti vo.......aur jahir hai ki vo earth me nahi hai kyon ki ye mrityu lok hai.....yaha ek myan me do talwar nahi rah sakti....isiliye paridhi ko yaha se hatakar minakshi ko paridhi ki jagah shift kiya gaya

Saloni—par minakshi to paridhi ke bare me itna kuch kaise janti hai

Raj—simple hai minakshi paridhi ka purva janam hai....apne pichle janam ka yaha kisko dhyan rahta hai....minakshi ki ruh ko jab paridhi ki body me shift karoge to vo paridhi hi ban gayi na...use to isi janam ka yaad rahega body me pravesh karte hi

Saloni—abhi to bol rahe the ki ye body paridhi ki nahi hai..... ?

Raj—haan….kyon ki dono ki body same hi hai to ye bhi sambhav hai ki kewal ruh badli gayi ho…mai abhi sure nahi hu anyway is body ka khyal rakhna…..sambhav hai ki Pari isko khatam karne ki koshish bhi kar sakti hai…isliye apko alert rahne ki jarurat hai

Saloni—don’t worry…..mere hote pari kuch nahi kar sakti

Raj—ye mat bhulna ki pari aapse kahi jyada powerful hai

Saloni—mai dhyan rakhungi….

Raj—theek hai mai chalta hu....

Mai vaha se nikal kar chanchal ke ghar chala gaya.....mujhe dekhte hi uske chehre par sare jahan ka noor utar aaya uske chehre par aayi khushi dekh kar mai apna gum bhul gaya

Idhar ghum kar aane ke baad se neha apne room ko lock karke bistar me gir gayi...aur roti rahi...use rah rah kar raj ki baate yaad aa rahi thi.....kabhi paridhi ke bare me jo raj ne kaha use yaad kar uske mann me garv mahsus hota to agle pal uday ke bare me jo bataya use soch kar raj ke upar gussa aane lagta

Bahut der tak vo aise hi bed par pade roti rahi...udhar jab raj abhi tak ghar nahi aaya to payal pareshan hone lagi usne raj ko contact karne ka prayas kiya kintu uska phone coverage area ke bahar bata raha tha

Use jab malum hua ki neha bahut der pahle hi aa gayi hai to usse nahi raha gaya....pareshan hokar neha ke room me knock karne pahuch gayi

Payal—chachi...darwaja kholo

Neha (kuch der baad)—kya hai...payal.... ?

Payal—chachi...aap to raj ke sath gayi thi na....vo kaha gaya hai..abhi tak aaya kyo nahi..... ?

Neha—mujhe kya malum.... ? mujhe to kuch nahi bataya usne....aaya to mere sath hi tha

Payal (badbadate huye)—bina bataye kaha chala gaya ye……? Aane do batati hu aaj isko…bahut apne mann ki karne laga hai….gate me guard se pata karti hu

Payal (main gate me phone kar)—hello…kaka…raj aaya tha kya….?

Guard—mem sb…..raj sb to neha madam ko chhod kar turant hi vapis chale gaye the….lekin kuch pareshan the ya gusse me the kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Payal—achcha theek hai…jab vo aaye to mujhe bata dena

Payal (mann me)—kaha gaya hoga ye….pareshan kyo tha…..? kaise pata karu….? Gudiya ko puchti hu

Lekin divya ne bhi raj ke bare me apni anbhigyata jahir kar di….raj ke abhi tak na aane se sab dinner ke liye baithne ke baad dining table se bina khaye hi uth gaye

Payal (gusse me)—aaj use chhodungi nahi….aa bhar jaye…bahut bigad gaya hai

Roopa—ye hai kaha ab tak…..?

Nani—aane do aaj main usko jam ke daantungi….? Bahut bigad gaya hai

Payal (thoda jor se)—nahiii…..use sirf mai daantungi aur koi nahi samjhe aap sab….aur aapne ye kaise kah diya ki mera raj bigad gaya hai….?

Maa (dhire se)—chup chap yaha se nikal lo warna ye raj ka gussa hum sab par utar degi abhi

Jab kafi raat ho gayi to payal ke sath sath neha bhi pareshan hone lagi….uske mann me bhi kayi tarah ke sawal aur ashanka paida hone lagi

Neha (mann me)—abhi tak aaya kyo nahi….? Kahi kuch kar na baithe….to mai didi aur sabko kya jawab dungi… payal ka samna kaise karungi….raj me to uski jaan basti hai…..payal hi kya hum sabki jaan raj me hi to atki hai….use bachane ke liye meri beti ne apni qurbani de di to kya main uske liye apne pati ki qurbani nahi de sakti….?

Neha (mann me)—lekin raj ne aisa kyo kiya…..? kya usne jo kaha vo sach hai.... ? kya uday ne sach me itna neech kaam kiya ki jiske chalte raj ko use maarna pada…….? Raj ne kaha tha ki mitali aur chandni ke sath sath veer ko bhi ye baat malum hai..to aaj tak kisi ne mujhe bataya kyo nahi…?

Neha (mann me)—mujhe mitali se ye baat pata karni hogi…..lekin kahi raj ki ye baat sahi nikli to mai raj ko kya muh dikhaungi…..? jiske liye hamne itni kathor yaatnaye sahi, itni minnate mangi, jo hamari ankh ka tara hai aur aaj maine us par hi hath uthaya…..mai sab ki nazaro me gir jaungi……isse achcha to mera mar jana hi theek rahega

Kuch ghante chanchal ke sath gujarne ke baad mai ghar aa gaya…sabse pahle divya ke room me gaya....jaha vo aaiye ke samne baith kar baal bana rahi thi....mai chupke se jakar use piche se apni baho me bhar liya

Divya—saajan......aa gaye

Raj—kaise malum ki mai hu

Divya—ye dil apne aap pahchan leta hai....kuch kahne ya sochne ki jarurat nahi padti use apne saajan ko pahchanne me

Raj—hum kal raat me ghumne chalenge

Divya—theek hai

Raj—puchogi nahi ki kaha….?

Divya—huuunn…na….mujhe to bas in baho ka sahara chahiye…yahi mere liye baikunth dham hai….jaha bhi le chalo mai to apne saajan ki parchhayi hu sath chalungi…..parchhayi ya to usme hi sama kar vilupt ho jayegi ya sath chalegi kintu alag nahi ho sakti

Raj—maine avashya kabhi punya karm kiye honge jiske phal swaroop mujhe tumhara pyar mila…..mai to dhanya ho gaya divya

Divya—sssshhhh….aisa nahi kahte….ye saubhagya to mera hai mujhe apke prem ka ashray mila….mere sare janam safal ho gaye

Raj—hum guru maa se milne chalenge aaj raat

Divya (khush hokar)—sach me...

Raj—koi apni antar aatma se jhuth bol sakta hai kya.... ? tum to meri aatma ho divya

Divya (sine se lag kar)—ohhh……saajan…..kabhi mujhse door mat hona….nahi to meri halat pani bin machhli ke jaise ho jati hai

Raj—yahi dasha to meri bhi hai jaanu

Divya—payal didi bahut der se khoj rahi hain….behad pareshan bhi hain aur gussa bhi…..kisi ne abhi tak dinner nahi kiya..sabko aise pyar me tadpana kya achchi baat hai…..?

Tab tak guard ne didi ko intercom se mere aane ka bata diya….unhone sab ke kamro me dekh liya phir divya ke room ko knock karne lagi

Payal—gudiya raj ko bahar bhej jaldii se

Divya—lo didi khud hi aa gayi

Raj—ooohh shit……aaj to khair nahi phir

Divya ne jakar darwaja khola…..main tab tak bed ke niche ghus gaya…..didi andar har jagah dekhne lagi….thak haar kar vo divya ki oor nirasha bhari nazaro se dekhne lagi

Payal (udas hokar)—kaha gaya….mujhe bhukh lagi hai lekin uske bina kha bhi to nahi sakti….upar wale ne ye dil kyo banaya hai aur banaya bhi to use dhadakna kyo sikhaya kisi ke liye…?

Mai unki aisi udasi bhari baate sun kar tadap utha aur turant shararat chhod kar bahar nikal unhe apni baho me lekar unke hotho par chumban ki mohar lagane laga

Pahle to vo achanak aise karne se chounk gayi par jab ehsaas hua ki mai hu to shant ho gayi aur apni ankhe band kar li…is chhote pyar mishrit chumban ke baad maine unhe apni baho ki qaid se riha kar diya

Kiss khatam hote hi vo jaise hi hosh me aayi to bhadak kar apne tatha kathit sawalo ki phul jhadiya chhodne lagi main koi jawab dene ki bajaye unhe phir se apni baho me bhar liya….mujhe pata tha ki meri agosh me aate hi vo bilkul shant pad jati hain…unke gusse ko shant karne ka yahi mera sabse kargar hathiyar sabit hota hai

Raj—mujhe abhi joro ki bhukh lagi hai phir apke sawalo ke jawab bhi de dunga

Udhar priyadarshini saajan ki us balyawashtha ki tasveer ko dekhte huye milan ki aas me doobi huyi thi….jab usse is vairh ki aag ko bardast karna mushkil ho gaya to vo dhyan me baith gayi

Dhyan me hi usne Mata Parvati ka aavahan karte huye vinti karne lagi....

Priyadarshini (dhyan me)—"hey maa….akhir kab tak mainis virah ki aag me jalti rahungi….maa ab mujhse ye virah ki jwala sahan nahi hoti hai...ye virah naag bankar mere sir me chadha hua hai aur har pal mujhe dasta rahta hai...ab to chandan ka lep bhi mere liye daah karak ho gaya hai....mere yauvan pakshi ke liye ye virah vyadh ho gaya hai..... vidhata ne mujhe ye kanak varna ka yauvan kyo diya aur uske sath hi ye virah ka dukh bhi kyo mila... ?

Maa...saajan ko mai apni aatma me basa chuki hu..jo ab nikalna sambhav nahi hai....mere prem ki itni kathin pariksha kyo mata... ? kya itne hazaro sadiyo ki pariksha kam hai jo abhi tak chal rahi hai.... ? Jab aapne mujhe saajan ko mere pati hone ka bataya to Mera Yauvan jab chaand ke jaisa udit hua to usme ye virah rahu ban kar aa gaya.....is karan ye yauvan chandra ghatate huye kshin hokar shaktiheen ho gaya hai"

Tabhi Priyadarshini ke antaraatma ki karun pukar sun kar Maa Bhagwati Parvati uske dhyan me ek tez jyoti punj ke sath sher par sawar hokar prakat ho gayi...Priyadarshini ki ankhe us chamak se choundhiyane lagi to mata ke hatho se ek roshni nikal kar priyadarshini ki ankho me sama gayi jisse use saf saf dikhne laga

Maa Parvati—"Putri...mera vardan kabhi mithya nahi ho sakta....yadi prem uttapann hua hai to satya se apne bhari mann ko bandh lo....jiske mann me satya ka pahredar hota hai uske upar sankato ka pahad bhi gire to uska baal banka nahi hota hai.....Yauvan yadi chaturdashi ka chaand hai to chandrama bhi to virah ki chingari se jalta hai..... pawan ko bandhne wala yogi-yati hota hai to kaam ko bandhne wali kamini-sati hoti hai...’’

Priyadarshini—mai kya karu maa...saajan ke milan ki aas me ek ek din ek ek yug ki bhanti lag raha hai....din aur raat ki bhookh aur nidra dono chale gaye hain....saajan se virah me aisa lag raha hai jaise koi mere hriday me aari chala raha ho....mera marg darshan karo mata...mujhe mere saajan se mila do

Mata Parvati—jab Prem kiya hai to apne prem par vishwash karna bhi sikho putri.....agar aise me tumhara saajan tumhare samne bhi aa jayega to tum use nahi pahchan sakogi kyon ki kewal sadiyo ka intazar hi kafi nahi hota hai balki apne prem par atoot vishwash bhi hona chahiye

Chalo mai tumhe ek amar prem gatha sunati hu....phir tum khud hi nirnay karna ki tum uski tulna me khud ko kaha pati ho........

Mata Parvati—mai tumhe aaj tumhare sawalo ke sandarbh me jo Prem ki maha gatha sunane ja rahi hu....ye kahani hai Rajgarh ki.....Jaha do premiyo ne ek aisa prem ka adarsh sthapit kiya ki unka prem ka prakash teeno lok me phail gaya.....
 
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Ek Amar Prem Gaatha

Mata Parvati—Putri jo prem ki amar katha main tumhe sunane ja rahi hu ye vo maha gatha hai jisne prem ki ek nayi shrankhla ko janam diya...Jaha se is prem ki shuruwat ki neev padi

Tumne yadi prem kiya hai to prem par vishwash karna bhi sikh lo....prem ka rasta kaanto ka rasta hai....isme sukh kam aur dukh jyada hote hain lekin jo sachcha premi hota hai vo in dukho se vichlit nahi hota balki in dukho me bhi vo sukh ki anubhuti kar hi leta hai

Prem marg anya margo se bhinn hai....baki margo par pairo se chal kar jana padta hai kintu prem marg me sar ke bal chalna padta hai...ye aisa kaanto bhara rasta hai jis par chalne ka sahas ya to koi chor kar sakta hai ya phir sachcha premi

Prem ki prapti utni hi durgam hai jitni ki kaal par vijay ki prapti aur uski uplabdhi me sabse badi badha apna sharir hai....sadhe teen hatho ka yeh sharir beech me sumeru parvat ban kar aa jamta hai, isliye jo sir dekar iske path par pair rakhta hai vahi sachche prem ko pa sakta hai

Sachche premi ko is sharir ke nav-dwaro aur panch-vikaro par adhikar karna avashyak hai anyatha uska prem kabhi safal nahi ho sakta...samay ke chhote se thapedo se hi vo toot kar bikhar jata hai....iska hi parinam hai ki aaj sansar me jise log sachcha prem kahte hain vo chhoti chhoti bato par galat fahmiyo ka shikar ban jata hai...vastav me vo sachcha prem na hokar soundarya ke akarshan se uttapann hawas mishrit prem hai....sachche prem me hawas ke liye koi sthan hi nahi hota hai

Ye kahani bhi aise hi premiyo ki hai….jinhone prem ka ek alag hi itihas likh diya…..is kahani ki shuruwat aaj se kayi hazar saal pahle Dwapar yug me huyi thi

Tab yaha samudra ke tat par prithvi par sapt dwipo me se ek Singhal garh namak dwip hua karta tha....bade bade parvato se aachchhadit ye rajya atyant sundar evam ramniya tha

Singhal dwip par us samay sugandh naresh Gandharva Sen ka Shasan tha…vaha ki maharani Champavati thi… sugandh naresh maine isliye kaha kyon ki us rajya ki samast nari vibhinn pushpo ke gandh ki thi
Jehi Jehi Baran Phool Phulwari,
Tehi Tehi Baran Sugandh So Nari​
Gandharv sen ki chhappan karod ki sena thi aur uski ashwa shala me solah sahastra shyam karn ghode the….uski gajshala me saat sahastra singhli hasti (mahavat) the....nar patiyo me vah narendra tha aur bhu-patiyo ka vah indra kahlata tha..... vah aisa chakrawarti raja tha ki sabhi khando me uska dabdaba tha aur sabhi desho ke raja uske aage sar jhukate the

Koi bhi agar singhal dwip ke nikat pahuchta to aisa lagta ki vah kailash ke nikat aa gaya ho…ghani aamra vatika charo taraf lagi huyi thi...uske sabhi taruvar aise sugandhit the mano malay giri ke chandan ke vriksh lagaye ho aur unki chhaya aisi ho rahi thi jaise ki rajni ho rahi ho...yadi koi yatri dhoop se thaka hua vaha pahuchta aur un vriksho ki chhaya me aaram kar leta to uska samast dukh thakan vismrit ho jata tha

Vaha aur bhi kayi tarah ke vriksh jaise ki kathal, aanwla, nariyal, khajur, santra, jaam phal, kela, anar, angoor, aam ityadi lage huye the jisse kisi yatri ko bhukha bhi nahi rahna padta tha

Singhal garh me logo ki pani ki suvidha ke liye pag pag par koop (kuwa) aur vapiya (bawdi) ke sath sath har jagah kund bane huye the jinki bathak aur sidhiya saje rahte the....har kund ke paas dev sthan bana hua tha aur ashram the jaha rishi muni rahte the

Vaha ka sarovar maan sarovar ki bhanti samundra ke jaise bhara hua, nirmal aur vistirna tha isliye us sarovar ko maan sarodak kaha jata tha

Sarovar me jab paniharine pani bharne aati thi to log unke roop soundarya ko dekh kar thage ke thage rah jate the…vo sabhi aisi lagti thi jaise ki mom ki bani murtiya ho…sabhi dev lok ki apsarao ki tarah anupam sundari thi unke jism se kayi tarah ke sungandhit phoolo ki mahakti khushbu kisi ko bhi madhosh kar sakti thi

Singhal dwip me charo oor pushpa vatikaye lagi huyi thi….jinke vriksh vriddh hokar chandan ki si suvas ke ho gaye the….unme saghan lataye thi jo bahutere phoolo se phooli huyi thi tatha kewda, champa, chameli,kund, gulab, fenda, ratrani, kadamb, juhi,nagkeshar,mouli shri, bela aur bhi nana prakar ke phool lage huye the….vo phool unhi ke mashtako par chadhte the jinke mashtak me bhagya ki mani hoti thi

Singhal dwip ka mahal bhavya aur vishal tha….mahal ke charo taraf hazaro shero ka pahra hardam hota tha…. Singhal garh me Neer aur Kshir naam ki do nadiya thi…..dono nadiyo ka udgam motiyo ke choorn se bane ek kund se hua tha

Us kund ka pani amrit aur keechad kapoor tha….us kund ki sabse badi vishesta yeh thi ki uska pani pine wala jab tak jinda rahega jawan rahega vo vriddh nahi ho sakta kabhi bhi…..kund ke paas me hi ek kanchan ka vriksh tha…uski jade patal tak thi….vah vriksh indra lok ke kalaptaru ki tarah khas tha

Vo vriksh ka phal kabhi kabhar hi nazar aata tha….jab usme phal lagta to uske ujale se poora singhal dwip me tez roshni phail jati….us phal ko khane wala ajivaj jawan aur nirogi rahega aisi uski vishesta thi

Kintu kabhi koi bhi na to us kund se pani nikal kar pi saka aur na hi kanchan vriksh ke us adbhut phal ko prapt kar paya…kund ke pani aur us phal ko pane ke liye jane kitne hi log apni jaan gawa baithe

Maharani Champavati atyant roopvati aur sadguno ki khan thi…vah battis shubh lakshano se yukt thi…unki sundarta ka bakhan poora singhal dwip karta tha…Champavati ke samanta ki koi bhi stri us samay kisi dwip me nahi thi

Maharani champavati is samay garbhvati thi….sare rajya me harsh aur ullas ka mahoul vyapt tha…maharaj Gandharv sen khushi se phoole nahi sama rahe the

Kisi ko kya pata tha ki Maharani Champavati garbhvati hokar kewal santan paida karne nahi ja rahi hain apitu vo ek itihas ki rachna karne ja rahi hain

Maharani champavati singhal dwip ko ek aisa deepak dene ja rahi thi jiska prakash sarvatra ujiyara phailane vala aur har kisi ke mann ko sammohit kar ek naye yug ki shuruwat karne wala tha

Champavati bhagwan shiv ki ananya bhakta thi….roj subah uth kar snan aadi se nivratt hone ke baad nitya din vo unke rajmandir ko chandan se lepan karti thi aur bhagwan ashutosh ki pooja karti thi

Jab se vo garbhvati huyi thi maharani ke hriday me ek aloukik prakash ki anubhuti hoti thi….jyo jyo garbh badhta ja raha tha tyo tyo maharani ke udar me us jyoti punj ka prakash bhi tez hota ja raha tha
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Mata Parvati—Putri Priyadarshini…..abhi tumhe bulane koi aane wala hai…ye lo pushtak..isme tumhe aage ki katha likhi huyi mil jayegi…tumhare siwa aur kisi ko bhi isme likha nazar nahi ayega

Priyadarshini ke hatho me vo pushtak dekar mata antardhyan ho gayi….aur tabhi usi samay diksha use khana khane ke liye bulane aa gayi

Darwaja khatkhatane se Priyadarshini apne dhyan se bahar aa gayi....usne mann hi mann maa gouri ko pranam kiya aur jakar darwaja khola

Diksha—aapka sabhi khane par intazar kar rahe hain

Priyadarshini—ji main abhi aayi

Main abhi payal didi aur divya ke sath dinner karne aa gaya…halanki chanchal ke sath khana kha chuka tha phir bhi sabhi meri vajah se abhi tak bhukhe the to unke pyar ka maan to rakhna hi tha

Mamta—beta kaha chala gaya tha…? Kam se kam bata to diya kar

Raj—sorry maa…dubara khyal rakhunga

Veer—tumhare chakkar me kisi din bhukha rahna padega

Mrinal—bilkul sahi pakde hain…aap mutra balatkari

Sab chounk kar mrinal aur veer ki taraf dekhne lage….veer ke gale me to khana hi atak gaya…..bechara chup chap gardan niche jhuka liya aur khansne laga

Kajal—arey koi use kuch pine ko do

Mrinal—mai pilaungi…main hu na……lo veer…mutra piyo

Ruchi (dhire se)—betu…is ashleel ladki ko kaha se pakad laya hai…..?

Is baar to sab ke gale me khana phans gaya aur vo khansne lage….jab ki mujhe hasi aane lagi…..payal didi ne mujhe ghur kar dekha to maine jaldi se pani ka gilas unki aur bakiyo ki taraf sarka diya

Meera—ye kya besharmi hai……?

Roopa—ise vapis lana hi nahi tha…..besharmi ki bhi koi had hoti hai

Vidhya (chilla kar)—chal dur hat mere bete ke paas se

Mrinal—kyo ab kya hua…….? Mai bhi to veer ko vahi pila rahi hu jo aap log pilane wali thi…….(phir veer ki oor palat kar) lo tum kyo pareshan hone lage….piyo na…main tumhe pailaungi mutra piyo..piyo

Vidhya (gusse)—behaya….besharam…tu aise nahi manegi…

Vidhya mousi gusse me apni jagah se uth kar mrinal ko marne ke liye jaise hi hath uthaya to turant maine unka hath beech me hi pakad liya

Raj—nahi…mousi ji…aisi galti dubara phir nahi honi chahiye

Sarita (jor se)—Rajjjjjj......ye kya tarika hai..... ? kya tumne hame isliye yaha rahne ko kaha taki hamari be-ijjati kar sako aur dusro ko bhi karne do......chalo didi hum apne ghar abhi jayenge

Priyadarshini (hath jodkar)—dekhiye hum yaha naye hain....agar mrinal ne kuch galat kah diya to main apse hath jod kar uski mafi mangti hu....use kshama kar dijiye....uska irada aap logo ka dil dukhane ka bilkul bhi nahi hai

Mamta—beta ye sab kya hai.... ?

Raj—pls sab shant ho jao...kuch nahi hai maa...darasal mrinal ko hindi nahi aati hai...vo abhi sikh rahi hai...isliye vo kuch ka kuch samajh baithti hai.....vo mitra ko mutra kahti hai aur chamatkari ko balatkari

Sab (shock)—kyaaaaaa..... ?

Mrinal—bilkul sahi pakde hain..... raj ji

Iske baad sabhi ne chup chap dinner khatam kiya aur apne apne room me chale gaye....mai bhi apne room me aa gaya jaha payal didi ke sath vidhi bhi thi

Vidhi—saajan ye dono ladkiya mujhe samanya nahi lagti

Payal—koun dono..... ?

Vidhi—mrinal aur priyadarshini

Raj—kyo..... ?

Vidhi—mai jinni hu...mai unke chehre ka tez dekh sakti hu apni shaktiyo se......khas kar priyadarshini me mujhe bahut tez jhalak raha hai...itna tez to kisi dev kanya me hi ho sakta hai aur kisi me itna samarthya nahi itna tez sahan karne ka

Payal—whattttt...... ? kya kuch bhi bolti ho tum vidhi...dev kanya aur yaha...... ? aisa kuch nahi lagta mujhe

Raj—chalo chhodo in bato ko

Payal—ab pahle batao ki tum pareshan kyo the din me…..?

Raj—aisa kuch nahi hai…mujhe need aa rahi hai ab

Payal—dekho mujhe kasam dene par vivash mat karo

Raj—kal bata dunga…abhi sab ghar me hain aur deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hain aaj kal

Payal—theek hai….magar main puche bina chhodungi nahi

Raj—mai ruchi didi ke paas se aata hu

Vidhi—lekin jaldi aana saajan….kahi main so na jau

Payal—ha to so ja na….mere samne kuch mat karna…..nahi to akele kuch nahi karne dungi main…soch lena isiliye tumhe apne sath rakha hai maine

Raj—tabhi to main sochu ki aapne vidhi ko apne sath kaise rakh liya itni asani se

Payal—to kya isko dusre room me rahne deti jisse tum iske paas apna muh kala karte raho aur main yaha tadapti rahu

Vidhi—tum bhi to saajan ki biwi ho…to isme tadapna kaisa…….?

Payal—mai to taiyar hu…par saajan se hi pucho…..inko karne me dikkat hoti hai mere sath

Raj—jab tak hamari shadi nahi hoti tab tak control karo…ayega vo din bhi jarur ayega….ok ab main chalta hu ruchi didi ke paas

Main ruchi didi ke room ja hi raha tha ki tabhi neha chachi ka room khula aur vo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi…mai bhi bina kuch bole aage badh gaya tabhi

Neha—raj…mujhe tumse baat karni hai….andar aa jao

Raj—sorry…mujhe ab kuch nahi kahna chachi…main ab is baat ko tamasha nahi banana chahta

Neha—pls…bas kuch der

Raj—ok

Raj (andar akar)—kahiye jo bhi kahna hai…..mujhe need aa rahi hai

Neha (hath jod kar)—raj…..paridhi kaha hai…..pls

Raj—mai bata chuka hu

Neha (ruwansi hokar)—tumne kaha tha ki vo jinda hai

Raj—apko vo jaldi mil jayengi….mai iske aage kuch nahi bata sakta

Neha (lagbhag rone jaisi)—meri beti kaha hai…rajj….pls bata do….mai hath jodti hu….tumhare pair bhi pakadne ko taiyar hu…pls..bata do

Raj—ye kya kari hain aap…..kah to diya maine ki didi jaldi hi mil jayengi…abhi main khud bhi nahi janta ki vo kaha hai aur kis haal me hain…..bas itna pata chala hai ki vo jinda hain

Neha (sisakte huye)—meri beti ko vapis la do….tum jo kahoge main karungi…..jaise rahne ko kahoge main rah lungi

Raj—aapko rone ki koi jarurat nahi hai…..unhone jab mere liye itna kiya hai to itna main karunga hi…aap nishchint raho

Main unke room se nikal kar ruchi didi ke room me aa gaya….didi meri hi tasveer se baate kar rahi thi…meri awaz sun kar vo turant darwaja khol mujhse lipat gayi

Mai ruchi didi ke sath bed par let kar bate karne laga…..vo mujhse chipke huye hi apne pyar ka izhar aur apni majburiya batati rahi….maine unke hotho par apne hoth rakh diye aur kiss karne laga

Didi bhi khushi se jhumte huye mera sath dene lagi…..jab tak saans nahi phool gayi tab tak dono me ek dusre ke hotho ka ras pine ki prati spardha chalti rahi

Maine unhe apne chipka liya..vo aise hi chipke huye meri baho me so gayi…..unke sote hi maine apni ankhe band kar khud ko do bhago me vibhakt kar liya aur paridhi didi ke room ki talashi lene par mili us cheez (Locket) ko dhyan se dekhne laga


Kuch der tak dekhne ke baad maine apna ek roop vahi chhod kar adrishya hokar ek sun san jagah par aa gaya aur unicorn ko yaad kiya…agle hi pal vo mere samne aa gaya

Unicorn—ji malik

Raj—Dark Lok chalo

Unicorn—ji malik..kintu vaha bahut khatra hai

Raj—vo dekhna mera kaam hai….tumse jitna kaha hai utna karo

Unicorn—ji malik..aaiye

Phir main unicorn ke sath dark lok ke ek anjane safar par nikal gaya….vaha pahuchte hi jaise maine apna pair dark lok ki jamin par rakha ki tabhi……..

Unicorn (chillate huye)—malikkkkkkkk
 
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Singhal garh me khushiya manayi ja rahi thi….maharaj Gandharv sen ke mann me umango ka tyohar jaisa mahoul tha..

Antah akhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab maharani champavati ko prasav pida honi shuru ho gayi….maharaj bechain hokar raj mahal me idhar udhar tahal rahe the….unke kaan kisi shubh samachar sunne ko aatur the

Maharani ke garbh ki ghadi poori hote hi unhone madhya ratri ke samay ek sundar kanya ko janam diya….Kamal ke phool jaisi uski ankhe aur khushbu thi kamal ki pankhudi jaise hi uske hoth the

Vah kanya janam ke samay aisi lagi jaise ki surya ki kiran ho aur jo surya se nikal kar bahar aayi ho……balki surya ki kiran ki chamak bhi uske samne kam thi aur vo kanya usse bhi badh kar thi

Bhaye dus maas poori bhayi ghari, Kamal nayni kanya avtari
Jaise suraj kiran huyi kadhi, Suraj kiran ghati vah baadhi

Ratri me hi din ke jaisa prakash ho gaya…..aur samast raj mandir prakashit hokar kailash ki bhanti chamakne laga….vah itni sundar thi ki purnima ka shashi bhi uski sundarta se haar maan kar ksheen hokar ghatne laga

Vah shashi itna ghata ki ghatate ghatate amavashya ki ratri ho gayi aur chaand agle do dino tak lajja ke karan bhumi me gada raha…

Tadnantar jab vah chandrama punah udit hua tab vah dwitiya ka naya chaand ban kar uday hua….us kanya ki kamal gandh ne vasna se sabko sammohit kar diya aur ras evam roop par nyochhavar hone wale bhramar tatha patange uske charo taraf madrane lage

Padam Gandh Vedha Jag Baasa, Bhanwar Patang Bhaye Chahu Paasa

Uski atyadhik sundar thi, apma maa champavati se bhi badh kar uska roop abhi se tha…vah desh dhanya hai jaha aisi sundar aur Divya kanya ka janam hua

Kintu shayad kisi ne ye dhyan nahi diya ki theek us samay jab singhal garh me is divya kanya ka janam hua usi samay par teen anya balko ka bhi janam hua….ek hi nakshatra, ek hi din aur ek hi samay par

Singhal garh ke paas ke dwip me hi ek anya kanya ne janam liya….vo bhi atyant sundar thi…halanki dono kanyayo ki sundarta me koi samanta nahi thi

Ek anya balak ne Jambu dwip me janam liya…..in teeno ka janam dharti par hua…kintu in sabke viprit ek anya divya kanya ne inke janam ke samay par hi dev lok me janam liya…..uski sundrta bhi singhal garh me janmi us divya kanya se kisi bhi prakar kam na thi

Aaiye abhi hum chalte hain singhal garh, kanya janam se maharaj bahut khush huye…unhone sari praja me mithayi batwayi..raj mahal ko kisi nav naveli dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya…har desho se badhayi aane ka tanta lag gaya

Janam ke baad chhathe din khushi me utsav manaya gaya…kul guru ko bulakar poojan archan kiya gaya…agle din naam karan karne ka nishchit kiya gaya

Subah hone par kul guru aur unke sath kayi rishi muni bhi aaye…..unhone purano aur puratan granth ko nikal kar kanya ke janam samay ke grah nakshatra aadi ki gadna aur arth karne lage

Gurudev—kanya ka janm uttam muhurta me hua hai….ye aisa chandrama hai jo bhumi par udit hua hai kintu jiske uday se swarg bhi prakashit hua gaya hai…is divya kanya ne jagat me kanya rashi me janam liya hai…iski ankhe, hoth, khushbu sab kuch padam (kamal) ki bhanti hi divya hai….isliye hum is divya aloukik kanya ka naam Padmini ya Divya rakhte hain

Gandharv Sen—Gurudev…agar meri putri itni sundar aur divya hai to uska vivah kaha hoga….? Kya meri putri ke yogya koi yuvak hoga kahi par….?

Gurudev—sansar me surya ki sparsh mani se jab krida huyi to uski kiran ke janam grahan karne se Heera nag (ratna) uttapann hua…kintu us nutan padarth ki kala us heere se bhi adhik hai, jo ki is kanya ke yogya hi nirmal ratna ke roop me uttapann hua hai

Champavati—vo koun hai gurudev….? Vo kis desh ke raja ki santan hai.... ? kya meri putri uske sath sukhi rah sakegi.. ? kya vo hamare maharaj ki tarah bahadur hoga..... ?

Gurudev—bhavishya ki bate samay par chhodiye maharani….agar ye divya kanya battis shubh lakshano se yukta hai to sochiye jisse ye kanya prem karegi vo kitna soubhagya shali hoga....Isse prem karne wala iske roop ke vashibhoot hokar usi prakar sab kuch bhool baithega jis prakar deepak ke vashibhut hokar patanga sab kuch bhul baithta hai

Padmini (divya) ki janam patrika bana kar aur use ashirwad dekar gurudev shishyo sahit vaha se chale gaye...dusri taraf janmi anya kanya ka naam Pari rakha gaya jabki dev lok me jiska janam hua us adbhut vilakshan divya kanya ka naam Priyadarshini ke naam se naam karan hua

Dhire dhire samay ka pahiya chalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte Padmini (divya) paanch varsh ki ho gayi.......to usko ved aur puran padhne ke liye bitha diya gaya....

Jiske phal swaroop Jaldi hi vo vidwan aur gunvati ho gayi…..ye baat sabhi dwip khando ke rajao ne suni ki singhal garh ke raja ke yaha ki balika ko ishwar ne atyant gunvati aur mahasurup avtarit kiya hai


Sabhi sochne lage ki "Ek to vah Divya aur Padmini hai dusri gunvan aur padhi huyi hai, pata nahi kis var ke yogya ishwar ne aisi kanya ka nirman kiya hai, Jiske bhagya me ghar me Laxmi ka aana likha hoga, vahi aisi vidushi aur Lavanyavati ko prapt karega"

Dhire dhire samay gujarta raha, ab Padmini apne yauvan me kadam rakh chuki thi...uska roop rang aisa nikhar aaya tha ki log uski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye taraste rahte hi....nav-yuvak to chhodo vriddh jan tak uski jhalak pane ko hamesha lalayit rahte the....uske adbhut saundarya ne samuche singhal garh aur sabhi desho ke rajao ko sammohit kar liya tha

Padmini ke roop aur gun ki prashansa sun kar saato dwipo ke var aate the kintu koi uttar na pakar vo chup chap nirash hokar lout jate the

Maharaj Gandharv Sen sabhi se garv se kahta ki—"Main is dharti ka Indra hu, is dharti me koun meri samanta kar sakta hai aur main kis se apni putri ki bariksha karu"

Jab Padmini ne yuvavastha me padarpan kiya to maharani ne Gandharv Sen ko bataya ki hamari kanya ab vivah ke yogya sayani ho gayi hai

Gandharv Sen ka saat khando ka ek dhawal grah (saat manzila mahal) tha, jise maharaj ne Padmini ko rahne ke liye de diya

Padmini apni sabhi sakhi saheliyo ke sath us mahal me aa gayi....sabhi saheliya nav.balaye thi aur vo padmini ke paas aise lagti thi jaise ki kamal ke paas kumudni viksit ho rahi ho
Hum Phir Loutenge is Chhote se Break ke Baad

Main dark lok ki jamin par jaise hi apna pahla kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi gahre daldal me gardan tak dhans gaya…. Mujhe keechad me fasta dekh kar unicorn jor se chilla utha

Unicorn (chilla kar)—malikkkkkkk

Raj—unicorn ab tum yaha se vapis jao…..tumhara yaha adhik der tak rukna theek nahi hai….ye Devil King ka Rajya hai behtar hoga tum jao ab

Unicorn—kintu main apko musibat me chhod kar kaise ja sakta hu……?

Raj—tum meri fikar mat karo…..aisi musibato se main pahle bhi nipat chuka hu…kya tum agyant ko bhul gaye jab vo aise hi daldal me phansa tha….mujhe in halato se nipatna aata hai

Unicorn—kintu us jagah aur yaha me bahut antar hai…ye devil ka ghar hai

Raj—tumhe jitna kaha hai sirf utna karo…jao yaha se

Unicorn—jaisi apki agya

Unicorn vaha se adrishya hokar vapis lout gaya…..main gardan tak us daldal me phans chuka tha....hil dul tak nahi pa raha tha

Kafi der ho gaye mujhe aisi hi halat me phanse huye.......na to ye keechad mujhe andar khich raha tha aur na hi bahar nikalne de raha tha...aisa lag raha tha jaise ki kisi ne gardan ke niche ke hisse ko cement aur concrete se chunwa diya ho

Maine bahut koshish ki khud ko is musibat se azad kar lu lekin jab hath pair hi hila nahi pa raha tha to azad kaise karwa pata....yaha tak ki gardan ko bhi idhar udhar nahi ghuma pa raha tha

Main abhi khud ko is daldal se chhudane ki mashakkat me hi laga hua tha ki tabhi mujhe vaha par kisi ke aane ki aahat mahsus huyi....vo jo koyi bhi tha piche ki taraf se aa raha tha meri taraf jise main gardan na ghuma sakne ki vajah se dekh nahi pa raha tha sirf mahsus kar sakta tha

Dhire dhire chalte huye vo mere bilkul karib aa gaya.....kuch der tak mujhe ghurta raha....uske nathuno se aati badbu mujhe sahan nahi ho rahi thi

Raj—koun hai...samne aao..... ?

Mere kahne se vo jor jor se hasta hua mere samne aa gaya.....tab jakar meri nazar us par gayi....vo ek vishalkay kekda tha jiska muh bahut bada tha

Raj—koun ho tum..... ?

Kekda—hahahaha......main yaha ka pahredar hu.....mujhse bach kar koi nahi ja sakta

Raj—mujhe kyo pakda hai..... ?

Kekda—tu yaha aaya kaise…..? tujhe pata nahi ki ye devil ka rajya hai....vaise bhi chalo achcha hi hua bahut dino se kisi manav ka maans khane ko nahi mila tha..devil ne meri vafadari se khush hokar inam diya hai tujhe yaha bhej kar...hahahaha

Raj—dekh mujhe yaha se aage jane de tu mujhe nahi kha sakta

Kekda—hahaha....chup manav...awaz nahi...ye mere bhojan ka samay hai...

Raj—tujhe antim baar samjha raha hu….mujhe marna tere vash ki baat nahi hai….behtar hoga mujhe chhod de

Kekda (jor se)—bahut bolta hai tu tuchh manav…..ab dekh main kaise tujhe khata hu

Usne apna vishal muh phaila kar mere gardan ke karib aane laga……ye dekh maine apni ankhe band kar li….jaise hi usne apne muh me meri gardan ko bharne ki koshish ki vaise hi ek tez visfot ke sath uske jism ke chithde ho gaye aur sath me ek visfot us daldal me bhi hua jisse main uchalkar bahar aa gaya

Raj—sale maine samjhaya tha lekin nahi samjha….ja bhugat ab

Us daldal se azad hokar main aage badhne laga aur ek bar phir se apni ankhe band karke paridhi didi ko dhyan me dekhne laga

Kafi der tak dhyan me rahne ke baad mujhe vo nazar aayi.....unki halat dekh kar mere jism ka rowa rowa kaamp utha aur gusse se meri ankhe ekdam lal ho gayi

Idhar ghar me subah meri need khuli to didi ab bhi meri baho me chipki padi so rahi thi….mujhe unke chehre par santosh jhalak raha tha

Maine jhuk kar unke hotho ko halke se chum liya…..to unhone kasmasa kar aur bhi jyada jor se mujhse chipak gayi maine is bar apne hotho ko unke hotho se chipka kar jor jor se unke adhro ka ras pine laga

Pahle to vo sakpaka gayi lekin jab unhe ehsaas hua ki ye main hu to unhone kissing me mera sath dena shuru kar diya….maine kiss karte huye apne ek hath ko unke sudoul pushta stano par rakh diya aur unhe dhire dhire sahlane dabane laga to dusre hath ko unke mansal chutdo par tika diya

Kiss karte huye ruchi didi ki chuchiyo aur naram makhmali gand ko masalne dabane ka sukhad ehsaas milte hi sikandar apna sar utha kar apni jagah talashne me jut gaya

Kuch der tak kissing aur chuchi dabane ke baad maine dusra hath jo unki gand par tha usko uth kar unki salwar me andar dalne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi payal didi ne door knock karna chalu kar diya

Unke beech me door knock karne se hum hosh me aa gaye….maine ruchi didi ke chehre ki oor dekha to unhone sharma kar apna muh mere sine me chhupa liya

Maine ek bar phir se unke hotho ko halke se chum kar door khola aur phulan devi ko pakad ke gale se laga liya vo bhi chipak gayi

Payal—itna time kyo lagaya door kholne me……?

Raj—so raha tha..darling

Payal—chal jaldi fresh ho ja…main coffee banati hu

Maine unke hotho ko bhi dhire se chum kar apne room me aa gaya lekin vaha shayad vidhi naha rahi thi to main upar ek khali room wale bathroom me ghus gaya..lekin vaha ghuste hi jo nazara maine dekha usse to meri ankhe hi choundhiya gayi
 
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Padmini (Divya) us saat khando wale bhavan me apni sakhi saheliyo ke sath rahne aa gayi….vo sabhi Padmini ke paas aise lagti thi jaise ki kamalini ke paas kumudniya viksit ho rahi ho

Padmini ke rahne ke us bhawan me ek shuk (tota) bhi rahta tha, vah maha pandit tha, us shuk ka naam Heera mani tha…..vidhata ne us shuk ko aisi jyoti di thi ki uske netro se rakta aur mukh se manikya mukta vakya nikalte the.. vah kanchan varn ka shuk atyant lavanya purna tha, usme panditya ke sath sath aise lavanya ka hona theek vaisa hi tha jaise ki sone pe suhaga mil gaya ho

Padmini ki us shuk se bahut jaldi hi mitrata ho gayi…..dono sath sath rahte aur ved shastra padhte the…..unki shastra charcha sun kar har koi hatprabh rah jata

Bhawan me rahte huye Padmini rupini vatika unnamit huyi, kyon ki uski tano aur shakhao ne kaliya saja li…Padmini ke tan aur vibhinn ang pratyang me yauvan ka lavanya prasfutit ho gaya

Padmini ke ango ki sugandh se poora singhal dwip mohit ho gaya aur patange aa aakar uske charo oor phirne lage.. uski malay giri sadrash pith par naag ke roop me uski veni, aur dwitiya ke chaand ke roop me shashi uske mashtak par akar baitha

Uski bhounhe dhanush ho gayi jin par vah kataksh ke baan rakh kar unhe pherne lagi…uske netra kamal ke saman sundar the to nasika ke roop me shuk uske kamal mukh par shobhit hua

Vahi dusri taraf dev lok me Priyadarshini bhi yuva ho chuki thi….uske soundarya ke prakash se poora dev lok prakashit ho gaya….uske saman dev lok me koi bhi apoorva sundari aisi nahi thi jo ki priyadarshini ki samanta kar sake…yaha tak ki swarg lok ki apsaraye bhi Priyadarshini ke roop aur tez ke sammukh malin pad jati thi

Uske anupam soundarya se mohit hokar samast dev, gandharv,yaksh, naag, kinnar, rakshas sabhi usse vivah karne ke liye lalayit aur kamandh ho chuke the

Idhar dharti par Padmini aur swarg me Priyadarshini, dono ka anupam roop soundarya dekh kar samast sansar un par mohit ho gaya

Unke adhar (hoth) mano manikya the, daant mano heere the aur dono ke hriday par unke kuch (stan ya uroj) is prakar khade hokar ullasit (chamakdar) ho rahe the jaise ki koi sone ki jambhir (bada nibu) ho

Unhone keshri ki kati tatha gajo ki gati haran kar li….yah dekh kar devtao aur manushyo ne unke sammukh mashtak bhumi par tek diye

Dharti par koi bhi Padmini ke layak nazar nahi aa raha tha, isliye logo ki drashti akash par ja lagi thi….yogi, yati, sanyasi usi asha me akash ki oor drashti lagaye tap sadhna karne lage

Udhar swarg me bhi Priyadarshini ke yogya koi bhi nahi dikh raha tha……to usne Mata Parvati ki tap sadhna karni aarambh kar di

Padmini ko heera mani apni salah deta rahta tha jaha bhi usko avashyakta hoti thi….ek din ye khabar maharaj tak kisi ne mirch masala lagakar unko heera mani ke khilaf bhadka diya ki ye tota raj kumari ko ulti sidhi anargal baate sikhata hai

Isliye Rajagya huyi ki "Heera mani ko maar dalo, anyatha jaha chandrama (Premika) ka uday hua hai vaha vah surya (Premi) ko bhi sanayega"

Kuch log jo heera mani ke shatru ho gaye the kyon ki vah Padmini ka muh laga ho gaya tha, yeh Rajagya sunte hi is prakar doude jaise Billi chuhe ko dekh kar doudti hai

Padmini ko jaise hi maharaj ke is agya ki suchna mili usne turant heera mani ko chhupa diya….jisse vo maharaj ke sainiko ko nahi mil saka

Padmini—maharaj ka adesh mere mashtak par hai, kintu unse jakar itna kahna ki apki putri hath jod kar ye nivedan karti hai ki koi bhi pakshi gyanvan nahi hota hai, vah ya to bhojan janta hai ya phir udna, tota jo kuch bhi padhta hai vah apni buddhi se nahi padhta hai balki dusro ke padhaye vachan hi padhta hai……usko kya buddhi ho sakti hai jiske hriday me gyan netra na ho….?, aur iska praman yah hai ki kisi tote ko manikya-moti dikhao to hriday me vah unki vastavikta kagyan nahi karega balki unko anar aur angoor samajh kar apni chonch me bhar lega

Sainik—jo agya rajkumari

Iske baad heera mani ko maarne aaye raj sevak ko Padmini ka aisa uttar pakar lout gaye parantu is ghatna se heera mani atyant darr gaya to usne Padmini se vinti ki

Heera mani—Rahkumari tumhari yug yugantar ki sukh purna aayu ho…..mujhe ab agya dijiye ki mai ab vanvas ke liye prasthan karu….kyon ki moti ki chamak agar malin ho gayi to punah us moti ka pani kaha nirmal ho sakta hai….? Theek vaise me mere ujjawal charitra ke sambandh me sandeh kiya gaya hai to ab mere charitra par kiya sandeh kaise dur ho sakta hai…

Heera mani—Yadi swami maarna hi chahe to sevak ka unse bachav kaha tak sambhav hai…..? jis pakshi ke ghar me kaal roopi dayan nachti phirti ho us pakshi ka jeevan nahi bach sakta

Heera mani—maine tumhare rajya aur tumhari chhatra chhaya me bahut sukh dekha hai aur itna adhik dekha hai ki yadi tum pucho to uska vivran nahi diya ja sakta hai….maine mann me jis padarth ki ichchha ki use khaya… pachhtava to is baat ka ho raha hai ki mai tumhari seva na kar saka…….yadi mere prati raja ke mann me is prakar ka durbhav bana raha aur raj sevak mere pran lene ke liye mere piche pade hi rahe to kya mai yaha sukh se rah sakta hu….?

Padmini—yadi jeev hi chala gaya to kaya kis prakar rah sakti hai….yadi tum hi chale gaye to mai kaise jivit rahungi..? heera mani tu mera pran pakshi hai, meri seva karne me tujhse dhokha nahi hua hai, isliye mai tumhe jane ko nahi kah sakti…mai manushya hu aur tu mera sneh priya pakshi hai

Padmini ne heera mani ko bahut samjhaya kintu vo yaha rukne ko taiyar nahi hua kyon ki uske mann me ye khatka bana hua tha ki kaal abhi ya kisi bhi samay aa sakta hai

Heera mani (mann me)—Yadi karndhar hi shatru hai to vah kabhi bhi nauka ko duba sakta hai…theek vaise hi jab is rajya ka raja hi mera shatru hai to vo kabhi bhi mujhe yaha rahne par marwa sakta hai

Ek din koi tyohar tha to Padmini mansarodak me snan karne ke liye chal padi…usne apni sabhi sakhi saheliyo bhi bulaya…sabhi aise aa gayi jaise koi pushpa vatika hi aa gayi ho…

Koi saheli champa thi to koi gulab, koi kewda to koi muchkund, koi chameli to koi mogra, sabhi ke jism se alag alag phoolo ki sugandh aa rahi thi

Vo sabhi jab Padmini ke sath chalne lagi to aisa laga ki kamalini aur kumudniya phool uthi ho….marg se nikalne wale sabhi unke sugandh, parimal aur aamod se sammohit hote ja rahe the

Sabhi khelti huyi mansanorad ko gayi aur pahuch kar sarovar ke kinare bane baandh par khadi ho gayi…..sarovar ko dekh kar vo sabhi usme tairne ka anand lene lagi…..

Ek sakhi—Padmini..apne mann me vichar kar ke dekho, pita ke ghar me ginti ke char din rahna hai, isliye jab tak pita ka ghar aur unki chhatrachhaya hai to jee bhar ke khel lo

Dusri saheli—aur nahi to kya….kal ko hum apne sasural me sasur ke ghar chali jayengi phir kaha hum hongi aur kaha ye sarovar ke baandh ka anand hoga….?

Teesri sakhi—phir yaha aana bhi kaha apne vash me hoga aur kaha hum sab ka ek sath milkar khelna is prakar sambhav hoga….?

Chouthi saheli—sasur ke ghar me saas aur nanade apne vyangya purna vachno se hamare pran hi le lengi aur nishthur sasur hame yaha aane nahi denge

Ek aur sakhi—aur jo pyara pati hoga vo hamare liye sabse adhik manya hoga……vah pata nahi kya karega…? Pata nahi vah hame sukh purvak rakhega ya dukh purvak aur pata nahi kis prakar jeevan ka nirvah hoga….?
INTERVAL

Priyadarshini ko divya ki amar prem kahani padhte padhte saajan ki yaad aa gayi to usne kitab ko band karke apne saajan ki vahi tasveer nikal kar usse pyar karne lagi, us tasveer ko paglo ki tarah chumne lagi

Usi samay mrinal kamre me aayi to usne priyadarshini ke is prem bhare pagalpan ko dekh kar uski bhi ankho me anshu chhalak aaye

Mrinal—sakhi is prakar kab tak chalega……maine mahsus kiya hai ki dev lok me jaldi hi hamari khoj been hone wali hai agar aisa hua to tumhara ye saajan prem hum dono ko bhari pad sakta hai aur dev lok me pata chala to vo ttumhare saajan ko bhi maar denge

Priyadarshini—sakhi….mera saajan ke liye jo prem hai vah dharma prem hai….mere rahte koun mere saajan ko maar sakta hai….? Vah prem hi kya jiski vidayi sharir rahte ho jaye…? Prem to vah hai jo jeev ke sath sath parlok tak jaye .. prem ka bhaar kandho par lene ke baad hriday me yah soch nahi hota hai ki ab prem ke marg me bhala hoga ya bura……

Priyadarshini—ek bar prem ka parvat tulya bhaar jab kandhe par le liya to vah bhaar bhala kaise chhut sakta hai jo prano se laga kar baandh diya gaya hai..vo to prano ke sath hi dur ho sakta hai…saajan meri saanso me basa hai bhala koi saans lena kaise bhul sakta hai….?

Mrinal—tumhari ye prem shastra ki baate meri to samajh me hi nahi aati hain….achcha hua ki mujhe kisi se prem nahi hua warna mai bhi tumhari tarah pagal ho jati

Priyadarshini—prem to har koi karta hai, chahe devta ho ya manav, rakshas ho ya yaksh ya phir koi janwar, yaha tak ki ped pudhe bhi prem karte hain, farak sirf itna hai ki koi tan se prem karta hai to koi mann se

Mrinal—mai tumhare hath jodti hu mujhe bhi pagal mat bana dena kisi din..mujhe baksh de…aur chal uth bahar ghumte hain bagiche me

Priyadarshini—theek hai chal

Do kamre se bahar nikal aayi, gardan me jane ke liye lekin haal me sab ko kisi ki photo album dekhte dekh kar vahi ruk gayi

Mrinal—achcha achcha yaha fuck chal raha hai

Mitali (apna sar pakad)—hey bhagwan….is ladki ko iske maa baap ne koun se muhurt me kya kha pi kar paida kiya tha…?

Mrinal—mujhe bhi dikhao…aap log kya dekh rahi ho….? Kahi us din wali boor zara to nahi dekh rahi…? Mujhe bhi dikhao…mujhe bhi boor zara dekhna hai

Sarita—hey bhagwan….ye to hamari naak katwa degi agar kabhi sath me kahi gayi to

Payal—raj ke samne aisi bate mat karna…..baat kya uske paas bhi mat jana tu kabhi

Mrinal—kyo vo lund kar denge

Vidhya (jor se)—chup besharam ladki

Roopa—didi..jaldi se isko album dikha do nahi to aur kya kya sunna padega iske muh se

Payal (mann me)—ye raj ke sath bhi aise hi baat karti hogi….ye bigad degi mere raj ko…is par nazar rakhni padegi mujhe

Kajal—main album ke page palta rahi hu tu dekh jaldi jaldi aur yaha se jaldi khisak le

Kajal album ke page jaldi jaldi palatne lagi....to priyadarshini ne mrinal ka hath pakad kar chalne ko kaha..jaise hi dono chalne ko huyi tabhi ek photo par priyadarshini ki nazar chali gayi....uske dil ki dhadkan aur bechaini achanak hi bahut tez ho gayi ..aur phir...........

Udhar ek jagah koi aur bhi thi jo is samay saajan ki tasveer ko apne sine se lagaye huye thi....uski ankho me bhi pani bah raha tha
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Padmini bhi sarovar ke kinare aakar apne kesho me bandhe jude ko khol diya. Uske baalo ne padmini ke chaand jaise mukhde aur malayagiri chandan ke saman sharir ko is prakar achhadit kar liya mano naag unhe dhak kar sugandh le rahe ho

Un kesho ke uske mukh par aa jane se us samay aisa pratit hua jaise badal akash me ghir aaye ho aur poore sansar par unki chhaya pad rahi ho athava mano chandra grahan ho gaya ho

Chakor bhi bhramit hokar uske chehre ki oor tak taki lagaye dekhne laga tabhi uske in megh roopi kesho ke beech me se padmini ka chandra mukh dikhayi de gaya

Padmini ko us sarovar me snan karte dekh kar chakvi ko chandrama ka bhram hone laga to usne chakve se alag hokar pukarne lagi “ he nath ab tumse milna kaha sambhav hoga, jabki ek chandrama raat me akash me udait hota hai aur dusra din me bhi jal me uday hone laga hai’’.

Idhar padmini apni saheliyo ke sath khelte huye sarovar me snan ka anand le rahi thi aur udhar mahal me usi samay ek billi ka aagman hua

Billi ko dekh kar heeramani buri tarah se darr gaya....use apne pran sankat me nazar aane lage, to usne vaha se chale jana hi theek samjha aur itna mann me sochte hi vah us mahal se ud gaya

Udte udte vah ek ghane jungle me ja pahucha, jaha uske jaise hi bahut se pakshiyo ne uska bahut tarah se aadar satkar kiya, jisse vah behad khush ho gaya

Idhar padmini sarovar snan ke baad jaise hi mahal louti to sevikao ne bataya ki yaha ek billi ne us par jhaptna chaha jisse darr kar heera mani bhag gaya

Ye khabar sun kar padmini ke chehre me jo abhi tak ki khushi thi vo sab gahre dukh me badal gayi….vah usse ghanto bate kiya karti thi….heera mani uske mann ke bahut karib tha, uske aise chale jane se usko bahut dukh hua

Padmini—abhi jao sara jungle chhan maro, mujhe har haal me heera mani chahiye

Sevak—ji rajkumari

Ek sakhi—padmini, heera mani jab tak tumhare pinjre me tha tab tak tumhara das tha,tumhari seva karta raha kintu ab vah pinjre se azad ho gaya hai, to vah vapis bhala kyo yaha das banne ayega…..? use ab azad hone ka matlab samajh aa gaya hai

Sainiko ne bahut khoj been ki kintu heera mani ka pata lagane me safal nahi ho sake…..idhar maharaj Gandharv Sen ko unke mantriyo ne ashwamegh yagya karne ki mantra di

Ek Mantri—ha maharaj apko ashwamegh yagya jarur karna chahiye, poori dharti me ek bhi aisa veer nahi hai jo apka aur apki sena ka samna kar sake ,harana to bahut door ki baat hai

Dusra Mantri—ha maharaj..kisi me bhi itni himmat nahi ki vo apke ashwamegh yagya ke ghode ko pakad lar aapse dushmani kare aur apko yuddh ki chunouti de sake

Apne mantriyo ki aisi bate sun kar Gandharv sen khush hokar ye yagya kane ka nishchay kar liya aur kul guru se milne chale gaye

Jungle me heeramani kuch din bade sukh purvak raha…yaha aane ke baad usko mahal ka sukh bhul gaya halanki kabhi kabhi use padmini ki yaad avashya aa jati thi….heera mani ne un pakshiyo ko ved shastra ka gyan suna suna kar unhe apne guno se mohit kar liya tha..sab pakshi uska bahut maan karte the

Use abhi maje se rahe huye lagbhag dus din hi huye the ki ek din ek shikari tatiya lekar vaha aa dhamka…phale huye pedo ki chhoti chhoti daliya tod kar usne unko ek patli rassi ke kas diya aur sath me apna jaal bhi usme lapet diya

Shikari us tatiya ke andar ghus kar usko apne upar daal kar chalne laga, usko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ki koi phalo se lada hua ped chal raha hai

Shikari bade dhire dhire kadam badhate huye aage badh raha tha…jaise hi pakshiyo ne use dekha to vo ashcharya me dub gaye.

Budha pakshi—meri sari aayu samapt hone ko aayi is jungle me rahte huye kintu maine aaj tak kisi ped ko chalte huye nahi dekha…avashya hi yaha koi khatra hai, yaha jyada der tak rukna theek nahi hai

Us budhe pakshi ki baat sun kar sab darr gaye aur apne bachcho ko chonch me daba kar vaha se dusri jagah ke liye ud gaye

Kintu heera mani apni vidwata ke ghamand me nahi gaya, balki uske mann me us jaal me phanse aise mithe phalo ko dekh kar unko khane ka lalach aa gaya

Mann me un phalo ko khane ka lalach aate hi vah khud ko nahi rok saka aur ud kar us tatiya par ja baitha….baithte hi vah usme bichhaye jaal me phans gaya

Ab heera mani ko kato to ratti bhar bhi khoon nahi, aisi halat ho gayi uski…darr ke mare uski ankho se pani bahne laga aur ab use padmini aur uske sneh ki bahut yaad aane lagi sath hi sath mahal se bhagne par behad pachhtava hone laga

Shikari ne heera mani ko pakad kar uske pankh tod diye aur usko apne sath liye huye pinjre me kaid kar liya jaha uske jaise hi kayi pakshi band the aur vilap kar rahe the

Heera mani—tum log kyo rote ho…kaise phans gaye….?

Ek pakshi—is shikari ki chal ko hum nahi samajh paye aur phal khane ke chakkar me apne pran gawane aa gaye

Heera mani—mai to bahut bada gyani samajhta tha khud ko phir bhi phans gaya..lalach karne ka yahi parinam hota hai…..meri buddhi mari gayi thi jo itna achcha rajkumari ka sath chhod kar yaha jungle me aa gaya

Sabhi rote bilakhte rahe…..shikari unko le jane laga….heera mani ko manushyo ki boli aati thi to usne madad ke liye bachaooo…bachaooo chillane laga

Shikari (haste huye)—tu bade kaam ka pakshi hai….tujhe bech kar to mujhe bahut fayda hoga…..hahahaha

Shikari khushi se jungle se jane laga tabhi ek teer uske pinjra pakde wale hath par aakar laga jisse pinjra uske hath se chhut kar niche gir gaya

Shikari (jor se)—kounnnnn…hai…..? kisne mera rasta rokne ki himmat ki…..?..koun hai…..?

Shikari ke sawal ke pratuttar me tabhi ek awaz aayi…….
Y…..A…..M…..R…..A…..J

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Maine jaise hi paridhi didi ko dhyan me dekha to unki aisi halat dekh kar mere andar kroadh ki jwala bhadak uthi… unhe hath pair bandh kar ek aag ke ghere ke beecho beech ulta latka ke rakha gaya tha…vo rote huye tadap rahi thi us aag ki lapto se unka badan garam hokar jal raha tha

Unke charo taraf bahut se rakshas pahra de rahe the…..aur khoob kor jor se has rahe the….sath me koi idhar se unke sharir me kuch chubha deta to koi udhar se..jisse vo dard se tilmila uthati

Ye dekh kar meri ankho me angare barasne lage….meri ankho ka rang neele se ek dam lal surkh ho gaya…mai gusse me aage badhne laga

Abhi kuch hi aage gaya tha ki koi shakti mera rasta rokne lagi….mai is samay gusse me to tha hi…mai phir bhi lagatar aage badhta raha..vo bar bar mujhe rokne ki koshish karti rahi lekin mujhe rok sakne me saksham nahi thi

Raj—jo bhi shakti prayog kar raha hai..samne akar karo….kya bujdilo ki tarah piche se vaar karte ho

Tabhi vaha thahaka lagate huye ek vishal bhediya manav mere samne aa gaya aur jor jor se hasne laga…usne mujhe apni shakti se aag ke gole mujh par barsane laga….lekin un aag ke golo ne mere paas aate hi phool ban kar mujh par baras pade

Raj—koun ho tum aur mera rasta kyo roka……?

Bhediya manav—mai yaha ka sabse taqatwar bhediya manav hu…mera naam dankal ahi…hahahaha…tu yaha kaise aa gaya…..?

Raj—mai ek ladki ki khoj me aaya hu…mera rasta chhod de

Dankal—hahahaha.....mai apna bhojan chhod du..... ? hahahaha....ab to mai tujhe maar kar khaunga..hahahaha

Raj—mujhe maar kar khana tere to kya tere baap devil king ke bhi vash me nahi hai

Dankal (jor se)—tuchh manav…..tu hamare devta ko chunouti deta hai….? Tujhe to ab mai cheer phad kar khaunga...hahahaha

Raj—chal jaldi kar tujhe jo karna hai.…..mere paas jyada time nahi hai....chal mujhe maarna chalu kar....time starts now

Dankal ne kroadhit hokar mujhe utha kar patak diya....mai turant khada ho gaya...usne phir se patak diya...mai phir khada ho gaya...usne anginat bar mujhe jaldi jaldi utha utha kar patka mai har bar turant hi khada ho jata

Agli bar usne mujhe pakad kar utha liya aur jor se mere ek hath me kaat kar apne nukile daant vaha gada diye aur phir se mujhe patak diya aur jor jor se hasne laga...

Dankal—hahahahaha......ab tu ya to mere jahar se mar jayega ya meri hi tarah bhediya manav ban jayega...hahahaha

Idhar mai jaise hi nahane ke liye upar wale bathroom me gaya to vaha ka nazara dekhte hi meri ankhe choundhiya gayi.....bathroom me diksha poori nangi shower ke niche khadi hokar naha rahi thi

Nahate huye apna ek hath niche baar baar chalaye ja rahi thi…uski pith meri taraf thi to mujhe sirf samne ke mirror me hi uska chehra dikhayi de raha tha

Piche se uski mast phooli huyi gori gand aur mulayam chutad dekh kar sikandar ne phir se sar ooncha kar liya jo abhi theek se baitha bhi nahi tha ruchi didi ke karan

Mirror me se saf saf dikh raha tha ki dikha ankhe band kiye huye apni choot me ungli kar rahi thi lekin dusre hath me bhi uske kuch tha jise vo bar bar kabhi apni chuchiyo me ragadti to kabhi choot me

Diksha apni choot me ungli karte huye dhir dhire kuch badbada bhi rahi thi aur sisiya rahi thi sath me.....uski chuchiya kisi gadraye aam ki tarah lag rahi thi

Uski choot me halki halki jhaante nazar aa rahi thi samne ke shishe me....mai to ye kamuk nazara dekh kar ye bhi bhul gaya ki mai yaha kya karne ke liye aaya tha.... ?

Raj (mann me)—mujhe to aaj pata chala ki diksha itni jawan ho gayi hai.... ?

Sikandar—guru ho ja shuru…….gaad de jhanda aur kar le qila fatah

Raj—nahi re gadbad ho jayegi

Sikandar—to mujhe kaat ke phenk do phir………raat din jabardasti mujhe apne sath yaha se vaha pendulam ki tarah jhulate phirte ho

Mai to but bane uske nagn badan ki khubsurti me hi kho gaya tha ki tabhi diksha palat gayi aur jaise hi usne apni ankhe kholi to……

Vahi Priyadarshini ki nazar jaise hi album ki ek photo par achanak dhoke se chali gayi to us photo ko dekhte hi uske dil ki bechaini aur dil ki dhadkan kayi guna adhik ho gayi

Ye vahi tasveer thi jaisi khud uske paas me thi aur jise swyam mata parvati ne priyadarshini ko diya tha….is samay priyadarshini ke dil me halchal mach gayi

Usne turant hi lapak kar roopa mami ke hath se vo album le liya aur dhadakte dil ke sath us photo ko sahlane lagi uske dil ki bechaini har pal badhti ja rahi thi..vo us tasveer ke bare me puchna chahti thi lekin ek to uska dil joro se dhadak raha tha dusra is samay juban bhi sath nahi de rahi thi

Priyadarshini ke aise achanak album lene se sabhi hairan ho gaye, khud mrinal bi hairan rah gayi usko kuch samajh me nahi aaya ki priyadarshini ne aisa kyo kiya…

Ruchi—kya hua priyadarshini….? Tum achanak se itni bechain kyo ho gayi….?

Mamta—ha beti kya baat hai…..?

Priyadarshini (dhadakte dil se)—ji…ye…tas…..veer……k….i..s..k…i……haiiiiii…….?

Ruchi—ye…ye to raj ki bachpan ki photo hai….uske paida hone ke kuch hi dino baad ki hai….kyo….?

Lekin priyadarshini ne ruchi ki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya….ya sach kaha jaye to ruchi ki baat sunte hi vo kuch bolne ki avastha me hi nahi rah gayi thi
 
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Heera mani apne ahankar ke chalte shikari ke bichhaye gaye jaal me phans gaya tha….shikari usko anya pakshiyo ke sath pinjre me band kar ke apne sath lekar ja hi raha tha ki heera mani ki manushya ki awaz me madad ki pukar sun kar kisi ne shakri ka marg rok diya

Shikari—koun ho tum….aur mera rasta kyo roka hai…samne aao……?

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Shikari—arey koun Yamraj…….main khud Yamraj hu…hahahahaha….himmat hai to samne aao

Tabhi ek yuvak ghode me sawar uske samne aa gaya……jiska chehra dekhte hi shikari apni jagah par khade huye thar thar kampne laga…aur uske pairo me gir kar gid gidane laga

Shikari (gid gidate huye)—mujhe kshama kar dijiye Yuvraj……main apni bhool ki mafi mangta hu

“Tumne ye jante huye bhi ki hamare rajya me jeev hatya karna apradh hai, in bebas pakshiyo ko pakadne ka dussahas kiya, tumhari bhul mafi ke kabil nahi hai, tumne ye sab jaan bujh kar kiya hai’’ Yuvraj ne kaha

Shikari (hath jod kar)—meri jaan bakhsh dijiye…..Yuvraj Ratnesh

Heera mani—ye mafi ke layak nahi hai…ise maar do…isne aaj tak na jane kitne nirdosh janwaro ki hatya ki hai… hame bhi apahij kar diya pankh tod kar

Shikari—mujhe maf kar do…yuvraj…galti ho gayi

Yuvraj (Ratnesh)—theek hai…..mai tumhe maf kar deta hu…..kintu apahij bana kar……sainiko

Tabhi vaha Ratnesh ki baat sun kar bahut se sainik aa gaye…..sab ke hatho me Talwar thi….aate hi unhone jhuk kar pranam kiya

Ratnesh—is shikari ke dono pair kaat kar bandi grah me daal do…..jaise ko taisa…

Sainik us shikari ko pakad ke ghasit le gaye…ro ro ro kar chhod dene ko kahta raha….heera mani ko chhod kar baki pakshiyo ko bhi mahal bhijwa diya

Heera mani—apka bahut bahut dhanyawad Yuvraj…..aapne meri jaan bacha kar mujh par bahut bada upkar kiya hai

Ratnesh—koun ho tum….? Aur itna achche tarike se hamari bhasa kaise bol lete ho….?

Heera mani—mera naam heera mani hai…….bas apne ahankar aur lalach ke karan aaj is halat ko pahuch gaya

Ratnesh—badi achchi bate karte ho……chalo mahal chalte hain….jab tak tumhare naye pankh nahi aa jate tum vaha surakshit rahoge

Heera mani—apke raj me koi billi to nahi hai…yuvraj….karan ki main apne bachav me ud bhi nahi sakta

Ratnesh—billiya to bahut hain lekin ratnesh ke kisi dost par hamla karne ki unki himmat nahi

Heera mani—aapne mujhe dost kaha…..?

Ratnesh—kyo kya tumhe meri dosti manzur nahi……?

Heera mani—aisa na kahe yuvraj…..ye to mera saubhagya hai….aap sach me bahut udar dil ke hain

Heera mani yuvraj ratnesh ke sath Jambu dwip ke ayodhya nagri me aa gaya….heera mani ko yuvraj ke kaksh me hi pinjre me rakha gaya

Ratnesh ne uska bada dhyan rakha….heera mani bhi ratnesh se bahut prabhavit hua…..lekin use ye dekh kar achraj huwa ki vaha mahal me chuha, billi aur baki pakshi sab ek sath bade se pinjre me rahte the aur apas me un sabme achchi khasi mitrata thi…ye dekh kar usne ek din dusre pakshi se pucha

Heera mani—dost yaha tumhe in shikari janwaro ke sath rakha jata hai…jo hamare liye sabse bade dushman hain tumhe unse darr nahi lagta….?

Pakshi—kaisa darr….?, hum sab yuvraj ratnesh ke dost hain isliye ye bhi hamare dost huye…..

Heera mani—wakayi yuvraj bahut achche hain aur kya kya khubiya hain yuvraj me….? Tum kab se yaha ho…?

Pakshi—main to ayodhya me tab se hu jab yuvraj paida bhi nahi huye the….lekin mahal me mujhe yuvraj hi laye hain

Heera mani—mujhe yuvraj ke bare me aur kuch batao….?

Pakshi—yuvraj ratnesh ke jaisa veer, parakrami aaj ki tarikh me is dharti par shayad hi koyi dusra ho….badi se badi sena par vo akele hi bhari hain…

Heera mani—kya yuvraj itne parakrami hain….?

Pakshi—unki veerta ka andaza isse hi lagaya ja sakta hai ki jiske guru swayam bhagwan Ved Vyas aur Parashuram ho unka shishya kaisa hoga…

Heera mani—mujhe yuvraj ke bare me aur janne ki bahut jigyasa ho rahi hai mann me…kripya mujhe shuru se unke bare me batao

Pakshi—theek hai to suno….

Dhanya hai vo rajya, dhanya hai vo janni jisne aise mahaveer ko janam diya…..jab yuvraj ka janam hua tha tab poore rajya me raat me bhi din ke saman prakash phail gaya tha…aisa lag raha tha jaise madhya ratri me hi suryoday ho gaya ho

Ayodhya me khushiya manayi jane lagi….maharaj veerbhadra aur maharani prabhavati behad khush huye yuvraj ke janam se….phir unka naam karan hua

Kulguru—maharaj….apka ye putra bhagwan surya dev ka vardan hai….suryavansh ke liye….ye ek anmol ratan hai…ye ratnaraj hai….isliye hum is balak ka naam Ratnesh rakhte hain….iske mathe par janam se hi surya ka nishan hai to iske surya ke saman tejashvi hone ka sanket de raha hai..iske paida hote hi poore jambu dwip me raat me hi jo adbhut surya ka prakash phail gaya tha vo isi nishan se nikalne wali kirno ka tez tha

Kulguru—ye balak aage chal kar itihas ki dharohar banega….iski bhagya rekha badi vichitra hai….jise hum khud bhi nahi samajh pa rahe hain

Maharani—koyi sankat to nahi hai mere putra par kulguru

Kulguru—aap nishchint rahe….ye har sankat ka samna karne me saksham hoga

Heera mani pakshi ke mukh se Yuvraj Ratnesh ki aisi prashansa sun kar mantra mugdh ho gaya….aage us pakshi ne yuvraj ke vishay me kya bataya use kuch sunayi hi nahi diya kyon ki vo khud hi kisi gahri soch me doob gaya tha

Heera mani (mann me)—Yuvraj Ratnesh har tarah se hamari Rajkumari Padmini ke yogya hain….Padmini ke janak ke samay me bhi aisa hi prakash hua tha….sundarta me dharti lok me koyi uski barabari nahi kar sakta….agar Yuvraj aur Rajkumari ka vivah ho jaye to dono ki jodi khub jamegi ‘’Divya Ratan’’…adbhut jodi hogi dono ki….mujhe koyi na koyi upay karna hi hoga dono ko milane ke liye

Idhar Yuvraj roj ki bhanti shaam ko sena ka avlokan karne ke baad jungle ke raste se mahal lout rahe the ki tabhi uske kano me kisi ladki ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi di

‘’Bachaaooooo……Bachaaooooooo’’
INTERVAL
Dankal—hahahaha…..ab tu to gaya….mere jahar se hi teri mrityu honi likhi hai….hahahaha

Dankal ke daant hath me gadne se mujhe tez dard hua aur main vahi gir gaya….dankal khushi me chhalta raha aur phir mere paas aakar khada ho gaya

Dankal—hahahaha…ab main tujhe khaunga….tu kuch nahi banega….marr gaya….hahahaha

Dankal khushi me jhumte huye kuch der tak mere sharir ke charo taraf chakkar lagata raha….phir apne bade bade daant bahar nikal kar meri gardan me ghusa diye aur tabhi

Dankal—aaaaaaahhhhhhh…..nahi ye nahi ho sakta….tu jinda kaise ho gaya

Hua ye ki jaise hi dankal ne meri gardan me daant gadaye aur mujhe sidha kiya vaise hi uski chhati me jor ki laat padi jiise vo udte huye dur jakar gira

Dankal—tu khada kaise ho gaya…..lekin jyada der tak nahi khada rah payega…..mere katne se tu bhi bhediya ban jayega ab….hahahahaha

Raj—mere bare me jaan leta to achcha hota….Raj naam hai mera…aur Raj Ek Raaz hai…..chandan ke ped me saamp ke kaatne se jahar nahi phail jata murkh

Dankal (shocked)—tu bhediya kyo nahi bana abhi tak…..?

Raj—bewaqoof…tujhse kisne kah diya ki kisi ke kaatne se vidhata ka diya sharir badal jayega….chal ab tera time khatam

Dankal—hahaha…tu mujhe marega…..ek bhediya manav ko…hahahaha…ab dekh meri shakti aur bacha khud ko

Dankal mere upar ek ke baad kayi tarah ke shakti prahar karta raha….lekin uski sabhi shaktiya mujhse takrane hi tez visfot ke sath apna dum tod deti…mai chup chap ek jagah khade hokar mushkurata raha

Dankal (hairan)—ye kaise ho sakta hai……tujhe itni khatarnak se khatarnak shaktiyo se bhi koyi nuksan kyo nahi ho raha hai….? Koun hai tu…lagta hai tu bahut bada mayavi hai…

Raj—maine to tujhe pahle hi kaha tha mere bare me jaan leta to achcha hota....ab meri bari vaar karne ki

Dankal—hahaha….tere paas bhala shaktiya kaha se ayegi…….?

Raj—chhheeee…..tere liye aur shakti…? tere liye to sirf laat hai……aise…

Dankal—aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh……marrrrrrrgayyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaa

Aur phir sab kuch shant ho gaya……maine use niche patak kar use pair se daba diya……mera pair uski chhati phadte huye aar paar nikal gaya…….rah gayi to vaha uski akhiri cheekh

Udhar paridhi ko bar bar vo rakshas pareshan karne me lage huye the….aur paridhi dard se chilla rahi thi…lekin un par koyi asar nahi ho raha tha uske chillane ka

Paridhi (rote huye)—aahhhhh….mujhe chhod…do….jane do…..mujhe

Ek rakshas—hahahahaha…….tujhe chhod denge to hum kaha jayenge…hahahaha….maro isko aur..jab tak ki ye kuch batati nahi

Paridhi (rote huye)—main kitni baar kahu ki main us locket ke bare me kuch nahi janti…..maine nahi dekha vo locket

2ra rakshas—iske sath balatkar karna padega lagta hai ab….tabhi batayegi ye

Paridhi (rote huye)—nahiii….nahiii….aisa mat karo….

3ra rakshas—tum sahi kahte ho.......bahut dino se kisi manav stri ki yoni ka bhog nahi kiya hai.....aaj iski yoni ka bhog karte hain.....hahahahaha.....chalo litao isko niche

Paridhi (jor se rote chillate)—nahiiiii.....nahiiiii...mujhe jane dooooo......bhagwan meri izzat bacha le.....ya izzat lutne se pahle mujhe mout de de....nahiiiiiiiii

Paridhi chillati rahi ...unse chhutne ki koshish karti rahi lekin uska virodh un balshali rakshaso ke aage na ke barabar tha.....do rakshaso ne use niche jabardasti lita diya aur uske hath pair apni shaktiyo se nishkriya kar diye ab vo poori tarah se asahay ho chuki thi....hath pair bhi nahi kaam kar rahe the.....bas ro sakti thi apni kismat par to vahi kar rahi thi

Ek rakshas—chaattttkkkkk...hahahaha...aur royegi....ro..... chatttaaakkkk ...... hihihihihihahahaahhahaha

Paridhi chillati rahi aur vo use thappad marta gaya jab tak ki vo behosh nahi ho gayi...akhir kab tak uski maar jhel pati bechari.....dusra rakshas jaise hi uske hotho ko chumne ke liye jhuka tabhi uske muh par jor se kisi ne laat mari jisse vo jalti huyi aag me gir kar tadapne aur cheekhne laga

1st rakshas—kisne kiya ye...... ? koun hai yaha…..? samne aa jao nahi to bemout mare jaoge.... ? koun hai..... ?

Uske pratiuttar me vaha ek bhayanak awaz goonji jise sunkar sabhi ki ruh tak tharra uthi
Y......A......M......R......A......J

3ra rakshas—kkkkouunnnn Yaamraaaj......samneeee aaaoooo....abhi ....tumhe......cheer phadddd ke hum....khaaa...jayengeee

Sabhi rakshas is bhayanak awaz ko sun kar apne charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekhne lage.....magar vaha to kahi koyi dikhayi nahi de raha tha

Aur phir achanak se pahle rakshas ke aage ek bhayanak chehra aa gaya.....jise dekhte hi vo dus kadam piche kud gaya.......uski darr se buri halat ho gayi


1st rakshas—bachaaaaooooooo......koun ho.tummmmmm…..aisa to…koyi jeev maine…aaj tak nahi dekha.......

Pahle rakshas ki cheekh sunkar sabhi uski taraf bhage lekin yamraj par nazar padte hi unki bhi aage piche dono taraf se gili ho gayi

3ra rakshas—sab ek sath apni apni shaktiyo ka prahar karo is par..abhi .mar jayega....nahi to ye hame maar dega...jaldi karo

Uski baat sun kar sab apni apni shaktiyo se Yamraj ke upar prahar karne lage....lekin koyi bhi shakti uske paas jane se pahle hi aadhe raste se hi vapis lout jati thi

Ye dekh kar sab ke andar aur bhi dahshat bhar gayi.....sab idhar udhar bhagne lage lekin tabhi Yamraj ke sharir se hazaro hath nikal aaye aur vo badhne lage

Sab rakshaso ki halat kharab ho gayi.....bachaaooo....bachaooo....chillate huye vo bhagne ki koshish karne...lekin is afra tafri me ek dusre se hi takra kar gir padte

Yamraj—hahahahahahaha......B..h..a..g...o.........k..a..h..a......t..a..k......... b..h..a..g..o..g..e........hahahahahahahahahaha

Aur phir yamraj ke un hatho ne sab rakshaso ko pakad ke ghasit liya...apni taraf......aur bade bade nakhuno se unko cheerna phadna chalu kar diya......

Har taraf un rakshaso ki cheekhe goonjne lagi......usne kisi ki ankhe nikal li to kisi ka kaleja cheer ke nikal liya to kisi ke dono pairo ko cheer diya...kuch samay me hi vaha sirf un rakshaso ke tukde pade the.....is bhayanak kritya ke baad vaha Yamraj ki hasi ka thahaka goonjne laga

Yamraj—hahahahahahahaha......bujdil.....mujhse bach ke bhagte hain..hahahahaha
‘’Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koyi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak’’

Mai paridhi didi ki talash karte huye vaha tak aa gaya...kayi adrishya shaktiyo ne mera marg rokne ki koshish ki lekin unme itna dum nahi tha ki mera rasta jyada der rok sake

Main jaise hi andar pahucha to vaha har taraf lasho ke dher lage huye the.....vahi niche paridhi didi behosh padi thi.....unki halat dekh kar meri ankhe bhar aayi.....main bhag kar unke paas gaya aur hosh me lane ki koshish karne laga

Raj—didi utho....didi

Lekin jab unhe hosh nahi aaya to maine apna hath unke sar par rakh diya....mere hatho se ek green roshni nikal kar unke andar chali gayi aur agle hi pal unhe hosh aane laga

Paridhi (chillate huye)—nahhhhiiiiiii......mujheee.... chhhoodddddd.... dooooooo

Raj—didi....mai hu...daro mat

Meri awaz sun kar vo chounk gayi....aur apni ankhe khol di......jaise hi unki nazar mere upar gayi to vo jor se chilla kar mere sine se lipat kar rone lagi

Paridhi (chillate huye)—saajannnnnnnnnn.....apni minakshi ko chhod kar tum kaha chale gaye the

Raj (shocked)—minakshi......... ?

Idhar ghar me subah me bathroom ka scene......

Main diksha ko dekhe ja raha tha tabhi vo palat gayi aur apne samne mujhe dekhte hi uski halat kharab ho gayi aur iske sath hi uske hatho me pakdi huyi cheez chhut kar niche gir gayi

Meri nazar jaise hi niche girne wali cheez par gayi to mujhe thoda jhatka sa laga kyon vo cheez aur kuch nahi balki meri hi photo thi jise vo baar baar apni choot par ghis rahi thi

Mujhe jaise hi achanak hosh aaya ki mai is samay kaha hu aur kya kar raha tha abhi to mann me thoda glani hone lagi….glani ka bhav mann me aate hi main vapis jane ke liye palat gaya

Raj—sorry….darwaja band kar liya karo

Main abhi darwaje tak hi pahucha tha ki mujhe piche se diksha ki dhire se bolne ki awaz aayi

Diksha (dhire se)—bhaiya….pls..sorry.......but......Bhaiya……I…Love….You ……very much

Raj (bina mude)—ye bakwas band karo……aur padhayi me dhyan do….tum meri chhoti bahan ho ..aisa socha bhi kaise tumne

Diksha—bhaiya….Mahak bhi to apki chhoti bahan hai…aur vo bhi sagi…..mujhe pata hai …aap hi uske saajan ho…. Agar ek bahan ko aap pyar de sakte ho to dusri ko kyo nahi…..?

Raj—ye koi mazak nahi hai diksha…
‘’Pyar Karna Koi Khel Nahi Hai Bachcho Ka
Isme Tel Nikal Jata Hai Achchhe Achchho Ka’’​
Main bina piche mude tezi se vaha se nikal gaya....aur apne room me akar fresh hua.....nasta karne ke baad main divya ke room me jakar kuch der pyar bhari bate ki….

Raj—aaj ready rahna....tumhe Guru maa se milaunga

Divya—unse milne ko to mai kab se bechain hu

Raj—theek hai aaj raat me chalenge...unse milne

Divya—theek hai....main intazar karungi

Main uske baad veer ke sath ghumne nikal gaya…..sab ko college ke liye ready hone ko bol kar…..iske baad sabhi haal me baith kar meri photo ki album dekhne lage….tabhi mrinal ke sath priyadarshini bhi vaha aa gayi

Album dekhte huye priyadarshini ki nazar ek photo par achanak se chali gayi to usne us photo ke bare me pucha to ruchi didi ne usko bata diya ki vo mere bachpan ki photo hai

Ruchi ki baat sun kar priyadarshini ko apni koi sudh hi nahi rah gayi….prem ki jo tadap uske andar sadiyo se chal rahi thi aaj usi tadap ne use uske saajan ke karib pahucha diya tha

Ruchi—priyadarshini….kya..hua….tum theek to ho na….?

Lekin priyadarshini ne ruchi ki kisi baat ka koi jawab nahi diya….ya sach kaha jaye to vo is samay kuch kahne aur sunne ki avashtha me hi nahi thi

Achanak hi uski kali kajrari ankhe chhalak aayi….uske naino se pani kisi megh varsha ki bhanti barasne laga aur uske kapdo ko bhigote huye niche jamin me girne laga kintu usko in sab ka hosh hi kaha tha

Jaha sab usko aise rote huye dekh kar bahut hairan ho rahe the to vahi priyadarshini apne saajan ke prem me poori tarah se kho chuki thi…uske kano me kisi ke kuch bhi bolne ki awaz nahi ja rahi thi

Ankho me se anshuo ki dhaar lagi huyi thi….ye anshu khushi ke the ya gum ke iska andaza to sirf priyadarshini hi bata sakti thi ya phir divya bin kuch kahe in anshuo ka matlab samajh sakti thi kintu vo apne room me thi

Mamta—beti priyadarshini…kya hua…..kyo ro rahi ho….?

Priyadarshini—(koi jawab nahi)…

Mrinal ne jaise hi piche mud ke dekha ki uski saheli ro rahi hai to turant doud kar uske paas aa gayi aur use hilane dulane lagi lekin koi farak nahi

Mrinal—priyadarshini….kya hua….tum ro kyo rahi ho…..? kisi ne kuch kaha kya….? Bata mujhe ...abhi uski gardan kaat ke yahi phek dungi...bata...meri bahan....kya hua tujhe.... ? dekh tujhe aise rote dekh mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai

Priyadarshini—(koi jawab nahi)

Mrinal (rote huye jor se)—kisne kya kaha hai meri sakhi ko……? Agar use kuch bhi….h..u…a……..to…..main ek ek ki gardan kaat dungi……..priyadarshini bol tujhe kya hua…….?

Payal—ye….tamiz se baat kar….samjhi…..warna mujhse bura koyi nahi hoga……aur kisi ne kuch nahi kaha hai use….aaya samajh me

Haal me shor gul ki awaz sun kar tabhi divya apne room se bahar nikal aayi…..bahar nikalte hi uski nazar sab ke upar se hote huye priyadarshini par gayi to uske pair vahi ruk gaye…..priyadarshini ki ankho se bahte lagatar anshuo ko dekh kar divya ko samajhte der nahi lagi ki ye dil ka mamla hai…kyon ki vo khud na jane kitni hi baar aise mouko se gujar chuki hai

Sabke baar baar hilane dulane ke kafi der baad priyadarshini ko kuch hosh aaya to vo rote huye apne kamre me bhag gayi…..sadiyo se milan ke intazar me thame anshu akhir aaj phoot hi pade….usne saajan ki tasveer ko nikal kar use chumne lagi

Priyadarshini (rote huye)—‘’jiske liye main sadiyo se tadap rahi hu….jisse milne ke liye main na jane kitne hazaro saalo se yaha se vaha bhatak rahi hu…..jiska pata lagane ke liye dar dar ki thokre khati phirti rahi main aaj tak…itne dino se apne usi saajan ke paas rah kar bhi nahi pahchan saki use…..lanat hai mujh par

Mujhe bada guman tha khud par ki ek bar dekhte hi pahchan lungi lekin kya kami rah gayi thi mere pyar me…. Itne paas hokar bhi tadapti rahi jaise pani bina machhli ki tarah...kitna tadpaya aapne saajan mujhko

Lekin akhir maine dhoond hi liya apne saajan ko...maa apko koti koti pranam……aapne mujhe paridhi ke dwara jo rasta dikhaya tha main use samajh hi nahi saki thi’’

Priyadarshini ko aise rote dekh sabhi fikar mand ho gaye the ….uske room me jate hi sab uske paas jane ko huye hi the ki divya ne unhe rok diya

Divya—unhe is samay akela chhod dijiye….kuch samay baad vo bilkul theek ho jayengi…..

Mrinal—nahi…main use akele nahi chhod sakti…..

Priyadarshini rote huye saajan ki tasveer se bate kiye ja rahi thi aur usko chumti ja rahi thi….uske dil ki khushi ka andaza is samay nahi lagaya ja sakta….usi samay mrinal divya ke mana karne ke baad bhi aa gayi aur use rote dekh kar phir se tadap uthi

Mrinal (rote huye)—tujhe achanak kya ho gaya hai…? Kahi sach much yaha in paglo ne tujhe bhi to pagal nahi kar diya..?

Priyadarshini—aaj mai jeet gayi sakhi…….main jeet gayi……haan mai pagal ho gayi hu……aaj mujhe mat roko……aaj mujhe ho jane do pagal….aaj mere saajan me mujhe kho jane do
‘’Main dekhun jis or sakhi ri, saamane mere saanwariya

Prem ne jogan mujh ko banaaya
Tan ko funka, man ko jalaaya
Prem ke dukh men dub gaya dil jaise jal men gaagariya

Duniya kahati mujh ko diwaani
Koi na samajhe prem ki baani
Saajan saajan ratate ratate, ab to ho gayi baanwariya’’​

Tabhi main bhi veer ke sath haweli lout aaya…..sab ko aise pareshan dekh main bhi chintit ho gaya

Raj—kya baat hai maa….aap pareshan kyo ho….?

Ruchi—betu vo baat ye hai ki…..(phir didi ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua hai)

Raj—theek hai…main jakar priyadarshini ko dekhta hu

idhar mrinal usse bar bar puchti rahi ki rone ki vajah kya hai lekin priyadarshini to aaj jaise kisi alag hi dhun me thi tabhi main uske room me enter hua aur tabhi……
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