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[HAKIM]

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[Naina]

dil halaq me aana matlab kuch bol na pana,
meri proble hai ke mujhe urdu aur pashto ke alawa kuch nahi aata, haan hindi ke kuch common words aate hain to urdu hi likhni parti hai

Baat urdu hindi pashto ki nahi ho rahi hai balki baat ho rahi hai....ki agar uska dil seene se nikal kar halak mein jaake atak gaya tha to..... seene ki us khali jagah mein kounsa sarir ka ang aake fit hua... Liver, gurda ya stomach

 

[Naina]

dil dheh sa gya tha ,

Aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.... iska dil hai jumping ball, kabhi uchal ke halak mein chala jata hai to Kabhi niche dheh jata hai
Ye Bhootni ushe darane aayi hai ya uske dil ke sath khilwaad karne...
Rahul Badshah Khan Destiny
Ye to sochne wali baat hai,,,, nahi

 

[Naina]

Update 3

ek ke baad ek ghatanaayen ghat ti jaa rahi hai Ahmad ke sath... kya din aur kya raat... wo bhootni barabar uski band bajati jaa rahi hai...
Ab jaisi karni, waisi bharni....
waise washroom mein usne jisko gale lagaya tha wo sasha thi hi nahi balki wo to bhootni thi...
Saza dene anokha style.... Pehle Ahmad ki naak se behta khoon saaf kiya, phir pyar jatane ke bahane se uske naak pe naakhun chubho di, jisse aur zyada khoon bahne laga aur dard..wo to beintahaa
bahar aake jab pata chala ki gale lagne wali uski biwi thi hi nahi to uska chitti pitti hi gul ho gaya...

Waise hosh aane ke baad shayan ko saari baatein bata di...
shayan bhi pareshan ho gaya tha...
lekin usne ek idea lagaya ... agar Ahmad CCTV lage room mein soye to un logo ko pata chal jayega ki akhir ye sab kar kaun raha ya rahi hai...
Lekin shayan bhool gaya hai ki wo dono ruh hai.. bhala cctv camera mein un dono ki video footage kaha se capture hogi...
haan itna jarur ho sakta hai ki Ahmad ko hawa mein hi ghasitne wale scene dikh sakta hai..
Well ye shayan ushe waha pe kyun le jaa raha hai.... kya us aurat aur us bachhi ki khoj kabhar leke un dono ke ghar jaane wala hai,
Shayad ab jaake pata chale ki us aurat aur us bachi ka naam kya tha..
Waise shayan bhi thodi bahot nazar hai Ahmad dwara kiye us gunah se... Wo bhi yahi keh raha tha ki aise accident ke baad yun bich raaste mein marne ke liye chhod ke aana bahot badi galti thi Ahmad ki...

khair... ek baat to tay hai... wo dono hi ruh Ahmad ke sath abhi khel rahi hai... jaise billi apne shikaar ke sath khelti hai... Lekin ant mein maut hona to tay hai... Wo bhi dardnaak tarike se..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Destiny]

Aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.... iska dil hai jumping ball, kabhi uchal ke halak mein chala jata hai to Kabhi niche dheh jata hai
Ye Bhootni ushe darane aayi hai ya uske dil ke sath khilwaad karne...
Rahul Badshah Khan Destiny
Ye to sochne wali baat hai,,,, nahi

Bilkul socne wali bat hai

 

[Badshah Khan]

Update 1
First of all congrats for new story HAKIM
Shuruat hi ek bhayanak hadse se huwi ahmad jo ki apni choti se family ke sath zindagi guzar raha hai uske sath achanak aise raat ko hadse hone ki wajah kahi wahi aurat aur bachi hi to nahi jinhe us raat ahmad ne apni gadi se thok diya tha
Ahmad ka yu unhe gadi se thokna jayaz tha ya nahi ye nahi Keh sakte kyunki uske sath uski biwi aur beti bhi thi aise mai usne Pehle unki safety dekhi jo shayad uske hisab se sahi bhi thi
But jab usne us aurat aur bachi ka accident kiya to shayad tab hi usey rok kar unhe dekhna chahiye tha kya pata wo log us halat mai they honge jaha unhe jald se jald medical treatment ki zarurat hogi.
But ahmad ke sath huwe hadse se ye to lagta hai ki wo jo koi bhi hai usne ab tak sasha aur hamna ko koi nuksaan na pahunchaya.
Dekhte hai akhir ye sirf ahmad ke dimag ka daar hai jo usey us raat ke Baad se hone laga ya Phir sach mai hi koi hai jo ahmad ke piche pada huwa.
Overall Awesome Update Pehle update se hi samajh agaya ki kahani intresting hogi aur sath hi apki writing skills bhi kamal ki hai.

 

[Ahamdeepo]

Ahamdeepo

Bilkul Sir.. Thoda kam se free hota hu.. To aapko review deta hu..

 

[Naina]

Intezaar agle update ke liye

 

[Naina]

Mahi Maurya ji zara yahan par bhi nazr mar lein ,

Maybe Mahi Maurya ji busy ho

 

[Naina]

Thori deer ke lie jaise main apne dar ko bhool kar is dilkash chehre me apna sakoon talash karne laga tha.

Us ki kamar ke gird narmi se bazoo haa'il kar ke maine use apne qareeb kia tha , us ke wajood ki narmahat aaj bhi mere andar waisa hi sakoon utar rahi thi jaise hamesha se tha .

Maine use apne seene me sameeta tha, aur bazuoun ki grift mazboot kar li thi, main us se bahot mohabbat karta tha.

Dheere se us ke hath tham kar chehre se hata kar syed par kia , hamare beech se hawa ka guzar rok dia tha , jazab ke aalam me use seene se lagaye aankhein band kar li thien dheere se us ke garadan ke dayen taraf lab rakhe the aur meri naak us ki gardan ko choo rahi thi m main sab kuch bholne ki koshish me laga tha ,

Mere dil me har lamha kuch bura ho jane ke khayalat janam le rahe the , kitne hi lamhe main ek sehme hue bachee ki tarah us ke sath chipka raha tha..

Sasha mujh se alehda hui aur muskura di ,dil ko kuch dharas bandhi thi.

Wo muskura kar ek bar phir meri naak se riste khoon ke qatree saaf karne lagi

Maine sir upper ki janib kar ke aankhein mond lein , ke achanak us ke hath ka nakhun ya koi bahot nokili cheez meri naak me lag gayi, main chilla utha aur dard se kar'rahne wo khoon dekh kar darwaze ki traf lapki aur kuch lene ki gharz se bahar ki janib doud lga di…main takleef se karrahne laga , wo nokili cheez meri naak ki haddi par chubhi thi aur khoon tezi se riste hue meri shirt

Bhootni aur ahmad ka pyar be like....

 

[Naina]

for such a wonderful review

Mujhe to dar hai kahi wo bhootni ahmad ki abru na lut le