Thriller DARD

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UPDATE -13​

Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Abb aaagggeee........

Ladki : aaise kaise aapne meri madat ki hai pehele mujhe thik se shukriya to kehene dijiye.
Mai : are iss ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Waise aapka naam.
Ladki: Hello my self samira sinha and you?
( Intro :
Samira Sinha = ye ek indipendent ladki hai.
Iske maa baap abhi 2 saal pehele accident
Me chal base tabse delhi me akele rehti hai
Ek private detective company chalati hai.
Age = 20
Bohot fair colour hai, tikhe nain nash aur
Katilana badan. Simple rehna pasand karti hai


)
Mai : mera naam Reyansh hai.
Samira : agar abhi aap na aate to pta nhi wo log mere sath kya karte....
Aur rone lagi
Mai : par kuch hua to nhi na to ab ye rona band karo.
Maine uske aasoon pochte hue kaha. Thodi der me chup ho gyi phir boli.
Samira : mai aapka ye ehsaan kabhi nhi bhulungi agar mere liye kuch kaam ho to bta dijiye ga. Ye lijiye mera card.
Mai : agar aap sachme meri madad karna chahti ho to koi kaam dilwa dijiye.
Samira : tumhari education kitni hai .
Mai : ji abhi 12th pass out hua hua 97.8% Se.
Samira : waise grades kafi achche hai par abhi se job karne ki kya jarurat pad gyi abhi to tum sirf 18 saal ke ho.
Mai : samira ji pet ki bhi jarurate hoti hai.
Samira : kya ghar wale tumhe rokenge nhi padhai chod kaam karne se.
Mai : ji M.. Mai ANATH hu.
Samira : sorry mujhe pata nhi tha.
Mai : ji koi baat nhi.
Samira : dekho meri ek private detective company hai aur abhi tumhe dene ke liye mere pass sirf bounty hunter ki job hai. Kar paoge.
( bounty hunter : ek aisa aadmi jo paiso ke liye criminals ko pakadta hai)
Mai : ji bilkul chalega mai kar bhi lunga .
Samira : thik hai phir kal iss diye hue address par 9 baje aa jana. Milte hai phir.
Mai : ji zaroor.
Wo jane lagi tabhi wo palat gyi wo boli.
Samira : are mai ek chiz to bhul hi gyi.
Mai : kya.
Phir apne bag se kuch paise nikal kar meri aur badhate hue boli.
Samira : ye lo apni job ka advance.
Mai : ji bohot bohot shukriya.
Samira : kal time se aa jana. Bye
Mai : bye .

Mai bohot kush ho gya job bhi mil gyi aur paise bhi. Phir maine paise dekhe to kuch 15 hazar the. Soch chalo ab ek kamra kiraye pe le hi liya jaye. Maine kayi jagah room dekhi aakhir me ek choti si room select ki kyuki mai akela hi tha upar se saman bhi naa ke barabar tha. Kahir ye raat thik kati baki dino se. Subah taiyaar hoke mai samira ki office ki aor nikal pada. Office ki building kafi badi thi mai gate se andar ja hi rha tha ke guard me mujhe rok diya.
Guard : yee ladke aise kaise andar jaa rha hai.
Mai : mujhe yaha job mili hai usi ke liye aya hu.
Guard : pagal samjha hai kya mujhe kapde dekhe hai apne kisi sadak chaap ki tarah lag rha hai aor keheta hai job mili hai nikal yaha se.
Ye sun mera para chad gaya aor meri aakhen kaali padne lagi isse pehele mai kuch karta waha samira aa gyi .
Samira : (guard se) tumhari himmat kaise hui inse aisi baat karne ki ye yaha ke new employee hai.
Guard : sorry mam wo sir ke kapde dekh ke confuse ho gya tha mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
Samira : aage se aaisa nhi hona chahiye. Reyansh ji chaliye andar office me baat karte hai.
Mai : haa chaliye.
Samira (chokte hue) : y.. Ye ye aakpi aakhon ko kya ho gya.
Jaise hi mujhe samjh aya mai apni aakhen cover kali aur bola.
Mai : wo wo lagta hai aakhon me mitti chali gyi hai. Abhi thodi der me thik ho jayegi.

Meri aakhen thodi der me thik ho gyi. Hum ader office me baithe the.
Mai : waise aaj mujhe ek baat samjh aagyi ki insaan ki pehchan wo kapdo se hoti hai na ki karmo se.
Samira : aisi baat nhi hai reyansh ji aaj kal aaye din yaha gunde aate hai iss liye guard ne aisa bola. Uske behavior ke liye mai hath jod ke aapse maafi mangti hu.
Mai unke hath pakadte hue) are are samira ji aisa mat kijiye. Waise kaam ke bare baat karle.
Samira : to humara kaam ye hai ki hum bhage hue criminals ko pakadte hai, private ki si pe nazar rakhte hai, private aur government dono hi tarah ke case solve karte hai.
Mai : to mere liye kya hukum hai bataiye.
Smira : mai jhut nhi bolungi par maine tumhe paper work ke liye nhi rha hai maine tumhe tumhari physical strength dekh ke rakha hai taki hum criminals ko easily pakd sake.
Mai : thik hai samira ji.
Samira : ye ji waghera formalities mere sath mat karo bas 2 hi saal badi hu tumse.
Mai : ok

Phir lag gye hum paper work me. Hume kal masoori nikalna tha pushkar naam ke criminal ko pakadne . Karib 4pm ko office time khatam hua mai nikalne hi wala tha ki samira ne roka aur kaha.
Samira : chalo tumhare liye kuch shopping ki jaye.
Maai : are iski koi jarurat nhi hai.
Samira : aise kaise tumne meri izzzat bachai hai aur waise bhi kal hum masoori ke liye nikalne wale hai.
Maine bhi jada behes nhi ki aur haa keh diya.

Hum mall pohoch gye samira ne dher sari shirts, t shirts aur jeans li. Maine use samjhaya phir bhi nhi mani. Shirt ki size me problem ho rhi thi iss liye sales girl boli.
Salesgirl : sir aap ise try room me ja ke check kar lijiye.
Mai : ok
Mai jaise hi trail room ki aur gaya to waha sab full the.
Salesgirl : sir aap yahi kar lijiye waise bhi shirt hi try krna hai.
Mai : mm.. Mai aisa nhi kar sakta.
Samira : are isme sharmane wali konsi baat hai karlo yahi hum konsa tumhara rape karengi.
Aur dono hasne lagi maine bhi phir apni shirt utari nayi wali try karne ke liye. Par jaise hi maine shirt utari dono ki to jaise saanse hi atak gyi meri body dekh ke.



Dono mujhe ghur rhi thi. Salesgirl to neche se gili ho gyi thi. Yaha tak ki gents section me moujud har aurat aur ladki mujhe ghur rhi thi.
Mai : aase kya dekh rahi ho samira kabhi ladka nhi dekha kya.
Samira : jaldi se kapde peheno warna sachme tumhara yahi rape ho jayega.

Phir hum mall se nikale samira ne mujhe mere room pe drop kiya aur kal ready rehene ko kaha aur nikal gyi aaise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya.

Aaage dekhte hai kya hota haii.......

zabardast

 

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UPDATE -1

Ye baat aaj se 19 saal pehele ki hai Bangalore me ek aurat city ke sabse bde hospital me dard se chilla rhi thi uski delivery hone wali thi. Raat ke 12 baje ne me sirf 7 min baki the. Bahar us aurat ke ghar wale khade the. Kuch hi samay me us aurat ne thik 12 baje ek sundar se ladke ko janam diya. Nurse bhagti hui operation theater se bahar aai aur boli.

Nurse: mubarak ho raghuveer ji aap ko Beta hua hai.
( ji haa ye aadmi koi aur nhi mere hi Dad hai aur wo aurat meri maa.)
Dad bohot khush ho gye kyuki mai pehela beta jo tha aur unhone jeb se do 2000 ke bundle nikal ke nurse ko dediye aur bole.

Dad: jaao aur pure hospital me mithai batwado logo ko bhi to pta chalna chahiye ki Rajput khandan ka waris aa gya hai.

Nurse wo paise leke nikal gyi aur dad ne ye kahbar dadaji, chacha, aur chachi ko sunayi.
Wo sab bhi bohot khush ho gye aur sab mujhe dekhne andar aagye. Dad ki godh me 1 sal ki janvi didi bethi thi. Dad ne use chachi ki godh me de kar mujhe godh me liya aur dekhne lage meri kali aakho me. Wo thodi der ke liye kho se gye phir mera matha chuma aur bole.

Dad: dekha babuji maine aapko waris de hi diya.
Dada ji : ha, kitna sundar pota hai mera.



Didi ko kuch samaj to aa nhi rha tha par sab ko khush dekh wo bhi khush thi. Chachi kuch khas khush nhi thi kyuki abhi tak unko ladka nhi hua tha. Chacha khush the par chachi ke karan jahir nhi kar paa rhe the.
Kuch der me maa ko bhi hosh aagya aur unhone mujhe dad ke pas se lekar apne baaju me rakh kar dekhne lagi aur boli.

Mom: kitna sundar hai mera beta kisiki nazar na lage.
Dadaji : ha, bahu sach me mera pota bohot sundar hai.
Chacha : aakhir bhatija kiska hai.

Aise hi sab acha chalta rha aur agle din maa aur mujhe ghar laya gya. Kafi saare rishtedaar mujhe dekhne aur badhai dene aaye jise dekh chachi khush nhi thi.
Jab maa mujhe doodh pila rhi thi achanak thodi der me doodh ki kami ke karan doodh ki jagah khoon nikal ne laga aur maa ne mera muh nipple se hta diya jise dekh chachi ko mouka mil gya aur wo boli.

Chachi : are re ghar me aate hi apshagun kra diya manhus ne.
Dadaji : choti bahu khabardar jo mere pote ko kuch kaha to.
Chachi : maaf kar dijiye babuji galti se muh se nikal gya.
Mom : haa choti ye to mere kamjori ke karan ho tha hai.

Chahi tab to chup ho gyi par unki man me kadwahat bad gyi.

Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

NICE UPDATE Itz Anjum

 

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UPDATE - 15 ​

(MEGA UPDATE)

Hum baithe hi the ke tabhi waha kuch logo ka group enter hua unme wo gangster pushkar bhi tha.

Aabbb aaagggeee......

Humne jaise hi pushkar ko dekha waise ki chaukkanna ho gye. Samira ne mujhe ishare se darwaje ko lock karne ko kaha. Maine waisa hi kiya phir samira aage jaane lagi par maine use roka aur bola.
Mai : mai handle karta hu tum gadi ready rakho.
Samira : tum kar to loge na.
Mai : hmmmm

Ye bol mai waha chala gya jaha pushkar dance kar rha tha. Mai usse easily power ki madad se padak sakta tha par mai apni power use nhi karna chahta tha. Kyuki abhi tak mai use control nhi kar paya tha jo bhi tha mere andar bohot powerful tha aur use control karna lag bhag na munkin tha.

Mai pushkar ke piche ja ker jeb se gun nikali aur chupke se uski kamar pe tika di aur dhire se uske kaan me bola.
Mai : agar jara sa bhi chillaya ya hoshiyari dikhayi to isi ghode se teri maa chod dunga.

Pushkar bhi samajh gaya ki baat ab uske paksh se bahar hai iss liye chup rehene me hi usne apni bhalayi samjhi. Mai use leke phir darwaje tak gaya jaha samira khadi thi.
Samira ne pushkar ko dekha aur muskurayi aur mere taraf dekh ke boli.
Samira : good job. Ab ise bahar car me le chalo.
Mai ne bhi waisa hi kiya. Humne use bandh ke dikki me dala aur nikal gye wapas delhi ke liye. Phir hum delhi pahuche aur Pushkar ko police ke hawale kiya. Aur apne bounty hunting ke paise liye aur nikal liye waha se.
Samira : Reyansh tumhe pata hai tum sab chize badi jaldi seekh jate ho.
Mai : (smile)☺
Samira : tum chaho to mere sath shift ho skte ho waise bhi mai akele hi rahti hu.
Mai : nhi mai aise hi thik hu.
Samira : oh come on now we are friends.
Mai : thanks but nope.
Samira : as you wish.
(3rd person's perspective)
Aise hi 1 saal 5 mahine bit gye reyansh ki bounty hunting chalti rahi usne pehele ho ek open college me admission le liya tha to bas exam dene jata tha. Inhi bich samira aur reyansh kafi close ho gye par dono ne abhi tak ek dusre se kuch kaha nhi tha.

Mr. Raghuveer ke yaha

Raghuveer ne apni puri takat jhounk di par abhi tak reyansh ko dhundh nhi paya tha.
Swara ka apne bhai ke liye pyaar ab bhai behen se kafi aaage nikal gaya tha ab uska pyaar junoon me badal gaya tha ab reyansh se juda hoke wo pagalsi ho gyi thi wo reyansh ko iss kadar chahne lagi thi ke agar use reyansh na mila to wo apni jaan dede. Wahi janvi ki mano dasha bhi kuch thik nhi thi wo har wakt apne aap ko reyansh ka gunhegaar manti thi bas ab wo reyansh ka intezaar kar rhi thi ki kab reyansh aaye aur wo use pairo me gir ke maafi mange par shayad bhagwan abhi use ye bhi nasib nhi hone dena chahta tha. Wahi Mrs Shikha ko bhi pachtawa ho rha tha par unhe umid thi ki reyansh sab kuch bhula ke unhe maaf kar dega. Mrs. Kamya (chachi ) ki toh lafi bade maze aur aisho aram me kat rahi thi unhe na koi pachtawa tha na koi dukh. Mr. Yash (chacha) kafi dukhi rehte the par unhe afsos tha ke unhone samay rehte awaj kyo nhi uthayi yahi baat unhe sataati thi. Divya (chacha ki beti) ko koi matlab nhi tha wo to bas party aur friends me busy rehti thi use reyansh ke jane se bas ek hi baat ka gum tha wo ye tha ke uske ghar se ek naukar kam ho gya. Avni ne to Reyansh ko apne man mandir me basa liya tha balki wo to abhi se khud ko reyansh ki suhagan samajhti thi Reyansh ke liye sare warat karti thi use bas reyansh ke aane ke deri thi taki wo use apna bana sake aur apna sara pyaar uspe luta de.

Saima to reyansh ke jane ke baad khaamosh se ho gyi thi wo apne bete ki judayi sehen nhi kar pa rhi thi. Uske liye to reyansh use sage bete se bhi jada tha akhir usne reyansh ko apni chati se jo doodh pilaya tha. Wo din bhar bas bhagwan se ye dua karti ke reyansh uake paas lout aaye.

Khair aab chalte hai Reyansh ke paas.
Aaj reyansh jaldi utha tha aur taiyaar hoke office nikal gaya. Waha jaldi pohoch gaya tha abhi koyi nhi aya tha waha. Wo apne cabin me baith gaya abhi use baith kuch der hi hui thi ke samira uske cabin me aa gyi.
Samira : good morning sweetie
Mai : good morning samira lagta hai aaj kafi ache mood me ho koi khaas baat
Smira : khaas baat to hai .guess what ?
Mai : aaj tumhara birthday hai.
Samira : nope
Mai : to phir.
Samira : aaj mai apne lover ko propose karne karne wali hu.

Ye baat sunke to mujhe aisa laga jaise meri aatma mera saharir chod kar ja rha hai. Mai apne emotions ko kaabo hai sari himmat juta ke kaha.

Mai : congrats. K...kon hai wo khushnasib.
Samira : hai mera koi chahne wala.
Mai dard bhari smile)

Mai apne khayalo me khoya hua tha tabhi samira apne ghutno pe baith gyi aur mujhe hosh me late hue boli.
Samira : I love youuu.. Mr Reyansh
Yes reyansh you are the love of my life.
Will you accept me.

Mai chekhte hue) off course yes mai ye sunne ke liye tadap gaya tha samira.
Maine bhi ye uske sath ghutno pe baith te hue kaha.
Samira : mai bhi reyansh isi waqt ka inte jaar kar rhi thi.
itna bol wo seedhe Reyansh pe toot padti hai aur ek hi jhatke me uske honth apne hontho me bhar leti hai. 'Mmmmmmmmmmmmm'
Dono passionate kiss me doobe hue the.
Samira ne apni jeebh reyansh ke muh me dal di usne bhi koi virodh nhi kiya. Dono ek dusre ko chum chaat rhe the dono ka muh thuk se san gaya tha . dono to ek dusre ka thook pi rhe the 5 min baad jab wo alag hue to dono ke beech ek thook ka tar ban gaya tha. Dono
Apni saase kaaboo me kar rhe the phir ek doosre ki aakhon me dekhne lage aur phir kiss start kar di. Phir thodi der baad reyansh use apne aap alag kar bolta.
Mai : hai control karo ye office hai koi bhi aa skta hai .
Samira : ji mister lover.
Mai : hehehehe..

(Reyansh ke view se)
Aise hi waqt bit rha tha par mai aur samira physical nhi hue the mai chahta tha ki hum shadi tak ruke. Mai second year complete kar chuka tha. Mai apni takat ko lagbhag kaaboo kar chuka tha meri powers kafi bad chuki thi mujhe goli nhi lagti thi, mai andhere ko kaaboo kar skta tha, ab mai bohot jada handsome dikhne laga tha ke har mahine kam se kam 15-20 proposal aate the, mera jism to jaise faulad ban gaya tha, par powers ke side effects bhi the mujhe gussa jaldi ata tha aur gusse me mai to kisi ki jaan bhi le sakta tha halaki abhi tak aaisa kabhi hua nhi tha . Sab sahi chal raha tha par meri kismat ko shayad ye hazam nhi hua phir aa gya wo din jis din maine apna astitwa hi kho diya.
Aaj mai aur samira date par jaa rahe the mai use pick karne use uske ghar gaya mai abhi darwaje tak pohochke darwaja khat khata rha tha par koi response nhi aya to maine darwaje ko push kiya to wo khul gaya.
Mai : kitni careless ho gyi hai dawaja bhi khula chod rakha hai agar meri jagah koyi chor aa jata to. Abhi class leta hu iski jake.

Mai bina awaj kiye samira ke room ki aur chal diya abhi mai waha pohcha hi tha ke mujhe siskne ki awaj aane lagi par ye rone wala siskna nhi tha par mera dil ye maan ne ko taiyaar nhi tha maine darwaja halka khola aur jo andar dekha use dekhne ke baad man kiya ki abhi aatmahatya kar loon.
Andar samira sirf bra aur panty mera kisi ke godh me baithke use kiss kar rahi thi.


Ye dekh mera dil hazar baar toota par uski awaz kisi ko sunayi nhi di. Aur mai hazar moute mar chuka tha meri aakhon me aasoon jama ho gye the par mai apne dadaji ki kasam ke karan use baha bhi nhi sakta tha. Andar wo dono baate kar rhe the jo mai sun sakta tha.


Samira : chodo bhi mujhe jana bhi hai wo ata hi hoga.
Aadmi : kon wo reyansh.
Samira : haa wahi aur kon.

Aadmi : mujhe samajh nhi ata aakhir tum use chod kyu nhi deti pyaar to tum use waise bhi nhi karti agar karti to mujhse naa Woh Karti

Samira : paisa darling paisa jabse wo aya hai tabse itna profit ho rha hai. Mai use yaha se jane nhi dena chahti thi is liye pyaar ka natak kiya


Ab mujhse aur nhi saha ja rha tha meri aakhen poori kaaali ho chuki thi chehre pe haivaniyat cha chuki thi mai darwaja dhakka de kar pura khol diya jaise hi samira ki najar maujh par aur meri aakhon pe padi wo sehem uthi kyuki itne samay me maine use apni takat ke bare me bata diya tha. Mai aage badh rha tha.
Samira : wo.. wo R.. Reyansh jo tum samajh rahe ho aisa kuch nhi hai. M...meri baat to suno.
Mai jake ke us aadmi ke saamne khada ho gya.
Aadmi : abe londe sidhe sidhe bahar nikal ja aur maine choda teri mehbuba ko ja jo karna hai kar le.
Mai bina koyi reaction diye speed me uski gardan pakad ke hawa me utha diya. Samira ye dekh ghabra gyi.
Samira : use chod do reyansh wo mar jayega.
Aadmi : bhai mujhe chod do mai kabhi bhi yaha nhi aaunga .chaho to badle me meri biwi chod lo par chod do.
Maine bina samira aur us aadmi ki baat sune us aadmi ki gardan dhire se dabayi jisse uska sar use jism se juda ho gya. Maine uske sar ko side me phek diya. Aur samira ki taraf dekha jo dar ke mare kamp rahi thi aur bola.
Mai : (sard lehje me) kyu ?
Samira : m.. Mujhe maaf kardo mai jism ki aag me behek gyi thi.

Maine apne gusse ko kabu kar apni aakhen normal ki aur samira ki taraf dekh ke kaha.
Mai : kya kami reh gyi thi mere pyaar me agar itni hi aag lagi thi to keh kar to dekhti.
Samira : mujhe maaf kardo .mai tumse sach me pyaar karti hu.
Mai : hahahahaha..payaar thu hai tum par ab to sach bol do. You know what you are just a bloody whore . Ye hamari aakhri mulakat hai.
Samira : (rote bilakhte hue) aisa mat kaho reyansh bas ek baar mujhe maaf kardo.
Mai : Suna hai ek sachche aashik ka dil kabhi nhi dukhate uski bad dua kabhi khali nhi jati to aaj mai tumhe dil se bad dua deta hu tum kabhi kush nhi reh paaogi , har pal tadpogi par tumhe kabhi pyaar nasib nhi hoga.
Samira : nhi reyansh mat jao maaf kardo mujhe.
Mai : agar mera pyaar sachcha tha na to aisa hi hoga tum jindagi bhar tarsogi pyaar ke liye.

Mai : aur is lash ki fikr mat karo.
Itna bol maine apna hath aage kiya aur us aadmi ka sharir aur sar kale dhue me badal ke ud gya ab mujhse waha ruka nhi gaya. Mai bas samira ko itna bola
Mai : (dard bharihasi ke sath) "ISHQ" mubarakh meri bewafa mehbuba .

Aur itna bol waha se nikal gaya .mai wapas ja rha tha ke raste me ek dargah per ruk gaya aur andar jake anpa sar niche tika ke roni si awaj me.
" mere DARD ki nhi dawa maula madad kar tera aasra to kisi se na lage darr"
Mai : pta hai aaj mera aap pe se vishwas uth gaya hai. Maine har dharm ki mana, har bhagwan ke dar pe sar tikaya par mujhe kya mila har baar dhoka fareb. Maine to kabhi kuch jada nhi manga tha aapse bachpan me chahta tha ki bas maa baap ka thoda sa pyaar mil jaye par nhi mila. Baad me chaha ki dadaji ji ka sath mahesha rahe aapne unhe bhi cheen liya. Ab to jeene ki aakhri umeed bhi aapne mujhse cheen li, mai marna chahta hu par aap marne bhi nhi dete .koi hathiyar asar nhi karta kitni bar jan dene ki koshish ki par har bar kuch nhi hota... Kyu.. Kyu kar rahe ho mere sath aisa.
1 ghante baad mai dargah se bahar aya aur maine faisla kiya ki ab yaha nhi rahunga. Mai gadi leke ghar gaya zaroori saman pack kiya aur flight book karne laga par pata nhi tha ki kaha jau. Phir maine socha ab waise bhi mere paas ab apna kehene wala koi raha nhi ab khood ko majboot banaunga. Phir maine decided kiya ki mai Russia jaunga kyuki waha ki special forces ko di jane wali training duniya ki sabse tough training kahalai jati thi aur log kwhete the ye training lene ke baad aadmi ke emotions khatam ho jate hai iss liye maine Russia ko chuna. Flight book karne ke baad mai bahar jungle ki aur nikal gaya shanti ki talash me kyuki meri flight kal ki thi. Mai ek sunaaan park me jake ke ek bench pe biath gaya aur us bewafa ke bare me sochne laga jiae mai pyaar karta tha.

Tabhi dimaag me awaj gunji
Awaj : aagya swaad bhala banke.
Mai : bolo kyaa kehena chahte ho
Awaj : yahi ki ye pyaar hum jaiso ke liye nhi hai.
Mai : tum aur mai alag alag hai.
Awaj : hum alag nhi hai hum ek hai. Mai bas tumhari fikar karta hu kyuki kisine tumhe tut te hue nhi dekha maine dekha hai tumhara dard mehsus kiya hai. Logo dhutkar dekhi hai, kaise wo hume zalil karte the. Iss liye kehta hu ye duniya tumhe kha jayegi aur agar jina hai to kudh ko us kabil banao ki puri duniya ko jhuka sako.
Mai : tum thik kehte ho. Ab badalne ka waqt aa gya hai.
(chillate hue) abbb badalne kaa waqt aa gyaa haiiii...
Tabhi meri aakhen kali ho gyi aur pith me dard uthne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte meri pith mese pankh nikal aaye.



Mera koi reaction nhi tha iss baat par maine wapas kudko normal karne laga phir pankh gayab kiye aur wapas ghar nikal pada apna saman uthaya aur hotel nikal pada kyuki mujhe pata tha samira wapas mafi mangne aaegi aur mai ab mai use apne samne bardasht nhi kar skta tha iss liye nikal gaya hotel aur apne naye safar ki aur.......

Aab aaaggee dekhte hai kya hota hai.

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UPDATE - 2


Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

Ab aage..

2 din baad pandit ji ko naam karan ke liye bulaya gya. Us din hamare ghar ko dulhan ki tarah rajaya gya tha. Achcha hamara ghar banglore se thoda bahar sabse shant aur posh area me hai. hamare ghar ko ghar kahana galat hoga kyuki ye to pura bangla tha. 3 floor ka tha niche hall, kitchen, aur dining room tha. Uper mummy papa , chachi chachi aur didi ka kamra tha uske bagal me dadaji ka kamra tha. Baaki kamre band the jab koi rishtedaar ata to unke liye khulwa diya jata.




Chalo ab story pe ate hai..

To pandit ji bhi aagye phir puja shuru hui phir wo bole.
Pandit: Mata Pita apne bacche ke sath puja me bethe.
Mom dad puja me baith gye mom ki god me mai soya tha phir jaisa jaisa pandit bolta gya waise waise mom dad karte gye. Jab pandit me hawan me aahuti dene ko kaha, jaise hi papa ne aahuti di achanak aag ki lapte bhadak gyi. Jise dekh pandit ji chouk gye aur bole.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua ye kisi anishth ka sanket hai.
Dad: aree panditji aap kuch jada hi soch rahe hai.
Dad ne iss chiz ko nazar andaz kiya kyuki wo insab chizo vishwas nhi rakhte the par maa ke chehre pe pareshani ki lakire zaroor thi par unhone kuch zahir nhi kiya itne logo ke samne Aakhir mere gharwalo ke rutube ka sawal tha jise wo log kisi bhi insan se upar rakhte the chahe wo mai hi kyu na hu. To puja phir khatam hui phir pandit ji ne mujhe god me liya aur dekhne lage tab meri aakhe bad thi par jaise hi pandit ne mere hath ko chua mai aakhen khol use dekhne lga unhe aashcharya hua par badme mujhe maa ki god me dekar wo kundali banane lage. Wo jaise jaise kundali bana rhe the waise waise unki aakhen badi hoti ja rhi thi aur maathe per chinta ki lakire badh rhi thi. Kuch der bad wo maa se bole.

Pandit : putri balak ka janm sthan aur samay batao.
Mom: pandit ji mere bete ka janm isi sheher ke sabse bde hospital me raat ke thik 12 baje hua hai.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua bachche ka jamn subh samay ke viprit samay par hua hai. Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mom ne bas itna suna aur pandit ko paise dekar bahar nikal diya. Unke hisab se agar ye baat kisiko pta chalti to unka naam kharab ho jata.
Dad ne is baat ko itna serious nhi liya. Unke liye itna hi kafi tha ki unhone ek waris de diya baki unko mujhe se zaada matlab nhi tha wo business ko hi apna sab kuch mante the.
Par dadaji mujh par jaan chidakte the tab us samay maa ko bhi mujh se lagav tha par meri janm kundali wali baat unhe kahi na kahi khatakti thi.

Khair 2 saal aaise hi nikal gaye. Is beech choti moti baate kahe ya durghatna hoti rahi jo sab nazar andaz kar dete par chachi hamesha mujhe manhus kah kar sab mere uper dal deti. ab mai 2 sal ka tha aur janvi didi 3 saal ki thi hum sath khelte par mere aajane se unhe pyaar thoda kam milta toh wo mujh par gussa utar diya karti ( ab aap bachcho ko to jante hi hai kaise hote hai) mom phir se pregnant thi. Kuch hi din me hamare ghar meri pyari princess Swara aayi mere bachpan ka khilona bankar. Mai khud to bachcha tha par iska khayal mai khud rakhne ki koshish karta. Ab papa bhi ghar aur hum par dhayan dene lage the. Chachi ka ravayaiya abhi bhi vaisa hi tha. Dada ji bhi khush the bhara pura pariwar dekh kar.

Aise hi kuch mahine bit gaye. Mai to apni princess me hi magan rehta. Didi ko bhi ab maa papa ka pyaar barabar mil rha tha phir bhi hamari zyada nhi banti this.

Aaj sunday tha dad bhi aaj ghar pe the. Sab kahana kha rahe the tabhi dad ka pgone baja.

Dad: hello
Samne se : ....................
Dad : kya baat kar rhe ho.
Samne se : ....................
Dad: aisa nhi ho skta.
Samne se : ....................
Dad : nhiii.........
Isi le sath dad ne phone diwar par phek mara aur sar pakad kar baith gye. Jisse dekh kar mom, chacha aur dadaji ghabra gye. Mom ne phucha.

Mom: kya hua aap aise kyu sar pakad rkha hai. ?
Dad : sab barbad ho gya.
Mom: kya hua hai bataiye.
Dad : jewelry ke showroom me aag lag gyi hai.
(dadaji, mom, chacha, chachi ek sath): kya?
Mom ne dad ko paani diya aur boli.
Mom: shaant ho jaiye. Sab thik ho jaiga.
(Itne me chachi bhi bol uthi wo kaha piche rehne wali thi. )
Chachi : Ab khuch this nhi hoga sab iss manhus ki wajah se hua hai.
Dadaji : (gusse me) bahu apni zuban sambhal kar.
Chachi : aaj nhi babuji ab paani sar se upar nikal chuka hai.
Dad: aaj pehli baar mujhe kamya ki baat sach lag rhi hai jab se aya hai nuksaan ho rga hai.
Mom: aaj to mujhe bhi iss baat par yakin jo gya ki ye manhus hai.

Ye bolkar mom ne mere pass se meri princess Swara ko utha liye aur use room me le gyi. mai rone laga par kisine dhyaan nhi diya.
Dadaji mhuje gle laga kar mera sar sehlane lage aur bole.
Dadaji : koi kuch bhi bole par mujhe pta hai ki mera pota mahus nhi hai balki ek acha aur sachcha bachcha hai.
Dadaji mujhe god me liye aise hi selhlate rhe jab tak mai so nhi gya. Aur mujhe bed per lita diya.



Aaage dekhte hai kya hota hai........

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UPDATE-3

Dadaji mujhe god me liye aise hi selhlate rhe jab tak mai so nhi gya. Aur mujhe bed per lita diya.

an aageee........

Jab mai utha mujhe meri princess ke pass jana tha par jaise hi mai Mom ke room me princess ke sath khelne ke liya bda mom ne mujhe phiche jhatak diya aur boli.
Mom: dur hat manhus meri beti se. Apne baap ka business to kha hi gya hai ab meri choti beti ko to chod de.

Mujhe kuch samaj to nhi aya par mom ke dhakka dene ki wajah se mai gir gya to mujhe rona aa gya aur mai uth kar papa ke pass jane laga par jaise hi papa ki godh me chadha papa ne bhi mujhe dur hata diya aur bole.
Dad: dur reh mujhse manhus pehele hi mujhe barbad kar chuka hai.

Mujhe ab kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha mai bas roye jaa rha tha. Dadaji ne bhi ye baat sunli. Wo jaldi se mere paas aaye aur godh me utha liya aur dad se bole.
Dadaji: pagal ho gya hai kya, ek chota sa bachcha ue sab kaise kar sakta hai.
Dad: babuji aap bich mat boliye. Aap jante bhi hai kitna nuksan hua hai??
Dadaji: kitna bhi hua ho par mere liye kuch mere pote se jada to nhi hai .
Dad : poore 630 karod ka nuksaan hua hai.
Dadaji : beta paise wapas bhi kamaye jaa sakye hai par rishte nhi.
Dad : kaisa rishta?? Aajse mera air iska koi rishta nhi hai.

Itna bole dad waha se chale gye. Dadaji mujhe leke apne kamre me aagye. Par koi ye sab hote hue dekh rha tha. ye koi aur nhi kamya chachi thi , aaj wo bohot jada khush tji aakhir unki man ki muraad jo puri ho rhi thi.

Khair 2-3 ghante to dadaji ke sath nikal gye par baad me mujhe bhuk lagne lagi ( mai 2 saal ka tha par abhi tak meri maa ka dodh pine ki aadat nhi chuti thi) to mai rone laga dadaji ko samajne me der nhi lagi ki mujhe bhuk lagi hai to dadaji mujhe mom ke paas le gye aur bole.

Dadaji : Bahu lo reyansh ko bhuk lagi hai ise doodh pila do.
Mom ne saaf mana karte hue kaha.
Mom: maaf karna babuji par mai iss manhus ko dudh nhi pila sakti.
Dadaji : bahu ye kaisi baate kar rhi ho. Kya maa hote hue bhi tumhe apne bachche ki bookh nhi dikhai deti??
Mom : aaisa mahus mera beta ho hi nhi sakta.

Ye keh kar maa swara ko godh me liye janvi ka hath pakad kar room se bahar nikal jati hai aur chod jati hai piche ek bhook se tadapta apna bachcha . Aaj dadaji aasoo bhate hue khud ko bohot bebas mehsoos kat rhe the ye soch kar ki wo apne pote ki bookh tak shaant na kar sake.

Tabhi mera rona sun waha saima ( hamare ghar me kaam karne wali maid) waha aa gyi
Aur mujhe bookh me rota dekh uska dil pasijh gya aur wo boli.

Saima : bade sahab agar aap ijazat de to mai chote baba ko doodh pila du.
( saima ki bhi 1 saal ki bachi hai isi liye use bhi doodh ata tha)
Uski baat sun dadaji sochne lage kyuki wo ek nichi jaat ki aurat thi aur ham rajput par mere bhook ki tadap ke aage wo haar gye aur saima ke godh meujhe dene ke baad hath jod ke bole.

Dadaji : danya ho tum beti mai tumhara ye karz jindagi bhar nhi chuka paaunga.
Saima : aap mujhe beti bhi kehete hai karz ki baate karte hai.

Dadji ab chup ho gye aur saima mujhe kamre me le jake doodh pilane lagi.
( aaj saima maa ne mujhe doodh pila kar meri zindagi khareed li thi. Isliye mai unhe saima maa kehta tha)
Doodh pila ne ke baad saima ne mujhe dadaji ke paas dediya.

Aaise hi din nikalye gye. Jab bhi mai maa ya papa ke paas unka naam apni tutlati jubaan se lete hue jata to wo mujhe dat dete, dhakka de dete ya kabhi kbhi to maar bhi dete. Ye sab wo dadaji ke phiche karte the kyuki wo unke saamne karne ki himmat nhi rakhte the. Chachi ko to waise bhi mujhse koi khaas lagav nhi tha to unhe insab se koi farak nhi pda. Chacha ko mere liye dukh hota par wo dad aur chachi ke laran kuch bol nhi pate par akele me thoda bohot pyaar kar liya karte. Janvi didi ko farak nhi pda kyuki ab maa hi unhe mujh se door rahane ke liye kahati.

Chachi bhi pregnant thi khuch hi din me hamare yaha ek aur gudiya aa gyi divya. Chachi to mujhe divya ke ass pass bhi bhatakne deti thi.

Aab to dadaji aur saima maa hi meri zindagi ban gye the . Aise hi din bitne lage.
Ek din mai dadaji ke laye hue khilono se khel rha tha tabhi janvi didi aa gyi aur mere khilone todne lagi to mai rone laga . Mere rone ki awaj sun kar maa aur chachi aa gyi. Par maa ne meri taraf dekha bhi nahi aur didi ko puchne lagi.

Mom : kya hua meri rani beti ko kahi iss manhus ne kuch kiya toh nhi.
Janvi didi : ( jhut bolte hue) haa maa isne mujhe dhakka de diya.
Mai : nhi maa maine kuch nhi kiya.
( totli juban me)
Chaataakkkk....
Jaise hiaine ye bola maa ne mujhe thappad mar diya aur boli.
Mom: himmat kaise hui mujhe maa kehne ki. Teri aukat ek kutte ki bhi nhi hai aur teri himmat kaise hui meri beti ko dhakka dene ki.
Chachi : bhabhi ye lato ka bhut hai aise nhi manega.
Isi ke sath
Chaataakk. ...chaataakkk..... Chataaakkkk.
7-8 thappad mare. Mai bas rota ja rha tha mere muh se shabd nhi nikal rhe the. Aree bolna to dur mujhe meri galti bhi samaj nhi aa rhi thi. Mere gaal tamatar ki tarah laal ho gye the kyuki mera rang bohot gora tha. Chachi ye sab dekh ke muskura rhi thi aur janvi bhi khush thi. Tabhi waha saima maa aa gyi aur boli.
Saima maa : mem sab chod dijiye bachcha hai galti ho gyi.
Maa : tu yaha ki naukar hai to aukat me reh. Ye sunke saima maa chup ho gyi.
Achanak pta nhi kaha se dadaji bich me aa gye aur mujhe maa se dur kar apne godh me le liya. Aur maa chachi par bhadak gye.
Dadaji : himmat kaise hui tum doni ki mere pote ko hath lagane ki. Dur ho jao tum dono meri nazaron se.

Maa, chachi aur janvi didi dadaji ki dahad se dar kar ghar ke andar chale gye. Aaj mujhe itna "DARD" ho rha tha ki mai baya nhi kar sakta tha kyuki ye thappad sidha mere dil par lage the. aaj mere chehere pe ki masoomiyat kahi gum ho gyi thi aur uski jagah darr ne leliya tha. Darr ek maa ki mamta na milne ka darr, ek baap ka pyaar na milne ka darr, akele pad jane ka darr.

Aise hi samay bitta gya ab janvi didi school jane lagi thi. Maa ki maar chalti rehti thi unhe maa pukarne pe aur chachi aur janvi mujhe paresha karti rehti par dadaji ke piche. Mai ye sab dadaji ko nhi batata tha kyuki mai nhi chahta tha ki mere karan dadaji ke rishte kisise kharab ho.



Dekhte hai aage kya hota haii.........

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UPDATE-4


Aise hi samay bitta gya ab janvi didi school jane lagi thi. Maa ki maar chalti rehti thi unhe maa pukarne pe aur chachi aur janvi mujhe paresha karti rehti par dadaji ke piche. Mai ye sab dadaji ko nhi batata tha kyuki mai nhi chahta tha ki mere karan dadaji ke rishte kisise kharab ho.

Abb aggeeee.......

Aise hi din bite, mahine bite aur saal bita. Mujhe jada kuch to samaj ta nhi tha par maar ke karan maa ke pass jane se darta tha isiliye mai jadatar dadaji ke kamre me rehta tha taki kisi ke samne na jana pade aur bina wajah dhulayi na ho jaye. Jab mai maa aur papa ko janvi didi aur swara ko pyaar karte Dekh ta to mera bhi mann hota ki wo mujhe bhi pyaar aur dulhaar dihaye par aisa nhi hota .ab saima hi mere liya maa thi aur dadaji bhi bohot pyaar karte the.

Abb mai 3 saal ka ho chuka tha, abb bari aayi mere school jane ki to papa ne saaf keh diya ki unke pass kisi aur ke liye koi paise nahi hai. Dadaji pass bhi jada paise nhi the aur na hi unke naam pe jamin jayejad thi siway ek khet ke. Jaise taise unhone mera admission janvi didi ke school me karaya kyuki unka manna tha ki abb mai sirf achche se padhne likhne ke baad hi apni jindagi sudhaar sakta hu . Admission to unhone karra di par ab sawal tha ki mai jaunga kaise kyuki school harare ghar se karib 5 km dur thi to saima maa ne kuch paise de kar mujhe bus lagwa di.

Kal mere school ka pehla din tha mai bohot jada khush tha. Mai soo gaya, agli subah muhje dadaji ne uthaya. Mai jaldi se taiyar hone gaya par jab mai uniform pahenne laga tab mujhe tie bandhna nhi aa rha tha to mai dadaji ke pass jane laga tabhi janvi didi dikhi to maine socha inhi se pooch loo .

Mai : didi kya aap mujhe bataingi ki tei kaise bandhte hai? (totli awaj me)
Jaise hi didi ne mujhe uniform me dekha usne mummy ko awaj lagayi.
Janvi didi : mummmyyy.... Mummmyyyt..
Mom: kya hua beta? Kyu chilla rhi hai?
Janvi didi : Mom kya ye kutta bhi mere school me jaega?
Mom : haa beta pta nhi kyu tumhare dadaji iss manhus per paisa kharch kar rhe hai.
(Janvi phir meri taraf gusse se dekhte hue)
Janvi didi: sun kutte tu mere school to aa rha hai per mujhe didi mat kehena nahi baat krna.
Mai : par didi mai to aapka chota bhai hu na.
Janvi didi : tu aur mera bhai teri aukat to ek kutte ki bhi nhi hai.
(didi ne bhi aaj whi kaha jo aksar mummy ya chachi mujhe kehti thi)
Meri aakhen bhar aayi thi mai roote hue dadaji ke kamre me bhaga.
Dadaji ne mujhe roote dekh pucha.
Dadaji : kya hua beta kyu roo rha hai.
Phir maine dadaji ko sab roote hue bta dia. Dadaji ko bhi kaafi bura laga par mujhe sambhalne ke liye wo bole.
Dadaji : beta aukat paidaishi nhi milti use banana padta hai. Isi liye maine tumhara naam bade school me dala taki tum padh likh kar bade aadmi bano.
Mai : bada aadmi kyu dadaji? ( utsukta se)
Dadaji : beta kyuki bade aadmi ke bhut dhan sampatti hoti hai aur uske saamne sab jhukte aur uska samman karte hai.

Mai bas unhe chup chap dekh rha tha. Dadaji phir bole.
Dadaji : beta meri ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna " Is duniya mei aadmi se jada kimat paiso ki hai ".

Dadaji ki ye baat mere zehen me ghar kar gyi aur maine kaise bhi bas bada admi banne ki thani.
Khair dadaji ne phir mujhe tie bandhna sikhaya phir mai bus me baithkar school ke liye nikal gya. Kuch der me Bus school pahuch gyi, Jab mai bus se utra aur school ke gate tak pahucha tabhi mere dad ki car aayi aur usme se janvi didi utri. Mai unhe dekhte hi unki baat yaad aa gyi to mai jaldi se apni class me bhag gya jab mai class me pahucha to mujhe sirf ek jagah khali dhikhi to mai waha baith gya. Mere sath ek ladka baitha tha par mujhe usse baat karne jhijhak ho rhi thi. Mai soch hi rha tha tabhi wo bola.

Ladka : hello mera naam amit hai? Tumhara naam kya hai.
Mai : hii, mera naam Reyansh hai.
Amit: kya tum mujhse doati karoge.
Mai : haa bilkul aaj se hum dost. ( totli awaj)
Amit : are ye kya tum to tutlate ho.
Mai : haa bachpan se mai aise hi bolta hu.
Amit : koi baat nhi tum dhire dhire sahi bolna sikh jaoge.
Phir teacher aagye phir padhai shuru ho gyi. Mai mann laga kar padh rha tha kyuki ab mujhe bada aadmi banna tha. Phir aise hi school khatam ho gya mai ghar wapas aa gya. Aaj mai bohot khush tha kyuki aaj maine ek dost banaya tha jiske sath mai baat kar skta tha khel sakta tha.

Aaise hi samay nikalne laga. Iss beech meri aur amit ki dosti badhti gyi .mai ab 6th class me tha aur janvi 7th me. Janvi jada baat nhi karti thi. Aur abb meri princess swara aur chachi ki beti divya bhi badi ho gyi thi wo bhi hamate sath school jati thi. Maa mujhe swara se dur rakhti thi, kabhi kabhi maa se chup ke uske sath baat kar liya karta tha. Chachi to bachpan se divya ko sikha rahi hai ki mai manhus hu mujhse dur rhe to wo to mujhse waise bhi dur rehti thi.
( aap to jante hi hai ki bachcho ki soch bachpan me kaisi hoti hai jaisa akar use do waisa wo banjati hai.)
Chacha ko mujhse bohot humdardi thi par wo papa aur chachi ke saamne kuch nhi kar sakte the. Maa to jaise bhul hi gyi thi ki unka koi beta bhi hai jise maa ki mamta ki jaroorat hai , par unki nazar me haisiyat ek kutte se bhi kam thi Yaha tak ki wo mujhe kisise beta kehkar bhi nhi milwati thi jise pata na ho ki mai kon hu. Jab koi ghar ata aur puchta ki mai kon hu to wo bolti ki " ye hamare ghar kaam karne wali naukrani ka beta hai " ye unke dil me DARD to hota tha par ye kafi had tak sach bhi tha kyuki unhone mujhe sirf janam diya tha par saima maa ne mujhe apna doodh pilaya tha jab maa ne pilane se mana kar diya tha aur unhone mujhe pal pos kar bada kiya.

Khair ab samay badal gya tha ab mai 4th me tha to mere padhai ka kharcha badh gya tha to dadaji ne bus band karwa di thi ab mai school paidal jaya karta tha. Kabhi kabhi school pohochne me late ho jata to teacher dat deti thi par teacher ko bhi pta tha ki mai paidal ata hu to jada kuch nhi bolti thi.

Jab kabhi bhi parents teacher meeting hoti to sab ke parents aate par mere sath sirf dadji aate ye dekh mujhe dukh hota kyuki janvi didi aur swara ke sath mom dad aate the par mere sath nhi. Maa baap ke pyaar ki kami ke karan kabhi kabhi dukh hota to mai akele me baith kar ro liya karta tha.

Jaise taise din kat rhe the phir ek din mai school se wapas aya tab dadaji kahi bahar gye the. Mai saima maa ke pass jakar baith gaya aur unse baat karne laga.
Mai : maa aaj school me mujhe amit ne laddo khilaya. Sach me bohot hi achchi tha. Aaj maine pehli baar khaya.
Saima : beta ek din aisa aayega mai tujhe dher sare laddo khilaungi..
( ye kehte hue saima rone lagi. Wo soch rhi thi kaise maa baap hai itne masoom aur pyaare bachche ko maa baap hote hue bhi anath ki jindagi jine ke liye majboor kar diya hai.)
Mai : maa aap roo kyu rhi hai.
Saima : kuch nhi beta meri aankh me kuch chala gya tha. Tu yaha baith mai tere liye khana lekar aati hu.
(ek baat batana chahunga maa ko lagta tha mai manhus hu isliye unhone mera khana apni rasoyi me banwane se mana kar diya tha. Is wajah se saima maa mere liye apne ghar se khana bana kar lati thi.)
Saimaa maa khana le aayi phir mai kahana khane laga.
Mai : maa apke hath ki daal bohot achi lagti hai mujhe.
Saima maa : beta har roj ek hi dal kahata hai aur roj yehi kehta hai aisa kyu?
Mai: kyuki aap isme dher sara pyaar dalti ho.
Unhone mujhe apane sine se laga liya.
( wo man me boli : dhanya ho gyi mai aisa beta mujhe mila hai. Ek garib ke ghar ki dal roti kha kar bhi roj kehta hai ki "isse tasty kuch bhi nhi ho sakta". )
Aise hi khana khatam ho gya phir mai bhar khelne chala gya. Shaam ko jab wapas aya to dekha dadaji abhi bhi nhi aaye the. Mai jaise hi apne room me jaane laga dad gate se andar aaate dikhe.kafi gusse me dikh rhe the. Wo mummy ke room me gye.
Mummy : kya hua bohot pareshan dikh rahe hai?
Dad: meri important deal cancel ho gyi.
Mummy : kyaa?
Dad : haa , mujhe pakka yakeen hai ye us manhus ke karan hua hai.
Chachi bahar khadi ye baat sun rhi thi . Tabhi aag me ghi dalne ke liye wo boli.
Cahchi : haa bhai sahab mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki ye zarur usi ke karan hua hai.
Dad: hai kaha wo manhus aaj koi use mujhse nhi bacha skata.
Dad bahar aaaye aur mujhe doodhne lage.


Aage dekhte hai kya hota haiiii.. ....

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UPDATE - 5

Dad: hai kaha wo manhus aaj koi use mujhse nhi bacha skata.
Dad bahar aaaye aur mujhe doodhne lage.

Abb agggeee.........

Mai bhi apne room me hi jaa rha tha tabhi dad ki nazar mujh par padi . dad mera naam chillate hue meri aur doude.

Dad: Reyanshh...
Mai dad ki jordar awaj sun kar darr gaya. Dad mere pass pohoche aur
Chaataakkkk..
Mai dar gya aur pucha
Mai : kkkya hhua dad.? (haklate hue)
Dad : mat le mera naam apni gandi zubaan se. Aaj teri manhusiyat ki wajah se meri ek important deal cancel ho gyi.

Aur phir isi ke sath
Chaataakkk.. Chatakkk....
3-4 thappad pad gye mujhe. Phir bhi dad ka gussa kam nahi hua toh belt nikal kar shuru ho gye. Wo bas bina ruke maare jaa rhe the. Meri aakhon se bass aasoon nikal rahe the. Maa, chachi, janvi waha khade the par koi kuch nhi bol rha tha. Meri bhi bass aassoon aur chikhe nikal rhi thi.
(Dadaji ghar par nhi the tab)
Mai : aahhhh... Nhhhiii... Papa... Maine. Kkkuch nhii kiyyaa.. Dadajiii..
Tabhi waha saima maa aagyi wo dad aur mere beech me aake boli
Saima maa : sahab ruk jaaiye bachcha hai
Kuch ho jayega.
Dad : naukar hai to apni aukat yaad rakh aur nikal yaha se nhi to tujhe bhi aaj hi naukri se nikal dunga.
Saima maa bichari majbur hokar waha se nikal gyi kyuki gareeb thi uska pura pariwar uske bharose tha kyuki uska pati iss duniya me rha nhi.
Dad tab tak mujhe belt sw marte rhe jabtak unka gussa thanda nhi ho gya. Mai tab tak behosh ho chuka tha. Mera pura sharir dukh rha tha har taraf se chamdi udhad chuki thi usme see khoon aa rha thaa.
Gussa thanda hone ke baad Dad, mom, chachi bina meri taraf dekhe apne room me chle gye . Unko jata dekh saima maa meri taraf aai jaise hi unki nazar meri taraf gyi unhone tezzi ke saath rona shuru kar diya.
Unhone bhaag kar mera sar apni godh me rakha aur badbadane lagi.
Saima maa : kitne nirdayi log hai mere bachche ki mar mar kar kya halat kar di. Bahgwaan kare inhe narak me bhi jagah na mile.
Phir saima maa mujhe uthake jaise taise mere room me le gyi aur mujhe bed pe ulta lita diya aur mere loya malham lene bazar chali gyi. Par koi aur bhi tha jo ye sab hote hue dekh rha tha aur roo rha tha ye aur koi nhi balki Swara thi.

Saima maa ke jaane ke baad wo chupke se kamre me aa gyi. Aur jaise hi usne mere kandhe pe hath rha mere dard ke mare chikh nikal gyi.
Mai : aaahhhhh.. Nhii... Mai ne kuch nhi kiya
Mai bad badane laga. Meri aisi halat dekh Swara ka dil roo rha tha aur apne maa baap se ghinn aa rhi thi. Wo boli
Swara : bhaiyaa apko ab koi nhi marega mai hu naa.
Swara ki awaj sun maine uss ki taraf dekha meri aakhon se aasoon nikalne lage mai bolna chah rha tha par dard ke karan meri awaj bhi nhi nikal rahi thi.usne mere aasoon ponche aur boli.
Swara : bohot dard ho rha hai kya bhaiyaa.
Mummy papa sach me bohot gande hai unhone aap ko mara. Tabhi saimaa maa aa gyi aur swara ko dekh kar boli.
Saima maa : beta aapko yaha nhi ana chahiye nhi to apko malkin daatengi aur naa hi phir reyansh ke liye achcha hoga.
Wo jana nhi chahti thi par mere bare me sunn kar chali gyi kyuki wo apne maa baap ka bartav mere sath dekh chuki thi.
Saimaa maa ne phir malham lagana shuru kiya jissee meri chikkhe nikal ne lagi par roo saima maa rhi thi. Bada hi ajeeb rishta tha unka aur mera jab sab ne aur apno ne thukra diya toh unhone apnaya aur aaj zakhm mere hai aur " DARD " unhe ho rha tha.

Unhone to har zakhm par dawa laga di par aaj zakhm sirf jism par nhi hue the aaj dad ne mere rooh par zakham kiye hai. Unhone aaj unhone meri masoomiyat ko maar dala tha.
Aaj meri jine ki ichcha hi khatam si ho gyi thi , aaj mai bas mar jana chahta tha, mai chahta tha ki ab bass hameshake liye geheri neend me chala jau. Saima maa bhi mujhe dekh kar samaj chuki thi ki ye zakhm aage chal kar nasur hone wale hai.

Dadaji bhi thodi der me aa gye saima maa ne unke jaane ke baad jo kuch hua wo sara haal keh sunaya. Phir jo dadaji dhadte hue dad ke room me pahuche aur phir karib 1 ghante tak dad aur dadaji ki behes aur jhagda hua. Phir dadji mujhe dekhne chale aaye. Mujhe dekhte hi unki aakhon me assoon aagye.
(mai tab soo rha tha)
Dadaji : maaf karde mujhe mere bachche mai kuch kar na saka, aaj mujhe khud se ghinn aa rhi hai ki maine ek aisi aulad paida ki hai jise ek masoom bachche asoon nhi dikhte, uska dard nhi dikhta.
Dadaji waise hi baith ke bohot der tak rote rhe .
Us din ke maar ke baad mai 3 din tak room se bahar nhi nikla tha.
Samay apni raftar se chalne laga. Swara ko bhi mere liye kaafi bura lagta aur uska lagav mere prati badhta hi jaa rha tha. Mujhse baat karne ke liye wo mom ki maar bhi kha leti.
School me bhi kuch ladko ko pta chal gya tha ki janvi mujhse nafrat karti hai iss liye usse impress karne ke liye wo mujhe tang kiya karte par janvi ko farak nhi padta wo muh pher kar chali jati.
Aaise hi samay bit raha tha abb mujhe dadaji , saima maa aur swara ko chod kar kisi se koi matlab nhi reh gya tha kyuki divya toh waise bhi baat nhi karti thi wo sach me mujhe naukar ki aulad samajti thi. Par mere dil me aaj bhi un sab ke liye soft corner tha. Par samay ke sath dadaji ki tabiyat unka sath chod rhi thi Ab wo jadatar bimar hi rehte the . Mera samay bhi nikal jata tha school , dadaji ki sewa phir khana pina aur sona . Aise mai 10th me pahuch gaya tha.

Phir wo din bhi aa gya jab dadaji mujhe iss narak me akela chod kar chale gaye. Mai school se wapas aa rha tabhi maine dekha ghar me logo ki bhid lagi hui thi mai adar gaya aur dekha dada ji ko safed chadar oudhaye litaya gya tha . Mai ye dekhte hi zinda laash ki tarah gir gya aur behosh ho gya. Saima maa ne mujhe sambhala aur hosh me laya. Hosh me aate hi mai dadaji ki taraf dauda aur unse lipat kar rone laga aur badbada rha tha.
Mai : ye kya ho gya dadaji, aap mujhe akele yaha kyu chod kar chale gye, ab mai kiske sahare jiyunga.
Tabhi mujhe papa ne ghasit kar dadaji se alag kiya aur bole.
Dad : aaj tu mere baap ko bhi khaa gya aur jhute aasoon baha rha hai dur hat jaa mere babuji ke pass se.
Saima maa ye sun kar mujhe waha se alag kiya par mai to jaise laash hi ban gaya tha na mujhe kuch sunayi de raha tha nahi kuch dikhayi se rha tha.
Wo mujhe jaise taise waha se le gyi. Mujhe dadaji ki arthi tak ko hath nhi lagane diya gya us din dad ke liye man se bad dua nikli thi. Aise hi dadaji ka antim sanskar bhi ho gya. Mai to bas dadaji ki kursi ke pass niche baitha rehta, mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi tha.

Aage dkhte hai kya hota hai... .......

Nice update bro keep it up

 

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UPDATE - 6

Aise hi dadaji ka antim sanskar bhi ho gya. Mai to bas dadaji ki kursi ke pass niche baitha rehta, mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi tha.

Aabb aaggeeee............

Saimaa maijhe aisi halat me dekh nhi paa rhi thi tabhi use yaad yada ji dadaji ne use ek letter diya tha aur kaha tha ki mere marne ke baad Reyansh ko de dena. Wo jaldi se dadaji ke room me gayi aur wo letter nikal kar mere pass kar mujhe diya aur boli.
Saima maa : Reyansh mere bachche aise rote nahi agar tum aise hi asoon bahaoge to upar tumhare dadaji ki atama ko taklif hogi.
Mai : mai kya karoo maa mujhe unki bohot yaad aati hai .
Saima maa : par kya aise roone se aur yaad karne se wo wapas aa jayenge?
Mai : kaash aisa hota toh mai jindagi bhar ke liye inn asoon aur "DARD" ko kabul kar leta.
Saimaa maa : aise nhi bolte beta chal asoon poch aur ye le tere dadaji kaha tha ki mai tujhe ye tab du jab wo iss duniya me na rahe aur kaha tha ki use ye akele padhne ko kehena.

Mai ye sunte hi assoon ponche aur wo letter leliya. Aur bhaag kar apne room me chala gaya. Aur room ka darwaja lock kar diya aur dadaji ki chair ke pass baith gaya aur wo letter khola.

IN LETTER
(ab mai dadaji ki taraf se bolunga)

Mera pyare pote Reyansh agar tum ye letter padh rahe ho to mai iss duniya mai nhi raha hounga. Mujhe andaza tha meri halat ka, pta tha ki ab kuch hi din ka mehman hu . Mujhe mout ka dar nhi hai mujhe dar hai ki mere jane ke bad tera kya hoga kyuki mujhe pta hai bakiyo se tere rishte sirf naam ke hai ek sirf saima hai jo tujhe samajti hai par wo bakiyo ke bich kuch bol nhi sakti isliye mai chahta hu ki ab tu khud ko badal le kyuki
" Anyay karna jitna bada paap hai usse bada paap Anyay sehna hai " .tujhe meri kasam ki aaj ke baad royega nhi. Janta hu tu bachcha hai aur mai tujhe ladakpan me Mard bana rha hu par ye zaruri hai kyuki ye duniya achche logo ko chain se jine nhi deti. Mai tujhe kuch na de saka iska afsoos mujhe marne ke baad bhi rahega par ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna ki tu ek Rajput hai aur Rajput kabhi nhi harte.
Aakir me bas ek baat kahunga ki agar tu mera pota hai to tu ek din inn sabko jinhone tujhe thukraya hai unhe aisa karara jawab dega ki wo marte dum tak yaad rakhenge.

(Letter end)

Aaj akhri baar mai roya tha, jee bhar ke roya tha par uske bad kabhi apne aasun chalak ne nhi diye.

Dadaji ke jane ke baad ab akele saima maa ke liye school ka karch uthana mushkil ho rha tha to maine ek coffee shop me part time job shuru kar di. School ka kharcha bhi nikal jata aur kuch paise bacha kar gym bhi ahuru kar di thi abb school me jab bhi koi mujhe pareshan karta to mai bhi uske pura dum laga kar marta isske karan abb wo log bhi mujhse dur rehte pta nhi kaise janvi didi ko pta chal gya ki mai coffee shop pe kam karta hu wo ek din janvi didi chachi ki beti Divya ko lekar waha pohoch gyi.

Janvi didi : waiter.. Waiter

Mai waha order lene poch gaya. Jaise hi maine janvi didi aur divya ko waha dekha mai samaj gya ye yaha meri bejjati karne aayi hai.

Divya : ek garib order likh.. Ek Cappuccino Aur ek latte.
Janvi didi : aur ha ye ganda table poch.
Mai bina kuch bole chala gya aur wapas aake order serve kiya. Phir mai dusre order lene chala gya. Wo cooffe pee chuke the phir mai bill leke waha gya. Unhone paise diye , mai bache hue paise wapas de hi rha tha ki wo bole.
Janvi : are waiter keep the change.
Divya : haa waise bhi hamare yaha garibo me dan karte rehte hain infact humne to wk garib ghar me bhi pal rakha hai.
Mai : janvi didi aur divya itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako.
Mai uski baat samajh gya. Mujhse waha aur ruka nhi gaya iss liya mai chala gya. Mere dimaag me bus ek hi baat chal rhi thi ki " haa mai garib hu, par kya garib insan nhi hote ya unhe kuch mehsus nhi hota" . Ye sab richa bhi dekh rahi thi
(richa mere sath kaam coffee shop me kaam karti thi wo mujhe se 5 saal badi thi)
Wo mere paas aayi aur pucha.
Richa : kon thi ye Reyansh ? tumhe itna jalil kyu kar rahi thi aur tum sun kyu rahe the.
Mai : kya karu richa kisamat ke hatho majbur hu garib jo thehra agar kuch use bol deta toh wo owner ko bolti aur wo mujhe yaha se nikal deta?
Richa : par thi kaun wo?
Mai : wo ladki wo hai jiske ghar mai rehta hu.
Richa : matlab tumhari family .
Mai : mujhe jaise garib ki kahe ki family.
Richa : oye tu koi garib nhi hai tu to sabse aamir hai kyuki tera dil bada hai tu dil ka sabse amir hai samjha.
Mai: haa samajh gaya par aab kaam karo agar us budhhe ne dekh liya to nikal dega kaam se.

Abb life todha track par chal rhi thi agale mahine meri 10th ki board exam thi to sirf padai aur kaam hi shuru tha. Padhai me mai amit ki madat kar diya karta tha aakhir wo mera pehla aur aakhri dost tha kyuki school me janvi didi ne ye baat faila di thi ki mai manhus hu iss liye koi mujh se dosti nhi karta par amit ko iss baat se koi farak nhi pada.
Aise hi ek mahina nikal gaya. Maine board ke exam de diye aur result ka wait kar rha tha. Mujhe result ki tension nahi thi kyuki mai shuru se topper tha har subject me.
Ek din mai amit ke ghar gya tha hum baat kar rhe the.
Amit : aur ladke kaha maje kar raha hai aaj kal.
Mai : behenchod yaha kaam se fursat nhi milti aur tu maje ki baat kar rha hai.
Amit : bhai gussa kyu kar rha hai mai to aise hi puch liya.
Mai : bhai tujhe sab pata to hai mere baare me phir bhi maje aur kush rehene ki baat karta hai baar baar.
Amit : maaf karde yaar mai tera dil nhi dukhana chahta tha..
Mai : chal chod iss baat ko sale baat baat par senti kar deta hai . Chal abb mai bhi ghar jaa rha hu shaam ho gyo hai. Bye
Amit : bye.
Mai ghar aa rha tha. Tabhi mujhe ek khambe ke paas se dabi hui chikh sunayi di maine waha jakar dekha to jo ladke mujhe school me tang karte the unhone janvi didi ko pakad rakha tha muh band karke. Mai bhagte hue waha pohocha aur bina soche jis ladke ne janvi didi ko pakda tha us ke lund pe mukka de mara wo sidha chillate hue niche baith gaya aur janvi didi aake kaske mere sine se lag gyi. Wo 3 ladke the ek to gaya tha kaam se abb yani bache do. Unme se ek bola.
1 : reyansh chod de ise kyu bacha rha hai ye to tujhe waise bhi jalil karne me koi kasar nhi chodti.
Mai : abe oo randi ki aulad wo jaisi bhi hai meri behan hai.
Ye bol ke maine didi ko apne piche kiya aur pass me padi eet utha ke dhar diya uske sar pe dusra ye dekh ke dar gya aur undono ko wahi chod kar bhag gya. Phir mai didi se bas itna bola aur chal pada

Mai : chalo ab ghar.
Wo bhi piche piche sar jhuka kar aa rahi thi aab unke dimag me bas mere wo shabd ghum rahe the " itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako" aur unki aakhon se asoon ane lage. Phir hum ghar pohochne wale the to mai bola.
Mai : waise ye hua kaise.
Janvi : wo main apni friend ke yaha gyi thi aur gadi kharab ho gyi to driver ise thik karne laga to mai chalte hue aane lagi par jaise hi mai pole ke pass se gujri un ldko ne pakad liya par isse aage wo kuch karte tum waha pohoch aye aur aage tumhe pta hi hai..
Ye bolke wo chup ho gyi aur aasoo bahane lagi par ab inn asoon ka mol mujhe nhi rha tha. Phir mai bola.
Mai : thik hai par ab apna huliya sudharo aur ghar me ye baat mat batana.
Janvi didi : thik hai.

Unhone apna huliya sudhara aur hum ghar gye. Mai thodi der baad gya agar unke saath jata to ghar me bakheda khada ho jata.
Mai apne room me gya aur fresh ho kar niche baith gya kyuki mere room me koi bed ya sofa nhi tha ab mai baitha hi tha ki meri princess Swara dodte hue aai aur meri godh me baith gayi. ( tab swara aur divya 8 th me thi aur janvi 11th me) aur mere gal chumte hue boli.
Swara: bhaiya aaj kal meri yaad nhi aati kya aap mujhse baat hi nhi karte.
Ye bol ke usne muh fulla liya.
Mai : are meri princess naraj hai apbe bhaiya se. Par meri bhi to majburi thi kyuki meri exam chal rahi thi aur uake baad ghar me mummy bhi to rehti thi.
Swara : bhaiya aap tension bohot lete ho agar mummy kuch bolti to mai unhe keh deti ki mai aapse baat karne aai thi.
Mai : aur maar khati.
Swara : haa apke liye ye bhi sahi par mai apko maar khate nhi dekh sakti. Dekhna jab mai badi ho jaungi na tab aap ko iss ghar se bhaga le jaungi.

Mujhe uski baat pe khushi bhi ho rahi thi ki ye mujh se kitna pyaar karti hai aur haasi bhi aa rahi thi ki aapne bhai ko bhaga le jaegi.
Mujhe hasta dekh usne pucha.
Swara : bhai hass kyu rahe ho?
Mai : kyuki tu apne bhai ko bhaga le jana chahti hai... Ha... Hahaha..
Swara : to kya hua app mere ho aur aap pe sabse jada hak mera hai samjhe.
Ye bol usne mere gaal ko chumke bhaag gyi aur mai sar khujlata rha.

Wahi Janvi didi ke kamre me wo bed me sar dabaye roo rhi thi aur soch rahi thi.
Janvi didi ( man mai) : mai kitni galat thi ki mai use manhus samajhti thi wo toh itna achcha hai mai use jalil karne ke liye kya kya nhi kiya yha tak ke use pitwaya bhi phir bhi usne meri ijjat bachali. Mai usse kal maffi mang lungi apne har galti ke liye chahe mujhe uski maffi ke liye kuch bhi karna pade.

Ye soch te hue uske aakhon ke saamne wo sab chal raha tha jo usne mere sath kiya aur meri wo baat uski dimag me gunj rahi thi ki
"itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako".
Wahi chachi ke room me kuch baat chal rhi thi.
Chachi : bhabhi bhaisahab kabtak us manhus ko iss ghar pe paloge ab to bauji bhi nhi rahe.
Maummy : par kya kare agar use ghar se nikal diya to samaj hamipe thukega.
Chachi : mai to kehti hue zeher de kar maar do uss mahus ko..
Mummy : nhi nhi mai kisi ki jaan nhi le sakti bhale hi mai use pyaar nhi karti par hai to wo mera beta hi.
Papa : mujhe lagta hai ki Kamya ( chachi) thik keh rahi hai agar hamne use zeher de kar maar diya to bahar ye keh sakte hai ki saanp ke katne se mar gya.
Chacha : chii.. Kitni nich sooch hai aap logo ki ek bachche ko marna chahte hai mai isme kabhi aap ka sath nhi doonga.
Papa : soch samajh ke bol chote. Agar sath nhi dena chachta to chup chap reh.
Pgir waha ye tey ho gaya ki kal mujhe zahar de kar mar diya jaaye.
Bahar darwaje par khada mai ye sab sun raha tha ( actually mai bahar jaa rha tha par dad ke room se apne naam ki awaj aati dekh mere kaan khade ho gye aur mai sunne laga)
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..


Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.........

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