for beautiful review, ab tak jo bhi aapki bhutni ke lie raaye rahi hai, aur jo bhi aapne ahmad ke lie socha wo shayab is update ko padh kar badal jaye, stay tunedUpdate 6
Sirf Jurm karne wala hi gunehgaar nahi hota balki uske sath dene wala ya ye jaante huye bhi ki samne wale ne jurm kiya hai, phir bhi usko bachane koshish karne wala bhi gunehgaar hai....
Yaha is kahani mein Ahmad dwara kiye gaye us galti aur us gunah ke baare mein jaante huye bhi shayan ne uski madad kar raha tha, ... isliye wo dono aatma ya ruh ahmad ke sath sath shayan ko bhi had se zyada daraya car se ghar aate waqt. ..Maybe dono ko ushi jagah mein le gayi thi jaha accident hua tha, ..... khaufzyada karne mein koi kami nahi chhodi . ..
waise Ahmad aur shayan karna kya chaahtein the ghar aakar ... yahin naa ki kaise bhi karke video footage nikal le un do aatamo ki CCTV ke jariye...
lekin ye to sarasar bewakoofi huyi na...kya bhoot ko camre mein kaid kar sakte hai kya...
aur ye kya powder polithin failaa diya floor pe, kya Ahmad aur shayan ye soch raha tha ki wo dono aatma chal ke aayenge unke paas
stupidity ki bhi had hoti hai yaar...
waise bhootni bhi kamal ki hai... chaadar sahit Ahmad ko nahi ghaseeta balki chaadar uske badan se haataake usko ek per pakad ke ghaseet te huye le gayi..
btw lagta us bhootni Ahmad ke per se kuch zyada hi lagav hai.. jab dekho pakad kar ghaseetne lag jaati hai
wo to sukar hai shayan ne samay rehte ushe bacha liya.. Lekin bhootni baar baar kyun chhod deti hai Ahmad ko.... Mana ki shayan help ke liye Ahmad ke sath tha.. Par isse to us aatma ko koi fark nahi padta.. are wo ch aahe to dono hi ushi waqt maar sakti hai... To phir wajah kya hai..
shayad aasan maut nahi dena chahti ho... aur abhi jo kuch ho raha hai ushe dekh ke to yahin lage ki..tadpa tadpa ke maarna chaahti hai Ahmad ko...
Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
bro, hope you enjoyedBHAI
Amazing story bhai maza a gya
Ek point aur hai mai sonch raha hun wo ye ki agar maan lo wo ruk jata aur bachane ki kosish karta to wo log jaruri nai bach jate aur gar bach jate apahij ho jate to fir uske baad case banta alag se matlab bahut problem honi thi okay upar se family sath thi..ab point ye hai ye dono bhutni inko na unna raat me sadak par khir hogi koi majburi unki lekin ab jab mar gaye to jinna hain unko to jine do aisa nai hai ki meko unse sahanbhuti nai hai lekin unka Jo hona wo ho gaya ab Jo jinna hai unko bachana haiBahot hi acchi surwat hue hai kahani ki...aur horror ka pura tadka lagaya hai aapne...mujhe personally horror padh kar maza aata hai...aur aapki story sach mai kaafi aachi hai.
First update se agar predict karu toh lagta hai ki ye ek crime aur Vengeance par based story hai.
Ab agar story ke plot ke baare mai baat karu toh ... wo old saying hai na
"Life mai acche ho ya burre ho har karm ka bhugtaan yahi karna hota hai"
Ahmad background se kaafi rich hai and uski kaafi respect hai society mein par usski life 360 degree ka trun tab leti hai jab by mistake vo do logo ko apni gaadi se udda deta hai.
Aur phire shayad uss respect ke dar se ya kisi aur baat ke karan un dono ko ignore kar waha se chala jata hai aur yaha uske iss faisle ne do maasoom logo ki jaan le li...
Ab gunaah kiya hai to saza mileni hi thi...
Jo mile kar raheygi bhale hi sasha ko pata nahi chala par ye boj usko jeene nahin dega.
Aur dusri taraf wo aurat aur wo bachhi laut aayi hai badla lene ... now let see kya hota hai
At the last yahi kahunga ki....
Update kaafi aacha tha aur writing skill bhi shaandaar hai warna har koe horror ko acche se likh nahi pata par aapne likha jo ye show karta hai ki aap ki writing skills ka level kya hai.
Kaafi ques. hai jo time ke saath dur honge now see what happens next in this story.