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Bhai writter wo bhi ache hai or Anand bhai bhi but logon ko ye story suru se pasand hai bhai or ye story ki wajah se maine bhut site pe jhgda bhi kiya hai bhut bar to block bhi hua hun but mujhe Anand bhai ka likhne ka tarika bhut hai kuch story hai jo meri favourite ki list main hai ek to dil se favourite hai but unfortunately wo complete nhi kar paye uske writer ka kuch pta hin chala wo bhi gaon ki story thi usme bhi character ka nam raaj hin tha
Enigma bhai ek top class writer hain..Har writer ki likhne ki apni ek alag shailly hoti hai, apni shaily me vo ekdam perfect writer hain.
Vaise gaon par aadharit meri bhi ek kahani " Ek Gaon Ki Kahani" iss manch par sabhi ke samne hogi, jo ki poori tarah se gaon par adharit hai, city ke mahoul se uska koi lena dena nahi hai aur jiski starting year 1900 se hogi.
 
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Sabse pahle to aapka yaha hardik abhinandan hai.
Ye aapki, iss kahani par pahli pratikriya hai...
Aapka sawal bilkul tark sangat hai.

Lekin aapke sawal dekh kar aisa lagta hai ki aapne shayad kahani ko dhyan se nahi padha warna ye sawal mann me nahi uthte...kyonki aapke sabhi sawalo ke jawab to kahani ke andar hi hain.
Main jab koi bhi update ya koi bhi scene likhta hu to sabse pahle usko padh kar reader's ke mann me kya kya sawal uth sakte hain, unke baare me sochta hu, jab har drishtikon se unn sabhi sawalo ke jawab mere paas hote hain tabhi vo scene likhta hu otherwise skip kar deta hu...main kahani ke har pahlu par nazar rakhta hu.

Kahani ke 2nd part ko samajhne ke liye uska 1st part read karna jaruri hai, vo bhi behad carefully..bina 1st part read kiye, 2nd part samajh me nahi aayega.
Jo bhi old character's hain, jo ki 1st part se yaha aaye hain, unki age details, 1st part me already di gayi hai..2nd part me sirf naye aane wale kirdaro ki hi age batayi gayi hai...
For Example..
1st part me malti ki jo age batayi gayi hogi, simple si baat hai ki itne saalo baad uski age ab kya hogi, ye calculate kiya ja sakta hai...aisa hi sabhi old character's ke sath hai....ab har baar ek hi character ki age to nahi batata rahunga na dost.

Aapne shadi ka sawal uthaya to bhai, iss sawal ka jawab main kafi pahle hi update me de chuka hu..agar aapne dhyan se padha hota to aapko apne sawal ka jawab khud mil gaya hota kahani me hi.

Ab aapka akhiri sawal, raj ko pahchanne ke baare me hai to bhai, abhi to sabhi use current raj ke roop me hi jante hain.. kisi ka chehra dekh kar uski age ka andaza lagana galat bhi ho sakta hai...aaj ke iss milawat bhare modern daur me ek 25-30 saal ke ladke ke bhi baal pak jate hain, vo 50-60 saal ka buddha nazar aata hai, to kya uski age 50-60 saal ho jayegi ?
Vaise hi kathin mehnat aur achche khaanpaan ki vajah se ek 50-60 saal ka admi bhi 25-30 saal ke yuvak jaisa dikhta hai. to kya chehre se kisi ki vastavik age ka andaza lagana hamesha sahi sabit ho sakta hai ?
films me 40-50 saal ki aurat heroines ka role karti hain, tab kya unko dekh kar aisa lagta hai ki vo itne saal ki hogi ?

Jaha tak raj ki baat hai ki damini ne use kyon nahi pahchana ..to damini ke dhokha khane ki kuch vajah hain..pahla, usne jis raj ko dekha tha aur ab jis raj ko dekh rahi hai..dono me koi antar nahi dikha usko..sab kuch same to same.
Dusri vajah, chodu team ka raj ke paas milna, uske shak ko pukhta karne me madadgar sabit hua.
Teeasri vajah, uski family ka milna..4th vajah, uska naam bhi raj hi hona...

Inn sabhi reasons se vah raj ko nahi pahchan payi aur dhokha kha gayi..
Bhai maine aapki sabhi stories Aur sabhi part padhe h aur comment bhi kiya h bs is forum pe naya hu pahle jaha lekhte the waha padh chuka hu....
 
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Enigma bhai ek top class writer hain..Har writer ki likhne ki apni ek alag shailly hoti hai, apni shaily me vo ekdam perfect writer hain.
Vaise gaon par aadharit meri bhi ek kahani " Ek Gaon Ki Kahani" iss manch par sabhi ke samne hogi, jo ki poori tarah se gaon par adharit hai, city ke mahoul se uska koi lena dena nahi hai aur jiski starting year 1900 se hogi.
Bhai please pahle aap jo story incomplete h pahle use complete kar dijiye aapki kai purani stories jo complete nahi hui h aur kisi kisi ka to 2nd part bhi chahiye jaise chamatkar ka to please wo sab bhi pura kijiyega...
 

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