Horror Char Ratein (Horror) (Completed)

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Char Ratein​

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Update 04	Update 05	Update 06
Update 07	Update 08	Update 09

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Char Ratein​

 

[Naina]

"sashaa..ha..ha.., sashaa..ha..ha.., " main musalsal chekh raha tha

Ye cheekh raha hai ki hans raha hai
Ye to sochne wali baat hai

 

[Naina]

Update 1

bahot hi khatarnaak twist ke sath suru huyi hai kahani.... jaha horror ka pura tadka lagaya gaya hai... I think ye ek kahani mistake, crime, vengeance aur retaliation pe adhaarit hogi....
Well...wo kahawat hai na ki jaise insaan ko achhe karmo ka inaam aur apne bure karmo ki saza isi duniya mein bhugatna padta hai. ..
ahmad jo ki ek kaafi amir aadmi hai, apni family ke sath rihayeshi ilake mein rehta tha, achhi khasi samapti bhi thi aur society mein rasookh bhi tha.... Ek khush haal jindagi, lekin uske jindagi mein ab ek mod aane wala tha ... Jiska ushe ilm tak nahi tha...
haalaki ahmad bura insaan na tha, na kabhi koi bura kaam kiya ho...
Lekin kehte hai na ki jindagi aapse pariksha leti hai....
wo pariksha ka lamha ahmad ki jindagi mein bhi aaya.... lekin usne yahin pe bahot badi galti kar baitha ... Ek nahi balki kayi galtiyaan kahi jaaye to behtar hoga...
Pehli galti Usne us aurat ko uski bachhi sahit car se uda diya,
dusri galti un dono aurat aur bachhi ko wohi usi jagah marne ke chhod ke waha chala gaya...
Teesri galti sasha ke itne baar puchne par usne sasha ko kuch bhi nahi bataya.... agar sasha asal baat jaan jaati to wo jarur madad karti us aurat aur us bachhi ko...

Actually Ahmad ne jo kiya pehle to galti thi, lekin uske baad jis tarah us aurat aur bachhi ko ignore kar kisi behad swarthi insaan ke tarah waha se chala gaya tha, wo bahot bada gunaah tha....
usse bhi bada gunah, is baat ko apni biwi se chupake kiya... shayad sasha un dono ko bacha leti... Lekin us Ahmad ki chhupi ne do maasoom logo ki jaan le li...
Ab gunaah kiya hai to saza mileni hi thi... Police ya sasha ko pata nahi tha is bare mein lekin upar wale ko to pata tha ..
maybe uski saza tay bhi ho chuki hai.. wo aurat aur wo bachhi laut aayi hai badla lene ...lekin ab dono insaani roop mein nahi balki ruh banke lauti hai ...kyuki un dono ke insaani roop ko to khud Ahmad ne hi khatm kar diya tha ,...lagta hai dono hi pratishodh ki aag mein jal rahi hai...
btw Ahmad ek confusion mein hai ki ye raat ke 3 baje wala kaand sach hai ki sapna,, waise jakhm ke sare nisaan to chikh chikh kar yehi kahe ki jo bhi hua tha uske sath sab bilkul sach tha ....

so aakhir mein kul milake baat ye hai ki Ahmad to giyo lo us bachi ki hath bhi aa gaya latak ke hil dul ke, ab wo bachi bhi aayegi aur uski maa bhi... Ya ye kahi jaaye ki dono ki ruh bhi

waise ye cheeje koun gayab kar raha hai bhoot to churane se rahe... To phir?

Is update mein do best se scenes the

Ek to jab usko ghasitkar le gayi thi us ruh ne....nind se uth te uske chehre ka expression kaisa raha hoga
Aur Dusra scene .... Ye sasha aur hamna to kumbhkarn ki nind soti hai.... ek baar nind mein gayi to samajh liyo ki kan ke paas lohe pe hathoda bhi maar do phir bhi nahi jaagne wale dono ke dono us accident wali raat ho ya phir Ahmad ko ghasitne wali raat ho ,, dono ma beti mast soyi huyi thi wo bhi hathi ghoda gadha tabela bech ke
Bhala aise bhi koi sota hai kya

Khair....
Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Waiting for next update

 

[Naina]

Rahul SiddHart Destiny Itz Anjum Naina Vaishnavi Aanya
rusty blade iMUNISH

Revo posted

 

[HAKIM]

for new story

 

[HAKIM]

wo bichara achha khasa mast nind mein so raha tha.... Kisiko ye baat raas naa aayi.... aur shayad itni jali ke usko uthane ki bajaye uska tang pakad sidha ghaseet ta hua le gaya
Waise jisko ghaseet ke le jaaya gaya uska chehre ka expression kaisa hoga

, wo shayad bhool gya tha jo usne kuch din pehle kia thaa is lie chain ki neend so raha tha , expression kaise ho sakte hain jab kisi ko achi khasi neend se you ghassette hue uthaya jaye

 

[HAKIM]

Ye cheekh raha hai ki hans raha hai
Ye to sochne wali baat hai

cheekh hi raha tha ,us waqt wo bhala hans kaise sakta tha,

 

[HAKIM]

Update 1

bahot hi khatarnaak twist ke sath suru huyi hai kahani.... jaha horror ka pura tadka lagaya gaya hai... I think ye ek kahani mistake, crime, vengeance aur retaliation pe adhaarit hogi....
Well...wo kahawat hai na ki jaise insaan ko achhe karmo ka inaam aur apne bure karmo ki saza isi duniya mein bhugatna padta hai. ..
ahmad jo ki ek kaafi amir aadmi hai, apni family ke sath rihayeshi ilake mein rehta tha, achhi khasi samapti bhi thi aur society mein rasookh bhi tha.... Ek khush haal jindagi, lekin uske jindagi mein ab ek mod aane wala tha ... Jiska ushe ilm tak nahi tha...
haalaki ahmad bura insaan na tha, na kabhi koi bura kaam kiya ho...
Lekin kehte hai na ki jindagi aapse pariksha leti hai....
wo pariksha ka lamha ahmad ki jindagi mein bhi aaya.... lekin usne yahin pe bahot badi galti kar baitha ... Ek nahi balki kayi galtiyaan kahi jaaye to behtar hoga...
Pehli galti Usne us aurat ko uski bachhi sahit car se uda diya,
dusri galti un dono aurat aur bachhi ko wohi usi jagah marne ke chhod ke waha chala gaya...
Teesri galti sasha ke itne baar puchne par usne sasha ko kuch bhi nahi bataya.... agar sasha asal baat jaan jaati to wo jarur madad karti us aurat aur us bachhi ko...

Actually Ahmad ne jo kiya pehle to galti thi, lekin uske baad jis tarah us aurat aur bachhi ko ignore kar kisi behad swarthi insaan ke tarah waha se chala gaya tha, wo bahot bada gunaah tha....
usse bhi bada gunah, is baat ko apni biwi se chupake kiya... shayad sasha un dono ko bacha leti... Lekin us Ahmad ki chhupi ne do maasoom logo ki jaan le li...
Ab gunaah kiya hai to saza mileni hi thi... Police ya sasha ko pata nahi tha is bare mein lekin upar wale ko to pata tha ..
maybe uski saza tay bhi ho chuki hai.. wo aurat aur wo bachhi laut aayi hai badla lene ...lekin ab dono insaani roop mein nahi balki ruh banke lauti hai ...kyuki un dono ke insaani roop ko to khud Ahmad ne hi khatm kar diya tha ,...lagta hai dono hi pratishodh ki aag mein jal rahi hai...
btw Ahmad ek confusion mein hai ki ye raat ke 3 baje wala kaand sach hai ki sapna,, waise jakhm ke sare nisaan to chikh chikh kar yehi kahe ki jo bhi hua tha uske sath sab bilkul sach tha ....

so aakhir mein kul milake baat ye hai ki Ahmad to giyo lo us bachi ki hath bhi aa gaya latak ke hil dul ke, ab wo bachi bhi aayegi aur uski maa bhi... Ya ye kahi jaaye ki dono ki ruh bhi

waise ye cheeje koun gayab kar raha hai bhoot to churane se rahe... To phir?

Is update mein do best se scenes the

Ek to jab usko ghasitkar le gayi thi us ruh ne....nind se uth te uske chehre ka expression kaisa raha hoga
Aur Dusra scene .... Ye sasha aur hamna to kumbhkarn ki nind soti hai.... ek baar nind mein gayi to samajh liyo ki kan ke paas lohe pe hathoda bhi maar do phir bhi nahi jaagne wale dono ke dono us accident wali raat ho ya phir Ahmad ko ghasitne wali raat ho ,, dono ma beti mast soyi huyi thi wo bhi hathi ghoda gadha tabela bech ke
Bhala aise bhi koi sota hai kya

Khair....
Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

for such a brilliant review naina ji ,

Pehli galti Usne us aurat ko uski bachhi sahit car se uda diya,
dusri galti un dono aurat aur bachhi ko wohi usi jagah marne ke chhod ke waha chala gaya...
Teesri galti sasha ke itne baar puchne par usne sasha ko kuch bhi nahi bataya.... agar sasha asal baat jaan jaati to wo jarur madad karti us aurat aur us bachhi ko...

wo kehte hain ke insaan ke ache aur bure karam uskaa picha krte hi rehte hain ,

Actually Ahmad ne jo kiya pehle to galti thi, lekin uske baad jis tarah us aurat aur bachhi ko ignore kar kisi behad swarthi insaan ke tarah waha se chala gaya tha, wo bahot bada gunaah tha....
usse bhi bada gunah, is baat ko apni biwi se chupake kiya... shayad sasha un dono ko bacha leti... Lekin us Ahmad ki chhupi ne do maasoom logo ki jaan le li...
Ab gunaah kiya hai to saza mileni hi thi... Police ya sasha ko pata nahi tha is bare mein lekin upar wale ko to pata tha ..

ye decide karne ka uske pass ek lamha tha ke wo us aurat aur bachii ko bachaye ya apni biwi aur beti ko bachaye, to insan ki fitrat yahi hai ke wo dusron ke bhale se pehle khud ka sochta hai is lie usne apni beti biwi ko bachana hi behtar samjha , aur shayad use ye pata nahi tha ke ye uski ghalti hai aur is ke lie use sazaa zaroor mile gi

olice ya sasha ko pata nahi tha is bare mein lekin upar wale ko to pata tha .

ho sakta hai ke police ya sasha ko kabhi pata hi na chale

for your review, next update will be soon

 

[HAKIM]

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coming soon

 

[HAKIM]

Revo posted